辽宁高考英语写作分类训练：申请信

这是一份辽宁高考英语写作分类训练：申请信，共20页。试卷主要包含了假设你是红星中学高三学生李华等内容，欢迎下载使用。
申请信
1．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。北京冬奥组委会正在招募志愿者，其职责为接待各国运动员及宣传中国文化，组委会要求志愿者能够熟练运用英语，请你用英文写一封申请信。内容包括：
1.申请原因；
2.你的优势；
3.相关经历。
注意：1. 词数不少于 100；2. 开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madame,
I have learned that volunteers for Beijing Winter Olympic Games are needed.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
2．北京获得了2022年冬奥会举办权.假如你是李华,你想申请成为2022年冬奥会的志愿者。请根据以下你的情况介绍，写一封想成为一名志愿者的申请信。
1．乐于助人  2．英语流利  3．善于交际
要求:80词左右，开头和结尾已经给出。
参考词汇:冬奥会the Winter Olympics
Dear Sir/Madam,
Thank you for taking your time to read my letter.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
3．假如你是李华，近日获悉北京2022年冬奥会和冬残奥会（Bejing 2022 Olympic and Paralympic Winter Games）志愿者全球招募工作已启动。请给你的新西兰网友Mark写一封e-mail，要点如下：
1.鼓励他报名申请；
2.分析原因；
3.随信附上招募公告。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mark,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
4．假定你是李华，在一所国际学校就读。近期你校将推广普及垃圾分类，目前正在招募志愿者。请你用英文向负责老师Mr. Hawk 提出申请，内容包括：
1. 写作目的；
2. 申请理由；
3. 期待加入。
注意：1. 词数80字左右。
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：垃圾分类 garbage sorting
175．假定你是李华，你校学生会招聘志愿者，接待来访的国外中学生。请你写信应聘，内容包括：1. 写信目的；2. 个人优势（口语能力；相关经验）；3. 希望获准。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 信得开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir or Madam,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
6．假定你是李华，暑期在纽约学习，得知当地博物馆要举办中国瓷器 (china)展。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括：
1.写信意图；
2.应征目的、优势。
注意：
1.词数 80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7．假定你是李华,市电视台将举办《中国诗词大赛》(Chinese Poetry Contest)国际友人专场,你想邀请对中国文化感兴趣的外教老师Adam一同观赛。请给他写一封信,内容包括:
1.时间:下周五晚六点半;
2.地点:市民中心;
3.诗词比赛的意义。
注意: 1. 词数100左右;
可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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8．假设你是李华，你校将举行国庆节文艺汇演，请你给活动负责人写一封邮件，申请当主持人，内容包括：
1. 写邮件的目的
2. 你的长处
3. 期待收到答复
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右:
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear sir,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9．假定你是李华，目前在英国一所中学做交换生，得知当地某动物收容所在招募志愿者，你准备申请加入。请根据下面的写作提示，用英语写一篇自荐信。内容包括：
1. 介绍个人情况；
2. 具备的一些优势；
3. 希望被录取。注意：
1. 词数 80 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
10．假定你是李华，近日你在网上得知某国外高中的国际英语夏令营已开始报名，你有意参加。请给该校写一封英文申请信，内容包括：
1. 写信目的；
2. 申请理由；
3. 期待答复。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua















1．Dear Sir/Madame,
I have learned that volunteers for Beijing Winter Olympic Games are needed. I’m writing to apply for this position.
As a Beijinger, I think it is a privilege and duty for me to offer the best voluntary service to our foreign guests and meanwhile promote Chinese culture.
I believe I’m qualified for the job. I have a good command of English and I’m confident in giving players guidance and help as required. What’s more, I have an extensive knowledge of winter sports, which will prove helpful in communicating with players. In addition, I have been involved in several international exchange programs, and enjoyed spreading our culture to foreigners.
I would appreciate it if you could offer me the opportunity. Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生用英文写一封申请信，申请成为北京冬奥会志愿者。
【详解】1.词汇积累
提供：provide→offer
促进：boost→promote
大量的：massive→extensive
另外：in addition=besides
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：I believe I’m qualified for the job. I have a good command of English and I’m confident in giving players guidance and help as required.
拓展句：I believe I’m qualified for the job because I have a good command of English and I’m confident in giving players guidance and help as required.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I have learned that volunteers for Beijing Winter Olympic Games are needed. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] What’s more, I have an extensive knowledge of winter sports, which will prove helpful in communicating with players.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
2．Dear Sir/Madam,
Thank you for taking your time to read my letter. With the coming of the Winter Olympics, I’m writing to apply to be a volunteer. Now I would like to introduce myself.
First of all, I am warmhearted and always ready to help others in need. As a result, the friends around me all think highly of me. What’s more, I have a good command of English, which allows me to communicate with people from foreign countries without any difficulty. At the same time, I am an easygoing boy and I am sure I can get along well with everyone and make good friends with the athletes. If I could be accepted, I promise I will value the chance and become a qualified volunteer.
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本文为应用文中的书信作文。写信申请成为一名冬奥会的志愿者并介绍自己的实际情况。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
擅长：be good at→have a good command of
交流：talk→communicate
很容易地：easily→without any difficulty
称赞：praise→think highly of
2. 句式拓展
简单句合并复合句
原句：I am warmhearted and always ready to help others in need. As a result, the friends around me all think highly of me.
拓展句：I am warmhearted and always ready to help others in need，because of which, the friends around me all think highly of me.
【点睛】1. With the coming of the Winter Olympics, I’m writing to apply to be a volunteer. （with结构使用。）
2. What’s more, I have a good command of English, which allows me to communicate with people from foreign countries without any difficulty. （非限制性定语从句的使用。）
3. If I could be accepted, I promise I will value the chance and become a qualified volunteer.（条件状语从句和宾语从句的使用。）
3．One possible version:
Dear Mark,
Hearing that the Beijing 2022 Olympic and Paralympic Winter Games have begun recruiting volunteers, I’m writing to ask if you’d like to contribute to the Olympics with me.
I do believe no one could be better for the position than you. Firstly, it would be a piece of cake for you to communicate with international athletes and audience. What’s more, the Olympic Games is a stage for the exchange of different cultures, where you can spread the splendid culture of your country. By the way, the detailed recruitment has been attached to the letter.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给新西兰网友Mark写一封e-mail，鼓励他报名申请北京2022年冬奥会和冬残奥会（Bejing 2022 Olympic and Paralympic Winter Games）志愿者。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和现在完成时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.鼓励网友Mark报名申请；
2.分析原因；
3.随信附上招募公告。
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
contribute to；a piece of cake；communicate with；the exchange of；be attached to；look forward to
第三步：连词成句
1.Hearing that the Beijing 2022 Olympic and Paralympic Winter Games have begun recruiting volunteers, I’m writing to ask if you’d like to contribute to the Olympics with me.
2.I do believe no one could be better for the position than you.
3.Firstly, it would be a piece of cake for you to communicate with international athletes and audience.
4.What’s more, the Olympic Games is a stage for the exchange of different cultures, where you can spread the splendid culture of your country.
5.By the way, the detailed recruitment has been attached to the letter.
6.Looking forward to your reply.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.文章使用了表文章结构顺序的衔接词： Firstly
2.文章使用了表并列补充关系的衔接词：What is more
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] Hearing that the Beijing 2022 Olympic and Paralympic Winter Games have begun recruiting volunteers, I’m writing to ask if you’d like to contribute to the Olympics with me.(现在分词hearing作状语)
[高分句型2] What’s more, the Olympic Games is a stage for the exchange of different cultures, where you can spread the splendid culture of your country.(where引导非限制性定语从句)
4．Dear Mr. Hawk,
I’m Li Hua, a Senior Two student. Learning that volunteers for garbage sorting are needed, I’m writing to apply to be one of them.
Having served as a volunteer in our community, I am equipped with abundant experience and knowledge of how to sort garbage. In Addition, being passionate and responsible is also what makes me qualified for the job. If given the chance, I will spare no effort to do it well.
I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration, looking forward to your earliest reply.
Your,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封信向负责老师Mr. Hawk申请做推广普及垃圾分类的志愿者。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和少量一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 写作目的；
2. 申请理由；
3. 期待加入。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
garbage sorting,apply to be, serve as, be equipped with, in addition, spare no effort to do, take sth into consideration, looking forward to
第三步：连词成句
1. Learning that volunteers for garbage sorting are needed, I’m writing to apply to be one of them.
2. Having served as a volunteer in our community, I am equipped with abundant experience and knowledge of how to sort garbage.
3. In Addition, being passionate and responsible is also what makes me qualified for the job.
4. If given the chance, I will spare no effort to do it well.
5. I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration, looking forward to your earliest reply.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last（供参考）
2.表并列补充关系：In addition
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that… （供参考）
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result （供参考）
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
【点睛】[高分句型1] In Addition, being passionate and responsible is also what makes me qualified for the job. （运用了一个由what引导的表语从句）
[高分句型2] I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration, looking forward to your earliest reply.（运用了I would appreciate it if…句型）
5．Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Li Hua. Learning that you are recruiting some volunteers to receive the visiting foreign students, I’d like to apply for the job.
To begin with, I have a good command of spoken English, thus making it easy for me to communicate with foreign students. What’s more, I have also taken part in several such activities, which equips me with rich experience in receiving foreign students.
If accepted, I would try to live up to your expectations. I would appreciate it if you could consider my application.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给学生会写封信，申请成为志愿者，接待来访的国外中学生。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和现在完成时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 写信目的；
2. 个人优势（口语能力；相关经验）；
3. 希望获准。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
recruit; foreign; volunteer; apply for; have a good command of; spoken English; communicate with; take part in; rich experience in; live up to one’s expectations; appreciate; application
第三步：连词成句
1. Learning that you are recruiting some volunteers to receive the visiting foreign students, I’d like to apply for the job.
2. To begin with, I have a good command of spoken English, thus making it easy for me to communicate with foreign students.
3. What’s more, I have also taken part in several such activities, which equips me with rich experience in receiving foreign students.
4. If accepted, I would try to live up to your expectations.
5. I would appreciate it if you could consider my application.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表并列补充关系：What is more
2.表因果关系：Thus
3.表文章结构顺序：To begin with
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] Learning that you are recruiting some volunteers to receive the visiting foreign students, I’d like to apply for the job. (运用了现在分词作状语以及that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] What’s more, I have also taken part in several such activities, which equips me with rich experience in receiving foreign students. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
6．Dear Sir,
I am Li Hua , a Chinese student who is taking a summer course in New York now. I have learned from your advertisement that a Chinese china exhibition will be held in the local museum, so I am writing to apply for the position as a student volunteer.
I can speak fluent English as well as standard Chinese. Besides, I once learned a lot about China in our school china club and have been crazy about collecting varieties of cups made of China. Young and energetic, I'm keen on communicating with foreign friends. Thus, I'm convinced that I'm qualified for the job.
I would be grateful if my application could meet with your approval. I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封信，申请成为当地博物馆举办的中国瓷器展的志愿者。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时，少量现在完成时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.写信意图；
2.应征目的、优势。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
take a summer course; exhibition; apply for; volunteer; speak fluent English; as well as; be crazy about; varieties of; energetic; be keen on; be qualified for; be grateful; look forward to
第三步：连词成句
1. I am Li Hua , a Chinese student who is taking a summer course in New York now.
2. I have learned from your advertisement that a Chinese china exhibition will be held in the local museum, so I am writing to apply for the position as a student volunteer.
3. I can speak fluent English as well as standard Chinese.
4. Besides, I once learned a lot about China in our school china club and have been crazy about collecting varieties of cups made of China.
5. Young and energetic, I'm keen on communicating with foreign friends.
6. Thus, I'm convinced that I'm qualified for the job.
7. I would be grateful if my application could meet with your approval.
8. I am looking forward to your reply.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表并列补充关系：Besides
2.表因果关系：So, Thus
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] I am Li Hua , a Chinese student who is taking a summer course in New York now. (运用了who引导定语从句)
[高分句型2] I would be grateful if my application could meet with your approval. (运用了if引导条件状语从句)
7．Dear Adam,
Knowing that you take a great interest in Chinese culture, I’m writing to invite you to attend Chinese Poetry Contest for foreigners to be held by the city TV station at 6:30 pm next Friday at the Citizen Center.
Similar contests are watched by many people in China as ancient Chinese culture is regaining popularity these days. Also, the wisdom delivered through Chinese classic poems can be rather impressive and helpful for the learners of the Chinese language.
It will be a rather unforgettable night and I sincerely hope you could come with me. Looking forward to your early reply!
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写封申请信，邀请对中国文化感兴趣的外教老师Adam一同观赛。
【详解】第一步：审题
1.体裁：提纲类作文
2.结构层次：
开头：1句表达写信目的；介绍时间地点
中间：2-3句介绍诗词比赛的意义
结尾：4-5句表达请求和盼复
3.时态：一般现在时、一般将来时
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
take a great interest in …感兴趣……； invite you to.邀请；attend参加；regain popularity重获欢迎；deliver 表达；rather impressive 相当感人……；sincerely hope 真诚希望；look forward to…盼望……。
第三步：连词成句
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
1.Knowing that you take a great interest in Chinese culture, I’m writing to invite you to attend Chinese Poetry Contest for foreigners to be held by the city TV station at 6:30 pm next Friday at the Citizen Center.
2.Similar contests are watched by many people in China as ancient Chinese culture is regaining popularity these days.
3.Also, the wisdom delivered through Chinese classic poems can be rather impressive and helpful for the learners of the Chinese language.
4.It will be a rather unforgettable night and I sincerely hope you could come with me.
5.Looking forward to your early reply!
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all，Firstly/First，Secondly/second…，And then，Finally，In the end，At last；
2.表并列补充关系：What is more，Besides，Moreover，Furthermore，In addition，As well as，not only…but (also)，including；
3.表转折对比关系：However，On the contrary，but，Although + clause（从句），In spite of + n/doing，On the one hand…，On the other hand… ，Some…，while others…，as for，so…that…；
4.表因果关系：Because，As，So，Thus，Therefore，As a result。
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了倒装句，如：“Knowing that you take a great interest in Chinese culture,.”，这句话用了非谓语动词，“Similar contests are watched by many people in China as ancient Chinese culture is regaining popularity these days.”运用了状语从句。全文思路清晰，层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
8．Dear sir,
I’m Li Hua, a student from the Students’ Union. I’m writing to apply to be the host of the cultural performance for our National Day.
Not only have I acquired a good command of English, but also I have hosted many performances held by our school. Therefore, when the performance features our National Day, I can help better introduce something related to the audience, which will help us students better understand our motherland.I’m certain my experience and knowledge will ensure my being equal to the position.
I would greatly appreciate it if you could consider my application.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封申请信，申请当国庆节文艺汇演主持人。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
   总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1.  写邮件的目的
      2. 你的长处
         1）英语表达能力较好
         2）主持经验充足
         3) 如果作主持人，自己可以做什么。
3. 期待收到答复
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
apply to; not only…but also…. ; acquire; a good command of; related to; I would greatly appreciate it if…
第三步：连词成句
1. Not only have I acquired a good command of English, but also I have hosted many performances held by our school.
2.When the performance features our National Day, I can help better introduce something related to the audience, which will help us students better understand our motherland
3.I’m certain my experience and knowledge will ensure my being equal to the position.
4. Looking forward to your early reply.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：When the performance features our National Day, I can help better introduce something related to the audience, which will help us students better understand our motherland这句话运用when引导的时间状语从句，用which引导定语从句；使用了一些固定词组，如apply            to. not only…but also…. acquired a good command of. related to.等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
9．Dear Sir/Madam.
   I'm Li Hua, an exchange student from China. I am excited to know some volunteers are needed for the animal Shelter . I am writing to recommend myself.
   I have been fond of small animals since my childhood. I dream of be becoming a vet when I grow up. That is why I want to learn more about animals in my spare time I am kind and helpful. More importantly. I don't live far away from the Animal Shelter, which makes it convenient for me to take care of the animals.
   I'd appreciate it if you could give me a chance.Looking forward to your early reply.
                                                                                                                                                       Yours
                                                                                                                                                        Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封申请信，申请加入当地某动物收容所作招募志愿者。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1.点名目的，自我介绍
      2.讲述个人优势
      3.表达感谢，简述获准后的打算，期待对方优先考虑
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
recommend myself; be fond of; dream of; in my spare time; it is convenient for me to ;take care of ;I'd appreciate it if… ;give me a chance; look forward to.
第三步：连词成句
1. I am excited to know some volunteers are needed for the animal Shelter.
2. I dream of be becoming a vet when I grow up.
3. That is why I want to learn more about animals in my spare time.
4. More importantly. I don't live far away from the Animal Shelter, which makes it convenient for me to take care of the animals.
5.I'd appreciate it if you could give me a chance .
6. Looking forward to your early reply.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：More importantly. I don't live far away from the Animal Shelter , which makes it convenient for me to take care of the animals.这句话使用了非限定性定语从句；使用了一些固定词组，如recommend myself; be fond of; dream of; in my spare time; look forward to等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
10．Dear Sir / Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a middle school student from China. Learning from the Internet that you are going to hold a summer camp, I’d like to take part in it.
Since I was very young, I’ve been studying English very hard. However, I have little chance to communicate with students from all over the world in English. So I wish to get this chance to improve my English.  
I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration and I hope to get an early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封申请信，申请参加国际英语夏令营，表达写信目的，申请理由等。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时为主。
结构：三段式结构。第一段表达写信目的；第二段讲述申请理由；第三段期待答复。
要求：1.表达写信目的（take part in）
      2.讲述申请理由：学习英语努力，希望获得交流机会（study hard; get this chance）
      3.期待回复（appreciate; get an early reply）
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
be going to; take part in; have little chance to do; communicate with; improve my English; take sth into consideration
第三步：连词成句
1. Learning from the Internet that you are going to hold a summer camp, I’d like to take part in it.
2. However, I have little chance to communicate with students from all over the world in English.
3. So I wish to get this chance to improve my English.
4. I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration and I hope to get an early reply.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。
1.作者在范文中使用了高级句式和主从复合句，如：
Learning from the Internet that you are going to hold a summer camp, I’d like to take part in it.( 从网上了解到你们要举办夏令营，我很想参加。)这句话运用了“learning from the Internet that you are going to hold a summer camp”现在分词作状语，且该结构中that引导宾语从句。
Since I was very young, I’ve been studying English very hard.(从我很小的时候起，我就一直努力学习英语。)该句中since引导时间状语从句。
I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration and I hope to get an early reply.(如果您能考虑我的申请，我将不胜感激，我希望能早日得到答复。)该句中it为形式宾语，if引导真正的宾语从句。
2.使用了一些固定词组，如be going to; take part in; have little chance to do; communicate with; improve my English; take sth into consideration等。
全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。