天津高考英语写作分类训练：建议信

建议信

1．假如你是李津。你的美国朋友Peter来信说想提高中文水平，进一步了解中国文化。请你给他写封回信，推荐学习资源(resources)要点如下：

1. 学习资源：报纸、杂志及其他途径；

2. 推荐理由；

3. 表达祝愿。

要求：1. 词数不少于100；

2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；

3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总数。

参考词汇：recommend sth to sb(向某人推荐……)

Dear Peter,

I’m glad to receive your letter

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Yours,

Li Jin

2．假设你是李华，你的朋友Jim最近由于疫情，一直在家上网课，感觉很不适应，主要是自己自控力不强，上课容易走神。为此他写信向你寻求建议，以便帮助他改善目前的状况。请给他回信，帮助你的朋友摆脱这个问题，提高网课学习的效果。

要求：

1. 书写端正。

2. 字数 100 字左右。

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3．假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津。你校英文报收到一封署名为Chris的高一新生的来信，在信中Chris表示了自己不能适应高中生活，急需一些建议，为了帮助他，请给他用英语写一封回信。

内容包括：

(1)表示理解并给予安慰;

(2)多与老师和同学们沟通、交流;

(3)建议合理分配时间(如学习、锻炼和休息的时间等);

(4)积极参加学校社团活动。

注意：

(1)词数100词左右;

(2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;

(3)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Chris,

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Yours,

Li Jin

4．假设你是李津，在英语学习方面既有困难，也有成功的经验，请你把自己学习英语的经历通过电子邮件分享给英语学习有困难的朋友王丽。内容提示如下：

(1)不懂英语学习的正确方法，向英语老师请教；

(2)最好的方法是利用每一个机会使用英语；

(3)扎实英语知识。

注意：

(1)词数100左右；

(2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

(3)开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Wang Li,

How’s everything getting along recently?

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Best Wishes!

Yours Truly,

Li Jin

5．假定你是李津，你的英国笔友Chris最近来中国某中学交换学习，他来信告诉你他不知道如何学好中文，请你给他回一封信，内容包括以下要点：

写信的目的;

具体建议：多用中文交流，提高口语和听力水平，大量阅读，增加词汇量，写中文日记，学以致用；

表达个人期待。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头和结尾已为你写好。

Dear Chris,

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Yours,

Li Jin

6．假如你是李华、你的美国笔友Peter给你发来了一封电子邮件，说他打算到天津留学，向你请教学好汉语的方法。请你根据以下表格提示，给Peter回一封电子邮件。

注意：词数100左右;

Dear Peter,

I am happy to learn that you are coming to Tianjin to study.

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I’m looking forward to seeing you soon.

Yours.

Li Hua

7．假如你是李津，你的美国笔友Peter给你发来了一封电子邮件，说他打算到天津留学，向你请教学好汉语的方法。请你根据以下要点提示，给Peter回一封电子邮件。

(1) 提出建议 (不少于三条)：

(2) 表达祝愿。

注意：(1) 词数不少于100：

(2) 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯；

(3) 邮件的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Peter,

I am happy to learn that you are coming to Tianjin to study.

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Yours,

Li Jin

8．假定你叫李津。最近你的好友李华在微信上说自从上了高三之后，他感到压力很大，第一次月考成绩也不理想。因此，希望有人给他一些建议。作为好友，请你写一封信，给他一些合理的建议。请根据下面的提示，用英语写一封回信。

1. 注意劳逸结合；

2. 不要和别人比成绩；

3. 要有良好的心态；

4. 祝他学习上取得进步。

注意：

(1)词数不少干100；

(2)可以适当增加细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；

(3)开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。

Dear Li Hua,

I have read your WeChat and understood your situation.

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9．假设你是晨光中学学生LiJin。看到校园网英文讨论区一位同学发的帖子。请你用英语给他回帖，鼓励他，并给他提出建议。

1.保持积极心态，严格自律，不在手机上浪费时间;

2.坚持锻炼，保证睡眠，保持精力充沛;

3.遵守规定，为抗击疫情贡献自己的力量。

注意：

1.词数不少于100;

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：疫情the epidemic

新冠肺炎病毒 the COVID-19 virus

I can understand that

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Li Jin

10．假设你是晨光中学的李津。你的韩国笔友Moon-hee在给你邮件中提到她最近在准备IELTS考试(国际语言考试)，感觉压力很大，很担心考不好，希望得到你的帮助。请你给她回信，内容包括：

1．对 Moon-hee进行安慰并给予鼓励;

2．分析心理压力的不良后果;

3．给出合理建议并给出解释(如做瑜伽，听轻音乐等)。

注意：(1)词数不少于100;

(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Moon-hee,

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Yours,

Li Jin

1．Dear Sir or Madam,

I'm Li Jin, chairman of the Student Union. In order to meet the coming National Games in TianJin, a Dragon Boat Race will be held by our school. On behalf of our school, I sincerely invite you to take part in it.

The Dragon Boat Race is scheduled to start on Aug 3rd and last for 3 days. It is to be held in the Haihe river, where audience along the river can have a perfect view of the competition. It is through the race that students can not only feel the charm of the traditional custom but also gain a further understanding of the strength of unity. At the same time, it's a valuable chance to improve the communication between two schools.

We believe this activity will become a part of the most unforgettable experience of students. So we hope you will come. Please inform us your decision before 20th July so that we can make more detailed arrangements in advance.

【详解】这是一篇应用文。要求你代表你的学校给姐妹学校剑桥中学写一封邀请信，邀请他们来参加8月3日-5日在天津海河要举行的全运会龙舟比赛。考生在这篇书信中，要表明写信的内容，活动的时间，地点和意义，并且要求对方于2017年7月20日前回复。这篇作文属于提纲式作文，比较简单。考生宜用三段来将要点表达清楚。其中，介绍活动的时间地点时需要用一般将来时态。 这是一封邀请信，所以，写信的口吻应该比较礼貌客气。

【亮点分析】文章条理清楚，第一段介绍了写信的目的，第二段介绍了活动的具体情况，第三段为结束段，提醒对方及时回复。另外，文章使用了定语从句（where audience along the river can have a perfect view of the competition），强调句（It is through the race that students can not only feel the charm of the traditional custom but also gain a further understanding of the strength of unity）等高级句式。长短句结合，表达到位。

2．Dear Lucy

 We hear that you’ll return to the United Kingdom on a holiday soon. All the class will miss you very much when you are on leave!

Firstly, I’d like to express our gratitude for your excellent teaching in our school and your care and love for our class! So we have decided to have a farewell party this Saturday for you. The party will start at 6:30 on Saturday evening in the classroom of Class 12, Grade 3 and will probably last about an hour. All of the class hope you can join us singing some English songs and have a good time together. At the end of the party, the monitor will present you some flowers and gifts, which are mostly made by ourselves.

We wish you a plain journey back home! We are also expecting you to come back to China again soon. I am looking forward to receiving your early reply.

Yours,

Li Jin

【详解】这是一篇议论文。文章内容提示已经给出。同学们在写这篇文章时，要注意以下几点：1. 通篇以一般现在时态为主。2.  要点要齐全。但是不要对要点进行简单的罗列。可以使用适当的连接词，使上下文行文流畅，衔接自然流程。3.

行文思路要有逻辑性，在中心论点给出后要由浅入深，做到力求全面。该文写作的难点主要是如何更好的叙述这三点。因为所有考生的大致内容都是一样的所以主要是看能不能写出让考官眼前一亮 的作文。同时要使文章的内容充实，不能显得无力。学生可以采用简单句和复杂句结合的方法，并且同时穿插一些祈使句和倒装句使文章充实。

【范文亮点】文章开篇给出了全文的写作背景“We hear that you’ll return to the United Kingdom on a holiday soon.”.言简意赅，主旨鲜明。要点明确。分条清晰：1.表示感谢 express our gratitude for your excellent teaching2.说明时间地点：The party will start at 6:30 on Saturday evening in the classroom of Class 12, Grade 3 。3.说明年呢内容： singing some English songs and have a good time together文章结构紧凑。文中还用了express our gratitude for；return to； have a good time；looking forward to receiving  等高级短语让文章看起来更有料，To start with等连接词使行文非常流畅。特别是文章第二段第一句和结尾最后一句内容让阅卷老师眼前一亮。

3．On Wednesday of this Cultural and Art week, we had the honor of inviting Professor Hudson, a foreign teacher from Sichuan University, to give an English lesson to the students of Grade3. All the students were deeply impressed by this unforgettable English lesson.

The professor began the class with an amusing English story, which attracted the attention of all the students at once. He spoke slowly and clearly so that students could follow him well. Greatly inspired, most of the students took an active part in his class. After class, many students interviewed sang high praise for his teaching. They said never before had experienced so interesting a class.

From his lesson, students came to a conclusion that it is not difficult to learn English if they various ways.

【详解】试题分析：本文对考生的要求较高，要求考生首先读懂原文，再根据文字提示写作。写信的要点都隐含在信中，再读懂文章的基础上，要考生自己归纳出来，再一一进行解决，考生需要使用合适的连接词把这些要点连接成文，也要注意运用适当的高级句型如定语从句，强调句等让文章不显得那么平淡，而有文采。

【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语be impressed by对。。印象深刻；attract one’s attention吸引。。注意力；take an active part in积极参加；came to a conclusion得出结论；The professor began the class with an amusing English story, which attracted the attention of all the students at once这个句子which引导非限制性定语从句；From his lesson, students came to a conclusion that it is not difficult to learn English if they various ways这个句子that引导conclusion的同位语从句；

考点： 提纲类作文

4．Good morning, everyone! It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school.

In the coming three years, your school life will be challenging. First, you should learn to learn efficiently. Personally, I used to try effective methods to achieve my academic goals. Developing a good habit is also of importance. It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons, get actively involved in class, and review what had been taught after class. In addition, you should learn how to get along well with others. In school, I respected teachers and was friendly to classmates.

Finally, you should take part in sports and outdoor activities frequently. They were really helpful to build up my body and enrich my school life.

No pains, no gains. I am sure that with great efforts, you will enjoy a colorful and fruitful life here.

Thank you!

【分析】这篇书面表达属于演讲稿写作。

【详解】这篇书面表达给予了提纲，属于半自由半开放类。与学生实际生活十分贴切，让学生有话可说，但要得高分必须有深度的思想以及就话题语言灵活运用能力，即要能在清晰的框架内在语言和内容方面写出自己的特色。

写作时需注意下列几点：

1. 应该使用第一人称。全文以现在以及将来范畴的时态为主，当然不排斥用过去时态。按提纲提示清晰分段，不能缺少要点（学会学习：方法，习惯等；学会做人：真诚；友善；学会其他）。

注意语言逻辑性和思维想象力。多用些语际衔接性词语（first of all ，besides ，on the one hand 等）。

要学会学习，要有符合自己的方法，要养成良好的学习习惯，要有个正确的学习态度等；要学会做人，要与人和善，要和睦相处，要正气真诚等；当然还要学会锻炼，学会娱乐，学会自我管理等。然后，根据要点思考可用哪些表达法：the best way of .../ an acceptable thing is .../get into a habit of .../be active in..../go over.../behave well/it is kind of .../be involved in...等；根据提纲，连成句子，清晰分段。可用firstly.../in addition.../last but not the least等。最后，虽然试卷给出了演讲开头，但要在演讲稿结尾总结或展望未来或表决心。

【点睛】重点词汇语句：Challenging挑战；used to过去时常；In addition 另外；build up 逐步建立；Develop a good habit养成良好的习惯；get actively 积极；involved in 参与； No pains no gains.不劳无获；get along well with ... 与…相处融洽；   

高级句型 ：

Developing a good habit is also of importance. （动名词短语作主语）

...review what had been taught after class. （宾语从句）

I am sure that with great efforts, you will... （宾语从句）...

5．NOTICE

It has been decided that the spring sports meeting will be held next Saturday on the school playground. All the students should remember to take a chair to the school playground to watch the game. Meanwhile, each class should choose at least 5 students as athletes to take part in the event and another five students to join in the cheering squad. Members of the school sports team can come to the school hall this Saturday afternoon, as professional sportsmen and coaches will come to give them special training. Please be there on time.

Students’ Union

March 22, 2016

【详解】试题分析：考查提纲类作文。因为学校决定举办春季运动会，并邀请专业运动员和教练来校进行赛前培训。本文要求考生以李华的身份写一则英文通知。所以要使用一般现在时和第三人称为主。要点：1. 运动会于下周六在操场举行；2. 所有同学自备座椅观看比赛；3. 每班选派5名以上运动员及5名拉拉队成员；4. 本周六在校礼堂举行赛前培训。提纲类短文千万不能逐句翻译，要使用合适的串联词把各要点串联成有序的整体。另外尽量使用高级词汇和句型，如定语从句、倒装句等；另外一定要注意通知的格式和应该使用的过渡词语。

【名师点睛】本篇范文很好地完成了文字提示部分要求完成的所有任务，全文没有中国式英语的思维，选词造句合理。时态以及人称准确无误，另外文章格式运用正确，通知的特殊串联词句使用正确。文章中句式丰富，陈述句、被动句和祈使句交替使用，句式富有变化。另外文章中还使用了较多的串联成分，如meanwhile等；同时文章中的词汇词组使用较多，这些写作技巧的运用有效地提高了文章的档次，增加了获得高分的可能性。

考点：考查提纲类作文

6．On Wednesday of this Cultural & Art week, we had the honor of inviting Professor Hudson, a foreign teacher from Sichuan University, to give an English lesson to the students of Grade 3. All the students were deeply impressed by this unforgettable English lesson.

The professor began the class with an amusing English story, which attracted the attention of all the students at once. He spoke slowly and clearly so that students could follow him well. Greatly inspired, most of the students took an active part in his class. After class, many students interviewed sang high praise for his teaching. They said never before had they experienced so interesting a class.

From his lesson, students came to a conclusion that it is not so difficult to learn English if they try various ways.

【详解】试题分析：本篇书面表达属于新闻报道类，根据提示信息来介绍四川大学外籍教师Hudson教授给你们上了一节英语课。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。本文写作时可以按照他上课的情况和同学的反应进行介绍。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般过去时。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如插入语a foreign teacher from Sichuan University。定语从句which attracted the attention of all the students at once。还有现在分词Greatly inspired, most of the students took an active part in his class。倒装句They said never before had they experienced so interesting a class。此外，文章还使用了大量短语deeply impressed by 、unforgettable English lesson、 took an active part in 、sang high praise、came to a conclusion等。使语言更加连贯。

考点：考查新闻报道类作文

7．Dear Jane,

Congratulations on your passing all the exams. I am delighted that you have really made great progress in your two years of studying in China. There is no doubt that all you have gained is the result of your hard work. We are proud of you and we all appreciate your help with our English. We’ll always remember the wonderful time we spent together.

It’s a pity that you have to go back soon! So a farewell party for you will be held in Room302 in the Sun Club this Saturday evening. I wonder if you could come by 6:00 p.m. By the way, you may take Bus No.332 in front of your hotel and it will take you directly to the club. I wish you success and fulfillment in the years ahead!

Yours Sincerely,

Li Hua

【详解】试题分析：题目要求给朋友Jane写一封邮件，邀请Jane参加为她举办的欢送会。写作要点包括：祝贺Jane顺利通过考试；感谢Jane帮助你们学英语；晚会的时间和地点等。词数在100词左右，注意开头和结尾不计入总词数；不要出现标点和拼写错误，尽量保持卷面整洁、字体美观；注意行文的连贯性。

亮点说明：

范文涵盖了所有的要点，进行了适当的拓展，并注意语句的连贯性；范文还使用了宾语从句、定语从句、固定句型等语法知识，具备较强的语言运用能力。

语法方面：宾语从句①that you have really made great progress in your two years of studying in China，②if you could come by 6:00 p.m.；固定句型There is no doubt that all you have gained is...；定语从句we spent together；主语从句It’s a pity that you have to go back soon!等，显示了较强的语法功底，也使作文句式变得多样；

短语和搭配方面：范文使用了be proud of, help with, by the way, in front of, wish sb sth等短语和搭配，使作文的内容变得充实。

考点：书信类作文

8．Dear Mrs. Green,

I’m Li Jin, Chairman of Student Union. With the approaching of New Year, the art festival will be hosted in our school. Knowing you are greatly interested in our Chinese culture, I would like to invite you to come to our festival.

Firstly, the details of the activity are as follows. The festival is scheduled to be held at the eve of the New Year from 5pm to 7pm in our school hall. The aim of the activity is to inspire students to show their talents. Secondly, anyone is welcome to perform for audience. The performance can range from singing, dancing and Chinese Kongfu to crosstalks. We all know you do really well in singing. Therefore, we hope you can perform with us together.

In conclusion, I do believe the activity will be a great success and hope you can accept my invitation. Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours sincerely，

Li Jin

【分析】本文是一篇提纲类书面表达，要求考生把自己当成李津，新年临近了，你校将举行一年一度的艺术节。请代表你们学校邀请外籍教师Mrs. Green 来参加活动，根据提示给她写一封邀请信。文章框架基本给出，考生要简要介绍艺术节的有关信息并邀请对方参加，有一定难度。

【详解】第1步：审题。根据文字提示可知本文是一封邀请信，要求考生给外籍教师Mrs. Green写信，介绍艺术节的有关信息并邀请对方参加。文章以一般现在时和第三人称为主。

第2步：组织要点。1. 简要介绍艺术节的时间、地点、内容、目的：元月1日下午5点至7点在学习礼堂举行，旨在于激励学生展示才能；活动节目包括唱歌、跳舞、武术及相声等。2. 希望Mrs. Green 可以表演节目；3. 祝愿：祝愿活动取得成功并希望对方能够接受邀请。

第3步：根据提示及关键词组进行遣词造句，关键词为be hosted in our school、invite you to come to our festival、be held at the eve of the New Year from 5pm to 7pm 、inspire students to show their talents、singing, dancing and Chinese Kongfu to crosstalks、perform together.写作时注意邀请信的格式和惯用语。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【点睛】本篇范文结构完美，条理清晰。范文时态和人称运用准确，涵盖了文字提示要求的所有要点，且有适当的个人发挥。考生运用了多样式的句型结构，整篇文章富有变化并不死板。使用了较多的高级词汇和短语结构，如with the approaching of、as follows、be scheduled to、inspire students to、range from等；尽量运用了丰富的句式，如分词做状语Knowing you are greatly interested in our Chinese culture,….；强调句I do believe the activity will be a great success and hope you can accept my invitation.同时文章还运用了一些串联成分，如firstly、secondly、therefore、in conclusion等，这些串联词让各个要点更紧密地结合在一起。以上写作技巧的运用提升了文章的层次，显示了考生具有很强的驾驭语言的能力。

9．Dear Mr. Green,

I came to your office to visit you but you happened to be out. What I’d like to talk to you is as follows:

In order to improve students’ spoken English, the Students’ Union will hold an English Speaking Competition at 4:00 p.m. next Tuesday in the School Lecture Hall. We sincerely invite you to be a judge if it is convenient for you. You are expected to ask contestants a few questions based on their speeches and make some comments on their performance.

What’s more, would you please spare some time to help the two winners in this competition to prepare for the competition on city level?

I would appreciate it if you could accept our invitation. Your early reply is highly thought of.

Yours,

Li Jin

【分析】本文书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封短信。

【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本文是一封短信：假如你是晨光中学的学生会主席李津，你校学生会将于下周二下午四点在学校报告厅举行英语口语大赛，你去拜访校国际部外教 Mr. Green，恰巧他外出，请根据以下要点给他 留一封短信。1. 邀请 Mr. Green 做评委，告知比赛时间、地点；2. 告知评委的工作内容(如就选手的发言提问并点评等)；3. 询问赛后他是否有时间辅导前两名选手参加市级比赛。

第2步：根据写作要求确定关键词，如：happened to be out（碰巧到外面去）；In order to improve students’ spoken English（为了提高英语口语）；hold an English Speaking Competition（举行一次英语演讲比赛）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态语态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【点睛】本文是一封短信，内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。同时文中使用高级句子。What I’d like to talk to you is as follows:句中what引导主语从句；In order to improve students’ spoken English, the Students’ Union will hold an English Speaking Competition at 4:00 p.m. next Tuesday in the School Lecture Hall.动词不定式作目的状语；We sincerely invite you to be a judge if it is convenient for you.句中使用if引导的的条件状语从句；You are expected to ask contestants a few questions based on their speeches and make some comments on their performance.动词不定式作后置定语。

10．Dear Peter,

Will you be available this weekend? In order to let us learn something about Chinese traditional agriculture and enhance the awareness of environmental protection, our school is going to hold a summer camp on our school’s farm.

We will gather at the school gate at 8:00 a.m. and go there on foot. When we arrive there, we will meet the farmers who will introduce Chinese traditional planting. Then we will be given a small piece of land to experience Chinese traditional planting and manament. Finally, we will enjoy the pleasure of picking our favorite fruit and vegetables.

Do remember to wear comfortable clothes and shoes. And you’d better wear a hat in case you get burnt. Besides, wherever you go and whatever you do, keep safety in your mind.

If you are free and want to go, please let me know as soon as possible.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是晨光中学学生李华，你们学校有一个生态农场，种植各种蔬菜和果树。为弘扬中国传统农业和提升环保意识，你校打算召开一个夏令营。请你给朋友Peter 写信邀请他参加这个活动。

【详解】1.词汇积累

举行：hold→host

传统的：traditional→conventional

有空的：free→available

此外：besides→in addition

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Finally, we will enjoy the pleasure of picking our favorite fruit and vegetables.

拓展句：Finally, we will enjoy picking our favorite fruit and vegetables, which will be great fun.

【点睛】[高分句型1] In order to let us learn something about Chinese traditional agriculture and enhance the awareness of environmental protection, our school is going to hold a summer camp on our school’s farm. (运用了不定式作目的状语)

[高分句型2] If you are free and want to go, please let me know as soon as possible. (运用了if引导条件状语从句)