山西高考英语写作分类训练：建议信

这是一份山西高考英语写作分类训练：建议信，共16页。
建议信1．假如你是李华，你校将邀请国外健康专家给全校师生进行健康专题讲座。请你给你校交换生Tom写一封邮件，邀请他参加。主要内容包括：1. 时间及地点；2. 讲座内容：饮食与健康。注意：1. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2. 词数100左右；3. 注意书信的正确格式。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．假设你是李华，你的美国笔友最近在学汉语，他给你发来一份电子邮件讲述他对学习汉语兴趣浓厚，但是他在学习汉语的过程中常常因为犯错误而懊恼。请你用英语给他回一封邮件。内容包括：1.鼓励他继续努力，正确看待错误；2.给提出一些学好汉语的建议（至少两条）；3.邀请他来中国玩。注意：1.词数100左右（开头已经给出，不计入总词数）；2.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。Dear David,I’m glad to receive your e-mail and happy to know that you are interested in learning Chinese._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua3．假定你是李华，你的外国笔友Ann最近因为父母工作的关系转到了新的班级，她在与朋友相处方面遇到了一些问题，因此向你寻求交到好朋友且维持友谊的方法。你的建议内容如下：1.学会倾听2.有分歧时让步3.多陪伴注意：1.词数100左右2.开头及结尾为你写好，不计入总词数。参考词汇：compromise 让步Dear Ann,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Joe将要来中国做交换生，他发来电子邮件说他担心与新同学的 相处。请你根据以下提示给他发一封电子邮件。1、安慰对方；2、就如何与新同学相处给出合理建议（两到三条建议）;3、希望他尽早适应新学校的生活。注意：1、词数100左右；2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3、开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Joe,How is everything going?_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua5．假设你是李华,你的美国笔友玛丽最近在中国学习。她写信向你述说了她的困扰：不适应新环境，想家，感到焦虑。请你根据以下要点提示给她写一封回信。1.表示理解并给予安慰            2. 提出建议并说明理由。注意：字数120左右（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总数.）想家的，homesickDear Mary,I’m sorry to learn that you are having such a bad time._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6．假如你是沁县中学的李华，你的美国朋友Jim来信，询问如何保持健康，请你给他写一份回信提些建议。内容要点包括：1. 注意合理饮食；饮用适量的水分；2. 保证充足的睡眠；远离坏的生活习惯；3. 坚持锻炼身体，多参加体育运动；保持积极乐观的生活态度。注意： 1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7．快餐在现在的中国很流行，但快餐对人的身体却没什么好处。请你根据下面要点以“Fast Food”为题写一篇英语短文。1．快餐在中国十分流行，人们，尤其是儿童和青少年喜欢吃快餐。2．快餐受欢迎的原因；3．从营养角度讲，快餐食品却不尽人意；4．你的建议参考词汇：营养(nutrition)注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8．假如你叫李华，你的美国笔友John将要在下学期作为交换生来你校学习。但是他担心文化习俗、语言交流等问题会影响他在你校的学习生活。请你给他写一封电子邮件提出一些建议。内容要点如下：1 多和同学们交流，不断练习汉语口语；2 尽量多了解中国文化，尽快适应这里的生活。注意： 1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：文化差异cultural differences______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9．假如你叫李华，你的美国笔友John将要在下学期作为交换生来你校学习。但是他担心文化习俗、语言交流等问题会影响他在你校的学习生活。请你给他写一封电子邮件提出一些建议。内容要点如下：1 多和同学们交流，不断练习汉语口语；2 尽量多了解中国文化，尽快适应这里的生活。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：文化差异cultural differences_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________10．假设你是晨光中学的机器人兴趣小组组长李津，你的美国朋友Chris就读于天津某国际学校，他曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖。你打算邀请他加入你的团队，参加即将于7月底在天津举行的世界青少年机器人技能竞赛。请根据以下提示代表兴趣小组给他写一封电子邮件。（1）比赛的时间、地点；（2）邀请他的原因；（3）训练计划将发送其邮箱，请他提出建议。注意：（1）词数不少于100；（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：世界青少年机器人技能竞赛 the World Adolescent Robotics CompetitionDear Chris,I have good news to tell you. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’m looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Jin       1．Dear Tom,I'm writing to ask whether you are willing to attend a lecture about health and diet.The lecture is to be held at three this Friday afternoon in Room 301 of the school library, where a foreign expert will give us some advice on how to keep healthy through a balanced diet. As you know, an increasing number of students don't pay attention to their health and have developed bad eating habits. It's a good opportunity to learn more about how to keep fit by eating healthily. I believe it is a lecture you shouldn't miss.Looking forward to seeing you.Yours,Li Hua【分析】这篇书面表达属于应用类作文，要求写封邮件。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假如你是李华，你校将邀请国外健康专家给全校师生进行健康专题讲座。请你给你校交换生Tom写一封邮件，邀请他参加。人称为第一人称，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：be willing to愿意，attend参加，expert专家，advice建议，keep healthy保持健康，a balanced diet均衡饮食，As you know如你所知，pay attention to注意，eating habits饮食习惯，opportunity机会，keep fit保持健康，lecture演讲。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如：I'm writing to ask whether you are willing to attend a lecture about health and diet.运用了宾语从句，The lecture is to be held at three this Friday afternoon in Room 301 of the school library, where a foreign expert will give us some advice on how to keep healthy through a balanced diet.运用了定语从句等高级表达方式。本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。2．Dear David,I’m glad to receive your e-mail and happy to know that you are interested in learning Chinese. It is well-known that Chinese is difficult to learn. One can’t avoid making mistakes when learning a foreign language.Here are some tips on how to learn Chinese. Firstly, don’t be afraid to make mistakes. Making mistakes is a good way to learn how to say things right. Secondly, if you have a Chinese friend, ask him or her to practice with you. Thirdly, you should spend more time practicing listening to and speaking Chinese frequently.I wish you success in learning Chinese. I am expecting to hear from you. At last, I welcome you to China.Yours,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是李华，你的美国笔友最近在学汉语，他给你发来一份电子邮件讲述他对学习汉语兴趣浓厚，但是他在学习汉语的过程中常常因为犯错误而懊恼。请你用英语给他回一封邮件。【详解】1.词汇积累感兴趣：be interested in→take an interest in建议：tip→advice高兴的：glad→pleased方法：way→approach2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：Firstly, don’t be afraid to make mistakes. Making mistakes is a good way to learn how to say things right.拓展句：Firstly, don’t be afraid to make mistakes because making mistakes is a good way to learn how to say things right.【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m glad to receive your e-mail and happy to know that you are interested in learning Chinese. (运用了that引导宾语从句)[高分句型2] Secondly, if you have a Chinese friend, ask him or her to practice with you. (运用了if引导条件状语从句)3．Dear Ann,I am delighted to have received your letter. In your last letter you mentioned that you had some problems in making and maintaining new friends in a new class.From where I am standing, I suggest that one important thing to remember when trying to get along with other is to listen. When someone is talking to you, look at them. Above all, don’t interrupt them. Another thing I want to remind you is that you should compromise, when you don’t agree with each other, one or both of you should agree to give up something to find a solution. Last but not least you should keep in mind that it takes time and energy to build new and good relationship. You cannot expect to become friends with someone if you don’t spend time with them.I sincerely hope my suggestions can be helpful. I am looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【分析】这篇书面表达属于应用类作文，要求写一封建议信。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华，你的外国笔友Ann最近因为父母工作的关系转到了新的班级，她在与朋友相处方面遇到了一些问题，因此向你寻求交到好朋友且维持友谊的方法。人称为第一人称，时态应为一般现在时。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如delighted高兴的，maintain维持，get along with与…相处，look at看，Above all首先，interrupt打断，compromise妥协，agree with同意，give up放弃，Last but not least最后但并不是最不重要的，keep in mind记住。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如：In your last letter you mentioned that you had some problems in making and maintaining new friends in a new class.宾语从句的运用；From where I am standing, I suggest that one important thing to remember when trying to get along with other is to listen.宾语从句的运用。本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。4．Dear Joe,How is everything going? I can understand your worry about how to get along with new classmates. Take it easy. I’ll give you some advice.First, I think you should communicate with your classmates as much as you can even though it’s difficult for you to understand them. I believe that all the students are friendly. Second, I suggest you take part in some after-class activities with your classmates. It will help you find out more about your classmates and they can learn more about you too. Then you may become friends.I hope you get used to your new school life quickly and have a happy school year.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本文是一篇提纲类书面表达，要求考生把自己当成李华，你的美国朋友Joe将要来中国做交换生，他发来电子邮件说他担心与新同学的相处。请回复邮件安慰对方并提出与新同学相处的建议。全文以一般现在时和第三人称为主。【详解】第1步：审题。根据提示可知全文是一封电子邮件，要求李华回复电子邮件安慰Joe并提出与新同学相处的建议。全文以一般现在时和第三人称为主。第2步：组织要点。1、安慰对方；2、就如何与新同学相处给出合理建议：多与同学交流；积极参加课外活动；3、希望他尽早适应新学校的生活。第3步：根据提示及关键词组进行遣词造句，关键词为worry about、get along with 、communicate with、take part in some after-class activities等，写作时注意邮件的格式和惯用语。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】本篇范文结构完美，条理清晰。范文时态和人称运用准确，涵盖了文字提示要求的所有要点，且有适当的个人发挥。考生运用了多样式的句型结构，整篇文章富有变化，并不死板。使用了较多的高级词汇，如worry about、get along with 、communicate with、take part in some after-class activities、get used to等；尽量运用了丰富的句式，如虚拟语气I suggest you take part in some after-class activities with your classmates..同时文章的一些串联成分，如first、second等，这些串联词让各个要点更为紧密地结合在一起。以上写作技巧的运用提升了文章的层次，显示了考生具有很强的驾驭语言的能力。5．Dear Mary,I’m sorry to learn that you are having such a bad time. Actually, most people will feel homesick and anxious when they leave home and come to a new place, especially a foreign country. So don’t worry too much. Here are some suggestions for you.First, try to change some of your habits. In this way, you will get used to the new environment quickly. Second, it is necessary to go out and meet more people. As some people are very happy to share their hobbies and ideas with you, you will feel less homesick. Third, you should take part in some social activities. It will help you learn more about the local culture.Ｉhope you will find my suggestions helpful.Yours,Lihua【分析】本文为应用文。针对你的美国笔友玛丽最近在中国学习期间的的困扰如不不适应新环境，想家感到焦虑给她写一封信给予安慰；提出自己的建议并说明理由。建议信要叙述写信的原因，建议的内容，并提出建议的理由。提出的理由是合情合理，语气要礼貌。建议信要写得简明扼要，目的明确。具有合理性和说明力。这种建议信一般是首段要表明写作意图。陈述事由；主体段要提出建议并阐述理由；结尾段要礼貌地表达希望对方接受自己的建议的愿望。写作要注意这类文章的基本时态多用一般现在时和一般将来时。【详解】本文要点完整，句意通顺。文中的句式非常灵活，单句和复句相结合，尤其是复合句运用恰当，顺序连词的运用使得整个文章一气呵成，简明扼要。第一段表明了写作的意图时运用了两个复合句。即宾语从句（I’m sorry to learn that you are having such a bad time）； 状语从句（most people will feel homesick and anxious when they leave home and come to a new place, especially a foreign country）So don’t worry too much.。第二段提出建议并阐述理由。在本段中运用了顺序连词first …,second…，third,把三个建议连接起来。本段中运用了许多高级词汇如get used to sth.，share sth.with sb., feel homesick， take part in.本段中运用了常用句式, :It is adj. to do sth.和由as引导的状语从句（As some people are very happy to share their hobbies and ideas with you, you will feel less homesick.）最后一段用一个宾语从句Ｉhope you will find my suggestions helpful.礼貌地表达了希望对方接受自己的建议的愿望。6．You sent a letter to ask some advice about how to keep healthy in my daily life .Here are some ways that you can have a try ..  First, you should pay attention to the balanced diets because they give you much energy and satisfy what your life needs .Drinking properly water is also essential , especially after exercising . Secondly ,you must get have a good rest at night and it makes you becomes more energetic in the next day . Stay away from bad life habits, such as smoking and overworking, which severely damage the body organs. Thirdly, you should exercise regularly. You may go jogging, swimming, bicycling, playing basketball and so on. Exercises will improve one's ability to resist diseases. And last but not least, you should be optimistic, fearing no difficulties and obstacles, and always being in high spirits.Only in good health as well as in high spirits can you greet the future, which is full of competition and challenges, and strive to achieve your ambitions energetically【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封建议信。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封书信，假如你是沁县中学的李华，你的美国朋友Jim来信，询问如何保持健康，请你给他写一份回信提些建议。内容要点包括：1. 注意合理饮食；饮用适量的水分；2. 保证充足的睡眠；远离坏的生活习惯；3. 坚持锻炼身体，多参加体育运动；保持积极乐观的生活态度。时态应为一般现在时。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：keep healthy保持健康，daily life日常生活，pay attention to注意，essential基本的，have a good rest好好休息一下，Stay away from远离，resist抵抗，last but not least最后但并不是最不重要的，optimistic乐观的。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【亮点说明】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如：Stay away from bad life habits, such as smoking and overworking, which severely damage the body organs. 定语从句的运用；Only in good health as well as in high spirits can you greet the future, which is full of competition and challenges, and strive to achieve your ambitions energetically定语从句的运用本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。7．Fast FoodFast food is becoming more and more popular in China, especially among children and teenagers.There are several reasons for its popularity. First, it is very convenient and saves a lot of time. Second, you can either eat it there or take it away. Third, the environment of fast food restaurants is both clean and comfortable.However, in terms of nutrition, fast food is far from satisfactory. It is usually not a balanced diet and low in nutritional value.Fast food is only a good choice when you are in a hurry and turn to it once in a while. It's good for people, especially children, to eat fast food as little as possible.【分析】本题要求考生以“Fast Food”为题写一篇英语短文，介绍中国快餐业发展的情况。审题：文章要使用一般现在时为主的时态，第三人称为主。要点：快餐在中国十分流行，人们，尤其是儿童和青少年喜欢吃快餐。分析快餐受欢迎的原因；从营养角度讲，快餐食品却不尽人意；你的建议。文章架构：全文分为四部分，第一部分叙述中国快餐发展情况，第二部分分析原因，第三部分说明快餐的问题。第四部分提出自己的建议。【详解】范文亮点较多，主要体现在文章包含所有要点，而且结构清晰，全文分为四部分，条理分明。而且作者在分析快餐受欢迎的原因以及第四部分个人建议方面，给出了自己同时文章中运用了高中英语中较为复杂的结构，同时在个人建议的时候，运用了较多的连接词，如first, second, third等，这些连接词让文章结构更为紧密。8．Dear John,I am more than glad to hear that you will come to my school as an exchange student. Since you are worried about the cultural differences, I’m writing to offer some suggestions.In my opinion, there’s no need for you to be shy and all of us are willing to be friends with you. First, you should often communicate with our classmates in Chinese, which may help improve your spoken Chinese quickly. Besides, I am ready to introduce Chinese cultures to you. Only in this way will you deepen your understanding of Chinese and adapt to the life here more easily.I believe that you will enjoy your life in our school and I am looking forward to your arrival.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达要求写一封信，属于应用文，也是提纲类短文。第1步：审题。根据提示可知，本篇为一封电子邮件；要求考生以李华的名义给你的美国笔友John写一封电子邮件提出一些关于学校生活的建议。时态应为一般现在时。第2步：确定要点。1. 你的美国笔友John将要在下学期作为交换生来你校学习。但是他担心文化习俗、语言交流等问题会影响他在你校的学习生活。2.建议他多和同学们交流，不断练习汉语口语；3.尽量多了解中国文化，尽快适应这里的生活。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【详解】范文分为四部分，显得条理清楚。文章第一部分介绍了John将要在下学期作为交换生来中国学习。但是他担心文化习俗、语言交流等问题会影响他在你校的学习生活。第二部分中李华提出了具体的建议，多和同学们交流，不断练习汉语口语；同时尽量多了解中国文化，尽快适应这里的生活。同时作者还合理使用串联词，如first，besides等，这些串联词让各要点成为了一个整体。同时作者在范文里还使用了尽量多的高级句式，如定语从句which may help improve your spoken Chinese quickly. 倒装句Only in this way will you deepen your understanding of Chinese and adapt to the life here more easily.这些句式的运用很好地提升了文章的层次。9．Dear John,I am more than glad to hear that you will come to my school as an exchange student. Since you are worried about the cultural differences, I’m writing to offer some suggestions.In my opinion, there’s no need for you to be shy and all of us are willing to be friends with you. First, you should often communicate with our classmates in Chinese, which may help improve your spoken Chinese quickly. Besides, I am ready to introduce Chinese cultures to you. Only in this way will you deepen your understanding of Chinese and adapt to the life here more easily.I believe that you will enjoy your life in our school and I am looking forward to your arrival.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。美国笔友John将要在下学期作为交换生来你校学习。但是他担心文化习俗、语言交流等问题会影响他在你校的学习生活。要求给他写一封电子邮件提出一些建议。要点包括：1 多和同学们交流，不断练习汉语口语；2 尽量多了解中国文化，尽快适应这里的生活。【详解】第一步：确定文体，根据提示可知，本文是一封电子邮件。第二步：根据写作要求确定关键词（组），如：I am more than glad to hear that……,exchange student, cultural differences, are willing to, communicate with, adapt to, looking forward to.第三步：根据提示和关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如宾语从句that you will come to my school as an exchange student.和that you will enjoy your life in our school. there’s no need to do.句型，定语从句which may help improve your spoken Chinese quickly. 倒装句Only in this way will you…… 全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰，层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。10．略【详解】试题分析：本篇书面要求写一封邀请信。写作的时候要注意以下几点：一、动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。内容要点包括：1. 代表兴趣小组发出邀请；2. 介绍比赛的时间、地点等安排；3. 说明邀请他的原因，包括Chris曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖；4. 告诉他训练计划将发送其邮箱，请他提出建议。二、写作时注意准确运用时态，对于本文来说，以一般将来时为主，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。点睛：书面表达考查大家所熟悉的提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达。考生写完之后要检查是否有语法错误，看能否运用所学的知识将简单句变为复杂句，当然，没有把握的句子不要写。