四川高考英语写作分类训练：申请信

这是一份四川高考英语写作分类训练：申请信，共16页。
申请信1．假定你是李华，你所在的城市即将举办国际青少年足球赛，组委会现面向社会招聘英语志愿者。请你用英语给组委会写一封邮件，申请成为志愿者。要点如下：1.表达意愿；2.说明优势；3.希望获准。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Sir or Madam,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely,Li Hua2．假定你是李华，某国外志愿者服务项目正在招募志愿者到欠发达国家宣传和普及健康知识，你希望成为其中一员。请根据以下提示信息，给该项目的负责人Mr. Wilson写一封申请信。1.介绍个人情况；2.表明自己意愿；3.期待早日回复。要求：1.词数：100个左右；邮件开头和结尾已给出，不计人总词数；2.内容必须包括以上要点，可适当发挥。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．假如你是学生李华，得知2022北京冬奥会主委会正在招聘志愿者接待外宾。请你写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括:1.应聘目的；2.个人优势(至少两点)；3.期待获准。注意:1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇:the Winter OlympicsDear Sir / Madam,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely,Li Hua4．假设你叫李华，寒假即将到来，你在网上看到一家国际旅行社招聘兼职助理的广告想去应聘。请你从以下几个方面，用英语给该旅行社写一封100词左右的求职信。1. 应聘原因；2. 个人资质；3. 期待回复。注意：1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2.信的开头已给出，但不计入总词数。参考词汇:  助理 assistantDear Sir / Madam, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely,Li Hua5．假定你是李华，准备明年高考后去英国某大学留学学习英国文学，请根据以下要点写一封100词左右的申请信。可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。1. 你选择该专业的原因； 2.  个人简介； 3. 表达信心和感谢。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6．假如你是高三学生李华，从校园网上得知你校将在暑假举办去英国牛津大学(Oxford University)的夏令营。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。内容主要包括:1. 自我介绍(突出特长)；2. 参加原因(文化交流、心仪大学等)；3. 希望获批。注意:1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Sir or Madam,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua7．假定你是李华，从互联网上得知一个国际中学生组织将在绵阳举办夏令营， 很多外国学生都会来参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。内容要点如下:1.自我介绍(包括英语能力)；2.参加意图(介绍家乡、了解其他国家)；3.希望获准。注意: 1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.邮件开头和结尾已为你写好。Dear Sir or Madam,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Looking forward to your reply!Regards,Li Hua8．假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括：1. 写信目的；2. 个人优势；3. 能做的事情。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 结束语已为你写好。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9．假定你是李华，计划暑假期间去英国学习英语，为期六周。从互联网上得知一个国际中学生组织将在英国举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。内容主要包括:1.自我介绍(包括英语能力)；2.参加意图(学习英文、介绍中国、了解其他国家)；3.希望获准。注意:1.词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________10．假定你叫李华，是攀枝花中学(Panzhihua High School)的一名高三学生。你从网上得知攀枝花市将于2019年7月举办几场国际体育比赛，需要一些志愿者。请你根据如下提示写一封申请信。1、你的基本信息；2、你的英语水平；3、你的其他申请理由。注意:1、词数100左右；2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________           1．Dear Sir or Madam,Thank you for taking your time to read my letter. I m a senior high school student. With the International Youth Football Matches approaching, I’d like to apply to be a volunteer.I think I’m fit for the job. First of all, I’ m enthusiastic about football matches. Second, I can speak English as fluently as the native speakers do, which enables me to have no difficulty in communicating with people I meet. What’s more, I have experience of volunteering and I know how to get along well with others. In short, I’m eager to be a volunteer for the matches. I will do whatever I can to help if I am accepted.Looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【分析】这是一篇应用文，要求写一封信。【详解】第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，假定你是李华，你所在的城市即将举办国际青少年足球赛，组委会现面向社会招聘英语志愿者。请你用英语给组委会写一封邮件，申请成为志愿者。要点如下：1.表达意愿；2.说明优势；3.希望获准。第二，人称为第一人称。第三，时态以一般现在时为主。第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段，表达意愿。第二段，说明优势。第三段，希望获准。第三步：确定关键词汇和短语:  apply to，be fit for，be enthusiastic about，have no difficulty in doing，get along well，be eager to do.第四步：确定较为高级的句子:which引导的非限制性定语从句Second, I can speak English as fluently as the native speakers do, which enables me to have no difficulty in communicating with people I meet. if 引导的条件状语从句I will do whatever I can to help if I am accepted.第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接: First of all，Second，What’s morein short.第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。【点睛】文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式:which引导的非限制性定语从句Second, I can speak English as fluently as the native speakers do, which enables me to have no difficulty in communicating with people I meet. if 引导的条件状语从句I will do whatever I can to help if I am accepted.高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。2．Dear Mr. WilsonI'm Li Hua from China. Id like to work for your program.As a teenage boy, I am good at English, which is required for access to the program. I'm very interested in health topics and have read a lot of books and magazines about how to keep healthy. In addition, I have the experiences of giving health care lectures at our local care homes. I'm sure that the job will offer me a good chance to help those in less developed countries and enrich my life and the lives of those in need as well.Thanks for your consideration. I am looking forward to your early reply.Yours faithfully,Li Hua【分析】这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生给某国外志愿者服务项目写一封申请信。【详解】体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应以一般现在时为主结构：总分总要求：1.介绍个人情况；2.表明自己意愿；3.期待早日回复。第二步：列提纲（重点词组）work for/ apply for/ be a member of/ be willing to do sth/ be interested in/ have access to/ keep healthy/ have a chance to do sth/ off sb sth/ broaden one's horizon/ in need/ look forward to第三步：连词成句I'm Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I want to apply to be a member and work for your program.I have a good command of English, which makes me suitable for the program.Besides, I am interested in health topic and have a good knowledge in it.In addition, I did work related to this before, such as giving lectures in my class and helping people in the local health center.Most importantly, I always want to help those in need, and offer what I know to them.If I am chosen, I will spare no effort to work on the job.Looking forward to your reply. 第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so…状语从句连词：because/ if/ though/ although…定语从句连词：which/ that/ when/ where…第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些主从复合句，例如：As a teenage boy, I am good at English, which is required for access to the program.中which引导非限制性定语从句；I am sure that the job will offer me a good chance to help those in less developed countries and enrich my life and the lives of those in need as well.中that引导宾语从句。这些从句的使用为文章增色添彩。3．Dear Sir / Madam,I am Li Hua, a Senior Two student. I’m writing to apply for the job as a volunteer in the Winter Olympics in Beijing in 2022. I can’t wait to take part in the activity to set up a bridge to convey our beautiful Chinese culture and learn more about other countries.First, I have a good command of oral English, which enables me to communicate with foreigners very well. Besides, my previous experiences as a volunteer may help me settle the potential problems efficiently. I think I can be equal to the job.I’d appreciate it if you could offer me the precious opportunity and I will devote myself to the job. Looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【分析】这是一篇应用文写作。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假如你是学生李华，得知2022北京冬奥会主委会正在招聘志愿者接待外宾。请你写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括:1.应聘目的；2.个人优势(至少两点)；3.期待获准。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：apply for（申请）；the Winter Olympics（冬奥会）；take part in（参加）；set up（建立）；have a good command of（精通，熟练）等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如First, I have a good command of oral English, which enables me to communicate with foreigners very well.运用非限定性定语从句；I’d appreciate it if you could offer me the precious opportunity and I will devote myself to the job.运用了it做形式宾语。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外, 文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。4．Dear Sir / Madam,I’m Li Hua. I’m writing to apply for the job as an assistant in your travel agency.I’m a student of 16, studying at a high school now. The reason why I’m interested in the job is that I’m fond of travel very much. Besides, I want to learn how to communicate with foreigners from different countries.As for my advantages, on the one hand, I can speak fluent English. On the other hand, I am especially familiar with the local tourist destinations and also have a good knowledge of history and geography. I promise I will finish all the work you give me if I get the position.I would be grateful if you could consider employing me in your agency. I’m looking forward to your early reply.Yours faithfully,Li Hua【分析】这是一篇应用文写作。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知, 本篇为一封电子邮件；假设你叫李华，寒假即将到来，你在网上看到一家国际旅行社招聘兼职助理的广告想去应聘。请你从以下几个方面，用英语给该旅行社写一封100词左右的求职信。1. 应聘原因；2. 个人资质；3. 期待回复。第2步：根据写作要求, 确定关键词（组）, 如：apply for（申请）；assistant（助理）；travel agency（旅行社）；be fond of（喜欢）；communicate with（交流）；be familiar with（熟悉）等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句, 注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用第一人称和一般现在时。第4步：连句成文, 注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡, 书写一定要规范清晰, 保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】范文内容完整, 语言规范, 语篇连贯, 词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式, 如The reason why I’m interested in the job is that I’m fond of travel very much.运用了定语从句及表语从句；I promise I will finish all the work you give me if I get the position.运用了宾语从句及条件状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式, 显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外, 文章思路清晰、层次分明, 上下句转换自然, 为文章增色添彩。5．Dear Sir／Madam,    I am a Chinese high school student who will graduate in June next year. Admiring your reputation as a top 10 UK university, I am writing to apply to get further education in your university.As a student of liberal arts, I’d like to major in English literature. On one hand, I’m fascinated by reading books of English literature due to its long history and a long list of world-famous writers. On the other hand, I’m sure that I can learn it well because English is my favorite subject during my senior school years, which will be helpful for my further studying college. Being an active, hardworking, optimistic and tolerant person, I not only have excellent academic performance but also have participated in a variety of activities, from which I have improved my leadership and communication skills as well as the ability to do team work.I understand overseas study can be challenging and demanding. Nevertheless, I am convinced that I will strive hard to fulfill my literary dream if given the chance. Thank you for taking the time to read my letter. I would appreciate it if you could reply to me at your earliest convenience.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【分析】这是一篇应用文，要求写一篇申请信。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一篇申请信；假如你是李华，准备明年高考后去英国某大学留学学习英国文学(或计算机科学），请你用英语写一篇申请信，内容包括：写信目的；你选择该专业原因和个人情况简介；表达信心和感谢。人称应为第一人称，时态应为一般现在时。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：apply to（申请）；further education（进修）；major in（主修）；fascinated（着迷的）；optimistic（乐观的）；participate in（参加）等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】范文内容完整, 语言规范, 语篇连贯, 词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式, 如Being an active, hardworking, optimistic and tolerant person, I not only have excellent academic performance but also have participated in a variety of activities, from which I have improved my leadership and communication skills as well as the ability to do team work.运用了非谓语动词短语做状语；Nevertheless, I am convinced that I will strive hard to fulfill my literary dream if given the chance.运用了宾语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式, 显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外, 文章思路清晰、层次分明, 上下句转换自然, 为文章增色添彩。6．Dear Sir or Madam,I am a senior three student from China. Having learned from my school website that a summer camp will be held by Oxford University, I am writing to apply for a place.I believe my abilities make me stand out. I am passionate about English. Participating in English speaking competitions has given me strong communication skills. Therefore, I am able to speak English with fluency.This program attracts me for several reasons. First, it would give me an opportunity to get to know Oxford University, my dream school. Second, I would be able to attend culture fairs and visit different cities, which would give me a better understanding of Western culture.I would treasure the chance to improve myself at the summer camp. I am looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本文属于应用文，要求写一封书信。【详解】本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以高三学生李华的身份 写一封电子邮件，申请参加你校将在暑假举办去英国牛津大学(Oxford University)的夏令营。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）自我介绍（突出特长）；2）参加原因（文化交流、心仪大学等）；3）希望获批。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文章思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。【点睛】本书面表达要点齐全，上下文连贯，使用一定数量的句式结构，让句子更加生动丰满，同时运用了许多高级词汇和固定短语，提高文章的档次，体现了对英语的熟练的驾驭能力。例如：Having learned from my school website that a summer camp will be held by Oxford University, I am writing to apply for a place.运用了现在分词作原因状语和宾语从句；   I believe my abilities make me stand out.运用了宾语从句； Second, I would be able to attend culture fairs and visit different cities, which would give me a better understanding of Western culture.运用了非限制性定语从句。7．Dear Sir or Madam,I read the announcement that you have posted on the Internet about the summer camp and I am interested in it.I'm Li Hua, a 16-year-old high school student from Mianyang, China. I've been learning English for 10 years, and I speak fluent English. I know that you welcome students from different countries and many students will meet in Mianyang. Now that it is in my hometown, I'm eager to be part of it. What's more, I want to take the opportunity to introduce Mianyang, my hometown and China to students from other countries and learn about their countries as well. I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp.Looking forward to your reply!Regards,【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封电子邮件。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封电子邮件：假定你是李华，从互联网上得知一个国际中学生组织将在绵阳举办夏令营， 很多外国学生都会来参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。内容要点如下:1.自我介绍(包括英语能力)；2.参加意图(介绍家乡、了解其他国家)；3.希望获准。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：the summer camp（夏令营）；a 16-year-old high school student from Mianyang, China（一名来自中国绵阳的16岁的中学生）；take the opportunity to introduce Mianyang（得到介绍绵阳的机会）；等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。I read the announcement that you have posted on the Internet about the summer camp and I am interested in it.句中that引导定语从句；Now that it is in my hometown, I'm eager to be part of it.此处now that引导原因状语从句；I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp.省略that的宾语从句中使用一般将来时态的被动语态。8．Dear Sir or Madam,I’m writing to apply to be a volunteer for the Chinese Painting Exhibition which will be held in your art gallery. I think I am qualified for this job, because I have learned Chinese painting since childhood. Besides, I am fluent in both Chinese and English, which is beneficial for introducing Chinese paintings. If I am lucky enough to be chosen as a volunteer, I can show visitors around the gallery and get them to know more about Chinese painting.I would be very grateful if you could offer me the opportunity. I’m looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达要求写一封申请信，属于书信应用文。【详解】1.审题立意本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写申请信，人称使用第一人称和第二人称，时态用一般现在时。2.谋篇布局书信格式，称呼和落款文中已经给出。首段，写信的目的，中间段写个人优势和能做的事，最后一段总结。3. 关键词和句子根据写作要点及构思好的提纲我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和句子有：volunteer，a Chinese Painting Exhibition，advantages，I am good at…，I can help with.../I’ll devote myself to…。通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误，并增加一些细节和过渡性的词汇，如First of all，Besides，to begin with，moreover，as for me，Last but not least等，使全文衔接自然，语义流畅。【点睛】本文开门见山，表达了写信的目的；之后详细介绍了个人的优势和能做的事情，详略得当，内容完整，同时使用了高级词汇和高级句子。高级词汇：be qualified for，be fluent in，be beneficial for等；高级句式：because I have learned Chinese painting since childhood此处使用了原因状语从句。which is beneficial for introducing Chinese paintings.使用了非限制性定语从句。If I am lucky enough to be chosen as a volunteer, I can show visitors around the gallery and get them to know more about Chinese painting.使用了条件状语从句。9．Dear Sir or MadamThe other day I happened to read your advertisement on the Internet, saying that you are holding a summer camp aiming at students from around the world, and I'm interested to participate in it.I'm Li Hua, a middle school student in China. As a teenager, I'm interested in making friends with kids of my age from around the world. At the same time, I want to improve my English during the six weeks.Your camp will provide a good chance for me to learn English well and know a lot about other countries. What's more, I will tell them something about China by communicating with people from other countries.I do hope that I can be lucky enough to be admitted to your camp.Looking forward to your reply.Regards,Li Hua【分析】考查应用文中的电子邮件写作。【详解】题目要求假定你是李华，计划暑假期间去英国学习英语，为期六周。从互联网上得知一个国际中学生组织将在英国举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。内容主要包括:1.自我介绍(包括英语能力)；2.参加意图(学习英文、介绍中国、了解其他国家)；3.希望获准。分析可知，应该以第一人称为主，一般现在时和一般将来时进行写作。要点已经给出，要求考生根据提纲自己发挥拓展，考生要先想好写哪几点，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。【点睛】这篇书信类短文的关键在于要点的拓展，同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。I do hope that I can be lucky enough to be admitted to your camp.宾语从句的运用。10．Dear Sir or Madam，   I'm Li Hua，a senior three student at Panzhihua High School. I learned from the Internet that Panzhihua city will hold several international sports competitions in July 2019, and some volunteers are needed. I'm writing to apply for the position as a volunteer.   I want to become a volunteer for the following reasons．First，I love sports and playing sports has been an important part of my life．Second，I have a good command of English，which allows me to communicate with foreigners without difficulty. More importantly，I will be able to improve my communication skills and learn new cultures by serving the athletes and guests from other parts of the world，   I think I am qualified to be a volunteer．I would be very grateful if you could give me a chance．                                                                       Yours Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封申请信。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封申请信：你是攀枝花中学(Panzhihua High School)的一名高三学生。你从网上得知攀枝花市将于2019年7月举办几场国际体育比赛，需要一些志愿者。要求你根据你的基本信息，你的英语水平，你的其他申写一封申请信。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：hold several international sports competitions（举行几项国际体育比赛）；apply for the position as a volunteer（申请志愿者的位置）；by serving the athletes and guests（通过服务运动员和客人）等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。同时文中使用高级句子。I learned from the Internet that Panzhihua city will hold several international sports competitions in July 2019,句中使用宾语从句；I have a good command of English，which allows me to communicate with foreigners without difficulty.句中使用which引导的非限制性定语从句；I would be very grateful if you could give me a chance．句中使用if引导的条件状语从句。