北京高考英语写作分类训练：邀请信

这是一份北京高考英语写作分类训练：邀请信，共16页。试卷主要包含了假设你是红星中学学生会主席李华，假定你是李华等内容，欢迎下载使用。
邀请信1．假设你是李华，端午节即将来临，请给你的英国教师Jim写封信，邀请他来你家过端午节。内容包括：1、发出邀请；2、节日计划；3、希望他来。注意：1、词数不少于50；2、开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear teacher,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Sincerely yours,Li Hua2．假设你是李华，你们社区将举办 “中国民间音乐节”。请你给在北京学习的英国朋友Jim 写封电子邮件，邀请他来参加此次活动。内容包括：1. 活动的时间、地点；2. 活动的内容；3. 邀请的理由。注意：1. 词数不少于50；2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。提示词： 社区 community中国民间音乐节Chinese Folk Music FestivalDear Jim,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua3．假定你是李华，为帮助我市外国朋友了解中国文化，你所在的英语沙龙将举办元宵晚会。请发一封电子邮件给你的好友Jim，简要介绍相关情况并邀请他参加，内容包括：1. 时间：下周二晚6点到8点；2. 地点：俱乐部101室；3. 内容：唱中国歌、比赛用筷子、包元宵等。注意：1．词数100 左右，信的开头已给出，不计入总词数。2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：筷子(chopsticks); 元宵(sweet dumplings)Dear Jim,How are you? ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．假如你是红星中学高三李华，请给你的美国朋友Jim写一封信，告诉他你打算参加龙舟训练营，希望他一起参加，邮件的内容包括：1. 介绍训练营的相关内容（例如：时间，地点，参加者等）；2. 说明你打算参加的原因；3. 询问对方的意向。注意：1. 词数不少于50；2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。提示词：龙舟训练营  Dragon Boat Training CampDear Jim,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua5．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国笔友 Peter 在邮件中表示对中国传统节日感兴趣，并询问你和家人打算如何度过即将到来的春节。请你给他回信，内容包括：1. 介绍你们打算如何度过春节；2. 邀请他来中国体验节日气氛。注意：1. 词数不少于50；2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6．假设你是红星中学学生李华，你的英国朋友Jim在邮件中提到他对北京的胡同很感兴趣，请你给他回复邮件，介绍一个你喜欢或你熟悉的胡同。内容包括：1．该胡同的名称；2．该胡同的特点；3．发出来京邀请。注意：1．词数不少于50；2．开头和结尾已给出，不计人总词数。Dear Jim,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua7．假设你是红星中学学生会主席李华。你从报纸上得知英国人Christopher J．A．Smith先生骑自行车从英国抵达北京，创下了新的世界纪录。请你用英文给他写一封邮件，邀请他近期到你校做一次演讲。内容包括：1．说明邀请他的原因；2．告知演讲的相关信息(例如：时间、地点、听众等)；3．询问对方能否前来。注意：1.词数不少于50；2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Mr.Smith，__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Sincerely Yours，Li Hua8．假定你是李华。本周六是你十八岁生日，家人将在光明饭店会为你举办一次生日宴会。请你给朋友John写一封信，邀请他参加。内容包括：1. 提出邀请；2. 18岁生日的意义；3. 宴会情况。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9．假如你是红星中学学生会主席李华，学生会打算下周三在学校举行慈善表演，你打算写email邀请你班外教John去现场观看演出。1.慈善表演活动的目的2.慈善表演活动的内容3.表演的时间、地点4.购票方式参考：慈善表演charity showDear John,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua10．假如你是李华，再过一个月就是中国的传统节日“端午节”。请你给你的网友Jimmy发一封邮件，邀请他来中国参加将在你家乡举办的“端午节”庆祝活动。内容须包括：1. “端午节”的时间2. “端午节”的由来3. 和“端午节”相关的一些传统活动等注意：字数100－120；开头和结尾已提供，不计入字数。____________________________________________________________________________________________  1．Dear teacher,The Dragon Boat Festival is around the corner. I know you are keen on Chinese culture, so I'm writing to invite you to spend the festival together with our family on the fifth day of the fifth month of the Chinese calendar. If you are willing to come, my father and I will pick you up where you live at 9 o'clock that morning. We will make and enjoy Zong zi together. My mother will tell you more customs about the festival. I guess it will be a really nice opportunity for you to learn about this festival so we do hope you can come. We look forward to your coming.Sincerely yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封信，邀请老师吉姆到家里过端午节，并介绍节日的相关计划和安排。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时结构：分分总分分法是指先分别陈述，再作总结。要求：1.表明写信目的 2. 介绍节日计划和安排1）介绍端午节的相关情况，比如时间，意义，活动等2）介绍节日计划，比如包粽子，看赛龙舟等3.表达殷切盼望第二步：列提纲（重点词组）around the corner/be keen on/ spend …with/ be willing to/ pick up /look forward to/invite sb to do第三步：连词成句1.    The Dragon Boat Festival is around the corner. 2.    I know you are keen on Chinese culture.3.    I'm writing to invite you to spend the festival together with our family .4.    If you are willing to come, my father and I will pick you up.5.    We will make and enjoy Zong zi together. 6.    We look forward to your coming.第四步：连句成篇（添加衔接词或从句）1.    I know you are keen on Chinese culture, so I'm writing to invite you to spend the festival together with our family on the fifth day of the fifth month of the Chinese calendar. 2.    If you are willing to come, my father and I will pick you up where you live at 9 o’clock that morning. 3.    We will make and enjoy Zong zi together. My mother will tell you more customs about the festival. 4.    I guess it will be a really nice opportunity for you to learn about this festival so we do hope you can come. 5.    We look forward to your coming.第五步：润色【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些主从复合句，例如：my father and I will pick you up where you live at 9 o’clock that morning.句中的where引导地点状语从句。也用了一些固定搭配，例如：around the corner/be keen on/ spend …with/ be willing to等。作者写作的条理很清晰，层次分明，上下句转换自然。2．Dear Jim,I’m writing to invite you to attend the Chinese Folk Music Festival in our community next weekend. At the festival, there will be various performances, such as the performances of folk musical instruments, folk songs, folk operas, folk dances and so on. Besides, several lectures will be given by professional artists and teachers on different aspects of Chinese folk music. Since you have always been interested in Chinese folk music, I think this is a great chance for you to be exposed to the rich music atmosphere.So what do you think of the Music Festival? If you’d like to come, feel free to contact me.Yours,Li Hua【分析】这是一篇提纲类作文。要求你给英国朋友Jim写一封电子邮件，邀请他来参见你们社区将要举办的“中国民间音乐节”。要求介绍：1. 活动的时间、地点； 2. 活动的内容； 3. 邀请的理由。【详解】所给提示内容比较具体，因此本文难度不大。考生可以根据时提示列出主要内容，然后对主要内容进行句式，遣词造句等方面的扩充拓展。此外，还可以适当的在各要点之间添加连接词。文章应该以将来时态为主。【点睛】所给范文条理明确，要点齐全。长短句灵活使用，自然到位。正确应用了一些高级句式和词汇，例如：被动语态（several lectures will be given）；非谓语动词（to be exposed to the rich music atmosphere）；宾语从句（this is a great chance for you to be exposed to the rich music atmosphere.）等，增加了文章的亮点。3．Dear Jim,How are you? As the Lantern Festival is around the corner, our English Club is going to hold an evening party for the foreigners to make them better understand Chinese festival culture. I am very glad to invite you to take part in it.During the party, not only can you sing Chinese songs, but you will  compete with each other to see how skilled you are at using chopsticks. Besides, you’ll learn to make sweet dumplings at the party. The party will be held in Room 101 of the Club from 6:00 pm. to 8:00 pm. next Tuesday. Please make sure you won’t miss it.Looking forward to your early coming! Yours, Li Hu【分析】考查应用文中的电子邮件写作。【详解】题目要求假定你是李华，为帮助我市外国朋友了解中国文化，你所在的英语沙龙将举办元宵晚会。请发一封电子邮件给你的好友Jim，简要介绍相关情况并邀请他参加，内容包括：1. 时间：下周二晚6点到8点；2. 地点：俱乐部101室；3. 内容：唱中国歌、比赛用筷子、包元宵等。分析可知，应该以第一人称为主，一般现在时和一般将来时进行写作。要点已经给出，要求考生根据提纲自己发挥拓展，考生要先想好写哪几点，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。【点睛】这篇书信类短文的关键在于要点的拓展，同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。During the party, not only can you sing Chinese songs, but you will  compete with each other to see how skilled you are at using chopsticks.宾语从句的运用；Please make sure you won’t miss it.宾语从句的运用。4．Dear Jim,I’m writing to tell you my exciting plan for the summer holiday. I want to join a Dragon Boat Training Camp. I wonder if you’d like to go with me.This camp will open on July 20th, It offers teenagers like you and me a chance to enjoy sports and learn about Chinese culture. If you are interested in it, let me know and I’ll send you more information.Hope to meet you at the training camp this summer.【详解】试题分析：本篇文章重点是李华邀请英国朋友Jim参加龙舟训练营，属于典型的邀请信，只需按照邀请信的写作流程就可轻松写出。即发出邀请— 介绍活动(时间，地点，内容，参加原因)—期待和感谢。【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，运用了一些邀请信里常用的句型。如：I’m writing to tell you my exciting plan for the summer holiday；I wonder if you’d like to go with me.文中注意使用了一般将来时、一般现在时等不同的时态来叙述不同的事情，对时态有较好的把握。【考点定位】应用文类书面表达5．Dear Peter,I feel so happy to hear that you are interested in our traditional festivals, among which Spring Festival is the most important one.Spring Festival is a great time for family reunions. This year, my parents and I are going to see my grandparents in the countryside, enjoying the festival together. On that eve, we will go outside to light crackers and fireworks, after which we will come home to make dumplings. On the morning of the New Year’s Day, we should get up very early to stick couplets, on which all good wishes are presented. Then we plan to visit our relatives to give them our greetings.The short letter here surely fails me to show you my Spring Festival plan. I sincerely hope, if possible, that you can come here in China to have a real experience about it.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本文书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封回信。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本文是一封回信：假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国笔友 Peter 在邮件中表示对中国传统节日感兴趣，并询问你和家人打算如何度过即将到来的春节。请你给他回信，内容包括：1. 介绍你们打算如何度过春节；2. 邀请他来中国体验节日气氛。第2步：根据写作要求组织段落内容，第一段表达对Peter来信的感谢，第二段具体介绍如何度过春节，第三段邀请他来中国体验节日氛围；之后确定关键词，如：interested in our traditional festivals（对传统的节日感兴趣）；Spring Festival（春节）；a great time for family reunions.（家庭团聚的伟大时刻）；make dumplings.（包饺子）等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态语态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】本文是一封书信，格式正确，内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。同时文中使用高级句子。I feel so happy to hear that you are interested in our traditional festivals, among which Spring Festival is the most important one.句中使用that引导的宾语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句；This year, my parents and I are going to see my grandparents in the countryside, enjoying the festival together.现在分词作自然的结果状语。6．Dear Jim,     How is everything going? I am so glad to learn from your last letter that you express a keen interest in Beijing Hutong. Therefore, as a native Peking boy, I would like to introduce one of my favorite Hutong - South Luogu Hutong to you.    To begin with, South Luogu Hutong is 786 meters long and 8 meters wide, connecting Gulou East Street on its north and Di’an men East Street on the south. What’s more, it was built when Yuan Dynasty was established. With the middle part higher than the two ends, it looks like a humpback and therefore was primarily called “Luogu” in Chinese. In addition, South Luogu Hutong is one of the oldest Hutongs and has a history of several years. Nowadays, this 800-meter long Hutong is filled with bars, cafes, restaurants, and cute boutiques. It is worth spending some time walking through it. By the way, would you like to come to Beijing for a trip? I do hope that you could have a trip in South Luogu Hutong with me if you are available. I am sure you are going to love this place. Please let me know if you make up your mind. I am looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封电子邮件。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封电子邮件；假设你是红星中学学生李华，你的英国朋友Jim在邮件中提到他对北京的胡同很感兴趣，请你给他回复邮件，介绍一个你喜欢或你熟悉的胡同；内容包括：该胡同的名称，该胡同的特点，发出来京邀请。人称应为第一人称，时态应为一般现在时。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：a keen interest in Beijing Hutong（对北京的胡同很感兴趣），introduce one of my favorite Hutong（介绍一个我最喜欢的胡同），establish（建设），be worth spending some time walking through it（值得花一些时间步行穿过它），would you like to come to Beijing for a trip（你想来北京旅游吗）等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者使用了很多高级语法表达为文章增色不少，比如宾语从句I am so glad to learn from your last letter that you express a keen interest in Beijing Hutong.；同位语Therefore, as a native Peking boy, I would like to introduce one of my favorite Hutong - South Luogu Hutong to you.；现在分词To begin with, South Luogu Hutong is 786 meters long and 8 meters wide, connecting Gulou East Street on its north and Di’an men East Street on the south.；时间状语从句What’s more, it was built when Yuan Dynasty was established.；条件状语从句I do hope that you could have a trip in South Luogu Hutong with me if you are available.等等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，长短句结合，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。7．Dear Mr.Smith, I am the president of the Student Union at the Hongxing Middle School.On behalf of our school, I would like to congratulate you on the new world record you have set.Meanwhile, I am delighted to invite you to give a speech in our school about what you experienced because you are very popular in our school and your stories published in the newspapers are a great source of encouragement to many people.The activity will be held in our school auditorium on November 17th.It will start from 15:30 and last for 2 hours.The audience may include all the students，staff and some parents.We really hope you can come to make it.If you are interested in this, please write back to me at your earliest convenience.I am looking forward to your reply.Sincerely Yours，Li Hua【分析】本文是一篇提纲类书面表达，要求考生把自己当成红星中学学生会主席李华。从报纸上得知英国人Christopher J.A.Smith先生骑自行车从英国抵达北京，创下了新的世界纪录。请用英文给他写一封邮件，邀请他近期到你校做一次演讲。【详解】第1步：审题。根据提示可知本文要求考生把自己当成李华，用英文给英国人Christopher J.A.Smith写一封邮件，邀请他近期到你校做一次演讲。全文以一般现在时、一般将来时。人称以第一人称为主。第2步：组织要点。说明邀请他的原因；告知演讲的相关信息(例如：时间、地点、听众等)；询问对方能否前来。第3步：根据提示及关键词组进行遣词造句，关键词为：congratulate on，be delighted to, a great source of，at one’s convenience等，写作时注意书信的格式和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】本篇范文结构完美，条理清晰。范文时态和人称运用准确，涵盖了文字提示要求的所有要点，且有适当的个人发挥。考生运用了多样式的句型结构，整篇文章富有变化，并不死板。文章里使用了较多的高级词汇，如congratulate on，be delighted to, a great source of，at one’s convenience等；尽量运用了丰富的句式，如宾语从句Meanwhile, I am delighted to invite you to give a speech in our school about what you experienced…省略that的定语从句On behalf of our school, I would like to congratulate you on the new world record you have set.同时文章里还使用了一些串联成分，如meanwhile等，这些串联成分让各个要点更为紧密地结合在一起。这些高级语法结构的运用提升了文章的层次，显示了很强的驾驭语言的能力。8．Dear John,I’m writing this letter to invite you to my 18th birthday party this Saturday.An 18th birthday is unusual for every child in China, because it means that a teenager who has been an adult becomes more mature and wiser. So my family is determined to hold a big party at Guangming Hotel. Many friends and relatives are invited to the party. The hotel band will play amazing music, and a variety of Chinese food will be served. If you take part in the party, you will definitely enjoy the atmosphere and have a good time with us.Look forward to your coming.Yours,Li Hua【详解】试题分析：本文是一封书信。本周六是你十八岁生日，家人将在光明饭店会为你举办一次生日宴会。请你给朋友John写一封信，邀请他参加。内容包括：提出邀请；18岁生日的意义；宴会情况。写作时首先要认真阅读前面的提示，根据所给要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用，同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【亮点说明】本文是一封书信，格式正确，内容齐全，文中使用高级句子。An 18th birthday is unusual for every child in China, because it means that a teenager who has been an adult becomes more mature and wiser.原因状语从句和who引导的定语从句完美结合；So my family is determined to hold a big party at Guangming Hotel. Many friends and relatives are invited to the party.句中运用被动语态；If you take part in the party, you will definitely enjoy the atmosphere and have a good time with us.此句运用if引导的条件状语从句。9．Dear John,     I’m writing to share with you the news about the charity party held by our Student Union next Wednesday, On behalf of the Union, I sincerely invite you to come.This charity show aims to raise fund for the Sunshine Welfare House, where the children are in desperate need of living and school supplies. On this charity party, a wide range of performances prepared by students will be put on, including singing, cross talks and even a fantastic model show of traditional Chinese costumes, I assure the performances will be a feast for eyes.The party will begin at 6:00 p.m. and will last till 8:00 p.m. on Wednesday. For more information, you can visit the website of the Student Union, and the ticket booking is available online.We look forward to your coming.Yours,Li Hua【详解】本文是一般邀请函。邀请信在形式上不如请柬那样正规，具有简短、热情的特点，但也很考究。通常适用于一些平常的事情的邀请。一般邀请信格式一般分为：1.说明与收信人的相关性与写作意图；2.写清邀请的时间（年、月、日、钟点）、地点、场合；3.具体交代情景：包括受邀请的人、邀请朋友干什么、地点以及具体的时间等内容；4.表示期待朋友的回复。亮点：本文第一段点明写email的目的，使用了两个单句，简洁明了。在文中运用了短语“ share with sb.和 on behalf of “，同时还用非谓语中的过去分词作定语，the charity party held by our Student Union 第二段中以动词不定式作目的状语交代了表演的目的（to raise fund for the Sunshine Welfare House,）接着用一个定语从句进一步对Sunshine Welfare House解释， to raise fund for the Sunshine Welfare House, where the children are in desperate need of living and school supplies.。用非谓语中的过去分词prepared by students作定语修饰a wide range of performances。用被动语态的句子具体说明表演的内容：On this charity party, a wide range of performances prepared by students will be put on, including singing, cross talks and even a fantastic model show of traditional Chinese costumes。高级词汇，如in desperate need of，a wide range of performances prepared by students， assure the performances will be a feast for和is available online也是文章的一大亮点。第三段具体交代表演的时间及地点。最后一段表达了期待朋友的回复。总之，整个文章简单句与复句相结合，主动语态和被动语态的相互呈现，以及非谓语的使用，定语从句的运用，让文章层次分明，结构活泼，语言简洁明了。文中一些高级词汇的运用也给文章增添了色彩。10．Jimmy,In your last mail, you mentioned to me that you will have a holiday next month and you’d like to make a visit to China. It happens that it will be the Dragon Boat Festival then and I’d like to invite you to come to China and experience how we celebrate it.The Dragon Boat Festival is one of the most significant traditional Chinese festivals in China and we will have three days off for it. It falls on the fifth day of the fifth lunar month. The festival is meant to be in memory of a famous ancient Chinese poet, Qu Yuan. All over China, there will be a variety of interesting activities, like dragon boat races, making and eating Zongzi and salted duck eggs etc.In my hometown this year, there will be a grand celebration during the festival. So do come to China and I’m sure you will have an unforgettable holiday.Look forward to your reply.YoursLi Hua【详解】本文考查书信类写作。假如你是李华，再过一个月就是中国的传统节日"端午节”。请你给你的网友Jimmy发一封邮件，邀请他来中国参加将在你家乡举办的"端午节”庆祝活动。主要要点应包括：1. "端午节”的时间；2. "端午节”的由来；3. 和"端午节”相关的一些传统活动等。认真审题确定文章的时态应以一般现在时为主。要点已经粗略给出，写作时注意条理要清晰，逻辑顺序和结构要恰当，同时要尽量保持简洁精干的内容，不拖泥带水。要注意题中所给的信息，不可偏题，应用文写作对于文章内容的要求是要达到写作目的。同时注意适当增加细节以使行文连贯，比如适当选用表示因果、递进、转折关系的连接词，使文章流畅、通顺，并避免因反复使用句式相同的简单句而造成的单调感。范文亮点点评：范文要点齐全，使用了较多的语法：…that you will have a holiday next month是宾语从句；It happens that it will be the Dragon Boat Festival then…使用了固定句型It happens that…；The festival is meant to be in memory of a famous ancient Chinese poet, Qu Yuan.使用了被动语态和短语in memory of；…making and eating Zongzi and salted duck eggs etc.使用了非谓语动词等等，这些都使文章填色不少。