上海高考英语写作分类训练：应用文

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应用文1．Directions: Write an English composition in 80-100 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.假设你叫李华，你所在年级的英语老师们在各班建立了英语学习微信群 (WeChat Group),师生在群中交流英语学习经验、布置英语学习任务、共享英语学习资料等，现已将近一个学期。你的英文老师Mary想得到学生们对这个英语学习群的反馈信息，请给她写一封电子邮件，内容要点如下：1. 是否有必要建立英语学习群？2. 这个英语学习群在哪些方面对学生是有帮助的？3. 你对此群有哪些方面的改进建议？____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.你校学生会主席Simon在征集明年高中毕业典礼的活动方案，作为高三的学生，请你给他写封信，信的内容必须包括以下两个方面：1. 阐述你活动方案的主题和内容。2. 谈谈你设计该方案的理由。3．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 近一年来，为了促进学生身心健康和全面发展，学校进一步加强了对学生作业、睡眠、手机、读物、体质五个方面的管理。每一位在校学生都能感受到这项举措带来的变化。《The Teens》杂志社向青少年读者征稿，希望大家能分享这一举措在各校的具体落实情况。假设你是明启中学高三学生李华，请就其中一个方面的管理描述自己的经历并发表对此的看法。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.假设你有意参加某英文报举行的题为“My future home”征文调查活动，征文内容从这些住房特征中选择：交通便利；住房外部环境宜居；家居内部设施齐全；用具及装饰健康环保；住房智能化。现请你一写篇文章，具体要求如下：（1）你未来理想的住房应该有以上哪三个特征？（2）说明理由。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 光华中学于上月进行了秋季校运会。作为该校高三学生王鹏，你想写一封信给自己的好友张航，与他分享自己的所见所想。你的信件必须包含：描述你眼中校运会期间最令人感动或令人兴奋的场景；阐述你选择这一场景的原因。6．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.假如你是明启中学高中学生李明，最近在一本英语杂志上读到一篇关于青少年心理状态的文章。文中提出与20年前的青少年相比，如今的青少年更加不快乐。你对此话题很感兴趣，请写一封信给该报社的编辑，表达你的想法，内容须包括：1. 导致该现象的原因2. 相应的建议___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.亲爱的同学，你成为光荣的复兴人已有两个多月了。在这段时间里你一定会对我们的校园有很多新的发现，新的体验。请描述一下这些日子里，你最喜欢去的校园一角，并说明理由。文章内容包括：1. 具体描述学校的某个场馆、教室或某处的景观布置；2. 结合亲身经历，说明你喜欢的理由。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8．Directions: Write an English composition in 100-120 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.请你设计一份活动计划，十月一日到老人院开展一次献爱心志愿者活动。内容包括：1.活动时间安排。2.活动内容安排（设计三项或以上活动）3.活动的目的和意义。要求：1.表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范。2.词数120词左右。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.在明年高考结束后三个月的假期中，上海志愿者协会将开展两场不同的志愿者活动。请谈谈你会选择哪个活动，并陈述你的理由。项目内容内容持续时间费用尼泊尔(Nepal)支教1. 教授当地小学生简单的中文、英文介绍中国文化2. 组织课余活动连续一个月，每周五天4000元（含食宿），机票自理上海动物园志愿者1. 喂养动物2. 维持秩序3. 向游客宣传保护动物的知识持续两个月，每周三次午饭自理___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________10． Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.每年五月的第二个周日是母亲节，你所在的班级准备以母亲节为契机筹划一次班级主题活动，你积极参与筹划并设计了一个活动方案，请你在全班同学面前介绍你的方案。介绍包括以下两个方面：1、简述你活动方案的主题和内容。2、谈谈你设计该活动方案的理由。(文中不能涉及真实信息)________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________               1．Dear Mary,Having used English Learning WeChat Group for one semester, I think it is necessary to establish such a learning group, because it helps us students in many aspects.First of all, we can share English learning resources, which not only provides us with a lot of knowledge, but also saves us a lot of time. Secondly, we can exchange learning experience with our classmates and teachers, which can improve our learning efficiency and effectiveness. In addition, teachers can check our completion of learning tasks through the group, which reduces the pressure of parents, who are either busy or don’t know much about English.By the way, I have a suggestion. Before uploading English learning materials, maybe teachers check whether they are suitable for us. Sometimes too much information is also a problem, for sometimes we don’t know which to choose.                                                                                                                   Your student,Li Hua【分析】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给英文老师Mary写信，聊聊自己对英语微信学习群的看法。【详解】1.词汇积累建立：set up→establish方面：respect→aspect给某人提供某物：offer sb. sth.→provide sb. with sth.压力，负担：burden→pressure2.句型拓展合并句子原句：By the way, I have a suggestion. Before uploading English learning materials, maybe teachers check whether they are suitable for us.拓展句：By the way, I have a suggestion that teachers should check whether learning materials are suitable for us before they are uploaded.【点睛】[高分句型1]First of all, we can share English learning resources, which not only provides us with a lot of knowledge, but also saves us a lot of time. （运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）[高分句型2]Before uploading English learning materials, maybe teachers check whether they are suitable for us.（运用了whether引导的宾语从句）2．Dear Simon,I heard that the school is needing plans for next year’s high school graduation ceremony. As a senior high school student, I would like to put forward my own opinions to make this closely related activity better. I hope you can consider these opinions.First of all, the theme of this activity should be gratitude, and we want to thank the teachers and be grateful to the parents. In addition, we should invite parents and teachers to participate together to make this event more loving and warm. Moreover, I think we should hold a speech contest, everyone talking about their study and life after graduation to have confidence about future and hold a positive and optimistic attitude.The above is my ideal plan for this event, I’d appreciate it if you can consider it during your busy schedule.Yours Sincerely,XXX【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给校学生会主席Simon写信，给出自己关于明年高中毕业典礼的活动方案。【详解】1.词汇积累提出：put forward → come up with此外：In addition → what’s more感激的：grateful → appreciative喜欢：speech contest → speech competition2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：I would like to put forward my own opinions to make this closely related activity better.拓展句：I would like to put forward my own opinions so that we can make this closely related activity better.【点睛】【高分句型1】Moreover, I think we should hold a speech contest, everyone talking about their study and life after graduation to have confidence about future and hold a positive and optimistic attitude.（运用了独立主格结构和to do不定式表目的）【高分句型2】I’d appreciate it if you can consider it during your busy schedule.（运用了it作形式宾语）3．In an effort to promote students’ wellbeing in body and mind as well as all-round development, our school has further enhanced the management in students’ homework, sleep time, cellphones, reading and physical health. As a consequence, we students all are bathed in the changes that these measurements have brought.In my part, what influences me most is the increased reading time through various activities. For one thing, our school launches a reading campaign every Wednesday with the aim of raising the awareness of reading more among students. Thanks to the reading activity, I can be more involved in reading classical books, thus arousing my interest in Chinese traditional culture. From my point of view, the reading campaign is of great benefit to us students. Not only does it broaden our horizon, but also enriches our mind as well as our life.【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就学生五项管理中的一个方面描述自己的经历并发表对此的看法。【详解】1.词汇积累为了：in an effort to→ in order to沉浸于：be bathed in → be indulged in因此：as a consequence → consequently各种各样的：various→a variety of2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Thanks to the reading activity, I can be more involved in reading classical books, thus arousing my interest in Chinese traditional culture.拓展句：Thanks to the reading activity, I can be more involved in reading classical books, which arouses my interest in Chinese traditional culture.【点睛】【高分句型1】As a consequence, we students all are bathed in the changes that these measurements have brought.（运用了that引导的限制性定语从句）【高分句型2】Thanks to the reading activity, I can be more involved in reading classical books, thus arousing my interest in Chinese traditional culture.（运用了非谓语动词作状语）【高分句型3】Not only does it broaden your horizon, but also enriches your mind as well as your life. （运用了not only引导的部分倒装）4．Everyone has their dream home. I hope the ideal housing in the future should have convenient transportation, livable external environment and intelligent housing.In my opinion, convenient transportation should be the first choice for housing. Convenient transportation is good for us to go to work, go shopping and take the children to school. In case of emergency, convenient transportation will allow you to get to your destination smoothly, and you will not miss the opportunity because of traffic. The external environment of housing is livable and more suitable for people to live. I hope my future home will be built in a beautiful place with flowers and trees, which is good for our health. In the information age, intelligent housing is beyond reproach. Such a home can make the family feel more secure and save unnecessary wasted time to do more meaningful things. All in all, I want to have an ideal home that belongs to me.【分析】本篇书面表达属于记叙文，假设你有意参加某英文报举行的题为“My future home”征文调查活动，征文内容从这些住房特征中选择：交通便利；住房外部环境宜居；家居内部设施齐全；用具及装饰健康环保；住房智能化。你未来理想的住房应该有以上的三个特征并说出理由。【详解】1.词汇积累依我看来：in my opinion→in my view→personally对某人好：be good for sb.→be beneficial to sb. →do sb. good安全的：secure→safe合适的：be suitable for→be fit for2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：In case of emergency, convenient transportation will allow you to get to your destination smoothly, and you will not miss the opportunity because of traffic.拓展句：In case of emergency, convenient transportation will allow you to get to your destination smoothly, not missing the opportunity because of traffic.【点睛】[高分句型1] I hope my future home will be built in a beautiful place with flowers and trees, which is good for our health. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2] I hope the ideal housing in the future should have convenient transportation, livable external environment and intelligent housing. (运用了省略that的宾语从句)5．Dear Zhang Hang,Last week we had the school sports meeting on our school sports ground. I’d like to share the experience with you.All my classmates took an active part in it. Sometimes we watched the sports games closely. Sometimes we gave loud cheers to the sports members. I joined in 200-metre running race. As soon as I heard the starting pang, I tried my best to run faster than others. As I was running, I could hear “come on! come on!” from my classmates. This gave me great strength. Finally I was the first person to get to the finishing line and I was number one. As a result, my class won the first prize in the sports meeting. How proud we were! It was really an exciting day.I like running in my spare time because it can build up our strength and make us healthy. I think running race is the most exciting item in the sports meeting. If you are involved in a running race, you can get more pleasure. Yours,Wang Peng【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给给自己的好友张航写一封信，与他分享校运会期间最令人感动或令人兴奋的场景。【详解】1.词汇积累参加：take part in→participate in努力地：try one’s best→do one’s best快速地：fast→quickly增强：build up→enhance2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Finally I was the first person to get to the finishing line and I was number one.拓展句：Finally I was the first person that got to the finishing line and I was number one.【点睛】【高分句型1】As soon as I heard the starting pang, I tried my best to run faster than others.（运用了as soon as引导的时间状语从句）【高分句型2】As I was running I could hear “come on! come on!” from my classmates.（运用了as引导的时间状语从句）6．Dear Editor,I am Li Ming, a student in Ming qi Middle School. Recently, I read an article about the mental state of teenagers which mentioned that compared to the teenagers 20 years ago, today’s teenagers are unhappier. I am writing to express my opinion about this phenomenon.Many people think today’s teenagers should be happier than before. However, that’s not the case. First of all, today’s teenagers have more difficulty in getting along with others. It makes them feel lonely. Secondly, nowadays, teenagers suffer from too much pressure of study, which makes them easier to be depressed. Therefore, action must be taken to improve it. To begin with, teenagers should be encouraged to take many activities to form harmonious interpersonal relationship. Besides, parents also need to pay more attention to their children’s mental health. As we all know, good listening can always show respect, promote understanding and make things better. I am convinced that with our joint efforts, the situation will be gradually improved.Yours sincerely ,Li Ming【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给某英语杂志的编辑写封信，表达你对青少年不开心这一现象的看法以及建议。【详解】1.词汇积累鼓励：encourage→inspire/motivate此外：besides → what’s more采取措施：take action→ take measures关注：pay attention to →focus on2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：First of all, today’s teenagers have more difficulty in getting along with others. It makes them feel lonely.拓展句：First of all, today’s teenagers have more difficulty in getting along with others, which makes them feel lonely.【点睛】【高分句型1】Recently, I read an article about the mental state of teenagers which mentioned that compared to the teenagers 20 years ago, today’s teenagers are unhappier.（运用了which引导的定语从句和非谓语动词作状语）【高分句型2】I am convinced that with our joint efforts, the situation will be gradually improved.（运用了that引导宾语从句）7．In the past two months, I paid a visit to almost every corner of the campus. There are many interesting paces to hang around with friends, but my favorite is our library.The library is a remarkable building located in the center of the campus. It is a three-storey building with modern appearance and convenient facilities. On the ground floor there is a grand hall in the middle of the library. A wide range of art works are displayed here. School staff and students can enjoy reading on the second and the third floors where there are lots of bookshelves and many comfortable sofas. The library is designed to be the destination for all, especially for me, because I am a book lover. With its central heating and air cleaning systems, I can have a great time roaming in the world of books, which is the reason why I adore it so much.【分析】本篇书面表达属于记叙文，要求考生描述学校里自己最喜欢去的某个场馆、教室或某处的景观布置，并说明你喜欢的理由。【详解】1.词汇积累参观，访问：pay a visit to → visit引人注目的：remarkable → extraordinary/excellent舒适的：comfortable → cosy非常喜欢：adore → like/love2.句式拓展原句：On the ground floor there is a grand hall in the middle of the library. A wide range of art works are displayed here.拓展句：On the ground floor there is a grand hall in the middle of the library, where a wide range of art works are displayed.【点睛】[高分句型1] School staff and students can enjoy reading on the second and the third floors where there are lots of bookshelves and many comfortable sofas. (运用了where引导的限制性定语从句)[高分句型2] The library is designed to be the destination for all, especially for me, because I am a book lover. (运用了because引导的原因状语从句)[高分句型3] With its central heating and air cleaning systems, I can have a great time roaming in the world of books, which is the reason why I adore it so much.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句和why引导的限制性定语从句)8．        Taking care of the elderly is a tradition in Chinese culture. We are planning to visit them in Nursing Home on October 1 this month.Aiming to express our love and show our respect for the elderly, we have organized the voluntary activity. Arrangements about this activity are as follows. When we get there, we will visit the elderly in groups, presenting them with flowers and self-made cards to show our respect and love. Then, not only will we do some cleaning for them but also we will put on various wonderful performances. I am fully convinced that we will both gain a better understanding of the elderly in Nursing Home and bring them happiness as well.【分析】本篇书面表达属于活动计划。要求考生设计一份老人院献爱心志愿者活动活动计划。【详解】1.词汇积累表明，展示：show→ demonstrate/express我完全相信：I am fully convinced...→ I completely believe...获得：gain → get也：as well → too2.句式拓展原句：Taking care of the elderly is a tradition in Chinese culture. We are planning to visit them in Nursing Home on October 1 this month.拓展句：Since taking care of the elderly is a tradition in Chinese culture, we are planning to visit them in Nursing Home on October 1 this month.【点睛】[高分句型1] When we get there, we will visit the elderly in groups, presenting them with flowers and self-made cards to show our respect and love. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句和现在分词作伴随状语)[高分句型2] Then, not only will we do some cleaning for them but also we will put on various wonderful performances. (运用了连词not only...but also连接两个并列分句)9．        Learning that the Shanghai Volunteer Association will carry out two different volunteer activities after the college entrance examination, I feel very happy that I can have a meaningful holiday. I will choose to volunteer in Shanghai Zoo. I have the following reasons.First of all, I like animals very much. Feeding animals not only allows me to get close to various animals, but also helps me learn how to take care of different animals. Second, this activity will last two months so that I won't be bored for the rest of summer holidays. What’s more, when maintaining order, I can meet all kinds of people and improve my interpersonal skills. Finally, in my work, I can also publicize the knowledge of animal protection to tourists and make people realize that people and animals can live in harmony. I'm really looking forward to the holiday and joining in the activity.【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就上海志愿者协会将开展两场不同的志愿者活动一事，谈谈你会选择哪个活动，并陈述你的理由。【详解】1.词汇积累了解到：know→learn照顾：look after/care for→take care of遇见：come across→meet参加：take part in→join in2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：What’s more, when maintaining order, I can meet all kinds of people and improve my interpersonal skills.拓展句：What’s more, when maintaining order, I can meet all kinds of people, which can improve my interpersonal skills.【点睛】【高分句型1】Learning that the Shanghai Volunteer Association will carry out two different volunteer activities after the college entrance examination, I feel very happy that I can have a meaningful holiday. (运用了现在分词短语作状语和两个that引导的宾语从句)【高分句型2】Second, this activity will last two months so that I won't be bored for the rest of summer holidays. (运用了so that引导的结果状语从句)10．        As we all know, Mother’s Day is approaching. To celebrate it, I have made a plan as follows. First, the theme of the activity is to know more about our mothers. Through interviewing some mothers and learning about something behind them, we may understand them more and be more grateful to them. Then, some elaborate presents made by us will be given to mothers to appreciate their hard work. Last, everyone is called on to make a meal for his or her mother, for we may take it for granted that our mothers do all delicious food for us. However, right now and right here, we should do something for them.This is my arrangement about this year’s mother day, and I’m looking forward to your wise suggestions or better plans. Thank you.【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写短文介绍母亲节方案。【详解】1.词汇积累临近：around the corner→approach精致的：delicate→elaborate感谢的：thankful→grateful建议：advice→suggestion2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：As we all know, Mother’s Day is approaching. To celebrate it, I have made a plan as follows.拓展句：Since Mother’s Day is approaching, I have made a plan to celebrate it.【点睛】[高分句型1] To celebrate it, I have made a plan as follows. (运用了不定式作目的状语)[高分句型2] Last, everyone is called on to make a meal for his or her mother, for we may take it for granted that our mothers do all delicious food for us. (运用了for引导原因状语从句)