甘肃高考英语写作分类训练：建议信

这是一份甘肃高考英语写作分类训练：建议信，共16页。试卷主要包含了假如你是大学一年级新生李华等内容，欢迎下载使用。
建议信1．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter即将完成学业，不久前来信就是否到中国工作询问你的意见．请根据以下提示回一封电子邮件：（1）建议他来中国；（2）阐述你的理由（就业机会多、所学专业受欢迎、不同的文化体验等）；（3）承诺可提供帮助．参考词汇：专业 major注意：（1）词数100词左右；（2）文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；（3）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．Dear Peter，I'm very glad to have received the letter you sent me last week．____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．假如你是李华，下个月你市将举办青少年长跑运动会，你想邀请你的好友Peter 和你一起报名参加，请给他写信，内容包括：1.此次运动会的时间、地点，主题等；2.提高长跑能力的建议。注意：1. 词数100左右。 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：a long-distance running race  长跑比赛____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．假如你是李华，你的留学生朋友Tom以前成绩优秀，但由于骄傲和懒惰，最近他的成绩一落千丈。就此请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：1.进行安慰；2.给出劝告(不要骄傲，不忘初心)；3.具体建议(努力复习，制定学习计划)。注意：1.词数120左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．假如你是某中学的学生李华，请你给校委员会写一封信，就开办艺术画廊给出自己的建议及理由，内容包括：1．建议开办一个校园艺术画廊，展示在校学生自己的作品；2．画廊可以给学生提供一个展示自我的平台，开阔学生的视野、传播校园文化。注意：1．词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；平台：platformDear Committee members，I wish to make a suggestion that we should start a school art gallery,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours faithfully,Li Hua5．假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Peter向你提及他想退学去做美妆博主（beauty blogger）。你很震惊并表现出强烈的不理解，这让Peter很难过。请根据以下要点，给Peter写一封邮件：1. 表达歉意；2. 表示尊重和支持；3. 建议完成学业。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。6．假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Tom给你来信说寒假就要到了，但他不知道在寒假期间做些什么有意义的事，希望你给予建议。请你根据以下要点给Tom回信：寒假建议：1.合理休息，补习差科；2．结交新朋友，发现新事物等；3．游览参观，看书等开阔眼界。注意：词数100左右(开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数)Dear Tom，From your letter I know that your winter vacation is coming._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，Li Hua7．假定你是张华，你的美国中学生朋友彼得希望成为2022年北京冬奥会志愿者，他向你写信询问冬奥会相关情况，并求助怎样学好汉语。请给他回信，要点如下:1.收到来信，获悉求助；2.冬奥盛会，北京张家口合办；3.学好汉语的建议。注意:1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯.3. 参考词Winter Olympic Games(冬奥会) . host(举办)volunteer (志愿者)4. 信头尾已给，不计入总词数。Dear Peter， ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________YoursZhanghua8．假设你是李华，你的英国朋友Emily来信说她非常喜欢中国的民族舞，并打算最近来中国学习民族舞，想请你帮她推荐一位舞蹈老师。请你根据以下要点给她写一封信，推荐一位老师。要点：1. 介绍你所推荐的老师；2. 推荐该老师的原因；3. 祝愿她拜师成功。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Emily,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua9．假如你是大学一年级新生李华。开学之初，你的英语老师Ms Li希望了解每位同学的英语学习情况，并征求教学建议。请按以下要点用英语给她写一封信。1. 对英语学习的认识；2. 自己目前的英语水平；3. 自己英语学习存在的主要问题；4. 对英语教学的两点建议。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 信的开头和结尾已给出。Dear Ms Li,I’m very happy to have you as our English teacher.    Thank you!Li Hua10．假如你是李华，最近收到了你的美国朋友Jenny的来信。她在信中说，由于刚进入高中，还不能适应新环境，不知道如何去结交新朋友，因而情绪低落。请你给她回信，内容如下：1．向Jenny表示问候和安慰(你的同学和你面临同样的问题，所以不必过于担心)；2．针对她的问题提出以下建议：(1)放学后邀请同学一起参加活动，这有助于你们互相更好地了解；(2)你的同学遇到麻烦时，你去帮助他们；(3)你遇到困难时向同学求助。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。参考词汇：参加take part inDear Jenny，I am really sorry to hear that you feel bad after entering the high school.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes，Li Hua                   1．Dear PeterI’m very glad to have received the letter you sent me last week. I have been thinking about the question you asked me from my point of view, you can choose to come to China after finishing your studies. For one reason, China’s development over the past 30 years offers plenty of job opportunities for the young. What’s more, what you are studying is badly needed in China nowadays. In fact, many big companies in our city are hoping to hire people like you.For another reason, China is a county with such different cultures and traditions from the West that many foreigners enjoy living and working here. Why not come and join them? I’m sure you’ll adapt to the environment quickly. If you come, I will do what I can to help you. So what are you waiting for?Best wishes.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，为朋友是否到中国工作提出建议。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。结构：总分法   总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1.表达收到邮件的心情      2.就Peter的问题提出自己的建议以及原因第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）point of view; for one reason; what’s more; in fact; for another reason; enjoy doing; adapt to第三步：连词成句I’m very glad to have received the letter you sent me last week.You can choose to come to China after finishing your studies.China’s development over the past 30 years offers plenty of job opportunities for the young.What you are studying is badly needed in China.China is a county with such different cultures and traditions from the West that many foreigners enjoy living and working here.You’ll adapt to the environment quickly.I will do what I can to help you.Best wishes.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, For one reason, For another reason2.表并列补充关系：What’s more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including, In fact3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that… 4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，第五步：润色修改【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：China is a county with such different cultures and traditions from the West that many foreigners enjoy living and working here.这句话运用了such…that引导结果状语从句，使用了一些固定词组，如different from ; enjoy doing等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。2．Dear Peter,I’d like to tell you a piece of good news. Next month, our city will hold a long-distance running race that is intended for teenagers. The theme of this event is “loving sports and making yourself heathier and stronger”. Some of my schoolmates and I are eager to participate in the event. I hope that you can join us. The race will be held in the City Stadium near our school. We can go running there after school or on weekends to build ourselves up. If you are interested in the event and want to learn more about it, please contact me in time.Best wishes!Yours ,Li Hua【分析】这是一篇应用文，要求写一封信。【详解】第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，1.此次运动会的时间、地点，主题等；2.提高长跑能力的建议。第二，人称以第三人称为主，兼用第一和第二人称。第三，时态为一般现在时和一般将来时。第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段，邀请你的好友Peter 和你一起报名参加并告知此次运动会的时间、地点，主题等；第二段，提高长跑能力的建议，并说明如果Peter对此感兴趣，可以联系你。 第三段，表达祝愿。第三步：确定关键词汇和短语:  hold a long-distance running race，be intended for，loving sports and making yourself heathier and stronger，be eager to do sth , participate in ,near our school, build sb up, be interested in。第四步：确定较为高级的句子:that引导的定语从句Next month, our city will hold a long-distance running race that is intended for teenagers. that引导的宾语从句I hope that you can join us. if 引导的条件状语从句If you are interested in the event and want to learn more about it, please contact me in time。第五步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。【点睛】文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式:that引导的定语从句Next month, our city will hold a long-distance running race that is intended for teenagers. That引导的宾语从句I hope that you can join us. if 引导的条件状语从句If you are interested in the event and want to learn more about it, please contact me in time。高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。3．Dear Tom,I feel sorry to know your grades have been slipping down because of you pride and laziness. But it’s not time for you to feel depressed. I believe you can find yourself back by taking action.In my opinion, you shouldn’t be proud and just keep working hard. Never forget why you started, and your mission can be accomplished. Now let me give you some advice. First of all, you should review the content that you have missed studying recently. In addition, it’s necessary for you to make a proper study plan which you can keep up.I hope you could feel better and get higher grades. Best wishes!【分析】这是一篇应用文写作。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封电子邮件：假如你是李华，你的留学生朋友Tom以前成绩优秀，但由于骄傲和懒惰，最近他的成绩一落千丈。就此请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：1.进行安慰；2.给出劝告(不要骄傲，不忘初心)；3.具体建议(努力复习，制定学习计划)。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：slip down（下滑）；because of（因为）；pride and laziness（骄傲和懒惰）；mission（任务）；review the content（复习内容）；keep up（保持；不落后）等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。同时文中使用高级句子。如I feel sorry to know your grades have been slipping down because of you pride and laziness.和I believe you can find yourself back by taking action.句中使用了宾语从句；First of all, you should review the content that you have missed studying recently.和it’s necessary for you to make a proper study plan which you can keep up.句中运用了定语从句。4．Dear Committee members，I wish to make a suggestion that we should start a school art gallery, which I think will appeal to a number of students in our school.There are many students who have a preference for painting in our school. The school art gallery can provide these students with a very good platform to display their own paintings, and through the art gallery, other students may not only get a chance to admire the artistic achievements but also can widen their knowledge, at the same time , our campus culture can be spread .What a good thing it is !If you are to offer such an opportunity to the students who are fond of art, I believe the art exhibition will work well.I would appreciate it if you can take my suggestion into account.Yours faithfully，Li Hua【分析】这是一篇应用文写作。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封信；假如你是某中学的学生李华，请你给校委员会写一封信，就开办艺术画廊给出自己的建议及理由，内容包括：1．建议开办一个校园艺术画廊，展示在校学生自己的作品；2．画廊可以给学生提供一个展示自我的平台，开阔学生的视野、传播校园文化。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：make a suggestion（提出建议），appeal to（吸引），a number of（许多），platform（平台）；admire the artistic achievements（欣赏艺术作品）；widen their knowledge（拓宽知识）等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如I wish to make a suggestion that we should start a school art gallery, which I think will appeal to a number of students in our school.运用了非限定性定语从句；other students may not only get a chance to admire the artistic achievements but also can widen their knowledge运用了not only…but also…结构引导并列结构。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。5．Dear fellow students,Recently I have found many of us students spend too much time sending short messages or playing games on cell phones, which has negative effects on our studies and also does harm to our eyes. Worse still, we have little time to communicate with our parents and friends. Nor do we have time for physical exercise.What shall we do to improve the situation? All of us should be fully aware of the harmful effects of frequent use of cell phones. To begin with, let's limit our time of playing with cell phones and start other hobbies. What's more, we should spend more time playing sports, which is beneficial to us. Besides, communicating with our friends is also a good choice to help us relax and get rid of the addiction. I hope that my suggestions will be of help to you.Let’s put down our cell phones and focus on what is happening around us!Let's take action now!That’s all. Thank you for your listening.【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一篇广播稿。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一广播稿：你发现周围很多同学在用手机发短信，玩游戏等，影响了正常学习，请针对这个现象，写一份广播稿，呼吁同学放下手机，多关注身边的人和事。内容包括：简述频繁使用手机的危害性；提出至少三项合理化的建议(多锻炼……)。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：spend too much time sending short messages（花太多的时间发送短信）；improve the situation（提高境况）；be fully aware of the harmful effects of frequent use of cell phones（充分意识到频繁使用手机的危害）；beneficial to us（对我们有好处）等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。同时文中使用高级句子。...playing games on cell phones, which has negative effects on our studies and also does harm to our eyes.句中使用which引导的非限制性定语从句；Nor do we have time for physical exercise.使用部分倒装；另外，Worse still, To begin with, What's more, Besides,等的运用为文章增色添彩。6．Dear Tom，From your letter I know that your winter vacation is coming. Have you planned how to spend your holiday？Here is some advice to you.It is not only a good time for you to have a good rest but also a good chance to improve your weak subjects. More importantly，it gives you an opportunity to meet new people and do interesting things.Therefore, you should make full use of your time, instead of just watching TV at home.In addition, visiting strange places and reading as many good books as possible will make your winter vacation a memorable experience.I do hope you will enjoy yourself in the coming winter vacation.Yours，Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封信件；假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Tom给你来信说寒假就要到了，但他不知道在寒假期间做些什么有意义的事，希望你给予建议，请你根据以下要点给Tom回信：合理休息，补习差科；结交新朋友，发现新事物等；游览参观，看书等开阔眼界。人称使用第二人称。时态应为一般现在时、一般将来时。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：some advice（一些建议），have a good rest（合理休息），improve your weak subjects（补习差科），meet new people（结交新朋友）；visiting strange places（游览参观）等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如not only…but also结构It is not only a good time for you to have a good rest but also a good chance to improve your weak subjects.；非谓语动词In addition, visiting strange places and reading as many good books as possible will make your winter vacation a memorable experience.；强调句型及宾语从句I do hope you will enjoy yourself in the coming winter vacation.。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，过渡词及短语more importantly，therefore，in addition的使用，使得文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。7．I'm glad to receive your letter, saying you are hoping to be a volunteer in 2022 Beijing Winter Olympics. Beijing has become the first city to host both Summer and Winter Olympic Games, and it , together with Zhangjiakou is the host of the 2022 Olympic Winter Games. I'd like to give you two suggestions on how to learn Chinese well. First, speak a little Chinese every day. The best way to learn any new language is just to speak it. Second, attend a Chinese class or discussion group. After all, language learning settings are of great importance.If you have any further questions, please don't hesitate to write to me.YoursZhanghua【导语】本篇书面表达是应用文，假定你是张华，你的美国中学生朋友彼得希望成为2022年北京冬奥会志愿者，他向你写信询问冬奥会相关情况，并求助怎样学好汉语。请给他回信。【详解】1.词汇积累高兴的；glad→delighted建议：suggestion→advice参加：attend→participate in重要的：be of great importance→be very important2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：I'd like to give you two suggestions on how to learn Chinese well.拓展句：I'd like to give you two suggestions on how you learn Chinese well.【点睛】【高分句型1】I'm glad to receive your letter, saying you are hoping to be a volunteer in 2022 Beijing Winter Olympics.（运用了现在分词作状语和省略了连接词的宾语从句）【高分句型2】If you have any further questions, please don't hesitate to write to me.（运用了if引导条件状语从句）8．Dear Emily,Glad to hear that you are going to learn Chinese folk dance in China, I’m more than happy to recommend an excellent teacher Miss Chen to you.Miss Chen is the best dance teacher in our school. You know, I love folk dance. I used to watch Miss Chen’s performances of Chinese folk dance, which really impressed me. And I have seen almost all of her performances in our school. Her peacock dance is wonderful. She has helped many students who want to learn folk dance, including me. Besides this, Miss Chen is patient and enthusiastic about teaching. I believe you will achieve a lot with her help.I sincerely wish you good luck to be Miss Chen’s student.【分析】本篇考查的写作类型是建议信。【详解】第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，1. 介绍你所推荐的老师:2. 推荐该老师的原因;3. 祝愿她拜师成功。第二，人称为第一人称和第三人称。第三，时态以一般现在时为主，兼用现在完成时。第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段，很高兴听说Emily喜欢中国舞蹈，并把陈老师推荐给她。第二段，介绍你所推荐的老师: 推荐该老师的原因。第三段，祝愿她拜师成功。第三步：确定关键词汇和短语: Chinese folk dance， recommend sb to sb, used to do sth, impress, peacock dance, be patient and enthusiastic about, with her help, more than. 第四步：确定较为高级的句子:which引导的非限制性定语从句和who引导的限制性定语从句I love folk dance. I used to watch Miss Chen's performances of Chinese folk dance, which really impressed me. She has helped many students who want to learn folk dance, including me.省略that的宾语从句I believe you will achieve a lot with her help.第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接:And，Besides.第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。【点睛】【高分句型1】She is not only strict but also patient in her teaching. 运用not only...but also...句型。【高分句型2】I heartily recommend Miss Chen to you based on the following reasons. 我由衷地向您推荐陈小姐，理由如下。过去分词based on作状语。9．One Possible Version:Dear Ms Li,I am very happy to have you as our English teacher. As the world is becoming a global village, English is getting more and more important, so mastering English means we can see the world through a new window. My English is just OK and the two main problems in my study are that I feel it difficult to learn words by heart, and that I often feel nervous when speaking English. I really hope that you can give me good advice on how to memorize new words. Another suggestion is to give us more chances to practice speaking. I believe we can make much progress in English with your help.Thank you!Li Hua【详解】这是一封英文稿件，写作内容包括五个主要要点：1. 对英语学习的认识；（一个要点）2. 自己目前的英语水平；（一个要点）3. 自己英语学习存在的主要问题；（一个要点）4. 对英语教学的两点建议。（两个要点）文章应围绕这五个要点合理展开，可使用适当的词句使文章衔接自然、层次分明。考生需要自己做合理的联想，可根据主题对要点进行适当发挥，内容要切合实际，符合逻辑。10．Dear_Jenny， I_am_really_sorry_to_hear_that_you_feel_bad_after_entering_the_high_school.You should remember that your classmates are also new there and facing the same problem, so you don't have to worry too much about it.There is also something that you can do to change this situation. First，try to invite some of your classmates to take part in some activities together after school. This will help you understand each other better by communicating with others. Then, help others when they are in trouble, and ask them to help you when you have difficulty. Soon, I believe, you will make many new friends there. Best wishes，Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文，要求考生给美国朋友Jenny写一封信，向Jenny表示问候和安慰，并针对她的问题提出建议。【详解】1.词汇积累应该：should→be supposed to帮助：help→assist参加：take part in=participate in尝试做某事：try to do sth.=attempt to do sth.2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：First, try to invite some of your classmates to take part in some activities together after school. This will help you understand each other better by communicating with others.拓展句：First, try to invite some of your classmates to take part in some activities together after school, which will help you understand each other better by communicating with others.【点睛】[高分句型1]You should remember that your classmates are also new there and facing the same problem, so you don't have to worry too much about it.（that引导宾语从句）[高分句型2]Then, help others when they are in trouble, and ask them to help you when you have difficulty.（when引导时间状语从句）