高考英语写作专题热点话题

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这是一份高考英语写作专题热点话题，共5页。学案主要包含了参考范文等内容，欢迎下载使用。

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(2020·北京卷)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校英语戏剧俱乐部外籍指导教师Jim因疫情滞留英国。复学在即，作为俱乐部负责人，你给Jim写一封电子邮件，请他推荐一名外籍指导教师，内容包括：
1. 条件及要求；
2. 表示感谢并提醒注意防护。
注意：1. 词数不少于50；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，

Yurs，
Li Hua
【范文】
Dear Jim，
Hw are yu ding? I hpe everything's OK with yu.
Our schl's drama club plans t start practising. ①Since yu're away in Britain, we need a drama teacher t be in yur place. ②Wuld yu please recmmend ne fr us?
He r she shuld be a native English speaker, currently in Beijing, and experienced in bth directing and teaching.
Thank yu fr yur help. Please take care f yurself. ③Remember t wear a mask when necessary.
Best wishes!
Yurs，
Li Hua
点评：
1. 词汇美：文章运用了很多高级词汇，如be away, be in ne's place, recmmend, native English speaker, currently, experienced, take care f等。
2. 句式美：①句Since yu're away in Britain是Since引导的原因状语从句。
②句Wuld yu please recmmend ne fr us？是委婉请求的高分句式。
③句when necessary是when引导的时间状语从句的省略句，其中省略了it is。
练习：
(2021·重庆巴蜀中学模拟)假定你是李华，你的笔友Chris 想申请加入学校的汉语俱乐部，需要展示一项中国特色的才艺，他写信向你求助，希望你能推荐一项中国特色的才艺展示。请给他写一封回信。内容包括：
1. 推荐才艺；
2. 推荐理由；
3. 表达祝福。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Chris，

Yurs，
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Chris，
I knw that yu want t participate in the Chinese club in ur schl, where yu need t shw talents with characteristics. And I am writing t advise yu t take up a cking curse full f the Chinese taste. Such a chice can aruse Chinese peple's great awareness t Chinese fd. As we all knw, ur Chinese peple attach great imprtance t eating. If yu can intrduce a dish, I believe they can be attracted a lt. Mrever, learning t ck is an amazing thing fr all f us.
Best wishes t yu! I hpe yu can achieve it successfully.
Yurs，
Li Hua
Ⅱ. 读后续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I am a dctr, s I lve my jb. I always have, but I feel particularly prud t d it at the mment.[悬念1] With COVID19 sweeping thrugh the wrld, peple are aviding hspitals as pssible as they can.
Hwever, pregnant wmen still need t cme int the hspital. Babies still need t be brn.
Right nw, it is even scarier fr these wmen, as they have t cme in n their wn, ften feeling frightened. Their families are separated frm them due t safety measures. We've always prvided physical supprt, but nw we are ding s n a different level — we als have t keep them cmpany and ffer emtinal supprt. Unfrtunately, sme f the wmen have caught crnavirus, and being at the hspital puts me at risk. Persnally, I feel prtected because we have full persnal prtective equipment, which we wear all thrugh ur 13hur shifts. Yu dn't knw if smene is carrying crnavirus r nt.
I didn't want t put my family in danger by bringing the virus hme and pssibly passing it n t them. As a single parent t my children, Xiahua, 12 years ld, and Xiayng, 9, I realised I had t make a very tugh decisin abut my family's safety when the cuntry went int lckdwn. Giving up wrk wasn't an ptin fr me. I wanted t be able t lk after the wmen wh were feeling prly and very scared, but I culd nt leave my little children behind either.[悬念2]
At this pint, my sister suggested that the children stay with her and her husband fr the time being and leave me t my hspital duties. I thught it was a great idea, s we set a date fr her t pick them up. When I explained the situatin t my children and tld them they needed t stay with their aunt fr a while, they bth seemed upset, but agreed t g. On the day I saw them ff, they kept lking back at me until they were t far t be seen.[悬念3]
注意：续写词数应为150左右。
After that, my wrklad increased because sme f my cwrkers fell ill.

A week later, it came t Xiayng's birthday.

一、理清文章大意
关键：Wh: a dctr
Where: in the hspital
When: while COVID19 sweeping thrugh the wrld
What: During the epidemic perid, the authr had t make a chice.
Hw: The authr left her children t her sister.
大意：本文讲述了作者是一位有着两个孩子的单亲母亲，也是一位医生，在新冠肺炎疫情期间，在工作和家人之间难以抉择，最后选择去医院工作，把孩子交给她妹妹一家照顾。
二、挖掘文中悬念点
悬念1思考：作者此刻为什么感到当医生特别骄傲？
悬念2思考：作者会想出两全的办法吗？
悬念3思考：孩子会适应妈妈不在场的生活吗？
三、分析段落开头语
段首句1思考：
①工作量具体增加了多少？
②作者都做些什么？她有时间陪孩子吗？
③作者还记得儿子小勇的生日吗？
段首句2思考：
①作者在儿子生日时能回家吗？不能的话，是不是要拍照，和家人视频庆祝生日呢？
②家人会怎么安慰和鼓励作者？
③作者有什么感受？
通过以上思路，预设续写情节如下：
Paragraph 1：工作量增加→全身心投入工作→没时间留给孩子→为孩子生日做补偿
Paragraph 2：在医院和家人视频聊天→和同事一起为儿子唱生日歌→感想
After that, my wrklad increased because sme f my cwrkers fell ill. We had t wrk duble shifts and my life was dedicated t nthing but wrk. Every day I came back hme cmpletely exhausted and fell fast asleep. As sn as I wke up, I needed t g t the hspital. I pured all my effrts int my patients, which was very rewarding. Hwever, it trubled me that I didn't have time fr my wn kids. Xiayng was ging t celebrate his birthday sn. I had t d smething t make up fr him.
A week later, it came t Xiayng's birthday. I made a vide call t them frm the hspital. I greeted them n the screen with mask and gggles n. Surprisingly, they recgnised me at nce, shuting excitedly. I tk the phne t the hall, where my cwrkers sang “Happy Birthday, Xiayng！” They als encuraged him t be strng, and a grin appeared n his face. My children's understanding and my cwrkers' supprt gave me a warm feeling, and I believe nthing culd ever truly separate me and my belved nes. We are sure t win.
1. 使用恰当的修饰词让描写更加生动。
①nthing but用得恰到好处，表现出主人公全力以赴投入工作。
②cmpletely exhausted表明主人公工作辛苦。
③warm一词用得精妙，概括了医生大家庭的温暖，人们互助、互爱，共渡疫情难关。
2. 词汇与语法结构丰富、准确。
①be dedicated t是be devted t的高级表达。
②pured all my effrts int是一个增分点。
③As sn as引导时间状语从句，which引导非限制性定语从句，that引导主语从句。
④with mask and gggles n是with复合结构，是一个增分点。