福建高考英语写作分类训练：邀请信

这是一份福建高考英语写作分类训练：邀请信，共18页。
邀请信
1．假定你是李华，是校学生会主席，你校将于3月21日举行70周年校庆，请你给外教Smith先生写封电子邮件，邀请他来参加校庆活动。内容包括：
1. 活动时间与地点；
2. 活动形式：演讲比赛、歌咏比赛、摄影展等；
3. ……
注意：1. 词数100左右，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr. Smith,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
2．假定你是李华，你校将举办外国学生中文演讲比赛，请给你的英国朋友George写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括:
1.比赛时间；2.演讲话题；3.报名方式。
注意:
1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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3．假定你是李华，你和父母决定春节期间到桂林旅游，请你给你的英国笔友 Jack 写封信， 介绍相关情况。要点如下:
1.  旅游时间:春节假期；
2.  旅游地点:广西桂林；
3.  你的准备:上网了解(桂林景点、其他游 客的经历)；
4.  邀请 Jack 来一起游玩。
注意:1.词数 100 左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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4．假定你是李华，你计划和同学去当地博物馆参观中国瓷器(Chinese Porcelain)展。请给喜欢中国文化的外教Josie写封邮件，邀她一同前往，内容包括:
1.出发及返回时间:
2.活动内容:了解中国瓷器的历史，欣赏首次展出的中国瓷器等。
注意:适当增加细节，使行文连贯，词数100左右。
Dear Josie,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours truly,
Li Hua
5．假定你是李华，为迎接新年到来，你校将举办艺术节活动，请写信邀外国朋友 Brown参加，主要内容：
1．目的和时间；
2．活动安排；
3．请他表演节目。
注意：1. 词数 100 左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。
Dear Brown,
I’m Li Hua in your class.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Look forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua.
6．假如你是高中生李华，得知你校交换生英国朋友 Brown 对中国传统文化艺术很感兴趣， 写信邀请他一起去看京剧。主要内容：
1. 简介：京剧(Beijing Opera)历史悠久，服装(costume)色彩艳丽，讲述历史故事等。
2. 告知地点、约定时间、购票安排等。
注意:1. 词数 100 左右；开头、结尾已给出。
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Brown,
I’m Li Hua.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Look forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
7．假定你是李华，拟邀请在上海留学的美国朋友Jane参加下个月在泉州举办的中国文化节。你打算赠送她一本英文版文化节小册子。请写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.写信的目的；
2.简介文化节；
3.询问收件地址。
注意：1.词数100左右，邮件开头和结尾已给出；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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8．假如你是李华，想邀请你的朋友John在周六晚上去观看科幻电影 The Wandering Earth，请用英语给他写一封邮件，内容包括:
1.发出邀请；
2.介绍电影(主题:保护人类共同的地球家园；观众评价等)；
3.请求回复。
注意:
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
9．假如你是李华，请你写一封邮件给你的英国朋友Henry，邀请他参加你校国庆节举办的建国70周年庆祝活动。内容包括：
1. 时间和地点；
2. 有关活动：“歌颂祖国”歌舞晚会、“改革开放成就”图片展…
注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：anniversary周年纪念日
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10．假定你是李华，你的朋友Tony对中国的饮食文化很有兴趣，他希望你给他介绍一到两个你熟悉的传统食品以及它可能包含的生活或文化习俗。请你给他写信，内容包括：
1. 介绍食品的名称、特点和内涵等：
2. 发出邀请。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tony.
In your letter you mentioned you are interested in Chinese foods and want to know more about them._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua












1．Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union. I’m honored on behalf of our school to invite you to attend the celebration of our school’s 70th anniversary.
As scheduled, the ceremony is due to start on March 21. At the celebration, some relevant activities, such as speech contest, dancing show and singing contest will be held, with a photography exhibition related to the development of our school included. I am sure it is a good chance for you to better understand our school.
We would be looking forward to your coming with great pleasure. Your early reply will be highly appreciated.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文。要求写一封邀请信。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
   总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1.表明写目的：邀请来参加校庆活动      
2.具体的内容：
      1). 活动时间与地点；2). 活动形式：演讲比赛、歌咏比赛、摄影展等；3). ……
第二步:列提纲
I'm honored on behalf of our school to invite you to attend the activities in celebration of our school's 70th anniversary．Here is the information in detail.（写信目的）
As scheduled，the performance is due to start at 20 o'clock and end at 22 o'clock on March 20，2020.（时间地点）
You are arranged to sit in seat 6，row 4，section 3 where you can feast you r eyes. At the party，there will be a speech competition，a singing competition， and a photography exhibition included （活动内容）
第三步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第四步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：You are arranged to sit in seat 6, row 4, section 3 where you can feast your eyes.这句话用了where引导的定语从句。使用了一些固定句式，如I would appreciate it if you can accept my invitation.这句话运用了I would appreciate it if 的句式全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
2．Dear George,
     I'm writing to invite you to join us in the “Chinese speech contest for foreigners” to be held in our school. The activity is scheduled at 8:00 a.m. on January 20th in the lecture hall.
     The theme of the speech contest is “differences between eastern and western customs”, through which the foreign students are bound to gain a better understanding of Chinese splendid traditional culture and meanwhile strengthen their love of China.
     Immensely fascinated by its mysterious culture and age-old history, you can, undoubtedly give us a wonderful and impressive performance. You are expected to sign up for the contest at www. Chinesespeechcontestforforeigners.com. I'd appreciate it if you could accept our invitation.
                                              Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知, 本篇为一封电子邮件；假定你是李华，你校将举办外国学生中文演讲比赛，请给你的英国朋友George写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括:1.比赛时间；2.演讲话题；3.报名方式。
第2步：根据写作要求, 确定关键词（组） ：Chinese speech contest（中文演讲比赛）；be scheduled（安排）；be bound to（必然）；gain a better understanding of（更好地了解）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句, 注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步：连句成文, 注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡, 书写一定要规范清晰, 保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整, 语言规范, 语篇连贯, 词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式, 如The theme of the speech contest is “differences between eastern and western customs”, through which the foreign students are bound to gain a better understanding of Chinese splendid traditional culture and meanwhile strengthen their love of China.运用了定语从句；I'd appreciate it if you could accept our invitation.运用了条件状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式, 显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外, 文章思路清晰、层次分明, 上下句转换自然, 为文章增色添彩。
3．Dear Jack，
How is everything going? I’m writing to tell you a piece of good news.
Last night，my parents told me that they were going to visit Guilin with me during the Spring Festival. I am so happy, because it has been such a long time since our family last went out together. I have made some preparations. For example, I searched the information online about Guilin, such as the famous tourist sites and the delicious food. And I learned a lot from others’ experiences. I can’t wait to go there and experience the unique scenery and culture.
Would you like to come together? I’m sure we’ll have great fun.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】这篇书面表达是一封书信。假定你是李华，你和父母决定春节期间到桂林旅游，请你给你的英国笔友 Jack 写封信， 介绍相关情况。
【详解】假定你是李华，你和父母决定春节期间到桂林旅游，请你给你的英国笔友 Jack 写封信， 介绍相关情况。要点如下: 1.  旅游时间:春节假期；2.  旅游地点:广西桂林；3.  你的准备:上网了解(桂林景点、其他游 客的经历)；4.  邀请 Jack 来一起游玩。分析可知，应该以第一人称为主，一般过去时和一般将来时进行写作。要点已经给出，要求考生根据提纲自己发挥拓展，考生要先想好写哪几点，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。
【点睛】这篇书面表达的关键在于要点的拓展，同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。Last night，my parents told me that they were going to visit Guilin with me during the Spring Festival.宾语从句的运用。I’m sure we’ll have great fun. 宾语从句的运用。
4．Dear Josie,
Having learned you are interested in Chinese culture, I’d like to invite you to join us for a visit to the local museum next Saturday to appreciate Chinese porcelain.
During the visit, we will learn abundant information about its history. What is the most important is that we have a chance to appreciate some delicate and rare porcelain, some of which is exhibited for the first time. As we all know, porcelain was a Chinese invention and is famous for the finest quality. Thus, you will definitely have a fantastic feast for your eyes. Besides, we should be back around 4pm. If you can come, please let us know and we’ll wait for you at the gate at 8:00am.
I’m Looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.
【分析】这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生给外教写信，邀请她去参观中国瓷器展，并介绍相关情况。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时
结构：总分
要求：
1. 表明写信目的
2.
1）出发及返程时间
2）活动内容:了解中国瓷器的历史，欣赏首次展出的中国瓷器等
3. 期待老师的参加

第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
be interested in/ invite sb to do sth/ on behalf of/ learn about/ have a chance to do sth/ plan to do sth/ set off/ be famous for/ date back to/ have a better understanding of/for the first time
第三步：连词成句
There will be an exhibition about Chinese porcelain held next Sunday.
Knowing that you are interested in Chinese traditional culture, so I’d like to invite to join us, on behalf of my classmates.
During the visit, we will have a better understanding of its history.
What is the most important is that we have a chance to appreciate some delicate and rare porcelain, some of which are exhibited for the first time.
As we all know, porcelain was a Chinese invention and is famous for the finest quality.
Thus, you will definitely have a fantastic feast for your eyes.
By the way, we plan to set off at 8:00am and back at 4pm.
If you can come, please let us know and we’ll wait for you at the gate
第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）
表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so…
状语从句连词：because/ if/ though/ although…
定语从句连词：which/ that/ when/ where…
第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些主从复合句，例如：What is the most important is that we have a chance to appreciate some delicate and rare porcelain, some of which is exhibited for the first time.
句中what引导主语从句，that引导表语从句，which引导非限制性定语从句；As we all know, porcelain was a Chinese invention and is famous for the finest quality.句中as引导非限制性定语从句。这些从句的使用为文章增色不少。
5．Dear Brown,
I’m Li Hua in your class. I’m delighted to inform you that an Art Festival will be held to welcome the new year. I’m writing to invite you to join us to mark this special occasion.
Now let me tell you about arrangements. There will be a wide variety of cultural activities including lectures relevant to Chinese culture, singing, dancing, drama playing and other performances to mark this occasion. The festival will fall on December 14, Saturday. It will start at 8:00 am and end at 9:00 pm. You are welcome to give a performance, whatever art form you like. Make preparations in advance and show us your talent!
Your participation will be appreciated. Look forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua.
【分析】这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生给朋友写信，邀请他参加学校举行的艺术节活动，并请他表演节目。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般将来时
结构：总分
要求：
1.表明写信目的
2. 活动相关内容
1）目的和时间；
2）活动安排；
3．请他表演节目
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
invite sb to do sth/ be interested in/ be scheduled on/ take part in/ participate in/ in order to/ be aimed at/ a wide range of/ all kinds of/ a variety of/ be welcome to do sth/ make full preparation/ ahead of time/ in advance…
第三步：连词成句
1.    I’m delighted to inform you that an Art Festival will be held to welcome the new year.
2.    I’m writing to invite you to join us to mark this special occasion.
3.    Now let me tell you about arrangements.
4.    There will be a wide variety of cultural activities including lectures relevant to Chinese culture, singing, dancing, drama playing and other performances to mark this occasion.
5.    The festival will fall on December 14, Saturday.
6.    It will start at 8:00 am and end at 9:00 pm.
7.    You are welcome to give a performance, whatever art form you like.
8.    Make preparations in advance and show us your talent!
9.    Your participation will be appreciated. Look forward to your early reply.
第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）
表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so…
状语从句连词：because/ if/ though/ although…
定语从句连词：which/ that/ when/ where…
第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些主从复合句，例如：You are welcome to give a performance, whatever art form you like.句中whatever引导让步状语从句；I’m delighted to inform you that an Art Festival will be held to welcome the new year.句中that引导宾语从句。这些从句的使用给文章增色不少。
6．Dear Brown,
I’m Li Hua. Knowing that you are interested in Chinese culture, I’m writing to invite you to see Beijing Opera at the City Theater with us next week.
As is known to all, Beijing Opera is a time-honored form of traditional Chinese art. With a history of about 200 years, it’s considered as the treasure of Chinese culture. Typically, performers who are dressed in colorful costumes and wear heavy make-up will act out various stories in history. You can learn more about Chinese history while enjoying the performance.
Will you be available next Friday? If so, I will buy tickets in advance. I’ll be glad if you accept my invitation.
Look forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邀请信，写信邀请朋友一起去看京剧。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时
结构：总分总法
内容要点包括：
1. 简介：京剧(Beijing Opera)历史悠久，服装(costume)色彩艳丽，讲述历史故事等。
2. 告知地点、约定时间、购票安排等。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
be interested in；Chinese culture；Beijing Opera；City Theater；traditional Chinese art；be considered as；treasure；be dressed in；costumes；make-up；act out；various；available；in advance；invitation；look forward to；reply等
第三步：连词成句
1. Knowing that you are interested in Chinese culture, I’m writing to invite you to see Beijing Opera at the City Theater with us next week.
2. Beijing Opera is a time-honored form of traditional Chinese art.
3. it’s considered as the treasure of Chinese culture.
4. performers who are dressed in colorful costumes and wear heavy make-up will act out various stories in history
5. If so, I will buy tickets in advance.
6. I’ll be glad if you accept my invitation.
7. Looking forward to your early reply.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
As is known to all；Typically；and；while；If so；if等
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：使用了非谓语动词Knowing that you are interested in Chinese culture, I’m writing to invite you to see Beijing Opera at the City Theater with us next week.；使用了with作伴随状语以及it作形式主语With a history of about 200 years, it’s considered as the treasure of Chinese culture.；使用了定语从句和主语从句performers who are dressed in colorful costumes and wear heavy make-up will act out various stories in history；使用了while引导的时间状语从句；使用了if引导的条件句I’ll be glad if you accept my invitation.等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
7．Dear lane，
How is everything going in Shanghai？Knowing you are quite into the Chinese culture，I am writing to inform you of the Chinese Culture Festival bound to be held in Quanzhou next month.
The festival，I do believe，will give you a better understanding of the splendid Chinese culture. Therefore. I sincerely invite you to come and enjoy it. As the festival will include various amazing activities, I'd like to send you a brochure in English. Could you please leave me your address so that I can mail it to you soon？
Looking forward to your reply and coming.
Yours.
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生给朋友写信，邀请他参加下个月在泉州举办的中国文化节。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般将来时
结构：总分
要求：
1.写信的目的；
2.简介文化节；
3.询问收件地址。

第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
Be interested in/ invite sb to do sth/ inform sb of sth/ send sb sth/ give sb sth/ plan to do sth/ have a better understanding of
第三步：连词成句
How is everything going in Shanghai？
Knowing you are quite into the Chinese culture，I am writing to inform you of the Chinese Culture Festival bound to be held in Quanzhou next month.
The festival，I do believe，will give you a better understanding of the splendid Chinese culture. Therefore.
I sincerely invite you to come and enjoy it.
As the festival will include various amazing activities, I'd like to send you a brochure in English.
Could you please leave me your address so that I can mail it to you soon？
第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）
表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so…
状语从句连词：because/ if/ though/ although…
定语从句连词：which/ that/ when/ where…
第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些主从复合句，例如：Could you please leave me your address so that I can mail it to you soon？句中so that引导目的状语从句；也有一些分词的使用，例如：Knowing you are quite into the Chinese culture，I am writing to inform you of the Chinese Culture Festival bound to be held in Quanzhou next month.句中现在分词Knowing you are quite into the Chinese culture作状语，故去分词bound to be held作定语。这些复合句和分词的使用为文章增色添彩。
8．Dear John,
Knowing that you are interested in science fiction, I’d like to invite you to see a film this weekend. The Wandering Earth is being shown these days, whose theme is to save the earth and protect our common home. Viewers describe it as a breakthrough of the Chinese film industry and it has received a wide range of positive reviews so far.
Shall we go to watch the film if you are available? How about this Saturday evening? Please contact me at your earliest convenience so that I can book the tickets in advance.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封邀请信。
【详解】根据提示可知，本篇为书信，要求写一封邀请信，时态应为一般现在时。关键要点如下：①邀请周六晚上去观看科幻电影 The Wandering Earth；②主题:保护人类共同的地球家园；③观众评价；④请求回复。
第二步：根据关键要点，确定关键词，如：science fiction（科幻电影），save the earth and protect our common home（保护家园），positive reviews（正面评价），accept my invitation（接受邀请）等。
第三步：根据提示及关键词进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题以及句子结构完整。
第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，使之自然流畅，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面。
【点睛】本篇范文结构清晰，内容完整，过渡衔接严谨自然，符合演讲稿的要求，其中不乏亮点句型。非谓语动词的使用Knowing that you are interested in science fiction, I’d like to invite you to see a film this weekend.非限制性定语从句的使用The Wandering Earth is being shown these days, whose theme is to save the earth and protect our common home.
9．Dear Henry,
With China’s National Day approaching, our school will hold some activities in celebration of China’s 70th anniversary. I’m greatly delighted to invite you to join us.
We will appreciate various activities on National Day, Oct. 1st. A singing and dancing evening will be hosted in the school hall to honor our motherland. Besides, there will be a photo display in the school gallery which witnesses the great achievements of China’s reform and opening up. To our amazement, such activities as speech competitions and Calligraphy exhibitions will be also available. I definitively believe that it will be a fantastic opportunity for you to further understand China’s development.
I’m looking forward to your coming. Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这篇书面表达是一篇电子邮件写作。要求你写一封邮件给你的英国朋友Henry，邀请他参加你校国庆节举办的建国70周年庆祝活动。
【详解】题目要求假如你是李华，请你写一封邮件给你的英国朋友Henry，邀请他参加你校国庆节举办的建国70周年庆祝活动。内容包括：1. 时间和地点；2. 有关活动：“歌颂祖国”歌舞晚会、“改革开放成就”图片展…分析可知，应该以第一人称为主，一般将来时进行写作。要点已经给出，要求考生根据提纲自己发挥拓展，考生要先想好写哪几点，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。文章分三个自然段进行写作：第一段说明自己此次写信的目的；第二段详细介绍你校国庆节举办的建国70周年庆祝活动；第三段期待得到回复。描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。
【点睛】这篇电子邮件的关键在于要点的拓展，同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。Besides, there will be a photo display in the school gallery which witnesses the great achievements of China’s reform and opening up. 定语从句的运用；I definitively believe that it will be a fantastic opportunity for you to further understand China’s development. 宾语从句的运用。
10．Dear Tony.
In your letter you mentioned you are interested in Chinese foods and want to know more about them.
Here I would like to introduce something called Zongzi with bamboo leaves to wrap sticky rice and delicious pork inside It was traditionally made for the Dragon Boat Festival in honor of Chinese poet Qu Yuan，But over time，it has been more and more common. Nowadays，people in my hometown make and eat Zongzi whenever they like. You can also easily find Zongzi in many stores. I like it because it tastes good, sweet and sticky. On the other hand，it conveys people's good wishes.
Anyway，please come to experience by yourself. I am sure you can have a good taste of more wonderful local foods.
Best wishes.
Yours
Li Hua
【分析】本文是一篇应用文中的书信，同时也是一篇开放性书面表达，要求考生把自己当成李华，给朋友Tony写信，介绍介绍一到两个自己熟悉的传统食品以及它可能包含的生活或文化习俗。要求考生自行组织要点，总体难度较大。
【详解】第1步：审题。根据文字提示可知本文是一篇说明文，要求考生介绍一到两个自己熟悉的传统食品以及它可能包含的生活或文化习俗。全文以一般现在时和第一三人称为主。
第2步：组织要点。1.要向对方介绍中国传统食物粽子；2.最初人们在五月初五做粽子是为了纪念诗人屈原，后来成为了一个传统。现在中国各地随时都可以吃粽子。3.粽子表达了人们对生活的美好愿望。4.邀请对方来中国品尝粽子。
第3步：根据提示及关键词组进行遣词造句，关键词为introduce something called Zongzi、in honor of Chinese poet Qu Yuan、taste good, sweet and sticky、convey people's good wishes等。同时注意书信的惯用语和习惯表达。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本篇范文结构完美，条理清晰。范文时态和人称运用准确，涵盖了文字提示要求的所有要点，且有适当的个人发挥。考生运用了多样式的句型结构，整篇文章富有变化并不死板。使用了较多的高级词汇，如in honor of Chinese poet Qu Yuan、taste good, sweet and sticky、convey people's good wishes等；尽量运用了丰富的句式，如with复合结构with bamboo leaves to wrap sticky rice and delicious pork inside；同时文章还运用了一些串联成分，如on the other hand，这些串联词让各个要点更为紧密地结合在一起。以上写作技巧的运用提升了文章的层次，显示了考生具有很强的驾驭语言的能力。