高考英语写作分类训练：建议信

这是一份高考英语写作分类训练：建议信，共21页。试卷主要包含了假定你是李华，假如你是高三班班长李华等内容，欢迎下载使用。
建议信
1．假如你是李华，你校英语报就”我为环保出份力”这一主题面向全校学生征稿，请按以下要点写一篇短文投稿:
1. 你为环保付出的行动； 2. 校园内不良行为及建议； 3. 呼吁保护环境
注意:1. 词数100左右； 2. 文中不得透露考生的真实信息； 3. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
2．对于高三的学生来说，时间管理无疑是至关重要的。但是事实上不是每位同学都足够重视，做事拖延。假定你是某中学高三的学生李华请在你校英语校报上写一封倡议书，呼吁同学们恰当地管理时间。
表达要点：1. 拖延的弊端；2. 你的建议；3. 发起倡议。
注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开篇和结束语已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear fellow students,
Time management is without doubt of vital significance, especially for us Senior Three students. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Li Hua
3．假设你是李华，在美国孔子学院的笔友Jack对汉字毛笔书法非常感兴趣，写信向你咨询学习毛笔书法的建议。请你用英语回信，内容包括：
1. 学习毛笔书法的必备工具；2. 你认为学好毛笔书法的有效方式；3. 学好毛笔书法的好处。
注意：1. 词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3. 参考词汇：书法 calligraphy 毛笔 writing brush  砚台 ink stone
Dear Jack,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
4．假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Jonah来信说，想利用自己的年假来中国体验一下中国的传统节日。在端午节、中秋节和春节中，你建议他来过哪个节？请你回复邮件并说明推荐理由。可以适当添加内容，使文章看起来更加充实，要组成通顺连贯的短文。
注意:1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.信的结尾已经给出，不计入总字数。
Dear Jonah,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I am looking forward to your coming.
                                                             Yours ,
Li Hua
5．假定你是李华。你之前在网上为你校交换生Jack预定了下周六晚上7：30的川剧演出， 现该演出被宣布取消，请给他写一封邮件，内容要点如下：
1. 告知演出取消；
2. 后续事项处理；
3. 其它活动建议。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Jack,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
6．假定你是李华，你所在的班明天英语课前有一个简短的演讲。请你写一篇关于倡议养成健康生活习惯的演讲稿，内容包括：
1. 演讲的主题；
2. 健康生活习惯的重要性；
3. 2—3条健康生活习惯的建议。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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7．假如你是高三(1)班班长李华。随着高考的临近，你班一些同学开始紧张焦虑。请你在班级微信群给大家留言，鼓励大家轻松迎考。留言应包括下列要点:
1.症状及影响； 2.合理建议； 3.高考祝愿。
注意: 1.短文应包括全部要点。2.可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。3.短文中不可出现考生真实信息。4.词数: 100左右开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear classmates,
With the entrance examination for college drawing near, many of us feel nervous recently.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes，
Yours,
Li Hua
8．假定你是李华，请给你的美国网友Mary写一封邮件，建议她报名参加今年7月为期5天的四川成都熊猫饲养员(breeder)夏令营，报名网站是www.pandacamp.com内容包括：
1.提出建议；
2.活动内容；
3.报名方式。
注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mary,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9．假定你是李华，将代表你班参加学校英语俱乐部的演讲比赛。请以"What are we studying for?"为题写一篇英语演讲稿，内容包括：
1.学习目的因人而异；
2.不同学习目的及原因；
3.你的学习目的及原因。
注意： 1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3.开头和结束语已为你写好。
Dear members,
I'm very glad to have the chance to speak on behalf of my class here.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That's all. Thank you!
10．假设你是王磊，最近，你的笔友David沉迷于网络小说，难以自拔，他向你求助，请按下列要点给对方写一封信：
1.阐述网络小说的危害；
2.提出建议和解决办法；
3.表达信心。
词数：120词左右；
可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
Dear David,
I’m worried about the situation you are faced with.
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Yours,
Wang Lei










1．Upon the arrival of Earth Day, I care for the environment as usual. To my relief, I have been doing much for it. It is my routine to clean the table wherever I eat. Besides, I never use plastic bags for my daily life. I also save water and electricity every day.
However, some harm done to the environment in our school pierces my heart. some students take too much food for a meal in the canteen, which is a terrible waste. Moreover, not using both sides of paper and even writing too big words on it, many students are wasting paper. Faced with it, I suggest our school enhances management and holds activities about protecting the environment.
Living on the only Earth, act and protect it!
【分析】本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，要求考生一篇短文投稿，为环保提出建议并呼吁保护环境。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
   总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1.表达保护环境的愿望
      2. 说明如何为环保出份力。
      1）你为环保付出的行动。
      2）校园内不良行为及建议。
      3) 呼吁保护环境。
Upon the arrival of Earth Day, I care for the environment as usual. To my relief, I have been doing much for it. It is my routine to clean the table wherever I eat. Besides, I never use plastic bags for my daily life. I also save water and electricity every day.
However, some harm done to the environment in our school pierces my heart. some students take too much food for a meal in the canteen, which is a terrible waste. Moreover, not using both sides of paper and even writing too big words on it, many students are wasting paper. Faced with it, I suggest our school enhances management and holds activities about protecting the environment.
Living on the only Earth, act and protect it!
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
as usual .care for.to my relief.do harm to.be faced with .protect the environment.
第三步：连词成句
1.Upon the arrival of Earth Day, I care for the environment as usual.
2.To my relief, I have been doing much for it.
3.It is my routine to clean the table wherever I eat
4.Not using both sides of paper and even writing too big words on it
5.  Faced with it, I suggest our school enhances management and holds activities about protecting the environment.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：Faced with it, I suggest our school enhances management and holds activities about protecting the environment.这句话运用了宾语从句并使用非谓语短语作状语。使用了一些固定词组，如faced with. care for.to my relief.do harm to等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
2．Dear fellow students,
Time is without doubt of vital significance, especially for us Senior Three students. But the truth is that not everyone is attaching adequate importance to it.
If we are in the habit of leaving things undone and putting them off until the last minute, there is no doubt that, rushing to meet the deadline, nothing will turn out satisfactory. We will lose many a precious opportunity with the help of our parents and teachers should be a good choice. Besides, remember lo combine work with play. Just as the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy”.
Why not take action now to manage our precious time effectively, thus producing better results?
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生向校英语校报写一封倡议书，呼吁同学们恰当地管理时间。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时
结构：总分法
    总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1. 拖延的弊端；
2. 你的建议；
3. 发起倡议。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
attach importance to…；in the habit of…；put…off；with the help of…；combine …with…；take action to do sth.
第三步：连词成句
1. But the truth is that not everyone is attaching adequate importance to it.
2. If we are in the habit of leaving things undone and putting them off until the last minute,
3. We will lose many a precious opportunity with the help of our parents and teachers should be a good choice.
4. remember lo combine work with play.
5. Why not take action now to manage our precious time effectively, thus producing better results?
(根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。）
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Last but not least
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also), including, also
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause (从句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
5表换一种方式表达：In other words, that is to say,
6.表进行举例说明：For example; For instance; such as + n/doing
7.表陈述事实：In fact, frankly speaking
8.表选择：either…or…，or
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，结构严谨，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句，如But the truth is that not everyone is attaching adequate importance to it这句话中用了that引导的表语从句，如there is no doubt that, rushing to meet the deadline, nothing will turn out satisfactory这句话中用了that引导的同位语从句（nothing will turn out satisfactory）；使用了非常好的短语，如attach importance to…，in the habit of…，combine …with…，take action to do sth.等，为文章增色不少。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
3．Dear Jack,
I’m glad to know you’re interested in Chinese Calligraphy. It’s my pleasure to tell you how to learn Chinese calligraphy.
As we all know, the four treasures of the study are writing brush, ink, paper and ink stone, which are essential to learn Chinese calligraphy. As to the way to learn it, I think, for one thing, you may study the basic structure of each Chinese character step by step；for another, choosing a good model book to copy is of great benefit to you. Chinese calligraphy is a fine art of the excellent traditional cultures in China. Not only does it do good to health, but also it can cultivate morality and purify our souls.
Hoping you can come to China to enjoy it personally.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这篇书面表达是一篇应用文写作。假设你是李华，在美国孔子学院的笔友Jack对汉字毛笔书法非常感兴趣，写信向你咨询学习毛笔书法的建议。请你用英语回信。
【详解】认真审题，本文提示：假设你是李华，在美国孔子学院的笔友Jack对汉字毛笔书法非常感兴趣，写信向你咨询学习毛笔书法的建议。请你用英语回信，内容包括: 1. 学习毛笔书法的必备工具;2. 你认为学好毛笔书法的有效方式；3. 学好毛笔书法的好处。分析可知，应该以第一人称为主，一般现在时进行写作。考生要先想好写哪几点，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。
【点睛】这篇书面表达的关键在于句子内容的准确表述，同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。I’m glad to know you’re interested in Chinese Calligraphy.宾语从句的运用。As we all know, the four treasures of the study are writing brush, ink, paper and ink stone, which are essential to learn Chinese calligraphy.非限制性定语从句的运用。
4．Dear Jonah,
I'm glad to know that you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals and want to experience one of them.
There are many traditional festivals in China, such as the Dragon Boat Festival, the Mid-autumn Festival and the Spring Festival. But I really hope you can come and spend the Mid-Autumn Festival with me.   
The Mid-autumn Festival, a special occasion for family reunion, falls on the fifteenth day of the eighth month of the lunar year.
It is to celebrate the harvest and to enjoy the beautiful moonlight. On this day, the moon is said to be its biggest and brightest. It's also a day for special foods like moon cakes.
I am looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Jonah来信说，想利用自己的年假来中国体验一下中国的传统节日。在端午节、中秋节和春节中，你建议他来过哪个节？请你回复邮件并说明推荐理由。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：traditional Chinese festivals (中国传统节日)；the Dragon Boat Festival (端午节)；the Mid-autumn Festival (中秋节)；the Spring Festival (春节)；reunion (团聚)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如I'm glad to know that you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals and want to experience one of them.运用了宾语从句；It is to celebrate the harvest and to enjoy the beautiful moonlight.运用不定式作表语。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
5．One Possible Version:
Dear Jack,
I’m sorry to tell you that the Sichuan Opera Performance at 7:30 p.m. next Saturday I booked for you has been cancelled. I know you have looked forward to watching it for a long time and it’s really a piece of pitiful news. But the thing is such. Later the opera will give the money back and then I will return it to you. Although the chance to watch the Sichuan Opera Performance has been missed, you still have some other interesting and meaningful activities to take part in. For example, I can bring you to taste the traditional Sichuan hotpot and other tasty foods. And watching pandas is also a good idea.
Wish you an enjoyable experience in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，表达告知朋友预定的川剧演出被取消，并告知后续处理和活动建议。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为现在完成时、一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
  总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.告知川剧演出被取消
2.告知后续处理
3.提出活动建议
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
be sorry to tell; look forward to; a pitiful news; give the money back; some other interesting and meaningful activities; the traditional Sichuan hotpot; watch pandas
第三步：连词成句
1. I’m sorry to tell you that the Sichuan Opera Performance at 7:30 p.m. next Saturday I booked for you has been cancelled.
2. I know you have looked forward to watching it for a long time and it’s really a pitiful news.
3. Later the opera will give the money back.
4. You still have some other interesting and meaningful activities to take part in.
5. I can bring you to taste the traditional Sichuan hotpot and other tasty foods.
6. And watching pandas is also a good idea.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式: although引导的让步状语从句Although the chance to watch the Sichuan Opera Performance has been missed, you still have some other interesting and meaningful activities to take part in. that引导的宾语从句和省略that或者which的定语从句I’m sorry to tell you that the Sichuan Opera Performance at 7:30 p.m. next Saturday I booked for you has been cancelled.
高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。
6．Hello, everyone!
I’m glad to stand here to share with you my ideas about healthy living habits. In my eyes, healthy living habits can keep us fit, protect us from getting ill and help us start a new day with full energy.
So we may take fresh fruits, meat and vegetables, and avoid eating too many snack foods. Then taking appropriate exercise regularly is also necessary for good health. When you arrive home from public place, please wash the hands, especially before touching your own eyes, nose or mouth. And when you sneeze and cough, it’s a good manner as well as a protection for public health that you use paper or handkerchief to cover the nose or mouth.
Wish you all the best. Thank you!
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇关于倡议养成健康生活习惯的演讲稿。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
   总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1. 演讲的主题；
2. 健康生活习惯的重要性；
3. 2—3条健康生活习惯的建议。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
share with; healthy living habits; keep sb fit; protect…from; energy; fresh fruits; avoid doing; take exercise; regularly; wash the hands; sneeze; cough; good manner; handkerchief; cover.
第三步：连词成句
I’m glad to stand here to share with you my ideas about healthy living habits.
In my eyes, healthy living habits can keep us fit, protect us from getting ill and help us start a new day with full energy.
We may take fresh fruits, meat and vegetables, and avoid eating too many snack foods.
Taking appropriate exercise regularly is also necessary for good health.
When you arrive home from public place, please wash the hands, especially before touching your own eyes, nose or mouth.
When you sneeze and cough, it’s a good manner as well as a protection for public health that you use paper or handkerchief to cover the nose or mouth.
Wish you all the best. Thank you!
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者使用了复合句，比如And when you sneeze and cough, it’s a good manner as well as a protection for public health that you use paper or handkerchief to cover the nose or mouth.这句话运用了it作形式主语， that引导真正的主语从句。此外Then taking appropriate exercise regularly is also necessary for good health.使用了动名词做主语。范文里还使用了一些较好的词和词组，如keep sb fit, regularly; protect…from等。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
7．Dear classmates,
With the College Entrance Examination drawing near, many of us feel nervous recently. Some suffer from lack of sleep, and others lose their appetite, which has a terrible effect on their study. Therefore, they are all eager to get rid of them.
My suggestions are as follows.First of all, it’s important for us to have a good attitude towards the examination. If you treat the College Entrance Examination as one of your normal examinations , there is no need to worry too much about it. Besides, in order to concentrate more on our classes , we’d better keep a proper timetable to make sure that we have abundant sleep . Only in this way will we keep energetic.  Last but not least ,it is advised that you participate in a variety of after-school activities to relax yourself.
I do hope that all of us keep confident about the exam. Thus we will achieve great academic performance in the exam. Wish all of you could be admitted to your ideal universities!

Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一份留言。
【详解】第一步：
审题：留言    关于同学的焦虑情绪提出建议
人称：第一、二人称
时态：一般现在时
结构：总分法，分三部分，第一部分说明同学中焦虑的症状和影响，第二部分提出合理建议，第三部分表达对同学的祝愿
要点：
1. 说明同学中焦虑的症状和影响：失眠、没有食欲，对学习影响不好
2．提出合理的建议
①对高考有正确的态度：将高考当成平常的考试
②保持合理的时间安排，保证睡眠充足
③ 参加课后活动，放松自己
3．表达对同学的祝愿 ：高考中取得好成绩，被理想的大学录取
第二步：列提纲（重点词汇、短语）
the College Entrance Examination；draw near；feel nervous；suffer from；lose appetite；have an effect on；be eager to；attitude towards…；treat…as；concentrate on；have abundant sleep；keep energetic；participate in；relax oneself；be confident about；achieve great academic performance；be admitted to  
第三步：连词成句
(1)With the College Entrance Examination drawing near, many of us feel nervous recently.
(2)Some suffer from lack of sleep, and others lose their appetite.
(3) This has a terrible effect on their study.
(4) They are all eager to get rid of them.
(5) It’s important for us to have a good attitude towards the examination.
(6) You treat the College Entrance Examination as one of your normal examinations.
(7) There is no need to worry too much about it.
(8) We’d better keep a proper timetable to make sure that we have abundant sleep .
(9)  We will keep energetic.
(10) You participate in a variety of after-school activities to relax yourself.
(12) All of us keep confident about the exam.
(13) We will achieve great academic performance in the exam.
(14) Wish all of you could be admitted to your ideal universities .
根据提示和关键词进行遣词造句,适当地运用句型，注意时态和主谓一致问题。
第四步：连句成篇(衔接词)
表示时间顺序： first of all; to begin/start with , in the beginning
firstly.... secondly .... lastly / finally/in the end
表示并列或补充关系： what is more; besides, moreover, apart from;
in addition, as well as；not only…but(also), meanwhile, in the meantime, some...some…others
表示转折对比关系：but, however, although, though, yet, while
on one hand…on the other hand ...,
表示因果关系：because, as, therefore, as a result, as a consequence, consequently, thus
连句成文，运用恰当的衔接词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，使句与句之间逻辑性更强、
段与段之间结构清晰。
【点睛】
范文要点全面，结构清晰，层次分明，上下文连贯，在表达时用到了很多高级词汇，如 draw near；suffer from；have an effect on；be eager to；treat…as；concentrate on；have abundant sleep；keep energetic；participate in；relax oneself；be confident about；be admitted to  等；复杂句式的运用提升了文章层次，如“with+宾语+宾语补足语”结构的运用With the College Entrance Examination drawing near, many of us feel nervous recently；非限制性定语从句的运用 …which has a terrible effect on their study；it作形式主语的运用it’s important for us to have a good attitude towards the examination.；倒装句的运用 Only in this way will we keep energetic等。
8．Dear Mary,
Knowing that you're crazy about giant pandas, I can't wait to recommend  you an interesting and meaningful summer camp - the Panda Breeder Summer Camp.
The camp falls on July 15th and lasts 5 days in Chengdu, Sichuan, where you have been dreaming of travelling. On the first day, all the participants will be given some basic panda-breeding lessons, which will help to better perform the next tasks. Then they are scheduled to spend the following four days visiting baby pandas and breeding them with the help of the zoo keepers. What an amazing experience it will be!
If you would like to apply, please log on the website www.pandacamp.com and fill in your personal information. I guarantee you a fabulous time.
Yours,
Li Hua .
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封建议信。
【详解】第一步：明确要求。假定你是李华，请给你的美国网友Mary写一封邮件，建议她报名参加今年7月为期5天的四川成都熊猫饲养员(breeder)夏令营，报名网站是www.pandacamp.com内容包括：1.提出建议；2.活动内容；3.报名方式。
第二步：列关键词。
can’t wait；recommend；fall on；dream of；perform；schedule；breed；with the help of；apply；log on；guarantee等等。
第三步：连词成句。根据列出的关键词造句，注意主谓一致，时态语态等语法。
第四步：连句成文。注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，如：First、Next等。注意，词数100 左右。书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。高级句型有：Knowing that you're crazy about giant pandas, I can't wait to recommend  you an interesting and meaningful summer camp - the Panda Breeder Summer Camp.使用了非谓语动词；The camp falls on July 15th and lasts 5 days in Chengdu, Sichuan, where you have been dreaming of travelling.使用了非限制性定语从句；What an amazing experience it will be!是感叹句式。
9．Dear members,
I'm very glad to have the chance to speak on behalf of my class here. What are we studying for? Different people may have different answers to this question. People may study for money, social status or the illustration of their ancestors.
In fact each learning goal illustrates its own aim of life. For those above, they study mostly for their own benefits. But can they really reach their goals if they study only for themselves?
Maybe you'll ask what I am studying for. To tell the truth, I'm studying for "the rise of China".
I want to be a Lu Xun because I want to help those who are well in health but ill in mind to build up a better China.
That's all, Thank you!
【分析】本篇书面表达属于演讲稿。要求学生以"What are we studying for?"为题写一篇英语演讲稿，并注意演讲内容要包含：学习目的因人而异；不同学习目的及原因；你的学习目的及原因等三面方面。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：演讲稿
时态：文章应该为一般现在时
结构：总-分-总。
开头：首先说明自己的演讲主题。
正文：针对演讲的主题分析要说明的问题。
结尾：针对问题发出呼吁、号召、建议、决心等。最后致谢。
要求：演讲内容包含：1.学习目的因人而异；
2.不同学习目的及原因；
3.你的学习目的及原因；
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
on behalf of, answer to the question, social status, learning goal, as is known to all, build up ,however, as far as I am concerned,for one thing,for another, therefore,give a speech, in a word,It’s my great honor…,different opinions,to tell the truth, the aim of…, what I want to stress is that…,that’s all
第三步：连词成句
1. I'm very glad to have the chance to speak on behalf of my class here.
2. What are we studying for?
3. Different people may have different answers to this question.
4. In fact each learning goal illustrates its own aim of life.
5. They study mostly for their own benefits.
6. To tell the truth, I'm studying for "the rise of China".
7. I want to be a Lu Xun because I want to help those who are well in health but ill in mind to build up a better China.
8. That's all, Thank you!
第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词和表观点词）
1.表观点意见:As is known to all, As far as I am concerned, to tell the truth, for one thing…, for another…, In my opinion,in fact
2.表转折关系: However,but
3.表因果关系：therefore,because
4.表总结关系: That’s all. In a word
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。演讲稿是人们在工作和社会生活中经常使用的一种文体，它是在较为隆重的仪式上和某些公众场所发表的讲话文稿，一般由三部分组成称呼语、正文和结束语。正文部分应该针对演讲主题阐述要说明的问题。语言上演讲稿以简单句为主要的表达形式。作者在范文中使用很多简单句来论述观点如“Different people may have different answers to this question.”，“In fact each learning goal illustrates its own aim of life.”等。使用了较为高级的句式，如who引导的定语从句I want to be a Lu Xun because I want to help those who are well in health but ill in mind to build up a better China.if引导的条件状语从句But can they really reach their goals if they study only for themselves?。高级句式的使用彰显了作者对语言的良好驾驭能力。
10．Dear David,
I’m worried about the situation you are faced with, in which you find it difficult to get rid of the habit of reading online novels.
Slightly as reading online might relieve us, spending too much time on it is a waste of time. Meanwhile, we are more likely to suffer from failing eyesight if staring at it frequently. Therefore, I can’t wait to give you some suggestions, for fear that you would deserve to have a great loss in your study. As we all know, we, senior 3 students, must take advantage of every minute every day. You can relax yourself by reading some materials in a certain period of time, for example, lunch break. For the rest of the day, you’d better value it more efficiently.
I’m willing to wait for your good news, and you can make it, can’t you?
Yours ,
Wang Lei
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封建议信给David，帮助他从沉迷于网络小说中解脱出来。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
人称：第一、二人称
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时
结构：总-分-总法
要点：
1.阐述网络小说的危害；
2.提出建议和解决办法；
3.表达信心。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
worry about；be faced with；get rid of；online novels；too much；spend time on sth.；a waste of time；be more likely to；suffer from；stare at；can’t wait to do；for fear that；have a great loss in；take advantage of；relax oneself；for example；be willing to；make it等
第三步：连词成句
1. I’m worried about the situation you are faced with, in which you find it difficult to get rid of the habit of reading online novels.
2. Slightly as reading online might relieve us, spending too much time on it is a waste of time.
3. We are more likely to suffer from failing eyesight if staring at it frequently.
4. I can’t wait to give you some suggestions, for fear that you would deserve to have a great loss in your study.
5. We, senior 3 students, must take advantage of every minute every day.
6. You can relax yourself by reading some materials in a certain period of time, for example, lunch break.
7. You’d better value it more efficiently.
8. I’m willing to wait for your good news, and you can make it, can’t you?
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表并列补充关系：Meanwhile；and；As we all know；For the rest of the day；
2.表因果关系：Therefore；as；
3.表目的关系：for fear that等
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多高分句型，如：I’m worried about the situation you are faced with, in which you find it difficult to get rid of the habit of reading online novels.使用了由介词+which引导的非限制性定语从句；Slightly as reading online might relieve us, spending too much time on it is a waste of time.使用了由as引导的状语从句和动名词做主语；We are more likely to suffer from failing eyesight if staring at it frequently.使用了由if引导的状语从句；I can’t wait to give you some suggestions, for fear that you would deserve to have a great loss in your study. 使用了由for fear that 引导的状语从句；We, senior 3 students, must take advantage of every minute every day.使用了同位语；For the rest of the day, you’d better value it more efficiently.使用了you’d better do句型；I’m willing to wait for your good news, and you can make it, can’t you?使用了由and连接的并列句和反意疑问句等。还使用了一些固定短语，如：worry about；be faced with；get rid of；be more likely to；suffer from；stare at；can’t wait to do；take advantage of；relax oneself；be willing to等全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。