北京高考英语写作分类训练：建议信

这是一份北京高考英语写作分类训练：建议信，共18页。试卷主要包含了假设你是红星中学高一学生李华，假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，假定你是某一中学的学生李华等内容，欢迎下载使用。
建议信
1．假如你是李华，你的朋友Nathan将来你的城市做一项调查研究，写信询问你相关注意事项。请你回信给她一些建议，内容包括:
1. 天气情况    2. 食物       3. 交通
注 意:1.词数100左右
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
3. 已经给出的不计入总词数，
Dear Nathan,
Glad to hear from you.
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Yours
Li Hua
2．假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他想强身健体，计划选择一项可以长期坚持的运动并向你征询建议。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括：
1.推荐的运动；
2.推荐的理由。
注意：1.词数不少于50；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
3．假设你是红星中学的李华，你的美国笔友Jim正在上海留学。请根据他的邮件给他回信。
Dear Li Hua,
I'm doing well in Shanghai. This semester is almost over. I' m considering traveling to Beijing during the winter vacation. I can stay in Beijing for three days. I want to visit one cultural heritage site in Beijing, but I haven't decided where to go. Could you suggest one place?
By the way，what is your plan for the winter vacation?
Looking forward to seeing you in Beijing!
Yours,
Jim
注意：1.词数不少于60；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
4．根据题目所提出的具体要求，在答题纸上写出一篇连贯完整的短文。词数不少于60。
假设你是红星中学高一学生李华，你的英国好友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他刚刚进入高中学习，面对学业难度增加，感到学习上有压力。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括：
1)至少两条建议
2)你的祝愿
注意：开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
I’m sorry to know that you feel stressed because the subjects in senior high school become difficult and challenging.
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I am looking forward to your good news!
Best wishes.
Li Hua
5．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。为了减少舌尖上的浪费，你校英语俱乐部拟举办有关“爱惜食物，从我做起”的英语演讲活动。请你写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：
1. 食物浪费的现象及危害；
2. 你爱惜食物的做法；
3.你的倡议。
注意：1.词数不少于80；
2..开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Good morning,everyone.
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That's all. Thank you for listening.
6．假定你是某一中学的学生李华。你在美国的交换生朋友Tom，刚刚转到一所新学校，由于Tom不擅长交流，没有新朋友，且感到孤独。现在Tom给你写信，向你求助，希望你在交朋友方面，给他提供一些建议。内容包括：
1.表达你难过的心情；
2.交朋友的建议（三点以上）。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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7．假设你是红星中学高三（1）班学生李华，你的美国笔友Jim在邮件中提到他作为交换生要来中国学习，他将住在中国接待家庭，他询问住在中国家庭会是否会有文化差异。请你给Jim回信，内容包括：
1. 表示祝贺；
2. 说明可能会遇到的文化差异；
3. 提出建议。
注意：1．词数不少于50；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
8．假定你是李华，你的好友Chris在暑假期间痴迷于网络直播，经常花很多时间观看各种节目，请根据以下要点提示，给Chris 写一封信：
（1）分析网络直播受欢迎的原因；
（2）阐述过度观看的危害；
（3）提出合理建议。
注意:1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.参考词汇：网络直播webcast  直播间 live studio  过度观看excessive viewing
Dear Chris
I’m really worried about your present situation where
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Yours,
Li Hua
9．假设你是红星中学高一学生李华，你班交换生Jim计划在暑假期间学习汉语，向你咨询。请你给Jim写封邮件，内容包括：1. 很高兴他打算学习汉语；2. 提供学习建议（如参加课程、阅读书籍、与人交流等）；3. 表达愿望。
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
10．假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Jim最近开始学习中文，感觉有些难，来信希望你能给他一些建议。请你给他回信，内容包括：
1.中文难学的原因；
2.你的建议及理由；
3.你的祝愿。
注意：
1.词数不少于50。
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li hua


1．Dear Nathan,
Glad to hear from you. You said in your letter you would come to my city to do a research. To make you stay here safe and comfortable, I’d like to offer you some advice.
First, it can be quite cold here in winter, so it’s better for you to wear heavy clothes when you are out. Second, Chinese food may appear strange to foreigners like you, so you are supposed to learn to adapt to the food here and gradually you will find it delicious. What is the most important is the traffic. In China, we drive on the right-different from the usual practice in your country. So be sure to have it in your mind when you have a chance to drive.
Hope you will enjoy your stay here.
Yours,
Lihua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你的朋友Nathan将来你的城市做一项调查研究，写信询问你相关注意事项，请你回信给她一些建议
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 天气情况；
2. 食物；
3. 交通。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
do a research; offer sb. some advice; wear heavy clothes; learn to adapt to the food; drive on the right; have sth. in one’s mind; have a chance to
第三步：连词成句
1. You said in your letter you would come to my city to do a research.
2. To make you stay here safe and comfortable, I’d like to offer you some advice.
3. First, it can be quite cold here in winter, so it’s better for you to wear heavy clothes when you are out.
4. Second, Chinese food may appear strange to foreigners like you, so you are supposed to learn to adapt to the food here and gradually you will find it delicious.
5. In China, we drive on the right-different from the usual practice in your country.
6. So be sure to have it in your mind when you have a chance to drive.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First, Second
2.表并列补充关系：What is the most important, and
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but（供参考）
4.表因果关系：So
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
【点睛】[高分句型1] You said in your letter you would come to my city to do a research.（省略that的宾语从句）
[高分句型2] First, it can be quite cold here in winter, so it’s better for you to wear heavy clothes when you are out.（when引导的时间状语从句）
[高分句型3] Second, Chinese food may appear strange to foreigners like you, so you are supposed to learn to adapt to the food here and gradually you will find it delicious.（so连接的并列句）
2．Dear Jim,
I am glad to learn that you would like to exercise to keep fit. I believe running is the best choice. My reasons are as follows.
First of all, the physical benefits from running have long been recognized as it helps increase the body’s flow of blood and oxygen, which thus strengthens the immune system and reduces the risk of diseases. What’s more, running can certainly become a long-term hobby, since it takes only a pair of running shoes and can easily and flexibly be added to your schedule. Last but not least, running can improve one’s mood and particularly provide relief from pain or tension. Therefore, you can also achieve mental well-being if you take up running as a hobby. All in all, I’d like to recommend running as a sport that you can do regularly.
Why not give it a try? Just put on your trainers and get started. Then keep going. I’m sure you will get a lot out of running.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他想强身健体，计划选择一项可以长期坚持的运动并向你征询建议。请你给他回复邮件。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
内容包括：
1.推荐的运动；
2.推荐的理由。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
keep fit；as follows；benefits from；what’s more；last but not least；take up；all in all
第三步：连词成句（包含关键句，至少3句）
1.First of all, the physical benefits from running have long been recognized as it helps increase the body’s flow of blood and oxygen, which thus strengthens the immune system and reduces the risk of diseases.
2. What’s more, running can certainly become a long-term hobby, since it takes only a pair of running shoes and can easily and flexibly be added to your schedule.
3. Therefore, you can also achieve mental well-being if you take up running as a hobby.
4. Why not give it a try?
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Last but not least
2.表并列补充关系：What is more
3.表因果关系： Therefore
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
【点睛】[高分句型1] First of all, the physical benefits from running have long been recognized as it helps increase the body’s flow of blood and oxygen, which thus strengthens the immune system and reduces the risk of diseases.句中含as引导的原因状语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句。
[高分句型2] What’s more, running can certainly become a long-term hobby, since it takes only a pair of running shoes and can easily and flexibly be added to your schedule.句中含情态动词的被动语态和since引导的原因状语从句。
[高分句型3] Therefore, you can also achieve mental well-being if you take up running as a hobby.句中含if引导的条件状语从句。
3．Dear Jim,
I'm so happy that we will meet in Beijing soon! It's a good idea to come to Beijing during the winter vacation. I believe you will have a great time here!
Since you are visiting a cultural heritage site, I suggest you go to the Great Wall. He who doesn't reach the Great Wall is not a true man. The world famous ancient building is sure to leave a deep impression on you and help you increase knowledge and appreciation of China's ancient cultural heritage.
As for my winter vacation, I'm planning to take part in an English winter camp, where I can improve my English with more practice. When you're here, I hope I can talk with you in English more fluently!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给正在上海留学的美国笔友Jim回信。为他的北京的旅行提出建议，并告诉他你的寒假安排。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般将来时和一般现在时，少量现在进行时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.为他的北京的旅行提出建议；
2.告诉他自己的寒假安排。
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
come to ; during the winter vacation; have a great time; cultural heritage site; leave a deep impression on; as for; take part in; talk with sb.; in English; be sure to do sth.; in English
第三步：连词成句
1.It's a good idea to come to Beijing during the winter vacation.
2.I believe you will have a great time here!
3.Since you are visiting a cultural heritage site, I suggest you go to the Great Wall.
4.The world famous ancient building is sure to leave a deep impression on you and help you increase knowledge and appreciation of China's ancient cultural heritage.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
表并列补充关系：And
表因果关系：Since,
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] I'm so happy that we will meet in Beijing soon! 运用so…that引导目的状语从句。
[高分句型2] Since you are visiting a cultural heritage site, I suggest you go to the Great Wall. 运用since引导原因状语从句。
[高分句型3] When you're here, I hope I can talk with you in English more fluently! 运用when引导时间状语从句。
4．Dear Jim,
I’m sorry to know that you feel stressed because the subjects in senior high school become difficult and challenging.
I hope you will soon cheer up．Here are some suggestions for you to relieve stress．First，try to build up your confidence．Preparing for the College Entrance Examination is a long-term process and confidence plays an important role in it．So never give up or lose heart no matter what happens．Second，you should find your own strengths and weaknesses in your study，and seek help from both teachers and classmates in the face of difficulties and stress．Last but not least，you ought to do more physical exercise so as to keep fit as well as relax yourself．I hope you will get out of your trouble sooner and live happily.
I am looking forward to your good news!Best wishes.

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国好友Jim写封邮件，给予他缓解高中学习压力方面的建议。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 介绍写邮件的目的；
2. 提供缓解学习压力方面的建议；
3. 表达祝愿。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
cheer up; build up one’s confidence; prepare for; play an important role in; give up; lose heart; in the face of; keep fit
第三步：连词成句
1. I hope you will soon cheer up．
2. First，try to build up your confidence．
3. Preparing for the College Entrance Examination is a long-term process and confidence plays an important role in it．
4. So never give up or lose heart no matter what happens．
5. Second，you should find your own strengths and weaknesses in your study，and seek help from both teachers and classmates in the face of difficulties and stress．
6. Last but not least，you ought to do more physical exercise so as to keep fit as well as relax yourself．
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First, Second, Last but not least
2.表并列关系：and, or，as well as
3.表因果关系：because
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1]：Preparing for the College Entrance Examination is a long-term process and confidence plays an important role in it．运用了动名词短语作主语，注意谓语动词用单数形式。
[高分句型2]：So never give up or lose heart no matter what /whatever happens．运用了whatever引导的让步状语从句。
5．Good morning, everyone.
It’s my great honor to be here and give a speech on saving food.
Speaking of food, there are two ugly truths. First, a huge amount of food is wasted every year. Millions of tons of cooked and served food ends up in trash cans. Second, primary and secondary school students are among the top three food wasters.
At present, China is still heavily dependent on the import of certain grains, and wasting food will make our efforts to be self-sufficient in vain. Moreover, wasting food also means wasting resources like water, land and energy. Therefore, it will damage the environment in the long run.
Realizing the severe consequences of wasting food, I’ve been doing my bit to save food. At the school cafeteria, I ask for half-size servings when I’m not hungry. When dining out in restaurants with family or friends, I propose ordering smaller portions and taking the leftovers home. At home, I check the fridge before making shopping plans to avoid buying more food than we actually need.
Saving food benefits every one of us. Let’s clean our plates today so that we can have enough for tomorrow.
That’s all. Thank you for listening.
【分析】本篇书面表达是提纲类写作，要求写一篇演讲稿。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。为了减少舌尖上的浪费，你校英语俱乐部拟举办有关“爱惜食物，从我做起”的英语演讲活动。请你写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：1. 食物浪费的现象及危害；2. 你爱惜食物的做法；3.你的倡议。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：give a speech on (发表演讲)；speak of(谈到)；truth(真相)；a huge amount of(大量的)；end up (结束)；be heavily dependent on(严重依赖于)；self-sufficient(自给自足的)；in vain(徒劳地)；in the long run(长远)；severe consequence(严重后果)；do one’s bit(尽自己的一份力量)；propose (建议)； leftover(残羹剩菜)；avoid doing sth.(避免做某事)；benefit(有助于)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如Moreover, wasting food also means wasting resources like water, land and energy.是用来动名词作主语；At the school cafeteria, I ask for half-size servings when I’m not hungry.运用了时间状语从句；Let’s clean our plates today so that we can have enough for tomorrow.运用了目的状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
6．Dear Tom，
I'm very sorry to hear that you feel lonely and anxious because you have just moved and studied in a new school．But you needn't worry，for it is quite normal to have such a feeling in completely new surroundings．I have some suggestions for you on how to make new friends．
Firstly, you should be kind and friendly. Then, no matter where you are , you must care others more ，which is also very important. What’s more, you should avoid conflicting with friends although there is some disagreement. Be patient and try to discuss with them.
I believe you will soon become adapted to everything in the new school and become happy again!
Yours，
LiHua
【分析】这篇书面表达是一篇应用文写作。
【详解】假定你是某一中学的学生李华。你在美国的交换生朋友Tom，刚刚转到一所新学校，由于Tom不擅长交流，没有新朋友，且感到孤独。现在Tom给你写信，向你求助，希望你在交朋友方面，给他提供一些建议。内容包括：1.表达你难过的心情；2.交朋友的建议（三点以上）。通过审题，可知应该以第一人称为主，一般现在时进行写作。考生要先想好写哪几点，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出来。描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。
【点睛】这篇书面表达的关键在于句子内容的准确表述，同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。I'm very sorry to hear that you feel lonely and anxious because you have just moved and studied in a new school．宾语从句的运用；Then, no matter where you are , you must care others more ，which is also very important.定语从句的运用。
7．Dear Jim,
I’m happy to know that you will come to China to study and stay with a host family. Congratulations! It will be a great chance to learn Chinese culture.
However. I would like to remind you that some cultural shocks do exist. Take greeting people for example, when you first meet someone in your country, you might hug and kiss him or her. But in China it is not a common practice. I think the best way of greeting is to shake hands. Shaking hands is a friendly greeting in Chinese situation.
If you are unsure what to do, it is wise to remember the saying “When in Rome, do as the Romans do.” and you’ll be quite well accepted by Chinese.
Hope you have a pleasant stay in China.
Best wishes,
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这篇书面表达是一篇应用文写作。
【详解】
假设你是红星中学高三（1）班学生李华，你的美国笔友Jim在邮件中提到他作为交换生要来中国学习，他将住在中国接待家庭，他询问住在中国家庭会是否会有文化差异。请你给Jim回信，内容包括：1. 表示祝贺；2. 说明可能会遇到的文化差异；3. 提出建议。
通过审题，可知应该以第一人称为主，一般现在时和一般将来时进行写作。考生要先想好写哪几点，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出来。描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。
【点睛】这篇书面表达的关键在于句子内容的准确表述，同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。I’m happy to know that you will come to China to study and stay with a host family.宾语从句的运用；If you are unsure what to do, it is wise to remember the saying “When in Rome, do as the Romans do.” and you’ll be quite well accepted by Chinese.条件状语从句的运用。
8．Dear Chris,
I’m really worried about your present situation where you’ve been addicted to webcast in summer holidays and always spend a lot of time watching programs in various kinds of live studios. My opinions are as follows.
Undeniably, webcast is quite popular among young people, for it makes online shopping more convenient and leisure time colorful. However, there exist some potential risks if we have excessive viewing of it. Initially, it will do harm to our health, which may cause short-sightedness. Besides, excessive viewing takes up too much time and energy which should be put into study.
Thus, never should we be an addict to webcast, wasting too much precious time on it. It’s wiser to set aside some time to accompany parents or do something more meaningful.
Best wishes!
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达是一封书信。假定你是李华，你的好友Chris在暑假期间痴迷于网络直播，经常花很多时间观看各种节目，请根据要点提示，给Chris 写一封信。
【详解】
这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，不能遗漏要点：1.分析网络直播受欢迎的原因；2.阐述过度观看的危害；3.提出合理建议。写作时要准确运用时态，本文主要应该使用一般现在时。要注意上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。根据写作要点我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和短语及句子有：I’m really worried about your present situation. You’ve been addicted to webcast in summer holidays. You always spend a lot of time watching programs in various kinds of live studios. My opinions are as follows. Webcast is quite popular among young people. Webcast makes online shopping more convenient and leisure time colorful. There exist some potential risks if we have excessive viewing of it. do harm to our health，cause short-sightedness，take up too much time and energy which should be put into study. Never should we be an addict to webcast. waste too much precious time on webcast，It’s wiser to set aside some time to accompany parents or do something more meaningful.可以使用的衔接词：1.表示选择关系或对等关系的连接词：either…or…，neither…nor，or，as well as…，both…and…。2.表示因果关系的连接词：therefore，so，as a result，as a result of …，because of，due to，owing to，thanks to等。3.表示时间顺序的连接词：then，later，meanwhile，in the beginning，in the end，before long，as soon as，at first，for the first(second…)time，the minute，the moment等。4.表示转折对比关系的连接词：yet，but，while，on the contrary，on the other hand，however等。5.表示解释说明的连接词：that is，that is to say，in other words，such as，for instance，and so on等。6.表示递进关系的连接词：not only…but (also)，what’s more，what’s worse，besides，in addition，worse still，moreover等。7.表示总结的连接词：in a word，on the whole，in short，briefly，in brief，to sum up，in all等。
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句：I’m really worried about your present situation where you’ve been addicted to webcast in summer holidays and always spend a lot of time watching programs in various kinds of live studios. 这句话运用了where引导的定语从句；However, there exist some potential risks if we have excessive viewing of it. 这句话运用了if引导的条件状语从句；Initially, it will do harm to our health, which may cause short-sightedness. Besides, excessive viewing takes up too much time and energy which should be put into study. 这两句话运用了which引导的定语从句。使用了一些固定词组，如：be worried about，be addicted to，as follows，do harm to，take up，set aside。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
9．Dear Jim,
I'm more than glad to know that you plan to learn Chinese during this summer vacation. Here I would like to offer some advice on learning Chinese.
First, you should listen carefully to your teacher in class and practice as often as possible after class because mastering a language requires a lot of practice. Second, I’d like to recommend you to read some Chinese story books, which helps you enlarge your vocabulary and understand the different meanings of the words. Third, I think it is a good idea to communicate with Chinese native speakers. Last but not least, watching Chinese movies and listening to Chinese songs are good ways to learn idiomatic Chinese.
I hope my advice will be helpful.
                                                    Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一封电子邮件：假设你是红星中学高一学生李华，你班交换生Jim计划在暑假期间学习汉语，向你咨询。请你给Jim写封邮件，内容包括：1. 很高兴他打算学习汉语；2. 提供学习建议（如参加课程、阅读书籍、与人交流等）；3. 表达愿望。时态应为一般现在时。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； summer vacation（暑假），advice（建议），practice（练习），master（掌握）， require（需要），idiomatic （符合语言习惯的），helpful（有帮助的），recommend （推荐），vocabulary（词汇量）及enlarge（扩大）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。
【点睛】范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有plan to do（计划做某事），be glad to do（很高兴做某事），more than+adj (非常……)，communicate with（与……交流）以及listen to（听），而且还使用了非限定性定语从句“Second, I’d like to recommend you to read some Chinese story books, which helps you enlarge your vocabulary and understand the different meanings of the words.”，宾语从句“I'm more than glad to know that you plan to learn Chinese during this summer vacation.”及“I hope my advice will be helpful.”，形式主语“Third, I think it is a good idea to communicate with Chinese native speakers.”，非谓语动词“Last but not least, watching Chinese movies and listening to Chinese songs are good ways to learn idiomatic Chinese.”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。
10．Dear Jim,
It’s great to know that you have begun to learn Chinese! You say you find Chinese difficult to learn. I quite understand your problem.
Different from your language, most Chinese characters are from images. For English, most of time, you’ll know how to pronounce a word when you see it. But it is impossible in Chinese. In addition, Chinese grammar is totally different from English grammar. That definitely brings you more trouble.
However, learning  Chinese takes time. Don’t worry. I suggest you start with Pinyin, which will help  you know how to read Chinese characters. Besides, listening to Chinese songs or watching Chinese movies will also help. The more you are exposed to the language, the more familiar you will get with it.
I wish you every success in learning the language! If you have any further questions, feel free to ask. Good luck!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封信件；假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Jim最近开始学习中文，感觉有些难，来信希望你能给他一些建议。请你给他回信，内容包括：1.中文难学的原因；2.你的建议及理由；3.你的祝愿。人称使用第二、三人称。时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：begin to learn Chinese (开始学习中文)，different from (不同于)，most of time (大部分时间)，in addition (此外)，be exposed to (暴露于)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如宾语从句You say you find Chinese difficult to learn.定语从句I suggest you start with Pinyin, which will help you know how to read Chinese characters.比较级句型The more you are exposed to the language, the more familiar you will get with it.条件状语从句及祈使句If you have any further questions, feel free to ask.全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，过渡词及短语的使用，使得文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。