浙江高考英语写作分类训练：申请信

这是一份浙江高考英语写作分类训练：申请信，共14页。试卷主要包含了假定你是光明中学学生李明，假定你是李华，假设你是光明中学的高中生李华，书面表达等内容，欢迎下载使用。
申请信1．假定你是光明中学学生李明。你在China Daily上读到一则招聘中学生兼职记者的广告，你有意应聘这份工作。请写一封申请信，信的内容包括:1.表述申请意愿2.自我介绍以及申请理由。注意1.词数80左右，开头和结尾已为你写好，不计人总词数;2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Sir/Madam______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thank you for reading my letter and I'm looking forward to your reply.Sincerely yours,Li Ming2．假定你是高三学生李华，最近你从互联网上看到香港中文大学计划在浙江招收20名高三毕业生的信息，你对此非常感兴趣并有意报考该校的英语专业。请你给香港中文大学写一封申请信。信的内容包括以下要点：要点：1.你的个人信息；2.你的个人优势：如所取得的成绩，特长，爱好等、3.进入香港大学后的设想注意：1. 80词左右2. 可适当增减细节，以使行文连贯—————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————3．假定你是李华，你校英语协会招聘志愿者，接待来访的国外中学生。请你写信应聘，内容包括：（1） 口语能力：（2） 相关经验；（3） 应聘目的。注意：（1） 词数80左右；（2） 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。4．假定你是李华。你从互联网上得知第十二届国际未来商业领袖峰会（International Future Business Leader Summit）将在上海举行，并欢迎中学生参加。请你写一封电子邮件申请参加。要点如下：1.自我介绍（包括英语能力）；2.申请参加活动的意图（增长商业知识、提高领导力、加强交流）；3.希望获准。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．假设你是光明中学的高中生李华。你校拟选拔一些优秀学生，利用暑期到星光希望小学为学生辅导英语。你希望参加此活动。请根据以下提示，用英语给校评选组写一封申请信： •对此活动的认识（如对本人、学校及社会的益处等）  •个人优势（如性格、独立生活能力、语言能力等） •你的计划（如怎样进行辅导等）注意：1.词数80词;2.可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯;3.信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数。参考词汇： 星光希望小学Xing Guang Hope SchoolDear Sir or Madam,I am Li Hua from Class One, Senior One .________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________                                                               Yours SincerelyLi Hua6．全国中学生运动会将会在你市举行，组委会现面向全市中学生征集志愿者。假如你是李华，请给组委会负责人Mr. Li写封信，申请成为一名志愿者。内容要点包括：1．个人情况；2．为什么申请当志愿者; 3．你将如何当好这个志愿者。注意：1.词数100左右；  2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文流畅。参考词汇：全国中学生运动national high school sports meetingDear Mr Li,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7．假设你是李华，想成为英国某培训机构的一名教汉语的志愿者。请根据以下内容用英语写一封申请信。1.成为志愿者能介绍中国的文化；2.自己的优势；3.表达自己的盼望之情。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Sir or Madam,As we know, a growing number of countries hope to know more about China.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Looking forward to your early reply.Yours, sincerely,Li Hua8．假如你是光明中学高一学生李明, 澳大利亚环保协会组织一次为期两周的“澳大利亚生态游”活动, 作为一名环保志愿者, 希望得到这次机会。请按以下提示向该组织写一封申请信：1. 个人情况介绍(如性格,业余爱好,语言优势等)2. 申请理由(参观野生动物自然保护区,了解澳大利亚环保情况)3. 对本次活动的期待……注意: 1.字数100字左右，信的开头和结尾已给出.(不记入总字数)2.可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯.Dear Sir,I feel delighted to know that Australian Environmental Council will host a two-week eco-tour to Australia. As an environmental volunteer, I9．阅读下面一则广告，按照要求完成写作任务。EIL International English Summer CampVolunteer Wanted EIL was founded in Britain in 1936 with the fundamental aim of international understanding “Learn to live together by living together”.Requirements: Over 16; good knowledge of English; outgoing; working well with children between 7-12Activities: Language study, outdoor recreation and travelCampers: Students from different countriesCamp site: Mount Wuyi, FujianTime: July 26-August 9Application deadline: July 15. 2008 If interested, please e-mail to info@eiuk.org [写作内容]假设你是李华，这则广告引起了你的兴趣，请用英文写一封自荐信。要求如下：对夏令营主题的理解；根据招聘要求自我介绍；参加夏令营的目的。注意：1. 信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；2.词数100左右。Dear sir,I’m Li Hua from Fujian. I am looking forward to your early reply.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Sincerely yours, Li Hua10．书面表达假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教Ms Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）。注意： 1. 词数100左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯。               1．Dear Sir/ Madam,I'm a student from Guangming Middle School. I've read your advertisement in your newspaper for a part-time reporter and I am writing to apply for it.I think I am fit for your job. First of all, I am outgoing and gifted in communicating with people. Besides, I can speak fluent English thanks to my volunteering experiences in an international organization. Most importantly, I have a nose for news, which might help me to get a scoop if I am offered the job.Thank you for reading my letter and I'm looking forward to your reply.Sincerely yours,Li Ming【导语】本文书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给China Daily写一封申请信，应聘该报兼职记者的工作中。【详解】1.词汇积累适合：be fit for → be suitable for对……有天赋：be gifted in → have a talent for此外：besides → what’s more对……敏感：have a nose for → be sensitive to 2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Besides, I can speak fluent English thanks to my volunteering experiences in an international organization.拓展句：Besides, I can speak fluent English because I have volunteering experiences in an international organization.【点睛】【高分句型1】I think I am fit for your job.(运用了省略that的宾语从句)【高分句型2】I have a nose for news, which might help me to get a scoop if I am offered the job.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句和if引导的条件状语从句)2．Dear Sir / Madam ,I am Li Hua , a Senior 3 student .I am studying in Xinhua High School. I would like to apply for admission to the English department in your university.I have been  dreaming  to further my study in your prestigious English Department. I have completed all the required courses  with favourable scores . My specialty is English speech and writing . I have attended the national English speaking  and writing  competition and  the results are satisfactory. What’s more, I am the president of the Students’ Union with  outstanding organizational skills. I intend to participate in more meaningful activities to learn some advanced management experience if I am admitted to your university. I would like to express my gratitude for your kind consideration. Looking forward to your early reply. Best wishes!Yours sincerely,Li Hua【分析】此文为提纲式作文，文章为申请信，主要介绍个人基本情况，优势以及自己的未来设想。【详解】文章可主要采用第一人称，时态可采用一般现在时。文章第一段主要介绍写信的背景（最近你从互联网上看到香港中文大学计划在浙江招收20名高三毕业生的信息）点名写作目的（你对此非常感兴趣并有意报考该校的英语专业）。第二段则主要介绍自己的基本情况，包括年龄，毕业学校等，此外介绍自己的优势：成绩，特长，爱好。第三段则主要介绍自己的希望与未来的打算。【点睛】文章开门见山，点名写作目的。文章语言流畅，语义连贯，长短句结合。其中高级词汇的使用为文章增色不少，如：apply for admission to，the required courses with favorable scores，specialty ，outstanding organizational skills，advanced management experience等。此外巧妙使用连接词what’s more等。3．One possible version:Dear Sir or Madam,My name is Li Hua. And I am writing to apply for being a volunteer of our school English association.I have a good command of English and have been to the USA twice. So I can communicate well with native speakers of English. What’s more, I am kind and friendly to other people. So I can easily get along with foreign students.I’m particularly interested in this job because I want to further improve my oral English capabilities and interpersonal communication skills.Hopefully I can receive your acceptance.Yours faithfully,Li Hua【详解】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封申请信。第一步：根据提示可知，学校英语协会招聘志愿者，接待来访的国外中学生。要求写封应聘信，内容包括：1. 口语能力：2. 相关经验；3. 应聘目的。第二步：根据写作要求确定关键词、短语和句子：I’m writing to apply for…，a good command of English，communicate with，get along with等。第三步：根据提示和关键词（组）进行遣词造句，本文时态应以现在时为主，人称为第一人称。第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。4．Dear Sir or Madam,I'm Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I read about your announcement of the 12th International Future Business Leader Summit posted on the Internet. I’m writing to apply for an opportunity to join in it.Ten years of English learning enables me to have a good command of this language. What’s more, I can deepen my understanding of business, improve my leadership and communicate with students from other countries as well. I do hope to be admitted to your summit.I look forward to your reply!Regards,Li Hua【详解】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封电子邮件；你从互联网上得知第十二届国际未来商业领袖峰会（International Future Business Leader Summit）将在上海举行，并欢迎中学生参加，你写一封电子邮件申请参加，要点如下：自我介绍（包括英语能力），申请参加活动的意图（增长商业知识、提高领导力、加强交流），希望获准。人称使用第一人称，时态应为一般现在时。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：a middle school student（一名中学生），apply for（申请），opportunity（机会），enable sb. to do sth.（使某人能做某事），deepen（加深），understanding of business（商业理解），improve my leadership（提高我的领导能力），communicate（交流），be admitted（被录用）等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【亮点说明】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如同位语I'm Li Hua, a middle school student from China.；强调句I do hope to be admitted to your summit.；非谓语动词I read about your announcement of the 12th International Future Business Leader Summit posted on the Internet.全文中没有中国式英语的句式，语言精练，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。5．Dear Sir or Madam,I’m Li Hua from Class One, Senior One. I’m writing to apply for the opportunity to help the students inXingGuang Hope School with their English. Thus, they can improve their English during the summer vacation. Meanwhile, I can learn how to get along with the students and benefit the whole school.I’m kind, easy-going and always ready to help others. I wash clothes and make beds by myself to develop independence. English is my favorite subject and I’ve won several prizes in English contests. So I think that I’m qualified for the position. I plan to communicate with the students first to know what they need. Besides, I’ll try to get them more interested in English by telling stories, singing songs, playing games and so on.I’d appreciate it if you could give me the opportunity.【详解】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求根据提示写一封申请信。文章应包括对活动的认识，个人优势以及计划等要点，本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。【亮点说明】本篇范文结构合理，涵盖了所有要点。第一段写了对此次活动的认识，第二段是作者本身的优势，第三段是对活动的计划。作者在范文中使用了较多的高级词汇和短语，比如get along with, benefit, independence, communicate with等；另外作文中还使用了很多连贯词，比如thus, meanwhile等。这使文章更加连贯顺畅。6．Dear Mr. Li,My name is Li Hua, a high school student in our city. Knowing that the national high school sports meeting will be held in our city, I am so excited that I can’t wait to write to you to apply to be a volunteer.As a sports-lover myself, I have a general idea of the rules of different events. In addition, I am also good at communicating with others and eager to lend a hand to people in need. With the spirit of voluntary work rooted in my heart, I am sure that I can be a suitable volunteer you need. If I am honored enough to be accepted as a volunteer, I will serve the players heart and soul, using my patience and carefulness to make them feel at home.Look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, LiHua【详解】此文为提纲式作文中的申请信，要点主要包括：1：得知这则消息：全国中学生运动会将会在你市举行，组委会现面向全市中学生征集志愿者。2：申请的原因3：自己当选后的打算时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。亮点分析：1。a high school student in our city.同位语，2．Knowing that the national high school sports meeting will be held in our city,做状语，表原因。using my patience and carefulness to make them feel at home.分词做状语3．I am so excited that I can’t wait to write to your to apply to be a volunteer.此句中用了so。。。that4．With the spirit of voluntary work rooted in my heart，with 的复合结构5．高级短语：have a general idea of ，lend a hand to，be accepted as，make them feel at home。7．One possible version:Dear Sir or Madam，As we know, a growing number of countries hope to know more about China. As a Chinese student, I sincerely wish that I would have an opportunity to be a volunteer to introduce the excellent and traditional culture of China to British people. I’m diligent. That is, I can deal with what I meet in my daily life independently. I have a good knowledge of Chinese culture and have a gift for communicating with others. Apart from that, I am expert at oral English so that I can share my ideas with British people fluently. Finally, I’m always ready to help others in need.In a word, I wish to have a chance to talk more about China and make lots of contributions to Chinese teaching in Britain.Looking forward to your early reply.Your sincerely,Li Hua【详解】试题分析：考查开放性作文写作,开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，范文中运用一些常见的短语As we know正如我们所知；That is那就是说；deal with处理；daily life日常生活；communicate with与...交谈；Apart from除此之外；have a chance有机会；Look forward to期待等。考点：提纲类作文8．I feel delighted to know that Australian Environmental Council will host a two-week eco-tour to Australia. As an environmental volunteer, I sincerely want to take part in this activity and introduce myself as follows:I’m a senior one student, studying in Guangming High School. I’m an easy-going and hard-working boy. What interests me most is eco-tour. I have taken part in many activities, which give me a deep impression. At the same time I can speak English fluently and can easily communicate with local people.The aim to apply for this activity is to understand how to develop eco-tour in Australia. And I hope I’ll have the chance to pay a visit to the wildlife nature reserves and have a better understanding of environment protection . I’m sure I will benefit a lot from this two-week eco-tour. I’d appreciate it if you can take my application into consideration.Look forward to hearing your reply.Yours,Li Ming【详解】试题分析：本题是一篇书信类作文，主要的要求有：1. 个人情况介绍(如性格,业余爱好,语言优势等)2. 申请理由(参观野生动物自然保护区,了解澳大利亚环保情况)3. 对本次活动的期待……需要注意: 1.字数100字左右，信的开头和结尾已给出.(不记入总字数) 2.可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯.亮点说明：本题运用了多段描写的方式，写出了文章所需要的要点。用了一般现在时，现在完成时，一般过去时等时态，条理清楚，表达简洁不啰嗦。是一篇不错的文章，而且错误很少。考点：考查书信类作文9．Dear sir,I’m Li Hua from Fujian. When I was reading the advertisement , the aim of this activity impressed me greatly, I think it instructive to learn to live together by living together. It is a good opportunity for the only child like me to learn to share and work together. Therefore I recommend myself to you without hesitation.As a boy of 17, I am outgoing, good at English and have experience of working well with children aged from 7 to 12, I think it is a kind or win-win activity. For one thing, I can help take care the children. For another thing, I can improve my English, make more friends, and enrich my life during the summer vacation.I am looking forward to your early reply. Sincerely yours, Li Hua【详解】本文是申请信，根据夏令营的详细内容及招聘的具体要求，详细说明自己的具体情况及兴趣爱好，以此表达清楚自己的原因。要用词恰当，表现要比较充分，具备一定的说服力。词汇和语句的运用要正确。范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如When I was reading the advertisement , the aim of this activity impressed me greatly, 形式宾语I think it instructive to learn to live together by living together. 形式主语It is a good opportunity for the only child like me to learn to share and work together. 使用了一些固定词组，如For one thing, For another thing,等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。10．Dear Ms Jenkins,I am Li Hua. I am writing to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer vacation and I also want you to do me a favor.In order to get some practical experience, I am planning to take a part-time job in a foreign capital company. I have already finished my job application and personal resume. But this is the first time that I have written an application and the personal resume, so I don’t even know if there are something to pay attention to. So, I’m writing you the letter , hoping you can give me some help. I will be very grateful if you can help me.Looking forward to your reply.  And I’d be really thankful.Yours,Li Hua【详解】本文是一篇考生们熟悉的书信类体裁的书面表达，内容贴近学生生活，所以人人有话可说。文章没有给出开头和结尾，所以考生要注意书信的格式，包括称呼语，正文以及结束语等。在写作时要注意先列出写作要点，而且要注意将来时、现在时以及现在完成时的交错使用；注意使用高级句式和多种结构的使用，而且语气要委婉礼貌。本文是一篇较为优秀的范文。格式正确，要点全面，语言通顺流畅，很好地完成了写作任务。在本文中开头提出写信的目的，然后具体讲述自己的困难，再提出请求，最后表达自己的感激之情。所以在内容上逻辑性较强。此外，作者还使用了不定式短语In order to get some practical experience, 现在分词短语hoping you can give me some help, 宾语从句if there are something to pay attention to等。经典句式this is the first time that I have written an application and the personal resume也是文章的亮点所在。