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人教版七年级下学期期末复习 查缺补漏冲刺满分
(期末必考话题作文)
专题03 单元话题满分范文20篇

1.注意篇章结构，合理布局
开始部分说出文中的要点、核心问题。
正文部分围绕主题展开叙述、讨论。
结尾部分对全文内容进行总结和概括。
2.确定主题句
主题句是全文对概括，是文章的主旨。它能在文章中起到“画龙点睛”的作用。通常主旨句最好放在作文的开头，而后是对全文主题句所提出的内容进行解释、论述。
3.重要连接词
表示顺序增加
First, then / next, after that / next, finally
For one thing … for another…,
On (the) one hand…on the other hand,
Besides / what’s more / in addition / furthermore / moreover / another / also
表示时间顺序
now, at present, recently,
at first, in the beginning, to begin with,
later, next, finally,
form now on, from then on,
till, not…until, before, after, when, while, as during,
表示解释说明
now, in addition, for example, for instance, in this case, moreover
表示转折关系
but, however, while, though, or, otherwise, on the hand
表示并列关系
or, and, also, too, not only … but also, both… and, either …or, neither…nor
表示因果关系
because, because of, since, now that, as, thanks to…, due to…, therefore

1．假如你是王萍。你对自己的英语老师一定非常熟悉吧，请以“ My English Teacher ”为题写一篇70词左右的短文。
要点： name, build, looks, clothes, hobbies
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
My English Teacher
My name’s Wang Ping and I’m in Class 1, Grade 7. Now let me tell you something about my English teacher.
Her name is Li Xiao. She’s of medium height and she’s thin. She has a round face, two big bright eyes and a small nose. She has long curly brown hair. She doesn’t wear glasses. She likes white and she often wears a white coat and blue jeans. She looks young and we don’t know her age.
She likes playing sports very much. And Liu Xiang is her favorite player. She can sing very well. She always has a smile on her face. She is kind and friendly to the students. We all like her.
【解析】
【详解】
1、题干解读：题目要求以“My English teacher”为题，写一篇英语短文，要求包含所给的要点单词。
2、例文点评：例文采用三段式；时态主要以一般现在时为主；例文详细的介绍了英语老师的情况；结构清晰；逻辑性强。
3、高分亮点：
短语：of medium height；wear glasses；look young；like doing sth.；play sports；be friendly to sb.。
句型：She likes white and she often wears a white coat and blue jeans；And Liu Xiang is her favorite player；She is kind and friendly to the students。
【点睛】
首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如of medium height；wear glasses；look young；like doing sth.；play sports；be friendly to sb.等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
2．Mr. White上周末过得很忙碌：早起晨练，遛狗，打扫房间，购物，为家人准备午饭，看电视足球赛，和朋友踢球，陪女儿玩电子游戏，和家人看电影，看书……尽管很忙，他却很高兴。请根据提示，以“A Busy Weekend”为题，描述一下Mr. White这一天的活动，开头已给出。
A Busy Weekend
I had a busy weekend. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】One possible version:
A Busy Weekend
I had a busy weekend. I got up early in the morning and played sports. After breakfast, I went out for a walk with my little dog. Then I cleaned the rooms and did some shopping. After that it was 11: 30. I cooked lunch for my family. In the afternoon I watched a big football game on TV and then I played football with my friends. At about 5:00 I played computer games with my daughter. We had dinner outside. After dinner we went to the movies, Before I went to bed, I did some reading. I was really busy, but I was very happy to spend the weekend with my family and friends.
【解析】
【详解】
1、题干解读：本文是一篇命题作文，开头已给出，直接按要点罗列出来即可。时态应用一般过去时态，人称应以第一人称为主。
2、例文点评：例文包括了所给的要点，条理清晰，语言流畅，无语法错误。
3、高分亮点：
get up   起床
go out   外出
clean the rooms   打扫房间
do some shopping   购物
watch…on TV   在电视上看……
play football with sb.   与某人踢足球
play…with sb.   与某人玩……
go to the movies   看电影
be happy to do sth.   做某事很开心
spend…with…   与……度过……
Before I went to bed, I did some reading.   before引导的时间状语从句
I was really busy, but I was very happy…   but连接的并列句
3．动物和人类共处一个世界，是人类的朋友。有的动物美丽，有的动物可爱，有的动物活泼，有的动物腼腆。你喜欢哪种动物？为什么？请写一篇60词左右的短文介绍你最喜欢的动物。题目和开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
My favorite animal
There are many animals in the world. But _________________________________________
【答案】My favorite animal
There are many animals in the world. But what's my favorite animal, do you know？ Many people like her very much. I also like her. She is from China. She looks kind of lazy but very cute. She is our friend. She likes to eat bamboos. She is very friendly to people. She is black and white. She has two black ears and eyes. And she also has black legs and arms.
Now do you know what the animal is? Yes, she is a panda. I like her because she is a symbol of friendship. And I tell my classmates that my favorite animal is a clever and very beautiful panda.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如in the world，very much，be from，kind of，like to do，be friendly to，black and white，a symbol of friendship，tell sb. sth.等。而But what's my favorite animal, do you know？/I like her because she is a symbol of friendship./And I tell my classmates that my favorite animal is a clever and very beautiful panda.等复杂从句结构的运用，使得内容丰富，表达多样，是本文的最大亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
4．英语写作课上，大家对平时选择哪种交通方式上学进行了讨论。有人选择坐公共汽车，有人选择走路，有人由父母开车接送……假如你叫高琳，你平时喜欢走路上学。请你以“My Ways to Go to School”为题，根据以下提示写一篇英语短文，说明走路上学的原因及益处。
写作提示：1.家离学校不远；
2.走路上学是锻炼的好机会；
3.可以欣赏沿途的风景(scenery)；
4.和朋友一起走路很有趣。
写作要求：1.语句通顺，条理清晰，详略得当，书写工整；
2. 100词左右，题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My Ways to Go to School
I usually go to school on foot. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
【答案】参考范文：
My Ways to Go to School
I usually go to school on foot. My home is not far from school. It takes me about twenty minutes to walk to school every day. I think walking is good for me. First of all, it’s a good way to exercise. I’m busy studying and have little time to do sports, so walking to school is a perfect chance to take exercise. Next, when I walk, the scenery along the way changes every moment, and I can enjoy it. What’s more, it’s fun to walk together with my friends every day. We can talk about something interesting and know each other better. I hope more and more students will enjoy going to school on foot.
【解析】
1.题干解读：该题目属于话题作文。题目要求是假如你叫高琳，你平时喜欢走路上学。请你以“My Ways to Go to School”为题，根据提示信息，写一篇英语短文，说明走路上学的原因及益处。要包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥；语句要通顺，条理要清晰，详略要得当，书写要工整；100词左右。
2.写法指导：本文时态为一般现在时，人称以第一人称为主。书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所提示的信息，经整理后展开思维，运用所学的英语知识准确表达出来。所以，要注意不能遗漏要点，写作时，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式；同时要注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
5．假设下表内是你上周末的活动，请以“My Busy Weekend”为题，描写一下你的周末生活。
要求：(1)行文流畅，书写认真，条理清晰，语句通顺；(2)不少于50词，结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
时间
活动
星期六
上午
做作业
下午
打扫房间
晚上
在电脑前看了一部新电影
星期日
上午
和朋友打篮球
下午
去市场买食物
晚上
看了一场周杰伦的演唱会(concert)

My Busy Weekend
______________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________
I was a little tired, but I had a good time.
【答案】My Busy Weekend
I had a busy weekend. On Saturday morning, I did my homework and then did some reading. In the afternoon, I cleaned my room. I watched a new movie on the computer in the evening. On Sunday, I played basketball with my good friends in the morning. In the afternoon, I went to the market to buy some food. In the evening, I went to Jay Chou's concert. It was very exciting.
I_was_a_little_tired,_but_I_had_a_good_time.
【解析】
这篇作文要求我们以My Busy Weekend为题，介绍自己的周末生活。题目中利用表格的形式列出了上个周末两天的活动，我们应用正确的英语将这些内容表达出来，并补充更多的细节内容，使文章内容更加丰富、具体、充实。首先通过审题可知，文章介绍的是自己上个周末的活动，因此这篇短文应用一般过去时，注意谓语动词应变为过去式形式，尤其注意不规则动词过去式的变化；其次英语句式结构和表达习惯和汉语是不同的，写作时不能按照表格内容逐词翻译，应从句子的整体结构出发，写完整的句子。如可以简单句结构中的主谓宾或主系表结构为主，这样的句子结构简洁，叙述清晰、明了。穿插使用并列句或者状语从句以及其他复杂句式，提升文章档次。同时语句之间注意使用恰当的连接成分，使文章表达流畅、连贯。
【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求介绍了自己上个周末的活动。首先短文内容完整，包括了表格中的所有信息，没有遗漏要点。写作中作者对题目中的关键词加以补充，扩展成完整的句子，按照时间的顺序进行叙述，比较有条理，层次也很清晰。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以第一人称I、一般过去时态为主来叙述，谓语动词形式准确，尤其注意了不规则动词过去式的变化，如had, did, went等。句子结构完整，表达清楚，用词准确，语言得体。句式以简单句为主，叙述清楚、简洁。短文中使用了一些较好的短语和句型，如On Saturday morning, I did my homework and then did some reading、I watched a new movie on the computer in the evening、In the afternoon, I went to the market to buy some food.、It was very exciting等等。
6．假设你是李华, 请根据所给信息写一篇短文, 介绍你在周日的活动。
内容要点:
（1）早晨七点起床，帮助妈妈做早餐;
（2）早饭后写作业、在网上跟朋友聊天;
（3）上午十点半，跟朋友去打篮球;
（4）下午和爸爸去博物馆参观;
（5）你的一天很繁忙，但是很开心。
参考词汇：早饭后 after breakfast;博物馆 museum
要求：
（1）词数： 60词左右;
（2）开头已给出，不计入总词数;
（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
Today is Sunday. I get up__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Today is Sunday. I get up at 7 o’clock in the morning and then I help my mother make breakfast. After breakfast, I do my homework and have a chat with my friends online. At half past ten, I usually play basketball with my friends. We are all basketball fans. In the afternoon, my father and I pay a visit to the museum. It is a busy but happy day!
【解析】
1. 题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。因字数要求不高，可把全部内容要点的描写放在一个段落，切勿遗漏要点；此外，还可以就某些内容要点进行自我发挥，以使文章内容更加丰富。
2. 写作指导：根据开头提示可知，本文应用一般现在时描写。本文时间点较多，可以使用连词来增加文章的流畅度，如and then，after breakfast等。
7．疫情之下，越来越多的人选择云游。有的同学喜欢线上云游，有的同学则喜欢线下旅游。21世纪英文报对在校学生进行“online tour”的调查问卷。请你根据调查问卷和你的实际情况，写一篇英语短文向报刊投稿。
Questionnaire
1. Do you like online tour or not? Put a tick (√) or a cross (×) in the box.□ONLINE TOUR
2. What do you think of it?
__________________________________________________________________________
3. Why do you like/dislike it?
__________________________________________________________________________

注意事项：
1. 短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2. 词数 90 左右，作文的开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 短文中不得提及真实人名、校名等相关信息。Online tour
Recently, more and more people choose online tour. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】possible version:
Like:
Online tour
Recently, more and more people choose online tour. I also prefer this new way of travelling. Taking an online tour is popular and easy now.
There are several advantages of travelling from home. First, the Internet is everywhere and people can be connected to it easily. Then, there are different kinds of materials online, like videos, documentaries, live programmes. Moreover, taking an online tour is money-saving. In this way, travelling abroad costs us a little.
        In my opinion, online tour offers me a chance to see different places of interest and opens up a new world to me.
Dislike:
Online tour
Recently, more and more people choose online tour. Although online tour is common and popular now, it is not my cup of tea.
First of all, it is important to watch and feel things around us when travelling. We can pick up some local languages, taste local food and feel special cultures there, which online tours cannot give us. Also, making a plan is an important part of the tour, such as where to live, what to eat and when to go. This can improve our ability of planning things well.
In a word, a real tour can bring us a true life experience.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。对于是否喜欢“线上云游”发表自己的观点和看法。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时。从喜欢和不喜欢这两个角度来进行描述，开头分别介绍自己喜欢或不喜欢的理由，最后分别表达自己的观点。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
8．据联合国《2020 年全国粮食危机报告》中数据显示, 全世界每天有8.21亿人在挨饿，受疫情影响，2021年粮食危机问题更槽糕！而联合国另一份报道显示每年大约有三分之一的食物被浪费掉。节约粮食是中华民族的传统美德，即使如今人们生活富足，我们也应当提倡节俭， 避免浪费食物。
某英文网站正在开展以“拒绝食物浪费”主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请以“Don’t waste what’s on your plate”为题，用英语写一份倡议书，谈谈为什么要节约食物，以及大家可以怎么做。
写作要点：
1.吃饭时，不点过量的食物，让“餐饮不浪费”成为习惯。
2.尽量“光盘”，吃不掉的打包带回家。
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【答案】例文
Don’t waste what’s on your plate
Today about 821 million people around the world go hungry every day. The food crisis in 2021 will be even worse due to the impact of COVID-19. Saving food is a traditional virtue of the Chinese nation. Even though people are living a rich life today, we should also advocate frugality and avoid wasting food.
What should we do to save food? Here are some suggestions. Firstly, don’t order more than what you want to eat in a restaurant. Make it a habit not to waste food. Secondly, if you can’t eat all the food you have ordered, take the rest of it home.   
I believe if everyone tries their best, more and more food can be saved. Let’s get started!
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：题目要求以“Don’t waste what’s on your plate”为题写倡议书，谈谈为什么要节约食物及大家可以怎样做。要包含所有要点，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第三人称和第二人称为主，时态采用一般现在时。文章可分为三段式：第一段介绍为什么要节约食物；第二段给出节约食物的建议；第三段发出倡议。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
9．请你根据表格内容提示，描写你的两个好朋友，Tina和Laura。注意要从身材、发型、五官、衣着和爱好等多方面进行描述。
姓名
Tina
Laura
身材
高大
中等身材
体格
有点胖
偏痩
头发
短，黑色
卷发，棕色
眼睛
大，黑
小
鼻子
大
小巧
穿戴
戴眼镜，运动鞋
不戴服镜，校服
爱好
体育，擅长排球
音乐，会弹钢琴

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【答案】例文
I’m Jenny. I have two good friends at school. They’re Tina and Laura. Though they’re my friends, they have many differences.
Tina is very tall and a little bit heavy. She has short black hair. She also has big and black eyes. Her nose is big, too. She is good at sports, so she always wears sports shoes. She wears glasses and she plays volleyball very well.
Laura is thin and of medium build. She has curly brown hair. She has a small nose and two small eyes. She doesn’t wear glasses. She always wears school uniforms. She doesn’t like sports, but she does very well in music. She can play the piano well.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。介绍自己的两位好朋友的情况。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用第三人称，时态采用一般现在时。从姓名，身材，体格，头发，眼睛，鼻子，穿戴和爱好等方面介绍两位好朋友。写作时要保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。
10．你的家乡广州，是一个适合人类居住的城市。人们四季都可以进行各种有趣的活动。请根据以下表格提示，进行适当的补充，向你的同学介绍你的家乡广州。要求：80 词以上，文章不得出现真实姓名和校名。
地理位置
中国南方，广东省的省会（capital city）

四季简介和活动
春天温暖潮湿，人们喜欢到公园赏花；
夏天天气炎热，人们可以去海边游泳；
秋天……，登山远足令人舒畅；
冬天……，……
My hometown, Guangzhou, is a beautiful city for people to live in. We can take part in a lot of interesting activities all year round. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
My hometown, Guangzhou, is a beautiful city for people to live in. We can take part in a lot of interesting activities all year round. It's in the south of China. It is the capital of Guangdong Province.
There are many interesting activities in different seasons. In spring, the weather is warm and wet. People like to enjoy the beautiful flowers in the parks. In summer, the weather is hot. They enjoy going to the beach and swimming in the sea. In autumn, it’s cool. People often climb mountains or go hiking. And in winter, the weather is warm. There are many wonderful activities in OCT East.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据所给要点提示，从地理位置和四季活动来介绍自己的家乡——广州。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时。分为两段：第一段介绍广州的地理位置；第二段介绍四季的天气特点以及四季的活动。写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。
11．现在是晚上7点钟。请根据表格内的提示信息，描述一下全家人正在做的事情。
爷爷和爸爸
下棋
in the sitting room
奶奶
看电视
在沙发上
妈妈
听音乐
在床上
姐姐
打电话
in her bedroom
哥哥
看书
在房间里
我
做作业
at the desk
妹妹
玩玩具
在地上

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【答案】例文
Hi, this is my family. It’s seven o’clock in the evening. Let’s see what we are doing. My grandpa and my father are playing chess in the sitting room. My grandma is watching TV on the sofa. My mother is listening to music on her bed. My sister is talking to her friend on the phone. She is in her bedroom. Where is my brother? He is reading a book in his room. I am doing my homework at the desk. My sister is only three years old. She is playing with toys on the floor. Everyone is busy.
【解析】
【详解】
1. 题干解读：本题属于材料作文，题目的开头已给出。根据题目要求写一下全家人正在做的事情。写作时要紧扣材料内容并进行适当发挥。因为介绍类的，注意句型上不要过于单一。写好时，再阅读一遍，减少语法错误，不要犯单词拼写上的错误。
2. 例文点评：这是一篇比较优秀的例文。例文紧扣题目要求，写出了全家人正在做的事情及地点。例文结构清晰，行文连贯，本文挨个介绍，所以多使用简单句。人称主要是第三人称，主谓一致使用得当。
3.高分亮点：词组：play chess；in the sitting room；watch TV；listen to music；on the phone；at the desk；three years old；
句型：祈使句Let’s see what we are doing. /My grandpa and my father are playing chess in the sitting room. /Where is my brother? /Everyone is busy.
12．假如你是王丹，刚刚转学到新学校，那里有很多规则要遵守。请你根据以下表格提示，用英语给你的美国笔友Lisa写一封约70词的英文电子邮件，谈谈你的新学校校规。
必须
不能
早晨八点前到校
课堂上不能听音乐
课前打扫教室
不能在教室里吃东西
在校穿校服
不能在走廊里跑

要求： 邮件词数约70词；电子邮件的格式、开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Lisa,I study in a new school now.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Do you have any school rules? Please write to me.
Yours,
Wang Dan
【答案】例文
Dear Lisa,
I study in a new school now. There are lots of rules in my new school. We must get to school before 8 o'clock in the morning. We have to clean the classroom before class. We also have to wear the school uniforms at school. We can't listen to music in class. We can't eat in the classroom or run in the hallways, either.
Do you any school rules? Please write to me.
Yours,
Wang Dan
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：该题属于材料作文，用邮件的格式写；给出学校校规规定的三个必须和三个不能，在作文里都要体现到；要注意句式的运用和转换，避免行文像流水账一样；适当用一些情态动词，一般用第一人称叙述，时态为一般现在时。
2.例文点评：例文开门见山，直接叙述新学校里有很多校规；叙述三个必须的时候，分别用must和have to两种单词和短语表达必须；叙述不能做的事情时，后两个要求合并为一个句子，减少啰嗦，适当运用also和either来使行文连贯。
3.高分亮点：
短语：have to；get to school；listen to music；the school uniforms。
句型：there be 句型；含有must的句型；含有can的句型。
13．书面表达
学生应当遵守学校的规章制度。请根据以下要点提示，以“School Rules”为题，叙述中学生应遵守的一些规章制度，并谈谈你的看法。80词左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
要点提示：
1．在课堂上不乱讲话，要认真听老师讲课，不带食物进教室，保持教室安静、整洁；
2．课后要按时完成作业；
3．在学校，要穿校服；
4．保护学校的一草一木；
5．与老师和同学们友好相处。
School Rules
Every school has rules for students. As students, we must obey them._____________
________________________________________________________________________
【答案】School rules
Every school has rules for students. As a student, we must obey them. First of all, in class, we shouldn't talk but listen to the teachers carefully. We are not supposed to take food or drinks into the classroom. We should keep our classroom quiet and clean. Then, after class, we should finish our homework on time. One more thing, we should wear our school uniforms in school. Besides, we should protect trees, grass and flowers there because they make our school more beautiful. At last, we should get on well with our teachers and classmates.
【解析】
【详解】
本文是一篇给材料作文。要求以以 "School rules" 为题，叙述中学生应遵守的一些规章制度，并谈谈你的看法。学生应当遵守学校的规章制度。文章时态用一般现在时，人称主要为第一人称。本文所给材料比较详细，考生要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并可适当发挥。在写作时，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。
【点睛】
点睛：首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
14．书面表达。
假设你是李华，上周末你参加了一次郊游。请根据下面表格中的提示信息写一篇题为“An Exciting Trip”的英语短文。
An Exciting Trip

时间
上周末
参加者
你和……
地点
北海公园(the Beihai Park)
活动
骑自行车、爬山、野炊(have a picnic)、照相、做游戏……
感受
……

要求：1.不要逐条翻译表格中的信息，可适当增减内容；2.语句通顺，表达正确；
3．词数：60词左右。
【答案】An Exciting Trip
Last weekend，I went for a trip with my classmates.At 7：30 in the morning，we met at our school gate.We__went__to__the__Beihai__Park__by__bike.On__the__way，we__were__so__excited__that__we__sang__songs.When__we__arrived__there，we__started__to__climb__the__mountain.We__had__a__picnic__on__the__top__of__the__mountain.After__that，we__took__some__photos.Then__some__girls__danced__under__the__trees__and__some__boys__played__games__happily.We__went__home__by__4：00__p．m.We__were__tired__but__very__happy.We__really__had__a__great__time!
What__an__exciting__trip__it__was!
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇材料作文。假设你是李华，上周末你参加了一次郊游。根据下面表格中的提示信息写一篇题为“An Exciting Trip”的英语短文。本文人称主要是第一人称，时态主要是一般过去时。仔细阅读提示和要点、注意事项。这些要点构成写作的基本框架。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据提示要点，列出本文的写作提纲，提纲包括所有提示要点。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无拼写、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。本文提纲：
一次令人兴奋的旅行
上周末，我和我的同学去旅行了。早上7:30，我们在学校大门口见面。我们
骑自行车去北海公园。在路上，我们如此地兴奋以至于我们唱起了歌。当我们到达那里时，我们开始爬山。我们在山顶上野餐。在那之后，我们拍了一些照片。然后一些女孩在树下跳舞，一些男孩高兴地玩游戏。我们在下午4点之前回到了家。我们很累，但很高兴。我们真的玩得很开心！
这是多么一次激动人心的旅行啊！
【点睛】
这篇文章很好地完成了规定的写作任务．包含所有内容要点，结构完整，语句流畅，意思清楚、连贯．使用较为丰富的语法结构和词汇，语法和词汇错误极少，格式正确，书写规范。学以致用，运用了重要句型和短语有：on the way/so…that…/on the top of/have a great time/ What an exciting trip it was!等。（1）学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。（2）列好提纲和要点及需要的重要短语或句型。（3）切忌堆砌词语、句子，注意运用适当的连词使句子流畅、连贯。注意表达的顺序。 （4）注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。（5）注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。
15．假如你是李华，来自美国的新朋友Tom发邮件给你介绍了他的个人情况，并询问你的相关情况。请你根据下面的提示信息，用英语给他回一封邮件。
提示：1. 家庭情况;
2. 饮食习惯;
3. 学校生活。
注意：1.词数60左右；
2. 文中不能出现真实的人名和校名;
3. 邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
How are you? I’m writing to tell you something about myself. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Come to Anqing and play with me!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文：
Dear Tom,
How are you? I’m writing to tell you something about myself.
I have a happy family. My father is 38 years old. He’s a teacher. My mother is 36. They love me very much. I am in a middle school in Anqing. I have seven classes every school day. At school, we have Chinese, English, math, music and so on. English is my favorite subject.I think it’s interesting. After school, I often play basketball with my friends. For food, I like rice, fruit and vegetables. They are good for my health.
Come to Anqing and play with me!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：该题目为应用文，要求写一封邮件介绍自己的情况，注意要按照三个要点来展开。开头和结尾已给出，只写出正文就好。。
2.写作指导：时态应用一般现在时，主语为第一人称，依次介绍自己的家庭情况、饮食习惯以及学校里的生活，可适当进行扩展，注意使用适当的连词。
16．以 My best friend   为题目，写一篇作文。
提示：1.介绍你的好朋友Joe的外貌及性格特征。
2.他的生日是2004年6月1日。介绍他在学校喜欢的课，喜欢吃的食物及喜欢的运动和乐器。
3.他的愿望是当一名演员。
要求：1.使用所给的全部信息，并适当发挥。
2.条理清晰，语法正确；
3.字迹工整；字数80。
【答案】My good friend is Joe .He is 14 years old.He is tall and thin with two big eyes.He was born on June1,2004.His favorite subject is history.He likes reading history because he thinks it is very interesting.He likes carrots best.He likes sports.He often plays football with his friends after class.He also plays violin well.His wants to be an actor in the future.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇要求介绍自己的好朋友Joe。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用第三人称，一般现在时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
三、电子邮件
17．假如你是张丽，你的美国朋友Jack给你发来一封电子邮件，询问你喜欢的运动和食物。请根据表格内容给他回一封电子邮件。

喜欢
理由
不喜欢
理由
食物
鸡肉
健康又美味
汉堡包
不健康
西红柿
运动
棒球
有趣又放松
乒乓球
很难
足球
要求：1.语句通顺，语意连贯，语法正确；2.表格提示内容全部包括，可适当发挥；
3.词数60左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jack,
I’m happy to get your e⁃mail.Now let me tell you something about me.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all.
Yours,
Zhang Li
【答案】例文：
Dear Jack,
I’m happy to get your e-mail. Now let me tell you something about me. I think I have good eating habits. I like eating chicken and tomatoes.They are healthy and nice. I always eat them for lunch. But I don’t like hamburgers. I think they’re not healthy.        
For sports, I like to play baseball and soccer. I think they’re interesting and relaxing. I always play them with my friends. But I don’t like ping-pong. It’s difficult for me.
That’s all.
Yours,
Zhang Li
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文，要求以张丽的名义给好友杰克发一封电子邮件，按照表格内容介绍自己喜欢的及不喜欢的食物和运动，并分别阐述原因。
2.写作指导：本文主题为“喜欢及不喜欢的食物和运动”；文章时态为一般现在时，以第一人称为主，注意主谓一致问题；写作时注意层次清晰，条理清楚，先介绍喜欢及不喜欢的食物并阐明原因，再介绍喜欢及不喜欢的运动并表述原因。
四、看图作文
18．书面表达
假如你叫李平，你的网友玛丽（Mary）将去你家拜访你，但她不知道怎么从火车站去你家。请参照下面的路线图给玛丽发一封电子邮件，告诉她具体的路线。
写作要求：信息全面，路线表达清晰、明了，符合电子邮件格式，60词左右。

___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Dear Mary,
　　I will tell you the way to my house．Please take a taxi from the train station．You pass a bank on your right．Turn right and go along Red Street．You can find a police station on your right．Turn left at the second crossing and go along White Street．Then turn right at the first crossing．You can see my house on your left．It's across from a hospital．
【解析】
【详解】
根据题干，要注意电子邮件的格式。首先顶格写称呼（Dear Mary,）；最后在邮件右下角写署名（Yours, Li Ping）。邮件使用一般现在时即可。.邮件正文可分为两部分：
①首先，要对玛丽的来访表示欢迎，并且乐意告诉她来自己家的路线。
②其次，要详细介绍怎么到自己家。出火车站后，笔直走，如果看到一个银行，则要向右转，再沿着里德街道走；看到警察局向左转到怀特街，到第二个路口时向右转，自己家在左侧，即医院的对面。
【点睛】
首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
五、书信作文
19．假如你是Kate，现在就读于北京某国际学校，上周你学校组织了一次旅行。你们游览了北京的许多名胜古迹（place of interest），如长城、故宫、天安门广场（Tian’anmen Square)等。请你给你的同学Mike写一封60词左右的书信介绍一下你的这次学校旅行。
Dear Mike,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Kate
【答案】例文：
Dear Mike,
How are you? How was your school trip?
I went on a school trip with my classmates last week in Beijing, China. It was great. You know Beijing is the capital of China. It has lots of places of interest. Last Sunday, the weather was sunny. We went to the Great Wall and it was great and exciting. Then we went to the Palace Museum. It was cool! Next we visited Tian’anmen Square. It was beautiful. Oh, I took a lot of photos on the trip. All of us had great fun on the school trip!
Please write back soon and tell me about your trip.
Yours,
Kate
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一封书信，要注意书信的格式，文章主要是向朋友介绍上周的学校旅行，题中给出了旅行的相关内容，在写作中要进行运用，也可以适当增加细节，使文章更加流畅。
2.写作指导：本文主要是向朋友介绍上周的学校旅行，在介绍北京的情况时，用一般现在时，介绍旅行过程时用一般过去时。第一段主要是问候朋友；第二段重点介绍北京并描述旅行过程和感受，写作时要注意连接词的使用，使文章更加有层次；最后一段表达祝愿。写作中注意时态的转换，同时保证无语法错误和单词拼写错误。
20．你的笔友Bill打算在暑假期间来看望你，并来信问及你所在城市的天气情况。请你给他写一封信，介绍一下你们城市夏天的天气情况。要求：内容合理，语句通顺；70词左右；信的开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Bill,
I’m happy you will come to Beijing. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Ming
【答案】例文：
Dear Bill,
I’m happy you will come to Beijing. Let me tell you the weather here. Usually, the summer here is from June to September. It is very hot in summer here, but in the early morning it’s cool. People usually go out in the morning. In the afternoon, they often relax in the house or go swimming in the pool. At night, people go out to shop or see friends. It often rains here in summer. I hope you can enjoy the summer here.
Yours,
Li Ming
【解析】
1.题干解读：该题目属于书信作文，题目要求是给你的笔友Bill回一封信，向他介绍一下你们城市夏天的天气情况。内容要合理，语句要通顺；70词左右。
2.写作指导：本文是一篇书信，信的开头、结尾已给出，我们首先要承接开头，引出话题，介绍自己所在城市的天气情况。时态以一般现在时为主，人称使用第一人称介绍。写作时，要注意紧扣文章主题，内容要完整，表述要准确，语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句要符合英语的表达习惯。