高考英语写作专题环境保护

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倡议信(书)
近期“公筷行动”公益广告每天在央视频道黄金时间播出。为了号召大家用餐使用公筷，请你以学生会的名义向全校师生写一封英文倡议书刊登在校英文报上。内容要点如下：
1. “公筷行动”简介；
2. 你的建议或想法。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear teachers and students，

The Student Unin
【范文】
Dear teachers and students，
①As we see, a public service advertisement is being aired n CCTV every day recently, which is abut advcating the use f public chpsticks t avid using ne's wn chpsticks t pick fd frm the same dishes. ②It is intended that the bacteria and viruses will be prevented frm spreading.
③Fr the sake f ur health and safety, I think it is gd and necessary t use “public chpsticks” when dining tgether with thers. S let's start taking actin right away!
The Student Unin
点评：
1. 词汇美：文章运用了很多高级词汇，如be aired n, advcate, avid ding, be prevented frm ding, fr the sake f, dine tgether with, take actin, right away等。
2. 句式美：①句中使用了两个非限制性定语从句，分别由as和which引导。
②句用了“It is＋过去分词＋that引导的主语从句”，It作形式主语。
③句中think后接宾语从句，从句中it作形式主语，真正的主语是后面的不定式短语t use “public chpsticks”。
练习：
假定你是李华，请你给校英语报写一封倡议信，号召全校同学积极响应学校正在开展的垃圾分类活动，内容包括：
1. 垃圾分类的意义；
2. 你的建议。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：垃圾分类 waste classificatin
Dear fellw students,

Yurs，
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear fellw students，
As yu may have nticed, the prgramme f waste classificatin in ur schl has kicked ff. I am writing t call n yu, members f the schl, t take immediate actin.
Every day, we prduce piles f waste, ranging frm plastic bttles t paper, which nt nly leads t envirnmental pllutin, but is als a waste f resurces. Therefre, it is urgent fr us t take an active part in the waste classificatin prgramme. First, we can cllect what can be recycled t save resurces. Secnd, harmful materials shuld be srted and treated prperly t avid pllutin. Mst imprtantly, we need t develp the habit f classifying waste.
Let's d it!
Yurs,
Li Hua
Ⅱ. 读后续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
“I just want a nrmal birthday party，” April tld Bailey as they walked hme frm schl.
Bailey knew what April meant. April's parents lved the envirnment. And because April happened t be brn n Earth Day, all her parties had an Earth Day theme.
“Remember when yu turned seven？” said Bailey.
“Hw culd I frget the ThrwOut Blwut？” said April.
“We helped ut at yur garage sales and dnated the mney t charity. And when yu turned eight ...”
“It was a Tree Spree，” finished April. “We planted maples.” “Last year, we all cllected newspapers t recycle，” said Bailey. “The Print Sprint，” April graned (抱怨)．
Bailey giggled, “I thught it was fun.”
Later that night, as April laded the dishwasher, she said, “I'd like t plan my wn party this year.”[悬念1]
“Sure，” said Mum. “We culd have a Cmpst Carnival.” “Great idea！” said Dad.
April cleared her thrat. “I'd like t g t Maze Craze (疯狂迷宫) instead.” “Really？” said Dad, surprised.
“I guess we culd d that. Dad and I can send yu kids there，” said Mum.
April culdn't wait fr her birthday! She and her friends wuld have s much fun. And they wuldn't have t think ne bit abut the Earth.
At schl the next day, April tld her friends, “I'm having my birthday party at Maze Craze！”[悬念2]
“Yu are？” said Jsie. “But we always d smething earthy n yur birthday.” “Remember that salamander (火蜥蜴) we fund tw years ag？” said Tyler. “Yeah，” said April. “This year, we're nt even ging utside.”
“Oh！” said Tyler.
The fllwing weekend, everyne gathered in the parking lt utside f Maze Craze.
“Thanks fr cming，” said April. “I've been s excited abut my party. N shvels (铲子). N cllecting recyclables. Nthing earthy abut it.” She shifted her feet. “Then I gt here this mrning and saw this parking lt.”
April's friends glanced arund. Plastic bttles bunced (弹起) acrss the grund. Newspapers and fastfd sacks blcked the strm drain (排水道). Shpping bags rustled (沙沙作响) in the trees.[悬念3]
注意：续写词数应为 150 左右。
“What a mess！” April frwned.

April lked at the cllected rubbish and smiled.

一、理清文章大意
关键：Wh: April
Where: in the parking lt utside f Maze Craze
When: n her birthday
What: a nrmal birthday party
Hw: April tried t celebrate her birthday in a new way.
大意：本文讲述了April今年想在疯狂迷宫过生日。生日当天，她和朋友到达疯狂迷宫外面的停车场时，看到了很多垃圾。
二、挖掘文中悬念点
悬念1 思考：April会怎样计划自己的生日呢？
悬念2思考：疯狂迷宫与环保有关联吗？与地球日主题有关吗？
悬念3思考：面对眼前的这种情景，April和她的朋友会做些什么呢？
三、分析段落开头语
段首句1思考：
①停车场既然这么脏乱，April会对朋友和家人说些什么呢？
②April的爸爸妈妈会怎么做？
③大家会怎样捡垃圾？
段首句2思考：
①朋友们的衣服会不会因为捡垃圾而弄脏？
②朋友们会祝贺 April生日快乐吗？
③April对明年的生日聚会有何打算？
通过以上思路，预设续写情节如下：
Paragraph 1: April皱眉→April建议捡垃圾→大家设法捡垃圾
Paragraph 2：感到高兴→大家祝April生日快乐→明年的打算
【范文】
“What a mess！” April frwned. Thugh she had been lnging fr a nnEarth Day birthday, it was difficult t turn a blind eye t such a mess. She turned arund t her friends, “Hw abut picking up the trash first？” Her prpsal was quickly apprved by thers and sn they were in business. April's mum grabbed sme glves frm the trunk while her dad managed t remve thse shpping bags in the trees. With the bags, April and Bailey cllected scattered bttles. By the drain, Jsie and Tyler made great effrts t clear the blckage. Many hands make light wrk. In a shrt while, three bags were filled with cans and newspapers t recycle.
April lked at the cllected rubbish and smiled. Then she lked up at her friends. Their neat clthes fr the birthday party were saked with sweat, but their faces glwed with satisfactin. It felt s gd t d smething fr the Earth. “Happy Earth Day, everyne，” said April. “Nw we are ready fr Maze Craze.” “Happy Birthday, April！” shuted her friends. “I'm s lucky t have been brn n Earth Day！” April thught t herself. “A Cmpst Carnival may be a gd idea fr next year.”
点评：
1. 使用恰当的修饰词让描写更加生动。
①quickly一词暗示其他人和April也有同感，因此立刻赞同她的提议。
②两处用了s作修饰词，表示程度，比very语气强。
2. 词汇与语法结构丰富、准确。
①turn a blind eye t, make great effrts t, be saked with sweat, glw with satisfactin等都是精彩的高级表达。
②运用了Thugh引导的让步状语从句。
③Hw abut ding sth.? 表示建议。