2023新教材高考英语二轮专题复习专题五应用文写作先文体再添彩第二讲润色添彩“洋”气十足

这是一份2023新教材高考英语二轮专题复习专题五应用文写作先文体再添彩第二讲润色添彩“洋”气十足，共11页。试卷主要包含了求新求变，求准求精，短语优先，适时感叹，必要强调等内容，欢迎下载使用。
第二讲　润色添彩·“洋”气十足策略(一)　“包装”让词汇高端起来1．求新求变同样意义的词语，要根据语境使用最新学过的而不是小学初中学过的词汇。如果同样的意义重复出现，要使用不同的表达方式。如：①[2022·全国甲卷]It was set up to raise awareness of protecting the oceans, which play an important part in global ecosystem.→It was set up to raise awareness of protecting the oceans, which play a crucial part in global ecosystem.②[2022·全国乙卷]Those who choose to read English books and visit English learning websites only make up 18% and 12% respectively.→Those who choose to read English books and visit English learning websites only account for 18% and 12% respectively.③[2021·全国乙卷]With the wide spread of the Internet，more and more people become online learners.→With the wide spread of the Internet，an increasing number of people become online learners.2．求准求精写作时不一定每一句都要有复杂句式，有时准确使用一个单词就会让整个句子增色。①[2021·全国乙卷]In conclusion，we should find a way to study online better.→In conclusion，we should find a way to study online more efficiently.②[2021·全国甲卷]I am waiting for your early reply.→I am waiting for your early reply eagerly/ with eagerness.3．短语优先恰当使用短语代替单词，不但可以增加词数，还有助于绕开不会表达的单词，使得行文更加流畅。①[2022·全国乙卷]However, from my point of view, what benefits students most is reading English books, for it can help students understand English better.→However, from my point of view, what benefits students most is reading English books, for it can help students gain a deeper understanding of English.②[2022·新高考Ⅰ卷]I believe that your arrival will be important to our show.→I hold the firm belief that your arrival will be of great significance to our show.③[2022·全国乙卷]As is shown by the figures of the chart, thanks to modern technology, many ways are available for students to polish their English.→As is shown by the figures of the chart, thanks to modern technology, a wide range of ways are available for students to polish their English.◎针对训练1——升级加黑词汇①[2022·全国乙卷]A recent survey suggests that most students being interviewed tend to learn English by listening to English songs.________________②[2022·辽宁省联考二]To make us know the importance of the environment protection, our school held a spring tree planting activity in the hill near our school last Saturday. ________________③[2022·全国甲卷]Countries should team up with one another to make practical plans regarding ocean protection.________________④[2022·新高考Ⅰ卷]I would appreciate it if you could consider my application.________________⑤[2021·新高考Ⅰ卷]When feeling sad，I often choose to enjoy the novel part which includes a lot of good stories.________________策略(二)　“换装”让句子新颖起来换用句式时，应遵循以下原则：高级但不造作，多变但不离谱，复杂但不晦涩。1．特殊句式，风景独好(1)运用强调句：强调句型的使用是为了突出强调句子的某一部分，它是一种比较容易掌握的高级表达方式。其构成为：①强调句型基本结构为“It＋is/was＋被强调部分＋that/who＋句子其他部分”；②借助于助动词do/does/did对谓语动词进行强调。◎针对训练2——对加黑部分进行强调①[2022·浙江省五校5月联考]Under your professional guidance, we have made such rapid progress in English.→__________________________ we have made such rapid progress in English. ②[2022·邯郸市一模]We didn't go back to school until noon under the guidance of our teachers.→______________________ we went back to school under the guidance of our teachers.③[2022·全国甲卷]I believe that only with joined efforts can we have a better tomorrow.→I ________________ that only with joined efforts can we have a better tomorrow. (2)运用倒装句，以示强调。在写作中，倒装句应用比较广泛，涉及的句型也比较多，包括部分倒装和全部倒装。常见的有：①“only＋状语”置于句首时，句子用部分倒装；②not only...but also...句子用部分倒装；③在so/such...that...结构中，当so/such...位于句首时，其后的句子用部分倒装；④表方位的副词或者表地点的介词短语置于句首且句子的主语是名词时，句子用全部倒装。◎针对训练3——用倒装句式升级①[2022·全国甲卷]Oceans not only provide abundant resources and food for us, but they are also crucial for the global climate development.→__________________________ resources and food for us, but they are also crucial for the global climate development.②[2022·湖南师大附中模拟二]We can make great progress in our progress only when we practice listening, speaking, reading, and writing English frequently.→Only when we practice listening, speaking, reading, and writing English frequently ____________________．③[2021·新高考Ⅰ卷读后续写]Their father instructed them so patiently that the twins made the breakfast fast and well.→____________________________ the twins made the breakfast fast and well.④An old temple which dates back to Ming Dynasty stands at the foot of the mountain.→At the foot of the mountain ________________________，which dates back to Ming Dynasty.(3)运用省略句，避免不必要的重复。◎针对训练4——句型转换①[2022·山东师范大学附中考前打靶]When you prepare for the competition, you need to have much knowledge about Chinese stories.→________________________， you need to have much knowledge about Chinese stories.②If it is possible，avoid going to crowded public places such as cinemas，shopping malls, Internet bars and so on.→____________________，avoid going to crowded public places such as cinemas，shopping malls, Internet bars and so on.2．三大句式，编排巧妙(1)运用定语从句：◎针对训练5——句型转换①[2022·山东省德州市高三二模]The activity will take place on March the 23rd, Saturday. The activity aims to promote Chinese culture.→The activity, __________________________， will take place on March the 23rd, Saturday.②[2022·武汉市模拟一]Various activities have been held.  The purpose of them was to raise our awareness of campus safety.→Various activities have been held, __________________________ campus safety.③[2022·青岛市高三一模]My class went to Qingyuan community at 9：00 a．m. In Qingyuan community we were divided into five groups to care for the elderly and tell them some health knowledge.→My class went to Qingyuan community at 9：00 a．m, ____________________________ and tell them some health knowledge.(2)运用名词性从句：◎针对训练6——补全句子①[2022·3月福州市质量检测]我十二岁生日，我最想要的是一辆新自行车。It was my twelfth birthday, and __________________. ②[2022·全国甲卷]不可否认，我们将共同努力，对海洋环境做出巨大贡献。______________________the marine environment with joined efforts.③[2022·深圳市高三二模]这次经历给我的教训是，只有勇敢地承担失败的全部责任，而不是指责别人，才能取得成功。______________________ only by bravely taking full responsibility for failure rather than blaming others can we succeed.(3)运用状语从句：◎针对训练7——补全句子①[2022·山东省淄博市二模]我们首先需要接受自己，因为这有助于我们承认自己的缺点。通过这样做，当我们遇到失败时，我们更有可能吸取教训。We need to accept ourselves firstly ________________________. By doing so, we are more likely to learn the lessons __________________．②[2022·济南市高三模拟]虽然这是一个非常简单的任务，但我很自豪，因为它在维持现场秩序方面发挥了重要的作用。__________________________， I was very proud of it ______________________ maintaining the order of the scene.3．活用非谓语，让表达言简意赅用非谓语动词整合简单句、并列句或复合句，提升表达档次，使句子凝练高端。◎针对训练8——用非谓语升级句式①[2022·新高考Ⅰ卷]I represent the English program of our school's radio station. I'm writing to invite you to give an interview.→______________ our school's radio station, I'm writing to invite you to give an interview.②[2022·新高考Ⅰ卷]The radio program was founded in 2016. It aimed to provide a good platform for the students to share their school life.→The radio program was founded in 2016, ____________________________ to share their school life.③[2021·全国乙卷满分作文]When we are faced with all kinds of information on the Internet, we can't tell the difference between the true and the false, which may be harmful to our study and life.(用非谓语动词短语转换)→________________________， we can't tell the difference between the true and the false, which may be harmful to our study and life.4．适时感叹，必要强调◎针对训练9——补全句子①[2020·全国Ⅱ卷满分作文]________________________ (我们玩得多么开心啊)! Not only did it give us relaxation，but also it got us closer to nature.②[2021·新高考Ⅰ卷](早餐多么美味啊！)____________________________！策略(三)　“改装”让细节丰满起来在英语写作中，适当增加细节内容，能使习作流畅、丰满，达到应有的表达效果。1．增加同位语或定语从句◎针对训练10——补全句子①[2022·南京市高考模拟卷一]I'm Li Hua, ____________________________ (来自中国的交换生), and I'm looking for a roommate to co­rent a flat during my stay in the UK.②[2022·潍坊市高三二模] They don't have enough time to attend to the old people in their families, ________________________________ (这已经成为社会的一个问题).2．列举具体的实例来补充说明①such as.../like...将来，我认为我们学校可以提供一些活动。[2022·全国乙卷]In the future, I think our school could provide some activities such as reading book clubs or English corners to further inspire students' interest in learning English.②for example /instance如今，我们中的一些人在校园里养成了一些坏习惯。Nowadays, some of us have formed some bad habits on campus. For instance, some students leave the lights on in the daytime; some leave much food on the table after eating.3．添加与所给信息有关的原因、结果、条件、让步、手段、目的等内容◎针对训练11——补全句子①[2022·湖北省新高考协作体2月联考]My class went to China Science and Technology Museum.→______________________(为了更好地理解历史课上的“中国古代发明”), my class went to China Science and Technology Museum.②[2022·全国乙卷]As far as I am concerned, students should do more listening and speaking.→As far as I am concerned, students should do more listening and speaking ______________________(这样他们就能培养自己的沟通技巧). ③[2022·全国甲卷]We will make a difference to the marine environment.→__________________________(只要我们尽力), we will make a difference to the marine environment. ④[2022·湘潭市一模]However, many of us ignore the importance of good living habits.→However, many of us ignore the importance of good living habits ____________________ (通过吃垃圾食品和熬夜).⑤I am more than delighted to share some details with you.→____________________________ (知道您对我们的“珍爱生命”活动感兴趣), I am more than delighted to share some details with you.4．表达感受、评价、愿望、倡议等◎针对训练12——补全句子①Although I was very tired this summer holiday，I felt very happy for what I did.→Although I was very tired this summer holiday，I felt very happy for what I did ______________________ (因为我学到了耕种的知识).②I think such activities are necessary and meaningful.→I think such activities are necessary and meaningful，__________________________ (从中我学到，如果可能的话，我们应该帮助有困难的人).③[2022·焦作市第四次模拟]I hold the firm belief that it was the most unforgettable lunch in my life.→I hold the firm belief that it was the most unforgettable lunch in my life，__________________________(因为它使我享受劳动的乐趣).策略(四)　“化装”让语篇靓丽起来根据行文或段落需要，在句与句或段与段之间适当增加过渡词语，使文章浑然一体。1．表示“首先”的词语：first/firstly, first of all, to begin/start with等。①First of all, we must make full use of every 45­minute lesson.②To begin with, smoking should be banned in public areas.2．表示“其次”的词语：second/secondly, besides, in addition, what's more, furthermore, moreover等。①Secondly, we should get up early to memorize idioms and useful expressions.②What's more, good books can help us to develop good characters.③[2022·武汉市五月模拟一]Besides, our school made it a routine to have regular fire drills where we learned to face fire emergencies calmly.3．表示“最后”的词语：last/lastly, last but not least, most importantly等。①Last but not least, health is also very significant for us students.②Most importantly, reading those books opened a window for me to another world and gave me a new point of view.4．表示“总之”的词语：in short, in brief, in conclusion, in a/one word, to sum up, all in all, on the whole, in general等。In a word，success is important，and so is failure，because it's the mother of success.◎针对训练13——补全句子①________________ (首先), as smart online learners, we can make full use of the most extensive educational resources to broaden the horizon.②[2021·全国乙卷满分作文]______________ (此外), we can take the initiative in our study by ourselves without time and space limit.第二讲　润色添彩， “洋”气十足针对训练1①the majority of②raise  our awareness of③work out④take...into consideration/account⑤depressed; imaginative针对训练2①It was under your professional guidance that②It was not until noon that③do believe针对训练3①Not only do oceans provide abundant②can we make great progress in our progress③So patiently did their father instruct them that④stands an old temple针对训练4①When preparing for the competition②If possible针对训练5①which aims to promote Chinese culture②the purpose of which was to raise our awareness of③where we were divided into five groups to care for the elderly针对训练6①what I really wanted most was a new bicycle②There is no denying that we will make a difference to③The lesson I have drawn from this experience is that针对训练7①because it helps us acknowledge our shortcomings; when we encounter failures②Although it was a very simple task; because it played an important role in针对训练8①Representing the English program of②aiming to provide a good platform for the students③Faced with all kinds of information on the Internet针对训练9①What a wonderful time we had②How delicious the breakfast was针对训练10①(who is) an exchange student from China②which has become a social problem针对训练11①In order to better understand “Ancient Chinese Inventions” in the history class②so that they can develop their communication skills③As long as we try our best④by eating junk food and staying up late⑤Knowing that you are interested in our Cherish Life activity针对训练12①because I got a knowledge of farming experience②from which I learn that we should help people who are in trouble if possible③because it made me enjoy the pleasure of labor针对训练13①First of all②Besides