四川高考英语写作分类训练：建议信

这是一份四川高考英语写作分类训练：建议信，共16页。
建议信1．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter写信询问你是否觉得上了高中时间很紧，并问你是怎样进行时间管理的。请用英语写封回信，内容如下：1.有同样感觉；2.分享自己的做法。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．假设你是新华中学的学生李华，班里从外地转来一名同学李明，他一时无法融入新的班集体中，感到很苦恼。请根据下列要点用英语给他写封信：1. 欢迎他的到来；2. 帮他分析原因（至少两点）；3. 给他提出建议（至少一条）；4. 表达你愿意帮助他的想法。注意：词数不少于80。Dear Li Ming,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua3．假设你是李华，你的外教 Chris想在暑假期间来中国旅游，发邮件请你推荐旅游线路。请给他回封邮件，内容包括：1. 推荐线路；2. 推荐理由(历史，文化等角度)；3. 表达祝愿。注意：1.词数100词左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．假设你是李华，你的英国笔友David来信说在汉语学习上遇到了困难，感到苦恼，为此写信向你求助。请根据以下信息，用英语给他回信。要点包括：表示安慰；提出建议；表达期望。注意：1. 100词左右；2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计人词数；3. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear David. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________YoursLiHua5．假设你是李华，你的同学李明写信告诉你他的英语成绩很差，感觉很苦恼。请你根据以下要点提示给他回信，并提出建议。内容要点包括：(1)学英语的重要性；(2)合理化的建议。注意：(1)词数80左右;(2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;(3)开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。Dear Li Ming,I’m sorry to know that you are having trouble in learning English.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua6．假设你是某高中学生李华，你了解到身边同学有情绪状态不佳的情况，请根据以下提示写一篇短文，表达自己的想法，内容包括：1. 好心情的重要性；2. 不良情绪产生的原因；3. 如何调整。注意：1. 词数120；2. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。Dear classmates,We’ve all experienced positive and negative moods._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours, Li Hua7．假如你是李华，上周末去某个岛上游玩,看见很多可爱的动物，听岛上的一位老人说，现在动物的数量日渐减少，如果不采取措施，有些动物可能会灭绝。回来后，你给校报写信，就保护野生动物提出一些建议。注意：(1) 词数 100 左右；(2) 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总次数。Dear Sir/Madam,Animals are our friends, which are very important to our world.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua8．假定你是学生李华，你的英国朋友Tom在汉语水平考试（简称HSK）中成绩不理想，写信求助。请根据以下要点回信：1. 表示安慰；2. 提出建议；3. 给予鼓励。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Tom,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua9．假如你是李华，你的美国笔友David来信说他在汉语口语学习方面感到迷茫，请你给他回信，内容包括：1. 表示安慰；2. 分析原因并给出建议。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear David,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________10．假定你是李华，收到初中同学Chris的来信，告诉你进入高中后，他无法适应高中英语课，在英语学习上有些困难，以至于跟不上其他同学，感到非常着急。请你给他写一封英文电子邮件，给他提些实用的建议。参考词汇：adapt to 适应注意：1.字数100字左右；2.作文开头已为你写好，不计入词数；3.可适当添加细节，使行文连贯。 Dear Chris,Receiving your letter, I am very delighted that you believe in me. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua            1．Dear Peter,Learning that you have trouble in managing your time effectively, I feel the same way as you. And I’m writing to give you some useful suggestions.Effective time management can help reduce your stress and boost your performance. The first thing you need to do is to plan ahead by making a daily to-do list. Being organized also helps a lot when you prepare for your lessons and activities. Most importantly, you must learn to prioritize all your tasks and stick to the goals you have set.I hope you’ll find my suggestions practical and helpful.Yours,Li Hua【导语】本文是一篇应用文写作。假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter写信询问你是否觉得上了高中时间很紧，并问你是怎样进行时间管理的。【详解】1. 词汇积累知道：learning→know问题：trouble→problem建议：suggestion→advice有用的：helpful→beneficial2. 句式拓展同义句转换原句：Effective time management can help reduce your stress and boost your performance.拓展句：Not only can effective time management help reduce your stress, but also boost your performance.【点睛】[高分句型1] Learning that you have trouble in managing your time effectively, I feel the same way as you.(that引导的宾语从句)[高分句型2]The first thing you need to do is to plan ahead by making a daily to-do list. (省略关系词的定语从句)2．参考范文Dear Li Ming,My name is Li Hua, one of your classmates. Welcome to this new class. I’m writing this letter to tell you something about it.It is normal that you feel uncomfortable now because you’ve just entered a new environment where teachers and classmates are new to you. Another reason why you feel uneasy could be that you still need some time to adapt to the new class and maybe you’re a little shy to communicate with others. In my opinion, you can talk with people around you, and be brave to ask them questions that you don’t know.Of course, you can always turn to me for help whenever you need it. I’m sure that you will get used to this new place soon.Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求考生给一时无法融入新环境的转学生写信，对他的到来表示欢迎，帮助他分析苦恼的原因，并给他提出解决苦恼的建议，最后表达自己愿意提供帮助的想法。【详解】1. 词汇积累正常的：normal→common, typical因为：because→since, as, for, owing to the fact that适应：adapt to→accommodate to, adjust to, get used to与……交流：communicate with→contact, keep in touch with在我看来：in my opinion→from my perspective, in my view, as far as I’m concerned2. 句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Welcome to this new class. I’m writing this letter to tell you something about it.拓展句：Welcome to this new class, about which I’m writing this letter to tell you something.【点睛】【高分句型1】It is normal that you feel uncomfortable now because you’ve just entered a new environment where teachers and classmates are new to you.（运用了that引导的主语从句、because引导的原因状语从句、where引导的定语从句）【高分句型2】Another reason why you feel uneasy could be that you still need some time to adapt to the new class and maybe you’re a little shy to communicate with others.（运用了why引导的定语从句、that引导的表语从句）【高分句型3】Of course, you can always turn to me for help whenever you need it.（运用了whenever引导的让步状语从句）3．Dear Chris,How is it going? Knowing that you are to pay a visit to China this summer vacation, I’m more than willing to suggest an ideal travel route.It is strongly recommended that you consider travelling along the Chinese section of Silk Road. With a history of centuries, it enjoys a reputation of the oldest trade road in China. Today, the legacy of the Silk Road can still be seen in the cultural heritage, art, and architecture of the cities along the way. You can appreciate beautiful wall paintings in DunHuang, which represents traditional Chinese culture and the wisdom of ancient people. Besides, if you want to experience an adventure in the desert, riding a camel will definitely be the best choice. XinJiang can be the last stop of your trip. It is blessed with spectacular landscape and the friendly and gentle local people will welcome you to share their hometown.I sincerely hope that you can enjoy your journey to the fullest. Looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇建议信，要求考生给外教 Chris回一封信，向它介绍暑假期间来中国旅游的旅游线路。【详解】1.词汇积累考虑：consider→ take…into consideration漂亮的：beautiful → splendid友好的：friendly→ hospitable建议：suggest→ propose2.句式拓展主动句变被动句原句：You can appreciate beautiful wall paintings in DunHuang, which represents traditional Chinese culture and the wisdom of ancient people.拓展句：Beautiful wall paintings, which represents traditional Chinese culture and the wisdom of ancient people, can be appreciated in DunHuang.【点睛】【高分句型1】Knowing that you are to pay a visit to China this summer vacation, I’m more than willing to suggest an ideal travel route.（现在分词短语作状语）【高分句型2】You can appreciate beautiful wall paintings in DunHuang, which represents traditional Chinese culture and the wisdom of ancient people.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）4．Dear David,Having received your letter, I feel sorry to know that you have difficulty in learning Chinese. Don’t worry. I’m writing to offer you some suggestions.First of all, you’d better watch or listen to some Chinese programs, so that you can improve your Chinese speaking and listening. Additionally, I suggest that you should read as much as possible, which will not only contribute to building up your vocabulary in Chinese but also help to better your writing skills. Last but not least, it would be a good idea to keep a diary, an effective way to improve your Chinese writing.I hope you will find these suggestions useful and make progress soon. Best wishes to you.Yours,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友David回信，给他一些汉语学习的建议。【详解】1.词汇积累建议：suggestion →advice首先：first of all →to begin with帮助：help →assist/aid方法：way →approach2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Last but not least, it would be a good idea to keep a diary, an effective way to improve your Chinese writing.拓展句：Last but not least, your Chinese writing will gradually improve if you keep a diary in Chinese.【点睛】【高分句型1】Having received your letter, I feel sorry to know that you have difficulty in learning Chinese.（运用了现在分词作状语和that引导的宾语从句）【高分句型2】Additionally, I suggest that you should read as much as possible, which will not only contribute to building up your vocabulary in Chinese but also help to better your writing skills.（运用了虚拟语气和which引导的非限制性定语从句）5．Dear Li Ming,I’m sorry to know that you are having trouble in learning English.As we all know, English is very important. We can communicate with foreigners all over the world if we learn English well.Here are some tips on how to learn English well. Firstly, you should listen to your English teacher carefully in class, take notes and finish homework. Secondly, you should spare no effort to read interesting English news, which can help you increase the interest in English. Finally, it would be a good idea if you try to communicate with your classmates in English. Only in this way can you learn English well. I believe you can succeed.Yours,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是李华，你的同学李明写信告诉你他的英语成绩很差，感觉很苦恼。请你根据以下要点提示给他回信，并提出建议。【详解】1.词汇积累建议：tip→advice成功：succeed→make it重要的：important→vital记笔记：take notes→make notes2.句式拓展同义句转换原句：As we all know, English is very important. We can communicate with foreigners all over the world if we learn English well.拓展句：As we all know, English is very important because we can communicate with foreigners all over the world if we learn English well.【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m sorry to know that you are having trouble in learning English. (运用了that引导宾语从句)[高分句型2] We can communicate with foreigners all over the world if we learn English well. (运用了if引导条件状语从句)6．Dear classmates,We’ve all experienced positive and negative moods. The emotions we feel play an important role in how we think and behave. For one thing, people who are often in a positive mood in their everyday life tend to be happier, healthier and get along better with others. For another, a bad mood can ruin your day, as well as the day of the people around you.So, what causes a bad mood? There are a variety of reasons for them. For example, we may get into a bad mood because of failing an exam. We may feel down after receiving some bad news or quarreling with our parents or friends. At the same time, too much pressure from work can also makes us unhappy.However, there are many things we can do to turn our bad mood into a good one. As far as I’m concerned, exercise is one of the keys to get rid of a bad mood. Meanwhile, the simple act of sharing time with others is a great way to release stress and anxiety. So the next time you’re feeling blue, call up a friend or visit a neighbor.Yours, Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假设你是某高中学生李华，你了解到身边同学有情绪状态不佳的情况，请根据以下提示写一篇短文，表达自己的想法。【详解】1.词汇积累重要的：important→significant各种各样的：a variety of→various摆脱：get rid of→cast off就个人而言：As far as I’m concerned=Personally speaking2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：For example, we may get into a bad mood because of failing an exam.拓展句：For example, we may get into a bad mood, because we fail an exam.【点睛】[高分句型1] For one thing, people who are often in a positive mood in their everyday life tend to be happier, healthier and get along better with others.(运用了who引导的限制性定语从句)[高分句型2] So the next time you’re feeling blue, call up a friend or visit a neighbor.(运用了the next time引导的时间状语从句)7．Dear Sir/Madam,Animals are our friends, which are very important to our world. I’m writing to express my opinion on how to protect the animals on the island I visited last weekend. The animals there are lovely, but it’s said that the number of them is decreasing year by year. If measures aren’t taken, they will be in danger of extinction.As far as I’m concerned, laws concerning animal protection should be made to punish those illegal hunters. Besides, it is advisable to set up natural reserves or refuges. There is no doubt that animals living in safe environments are more likely to survive and reproduce. What’s more, something should be done to raise people’s awareness of protecting animals.To sum up, protecting animals is of great urgency and it is vital for us to take steps to protect them. Please help the poor animals. I am sure that they will survive with your help.Yours,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给校报写信，就保护野生动物提出一些建议。【详解】1.词汇积累观点：opinion→point of view提高：raise→promote 参观：visit→pay a visit to重要的：vital→important2.句式拓展同义句转换原句：If measures aren’t taken, they will be in danger of extinction.拓展句：If measures that can protect animals aren’t taken, they will be in danger of extinction.【点睛】[高分句型1] Animals are our friends, which are very important to our world. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2] There is no doubt that animals living in safe environments are more likely to survive and reproduce.(运用了that引导同位语从句)8．Dear Tom,I am terribly sorry to hear that you failed to pass HSK. Hopefully, the unexpected failure won’t let you down, for I have still been amazed by the excellent Chinese you spoke when we first met. As we all know, language learning is never an easy task but needs constant efforts and patience. In my opinion, it’s a great way to pay close attention to the formal use of Chinese words and expressions by reading newspapers and magazines, which really counts. Meanwhile, using some Chinese-learning mobile apps to study as much as possible benefits you well. More importantly, you should learn from the mistakes that you have made before. If so, I’m sure you’ll make rapid progress and pass HSK soon.Wish you good luck! Yours,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给因在汉语水平考试中成绩不理想而写信求助的英国朋友Tom写回信表示安慰，给出学习汉语的建议，并给予鼓励。【详解】1.词汇积累遗憾的：sorry → regretful依我看来：in my opinion → from my point of view取得迅速的进步：make rapid progress → progress quickly运用：use → utilize2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Meanwhile, using some Chinese-learning mobile apps to study as much as possible benefits you well.拓展句：Meanwhile, if you use some Chinese-learning mobile apps to study as much as possible, it will benefit you well.【点睛】【高分句型1】In my opinion, it’s a great way to pay close attention to the formal use of Chinese words and expressions by reading newspapers and magazines, which really counts（运用了it作形式主语，动词不定式做真正的主语，动名词作介词的宾语，which引导的非限制性定语从句）【高分句型2】More importantly, you should learn from the mistakes that you have made before.（运用了that引导的限制性定语从句）9．Dear David,So worried am I to know that you are confused about spoken Chinese learning. I am writing to provide you with constructive advice.It is universally acknowledged that Chinese is one of the most complex languages in the world while spoken Chinese is rather difficult for its pronunciation. Were I you, I would join a Chinese club which helps to overcome the barrier to language practicing and to promote my skills in making a conversation. It is also strongly recommended that you should watch a stand-up comedy which benefits language learning and can also relieve your stress from numerous pressure.Chinese serves as a fabulous language which is of great benefit. I sincerely hope you can make great progress in spoken Chinese.Yours, Li HuaDear David,I’m terribly sorry to hear that you have trouble in learning spoken Chinese . So worried am I that I’m writing in an attempt to give you some suggestions.It’s widely acknowledged that Chinese is the most difficult language to learn. And for the reason that you are a native British, there are some problems in your learning. In my opinion, not only do you need to be more determined, but also you are supposed to do some beneficial things to improve your spoken skills, such as watching Chinese movies, communicating with Chinese people and so on. You should believe in yourself. I am firmly convinced that where there is a will, there is a way.I hold the unswerving belief that you will make great progress.  Yours,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假如你是李华，你的美国笔友 David 来信说他在汉语口语学习方面感到迷茫，请你给他回信，内容包括：1. 表示安慰；2. 分析原因并给出建议。【详解】1.词汇积累困惑的：confused→bemused建议：advice→suggestion克服：overcome→conquer有益的：beneficial=helpful2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：I am writing to provide you with constructive advice.拓展句：I am writing to provide you with constructive advice, which will be useful.【点睛】[高分句型1] So worried am I to know that you are confused about spoken Chinese learning. (运用了倒装句型及that引导的宾语从句) [高分句型2] It is universally acknowledged that Chinese is one of the most complex languages in the world while spoken Chinese is rather difficult for its pronunciation.(运用了that引导的主语从句，while引导时间状语从句)[高分句型3] Were I you, I would join a Chinese club which helps to overcome the barrier to language practicing and to promote my skills in making a conversation.(运用了状语从句的省略句、倒装结构、虚拟语气及which引导的限制性定语从句)10．Dear Chris,Receiving your letter, I am very delighted that you believe in me. I have known you have some difficulty in learning English. Don’t worry about it. I think the following may be of help to you. Firstly, preview the lessons before class, and you’d better listen to the teacher carefully and take notes in class. Secondly, you can ask your English teacher for advice on how to study it in high school. Communicating with your classmates to get some advice is also helpful. Finally, confidence is of great importance, too.Nothing is difficult if you put your heart into it. I hope you will make progress in it.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给对于在学习高中英语方面有些困难的初中同学Chris写一封电子邮件, 给他提些实用的建议。【详解】1.词汇积累高兴的：delighted →glad有困难：have some difficulty in →have trouble in有帮助的：be of help →be helpful建议：advice →suggestion2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Communicating with your classmates to get some advice is also helpful.拓展句：Communicate with your classmates to get some advice, which is also helpful.【点睛】[高分句型1] Receiving your letter, I am very delighted that you believe in me.(运用了现在分词作状语和that引导的宾语从句)[高分句型2] Nothing is difficult if you put your heart into it.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句)