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必过13 书信类应用文专项15篇
一、建议信
1.假设你是李华,Tom邀请你和几个朋友周六去他家吃饭,你已经接受了邀请,但是你突然得了重感冒不能去了。请你根据以下要点提示给Tom写一封信,表示歉意。
要点提示:1.感谢Tom的邀请;
2.由于发烧咳嗽,医生建议休息几天;
3.希望Tom代你向赴约的其他朋友问好。
注意:1.词数90左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
2.假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Lily所在学校的汉语俱乐部要举办“诵经典,学汉语”(Read Classics & learn Chinese)活动,她给你发邮件征询建议。请你回复邮件,内容包括:
1.推荐诵读内容;
2.推荐理由;
3.活动建议。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节.以使行文连贯。
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二、申请信
3.假定你是晨光中学的李津。你在校报英语专栏看到了学校“英语文化节”在招募志愿者,为“Talent Show, Speech Contest”和“English Debate”等活动提供志愿服务,请根据写作要点写一封应征邮件。
写作要点:
1. 表明写信意图;
2. 陈述应征目的;
3. 说明应征条件(性格、能力等)。
注意:1. 词数:100 词左右,开头结尾已给出,不算入总词数;
2. 可适当加入细节,以使内容充实、行文连贯;
3. 请勿提及与考生身份相关的信息。
Dear Ms Chen,
I’m Li Jin, a student from Class 2, Senior 2.
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Looking forward to your reply.
Yours truly,
Li Jin
三、邀请信
4.假定你是李华,计划本周末和同学一起去河边植树。请给外教Nancy写一封邮件,邀请她一同前往。内容包括:
1.集合时间及地点;
2.活动安排及提醒;
3.午餐及返程时间。
注意:1.词数90左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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5.假定你是李华,你校将举办一场交通安全知识讲座,你打算邀请外教John参加。请你用英语给他写封邮件告知此事,主要内容包括:
1.讲座的时间和地点;
2.讲座的主题和内容;
3.自荐当他的翻译,期待他的出席。
注意:1.词数90左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已写好,但不计入总词数。
Dear John,
I’m writing to tell you a piece of good news.
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Yours,
Li Hua
6.假定你是李华。为了庆祝春节,你们班将举行个露天音乐会(open-air concert),老师和同学们都会参加。请给外籍老师Alice写封信,邀请她参加并表演个节目。
内容要点:
(1)时间: 1月20晚8:00;
(2)地点:学校操场;
(3)节目类型:唱歌、跳舞、乐器演奏或自己擅长的任何表演形式。
注意:1.词数80左右:
2.开头和结尾已经给出,不算词数:
3.可以适当增加细节,并将开头和结尾抄写在答题卡上,以使行文连贯。
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7.假设你是李津。你校学生会将在本周六举行校园植树活动(A Tree-planting Activity),你想邀请正在天津交流学习的加拿大朋友Cathy参加活动。请按以下提示,用英语写一封电子邮件:
(1)校园植树活动的时间、地点和具体内容;
(2)参加活动前需要做的准备(如:穿着、所带物品等);
(3)校园植树活动的意义(至少写出两条)。
注意:
(1)词数100左右,开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯。
Dear Cathy,
How is it going these days? The Students’ Union of my school will
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Looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Jin
四、推荐信
8.假如你是李华,得知某英文报社要评选“The Most Qualified Student”(最美中学生),请你用英语给编辑写一封推荐信。要点如下:
1.介绍被推荐人(林扬)的基本信息;
2.说明推荐理由。
注意:1.词数90左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。
Dear Editor,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
9.假如你是李华,你的加拿大网友Mike圣诞节期间打算来中国,他对中国传统文化非常感兴趣,希望你能为他推荐一些名胜古迹。请你用英语给他发一封电子邮件,向他推荐一个或两个你所喜欢的名胜古迹。
要点包括:
1.简介你推荐的名胜古迹;
2.叙述你推荐的理由;
3.表达你的祝愿。
注意:词数90左右。
五、告知信/通知
10.假定你是李华。你和外国朋友Robert约定下周一去参加晚会。但你得了流感,医生建议你休息一段时间,因此不能赴约。请给Robert写一封电子邮件。
内容包括:
(1)告知不能赴约;
(2)说明不能赴约的原因;
(3)希望下次再约。
注意:1.词数90左右;
2.开头和结尾已经给出,不计入词数;
3.可以适当增加细节,并将开头和结尾抄写在答题卡上,以使行文连贯。
Dear Robert,
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Yours,
Li Hua
11.明天(星期天)全班同学将去参观科学博物馆,你将在英语课后将此消息告知全班同学。请根据提示写一篇通知。
要点:1.集合的时间及地点,交通方式;
2.参观要求及规则。
提示:科学博物馆:Science Museum
要求:1.词数80左右;语言通顺连贯;
2.可以适当增加情节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
Fellow students :
May I have your attention, please?
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六、其他应用文
12.假定你是李华,你校英语社团将选举新一届主席,你打算参加竞选。请你用英语写一篇竞选演讲稿。内容包括:
1.个人的优势介绍(性格、能力等);
2.当选后的打算;
3.表达当选的愿望。
注意:词数90左右(开头已给出,但不计入总词数)。
Good afternoon,everyone!
My name is Li Hua.It’s my honor to run for president of the English Club in our school.
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13.读写任务
阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
It was a winter morning, just a couple of weeks before Christmas 2005. Trevor, my husband, parked his bike outside the back door as he usually does. After putting in 10 hours of labor, he returned to find his bike gone.
The bike, a black Kona 18 speed, was our only transport. Trevor used it to get to work, putting in 60-hour weeks to support his young family.
I was so sad that someone would steal our bike that I wrote to the newspaper and told them our story. Shortly after that, several people in our area offered to help. One wonderful stranger even bought a bike, then called my husband to pick it up. Once again my husband had a way to get to and from his job. It really is an honor that a complete stranger would go out of their way for someone they have never met before.
People say that a smile can be passed from one person to another, but acts of kindness from strangers are even more so. This experience has had a spreading effect in our lives because it strengthened our faith in humanity(人性)as a whole. No matter how big or how small, an act of kindness shows that someone cares. And the results can be everlasting.
[写作内容]
1.以30字概括短文的内容。
2.以约定120个词表达你对“助人为乐”的看法,包括下面内容:
(1)叙述你或你的朋友帮助人或得到别人帮助的经历
(2) 你对现代社会是否需要“助人为乐 ”的精神的看法及理由
[写作要求]
作文中可使用自己的亲身经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子
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14.假如你叫李华,你的外籍老师Mr. White向你询问上周星期天如何与家人过父亲节(Father’s Day)的情况。请你通过e-mail的方式告知有关内容。
要点:
1.买礼物,送父亲;
2.打扫卫生、做家务等其他活动;
3.受到父母表扬;
4.你的感触。
注意: 1. 词数: 100左右;
2.要点完整,可适当发挥,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr. White,
I hope everything is going on well with you.
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Sincerely Yours,
Li Hua
15.假如你是你校学生会主席李华,在你校“读书月”活动到来之际,为呼吁学生多读书、读好书,请你以学生会的名义,为学校“英语天地”宣传栏写一封倡议书,内容包括:
1.读书的好处;
2.发出倡议。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考答案:
1.Dear Tom,
Thank you for inviting me to have dinner in your house this Saturday.
However,I regret to tell you that I may not be able to keep my promise because I have caught a bad cold.I’ve been having a high fever and coughing badly.My doctor suggested that I should take a rest for several days.I must make an apology to you.
It’s a pity that I will miss such a good chance of enjoying the perfect dishes with so many friends.Please give my best regards to other friends who come to the dinner.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给Tom写封邮件,告知你突然得了重感冒不得不爽约,并表示歉意。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时和一般过去时,少量现在完成时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1.感谢Tom的邀请;
2.由于发烧咳嗽,医生建议休息几天;
3.希望Tom代你向赴约的其他朋友问好。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
Thank you for inviting me to...; regret to tell you that; keep my promise; take a rest for several days; make an apology to you; It’s a pity that...; give my best regards to...
第三步:连词成句
Thank you for inviting me to have dinner in your house this Saturday.
However, I regret to tell you that I may not be able to keep my promise because I have caught a bad cold.
My doctor suggested that I should take a rest for several days.
I must make an apology to you.
It’s a pity that I will miss such a good chance of enjoying the perfect dishes with so many friends.
Please give my best regards to other friends who come to the dinner.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1..表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition , As well as, not only…but (also), including, (供参考)
2.表转折对比关系:However
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result (供参考)
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰
【点睛】[高分句型1] However, I regret to tell you that I may not be able to keep my promise because I have caught a bad cold. 运用that引导的宾语从句,because引导的原因状语从句以及高级短语keep one’s promise, 使得句子更能彰显考生的语言水平。
[高分句型2] It’s a pity that I will miss such a good chance of enjoying the perfect dishes with so many friends. 运用主语从句,以更高级的方式表达歉意及遗憾之情。
[高分句型3] Please give my best regards to other friends who come to the dinner. 运用who 引导的定语从句使行文更上档次、简洁不繁琐。
2.Dear Lily,
I’ve learned that your school Chinese Club is planning to organize the activity “Read Classics & Learn Chinese”. My suggestions are as follows.
To begin with, you d better choose some simple poems written by famous poets such as Bai Juyi, Li Bai and Du Fu, whose poems are full of rhythm and easy to understand. Besides, by reading these poems you can experience the beauty of Chinese language as well as learn about the Chinese culture. As for the organization, personally, I advise acting out the poems and reading them to appropriate music, which may make the activity both instructive and entertaining.
I hope that my suggestions will be helpful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求写一封电子邮件。
【详解】第1步:根据提示可知,本篇为一封电子邮件:假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Lily所在学校的汉语俱乐部要举办“诵经典,学汉语”(Read Classics & learn Chinese)活动,她给你发邮件征询建议。请你回复邮件,内容包括:1.推荐诵读内容;2.推荐理由;3.活动建议。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),如:school Chinese Club(学校汉语俱乐部);My suggestions are as follows.(我的建议如下);experience the beauty of Chinese language(体验汉语的美)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。同时文中使用高级词汇和句子。I’ve learned that your school Chinese Club is planning to organize the activity “Read Classics & Learn Chinese”.句中使用that引导的宾语从句;To begin with, you d better choose some simple poems written by famous poets过去分词作后置定语;I advise acting out the poems and reading them to appropriate music, which may make the activity both instructive and entertaining.句中使用which引导的非限制性定语从句;另外,To begin with, Besides, As for the organization,等的运用为文章增色添彩。
3.Dear Ms Chen,
I’m Li Jin, a student from Class 2, Senior 2. Knowing that you are looking for volunteers to provide service for Talent Show, Speech Contest, and English Debate, I’m writing to apply for it.
I really want to take this precious opportunity because, by offering my service, I will be able to improve my organizational ability, communication skills as well as my confidence in speaking English in public.
As an outgoing girl, I get along well with my classmates. In addition, having a good command of English makes me qualified for this position. What’s more, served as representative of English in my class, I have lent a helping hand to my English teacher in several activities, which have been appreciated by both teachers and classmates. Therefore, I think I’m fit for the job. Besides, if I am honored enough to be accepted a volunteer, I will spare no effort to let more people get involved in the Cultural Festival.
I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations. If you could give me a consideration, I won’t let you down.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours truly,
Li Jin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于申请信。要求考生向学校申请成为“Talent Show, Speech Contest”和“English Debate”等活动的志愿者。
【详解】1.词汇积累
了解,得知:know → learn
机会:opportunity → chance
提供:offer → provide
另外,此外:in addition→ besides
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:As an outgoing girl, I get along well with my classmates.
拓展句:I get along well with my classmates, because I am an outgoing girl.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I really want to take this precious opportunity because, by offering my service, I will be able to improve my organizational ability, communication skills as well as my confidence in speaking English in public. (运用了because引导原因状语从句)
[高分句型2] Besides, if I am honored enough to be accepted a volunteer, I will spare no effort to let more people get involved in the Cultural Festival.(运用了if引导条件状语从句)
4.One possible version:
Dear Nancy,
My classmates and I are planning to plant trees by the river this weekend.We all hope you can join us.Here is the schedule.
We are to meet at the school gate at 8 o'clock this Saturday morning.Since we’ll cycle there and work in the field,you’d better wear casual clothes and comfortable shoes.It would be so much better if you could bring some necessary tools.Besides,we’ll have a picnic after the work is done.Everyone is expected to bring their lunch and share it.We may return at around 3 o'clock in the afternoon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给外教写信,邀请外教一同去植树。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般将来时
要求:
1.集合时间及地点;
2.活动安排及提醒;
3.午餐及返程时间。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
since; cycle; casual clothes; necessary; have a picnic; be expected to
第三步:连词成句
1. Since we’ll cycle there and work in the field, you’d better wear casual clothes and comfortable shoes.
2. It would be so much better if you could bring some necessary tools.
3. Besides, we’ll have a picnic after the work is done.
4. Everyone is expected to bring their lunch and share it
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
【点睛】[高分句型1]
It would be so much better if you could bring some necessary tools. 如果你能带些必要的工具就更好了。本句是if引导的条件状语从句。
[高分句型2]
Since we’ll cycle there and work in the field, you’d better wear casual clothes and comfortable shoes. 既然我们将骑自行车去那里并在地里工作,你最好穿休闲的衣服和舒适的鞋子。此处是since引导的原因状语从句。
5.One possible version:
Dear John,
I’m writing to tell you a piece of good news.There will be a lecture about traffic safety at 7 pm next Monday.Organized by our school,it will be held in the school hall.There are three parts of the lecture.At first,our headmaster will give a speech to us on behalf of the school.Then some traffic policemen coming from our city will show us some pictures about traffic accidents and tell us how to protect ourselves from these dangerous situations.In addition,they will teach many traffic regulations to remind us to pay attention to traffic safety.
I believe the lecture will be educational,so I sincerely invite you to attend it.If you don’t mind,I want to be a translator for you to help you understand the lecture.I’m looking forward to your attendance.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写邮件告知外教John关于交通安全知识讲座的信息并邀请他参加。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。
要求:
1.讲座的时间和地点;
2.讲座的主题和内容;
3.自荐当他的翻译,期待他的出席。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
traffic safety; on behalf of; protect…from; In addition; pay attention to; educational; attendance;look forward to
第三步:连词成句
1. There will be a lecture about traffic safety at 7 pm next Monday.
2. our headmaster will give a speech to us on behalf of the school.
3. Then some traffic policemen coming from our city will show us some pictures about traffic accidents and tell us how to protect ourselves from these dangerous situations.
4. In addition, they will teach many traffic regulations to remind us to pay attention to traffic safety.
5. I believe the lecture will be educational,
6. I’m looking forward to your attendance.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:At first,Then,
2.表并列补充关系: In addition
3.表因果关系:so
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
【点睛】[高分句型1]
Then some traffic policemen coming from our city will show us some pictures about traffic accidents and tell us how to protect ourselves from these dangerous situations. (运用现在分词coming from 作后置定语,how+不定式作tell的宾语)
[高分句型2]
If you don’t mind, I want to be a translator for you to help you understand the lecture. (运用if引导条件状语从句)
6.Dear Alice,
How is it going? I’m writing to sincerely invite you to take part in our concert in the open air, which will be held at 8 p.m on Jan 20th on the playground in our school by our class for the purpose of celebrating the coming Spring Festival.
By the way, you’re particularly expected to sing, dance and play some musical instruments or perform anything you’re good at.
I would appreciate it if you could accept my invitation and looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求写一封信。
【详解】第1步:根据提示可知,本篇为一封书信;假定你是李华。为了庆祝春节,你们班将举行个露天音乐会(open-air concert),老师和同学们都会参加。请给外籍老师Alice写封信,邀请她参加并表演个节目。内容要点:(1)时间: 1月20晚8:00;(2)地点:学校操场;(3)节目类型:唱歌、跳舞、乐器演奏或自己擅长的任何表演形式。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),如:take part in our concert in the open air(参加露天音乐会);for the purpose of celebrating the coming Spring Festival.(为了庆祝即将到来的春节);particularly expected to sing, dance(特别期待唱歌、跳舞)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。I’m writing to sincerely invite you to take part in our concert in the open air, which will be held at 8 p.m on Jan 20th on the playground in our school by our class for the purpose of celebrating the coming Spring Festival.句中使用which引导的非限制性定语从句和一般将来时态的被动语态;I would appreciate it if you could accept my invitation and looking forward to your coming.句中使用if引导的从句。
7.Dear Cathy,
How is it going these days? The Students’ Union of my school will organize a tree-planting activity this week. I’m writing to invite you to join us.
At 2:00 p.m. this Saturday, students and teachers from different grades will plant about 1000 new trees along the main road in our school. We will provide necessary tools, such as buckets, spades and gloves. All you need to prepare is to wear something fit for manual labor.
This activity will provide us a good platform for communication between teachers and students. It will also enable us to contribute to building a beautiful and green school together and planting hope.
Looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Jin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于邀请信。要求考生邀请正在天津交流学习的加拿大朋友Cathy参加本周六举行的校园植树活动动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
组织,筹备:organize→ arrange
参与:join → take part in
必要的,必需的:necessary → essential
合适的:fit → suitable
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:At 2:00 p.m. this Saturday, students and teachers from different grades will plant about 1000 new trees along the main road in our school.
拓展句:At 2:00 p.m. this Saturday, students and teachers who come from different grades will plant about 1000 new trees along the main road in our school.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m writing to invite you to join us.(运用了动词不定式作目的状语)
[高分句型2] All you need to prepare is to wear something fit for manual labor. (运用了省略关系代词that的定语从句)
8.One possible version:
Dear Editor,
I’m a senior high school student and I happened to hear that you were hosting an activity to select The Most Qualified Student. It is a great honour for me to introduce to you one of my best friends, Lin Yang.
First of all, he, who is among the most diligent students in our school, not only studies hard but also behaves well. Secondly, he stands out for his diverse hobbies, including painting and playing the violin. Last but not least, he is warm-hearted and willing to help others in need.
Therefore, I here recommend him to you with all my heart and I look forward to hearing from you at the earliest possible moment.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给编辑写封推荐信,向英语报社推荐“最美中学生”林杨。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时和少量一般过去时等其他时态。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1. 介绍被推荐人(林扬)的基本信息;
2. 说明推荐理由。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
an activity to select The Most Qualified Student; one of my best friends; study hard; behave well; diverse hobbies; painting and playing the violin; warm-hearted; be willing to help others; recommend him to you; look forward to
第三步:连词成句
1. I’m a senior high school student and I happened to hear that you were hosting an activity to select The Most Qualified Student.
2. It is a great honour for me to introduce to you one of my best friends, Lin Yang.
3. First of all, he, who is among the most diligent students in our school, not only studies hard but also behaves well.
4. Secondly, he stands out for his diverse hobbies, including painting and playing the violin.
5. Last but not least, he is warm-hearted and willing to help others in need.
6. Therefore, I here recommend him to you with all my heart and I look forward to hearing from you at the earliest possible moment.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
表文章结构顺序:First of all, Secondly, Last but not least
2. 表并列补充关系:not only…but (also), including
3. 表因果关系:Therefore
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
【点睛】[高分句型1] It is a great honour for me to introduce to you one of my best friends, Lin Yang.(非谓语动词不定式作主语,it形式主语)
[高分句型2] First of all, he, who is among the most diligent students in our school, not only studies hard but also behaves well. (who引导的非限制性定语从句)
9.Dear Mike,
I’m glad to know that you are coming to China during Christmas. The following is a brief introduction about some places of interest that I strongly recommend to you.
The Great Wall of China is one of the greatest wonders of the world and is visible from outer space. Because of its rich history and splendid appearance, the Great Wall attracts a lot of tourists, scientists, and historians.
The famous West Lake is like a brilliant pearl embedded in the beautiful and fertile shores of the East China Sea near the mouth of the Hangzhou Bay. The view of the West Lake is simply charming. Different time and different weather make it a different scene.
Look forward to your arrival.There are many other wonderful places here. Wish you a nice journey.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给加拿大网友Mike发一封电子邮件,向他推荐一个或两个所喜欢的中国名胜古迹。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时。
结构:总-分-总法
要点:
1.简介你推荐的名胜古迹;
2.叙述你推荐的理由;
3.表达你的祝愿。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
Christmas;a brief introduction;places of interest;the Great Wall;one of the greatest wonders of the world;because of;a lot of;the West Lake;charming;look forward to;there be
第三步:连词成句
1. I’m glad to know that you are coming to China during Christmas.
2. The following is a brief introduction about some places of interest that I strongly recommend to you.
3. The Great Wall of China is one of the greatest wonders of the world and is visible from outer space.
4. Because of its rich history and splendid appearance, the Great Wall attracts a lot of tourists, scientists, and historians.
5. The famous West Lake is like a brilliant pearl embedded in the beautiful and fertile shores of the East China Sea near the mouth of the Hangzhou Bay.
6. The view of the West Lake is simply charming. Different time and different weather make it a different scene.
7. Wish you a nice journey.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last(供参考)
2.表并列补充关系:and;What is more, Besides, Moreover(供参考)
3.表因果关系:Because of
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] The following is a brief introduction about some places of interest that I strongly recommend to you.(使用了由that引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2] The famous West Lake is like a brilliant pearl embedded in the beautiful and fertile shores of the East China Sea near the mouth of the Hangzhou Bay.(使用了非谓语动词作状语)
[高分句型3] The Great Wall of China is one of the greatest wonders of the world and is visible from outer space.(使用了由and连接的并列句)
10.Dear Robert,
I am terribly sorry to tell you that I can’t attend the evening party next Monday.
I know I have promised you, but I’ve been having the flu unexpectedly. I didn’t feel well last night and later I found I had a fever and coughed badly, so my parents sent me to the hospital, where I was told I got the flu. The doctor advised me to stay in bed for a few days and avoid going to crowded places.
If it’s convenient for you, shall we make another appointment after my recovery? Sorry again for any trouble this may cause.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给你的外国朋友Robert写一封电子邮件告诉他你因得了流感而不能跟他一起去参加晚会了。
【详解】1.词汇积累
非常:terribly→awfully
告诉:tell→inform
参加:attend→participate in
出乎意料地:unexpectedly→beyond one’s expectations
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:The doctor advised me to stay in bed for a few days and avoid going to crowded places.
拓展句:The doctor advised that I should stay in bed for a few days and avoid going to crowded places.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am terribly sorry to tell you that I can’t attend the evening party next Monday.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】I didn’t feel well last night and later I found I had a fever and coughed badly, so my parents sent me to the hospital, where I was told I got the flu.(运用了where引导非限制性定语从句)
11.Fellow students,
May I have your attention, please? Tomorrow our class will visit the Science Museum, which is very interesting. We will meet at the school gate at eight o'clock in the morning. Then we will go to the museum by school bus, where we must listen to the guide carefully and take some notes. Having visited the museum, we will write a report. Everyone should obey the rules of the museum. We are not allowed to take photos in the museum. Remember: don't speak loudly, or we may bother the other visitors.
Remember the time. Don't be late!
Thank you!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。明天(星期天)全班同学将去参观科学博物馆,考生将在英语课后将此消息告知全班同学。请考生根据提示写一篇通知。
【详解】1.词汇积累
访问:visit→call at
认真地:carefully→earnestly
遵守:obey→observe
允许:allow→permit
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Having visited the museum, we will write a report.
拓展句:After we visited the museum, we will write a report.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Tomorrow our class will visit the Science Museum, which is very interesting.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Then we will go to the museum by school bus, where we must listen to the guide carefully and take some notes.(运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句)
12.Good afternoon, everyone!
My name is Li Hua. It’s my honor to run for president of the English Club in our school.
I’m confident that I’m well fit for the position. For one thing, I’m outgoing and good at communicating with others. For another, I have been class monitor since Junior High School, which helped me gain much experience in organization and management. If I’m chosen, I will organize more after-class activities to enrich our lives. I will work together with other members, making the English Club more attractive and helpful. I really hope that you can give me a chance and I’m sure I will be a good president.
That’s all. Thank you!
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一篇竞选演讲稿,竞选英语社团新一届的主席。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时、一般过去时和一般将来时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1.个人的优势介绍(性格、能力等);
2.当选后的打算;
3.表达当选的愿望。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
run for; confident; be well fit for; be good at; communicate with; gain much experience in; management; after-class activities; work together with; president
第三步:连词成句
1. It’s my honor to run for president of the English Club in our school.
2. I’m confident that I’m well fit for the position.
3. For one thing, I’m outgoing and good at communicating with others.
4. For another, I have been class monitor since Junior High School, which helped me gain much experience in organization and management.
5. If I’m chosen, I will organize more after-class activities to enrich our lives.
6. I will work together with other members, making the English Club more attractive and helpful.
7. I really hope that you can give me a chance and I’m sure I will be a good president.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second(供参考)
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover(供参考)
3.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore (供参考)
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] For another, I have been class monitor since Junior High School, which helped me gain much experience in organization and management. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] If I’m chosen, I will organize more after-class activities to enrich our lives. (运用了if引导条件状语从句)
13.The author describes her experience of losing her bike but afterwards getting help from many people. The author thinks highly of the acts of kindness and believes it will influence many other people.
This reminds me of my experience when I was eight years old. I was left alone at home, doing my homework when an old man knocked at my door and begged for food. He was in rags and tired, obviously coming from a long distance. I hesitated at that moment because my family was not well off. But when I saw his worried look, I filled his bowl with rice. He was very thankful to me and said that I would be rewarded for my kind heart. Many years have passed, I still well remember that I have ever given a hand to an old man who was in need.
Nowadays, some people claim to have been cheated out of money when they try to offer help to others. However, I still insist that the acts of kindness should be encouraged. If everyone is willing to hold out their hands to those in trouble, there will be fewer problems in this world.
【详解】试题分析:本文首先描述了丢了自行车后来得到了很多人的帮助,作者认为这样的善意的行为对其他人有很好的影响。你对“助人为乐”的看法,可以叙述一次你得到别人帮助的具体的经历来说明助人为乐的社会价值。你认为这个社会应该需要助人为乐的精神,因为助人为乐能够让我们的社会更和谐更美好。要求考生在保证内容要点全部概括的基础上可以充分发挥自己的想象,进而用自己的语言来表达某种观点或看法,增添了写作的灵活性,同时能较好地考查考生的想象能力和英语语言表达能力
考点:考查半开放性作文
点评:开放性作文只给出了一个话题,给考生自由发挥的余地很大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时,首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型,在你的能力范围之内,选择句式时要赋予变化,因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词,把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体,如besides, further, last but not least等。在发表个人观点的时候,可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采,也能增加得高分的可能性。
14.Dear Mr. White
I hope everything is going on well with you. Last time you asked me how I celebrated Father’s Day in China. Now let me tell you something about it.
Last Sunday was Father’s Day. I made a meaningful plan for the day. I went to the market and bought a nice gift for my father. When I got home, I began to clean the house, washed clothes and did other housework. I also learned to cook dinner. I was praised by my parents for this. They were proud of me. I think I have grown up now and I should help do something for my family. Caring for my parents is not only on “Father’s Day”.
Let’s get on well with our parents forever.
Hope to see you soon.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你叫李华,你的外籍老师Mr. White向你询问上周星期天如何与家人过父亲节的情况。请你通过e-mail的方式告知有关内容。
【详解】1.词汇积累
开始:begin→start
家务:housework→chore
赞美:praise→compliment
为……骄傲:be proud of→take pride in
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:I was praised by my parents for this. They were proud of me.
拓展句:I was praised by my parents for this, who were proud of me.
【点睛】[高分句型1] When I got home, I began to clean the house, washed clothes and did other housework. (运用了when引导时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] I think I have grown up now and I should help do something for my family. (运用了省略that的宾语从句)
15.Dear boys and girls,
With the reading month approaching, I’m here to call on all of you to do more reading.
Reading can benefit us a lot. First, it can enrich our minds and teach us to distinguish between right and wrong, which lays a solid foundation for further learning. Furthermore, as a famous writer put it, “Reading a good book is like talking with a noble man.” By reading books, we can gain the wisdom helping us solve practical problems in our daily life. All in all, the advantages of reading are beyond description.
Let’s take action to do more reading. Only through reading can the soul be strengthened, ambition inspired and success achieved.
Students’ Union
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以学生会的名义,为学校“英语天地”宣传栏写一封倡议书,呼吁学生多读书、读好书。
【详解】1.词汇积累
呼吁:call on→appeal to
使受益:benefit→be beneficial to
著名的:famous→noted
获得:gain→obtain
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:By reading books, we can gain the wisdom helping us solve practical problems in our daily life.
拓展句:By reading books, we can gain the wisdom that can help us solve practical problems in our daily life.
【点睛】【高分句型1】First, it can enrich our minds and teach us to distinguish between right and wrong, which lays a solid foundation for further learning.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Only through reading can the soul be strengthened, ambition inspired and success achieved.(运用了“only+介词短语”置于句首,句子使用部分倒装结构)
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