北京高考英语写作分类训练：建议信

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建议信
1．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim所在的学校即将迎来百年校庆。他参与准备活动，负责向来宾介绍学校的变化，问你有什么好的建议。请你用英文给他回邮件，内容包括：
1.表示祝贺;
2.你的建议。
注意：1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
提示词：纪念日anniversary
Dear Jim,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
2．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你与交换生Jim要共同完成一篇项目学习的论文，他建议用AI完成初稿。请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1. 委婉拒绝并说明理由；
2. 你的建议及计划。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
提示词语：项目学习—project-based learning
Dear Jim,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
3．假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。你的英国好友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他最近沉迷于使用电子设备，想做出改变但不知该怎么办，特来信向你寻求建议。请给他回邮件，内容包括：
1.表示理解;
2.提供合理使用电子设备的建议;
3.祝愿他生活重回正轨。
注意：1.词数 100 左右。
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
提示词：电子设备 digital devices
Dear Jim,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
4．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。最近你收到英国好友Jim的来信，得知他和朋友们骑车旅行一周的计划没有得到父母的许可，他感到非常沮丧。请你给Jim写一封回信，内容包括：
1.表示安慰；
2.给出建议。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
5．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国笔友Jim给你写了一封信，提及因为误解，他和同学产生了不愉快。请用英文给Jim回复邮件，内容包括：
1. 安慰Jim；
2. 具体建议。
注意：1．词数 100 左右；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
6．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你校英国交换生Jim对中国文化非常感兴趣，他希望你推荐一件他在寒假里可以做的事情，便于他更好地了解中国文化。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.你推荐他做的事情;
2.你的理由。
注意：1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
7．假如你是红星中学高一学生李华。你的英国好友Jim发来邮件，表示他对自己的形象不满，因此感到十分烦恼。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.表示理解；
2.提出建议。
注意：1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
提示词：形象、外貌look
Dear Jim,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
8．假设你是红星中学高二学生李华。你校英国留学生Jim最近在学习汉语的过程中遇到了许多困难，希望你给他一些学习汉语的建议，请你给Jim回信，提出你的建议，内容包括：
l. Jim遇到的困难；
2.你的建议。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
9．假设你是高一学生李华，你班交换生Jim需要参加一个学校社团，他对非物质文化遗产社团（ICH Club）非常感兴趣，写信寻求你的建议。请你给他回信，内容包括：
1. 社团活动介绍
2. 推荐的理由
注意：1.词数100词左右；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
10．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim来信，询问你如何提高学习效率。请你给他写一封回信，介绍你的具体做法及原因。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua











1．Dear Jim,
Congratulations on your school’s upcoming centennial anniversary! It’s a remarkable achievement and a testament to the school’s commitment to education.
As for your request for suggestions on how to introduce the school’s changes to guests, I would recommend highlighting the school’s technological advancements. You could showcase the school’s state-of-the-art facilities, such as the computer labs and interactive whiteboards, and how they have enhanced the learning experience for students. Additionally, you could also mention the school’s efforts in promoting diversity and inclusivity, such as the establishment of cultural clubs and the implementation of anti-bullying policies.
I hope these suggestions are helpful, and I wish you all the best for a successful anniversary celebration.
Yours
Li Hua
【导语】本文是一篇应用文。文章要求考生作为高三学生李华，给英国好友Jim一些建议和祝贺，关于他们即将到来的百年校庆。
【详解】1.词汇积累
即将到来的：upcoming → imminent
建议：suggestion → proposal
提到：mention → refer to
有帮助的：helpful → favourable
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Congratulations on your school’s upcoming centennial anniversary! It’s a remarkable achievement and a testament to the school’s commitment to education.
拓展句：Congratulations on your school’s upcoming centennial anniversary which is a remarkable achievement and a testament to the school’s commitment to education.
【点睛】【高分句型1】You could showcase the school’s state-of-the-art facilities, such as the computer labs and interactive whiteboards, and how they have enhanced the learning experience for students.（运用了how引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】I hope these suggestions are helpful, and I wish you all the best for a successful anniversary celebration.（运用省略that引导的宾语从句）
2．Dear Jim,
Thanks for your suggestion on using AI to finish the first draft of our paper. But after further consideration, I’m afraid it’s not a wise idea.
Firstly, it goes against the purpose of project-based learning, which is to cultivate critical thinking and teamwork. Moreover, AI is unlikely to accurately present our ideas, because it hasn’t “got involved in” our project.
So, I suggest we write the paper ourselves. We can start by brainstorming together to create an outline after generating some original and creative ideas. Then we can work independently on different parts, and finally work together to finalize our paper. I believe we can do a better job than AI.
Hope you can understand. Expecting our distinctive draft.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你与交换生Jim要共同完成一篇项目学习的论文，他建议用AI完成初稿。请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件，委婉拒绝提议，并说明理由，以及自己的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
产生：generate→produce
完成：finish→complete
培养：cultivate→develop/nurture
此外：moreover→besides
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：We can start by brainstorming together to create an outline after generating some original and creative ideas. Then we can work independently on different parts, and finally work together to finalize our paper.
拓展句：We can start by brainstorming together to create an outline after generating some original and creative ideas, after which we can work independently on different parts, and finally work together to finalize our paper.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Thanks for your suggestion on using AI to finish the first draft of our paper. (运用了动名词作宾语)
[高分句型2] Moreover, AI is unlikely to accurately present our ideas, because it hasn’t “got involved in” our project. (运用了because引导原因状语从句)
3．Dear Jim,
I’m sorry to learn that you have been obsessed with using your digital devices lately. It’s surely natural for you to find the virtual world appealing. And don’t worry! I will fully support you in dealing with it.
First of all, start some other hobbies, such as reading, listening to music, or playing chess, etc., which will take your mind off your digital devices. Secondly, make more friends. Friends will help you when you can’t resist the temptation of your digital devices. Thirdly, do more sports. Sports can not only keep you healthy, but also enrich your life and help you forget your digital devices.
I hope it will all work out. Cheer up! Let me know if I can help further.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国好友Jim最近沉迷于使用电子设备提出合理使用电子设备的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
痴迷于：be obsessed with→be addicted to
有吸引力的：appealing→attractive
其次：Secondly→What’s more
抵制：resist→oppose
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：And don’t worry! I will fully support you in dealing with it.
拓展句：I want you to know that I will provide my full support to you as you deal with it, so please don’t worry!
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m sorry to learn that you have been obsessed with using your digital devices lately.(that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】First of all, start some other hobbies, such as reading, listening to music, or playing chess, etc., which will take your mind off your digital devices. (which引导的非限制性定语从句)
4．Dear Jim,
I’m sorry to hear that you didn’t get your parents’ permission to go on a week-long bike trip with your friends. You’re upset and I’d like to give you some comfort and advice.
As far as I’m concerned, the most important thing that you need do now is have a good conversation with your parents, which is beneficial to your relationship. Besides, there is no need for you to be disappointed about this because your parents just want to protect you from potentially dangerous situation.
I hope you will get better in no time.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。最近你收到英国好友Jim的来信，得知他和朋友们骑车旅行一周的计划没有得到父母的许可，他感到非常沮丧。请你给Jim写一封回信，表示安慰，并提出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
失望的：disappointed/upset→discouraged
建议：advice→suggestion
有益的：beneficial→helpful
此外：besides→in addition
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：You’re upset and I’d like to give you some comfort and advice.
拓展句：Since you’re upset, I’d like to give you some comfort and advice.
【点睛】[高分句型1] As far as I’m concerned, the most important thing that you need do now is have a good conversation with your parents, which is beneficial to your relationship.  (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Besides, there is no need for you to be disappointed about this because your parents just want to protect you from potentially dangerous situation. (运用了because引导原因状语从句)
5．范文1
Dear Jim,
I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble with your classmates. It’s never easy when misunderstandings occur. But don’t worry, I’m here for you.
I have some suggestions that might help. Try having an open and honest conversation with your classmates. Explain how you’re feeling and listen to their points as well. It’s possible that they just didn’t realize they were causing you harm. If that doesn’t work, don’t be afraid to ask teachers for help. They’re expert at dealing with conflicts and can give you advice on how to handle the situation.
I hope this helps. Just remember that conflicts are totally normal, but with a little patience and understanding, you are sure to work through it. Take care.
Yours,
Li Hua
范文2
Dear Jim,
I’m sorry to hear that you’re experiencing some difficulties with your classmates. It can be tough when misunderstandings occur, but please know that you’re not alone. We all go through similar situations in our lives.
As for your situation, here are some suggestions that might help. Firstly, try to have an open and honest conversation with your classmates to understand their perspective and clarify any misunderstandings. Secondly, it’s important to approach the situation with kindness and empathy. Finally, don’t be afraid to seek help from a teacher or counselor if the situation continues.
Remember, you’re a great person and don’t let this situation bring you down. Keep your head up and stay positive!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Jim回复邮件，对于他和同学产生的不愉快表示安慰并提出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
发生：occur→happen
观点：point→view
向……求助：ask…for help→turn to…for help
完全：totally→completely
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：They’re expert at dealing with conflicts and can give you advice on how to handle the situation.
拓展句：They’re expert at dealing with conflicts, who can give you advice on how to handle the situation.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I have some suggestions that might help.（运用了that引导的定语从句）
【高分句型2】It’s possible that they just didn’t realize they were causing you harm.（运用了it作形式主语，that引导主语从句以省略that的宾语从句）
【高分句型3】If that doesn’t work, don’t be afraid to ask teachers for help.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句）
6．Dear Jim,
Hearing that you are interested in Chinese traditional culture, I recommend you to read Chinese classical literature which can help you have a better understanding of Chinese traditional culture. Here are my specific suggestions.
First, you can read the four great classics. I know this is very difficult for you, but you can read them by consulting a dictionary or a book. In the process of reading, you will not only improve your Chinese level, but also gain more knowledge. In addition, you can also watch the ancient TV series to understand the specific plots, so that you can more fully feel the Chinese classical literature.
These are my suggestions. I hope they will be helpful to you. If you don’t understand any details, you can always write to me. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Jim写一封信，建议他在寒假里做一件事，以便于他更好的了解中国文化。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议：recommend→suggest
首先：first→first of all
此外：in addition→what’s more
希望：hope→expect
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Hearing that you are interested in Chinese traditional culture, I recommend you to read Chinese classical literature which can help you have a better understanding of Chinese traditional culture.
拓展句：Because I hear that you are interested in Chinese traditional culture, I recommend you to read Chinese classical literature which can help you have a better understanding of Chinese traditional culture.
【点睛】【高分句型1】 I know this is very difficult for you, but you can read them by consulting a dictionary or a book. In the process of reading, you will not only improve your Chinese level, but also gain more knowledge. （运用了not only…but also…固定句型）
【高分句型2】In addition, you can also watch the ancient TV series to understand the specific plots, so that you can more fully feel the Chinese classical literature.（运用了so that引导状语从句）
7．Dear Jim,
     I’ m sorry to hear that you are upset about your image. I could understand such kind of feeling as it once happened to me. Now, I’m writing to give you some advice to help you get rid of the trouble.
     First of all, you should build up your self-confidence. Only when you are confident will you overcome the fear of your look. Second, you should keep it in mind that one’s beauty lies in his spirit other than appearance outside. What really matters is having a positive value. Last but not the least, you’d better make the most of your gifts so as to improve and make up for your weaknesses, which as a result will promote your self-confidence.
     Hopefully, my advice will be of great benefit to you. Looking forward to your good news.
                                                                                                                                                                                 Yours,
                                                                                                                                                                                  Li Hua      
【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给英国好友Jim写一封电子邮件，向他提出克服对个人形象不满意的建议。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
了解：hear → learn
情感，情绪：feeling → emotion
发生：happen → occur
建议：advice → suggestions
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Now, I’m writing to give you some advice to help you get rid of the trouble.
拓展句：Now, I’m writing to give you some advice, which can help you get rid of the trouble.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Only when you are confident will you overcome the fear of your look.(运用了倒装句)
【高分句型2】What really matters is having a positive value.(运用了主语从句和动名词短语作表语)
8．Dear Jim,
      It’s great to know that you have begun to learn Chinese! You say you find Chinese difficult to learn. I quite understand your problem.
      Different from your language, most Chinese characters are from images. For English, most of time, you’ll know how to pronounce a word when you see it. But it is impossible in Chinese. In addition, Chinese grammar is totally different from English grammar. That definitely brings you more trouble.
      However, learning Chinese takes time. Don’t worry. I suggest you start with Pinyin, which will help you know how to read Chinese characters. Besides, listening to Chinese songs or watching Chinese movies will also help. The more you are exposed to the language, the more familiar you will get with it.
      I wish you every success in learning the language! If you have any further questions, feel free to ask. Good luck!
                                                                                                                                                                                       Yours
                                                                                                                                                                                       Li Hua
【导语】这是一篇应用文写作。假设你是红星中学高二学生李华。你校英国留学生Jim最近在学习汉语的过程中遇到了许多困难，希望你给他一些学习汉语的建议，请你给Jim回信。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
理解：understand→comprehend
确实：definitely→indeed
建议：suggest→advise
另外：besides→moreover
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：In addition, Chinese grammar is totally different from English grammar. That definitely brings you more trouble.
拓展句：In addition, Chinese grammar is totally different from English grammar, which definitely brings you more trouble.
【点睛】[高分句型1]For English, most of time, you’ll know how to pronounce a word when you see it.(运用了how+不定式作宾语，when引导的时间状语从句)
[高分句型1]I suggest you start with Pinyin, which will help you know how to read Chinese characters.(运用了虚拟语气和which引导的非限制性定语从句)
9．Dear Jim,
I’m more than delighted to know that you want to join one club of our school and are interested in the ICH Club, which has a variety of activities, such as performing arts, making crafts, learning about traditional customs and so on. I also recommend this club to you for the following reasons.
First, considering your interest in Chinese culture, I think joining the ICH Club can be a good way for you to learn more about Chinese culture. Besides, there are various activities held by the club, which can enrich your school life. And this can also make you better adapt to the new environment.
Hope my suggestions can be helpful. Best wishes.
Yours,

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给对非物质文化遗产社团非常感兴趣的交换生Jim给他回信，内容包括：社团活动介绍；推荐的理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：delighted→happy/glad
各种各样的：a variety of→all kinds of
考虑到：considering→in consideration of
此外：Besides→In addition
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：And this can also make you better adapt to the new environment.
拓展句：And this can also make you better adapt to the environment which is unfamiliar to you.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m more than delighted to know that you want to join one club of our school and are interested in the ICH Club, which has a variety of activities, such as performing arts, making crafts, learning about traditional customs and so on. (运用了that引导的宾语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句以及动名词短语作宾语)
[高分句型2] Besides, there are various activities held by the club, which can enrich your school life. (运用了过去分词作定语和which引导的非限制性定语从句)
10．Dear Jim,
In your last letter, you mentioned that you wanted to know how to improve learning efficiency. I’ll give you some advice.
Firstly, when acquiring new knowledge, you should try to make connections with what you have already learned. Secondly, you should learn to do “spaced review”, especially during the first day after learning. Besides, there are some common practices you should know, such as sleeping well and doing physical exercise. All these can help improve your memory and learn effectively.
I hope my advice will be useful. If you need more help, please let me know.
                                                                                                                                                                  Yours,
                                                                                                                                                                 Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Jim写一封信，针对如何提高学习效率给出一些建议并说明理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议：advice→suggestion
首先：firstly→first of all
此外：besides→what’s more
有帮助的：useful→helpful
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Secondly, you should learn to do “spaced review”, especially during the first day after learning.
拓展句：Secondly, you should learn to do “spaced review”, especially during the first day after learning, which can improve learning efficiency.
【点睛】【高分句型1】In your last letter, you mentioned that you wanted to know how to improve learning efficiency.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】If you need more help, please let me know.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句)