广东高考英语写作分类训练：建议信

这是一份广东高考英语写作分类训练：建议信，共16页。试卷主要包含了假定你是李明等内容，欢迎下载使用。
建议信1．假设你是李华，你的朋友Tom认为自己有点超重。作为好友，请你用英语给他写一封信，建议他用适当的方法来减肥。要点如下：1. 常运动，适当节食；2. 避免(avoid)使用减肥药，不食用垃圾食品。注意：1. Email的开头和结尾已经为你写好；2. 词数80左右；3. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Tom,You say you want to lose weight but you are not sure how to do it correctly.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes.YoursLi Hua2．假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter将于2022年来中国张家口参加冬奥会，他来信向你咨询如何提高汉语水平。请你用英语给他写一封回信，包含以下内容：1.说明写信目的；2.提出三点建议并说明理由；3.表达祝愿和希望。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Peter,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely, Li Hua3．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter发来邮件，表示他对中国文学很感兴趣，希望你给他推荐相关书籍，你决定给他推荐西游记。现在请你给他回复邮件，内容包括:1. 写信目的；2. 简单介绍这本书；3. 简述推荐理由。参考词汇：文学 literature 西游记 Journey to the West 徒弟 apprentice  真经 the true story注意：1. 词数120左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。Dear Peter,I am glad to learn that______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,Li Hua4．假定你是李华，你的交换生好友Ben最近沉迷于玩电脑游戏，这导致他的学习成绩下降，为此他感到苦恼，来信请求你的建议。请你给他回信，内容包括：1.表示担忧； 2.提出建议； 3.表达期待。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Ben, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua5．假定你是李华，刚接到你朋友Peter的来信，说他最近因为无法摆脱生活中的一些坏习惯而很苦恼，希望你能给他一些指点。请你给他写一封信，内容包括：1.得知情况，表示同情；2.给出如何摆脱不良习惯的建议；3.鼓励和祝愿。注意：1.词数80左右；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数。6．假定你是李明。你的外国朋友 David 最近选修了中文课程。他来信向你咨询学好中文的方法。请你写一封回信，内容包括：1. 提出建议；2. 表达祝愿。注意：1. 写作词数应为 80 左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dear David,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Ming7．假定你是Emily，是你校英语社的负责人。最近你收到高一学生李华的信，诉说自己的困惑：英语特别难，上课听不懂，考试看不明，开学以来三次考试均不及格：她很焦虑，不知所措。请用英文给该同学回一封信，内容要点如下：1. 表示理解并给予安慰；2. 提出建议并说明理由。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Li Hua,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Emily8．假定你是李华，你的美国笔友John对刚到来的高中生活不太适应，请你给他写一封建议信。内容包括：1.鼓励其广交朋友；2.积极参加体育活动，强身健体；3.努力奋斗进入理想大学。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear John,I’m so pleased to hear that you’ve been in Senior High School. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thanks for your attention!Yours,Li Hua9．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Lily在她的微博中写到她为了减肥吃减肥药，而且经常不吃饭，导致身体变得很虚弱，状态很不佳。请你用英文给她写一封建议信，内容包括：1. 对她的现状表示担忧；2. 指出吃减肥药以及经常不吃饭的坏处；3. 提出一些健康的减肥方法，如慢跑、定期到健身房健身等。注意：1.词数80左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：减肥药weight­loss pill　慢跑jogging 健身房gymDear Lily,I’m sorry to learn that you are upset about being over-weight recently. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua10．你是李华,你的英国朋友Chris来信询问怎样保持身体健康，请你根据以下提示，给他写一封回信。内容要点：(1)健康的饮食； (2)适当的运动； (3)良好的生活习惯。注意 : 1. 词数80左右;2. 开头和结尾已经给出,不算词数 3. 可以适当增加细节,并将开头型结尾抄写在答题卡上,以使行文连贯。Dear Chris,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua             1．Dear TomYou say you want to lose weight but you are not sure how to do it correctly.I believe doing regular exercise is a good way to lose weight. It is important that you should do some sports for an hour every day. You may choose to do some running, play basketball, go swimming or go to a gym. You can also go for a long walk after supper.At the same time, a balanced diet is also very helpful. You are supposed to have more fruits and vegetables and you’d better not eat any junk food, such as hamburgers and potato chips. They contain lots of fat in them. You should also avoid eating sweet foods. There is one more important thing to remember: it is not safe to take weight-loss pills, which have side-effects and do harm to your health.I am sure you will feel better and look better in a few months if you keep regular exercise and go on a diet long enough.Best wishes.Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给朋友写一封关于减肥的建议信。内容包括：1. 常运动，适当节食；2. 避免使用减肥药，不食用垃圾食品。【详解】1. 词汇积累正确地：correctly→properly同时：At the same time→Meanwhile有益的：helpful→beneficial对......有害：do harm to→be harmful to2. 句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：You say you want to lose weight but you are not sure how to do it correctly.拓展句：Although you say you want to lose weight, you are not sure how to do it correctly.【点睛】【高分句型1】I believe doing regular exercise is a good way to lose weight.(运用了非谓语动词作主语)【高分句型2】There is one more important thing to remember: it is not safe to take weight-loss pills, which have side-effects and do harm to your health.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)2．One possible version:Dear Peter,Knowing that you will come to China for the 2022 Winter Olympic Games, I’m very delighted. As for how to improve your spoken Chinese in a short time, I’d like to give you some suggestions.To begin with, make more Chinese friends in your daily life, and you can practice your spoken Chinese with them. What’s more, listening to Chinese songs and watching Chinese movies are also good ways, which can help you broaden your horizons and improve your listening skills.  Last but not least, the more Chinese tests you take, the more progress you will make.I hope you’ll make great progress in oral Chinese.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份，就如何提高汉语水平，给Peter写一封回信。【详解】1. 词汇积累高兴的：delighted→joyful建议：suggestion→advice此外：What’s more→Besides看电影：watch movies→see films2. 句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：To begin with, make more Chinese friends in your daily life, and you can practice your spoken Chinese with them.拓展句：To begin with, you can make more Chinese friends in your daily life, which can practice your spoken Chinese with them.【点睛】[高分句型1] Knowing that you will come to China for the 2022 Winter Olympic Games, I’m very delighted.（运用现在分词作状语，that引导宾语从句）[高分句型2] What’s more, listening to Chinese songs and watching Chinese movies are also good ways, which can help you broaden your horizons and improve your listening skills.（运用动名词短语作主语，which引导非限制性定语从句）3．Dear Peter,I’m glad to learn you’re interested in Chinese literature. As you requested, I’d like to recommend the book “Journey to the West” to you. Regarded as one of the four classics in Chinese literature, the book possesses great wisdom and essence of the Chinese language, which makes it worthwhile to read. Furthermore, the book tells an interesting story in which a famous monk in Tang Dynasty went west for the true story with his three apprentices who had super power. It attracts several generations, old and young. You may find it challenging to read the original classic, so I advise you should read the simplified versions. Some versions come with many pictures, which makes it easy for readers like you to understand. Hopefully you will fall in love with this great work. Looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter发来邮件，表示他对中国文学很感兴趣，希望你给他推荐相关书籍，你决定给他推荐西游记。现在请你给他回复邮件。【详解】1.推荐：recommend→suggest被看作：be regarded as→be considered as此外：furthermore→what’s more理解：understand→make sense of2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Regarded as one of the four classics in Chinese literature, the book possesses great wisdom and essence of the Chinese language…拓展句：The book, which is regarded as one of the four classics in Chinese literature, possesses great wisdom and essence of the Chinese language…【点睛】【高分句型1】As you requested, I’d like to recommend the book “Journey to the West” to you.（运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句）【高分句型2】Regarded as one of the four classics in Chinese literature, the book possesses great wisdom and essence of the Chinese language, which makes it worthwhile to read.（运用了过去分词作定语，which引导非限制性定语从句）【高分句型3】Furthermore, the book tells an interesting story in which a famous monk in Tang Dynasty went west for the true story with his three apprentices who had super power.（运用了in which和who引导的定语从句）4．Dear Ben,Learning you are addicted to playing computer games recently, I’m really concerned about you. And I’m writing to give you some advice.Actually, playing computer games for too long has a bad effect on our study, and even does harm to our health. So you should get rid of it as soon as possible. I think you can try adopting a healthier lifestyle by doing things like reading. Take part in school activities, which can help you make friends and broaden your horizons.Hope my advice will be helpful to you.Yours,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给交换生好友Ben回信，对他沉迷游戏表达担忧并提出建议。【详解】1.词汇积累建议：advice→suggestion实际上：actually→in fact对……有不良影响：have a bad effect on→have a bad influence on参加：take part in→join in2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Actually, playing computer games for too long has a bad effect on our study, and even does harm to our health.拓展句：Actually, playing computer games for too long has a bad effect on our study, which even does harm to our health.【点睛】【高分句型1】Learning you are addicted to playing computer games recently, I’m really concerned about you. (运用了现在分词作状语及省略连接词that的宾语从句)【高分句型2】Take part in school activities, which can help you make friends and broaden your horizons. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)5．Dear Peter,Sorry to know that you are struggling with your current situation. It is of course not easy to get rid of a bad habit. However, there’re always something you can do if you have a willing heart.First, examine your bad habit cycles and try to adjust them, replacing a negative routine with something more positive. Aside from changing bad habits, you can use the habit cycle to create good ones. But do remember, there is no short cut or magic pill that will help. You have to show strong discipline and repeatedly take many small steps. Where there is a will, there is a way. I’m sure you have the power to build a happy and healthy life full of good habits.                                                                                                                                                              Yours,                                                                                                                                                             Li Hua【导语】这是一篇应用文。文章要求考生给你朋友Peter回信，给出如何摆脱不良习惯的建议并给予鼓励。【详解】1.词汇积累检查：examine → check除……之外，还……：Aside from → in addition to帮助：help → assist重复地，再三地：repeatedly → over and over again2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：It is of course not easy to get rid of a bad habit.拓展句：A bad habit, which causes a lot of trouble for you, is not easy to get rid of.【点睛】【高分句型1】However, there’re always something you can do if you have a willing heart. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句)【高分句型2】Where there is a will, there is a way. (运用了谚语和where引导的地点状语从句)6．Dear David,I'm delighted to learn that you've started learning Chinese! Knowing that would like to have a better command of Chinese, I'm writing to share with you some practical suggestions, just for your reference.    With proper guidance and enough practice, you're bound to learn Chinese well. To begin with, it is advisable that you regularly watch some Chinese learning programs, which will expose you to an authentic learning atmosphere and will help you develop a better understanding of Chinese culture. Besides, you'd better make some Chinese friends and communicate with them as much as possible. With frequent communication in real life, you'll eventually improve your oral Chinese and feel more confident.   Hopefully my tips above can be of some help. Wish you  success.                                                                                                                                                                                                      Yours,                                                                                                                                 Li Ming【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生的外国朋友 David 最近选修了中文课程。他来信向考生咨询学好中文的方法。要求考生写一封回信。【详解】1.词汇积累高兴的：delighted→happy此外：besides → what’s more希望：wish→hope真实的：real→authentic2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Knowing that you would like to have a better command of Chinese, I'm writing to share with you some practical suggestions, just for your reference.拓展句：After I know that you would like to have a better command of Chinese, I'm writing to share with you some practical suggestions, just for your reference.【点睛】【高分句型1】I'm delighted to learn that you've started learning Chinese!（运用了that引导的宾语从句）【高分句型2】To begin with, it is advisable that you regularly watch some Chinese learning programs, which will expose you to an authentic learning atmosphere and will help you develop a better understanding of Chinese culture.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）7．Dear Li Hua,Terribly sorry to receive your letter telling me your confusion, I hasten to write to your to give you some ideas.Personally, it normal for you to feel difficult to learn English, not understanding what teachers said in class or even failed in the exams. As a new senior student, it will take you sometime to adjust yourself to the busy and high-pressure life. So first and foremost, it is of vital significance to keep calm, remember being worried must be avoided. What’s more, turning to teachers or classmates for help is also a wise choice, for they may give you more practical and concrete proposals. Finally, nothing is better than listening to some English music or watching some English movie for you to improve your English in a short time, which will provide a good learning atmosphere.Wish my suggestions useful.Yours,Emily【导语】本篇书面表达为一篇应用文。要求学生写给处于学习困境中的李华写一封建议信。【详解】1.词汇积累：建议：proposal→suggestion/advice重要：significance→importance提供：provide→offer有用的：useful→helpful2.句式拓展：原句：What’s more, turning to teachers or classmates for help is also a wise choice, for they may give you more practical and concrete proposals.拓展句：Additionally, it is a wise choice for you to turn to teachers or classmates for help, who may give you more practical and concrete proposals.【点睛】【高分句型1】Terribly sorry to receive your letter telling me your confusion, I hasten to write to your to give you some ideas.(运用了形容词做状语)【高分句型2】Finally, nothing is better than listening to some English music or watching some English movie for you to improve your English in a short time, which will provide a good learning atmosphere.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)8．Dear John,I’m so pleased to hear that you’ve been in Senior High School. And maybe you need a couple of months to adjust yourself. Here are some tips for you.Firstly, a life without a friend is a life without the sun, so why no make some friends? Secondly, we can take an active part in sports in our spare time so that we can get into shape, which will surely be good for us. Besides, study hard to make sure that one day our dream of entering a key university will come true. I believe you’ll get used to it soon and I’ll wait for your good news.Thanks for your attention!Yours,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，你的美国笔友John对刚到来的高中生活不太适应，请你给他写一封建议信。【详解】1.词汇积累建议：tip→advice闲暇时间：spare time→leisure time当然：surely→certainly此外：besides→in addition2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：And maybe you need a couple of months to adjust yourself. Here are some tips for you.拓展句：Since you need a couple of months to adjust yourself, here are some tips for you.【点睛】[高分句型1] Secondly, we can take an active part in sports in our spare time so that we can get into shape, which will surely be good for us. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2] Besides, study hard to make sure that one day our dream of entering a key university will come true. (运用了动名词作宾语)9．Dear Lily,I’m sorry to learn that you are upset about being over-weight recently. I think you should stop taking weight-loss pills in no time because they are harmful to your health. Besides, you need to eat a healthy diet to recover your strength. There are many other ways to lose weight. For example, jogging is quite a popular form of exercise. You may do it in the morning or after supper. Another way is that you can go to the gym regularly, which is also an effective way of losing weight and keeping healthy. In a word, if you insist on exercising, you are sure to have an attractive figure and stay slim and health.Yours,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Lily在她的微博中写到她为了减肥吃减肥药，而且经常不吃饭，导致身体变得很虚弱，状态很不佳。请你用英文给她写一封建议信。【详解】1.词汇积累沮丧：frustrated→upset有效的：efficient→effective对……有害：do harm to→be harmful to此外：in addition→besides2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：For example, jogging is quite a popular form of exercise. You may do it in the morning or after supper.拓展句：For example, jogging is quite a popular form of exercise, which you may do in the morning or after supper.【点睛】[高分句型1] I think you should stop taking weight-loss pills in no time because they are harmful to your health. (运用了because引导原因状语从句)[高分句型2] In a word, if you insist on exercising, you are sure to have an attractive figure and stay slim and health. (运用了if引导条件状语从句)10．Dear Chris,How nice to hear from you! In your letter you asked me how to keep healthy. I would like to give you some advice.As we know, we teenagers grow very fast, so we need plenty of nutritious foods, such as fish, beans, fresh fruit and vegetables. Also, you should take physical exercise regularly instead of studying all the time. What’s more, having enough sleep is very important. So I advise you to have at least eight hours of sleep every day and not to stay up too late. Only in this way can we keep fit.YoursLi Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，你是李华,你的英国朋友Chris来信询问怎样保持身体健康，请你根据以下提示，给他写一封回信。【详解】1.词汇积累收到某人来信：hear from→get a letter from建议：advice→suggestion众所周知：as we know→as is known to us锻炼：exercise→work out2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：In your letter you asked me how to keep healthy.拓展句：In your letter you asked me how you could keep healthy.【点睛】[高分句型1] As we know, we teenagers grow very fast, so we need plenty of nutritious foods, such as fish, beans, fresh fruit and vegetables. (运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2] Only in this way can we keep fit. (运用了部分倒装)