四川高考英语写作分类训练：建议信

这是一份四川高考英语写作分类训练：建议信，共16页。试卷主要包含了健康生活的建议；，发起健康生活倡议等内容，欢迎下载使用。
建议信1．假如你是李华，你发现周围同学们有吃垃圾食品、熬夜等不良生活习惯。请你为学校英语周刊写一封倡议信，号召同学们养成健康的生活习惯，内容包括：1．学生不良生活习惯；2．健康生活的建议（至少两条）；3．发起健康生活倡议。注意：1．词数100左右；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear fellow students,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua2．假定你是李明，最近你收到一封来自英国笔友Edward的邮件，询问你的健康生活方式。请你用英语给他回一封邮件，内容包括：1. 健康生活的意义；2. 你对如何养成健康生活方式的建议（不少于3点）。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3．假设你是李华。你的英国笔友Jack刚刚升入高中，但他一时无法适应新的校园生活，写信向你征求建议。请你就此问题给他回一封信，主要内容包括：1.不必过分焦虑；2.制定合理的学习计划；3.多参加集体活动，结交新朋友。参考词汇：适应：adjust to注意：1.词数80词左右（开头已写好，不计入总词数）；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Jack,I’m sorry to hear that you’re having trouble_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua4．假设你是Li Hua，你的美国笔友Lucy来信说她最近学习负担重，常常感到疲惫。请你根据以下提示给Lucy写回信。1.调整学习方法；2.积极锻炼；3.其它建议。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Lucy,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________YoursLi Hua5．假设你是高一新生李华，请你根据以下提示要点，用英语写一篇发言稿，在英语课上谈谈自己的看法，和大家讨论如何过好高中学校生活。1. 高中课程的变化及学习方法；2. 如何处理好同学之间的关系；3. 体育锻炼或其他课外活动等。注意:要求词数：不少于100。发言稿的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。Dear classmates______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6．假定你是李华，你的朋友小明刚进入高中，因为学习压力和没有朋友而感到很焦虑，不知如何排解，写信求助于你。请你用英语回一封信给他，提出一些合理建议，内容包括：1. 转变心态，正确对待学习压力；2. 听听歌曲，释放学习压力；3. 多与同学交流，和他们成为朋友；……注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Xiao Ming,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely,Li Hua7．假定你是李华，你的澳大利亚朋友 Mary 因为没有通过汉语水平等级考试(the Chinese Proficiency Test) 而情绪低落。请你给她发一封电子邮件, 表达你对她的关心。 要点如下：1.表示安慰；2.提出建议；3.给予祝福。 注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Mary, I’m sorry to hear that you failed to pass the Chinese Proficiency Test.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely,Li Hua8．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter沉迷于手机，引起父母不满，因而彼此产生矛盾。Peter写信向你倾诉苦恼，求助于你。请根据以下要点给Peter写一封电子邮件：1.表达对他的情况的理解；2.提出解决问题的建议；3.表达祝愿。注意：1.词数80左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Peter，______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua9．假设你是李华，母亲节即将来临，你的英国朋友 Peter 发来邮件询问有关你们庆祝母亲节的事宜。请你给他回复一封邮件，内容包括：1.  母亲节的时间（五月的第二个周日）；2.如何表达祝福；3.母亲节的意义。注意：1. 词数 100 左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________10．世界卫生组织在首个关于全球青少年运动趋势的研究报告中称，全球大约有 80%的青少年缺乏锻炼。专家认为，运动量不足将影响青少年的健康状况。为此， 世卫就此将组织举办一次国际中学生交流活动。假如你叫李华，请你用英语写一篇发言稿在这次活动发言，内容包括：1. 缺乏运动的原因；2. 运动的好处；3. 给出合理的建议。 注意: 1. 词数 100 词左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear fellow students,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That's all. Thank you for listening !              
1．Dear fellow students,Recently, our campus saw a phenomenon that there are some unhealthy living habits among students—eating too much junk food, staying up late and lacking sports—to name a few, which should be brought to the attention of all the students.As is known to all, good health is the best wealth, and it is the basis of efficient study and other activities. Without health, one can achieve nothing. To keep healthy, it is necessary for us to form some good habits. First, we should go to bed early at night to have adequate rest. Besides, a proper amount of physical exercise is of great importance. What’s more, keeping a balanced diet can also benefit us a lot.Every small step counts! On behalf of the student union, I would like to call for every one of us to keep a healthy lifestyle. However busy we are, remember to take good care of ourselves.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是李华，你发现周围同学们有吃垃圾食品、熬夜等不良生活习惯。请你为学校英语周刊写一封倡议信，号召同学们养成健康的生活习惯。【详解】1.词汇积累不健康的：unwholesome→unhealthy培养：develop→form重要的：important→be of great importance另外：furthermore→besides2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：To keep healthy, it is necessary for us to form some good habits.拓展句：If we want to keep healthy, it is necessary for us to form some good habits.【点睛】[高分句型1] Recently, our campus saw a phenomenon that there are some unhealthy living habits among students—eating too much junk food, staying up late and lacking sports—to name a few, which should be brought to the attention of all the students. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2] To keep healthy, it is necessary for us to form some good habits.(运用了不定式作目的状语)2．Dear Edward,It’s great to hear from you. Learning that you’re curious about my opinions on a healthy lifestyle, I’d like to share some with you. In my judgment, a healthy lifestyle lays the foundation of good health which is very essential to our daily life and our future development.To form a healthy lifestyle we should not only have a well-balanced diet which consists of different kinds of foods but also have three meals regularly. Besides, we are supposed to take a positive attitude towards things and people around us so that we can keep mentally healthy. Furthermore, I strongly suggest taking regular exercise, like swimming, jogging, yoga, etc, which is beneficial to building up a strong body.I hope we both can have a healthy lifestyle, thus living healthily and happily.Yours,Li Ming【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国笔友Edward写封信，向他介绍健康生活的意义和你对如何养成健康生活方式的建议。【详解】1. 词汇积累观点：opinion→viewpoint必需的：essential→necessary种类：kind→sort另外：besides→moreover2. 句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：It’s great to hear from you.拓展句：It’s great that I can hear from you.【点睛】[高分句型1]In my judgment, a healthy lifestyle lays the foundation of good health which is very essential to our daily life and our future development.（运用了which引导的限制性定语从句）[高分句型2]Furthermore, I strongly suggest taking regular exercise, like swimming, jogging, yoga, etc, which is beneficial to building up a strong body.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）3．I’m sorry to hear that you’re having trouble. Here are some tips for you.Firstly, take everything new in Senior High as it is. Don’t be too anxious or it will prevent you enjoying life. Besides, it is known that a well-balanced learning plan matters. Also, you can take part in group activities as many as possible. That will be of benefit to making friends. Apparently more friends will keep you away from loneliness.I believed you will get used to it soon and I will wait for your good news.【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Jack回信，就如何适应新的校园生活给对方提出建议。【详解】1.词汇积累建议：tips→advice此外：besides→in addition参加：take part in→participate in有益于：be of benefit to→be beneficial to2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Also, you can take part in sports as much as possible. That will be of benefit to making friends.拓展句：Also, you can take part in sports as much as possible, which will be of benefit to making friends.【点睛】【高分句型1】Don’t be too anxious or it will prevent you enjoying life.（运用祈使句++or+简单句）【高分句型2】Besides, it is known that a well-balanced learning plan matters.（运用了it作形式主语，that引导从句作真正的主语）4．Dear Lucy,I am sorry to hear that you are undergoing a great study pressure. Don’t worry. I am writing to offer you some practical suggestions.To begin with, if I were you, I would adjust my learning approach. Only in this way can you make a remarkable progress. Moreover, from where I stand, it is advisable if you do more exercising. Because it may free you from tension and anxiety. On top of that, reading more classic books would be beneficial and inspiring to you, for it may enlarge your horizons and erase your high pressure.Hopefully, my advice could be useful to you. Should you have any more questions, please feel free to let me know. Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假设你是Li Hua，你的美国笔友Lucy来信说她最近学习负担重，常常感到疲惫。请你根据以下提示给Lucy写回信。【详解】1.词汇积累压力：stress→pressure方法：way→approach建议：tip→suggestion/advice明智的：wise→advisable2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Don’t worry. I am writing to offer you some practical suggestions.拓展句：There is no need to worry because I am writing to offer you some practical suggestions.【点睛】[高分句型1] I am sorry to hear that you are undergoing a great study pressure. (运用了that引导宾语从句)[高分句型2] Only in this way can you make a remarkable progress. (运用了部分倒装)5．Dear classmates,It's my great honor to be here to talk about our school life in the new term.First, we should learn to learn efficiently. High school has many courses and they are more difficult to learn. We are supposed to preview before class, pay close attention to what our teacher are saying, and review the knowledge we have gained from time to time.In addition, we should learn how to get along well with classmates. It is highly recommended that we should spend more time in helping and cooperating with others. In that way, we can learn how to get along well with others and know who we are.Finally, we should take part in sports and outdoors activities frequently. They are really helpful to build up our bodies and enrich our school life.No pains no gains. I am sure that with great efforts, you will enjoy a colorful and fruitful life. Thank you.【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生用英语写一篇发言稿，在英语课上谈谈自己的看法，和大家讨论如何过好高中学校生活。【详解】1.词汇积累困难的：difficult→hard应该：be supposed to→should参加：take part in→participate in此外：in addition→besides2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：High school has many courses and they are more difficult to learn.拓展句：High school has many courses, which are more difficult to learn.【点睛】[高分句型1] We are supposed to preview before class, pay close attention to what our teacher are saying, and review the knowledge we have gained from time to time. (运用了what引导的宾语从句)[高分句型2] It is highly recommended that we should spend more time in helping and cooperating with others. (运用了虚拟语气)6．范文1：Dear Xiao Ming, You wrote that you are under great stress and have no friend at school. I understand quite well that you are anxious and lonely. As your best friend, I’d like to give you some suggestions. First of all, I recommend that you have a positive attitude towards your study. After all, stress is only part of students’ life. Besides, I think you can listen to songs in your spare time, which can relieve your stress. Last but not least, why not try to communicate with your classmates and even make friends with them? Through the communication you can find support, which will encourage you to overcome difficulties in your study and life. I hope my suggestions will be helpful to you. Believe in yourself and you will make it. Yours,Li Hua范文2：Dear Xiao Ming,  I’m sorry to hear that you are under great stress and have no friend at school. Now I’d like to offer you some suggestions. / Knowing that you are under great stress and are having trouble making friends with others, I’m writing to give you some suggestions.Firstly, since stress is only part of students’ life, it is important for you to have a positive attitude towards your study. Secondly, I think it is a good idea to listen to songs in your spare time. By doing so, you can relieve your stress and will feel relaxed. Lastly, you’d better try to communicate with your classmates. Thus, they will learn more about you and will be willing to make friends with you. I do hope my suggestions will be of help to you. / I do hope you will find my suggestions helpful. Looking forward to your good news.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给刚进入高中学习的小明写信，关于如何面对新学校生活的压力和如何交朋友给出建议。【详解】1.词汇积累压力：stress→pressure重要的：important→significant能够：can→be able to因此：Thus→Therefore2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Secondly, I think it is a good idea to listen to songs in your spare time. By doing so, you can relieve your stress and will feel relaxed.拓展句：Secondly, I think it is a good idea to listen to songs in your spare time, which can help relieve your stress and will make you feel relaxed.【点睛】[高分句型1]Knowing that you are under great stress and are having trouble making friends with others, I’m writing to give you some suggestions.（运用了现在分词作状语）[高分句型2]Firstly, since stress is only part of students’ life, it is important for you to have a positive attitude towards your study.（运用了since引导的状语从句）7．Dear Rosemary,I’m sorry to hear that you failed to pass the Chinese Proficiency Test. I quite understand how you feel now. You are not alone. Everybody experiences failures of all kinds.However, as an old saying goes, failure is the mother of success. So never give up learning Chinese though you failed this time. Besides, analyse the cause of your failure and try to make up for what you’re lacking in. At the same time, try your best to build up confidence, which is the key to doing anything well.I’m in firm belief that so long as you are confident and learn from your failure, you can make greater progress in your Chinese study and you’ll surely pass the Chinese Proficiency Test.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定你是李华，你的澳大利亚朋友 Mary 因为没有通过汉语水平等级考试(the Chinese Proficiency Test) 而情绪低落。请你给她发一封电子邮件, 表达你对她的关心。【详解】1.词汇积累明白，理解：understand→catch→make out竭尽全力：try your best→do your best各种各样的：all kinds of→all sorts of→various另外，此外：besides→what’s more→in addition2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：You are not alone. Everybody experiences failures of all kinds.拓展句：You are not alone because everybody experiences failures of all kinds.【点睛】[高分句型1] However, as an old saying goes, failure is the mother of success.  (运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2] I’m in firm belief that so long as you are confident and learn from your failure, you can make greater progress in your Chinese study and you’ll surely pass the Chinese Proficiency Test. (运用了that引导的宾语从句和so long as引导的条件状语从句)[高分句型3] So never give up learning Chinese though you failed this time.（运用though引导的让步状语从句）8．Dear Peter,I am sorry to know that you are addicted to the mobile phone, which makes your parents upset. I can understand your feeling. After all, most of the teenagers have the same problem.I think you need to take your parents feelings into consideration. Overusing mobile phones will have a bad effect on your study. Besides, it is not good to your eyes and does harm to your health. What's more, if you need mobile phones for practical use, you can communicate with your parents and use it with their permission.I hope my suggestions will be of help to you. Looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于建议信。你的英国笔友Peter沉迷于手机，引起父母不满，因而彼此产生矛盾。Peter写信向你倾诉苦恼，求助于你。要求考生按要点给Peter写一封电子邮件，表示理解并且提出建议。【详解】1.词汇积累沮丧的：depressed/blue→upset把……考虑进去：take…into account→take…into consideration对……有影响：have an influence on/have an impact on→have an effect on对……有害：be harmful to→do harm to对……有帮助：be helpful→be of help2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Overusing mobile phones will have a bad effect on your study.拓展句：Don’t overuse mobile phones, which will have a bad effect on your study.【点睛】[高分句型1]I am sorry to know that you are addicted to the mobile phone, which makes your parents upset. (运用了that引导的宾语从句和which引导非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2]What's more, if you need mobile phones for practical use, you can communicate with your parents and use it with their permission. (运用if引导的条件状语从句)9．Dear Peter,Delighted to learn that you show great interest in Mothers’ Day, I’m writing to share with you some details regarding it.As is known to us all, showing respect for mother is a tradition for us Chinese. Mothers’ Day falls on the second Sunday in May on which we’ll send best wishes and express our gratitude to our dear mothers for their hard work. When it comes to the gifts, some children give thank-you cards to their mothers, some would like to send them beautiful flowers, and others even prepare performances or give them handmade gifts. As far as I’m concerned, it is Mothers’ Day that gives us an opportunity to show our respect and love for our mothers, which is contributing to improving the relationship between mothers and children.Are there any similar celebrations in your country? I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.Yours, Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假设你是李华，母亲节即将来临，你的英国朋友 Peter 发来邮件询问有关你们庆祝母亲节的事宜。请你给他回复一封邮件。【详解】1.词汇积累对……感兴趣：show interest in→take interest in→ be interested in众所周知：as is known to us all→as we know对……感激：express our gratitude to→be grateful to有助于，导致：contribute to →lead to→result in2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Delighted to learn that you show great interest in Mothers’ Day, I’m writing to share with you some details regarding it.拓展句：When I was delighted to learn that you show great interest in Mothers’ Day, I’m writing to share with you some details regarding it.【点睛】[高分句型1] As is known to us all, showing respect for mother is a tradition for us Chinese. (运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2] As far as I’m concerned, it is Mothers’ Day that gives us an opportunity to show our respect and love for our mothers, which is contributing to improving the relationship between mothers and children. (运用了强调句型和which引导的非限制性定语从句)10．Dear fellow students,According to the WHO, there are about 80% teenagers around the world lacking exercise, which will absolutely cause severe health problems. Therefore, we should attach great importance to it and have enough exercise.Why is the case like this? For one thing, many of us teenagers hold an opinion that exercising will cost us much time for we have much homework. For another, nowadays, something such as a smartphone seems to be more appealing to us than exercise. However, the benefits of exercising enough are beyond argument. Exercise can strengthen our bodies and make us energetic, which counts for our study and future, so I suggest that you choose a sport you like and make a reasonable time for doing it. Of course, make sure you can insist, or you cannot gain the effect. Anyhow, I hope you can change your mind and act now.That's all. Thank you for listening !【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生用英语写一篇发言稿，说明缺乏运动的原因、运动的好处以及给出合理的建议。【详解】1.词汇积累重视：pay attention to→attach great importance to观点：view/idea→opinion吸引人的：attractive→appealing建议：recommend→suggest2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：For another, nowadays, something such as a smartphone seems to be more appealing to us than exercise. However, the benefits of exercising enough are beyond argument.拓展句：For another, although nowadays, something such as a smartphone seems to be more appealing to us than exercise, the benefits of exercising enough are beyond argument.【点睛】[高分句型1] According to the WHO, there are about 80% teenagers around the world lacking exercise, which will absolutely cause severe health problems. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2] Exercise can strengthen our bodies and make us energetic, which counts for our study and future, so I suggest that you choose a sport you like and make a reasonable time for doing it. (运用了that引导宾语从句)