河北高考英语写作分类训练：感谢信

这是一份河北高考英语写作分类训练：感谢信，共15页。
感谢信/祝贺信1．假如你是李华，获知你的英国朋友Eric在汉语书法比赛中获得一等奖。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括:1. 表示祝贺；2. 赠送名家字帖。注意:1. 词数80左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇:字贴 calligraphy copybook___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Alice来信与你探讨音乐话题.请你写封回信，主要内容包括:1.你喜欢的音乐；2.你对音乐的看法.注意:1.词数100词左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯.Dear Alice,I’m more than delighted to hear from you.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua3．假如你是李华，你的美国网友Peter参加中国象棋网络挑战赛获得了一等奖。请根据以下提示写一封英文电子邮件向他表示祝贺。1. 祝贺他获奖；2. 肯定他付出的努力；3. 询问何时方便，在网上切磋棋艺。注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。中国象棋网络挑战赛：Chinese Chess Network Challenge__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．假如你是张萌，在刚结束的寒假里，你作为一名交换生（exchange student）去了美国的Wilson Senior High School学习，期间你结交了很多朋友，增进了对美国文化的了解。现请你代表你的学校，根据下列要点，给Wilson Senior High School的校长写一封感谢信。要点：（1）自我简介；（2）你的收获；（3）表示感谢；（4）欢迎来你校参观。注意：1．词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。Dear Headmaster,My name is Zhang Meng.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes.Yours sincerely,Zhang Meng5．假定你是李华， 你观看了英国好友Leslie参加的学校英语演讲比赛直播。他的演讲“Success Comes from Hard Work”获得了一等奖, 请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括:1. 表示祝贺；2. 评论与赞赏；3. 表达祝愿。注意:1. 词数100左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使内容连贯._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6．假定你是李华，经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括：1. 表示感谢；2. 回顾Alex对你的帮助；3. 临别祝愿。注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．假如你是李华，你的澳大利亚朋友Peter给你发了一封e-mail，告诉你他将于国庆节期间到你所在的城市北京旅游，请你给他回一封e-mail欢迎他来北京，并表 示愿意提供帮助，同时提醒他一些注意事项。注意：1. 文章必须包括题目提示的全部内容，可适当增加细节；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3. 100词左右。Dear Peter,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua8．假定你是李华，获悉你的一位南非朋友（1ucy）在约翰内斯堡大学孔子学院（Confucius Institute at Johannesburg University）举办的中文诗词朗诵比赛中荣获一等奖。请你用英语给她写封信表示祝贺，并希望她有机会来中国深造。注意：词数100左右；可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Lucy,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua9．假定你是李华，你的澳大利亚朋友William寒假期间要来中国游玩，行程中有三天计划住在你家，请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：1．住宿条件；2．活动安排；3．其他事项(气候差异、着装提醒等)。注意：1．词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________10．假定你是学生李华，今年9月将赴加拿大进修学习半年。请给你的加拿大笔友Mike写一封邮件，希望他能帮你找一个合租公寓。要点如下:1. 对公寓的要求；2. 对室友(roommate)的要求；3. 表达感谢。注意:1. 100词左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Mike,I am writing to ask you to lend me a hand. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua 1．Dear Eric,Congratulations on your winning the first prize in the Chinese calligraphy contest!As is known to all, calligraphy is an important part of Chinese traditional culture. It is really amazing for a foreigner to write Chinese characters so well. I’ve already had a copybook of Wang Xizhi’s works delivered to you. I hope it can be of some help.I’m looking forward to your greater progress in the future.Yours,Li Hua【分析】这是一篇应用文写作。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知, 本篇为一封电子邮件；假如你是李华，获知你的英国朋友Eric在汉语书法比赛中获得一等奖。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括:1. 表示祝贺；2. 赠送名家字帖。第2步：根据写作要求, 确定关键词（组）, 如：calligraphy copybook（字帖）；as is known to all（众所周知）；be of some help（有所帮助）等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句, 注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用第一人称和一般现在时。第4步：连句成文, 注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡, 书写一定要规范清晰, 保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】范文内容完整, 语言规范, 语篇连贯, 词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式, 如It is really amazing for a foreigner to write Chinese characters so well.运用了it做形式主语结构；I’ve already had a copybook of Wang Xizhi’s works delivered to you.非谓语动词的运用。全文中没有中国式英语的句式, 显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外, 文章思路清晰、层次分明, 上下句转换自然, 为文章增色添彩。2．Dear Alice,I’m more than delighted to hear from you. I’m glad you like music as me. To tell you the truth, I like almost all kinds of music. In order to relax from the pressure of study, I always listen to light music. My favorite music is popular music and I’m a fan to many famous singers. I also like classical music, both home and abroad. And I have also made a lot of friends because of music.Different people have different ideas about music. Some people like classical music, some like rock and others like light music. Anyway, music can do much good to us. We can’t live without music!Wish you all the best! Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封书信：假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Alice来信与你探讨音乐话题.请你写封回信，主要内容包括:1.你喜欢的音乐；2.你对音乐的看法。句子时态应为一般现在时。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：Confucius Institute （孔子学院），the Chinese poetry competition（中文诗词比赛），my sincere congratulations（衷心的祝贺），further study（深造）等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。To tell you the truth, I like almost all kinds of music.动词不定式作独立成分；In order to relax from the pressure of study, I always listen to light music.此处是动词不定式作目的状语；And I have also made a lot of friends because of music.句中使用3．Dear Peter，I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations to you on your winning the first prize in the Chinese Chess Network Challenge．As your friend，I just want you to know how glad I am at your success．"Everything comes to him who waits．"For these years，you've shown great interest in Chinese chess and kept on practicing it every day．Not only have you read many books about Chinese chess strategy，but also you have competed in all kinds of Chinese chess contests．Finally，you’ve  succeeded in winning the online competition!So I'm so happy that you become champion of this network challenge．At last，I hope to play Chinese chess with you so that we can make progress together．Please tell me when you are available．Congratulations again．Yours,Li Hua【分析】这是一篇应用文写作。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封电子邮件；假如你是李华，你的美国网友Peter参加中国象棋网络挑战赛获得了一等奖。请根据以下提示写一封英文电子邮件向他表示祝贺。1. 祝贺他获奖；2. 肯定他付出的努力；3. 询问何时方便，在网上切磋棋艺。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：sincere congratulations（诚挚的祝贺），Chinese Chess Network Challenge（中国象棋网络挑战赛），show great interest in（对……感兴趣）；all kinds of（各种各样）等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如As your friend，I just want you to know how glad I am at your success．运用了宾语从句；Not only have you read many books about Chinese chess strategy，but also you have competed in all kinds of Chinese chess contests．运用了not only…but also结构。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。4．Dear Headmaster,My name is Zhang Meng. I studied as an exchange student in your school for a month during the just - ended winter vacation, Now I'm writing to express my thanks to you on behalf of my school. The past month was a wonderful time, during which I made many friends and learned a lot about American culture. Not only my spoken English but also my ability to live independently has improved a lot. Thanks for your treatment and the service you offered to me. And since this activity was a complete success , our school hopes to hold such activities more often in the future. Finally, we warmly welcome you as well as your teachers and students to visit our school. I would be very glad to be your guide at that time. Best wishes. Yours sincerely,Zhang Meng【分析】这是一篇应用文。要求你以一位交换生的身份，给Wilson Senior High School的校长写一封感谢信。【详解】本文可以分四段来写：第一段自我介绍，并且说明写作目的。可用上诸如：I’m writing to do这样的句式。第二段要对你在Wilson Senior High School的收获进行具体说明，诸如在语言学习方面的成就，对外国文化的了解等等。第三段表示感谢，并且希望多举办该类活动。第四段表明欢迎该校师生来你校参观。同学们在写作时不能逐句翻译，可以适当增加细节以使行文连贯，同时要点表述要完整，文章要通顺。注意准确使用时态和语态，上下文要符合逻辑关系，并且恰当而合理地使用一些高级词汇和句型，如定语从句等,以提高文章档次。【点睛】本文格式正确，布局合理，运用了高级句型和词汇。during which引导非限制性定语从句，Not only…but also…在句中连接两个主语，并与现在完成时巧妙结合，since引导原因状语从句。高级词汇有：on behalf of, independently , treatment, as well as等。5．Dear Leslie,I really enjoyed watching your English speech competition on TV and I was delighted to see you win the first prize. I'm writing to convey my sincere congratulations to you. It did not surprise me at all when host announced you as the winner. It has always been your burning desire to be an outstanding speaker, and you have been so industrious and perseverant to make you dream come true. As a famous saying goes, no pains, no gains. Your hard work has now finally paid off. As you said in your speech, success really does come from hard work.Congratulations once again. I wish you further success in the future.【分析】本文为应用文。你观看了英国好友Leslie参加的学校英语演讲比赛直播。他的演讲“Success Comes from Hard Work”获得了一等奖, 请你给他写一封邮件，对他获奖表示祝贺；对此评论与赞赏；最后表达祝愿。【详解】本文为书信体作文。本作文一般分为三部分。第一部分为写信/邮件的原因。本文为对好友的获奖表示祝贺。第二部分写对此事的评论及赞赏。最后再次表示祝愿。写作时要注意用词要有激情，要真诚。尽量运用高级词汇，句式也要灵活多变。【点睛】本文要点完整，结构合理，用词恰当。句中运用了一些较高级的词汇如：enjoy dohing...;be delighted to do...; convey one’s sincere congratulations to sb.; be one’sburning desire to do...; come true; pay off等。文中的句式非常灵活。有并列句：I really enjoyed watching your English speech competition on TV and I was delighted to see you win the first prize.状语从句：It did not surprise me at all when host announced you as 并列句It has always been your burning desire to be an outstanding speaker, and you have been so industrious and perseverant to make you dream come true.非限制性定语从句：As a famous saying goes, no pains, no gains.和As you said in your speech, success really does come from hard work等，这些句式的灵活运用，提高了文章的档次，体现了作者极好的驾驭英语的能力。6．Dear Alex,Learning that you’re leaving for the United States soon, I’m eagerly writing to express my heartfelt gratitude to you for your help.Honestly speaking, it’s so nice of you to offer me a class of practical learning skills. Under your professional guidance, I have made such unbelievable progress in English. It’s indeed a pleasant surprise for me to even rank first in a recent English speech contest. Whenever I encounter difficulties, you always cheer me up and help me out, which fuels my enthusiasm for English and promotes me to regain tremendous confidence. No words are strong enough to convey how grateful I am.Thanks again and wish you a pleasant journey home.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本文是应用文写作任务，要求写一封感谢信。【详解】1. 审题立意本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写感谢信，人称使用第一人称和第二人称，时态用一般现在时。2.谋篇布局书信格式，称呼和落款文中已经给出。首段，写信的目的，中间段回顾Alex对你的帮助；最后一段表达祝愿。3. 关键词和句子根据写作要点及构思好的提纲我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和句子有：leaving for the United States soon，express my heartfelt gratitude，unbelievable progress，cheer me up。通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误。【点睛】本文开门见山，表达了写信的目的；之后详细介绍了Alex对自己的帮助，详略得当，内容完整，同时使用了高级词汇和高级句子。高级词汇：eagerly，heartfelt gratitude，Honestly speaking，professional guidance等；高级句式：Whenever I encounter difficulties, you always cheer me up and help me out, which fuels my enthusiasm for English and promotes me to regain tremendous confidence.使用了让步状语从句和定语从句。这些都提升了文章的档次7．Dear Peter,How are you these days? I was happy to receive your e-mail, saying you're coming to Beijing during the coming National Day.I'm on holiday then. Therefore, I'd like to be your guide and show you around some of the most popular places of interest if you like. By the way, my family invite you to celebrate this important Chinese festival at my home. Then you can learn something more about our culture.As you know, unlike in your hometown, it can be a little cold then in Beijing. So you’d better take more clothes with you to prevent you from catching a cold.I’m expecting your coming and can hardly wait to see you. I’m sure we’ll have a good time.Best wishes!【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封电子邮件。【详解】1. 本题要求给朋友回一封email，属于应用文体中的书信类。在当今社会，e-mail是一种常用的通讯和交流方式，通过写作训练，帮助同学们掌握e-mail的写作技巧是非常重要的。根据这封e-mail的提示内容可知，本文应主要使用一般现在时和一般将来时。2. 在语言运用方面，为了满足书信类文体简洁明了的特征，应该注意非谓语动词的使用，同时要充分关注礼貌用语的使用。3. 在文章结构方面，首先要说明写信的目的，接下来进行细节描表述，最后表明自己的愿望或向对方表示祝思、感谢等。【点睛】1. 从词汇运用方面看，一些高级词汇及结构给文章增添了不少的闪光点，如therefore（因此），show sb. around（带领某人参观），by the way（顺便提一下），prevent sb. from doing sth.（阻止某人做某事），have a good time（玩得开心）和can hardly wait to do sth.（迫不及特地去做某事）。2. 从句型法用方面看，文中的非谓语动词（如saying...National Day），定语从句（ As you know）等都是增分点。3. 长短句的灵活运用也恰到好处。长句“Therefore, I'd like to be your guide and show you around some of the most popular places of interest if you like”的运用值得借鉴。8．Dear Lucy，I’m very glad to learn that you’ve just won first prize in the Chinese Poetry Competition held in Confucius Institute at Johannesburg University. Congratulations to you! It came as no surprise to me because I know you are a real Chinese culture lover, especially for Chinese poetry, and you’ve been studying in Confucius Institute for years. I’m so proud to see all your efforts have paid off. I hope you can have a chance to come to China for further study in the near future and have a better understanding of my country. Wish you greater progress in the study of Chinese poetry.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一封书信；假定你是李华，获悉你的一位南非朋友1ucy在约翰内斯堡大学孔子学院举办的中文诗词朗诵比赛中荣获一等奖。请你用英语给她写封信表示祝贺，并希望她有机会来中国深造。时态应为一般现在时。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：Confucius Institute at Johannesburg University（约翰内斯堡大学孔子学院），Chinese Poetry Competition（中文诗词朗诵比赛），Congratulations（祝贺），first prize（第一名），effort（努力），further study（深造），pay off (见成效)，progress(进步)及understanding（理解）等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。本文内容完整，层次分明，结构紧凑，表达准确。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。【点睛】范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有Congratulations to（祝贺），no surprise（毫不意外），pay off (见成效)，have a good understanding of（对……有很好的理解）以及in the study of（在……的学习中），而且还使用了宾语从句“I’m very glad to learn that you’ve just won first prize in the Chinese Poetry Competition held in Confucius Institute at Johannesburg University.”及“I hope you can have a chance to come to China for further study in the near future and have a better understanding of my country.”，状语从句“It came as no surprise to me because I know you are a real Chinese culture lover, especially for Chinese poetry, and you’ve been studying in Confucius Institute for years.”， 非谓语动词“the Chinese Poetry Competition held in Confucius Institute at Johannesburg University.”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。9．Dear William,I am delighted to know that you are coming to China , and especially excited that you will stay in my home. Now, I’d like to tell you some relevant information about your stay here.The bedroom in which you will live is bright and pleasant. Varieties of books as well as a computer are available. Of course you have easy access to the network. What ’s more, I intend to show you around my city where you can visit some places of interest. By the way, we are having a cold winter here. So , be sure to bring with you winter clothes.I am sure you will have a wonderful experience here. Looking forward to your coming.Yours,Li Hua【分析】这篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。【详解】第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，1．住宿条件；2．活动安排；3．其他事项(气候差异、着装提醒等)。第二，人称为第一人称和第二人称。第三，时态为一般现在时和一般将来时。第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段，欢迎William的到来并告知相关的信息。第二段，1．住宿条件；2．活动安排；3．其他事项(气候差异、着装提醒等)。第三段，表示感谢并期。其中第二段为重点段落。第三步：确定关键词汇和短语:bright and pleasant，varieties of books，have easy access to ,show sb. around, some places of interest, bring with, a wonderful experience.第四步：确定较为高级的句子:I am delighted to know that you are coming to China , and especially excited that you will stay in my home. The bedroom in which you will live is bright and pleasant. I intend to show you around my city where you can visit some places of interest.第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接: especially ,now, of course, whats more, by the way, so.第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。【点睛】文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式如: I am delighted to know that you are coming to China , and especially excited that you will stay in my home.The bedroom in which you will live is bright and pleasant. I intend to show you around my city where you can visit some places of interest.高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次,整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。10．Dear Mike, I am writing to ask you to lend me a hand. This September, I am going to Canada for further education for half a year. I wonder if you could help me find a proper flat and a roommate.As for the flat, I would really like to rent one with a kitchen, since I am not quite used to Western food and I love cooking. Internet access is a must. As you know, some assignments will require students to search for information on the Internet. I would prefer a roommate who is friendly and respects others’ privacy. If he/she is easy-going, it would be much nicer. I am extremely grateful for all your help. Looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua【分析】这篇书面表达属于应用类作文，要求写一封电子邮件。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是学生李华，今年9月将赴加拿大进修学习半年。请给你的加拿大笔友Mike写一封邮件，希望他能帮你找一个合租公寓。人称为第一人称，时态应为一般现在时。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：further education进修，wonder想知道，proper合适的，rent租，Internet access互联网接入，assignment作业，search for寻找，prefer更喜欢，privacy隐私，easy-going随和的，grateful感激的。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如：I wonder if you could help me find a proper flat and a roommate.宾语从句的运用；I would prefer a roommate who is friendly and respects others’ privacy.定语从句的运用。本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。