北京高考英语写作分类训练：建议信

这是一份北京高考英语写作分类训练：建议信，共16页。试卷主要包含了假设你是红星中学高三学生李华等内容，欢迎下载使用。
建议信1．春节将至，你校英国交换生Jim接受了去你家共度除夕的邀请，请你就他关心的问题写一封邮件。内容包括:1.很高兴他接受了邀请;2.介绍你家除夕的安排;3.答复他的问题(如:是否带礼物……)。注意：1.词数不少于50;2.开头和结尾已给出，不计人总词数。Dear Jim,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua2．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你班交换生 Jim 假期要回国，打算为父母带件礼物， 写信向你征求建议。请你给他回封电子邮件，内容包括：1.  推荐一份礼物；2.  说明推荐理由；3.  建议如何购买。 注意：1. 词数不少于 50；2.  邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jim,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua3．假设你是高三学生李华，你的母校校刊编辑邀请你给初三的同学写一封公开信，内容包括：1．你在高三的学习和生活情况；2．你对英语学习意义的认识；3．你对初三同学英语学习的建议．注意：1．内容包括以上要点，但不要逐句翻译；2．字数100左右，文章开头结尾已提供，不计入总词数．Dear fellow students：I'd like to share with you some of my thoughts．______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，Li hua4．【2018·北京】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文化感兴趣，计划明年来北京上大学。他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回邮件，内容包括：(1) 表示欢迎；(2) 推荐他上哪所大学；(3) 建议他做哪些准备工作。注意：(1). 词数不少于50；(2). 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jim,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua5．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你写信建议你的美国朋友George 参加中国日报 （China Daily）专门为外国人举办的2018“最美中国”（Amazing China）手机摄影大赛。信的内容包括:1. 作品内容要求；2. 提交时间和方式；3. 表示愿意提供帮助。注意： 1. 词数不少于50；2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear George,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua6．假如你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国朋友Jim发来邮件，谈到少数中国游客在国外的不文明行为。请你给Jim回信，内容包括：1. 可能出现的不文明行为；2. 主要成因；3. 你的看法或建议。注意：1.词数不少于50；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jim,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua7．你的英国朋友Jim要参加外国人学唱中国歌曲比赛，有两首歌可以选择：“好一朵美丽的茉莉花”或者“明月几时有”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容包括：1．你建议的歌曲；2．你的理由；3．你的祝愿。注意：1. 词数不少于50；2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数。提示词：茉莉花：Jasmine Flower    明月几时有：The Mid-Autumn TuneDear Jim,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua8．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你班的交换生Jim对中华传统文化感兴趣，准备下学期选修一门相关课程，向你征询建议。请给Jim写一封邮件，内容包括：1. 推荐一门选修课；2. 说明推荐的理由；3. 提出学习这门课程的建议。注意：1. 词数不少于50；2. 邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jim,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua9．你的美国笔友 Jim 来信询问中国教师节的情况。请你给他回信，内容包括：1. 教师节的时间；2. 学生向教师表达祝福的方式；3. 庆祝教师节的意义。注意： 1. 词数不少于50；2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jim,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua10．假如你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国朋友Jim发邮件告诉你，最近他参加一次学校电视主持人的面试，但是失败了，心情很沮丧。请你给Jim回信，内容包括：1. 给与安慰和鼓励；2. 提出一些建议。注意： 1. 词数不少于50;2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。提示词：电视主持人  TV host____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________            1．Dear Jim,I’m glad to hear you will spend Spring Festival Eve with my family! Now I’m going to tell you our arrangements.To celebrate the special occasion, we have many activities planned. In the morning, my father, a calligraphy lover, will write some copies of the Chinese character “Fu”, meaning good luck,which is a tradition in my family. You may join me in giving them to our neighbours, an act of spreading happiness and joy. Preparations for the big evening feast usually start in the afternoon. My mum will cook varieties of delicious food, including your favourite Jiaozi. We can help her. In the evening, watching the Spring Festival Gala is part of the celebration.As for your questions, I suggest you coming early to experience more of the festival. How about 10:00 a.m.? There is no dress code for Spring Festival, but some Chinese prefer to wear red, which stands for happiness and good fortune. Gifts are not necessary. If you really want to bring something, candies, nuts or fruit will do.  Join us and let’s have fun together!YoursLi Hua【分析】这是一篇应用文写作。要求写一封回信。【详解】本篇作文是回信。先在首段表达对于Jim接受邀请感到非常高兴，再在第二段介绍除夕的安排以及回答Jim关于除夕的问题，最后结尾处再次表达对Jim的欢迎。本篇写作除了要包含最基本的内容要点，还需要开放性的构思。建议考生平时加强构思训练，以合理的结构和逻辑完成写作，才能完成“应用文解决实际问题”的写作任务。语言方面，建议选择生活化的词汇和交际句，做到准确简洁。【点睛】作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如：In the morning, my father, a calligraphy lover, will write some copies of the Chinese character “Fu”, meaning good luck,which is a tradition in my family.定语从句的运用；There is no dress code for Spring Festival, but some Chinese prefer to wear red, which stands for happiness and good fortune.定语从句的运用。本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。2．Dear Jim,Learning that you'll go back home and want to buy your parents a gift. Here is my suggestion.I think Chinese stamps would be a nice choice. Stamps are considered works of art of mini-type, which hold commemorative value and can be a permanent collection. What's more, stamps cover natural landscapes, major events and so on. Your parents can get to know about China from them. Besides, taking up little space, stamps are easy to carry. It is convenient to go to any post office or the Website of China Philatelic Corporation to choose your favorite stamps.I’m sure your parents will like the gift. Hope my advice can be of some help.Yours,Li Hua【分析】这是一篇应用文，要求写一封信。【详解】第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，1.  推荐一份礼物；2.  说明推荐理由；3.  建议如何购买。 第二，人称为第三人称，兼用第一人称。第三，时态为一般现在时。第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段，获知Jim打算为父母带件礼物,提出建议。第二段，1.  推荐一份礼物；2.  说明推荐理由；3.  建议如何购买。 第三段，希望建议有所帮助。第二段为重点段落。第三步：确定关键词汇和短语: gift，favorite，convenient, Chinese stamps，commemorative value，permanent collection，natural landscapes， major events，take up，the Website of China Philatelic Corporation .第四步：确定较为高级的句子:which引导的非限制性定语从句Stamps are considered works of art of mini-type, which hold commemorative value and can be a permanent collection. It作形式主语，动词不定式作真正主语It is convenient to go to any post office or the Website of China Philatelic Corporation to choose your favorite stamp.省略that的宾语从句I’m sure your parents will like the gift.第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接: What's more，Besides.第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。【点睛】文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式:如which引导的非限制性定语从句Stamps are considered works of art of mini-type, which hold commemorative value and can be a permanent collection. It作形式主语，动词不定式作真正主语It is convenient to go to any post office or the Website of China Philatelic Corporation to choose your favorite stamp.省略that的宾语从句I’m sure your parents will like the gift.高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。3．Dear fellows，I am really glad to share my thoughts with you. Since I know time is limited in senior three，I become so prepared with the heavier pressure that I have made great progress after a full devotion to my study．(高分句型一) Meanwhile，in order to ensure enough energy and efficiency during the day，I made a thorough plan and follow it strictly every day，which led to a much regulated life．（高分句型二）A good command of English plays a vital role in the coming exam as well as the future study．Making more use of the knowledge makes you a better informed person．As for suggestions，I think you should form a habit of taking notes and take advantage of all sources available to study．（高分句型三） Besides，focus on mistakes，and consult your teachers in time．Best wishes for all of you．Yours，Li Hua【分析】本文属于材料作文。给高三的同学写一封公开信。【详解】首先确定文章的主题（给高三的同学写一封公开信），并围绕以下要点回信：你自己高三时学习方面的变化；你自己高三时生活方面的变化；你对高三同学的建议。列出简单的提纲后，再用连词铺设好过渡，安排好层次段落，最后根据要点扩展成文。要灵活运用各种句式、分词短语、介词短语等，注意使用高级框架结构的句子，用好连接词。【点睛】本文要点完整，文章层次分明。本文中的高级词汇比较多，如share sth. with,  so…that…, make great progress , a good command of, plays a vital role in, As for , form a habit of , take advantage of，be available to , focus on，和各种连词如，meanwhile，besides等，使文章层次分明，思路清晰，从而增加文章的可读性。本文句式比较灵活，以简单句为主，又有复杂句，同时运用了一些结构相对复杂的从句，如复杂句（Since I know time is limited in senior three，I become so prepared with the heavier pressure that I have made great progress after a full devotion to my study．）和定语从句，in order to ensure enough energy and efficiency during the day，I made a thorough plan and follow it strictly every day，which led to a much regulated life及祈使句（focus on mistakes，and consult your teachers in time）。文中还运用了非谓语中的动词ing形式作主语（Making more use of the knowledge makes you a better informed person）这些句式的运用让文章的结构错落有致。4．Dear Jim,I’m so glad to hear your future education plan in Beijing in your last letter. First I would like to express my warmest welcome to you and I am sure you will have the most unforgettable experience during your college in Beijing.Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture, I suggest you apply for Peking University, one of the best universities in China. Its Chinese Literature major is perfect for you where you can be completely soaked in Chinese profound history and rich culture. As for preparation, some reading in advance in needed like The Story of the Stone while some online courses of spoken Chinese can be helpful for you to adapt into the Chinese language environment.I sincerely hope your dream will come true and it’s my pleasure to show you around in Beijing when that day comes. If you have further questions, please feel free to let me know.Yours,Li Hua【详解】本文为提纲式作文，文章要求写推荐信，为英国朋友介绍北京的大学。首先可以介绍一下写作背景（Jim对中国文化感兴趣，要来中国学习），表达欢迎。然后推荐一所大学，并简要介绍推荐的原因（如大学的特色，可以学到什么等）。再次简单介绍应该做哪方面的准备，如可以提前学习汉语，读点有关中国传统文化的书，了解中国的习俗，让自己更好地适应中国的生活。文章可采用一般现在时，人称可以使用第二人称。亮点说明：文章中巧妙使用非谓语Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture, 使句子结构紧凑。使用定语从句Its Chinese Literature major is perfect for you where you can be completely soaked in Chinese profound history and rich culture. 使句子表达更完美；巧妙使用连接词while引出来中国前的准备，使句子结构对称。5．Dear George,    How is everything going? I have some exciting news for you! China Daily will hold a mobile photo contest named “Amazing China”, only open to foreigners. I know you love photography, so why not give it a try?The contest welcomes submissions about natural scenery, famous places or historical sites, local customs of China and so forth. And every photo should be accompanied with an explanation: time, place, name of the work, and stories behind. Photos edited with Photoshop or any other software will not be accepted. Each participant can turn in three photos at most to Liuying@chinadaily.com. Deadline for entries is Oct.15, 2018. For more information, you can refer to China Daily’s official website.     Well, I have to go now, for I have tons of homework to do. If you are interested, I’m more than happy to be your photography companion.Yours,Li Hua【详解】试题分析：本文是一封书信。你写信建议你的美国朋友George 参加中国日报 （China Daily）专门为外国人举办的2018“最美中国”（Amazing China）手机摄影大赛。信的内容包括:作品内容要求；提交时间和方式；表示愿意提供帮助。写作时要认真阅读前面的提示，根据所给要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用，同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【亮点说明】本文是一封书信，格式正确，内容齐全，结构布局合理，文中使用高级句子。will hold a mobile photo contest named “Amazing China”,过去分词做后置定语；why not give it a try?句中使用why not do sth.的固定句式；And every photo should be accompanied with an explanation:句中使用含情态动词的被动语态；I have to go now, for I have tons of homework to do.此处for是并列连词，表示“原因”； If you are interested, I’m more than happy to be your photography companion.句中if引导条件状语从句。6．Dear Jim,I’m sorry to hear that there are some uncivilized behaviors of Chinese like littering, spitting and talking loudly in public places, and these behaviors arouse strong feelings of disgust in some countries.The causes for this phenomenon are various. I think the growth of the tourists travelling abroad is the main reason, for which it is unavoidable that a few misbehaving tourists appear among a mass of visitors. These behaviors do hurt the image of China. We should improve the civil quality. Meanwhile, we should behave with deep understanding and respect for different cultures.Hope you can share more opinions on this topic.Yours,Li Hua【详解】高考中提纲式作文非常常见。写提纲式作文要注意以下几点。　 1．审题。要弄清题意，确定文章的中心思想、主题，并围绕中心思想组织材料。　 2．进行构思，列出简单的提纲，安排好层次段落，铺设好过渡，处理好开头和结尾。3．扩展成文。扩展成文时还需：要灵活运用各种句式，如倒装句、强调句、省略句、主从复合句、分词短语、介词短语等，从而增加文章的可读性。注意使用高级框架结构的句子，让文章的结构错落有致。用好连接词，注意段落间、句子间的连贯性。亮点分析：本文的话题为“少数中国游客在国外的不文明行为”。内容包括可能出现的不文明行为，成因及自己的看法或建议。所写文章层次分明，思路清晰，文字连贯。以简单句为主，同时运用了一个复杂句。简单句与复杂句的结合使得句式灵活多变，增加了文章的可读性。文章中运用一些较高级的短语，如：arouse strong feelings of，do hurt the image，behave with deep understanding and respect for，share more opinions等，让文章的结构错落有致。第一段用一个宾语从句引出了本文的话题。I’m sorry to hear that there are some uncivilized behaviors ….第二段中表明了出现这种行为的原因和自己的看法及观点。在本段中使用一个（由宾语从句+定语从句组成的）复杂句。I think the growth of the tourists travelling abroad is the main reason, for which it is unavoidable that a few misbehaving tourists appear among a mass of visitors最后一段用祈使句表达了自己的期望。Hope you can share more opinions on this topic.7．Dear Jim, I’m happy to receive your letter and know you’re going to participate in the Singing Competition for Foreigners. Of the two songs Jasmine Flower and The Mid-Autumn Tune, both are highly recommended. Personally, I prefer Jasmine Flower, the sweetest and one of the oldest traditional songs of Chinese folk music. You can appreciate the beauty of the music of China. Moreover, the melody of the song is amazing, with many moving tunes. In addition, it’s also a song accepted by the people all over the world. That’s why I think Jasmine Flower will be a better choice.Hope you’ll win the award in the competition.Yours, Li Hua【详解】写作背景：你的英国朋友Jim要参加外国人学唱中国歌曲比赛，有两首歌可以选择：“好一朵美丽的茉莉花”或者“明月几时有”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。文章用一般现在时来写，主要以第三人称为主。文章分三部分：首先说明写信目的；然后重点介绍对两首歌的选择和理由；最后预祝比赛成功。写作时要观点明确，条理清楚，表达准确。还要注意高级词汇和句型的运用，如宾语从句you’re going to participate in the Singing Competition for Foreigners. one of句型，表语从句That's why I think Jasmine Flower will be a better choice.词语highly recommended. appreciate, win the award等和连接词Personally, Moreover, In addition等。8．Dear Jim,I am glad that you are interested in Chinese culture and eager to explore more. I think the Ancient Poetry is your best choice. By learning Chinese ancient poems, you can have an extensive knowledge of history and culture in ancient China. Also, you can feel the charm of the language by reading poems, which helps to improve your Chinese. To follow the course well, you’d better read and recite as many poems as possible. Besides, it is a good idea to search for related background knowledge so that you will fully understand the conception of poetry. What do you  think of the course? I am sure you will have a lot of fun from it.Yours,Li Hua【详解】本篇是一篇书信类提纲作文，写作时注意以下几点：1.仔细阅读有关提示，弄清提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点：a  推荐一门选修课；b 说明推荐的理由；c 提出学习这门课程的建议。2.提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析，构思和想象。要依据提示情景和语句，按照一定的逻辑来写。3.根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态，语态，就本文而言，应该用一般现在时。4.注意使用高级词汇和高级句式，以增加文章的亮点。5. 提纲性文章难点：扩充成句，因为提纲性文章主题内容已经基本列出，在将短句扩充时，要精炼。【范文亮点】本文语言精炼，并使用了高级句式，如：you can feel the charm of the language by reading poems, which helps to improve your Chinese.定语从句；By learning Chinese ancient poems, you can have an extensive knowledge of history and culture in ancient China.非谓语结构；it is a good idea to search for related background knowledge so that you will fully understand the conception of poetry.形式主语结构。9．Dear Jim,I am very glad to know that you are interested in Teachers’ Day in China. We celebrate Teachers’ Day every September 10th. On that day, we will send best wishes and express our thanks to our dear teachers for their hard work. Some students write Thank-you cards to our teachers; others would like to send them beautiful flowers. Sometimes we prepare performances or give them hand-made gifts. In our school, we also have a tradition of serving tea to each teacher in the morning.I think Teachers’ Day is a meaningful celebration. It gives us the chance to show our respect and love to our teachers. What’s more, respecting teachers is also a tradition for us Chinese.Do you have a similar celebration for teachers? Looking forward to hearing from you soon!Yours,Li Hua【详解】试题分析：本篇作文是一篇说明类的介绍信。从命题的角度讲，属于“节日介绍+意义”。美国笔友 Jim 来信询问中国教师节的情况。请你给他回信，内容包括：教师节的时间；学生向教师表达祝福的方式；庆祝教师节的意义。节日时间和庆祝方式贴合考生生活，大家经历过多次教师节的庆祝，所以难度不大。文章开头句交际功能句，需要符合交际双方的身份，因为给熟人写信，所以开头部分需寒暄表达。关于庆祝方式和庆祝意义，建议考生选取自己熟悉的词句，切勿标新立异，增加考场作文的时间成本和构思负担。遣词用语上，选取自然、简洁和实用的词汇，慎用难词。建议2018届考生们要学习掌握应用文写作的逻辑和层次，积累高频实用词汇，训练开放部分的思维逻辑，训练自己合理补充细节的能力，活学活用，这样才能真正达到“用应用文解决一件事情”的高考写作目标。【亮点说明】本文是一篇书信，属于应用文。文章格式正确，要点齐全，重点突出，语言流畅，文中使用高级词汇和句子。I am very glad to know that you are interested in Teachers’ Day in China.句中使用that引导的宾语从句；It gives us the chance to show our respect and love to our teachers.动词不定式作后置定语；respecting teachers is also a tradition for us Chinese.动名词在句中作主语；另外，On that day, Some …; others …，What’s more等的运用为文章增色添彩。10．Dear Jim,I am sorry to hear that you are deeply depressed recently due to failing in the employment interview of the school TV host. I can understand how you are feeling now. It is rather disappointing to fail in an important interview, which you were devoted to. But one failure doesn’t mean that you are not excellent. Actually, you are always an intelligent boy. In your letter, I can’t make out what possibility made this failure. But if I were you, I would reflect on the whole process of the interview and I would learn a lot from it. I’m sure you will be more experienced next time.I hope you will be happy soon.Yours,Li Hua【详解】试题分析：本文是一封书信。你的英国朋友Jim发邮件告诉你，最近他参加一次学校电视主持人的面试，但是失败了，心情很沮丧。请你给Jim回信，内容包括： 给与安慰和鼓励；提出一些建议。写好此文，需注意三点：1.是写信格式要准确，信的开头和结尾一定要写好。2.是要详略得当。3.要注意适当地增加细节，恰当地使用连接过渡词，以使行文连贯。另外，在写作时要注意时态、语态的合理运用。【亮点说明】本文是一封书信，采用三段式，格式正确，要点齐全，句中使用高级词汇和句子。I am sorry to hear that you are deeply depressed recently due to failing in the employment interview of the school TV host.句子使用宾语从句和被动语态；It is rather disappointing to fail in an important interview, which you were devoted to.句中it做形式主语，动词不定式作真正的主语，且运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句；I can’t make out what possibility made this failure. what引出的宾语从句很是精彩；if I were you, I would reflect on the whole process of the interview and I would learn a lot from it. if引导的虚拟语气堪称经典。