北京高考英语写作分类训练：邀请信

这是一份北京高考英语写作分类训练：邀请信，共20页。试卷主要包含了你们班同学打算周六去爬长城，假设你是红星中学高三学生李华等内容，欢迎下载使用。
邀请信
1．假定你是李华，本周末你们班将参观一家油纸伞伞厂。请你用英语写封邮件，邀请外教Mr. Smith一同前往。内容包括：1.写信目的；2.出发时间与地点；3.参观点活动安排。
注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：油纸伞oiled paper umbrella
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2．假设你是李华，曾在美国学习半年，现已回国。你想联系你的美国老师Mr.Smith，但没有其联系方式。请根据以下要点给你的美国同学Tom写一封信：
1.感谢Tom对你英语学习的帮助：2.询问Mr.Smith的近况并索要其联系方式；3.邀请Tom在春节期间来中国感受中国文化。
3．你们班同学打算周六去爬长城。请给外教Jim写一封英文信，邀请他参加此次活动。具体内容如下：   1. Time：8 am—5 pm
2. Where to get together：at the school gate
3. Transportation：bus
4. What to take with：umbrella or raincoat，lunch，camera
注意： 1. 词数不少于50；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
4．假定你是李华，你校将要举办风筝节。请给你的英国朋友Harry写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括:
1. 活动的时间、地点；
2. 活动内容。
注意:
1. 词数100词左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行为连贯。
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5．假定你是李华，想邀请你的新西兰朋友Kevin参加你校将要举行的“劳动周”相关活动。请给他写 封邮件，内容包括：
1.活动时间；
2. 活动内容（如：校园环境美化、校内垃圾分类等）；
3. 活动意义.
参考词汇：Labour Week劳动周
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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6．假设你是李华，你的美国朋友 Hannah 就读于顺义某国际学校。她热爱中国文化，尤其喜欢京剧。六月一日下午 2:00 在梅兰芳大剧院将上演由现代著名京剧演员刘长瑜女士表演的京剧《木兰从军》， 请你根据以下提示，用英语给 Hannah 写一封电子邮件，邀请她一起观看演出。内容包括:
1.告知演出时间，地点；
2.提出邀请并简述原因；
3.请求对方回复。
提示词：木兰从军 Mulan Joins the Army
梅兰芳大剧院 Mei Lanfang Grand Theatre
Dear Hannah,
How is everything going?
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7．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的美国笔友 Jim 对中国文化十分感兴趣，你在英文报纸 China Daily 上看到“中华文化表情包设计大赛 (The China Daily Emoji Design Contest of Chinese Cultural Symbols) ”征集来自世界各地参赛作品的活动，请给他写一封邮件，邀请他参加投稿，内容包括：
1.  介绍稿件要求；
2. 告知投稿时间和方式；
3.  询问对方意向。
注意: 1. 词数不少于 50；
2.  可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.  开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
8．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，请给交换生朋友Jim写一封邮件，告诉他你打算参加中国结(Chinese knot)社团，希望他一起参加。
邮件内容包括:
1.介绍社团相关内容(例如:时间、地点);
2.说明你打算参加的原因;
3.询问对方的意向。
注意:词数不少于50
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
9．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的美国朋友Jim对北京的历史文化感兴趣。你校暑假期间将为交换生组织“Knowing Beijing”游览活动，请你写信邀请Jim来参加。内容包括：
1时间安排；
2活动内容；
3邀请参加。
注意：1．词数不少于50；
2．开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
10．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你们班留学生 Jim 现在美国居家学习，请给他写一个电 子邮件，内容如下：1.告诉他你们学校即将举行在线运动会（运动会形式，内容……）；
2.  邀请他参加。
注意：1．词数不少于 50；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua














1．Dear Mr. Smith，
I’m LiHua, writing to invite you to join us in a visit to the oiled paper umbrella factory.
As we all know, the oiled paper umbrella is one of the useful Chinese hancrafted-item in the history, and becomes more and more popular nowadays. We are supposed to gather at the school gate at 8:00 on Tuesday. We will set out at 8:30 and arrive at 9:30 when we will have lots of activities there, during which we can do some hands-on manufacture, and listen to the lecture on the history of oiled paper umbrella.
Looking forward to your reply.
Sincerely yours
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇提纲类作文。要求考生用英语写一封邀请信，邀请外教Mr. Smith一同参加油纸伞伞厂参观活动。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：提纲类作文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般将来时。
结构：总分法
要求：告知写信目的；出发时间与地点；参观点活动安排。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
join；hancrafted；nowadays；suppose；gather；manufacture；lecture
第三步：连词成句
1. I‘m LiHua, writing to invite you to join us in a visit to the oiled paper umbrella factory.
2. As we all know, the oiled paper umbrella is one of the useful Chinese hancrafted-item in the history, and becomes more and more popular nowadays.
3. We are supposed to gather at the school gate at 8:00 on Tuesday.
4. We will set out at 8:30 and arrive at 9:30 when we will have lots of activities there, during which we can do some hands-on manufacture, and listen to the lecture on the history of oiled paper umbrella.
5. Looking forward to your reply.
第四步：连句成篇
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：while, meanwhile, However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】文章结构合理，思路清晰，使用了恰当的连接词及词组使行文连贯，如“which，when，and”，也运用了一些高级词汇和表达，如“hancrafted；nowadays；suppose；gather；manufacture；lecture”以及定语从句"We will set out at 8:30 and arrive at 9:30 when we will have lots of activities there, during which we can do some hands-on manufacture, and listen to the lecture on the history of oiled paper umbrella."等，增加了文章的亮点，体现了学生较高的英语学科素养。
2．One possible version:
Dear Tom,
I am now back home.In this letter I would like to say thanks to you for your kind help when I was in New York.I have been missing our English professor,Mr.Smith,who is so good a teacher and leaves me a great impression.What about him recently?I want to ask him for some suggestions on how to improve my listening ability.However,I lost his email address.So would you mind sending it to me via the online mailbox?
I am more than delighted to invite you to join us to celebrate the Spring Festival–Chinese Lunar New Year so that I can repay your friendship.We can also have a try in lion dances,which is extremely exciting.And the grand lantern festival parade will be bound to impress you.I assure you that you would enjoy visiting here as I did at your home.
With my best regards!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇表达属于应用文，要求考生写信给同学表示感谢，同时询问老师的联系方式。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时
要求：1. 表明对Tom的感谢
      2. 询问Mr. Smith的近况并索要其联系方式
      3. 发出来中国游玩的邀请
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
leaves sb a great impression; listening ability; be delighted to; so that; be bound to;
第三步：连词成句
1. Mr.Smith, who is so good a teacher and leaves me a great impression.
2. I want to ask him for some suggestions on how to improve my listening ability.
3. I am more than delighted to invite you to join us to celebrate the Spring Festival–Chinese Lunar New Year so that I can repay your friendship.
4. And the grand lantern festival parade will be bound to impress you.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句和被动语态，如：I have been missing our English professor, Mr.Smith, who is so good a teacher and leaves me a great impression.这句话运用了定语从句，先行词是professor，先行词是人，在从句中做主语，所以连接词用who。I want to ask him for some suggestions on how to improve my listening ability.运用了宾语从句。固定搭配运用了如leaves sb a great impression; listening ability; be delighted to; so that; be bound to;等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
3．Dear Jim,
We are planning to climb the Great Wall this Saturday. It is extremely magnificent and it is one of the most famous places of historical interest in the world. Therefore, we sincerely invite you to go with us.
We will get together at the school gate at 8 am and probably come back at 5 pm. To make it a green travel, we will take the bus there. You’d better take your camera to record the beautiful scenery. Moreover, don’t forget to take some food, because we plan to have lunch on the top of the hill. Besides, remember to take your umbrella or raincoat with you in case it rains.
We will appreciate it if you can go with us. Please let me know if you want to go. I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇提纲类作文。要求考生用英语写一封邀请信，邀请外教Jim参加周六爬长城活动。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：提纲类作文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
要求：包含以下内容：
时间：8 am—5 pm；在学校门口集合；乘坐公交车；携带雨伞或雨衣、午饭和相机。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
extremely；magnificent；famous；therefore；sincerely；appreciate；looking forward to
第三步：连词成句
1. We are planning to climb the Great Wall this Saturday.
2. It is extremely magnificent and it is one of the most famous places of historical interest in the world.
3. Therefore, we sincerely invite you to go with us.
4. We will get together at the school gate at 8 am and probably come back at 5 pm.
5. To make it a green travel, we will take the bus there.
6. You’d better take your camera to record the beautiful scenery.
7. Moreover, don’t forget to take some food, because we plan to have lunch on the top of the hill.
8. Besides, remember to take your umbrella or raincoat with you in case it rains.
9. We will appreciate it if you can go with us.
10. Please let me know if you want to go.
11. I’m looking forward to your early reply.
第四步：连句成篇
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：while, meanwhile, However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】文章结构合理，思路清晰，使用了恰当的连接词及词组使行文连贯，如“therefore，moreover，because，besides”，也运用了一些高级词汇和表达，如“extremely，magnificent，famous， sincerely，appreciate，looking forward to”以及状语从句“Moreover, don’t forget to take some food, because we plan to have lunch on the top of the hill.”“Therefore, we sincerely invite you to go with us.”等，增加了文章的亮点，体现了学生较高的英语学科素养。
4．Dear Harry,
I’m writing to invite you to celebrate the Kite Festival on our school playground, which will be a feast for your eyes.
The festival lasts two days, from April 11 to 12, during which time a wide variety of kites  will be on display. Besides, some kite experts will make kites on the spot, so you can get hands-on experience and know about the theory of kite flying. The most exciting moment should be when you are flying kites. Seeing the flying kites in the sky will relax your eyes and clear your mind.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封邮件邀请朋友Harry参加学校的风筝节。
【详解】第一步：明确要求。本篇书面表达要求考生写一封邮件邀请朋友Harry参加学校的风筝节。题目要求写作内容应包括以下两条要点：1. 活动的时间、地点；2. 活动内容。因此，可将写作分成三段。第一段：说明写信目的。第二段：介绍风筝节的时间、地点及活动内容。第三段：写信常规结尾，盼望回信。
第二步：列关键词。如：Kite Festival，be a feast for your eyes，from···to，on display，on the spot，relax your eyes and clear your mind，Looking forward to等。
第三步：连词成句。根据列出的关键词造句，注意主谓一致，时态语态等语法。
第四步：连句成文。注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，如：Besides，However, Finally。书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】此范文表达流畅，语言优美，内容全面，符合题目要求。其中值得学习的句型有：非限制性定语从句。I’m writing to invite you to celebrate the Kite Festival on our school playground, which will be a feast for your eyes. 动名词短语作主语。Seeing the flying kites in the sky will relax your eyes and clear your mind.
5．Dear Kevin,
I feel extremely delighted to inform you that our school will hold some relevant activities during the upcoming Labour Week. I’m writing to invite you to experience the great activities.
The Labour Week will start on June 10th and last for five days, when we will hold various activities. To beautify our school, we will plant trees that are definitely good for our physical and mental well-being. Moreover, it’s a wonderful idea to sort garbage in an eco-friendly way, making our campus cleaner and more fascinating. There is also a labor knowledge competition which is so rewarding that we can’t afford to miss it.
As for the significance, we can benefit a lot undoubtedly. Our awareness of labour can be developed. Besides, we will learn to cherish and respect the fruits of people’s work.
Looking forward to your favorable reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇写作属于应用文，主要是邀请新西兰的朋友Kevin参加学校举行的劳动周活动。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法。总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
写作要求：1. 活动时间；（the time of this activity）
2. 活动内容（如：校园环境美化、校内垃圾分类等）；（the content of this activity）
3. 活动意义。（the significance of this activity）
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
inform; relevant; upcoming; various; beautify; definitely; physical and mental; as for the significance; undoubtedly; cherish
第三步：连词成句
I want to inform you that our school will hold some relevant activities during the upcoming Labour Week.
I’m writing to invite you to experience the great activities.
We will plant trees that are definitely good for our physical and mental well-being.
We will hold various activities to support our Labour Week.
It’s a wonderful idea to sort garbage in an eco-friendly way.
Sorting garbage can make our campus cleaner and more fascinating.
As for the significance, we can benefit a lot undoubtedly.
Our awareness of labour can be developed.
We will learn to cherish and respect the fruits of people’s work.
在进行造句的时候一定要注意时态和语态上面的问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1. 文章的结构顺序：劳动周具体时间和地点；劳动周的活动内容；劳动周的实际意义。
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰.
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。范文开头I feel extremely delighted to inform you that our school will hold some relevant activities during the upcoming Labour Week. 既使用了一个宾语从句，又开门见山的点出了写作的主题和目的。此外范文中形容词和副词用得特别好，比如extremely和definitely等，都能够表达出作者的情感。 还用到了非谓语结构Moreover, it’s a wonderful idea to sort garbage in an eco-friendly way, making our campus cleaner and more fascinating. 文章思路清晰，层次分明，上下句转换自然。为文章增色添彩。
6．Dear Hannah,
How is everything going? Knowing that you are crazy about Chinese culture, I am writing to invite you to enjoy a fabulous Beijing Opera.
Mulan Joins the Army, known as one of the most famous Beijing Opera, will be put on in Mei Lanfang Grand Theatre on the afternoon of June 1st. It will be performed by Liu Changyu, a famous artist/actress. Usually fans will get there around 1:30 p.m. , but it won’t be performed until 2 o'clock sharp. It tells an inspiring story of a girl named Mulan who joins the army for her father and finally becomes a general through her own efforts.
The reasons why I would like to send you the invitation are as follows. To start with, since you always show great interest in Beijing Opera, this is a great chance for you to be exposed to the rich opera atmosphere and have your visual and auditory senses fully fulfilled. Besides, it also provides you a chance to refresh yourself from the heavy study load. You know, there is nothing better than music for a person to relax with, let alone the wonderful live opera show. Most importantly, I do think the opera will benefit you a lot in understanding the unique traditional Chinese culture and inspire you to pursue your dream like Mulan.
So what do you think of it? Would you like to come? If you’re interested, please let me know as soon as possible so that I can book the tickets for us.
                                                               Yours,
LiHua
【分析】本书面表达是一篇提纲类书面表达，要求以李华的名义给美国朋友Hannah 写一封电子邮件。
【详解】本文为书信类作文，要求写一封电子邮件，邀请Hannah 一起观看京剧《木兰从军》演出，包括告知Hannah演出时间，地点，并简述邀请原因。虽然要点已经给出，但是需要进行适当的扩展，如简要介绍《木兰从军》的内容、邀请的原因等等。注意使用连接词，使作文连贯，注意时态，人称主要用第一人称和第三人称。同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：Knowing that you are crazy about Chinese culture, I am writing to invite you to enjoy a fabulous Beijing Opera.这句话运用了现在分词作状语；It tells an inspiring story of a girl named Mulan who joins the army for her father and finally becomes a general through her own efforts.和The reasons why I would like to send you the invitation are as follows.这两句话运用了定语从句；使用了一些固定词组，如be known as ; as soon as possible; so that等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
7．Dear Jim,
I am writing to tell you about The China Daily Emoji Design Contest of Chinese Cultural Symbols organized by China Daily. I know you’re keen on traditional Chinese culture, so why not have a try?
You may choose any symbol that best represents Chinese culture in your eyes, such as the panda, kung fu, the Great Wall and so on. There is no limit on the style, but be sure to give your work a name and explain designing ideas and its culture meanings. Your work should be submitted online with required personal information by the end of September. All winning designs will be shared and promoted on the China Daily app, and winning designers will receive prizes!
Are you interested? If you need any help, I would be very glad to help. Let your creative juices flow!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，你在英文报纸 China Daily 上看到“中华文化表情包设计大赛”征集来自世界各地参赛作品的活动，请给你对中国文化十分感兴趣的美国笔友 Jim写一封邮件，邀请他参加投稿。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
   总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1. 介绍稿件要求。（introduce the requirements）
      2. 告知投稿时间和方式。（inform the time and method of submission）
3. 询问对方意向。（ask about his intention）
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
be keen on; such as; be sure to; give…a name; personal information; by the end of; be glad to
第三步：连词成句
1. I am writing to tell you about The China Daily Emoji Design Contest of Chinese Cultural Symbols organized by China Daily.
2. I know you’re keen on traditional Chinese culture, so why not have a try?
3. You may choose any symbol that best represents Chinese culture in your eyes, such as the panda, kung fu, the Great Wall and so on.
4. There is no limit on the style, but be sure to give your work a name and explain designing ideas and its culture meanings.
5. Your work should be submitted online with required personal information by the end of September.
6. All winning designs will be shared and promoted on the China Daily app, and winning designers will receive prizes!
7. Are you interested?
8. If you need any help, I would be very glad to help.
9. Let your creative juices flow!
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：You may choose any symbol that best represents Chinese culture in your eyes, such as the panda, kung fu, the Great Wall and so on.这句话运用了that引导的主语从句。使用了一些固定词组，如be keen on; be sure to; by the end of; be glad to等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
8．Dear Jim,
How is everything going? I clearly remember you’ve mentioned your strong interest in traditional Chinese culture, so I’m writing to share some good news with you! Our school will set up a wide variety of clubs for us to choose from, of which the Chinese knot club is included. As for me, I will definitely go for it without hesitation. The club is scheduled to be open in Room 302 in our Science Building every Friday at 4:00 pm, when I suppose you will be free. Would you like to come and join me?
I have been longing to become a member of such a club. The reasons are as follows. First of all, the Chinese knot is always appealing to me because of its rich shapes and I’m curious about how it’s made. Attending this club, which offers hands-on learning experience, I can learn how to create works of mine. Besides, I strongly believe I can benefit a lot from this club as it will offer classes introducing the history of the Chinese knot as well as its symbolic significance. Don’t you think this is a good opportunity to get close to Chinese traditional culture? What’s more, I, as your best friend, will always be with you, which guarantees your free communication within the club.
Dear friend, as a Chinese traditional culture lover, why not take the chance to join this club? I am looking forward to your early positive reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生给朋友Jim写信，邀请他参加中国结社团，并给他介绍社团的大致情况。
【详解】体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应以一般现在时和一般将来时为主
结构：总分
要求：
1.介绍社团相关内容(例如:时间、地点…);
2.说明你打算参加的原因;
3.询问对方的意向。
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
be interested in/ invite sb. to do sth./ introduce sth. to sb./ set up/ be aimed at/ have a better understanding of/ would like to do sth./join sb.
第三步：连词成句
How is everything going?
Knowing your strong interest in traditional Chinese culture, I’m writing to share some good news with you!
Our school will set up a wide range of clubs for us to choose from, of which the Chinese knot club is included.
Undoubtedly, as for me, I will definitely go for it
The club is scheduled to be open in Room 302 in our Science Building every Friday at 4:00 pm, when I suppose you will be free.
Would you like to come and join me?
第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）
表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so…
状语从句连词：because/ if/ though/ although…
定语从句连词：which/ that/ when/ where…
第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些主从复合句，例如：I clearly remember you’ve mentioned your strong interest in traditional Chinese culture, so I’m writing to share some good news with you!中使用了宾语从句；The club is scheduled to be open in Room 302 in our Science Building every Friday at 4:00 pm, when I suppose you will be free.中when引导定语从句。
9．Dear Jim，
How is it going？ I'm writing to invite you to our activity-" Knowing Beijing "．
We are going to organize the activity at school next Friday afternoon．We'll experience Chinese traditions，such as making dumplings，learning a dragon dance，drinking Chinese tea and so on． I hope we'll enjoy ourselves． I believe you can learn more about China and love Chinese traditional culture by having this kind of activity．
   I'm looking forward to your early reply．
Yours，
Xiao Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文。
【详解】根据提示可知,本篇为一封信; 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的美国朋友Jim对北京的历史文化感兴趣。你校暑假期间将为交换生组织“Knowing Beijing”游览活动，请你写信邀请Jim来参加。内容包括：1时间安排；2活动内容；3邀请参加。根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
【点睛】本文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,如In the morning, we will go to The Forbidden City which used to be the imperial palace for the Ming and Qing 24emperors to live.定语从句的运用，I believe you can learn more about China and love Chinese traditional culture by having this kind of activity．中使用了宾语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外, 文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
10．Dear Jim，
I heard that you have studied at home in America these days. How is everything going? I am glad to tell you that our school will hold an online sports meet.
The sports meet will be held from 8:00 am to 12:00 am on April 20. In the sports meeting, students can involve themselves in various online activities, such as Rope Jump, long jump competition, relay race and running with a ball. During the rest time, you can also enjoy some wonderful performances taken by cheerleaders. I’m sure you will have a great time with us.
Besides, there will be a free conversation session, which would be a good chance for you to make more Chinese friends.
We will be honored if you can join us.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】此篇书面表达为应用文。要求考生写一封邮件，邀请留学生参加在线运动会。
【详解】第一步：审题
题材：应用文。
人称：第一人称、第二和第三人称。
时态：一般将来时和一般现在时为主。
要点：
告诉Jim学校举办在线运动会；
运动会的时间；
运动会的具体项目；
邀请Jim参加。
第二步：列出重点短语
hold an online sports meet； involve oneself in …； various online activities；
enjoy some wonderful performances； have a great time； make more Chinese friends.
第四步：连词成句
I heard that you have studied at home in America these days.
I am glad to tell you that our school will hold an online sports meet.
The sports meet will be held from 8:00 am to 12:00 am on April 20.
In the sports meeting, students can involve themselves in various online activities, such as rope Jump, long jump competition, relay race and running with a ball.
You can also enjoy some wonderful performances taken by cheerleaders.
I’m sure you will have a great time with us.
There will be a free conversation session, which would be a good chance for you to make more Chinese friends.
We will be honored if you can join us.
第五步：修改润色
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些固定词组和高级句式，如involve oneself in ; have a great time.  if 引导的条件状语从We will be honored if you can join us.which 引导的非限制性定语从句Besides, there will be a free conversation session, which would be a good chance for you to make more Chinese friends。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。