上海高考英语写作分类训练：开放性作文

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开放性作文1．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.“Li Na’s perseverance and pioneering courage will be recognized with the highest honor in her profession: induction (入门) into the International Tennis Hall of Fame (名人堂).”“Ne Zha and Monkey King share a lot in common. They are brave fighters, refusing to resign themselves to destiny.”成功的人物总有一些可贵的品质，读了以上材料，谈谈你的想法。内容包括：1. 简述李娜（网球运动员）或者哪吒（神话人物）等身上的可贵品质；2. 结合生活实际谈谈其中某一可贵品质的重要性。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below.“低头族”现象的出现令人担忧，因为沉溺于智能手机带来了诸多危害。请在你的文章中：1. 简要描述下图;2. 表达你对“低头族”现象的看法及建议。Keywords:“低头族”现象：phubbing“低头族”：phubber____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．Directions：Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.有些人认为大学生应该学习他们喜欢的专业或学科，有些人认为他们应该学对将来有用的学科，比如科学技术等。作为高三学生，你将面临选择大学和专业，请你谈谈你的观点，并说说你持这观点的理由和你将来的设想。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．Directions:Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是明启中学高三学生王林，最近读到了如下新闻：有一名小学生通过代他人写作业赚取了一万多元。你对此新闻颇有感触，写一篇日记表达你的想法；1. 你认为这件事反应了什么问题；2. 你认为应该怎么解决这个问题。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．Directions:Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是明启中学高三学生李明，你校正在开展主题为“参加课外补习班是否有用”的征文活动，你有意参加，写一篇文章，内容须包括：1. 你认为参加课外补习班是否有用；2. 以你自己的亲身经历来说明你的观点。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.你是交大附中的高三学生李华。现学校的新大楼即将落成，现学校就新大楼的命名向全校师生征集意见，请你就新大楼的名字提出你自己的建议，并给出你的理由。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7．假如你是高一学生林云，你校英语报Students’ Post向全校学生征文，本期主题是“我认为最重要的一个品质”，你有意投稿。你的文章需包含：1. 你认为的最重要的品质是什么；2. 该品质为什么最重要。（可结合实例加以说明）注意：文章开头和结尾已给出，请完成中间部分的写作。字数100字以上。Qualities will determine what you can achieve. The quality which I think is of the most importance is________.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________is what has helped a great number of achievement makers, and it is well worth possessing.8．Directions: Suppose you are going to visit Rome, who would you like to go with? Write a paragraph of 60-80 words,explaining ONE of your reasons with supporting details. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是明启中学高三学生李明，你校英语报正在举行主题为“幸福的源泉”的征文活动，你有意参加。写一篇短文，内容须包括：1.简单阐述你对幸福的理解；2.详细说明你认为什么可以给你带来幸福，并说明你的理由。10．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.假设你是光华中学的学生李明，你校英语报正进行题为“大学专业选择，个人兴趣和就业前景孰重孰轻”的讨论。你对此话题很感兴趣，写一篇文章投稿，内容须包括：1．明确说明你的观点；2．举例阐述你的理由。    1．Li Na, a tennis player, is one of the people I admire most, who has a positive influence on my growth. Li Na became the first Asian player to be inducted into the Hall of Fame, which was inspiring. What impressed me most was that she retired ranked sixth in the world.   From her inspiring experience, I have learned that only through hard work can I achieve our dreams. I firmly believe it is Li Na’s perseverance and pioneering courage that inspire her to make greater achievements.  I am so moved by her spirit that I am determined to brave the challenges and try different ways to solve my problems. I learn from her that only with devotion and persistence can I overcome difficulties and make a contribution to the society.【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生阅读所给的材料，对于成功人物的一些可贵品质，谈谈自己的想法。【详解】1.词汇积累影响：influence→effect 实现：achieve→realise 下定决心的：determined→resolved解决：solve→work out2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Li Na became the first Asian player to be inducted into the Hall of Fame.拓展句：Li Na became the first Asian player who is inducted into the Hall of Fame.【点睛】【高分句型1】Li Na, a tennis player, is one of the people I admire most, who has a positive influence on my growth.(运用了省略关系代词引导的限制性定语从句和who引导的非限制性定语从句)【高分句型2】What impressed me most was that she retired ranked sixth in the world.(运用了what引导的主语从句以及that引导的表语从句)2．Guided writingThe cartoon vividly reflects a common phenomenon: many people are becoming increasingly indulged in the virtual world presented by smartphones. It warns us that the phenomenon of phubbing has grown to such an extent that it shouldn’t be treated lightly. Since they inevitably distract people’s attention, things like that are entirely possible. In fact, phubbing has a far more profound impact on people and society. Phubbing is not only a distraction, but also a poison to our relationships with others. To reverse the trend of phubbing, the key is to pay more attention to the charm of real life. With time and efforts wasted on the smartphones back, we are perfectly capable of hanging out with friends, having dinner with our family, and most importantly, embracing the reality. It’s simple to step out of the virtual world, since there’s naturally more beauty here, in reality, than behind those screens.【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对社会中存在的低头族现象提出自己的看法和建议。【详解】词汇积累生动地：vividly → livelily 沉迷于：are becoming increasingly indulged in → are becoming increasingly addicted to → are becoming increasingly obsessed with安全：safety → security不可避免地：inevitably→ unavoidably对……有更深远的影响：has a far more profound impact on → has a much more significant influence on完全地：entirely→ totally→ wholly吸引力：charm→ attractiveness趋势：trend→ tide 能够：are perfectly capable of→ are perfectly able to 2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句1：To reverse the trend of phubbing, the key is to pay more attention to the charm of real life.拓展句1：To reverse the trend of phubbing, the key is that we should pay more attention to the charm of real life.【点睛】【高分句型1】It warns us that the phenomenon of phubbing has grown to such an extent that it shouldn’t be treated lightly.（运用了结果状语从句。）【高分句型2】It’s simple to step out of the virtual world, and everyone can do it without much trouble, since there’s naturally more beauty here, in reality, than behind those screens.（运用了since引导的原因状语从句。）3．     Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. As a senior three student, I think it is more important to choose the subject that I like best.     I have learnt that some students, who don’t know exactly what they want to study in university and choose the subject that they are expected to, end up succeeding in nothing. While others who choose the subjects they like are successful in the end. Though these subjects may be not popular when they begin to learn them, as long as they like, they will stick to studying until they get success.      So, I think it is better to study whatever the students like during university. I like art best and I will study hard to be a Davinci.【导语】本文是开放性作文。要求考生对将面临的选择大学和专业的问题谈谈自己的观点。【详解】 1.词汇积累学习：study→learn相信：believe→be convinced有用的：be useful→be of use和…相关：related to→relevant to2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：I like art best and I will study hard to be a Davinci.拓展句：Because I like art best, I will study hard to be a Davinci.【点睛】【高分句型1】Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like.（由that、whatever引导的宾语从句）【高分句型2】Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.（由that引导的宾语从句和that引导的定语从句）【高分句型3】As a senior three student, I think it is more important to choose the subject that I like best.（由省略连词that引导的宾语从句和that引导的定语从句）【高分句型4】I have learnt that some students, who don’t know exactly what they want to study in university and choose the subject that they are expected to, end up succeeding in nothing.（由that、what引导的宾语从句和who、that引导的定语从句）【高分句型5】While others who choose the subjects they like are successful in the end.（由who、省略连词that引导的定语从句）【高分句型6】Though these subjects may be not popular when they begin to learn them, as long as they like, they will stick to studying until they get success.（由Though引导的让步状语从句，when引导的时间状语从句，as long as引导的条件状语从句和until引导的时间状语从句）【高分句型7】So, I think it is better to study whatever the students like during university.（由whatever引导的宾语从句）4．     After I read the news that “a primary school student earned more than 10,000 yuan by writing homework for others”, I think it reflects a bad ethos in primary school. Here are my thoughts on the matter.First of all, we should rectify this bad atmosphere by strengthening education. Teachers should let students know that it is wrong to write homework for others. Secondly, we should consider whether it is necessary to assign students so much homework. Teachers should assign homework to students according to the actual situation. Too much homework makes students feel burdened. What’s more, teachers can assign interesting homework which is close to real life so that children can learn knowledge from life.【导语】这是一篇开放性作文。要求考生就“有一名小学生通过代他人写作业赚取了一万多元”这则新闻发表自己的看法。【详解】1.词汇积累想法：thought→view首先：First of all →Firstly错误的：wrong →improper有趣的：interesting→amusing2.句式拓展同义句转换原句：First of all, we should rectify this bad atmosphere by strengthening education.拓展句：First of all, this bad atmosphere should be rectified by strengthening education.【点睛】【高分句型1】Teachers should let students know that it is wrong to write homework for others.（运用了that 引导的宾语从句）【高分句型2】What’s more, teachers can assign interesting homework which is close to real life so that children can learn knowledge from life.（运用了which引导的定语从句和so that引导的目的状语从句）5．One possible version:Nowadays, students of all ages rush to all kinds of “cram schools” to cram their brains with extra classes, which, as far as I’m concerned, does more harm than good.Lured by the temptation of making money, cram schools of all kinds have been springing up everywhere, but how many of them are equipped with qualified teachers and well-designed courses? More often than not, you’ll end up with almost nothing after a long day feeling bored and exhausted, not to mention the long travel distance and considerable tuition fees. I still clearly remember one of such classes where the teacher was unfamiliar with the students and exams in Shanghai and crammed us with many out-of-date test papers. What a waste of time and money!Of course, some of these schools do possess good teachers, but believe me, if you spent the same amount of time on your school work, going over what you’ve learnt during the week, finishing your homework carefully, and previewing as required, maybe you would benefit even more. After I stopped taking extra classes and started to do as my teachers told me, I made rapid progress, which was beyond my wildest dreams before.Do not follow the trend blindly. When it comes to learning, sometimes “less is more”.【导语】本篇书面表达开放作文。假设你是明启中学高三学生李明，你校正在开展主题为“参加课外补习班是否有用”的征文活动，你有意参加，写一篇文章。【详解】1.词汇积累在我看来：as far as I’m concerned→in my opinion有害：do harm→be harmful各种各样的：all kinds of→various出现：spring up→appear2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Lured by the temptation of making money, cram schools of all kinds have been springing up everywhere, but how many of them are equipped with qualified teachers and well-designed courses?拓展句：Cram schools of all kinds have been springing up everywhere, which are lured by the temptation of making money, but how many of them are equipped with qualified teachers and well-designed courses?【点睛】[高分句型1] I still clearly remember one of such classes where the teacher was unfamiliar with the students and exams in Shanghai and crammed us with many out-of-date test papers. (运用了where引导定语从句)[高分句型2] After I stopped taking extra classes and started to do as my teachers told me, I made rapid progress, which was beyond my wildest dreams before. (运用了after引导时间状语从句)6．One possible version:I have heard that the new building of the school is about to be completed. School leaders asked teachers and students for advice on naming the building. Hearing the news, I was very excited and decided to take an active part. I think the name of the building should reflect the characteristics of the times and keep pace with the times.Besides, it should have cultural connotation, reflect the cultural characteristics of our school, and be easy to remember. I suggest that the building be named “Chongwen Building”, which means noblility and elegance. This name indicates the noble cultural accomplishment of the school. I’d appreciate if my suggestion is taken into consideration. 【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生就新大楼的名字提出你自己的建议，并给出你的理由。【详解】1.词汇积累完成：complete→finish建议：advice→suggestion兴奋的：excited→thrilled特征：characteristic→quality2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Hearing this news, I was very excited and decided to take an active part. 拓展句：When I heard this news, I was very excited and decided to take an active part. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I heard that the new building of the school is about to be completed.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)【高分句型2】I suggest that the building be named “Chongwen Building”, which means noblility and elegance.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)7．Qualities will determine what you can achieve. The quality which I think is of the most importance is the spirit of craftsmanship.As we all know, craftsmanship is mainly made up of perseverance, integrity, diligence and expertise. Take the clock restoration master, Wang Jin, for example. With skillful hands and a modest heart, Mr. Wang spent his whole life restoring clocks dating back hundreds of years, which not only helps preserve traditional skills but also brings the clocks back to life. Most importantly, his innovation and unremitting devotion ensure that the art of clock repairing stands the test of time. Therefore, from my perspective, the spirit of craftsmanship, which includes devoting ourselves to work, sharpening our skills and overcoming difficulties with perseverance, is the necessary and significant quality for us human beings. The spirit of craftsmanship is what has helped a great number of achievement makers, and it is well worth possessing.【分析】本篇书面表达是一篇夹叙夹议文。请考生以“我认为最重要的一个品质”为题写一篇英文短文。【详解】1. 词汇积累决定：determine→decide坚持不懈：perseverance→persistence确保：ensure→ make sure奉献：devote to→ contribute to2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：As we all know, craftsmanship spirit is mainly made up of perseverance, integrity, diligence and expertise.拓展句：As we all know, craftsmanship spirit is an important quality which is mainly made up of perseverance, integrity, diligence and expertise.【点睛】[高分句型1] With skillful hands and a modest heart, Mr. Wang spent his whole life restoring clocks dating back hundreds of years, which not only helps preserve traditional skills but also brings the clocks back to life.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2] Most importantly, his innovation and unremitting devotion ensure that the art of clock repairing stands the test of time.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）8．     I want to visit Rome with my sister. One of my reasons is that my sister is a tour guide who often takes tourists around Europe. Firstly, she is familiar with every country in Europe. If I go to Rome with her, I won’t get lost. It is necessary for me to keep myself safe. Besides, she knows the most polular scenery in Rome, so I won’t miss any fun spots. In addition, I needen’t  worry about being cheated.【导语】本文是一篇开放性作文。要求考生写出一个自己想与之结伴游罗马的人并解释原因。【详解】1.词汇积累首先：Firstly →First of all迷路：get lost →lose one’s way此外：besides → what’s more担心：worry about→ concern about2.句式拓展It作形式主语的句子改成不定式作主语的句子原句：It is necessary for me to keep myself safe.拓展句：To keep myself safe is necessary for me.【点睛】【高分句型1】One of my reasons is that my sister is a tour guide who often takes tourists around Europe.（运用了表语从句和定语从句）【高分句型2】If I go to Rome with her, I won’t get lost.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句）9．Along with the improvement of living standards, people are no longer content with being fed and clothed adequately. They are more concerned about their sense of happiness. So, what is happiness? Different people may have different opinions towards the definition of happiness. Some people, for example, derive a sense of satisfaction from material basis, without which they can’t live comfortably and happily. For others, they believe that happiness has something to do with health and wealth.Happiness, in my judgment, proves an attitude. It lies in the struggle to be happy. People sometimes go to extremes and crazily pursue money, power and social status, which are all symbols of success but never of happiness. Happiness is a state of mind. It starts with accepting yourself, knowing where you are going and enjoying every moment along the way. If we live a life with right attitudes, we will be happy.【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生写一篇关于对幸福的理解的短文。【详解】1.词汇积累满意的：content→satisfied快乐地：happily →cheerfully成功：success→prosperity在某人看来：in one’s judgment→in one’s opinion2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Happiness is a state of mind.拓展句：Happiness is a state of mind that we choose.【点睛】【高分句型1】Some people, for example, derive a sense of satisfaction from material basis, without which they can’t live comfortably and happily.（运用了介词+关系代词which引导的非限制性定语从句）【高分句型2】 If we live a life with right attitudes, we will be happy.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句）10．Choosing a major: which is more important, interest or job prospect?   A survey has been carried out recently on which is more important in choosing a major in college: interest or job prospect. Some students prefer interest, believing that choosing a major they like will ensure them a happy college life and give them more motivation to study. Therefore, they will have more opportunities to get a job which can satisfy their interest.   However, others consider job prospect more important. They think college graduates face great pressure in finding a job, so job prospect should be firstly taken into consideration. After all, getting a good job is the first important thing for graduates.  As far as I’m concerned, it’s up to yourself to decide which is more important. No matter what decision you make, try to stick to it and you will surely have a bright future.【导语】本篇书面表达开放性作文。要求考生写一篇文章, 就有关题为“大学专业选择，个人兴趣和就业前景孰重孰轻”的讨论发表自己的观点。【详解】1.词汇积累机会：opportunities →chances无论什么：No matter what → Whatever坚持：stick to →insist on以我的观点：As far as I’m concerned → In my opinion2.句式拓展合并简单句原句： After all, getting a good job is the first important thing for graduates.扩展句： After all, the first important thing for graduates is that they should find a job.【点睛】【高分句型1】A survey has been carried out recently on which is more important in choosing a major in college: interest or job prospect.9运用了which引导的介词宾语从句）【高分句型2】Some students prefer interest, believing that choosing a major they like will ensure them a happy college life and give them more motivation to study.(运用了现在分词believing做伴随状语，that引导的宾语从句， 以及从句中使用了动名词短语choosing a major做主语，并且使用了省略that引导的定语从句修饰名词major)