北京高考英语写作分类训练：建议信

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建议信1．假如你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国朋友Jim在做关于“中学生运动情况”的调查，想了解你的运动情况。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括：1.你喜欢的一项运动；2.这项运动给你带来的益处；3.关于运动的建议。注意:1.词数100左右；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数。Dear Jim,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________YoursLi Hua2．假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter得知：在中国，微信成为人们的重要沟通方式。想知道你对微信的看法及你对中学生使用微信的建议。请根据下面要点用英语写一封信，内容包括：1.微信带来的便利；2. 微信带来的不利之处；3. 你对中学生使用微信的建议。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Peter,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua3．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国笔友Jim在邮件中说打算寒假来中国旅游。请你给他回复邮件邀请他来北京过春节，内容包括：1.春节的意义；2.春节期间的典型活动；3.在京期间的建议。Dear Jim,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua4．假设你是红星中学高二(1)班的李华，近日你的英国笔友Chris给你写信，向你寻求汉语学习方面的建议，请给他写一封回信，内容包括：1. 说明具体建议（至少3条）；2. 表达你愿意帮助他。注意：1. 信的开头和结尾已写好；2. 词数不少于60词。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的美国朋友Chris在给你的邮件中提到他最近在准备SAT考试（美国高考），心理压力比较大，很苦恼，希望得到你的帮助。请你给他回信，内容包括：1.安慰对方；2.分析心理压力过大会导致的后果； 3.给出相应的建议及其理由。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的美国朋友Jim要来北京旅游，他写信寻求你对旅游地的建议，请你给他写封回信，内容包括：（1）景点名称；（2）参观内容；（3）推荐理由。注意：（1）词数不少于50；（2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jim,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua7．你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条线路可以选择：“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容包括：1.你建议的线路；2.你的理由；3.你的祝愿。注意：1.词数不少于50；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jim,   Yours,Li Hua148．假定你是李华，你校的交流生Lucy下周打算去老师家做客，但是她不知道中国人做客有哪些传统，她给你发了一封电子邮件，请你给她一些建议。请你依据下列要点，给她回复一封电子邮件。要点如下：1.适当地送一些礼物；2.介绍中国的餐桌礼仪。注意：1.词数100左右。（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Lucy,I have received your email. You asked me for some suggestions on how to be a guest in China.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I do hope you will enjoy yourself in your teacher’s home.Yours Sincerely,Li Hua9．假如你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的美国笔友Chris在给你邮件中提到他最近在准备SAT考试（美国高考），心理压力很大，很苦恼，希望得到你的帮助。请你给他回信，内容包括：1．安慰对方；2．分析心理压力过大会导致的后果；3．给出相应的建议及其理由。注意：词数不少于100。Dear Chris,_______________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua10．假如你是李华， 你的加拿大朋友 Mike 在与你同一城市的国际学校读书。你收到他的 email， 了解到他最近因为一次考试没有考好而烦恼， 请按照以下内容给 Mike 写一封回信。1.宽慰；2.给予改进学习的建议（查找失败原因；向老师求助； 劳逸结合）；3.邀请周末去打篮球。注意：1. 字数 100 字左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头和结尾已给出， 不计入字数。Dear Mike ,I’m sorry to hear that you failed in the last exam.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hoping everything will be fine with you.Yours,Li Hua             1．Dear Jim,How is everything going? Knowing you are conducting a survey of the sports that high school students do, I’m writing to tell you about what I do.Actually, playing basketball is my favorite. I usually play basketball with my friends after school and take part in competitions.I have benefited much from playing basketball. It helps me keep fit and provides me with a way to refresh myself during the stressful school days. In addition, I learn to be more courageous and persistent when facing challenges. It also teaches me closer cooperation is the key to success and brings me many friends with the same interest.Therefore, I suggest everyone do physical exercise regularly and we’d better choose one that suits us and we really enjoy.This is my experience and understanding of sports. What about yours? So looking forward to your sharing.Yours,Li Hua【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国朋友Jim写封邮件，向他介绍你的运动情况。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时，少量现在完成时。结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1. 介绍你喜欢的一项运动；2. 介绍这项运动给你带来的益处；3. 提出关于运动的建议。第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）play basketball; take part in competitions; benefit much from playing basketball; keep fit; refresh myself during the stressful school days; more courageous and persistent; the key to success; many friends with the same interest; do physical exercise            regularly第三步：连词成句1.Knowing you are conducting a survey of the sports that high school students do, I’m writing to tell you about what I do.2.Actually, playing basketball is my favorite. 3.I usually play basketball with my friends after school and take part in competitions.4.I have benefited much from playing basketball. 5.It helps me keep fit and provides me with a way to refresh myself during the stressful school days. 6.In addition, I learn to be more courageous and persistent when facing challenges. 7.It also teaches me closer cooperation is the key to success and brings me many friends with the same interest.8.Therefore, I suggest everyone do physical exercise regularly and we’d better choose one that suits us and we really enjoy.9.This is my experience and understanding of sports. 10.So looking forward to your sharing.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表并列补充关系：In addition 2.表因果关系：Therefore连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。【点睛】[高分句型1]Knowing you are conducting a survey of the sports that high school students do, I’m writing to tell you about what I do.（现在分词作状语）[高分句型2]Therefore, I suggest everyone do physical exercise regularly and we’d better choose one that suits us and we really enjoy.（suggest后的宾语从句用了虚拟语气）2．Dear Peter,Wechat has become increasingly popular in recent years. To begin with, its attractive interface and various functions are loved wildly. Besides, Wechat is a relative cheap way of communication, which cuts down a great deal of the cost of making a phone call. Meanwhile, it is a great way of sharing information and getting like-minded people together. However, every coin has two sides and Wechat is not an exception. Firstly, excessive use of Wechat means much less chance of face-to-face interactions with the people who populate their real lives. Secondly, when using Wechat, people tend to forget time and some may even get addicted to it, which will definitely affect their study and work. Therefore, in our daily life, we students should often take part in outdoor activities and communicate with others on our own initiative to avoid online addiction. Additionally, always be mindful of protecting your privacy when chatting with strangers online.Best wishes.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给美国朋友Peter写封邮件，谈谈你对微信的看法及你对中学生使用微信的建议。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。结构：总分法要求：1.微信带来的便利；2. 微信带来的不利之处；3. 你对中学生使用微信的建议。第二步:列提纲be popular; a cheap way of communication; cut down cost; share information; less chance of; face-to-face interaction; tend to; get addicted to; affect study and work; take part in outdoor activities; avoid online addiction; be mindful of; protect privacy 第三步：连词成句（包含关键句，至少3句）1. Wechat has become increasingly popular in recent years.2. Its attractive interface and various functions are loved wildly. 3. Wechat is a relative cheap way of communication, which cuts down a great deal of the cost of making a phone call. 4. It is a great way of sharing information and getting like-minded people together. 5. Excessive use of Wechat means much less chance of face-to-face interactions with the people who populate their real lives. 6. When using Wechat, people tend to forget time and some may even get addicted to it, which will definitely affect their study and work. 7. In our daily life, we students should often take part in outdoor activities and communicate with others on our own initiative to avoid online addiction. 8. Always be mindful of protecting your privacy when chatting with strangers online.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇1.表文章结构顺序：To begin with, Firstly, Secondly2.表并列补充关系： Besides, meanwhile, Moreover, Additionally3.表转折对比关系：However, every coin has two sides and … is not an exception. 4.表因果关系：Therefore 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。【点睛】[高分句型1] Besides, Wechat is a relative cheap way of communication, which cuts down a great deal of the cost of making a phone call.(该句使用了非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2] Secondly, when using Wechat, people tend to forget time and some may even get addicted to it, which will definitely affect their study and work. (该句使用了“when+doing…”时间状语从句的省略和非限制性定语从句)3．Dear Jim,I’m glad to know that you will come to China during the winter vacation. How about coming to Beijing to celebrate the Spring Festival with my family?Spring Festival is highly valued by every Chinese family. It is a great time for family reunion. We will stay together, talk about ups and downs in the whole year and welcome the new year. There are many traditional activities, such as doing a thorough cleaning to have a new look for the new year, pasting handwritten couplets and character Fu on front door to bring good luck and preparing a variety of foods, especially Jiaozi on the Eve.During your stay, the subway is convenient for you to go around. And I suggest visiting the Forbidden City and the Temple of Heaven, which will be surely filled with the festival atmosphere.I will be glad to be your guide. Wish you a nice trip.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达是一封邀请信。假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国笔友Jim在邮件中说打算寒假来中国旅游，请你给他回复邮件邀请他来北京过春节。【详解】这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，不能遗漏要点：1.春节的意义；2.春节期间的典型活动；3.在京期间的建议。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。根据写作要点我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和短语及句子有：during the winter vacation， celebrate the Spring Festival，family reunion，stay together，talk about ups and downs，traditional activities， bring good luck，prepare a variety of foods，The subway is convenient for you to go around，visit the Forbidden City and the Temple of Heaven，be surely filled with the festival atmosphere. I will be glad to be your guide. Wish you a nice trip.可以使用的衔接词：1.表文章结构顺序：First of all，Firstly/First，Secondly/Second… And then，Finally，In the end，At last，Above all等；2.表并列补充关系：What is more，Besides，Moreover，Furthermore，In addition，as well as，not only…but (also)等。通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误。【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句：I’m glad to know that you will come to China during the winter vacation. 这句话运用了that引导的宾语从句；And I suggest visiting the Forbidden City and the Temple of Heaven, which will be surely filled with the festival atmosphere.这句话运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。使用了一些固定词组，如： ups and downs，a variety of，be filled with。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。4．Dear Chris，Hope this letter finds you well! Last time you said you were learning Chinese but encountered some difficulties .It's inevitable because English emphasizes the structure, while Chinese focuses on the meaning .With regard to the matter you mentioned in your letter, my suggestions are as follows.First, I would recommend you to find a native speaker as a language partner, and meet with him on a regular basis .Besides, watching Chinese movies and listening to Chinese songs can make the learning process much more interesting. Last but not least，as an old saying goes，the meaning of one book will appear after you have read it many times．So read as many Chinese books，magazines and newspapers as possible，which will help you to expand your vocabulary.Those are the tips on my mind now .I would always be pleased to offer you help .I do hope you will find these proposals practical.Yours sincerely，Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封书信，在信中写明：学习汉语的具体建议（至少3条）；表达愿意帮助他。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文——书信。要点：1.学习汉语的建议1）找个中国人做练习汉语的拍档2）多看中国电影，多听中国歌曲来提高学习汉语的兴趣3）多读中文的书、杂志和报纸，扩大词汇量。2.如果有问题非常愿意提供帮助结构：总分总。第二步：列提纲一、框架1.信件一开始就说明写信的原因和目的，解释汉语确实难学的原因。2.详细给出学习汉语的建议：1）找个中国人做练习汉语的拍档2）多看中国电影，多听中国歌曲来提高学习汉语的兴趣3）多读中文的书、杂志和报纸，扩大词汇量3.在学习汉语方面愿意提供帮助。4.希望他能找到学习汉语的好方法。二、段落主题句Last time you said you had some difficulties with learning Chinese .I think it's inevitable .My suggestions are as follows.Find a native speaker as a language partner, and meet with him on a regular basis .Watch Chinese movies and listen to Chinese songs Read many Chinese books，magazines and newspapers as possible.I would always be pleased to help you .I hope you will find these proposals practical.第三步：展开用说明法将主题句展开。第四步： 润色修改【点睛】范文格式正确，完成了试题规定的任务，覆盖所有内容要点，应用了很多的语法结构和词汇：宾语从句Last time you said you were learning Chinese but encountered some difficulties .定语从句So read as many Chinese books，magazines and newspapers as possible，which will help you to expand your vocabulary.并列句It's inevitable because English emphasizes the structure, while Chinese focuses on the meaning .非谓语动词Besides, watching Chinese movies and listening to Chinese songs can make the learning process much more interesting.等，这篇范文的另一亮点是：句子间的承接词First，Besides，Last but not least.它们的使用使整篇文章的层次分明，条理清晰，结构流畅。开头使用Hope this letter finds you well!这样的表述，使信件更为正式，最后表达希望的句子中用了do表强调，使希望更为真诚，文中中国谚语“书读百遍，其义自见”的使用也给文章增色，完全达到了预期的写作目的。5．Dear Chris,I’m sorry to learn that you’ve been under a lot of pressure lately due to the upcoming SAT test. Here are some ways I think that can deal with stress.The first thing you can try is to exercise. Exercises like walking or running not only boost energy but also build up your confidence. Another way is to enjoy some games with friends, which can take your mind off the stress and make you more relaxed.I believe it will all work out. Cheer up!Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇考查的作文类型是建议信。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知, 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的美国朋友Chris在给你的邮件中提到他最近在准备SAT考试（美国高考），心理压力比较大，很苦恼，希望得到你的帮助。请你给他回信，内容包括：1.安慰对方；2.分析心理压力过大会导致的后果； 3.给出相应的建议及其理由。第2步：根据写作要求, 确定关键词（组）：under a lot of pressure(压力很大)；deal with(处理)；boost energy(增加能量)；build up(建立)；take your mind off(转移注意力)等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句, 注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般过去时和一般现在时。第4步：连句成文, 注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡, 书写一定要规范清晰, 保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】[高分句型1]The reason why I’m writing to you is that I want to share some ways to deal with stress. 我给你写信的原因是我想分享一些处理压力的方法。运用why引导的定语从句和that引导的表语从句。[高分句型2]Not only can exercises like walking or running boost energy but also it can build up your confidence. 像步行或跑步这样的锻炼不仅能增加能量，还能建立你的信心。运用not only...but also...句式和倒装句。6．Dear Jim,I’m glad to hear that you are coming to Beijing, which is an extremely smart decision. As your close friend, I’m really glad to give you some advice.I do think the Great Wall is a perfect choice. As is known to all, the Great Wall is one of the seven wonders in the world. It was first built in the ancient dynasties and rebuilt in the modern times, since it is the pride and honor of the Chinese people.People will usually choose to visit The Badaling Great Wall in Yanqing district, in the northwest of the capital city. As it is a little far away from the city center, you may go there either by bus or take a train. Having arrived at the foot of the Great Wall, you will first of all take some photos at the large square with a symbolic monument carved with the Chinese characters for The Badaling Great Wall, very impressive. Then you may start your climbing up the Great Wall steps, which is kind of tiring and energy-consuming. However, along the way, you may enjoy the breath-taking sceneries, enormous monuments full of culture, and splendid beacon towers, which will surely fulfills your journey with unimaginable joy and excitement. Averagely, it will take you two hours to get to the top, where you will enjoy a great sense of achievement.As is said in China, he who does not reach the Great Wall is not a true man. The Great Wall is the treasure of our country, and one of the most important and representative sightseeing of Beijing. It is, of course, a must-see for you! You can’t miss it! Just come and enjoy yourself!Yours,Li Hua【详解】这是美国朋友Jim要来北京旅游，他写信寻求你对旅游地的建议，请你给他写封回信，可以对北京的各个景点进行介绍。根据要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态，其中重点讲述对景点的介绍，并给出推荐理由。在写作时可以使用一些高级词汇和好的句型来增加亮点，另外因为是建议信，所以在用词上要注意是建议性的。最后一定要进行检查看是否有漏点或拼写错误。【亮点说明】As is said in China, he who does not reach the Great Wall is not a true man.句中，as引导非限制性定语从句，指代主句，译为“正如”；定语从句who does not reach the Great Wall修饰先行词he，he是主句的主语。7．Dear Jim,I’m happy receive your letter and know you’re coming to China.Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai, both are highly recommended. Personally, I prefer the your along the Yangtze, the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization. You can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people. Moreover, the scenery along the river is amazing, with many well-known sightseeing spots.  That’s why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.Hope you’ll have a good time in China.YoursLi Hua【分析】这是一篇应用文，要求写一封信。【详解】首先，学生要仔细阅读提示：你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条线路可以选择：“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容包括：1.你建议的线路；2.你的理由；3.你的祝愿。弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。 其次，要注意提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语， 按照一定逻辑关系来写。 最后，要根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。本文是一封信，按照内容要求可以确定文章的框架结构，三段式，其中第一段写你所建议的路线，第二部分是本文的主体，要阐述你所建议的路线的原因，好让 他们有很好的掌握，最后一段，提出你的祝愿。写作时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。【点睛】本文内容齐全，结构严谨，层次分明，布局合理，语言精练，同时运用高级句子。表语从句的使用：That’s why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.高级词汇的使用：highly recommended。连接副词的合理使用：Personally，moreover。8．Dear Lucy, I have received your email. You asked me for some suggestions on how to be a guest in China. Here are some suggestions received by most Chinese. Firstly, when you visit a Chinese family, you’d better bring some gifts. In China, it is usually considered impolite to visit someone with nothing in hand. So, you can buy some fresh fruits or a box of milk. What’s more, table manners are also of great importance. We Chinese like to treat our guests with many delicious dishes. When at table, you should not eat first, but follow the host or the senior one. Sometimes, the host will help you with some dishes, which is different from western traditions, and you should show your appreciation. All in all, just as the old saying goes, “When in Rome, do as Romans do.” I do hope you will enjoy yourself in your teacher’s home. Yours sincerely, Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给交流生Lucy写邮件，就在中国家庭做客时的一些传统做法，给Lucy提出一些建议。【详解】1.词汇积累 建议：suggestion → tip买：buy → purchase美味的：delicious →delicate总而言之：all in all → in a word2.句式拓展 同义句转换原句：What’s more, table manners are also of great importance.拓展句：Moreover, what is of great importance are table manners. 【点睛】【高分句型1】In China, it is usually considered impolite to visit someone with nothing in hand. (it作形式主语，动词不定式作真正的主语）【高分句型2】All in all, just as the old saying goes, “When in Rome, do as Romans do.”（运用了as引导的定语从句，when引导的时间状语从句，as引导的方式状语从句） 9．Dear Chris,I’m sorry to learn that you’ve been under a lot of pressure lately due to the upcoming SAT test. Anyone in your situation would suffer a certain amount of stress. But don’t worry too much, or you may find yourself problems with sleep, appetite, or even memory. Here are some ways I think that can deal with stress.The first thing you can try is to exercise. Exercises like walking or running not only boost energy but also build confidence. Another way is to enjoy some games with friends, which can take your mind off the stress and make you more relaxed. It might also be a good idea to talk to someone who is a good listener; having someone to listen to your problems can make you feel better.I believe it will all work out. Cheer up! Let me know if I can help further.Yours,Li Hua【详解】这是一篇提纲类作文。你的美国笔友由于备考压力过大，苦恼的他希望得到你的帮助，对此，需要给他回一封信。信的称谓已经给出，第一段首先要安慰朋友，不要让他过于焦虑，并告诉他压力过大导致的后果。第二段给出一些具体的减轻压力的方法，以及这样做的理由。最后一段是鼓励朋友的话。文章内容要点已经给出。但考生在写这篇文章时，要注意以下几点：1. 这封信主要是向压力过大的朋友提供帮助，所以以一般现在时为主。2. 要点要齐全。但是不要对要点进行简单的罗列。可以使用适当的连接词，使上下文行文流畅，衔接自然流畅。3. 注意文章的结构要清晰，细节把控要到位。给出的建议要附带上相应的理由，否则会显得说服力不够，内容不够丰满。此外，要注意信件的写作格式。【范文亮点】优秀词汇和短语：upcoming即将到来的，suffer遭受，appetite食欲，deal with处理，boost energy增强精力，build confidence建立信心，take your mind off思想放空，cheer up振奋起来优秀句式和行文脉络：1.Another way is to enjoy some games with friends, which can take your mind off the stress and make you more relaxed另外一个方法是和朋友一起享受游戏，这可以帮你减轻思想上的压力，让你更加放松。（运用了to do 不定式作表语，运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）2.全文运用了The first thing，Another way，also这些连接词使行文流畅。而且全文结构清晰，最后还写了振奋朋友精神的话，作为一封给朋友提供帮助的信件，这些细节处理的很好。10．Dear Mike,I’m sorry to hear that you failed in the last exam. But I have to remind you that nobody can win all the time .So you had better forget the unchangeable fact and focus more energy on future studies.To guarantee success in the next exam, you are advised to do what I will tell you to .First, find out the real reasons why you failed the exam. Only when you know where your mistakes are, will you know how to correct them. Besides, it is wise to turn to your teachers for help. After all, they are experienced. Meanwhile, remember to strike the balance with studies and rest. Adequate sleep and proper exercise will certainly make it possible for you to keep energetic.How about playing football together this weekend? Surely we will have fun.Hoping everything will be fine with you.Yours,Li Hua【导语】这是一篇应用文。文章要求考生给加拿大朋友 Mike写一封回信， 对于他最近因为一次考试没有考好而烦恼表示宽慰，同时给予他改进学习的建议并邀请他周末一起打篮球。【详解】1.词汇积累向某人求助：turn to sb. for help→ask sb. for help足够的：adequate→enough肯定地：certainly→definitely玩的高兴：have fun→have a good time2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：So you had better forget the unchangeable fact and focus more energy on future studies.拓展句：So you had better forget the unchangeable fact and focus more energy on future studies, which will be of great benefit to you.【点睛】[高分句型1]...you are advised to do what I will tell you to.（运用了宾语从句）[高分句型2]Only when you know where your mistakes are, will you know how to correct them.（运用了部分倒装）