江苏高考英语写作分类训练：应用文

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应用文1．假定你是李华，你的好友Mary对自己的容貌非常不自信，十分苦恼，想去做整容手术，给你来信询问你对整容的看法，请用英文给她写一封回信，内容包括：1. 表示不赞同；2. 整容的弊端；3. 你对美的看法。注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：整容手术plastic surgeryDear Mary,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua2．请根据下面的写作要点和要求写一篇标题为Friendship in Modern Society的短文。【写作要点】1.友谊的积极作用；2.当代社交媒体对友谊发展的负面影响，如缺少面对面的交流，网络欺凌等；3.如何在现实生活中维持友谊(至少两点)。【写作要求】1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：网络欺凌 cyberbullyingFriendship in Modern Society_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．假定你是李华，某英文报社正在就“刷脸支付的利弊”这一话题征文。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1.分析利弊；2.展望前景。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.参考词汇：刷脸支付 face-scanning payment。My View on Face-scanning Payment________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．假设你是李华，今年夏天你观看了冬奥会直播，中国运动员在比赛中的拼搏精神使你大受鼓舞。请以此为话题，为你即将参加的学校英语演讲比赛写一篇演讲稿。内容包括：1.谈谈何为奥运精神；2.奥运健儿的优秀品质；3.呼吁大家向奥运健儿学习。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Good morning, everyone! I’m Li Hua. It is such a great honor to stand here and give a speech to you today. The topic of my speech is sportsmanship.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．假定你是李华，上周日你参加了学校组织的一场志愿者活动。请写一篇文章向校英文报投稿，内容包括：1.所作所为；2.参与动因； 3.参与感受。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6．假定你要参加班级英语演讲比赛，演讲的题目是“A Friend In Need Is A Friend Indeed”。请你写一篇英文演讲稿，内容包括：1.你对题目的理解；2.以一个事例说明；3.总结发言。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右：2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。A Friend In Need Is A Friend Indeed________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7．假定你是李华，你的英国网友Andrew来信向你咨询“好朋友的标准是什么”，请你给他写一封回信，内容包括：1. 好朋友的标准；2. 期待对方的观点。注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 开头和结尾已为你写好。Dear Andrew,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua8．本月你校校报的英语专栏正在举办以“Be a Student with Dreams and Responsibilities”为主题的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1.你的理想；2.发出倡议。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Be a Student with Dreams and Responsibilities.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9．某英语报刊正举办以“学习与锻炼”为主题的征文比赛。请你写一篇短文参加比赛，内容包括：1. 你校学生学习与锻炼的现状；2. 分析产生该现状的原因；3. 你自己的感想。注意：1. 词数 80 左右；2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________10．假如你是李华，在今天的外教阅读课上，你做数学作业被外教老师John发现，没收了你的作业。请你给他写一封信，内容包括：l、表示歉意；2、说明原因；3、希望他谅解并作出保证。Dear John,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua 1．Dear Mary,Knowing that you are upset about your appearance and have a desire for plastic surgery, I’m writing to share with you my opinion. I strongly disapprove of having plastic surgery and the reasons are as follows.To begin with, people don’t always get satisfactory results from plastic surgery. What’s worse, plastic surgery can be so dangerous that patients may suffer endless pains after failed plastic surgery or even die during operations, which may stop them from returning to a normal life.Personally, it is not the appearance but the inner beauty that matters. You should learn to see the good things about yourself and remember you are unique. Sincerely hope you can love and have confidence in yourself.Yours,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，你的好友Mary对自己的容貌非常不自信，十分苦恼，想去做整容手术，给你来信询问你对整容的看法，请用英文给她写一封回信。【详解】1.词汇积累首先：To begin with→ First of all更糟糕的是：What’s worse → Worse still个人看来：Personally→In one’s opinion真诚地：Sincerely→ Honestly2.句式拓展同义句转换原句：Knowing that you are upset about your appearance and have a desire for plastic surgery, I’m writing to share with you my opinion.拓展句：Because I know you are upset about your appearance and have a desire for plastic surgery, I’m writing to share with you my opinion.【点睛】【高分句型1】Knowing that you are upset about your appearance and have a desire for plastic surgery, I’m writing to share with you my opinion.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）【高分句型2】What’s worse, plastic surgery can be so dangerous that patients may suffer endless pains after failed plastic surgery or even die during operations, which may stop them from returning to a normal life.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）2．One Possible Version:Friendship in Modern SocietyFriends benefit us from every aspect. Close friendships may comfort the heart, advise the head and help us achieve the goals we set for ourselves. Through friendship, we can become happier, wiser and more satisfied humans.Unfortunately, the popularity of modern social media is eating away at the meaning of friendship. The increasingly frequent texting and messaging are replacing face-to-face communication, making it more challenging to keep the connection we have developed. Worse still, cyberbullying, including some mean comments, does great harm to us physically and mentally.To make friends a real part of our lives, we ought to put down our smartphones and meet friends in person on a regular basis. Of equal importance is a full and frank chat with each other when tensions occur. Only in these ways can we enjoy the benefits of friendship.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作。要求考生写一篇标题为Friendship in Modern Society的短文。既要介绍友谊的积极作用，也要提及负面影响，以及如何维持友谊。【详解】1.词汇积累不幸地：Unfortunately → unluckily更糟糕的：worse still → what’s worse对……有害：do harm to→ be harmful to亲自：in person→ personally2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：The increasingly frequent texting and messaging are replacing face-to-face communication, making it more challenging to keep the connection we have developed.拓展句：The increasingly frequent texting and messaging are replacing face-to-face communication, which makes it more challenging to keep the connection we have developed.【点睛】【高分句型1】Close friendships may comfort the heart, advise the head and help us achieve the goals we set for ourselves.（运用了省略关系代词that或which的定语从句）【高分句型2】Of equal importance is a full and frank chat with each other when tensions occur.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句）3．      Nowadays, face-scanning payment is increasingly popular among customers, but it has both advantages and disadvantages.As for its advantages, first, the payment can be completed quickly. Second, customers don’t have to carry a mobile phone or a bank card, which makes payment more convenient. When it comes to its disadvantages, the most worrying thing is that face recognition hasn’t reached 100% accuracy, which might lead to payment risks. Additionally, customers’ personal information may be revealed illegally.I believe, with the improvement of face recognition, face-scanning payment will definitely become more and more reliable.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生用英语写一篇短文，就“刷脸支付的利弊”这一话题向英文报社投稿。【详解】1.词汇积累越来越……：increasingly →more and more迅速地：quickly →rapidly不必：don’t have to →don’t need to导致：lead to →result in2.句式拓展句式转换原句：I believe, with the improvement of face recognition, face-scanning payment will definitely become more and more reliable.拓展句：I believe face-scanning payment will definitely become more and more reliable as face recognition technology improves.【点睛】[高分句型1] Second, customers don’t have to carry a mobile phone or a bank card, which makes payment more convenient. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2] When it comes to its disadvantages, the most worrying thing is that face recognition hasn’t reached 100% accuracy, which might lead to payment risks. (运用了that引导的表语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句)4．One possible version:Good morning, everyone! I’m Li Hua. It is such a great honor to stand here and give a speech to you today. The topic of my speech is sportsmanship.The Olympic spirit/sportsmanship includes a mutual understanding between athletes, friendship, solidarity and fair play, which helps us honor our opponents, strengthen unity and promote friendship in fair competitions.What impressed me most is the quality those Olympians possess. They go all out to achieve excellence and push the boundaries of human achievement.I propose that we learn from these role models and keep sportsmanship in mind to pursue the same spirit of fair play and decency!【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生写一篇演讲稿，谈谈何为奥运精神，奥运健儿的优秀品质，并呼吁大家向他们学习。【详解】1.词汇积累加强：strengthen→enhance给某人留下印象：impress sb.→leave a deep impression on sb.全力以赴：go all out to do→spare no effort to do拥有：posses→own2.句型拓展陈述句改为强调句原句：What impressed me most is the quality those Olympians possess.拓展句：It is the quality those Olympians possess that impressed me.【点睛】[高分句型1]The Olympic spirit/sportsmanship includes a mutual understanding between athletes, friendship, solidarity and fair play, which helps us honor our opponents, strengthen unity and promote friendship in fair competitions.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）[高分句型2]I propose that we learn from these role models and keep sportsmanship in mind to pursue the same spirit of fair play and decency!（运用了that引导的宾语从句）[高分句型3]What impressed me most is the quality those Olympians possess.（运用了what引导的主语从句）5．    Last Sunday, I participated in a volunteer activity organized by the school. In order to beautify our city and promote people’s awareness of environmental protection, the volunteers from our school did something very meaningful.We started a campaign to clean up the wastes around the City Park. We went into action the moment we arrived there by bus. We picked up the plastic bags and bottles in the bushes around the lake and cleaned the benches and gym equipment with wet towels. Meanwhile, some of us handed out brochures to the passers-by, telling them about the benefits of garbage-sorting.Tired as we were, we all felt happy, thinking that we had made contributions to our beautiful city.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇文章向校英文报投稿，介绍自己上周日参加的志愿者活动。【详解】1.词汇积累参加：participate in→take part in有意义的：meaningful→significant同时：meanwhile→at the same time高兴的：happy→pleased2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Last Sunday, I participated in a volunteer activity organized by the school.拓展句：Last Sunday, I participated in a volunteer activity which was organized by the school.【点睛】【高分句型1】We went into action the moment we arrived there by bus.（运用了the moment引导的时间状语从句）【高分句型2】Tired as we were, we all felt happy, thinking that we had made contributions to our beautiful city.（运用了as引导的让步状语从句和that引导的宾语从句）6．One possible version:A Friend In Need Is A Friend IndeedGood morning, everyone! It is my honor to stand here to give a lecture on friendship. I think this topic indicates when friends are in trouble, we try our best to help them. It is the true friendship of friends.I’ll never forget last summer vacation, when I was addicted to online games. Having played day and night, I ignored all my homework. When I returned to school in the new term, I felt myself left far behind by my classmates in studies, which greatly discouraged me. Thanks to the help of my good friends in my study and life, I not only caught up with my classmates, but also got rid of the habit of playing online games.I do hope my story can remind us all to cherish friendship, help each other and make progress together. Thanks for your attention.【导语】本文属于应用文。要求考生以“患难见真情”写一份英文演讲稿去参加班级的演讲比赛。【详解】1.词汇积累困难：trouble→difficulty忽略：ignore→neglect落后：leave behind→fall behind珍惜：cherish→value2.句式拓展陈述句变倒装句原句：Thanks to the help of my good friends in my study and life, I not only caught up with my classmates, but also got rid of the habit of playing online games.拓展句：Thanks to the help of my good friends in my study and life, not only did I catch up with my classmates, but also got rid of the habit of playing online games.【点睛】【高分句型1】Having played day and night, I ignored all my homework.（运用了现在分词having played作原因状语）【高分句型2】When I returned to school in the new term, I felt myself left far behind by my classmates in studies, which greatly discouraged me. （运用了when引导的时间状语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句）7．Dear Andrew,I’m writing to share with you what makes a good friend.A good friend should be honest. As a saying goes, a good friend is like a mirror and lets you know what is happening. Whether you are right or wrong, you are told the truth. Besides, a good friend should be trustworthy. He will always be there for you. Lastly, being humorous is just as important. Nothing can make spending time together more fun than a friend who makes you laugh.What do you think? I’m looking forward to your ideas.Yours,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国网友Andrew回一封信，向他表达自己对于“好朋友的标准”的想法，并对他的观点表达期待。【详解】1. 词汇积累另外：Besides → In addition/What’s more /Additionally可信的：trustworthy → reliable重要的：important→ essential/significant幽默的：humorous → witty2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：Besides, a good friend should be trustworthy. He will always be there for you.拓展句：Besides, a good friend should be trustworthy, who will always be there for you.【点睛】【高分句型1】Whether you are right or wrong, you are told the truth.（运用了whether引导让步状语从句）【高分句型2】Nothing can make spending time together more fun than a friend who makes you laugh.（运用了who引导的定语从句）8．One possible version:Be a Student With Dreams and ResponsibilitiesWith the rapid development of China, we, youngsters, should stick to our dreams and shoulder our responsibilities. As for me, I always dream to better this world. I try to be good at western and eastern cultures, which allows me to spread Chinese cultures. Additionally, I will do my part to make our country more powerful and beautiful.I sincerely appeal to every student to spare no effort to realize the Chinese Dream. Only when we young generations strive will our nation thrive.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生“Be a Student with Dreams and Responsibilities”为主题进行征文活动的投稿，内容包括：1.你的理想；2.发出倡议。【详解】1.词汇积累坚持：stick to→persist in改善：better→improve此外：additionally→what’s more实现某事：realize sth.→make sth. come true2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：With the rapid development of China, we, youngsters, should stick to our dreams and shoulder our responsibilities.拓展句：As China is developing rapidly, we, youngsters, should stick to our dreams and shoulder our responsibilities.【点睛】【高分句型1】As for me, I always dream to better this world. I try to be good at western and eastern cultures, which allows me to spread Chinese cultures. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)【高分句型2】Only when we young generations strive will our nation thrive. (运用了部分倒装)9．One possible version:With the increasing pressure from the exams, more and more students in our school sacrifice the time for sports to prepare for exams, which is so important for our development. We only have one class a week, obviously not enough. Actually, most students are eager to take part in sports, but they are so occupied with their study. In my view, important as it is for us to have a better performance in the exam, exercise is equally vital. Without a strong body we could achieve nothing in our life. I hope all students can reorganize the importance of healthy bodies and try to build up our bodies as well.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，某英语报刊正举办以“学习与锻炼”为主题的征文比赛。请你写一篇短文参加比赛，内容包括：1. 你校学生学习与锻炼的现状；2. 分析产生该现状的原因；3. 你自己的感想。【详解】1.词汇积累重要的：important→significant渴望的：eager→wishful获得：achieve→gain在我看来：In my view =Personally2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Without a strong body we could achieve nothing in our life.拓展句：If we did not have a strong body we could achieve nothing in our life.【点睛】[高分句型1] With the increasing pressure from the exams, more and more students in our school sacrifice the time for sports to prepare for exams, which is so important for our development. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2] In my view, important as it is for us to have a better performance in the exam, exercise is equally vital. (运用了as引导的让步状语从句)10．Dear John,I sincerely apologize for doing math homework in your class today. I would appreciate it if you can forgive me.Having been caught doing other things in your class, I know any excuse is meaningless. However, I did so because my mother happened to fall ill yesterday and I had to send her to hospital and look after her by myself, for my father is working.Doing irrelevant things in class is not acceptable to any teacher. I swear it will never happen again. Will you please be so kind as to give it back to me? Thanks a lot!Yours,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教老师John写一封道歉信，表达自己的歉意、说明原因、做出保证下次不再犯，并希望他谅解。【详解】1.词汇积累原谅：forgive → make allowances for毫无意义的：meaningless → pointless/worthless/empty/hollow生病：fall ill → get sick无关的：irrelevant → unrelated/unfitting/inappropriate2.句式拓展同义句转化原句：Having been caught doing other things in your class, I know any excuse is meaningless.拓展句：There is no excuse can be acceptable for having been caught doing other things in your class.【点睛】【高分句型1】I would appreciate it if you can forgive me.（运用了it做形式宾语）【高分句型2】Having been caught doing other things in your class, I know any excuse is meaningless.（运用了现在分词的完成式作状语）