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专题 13书面表达（二）
备战2022-2023学年八年级下学期期末考试真题汇编
书面表达真题专练16
16．（2022春·辽宁抚顺·八年级统考期末）根据要求完成作文。
为了帮助青少年缓解学习、生活中的心理压力，健康、快乐地成长，某英文网站开辟了中学生专栏，请你根据提示，以“How to Deal with Our Stress”为题，投稿至该网站。
提示：1. 学会放松，散步，听音乐或看书；
2. 关心自己的身体，积极参加体育锻炼，均衡饮食，睡眠充足；
3. 多与老师、家长或朋友交流，说出自己的烦恼。
要求：1. 中心突出，语义连贯，层次清晰，书写规范；    
2. 短文必须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥，80词左右；
3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名和地名等。
                                                                     How to Deal with Our Stress
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
How to Deal with Our Stress
Many students suffer from stress in their daily lives. Stress is sometimes harmful to your health. Here are some ways to deal with stress and bring balance to your life.
Firstly, you should learn to relax. You can do this by taking a walk, reading a book, listening to music or seeing a film. Secondly, you should take care of your body. Taking regular exercise, eating a healthy diet and getting enough sleep are all the things that can help you. Thirdly, you need to talk with your teachers, parents and friends and try to tell them about your problems. They may give you some useful advice.
If you do as I told you, I’m sure you’ll solve your problems and live a happy life.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态以一般现在时为主；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示中的信息“学会放松、关心自己的身体、多与人交流等”，适当添加细节，完善作文内容。
[写作步骤]
① 第一步，直接表明作文的主旨大意。以简单介绍学生们的压力现状来引出作文的写作重点“缓解压力的方式”；
② 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。以“学会放松、关心自己的身体、多与人交流”三个方面重点讲述如何放松和舒缓压力的具体做法；
③ 第三步，总结。表达舒缓压力后能过上快乐生活的期许。
[亮点词汇]
① deal with 处理
② bring balance to 给……带来平衡
③ take care of 照顾
④ talk with sb. 与某人交流
⑤ suffer from sth 因……而受折磨
[高分句型]
① Taking regular exercise, eating a healthy diet and getting enough sleep are all the things that can help you.（动名词短语作主语，以及that引导定语从句）
② If you do as I told you, I’m sure you’ll solve your problems and live a happy life.（if引导条件状语从句）
书面表达真题专练17

17．（2022春·福建漳州·八年级统考期末）假如你是李华，你们学校英语报正在开展“My Family Rules”的征文活动，请你根据以下图示，用英语写一篇短文，描述你们家的一些家庭规则以及你的看法 。

要求:1. 语句通顺，意思连贯，80 词左右；
2. 文章必须包含所给提示，可适当发挥；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
My Family Rules
Every family has its own rules.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】

My Family Rules
Every family has its own rules. My parents are strict with me and they have made some rules for me to obey.
First I ought to dress correctly. I can’t wear the skirts that are too short or the pants with some holes. Second I am supposed to talk with them when I am in trouble. I should tell them what I think and how I feel. Third I need to help them do some housework. For example I can wash the dishes after meals or help my mother do some cleaning. I feel proud that I can do something for the family. In addition, I can’t go out with friends at school nights because they may worry about me.
Although my family rules are strict, I think they are quite necessary. The family rules are making me a better person.
【解析】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，介绍自己家的一些家规的情况，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来，本文应该用第一人称人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。
书面表达真题专练18
18．（2022春·河北承德·八年级统考期末）根据下面的文字说明及要点提示写一篇80词左右的英语作文。
某中学校报的英语专刊就“中学生能否在学校使用智能手机(smartphone)的问题”向学生征稿。请你根据同学们的不同观点，写一篇作文，谈谈自己的看法。要点提示如下：
赞成
1. 可以和父母联系contact；2. 可以利用手机查look up生词和浏览新闻；
3. ……
反对
1. 在学校用手机浪费时间；2. 玩手机游戏不利于学习；
3. ……
你的观点及建议
……
要求：
1.文中必须包括表格中的内容，可适当发挥；
2.80词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Nowadays, smartphones are popular among the students. Should they be allowed to use smartphones at school or not? Our students have different opinions. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
Nowadays, smartphones are popular among the students. Should they be allowed to use smartphones at school or not? Our students have different opinions.
Some students think they can use smartphones at school. First, it’s convenient for them to call their parents, teachers or friends when they have problems. Second, they can search what they need on smartphones. For example, they can look up new words and look through news.
However, some students disagree. They think using smartphones at school is a waste of time. Many students spend too much time on games and QQ. It does harm to students’ study. And it’s unhealthy for the mind and the body.
In my opinion, students can’t use smartphones at school. Students should spend more time doing sports or having fun with friends. They should also pay more attention to their study. If they do, they’ll be happier and healthier.
【解析】[总体分析]：
①题材：本文是一篇议论文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：作文开头以及写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏，并适当增加内容，使文章通顺。
[写作步骤]
第一步：总起全文，引出话题“手机”。
第二步：具体阐述赞成方和反对方的观点以及理由。
第三步：得出结论，叙述自己的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①be allowed to do被允许做某事
②look up查阅
③pay attention to集中注意力于
[高分句型]
①Second, they can search what they need on smartphones.（what引导的宾语从句）
②If they do, they’ll be happier and healthier.（if引导的条件状语从句）
书面表达真题专练19

19．（2023春·全国·八年级期末）假设上周你们全家去黄山湖公园游玩。请你根据以下要点提示，用英语写一篇短文参加以“How to behave politely”为主题的征文比赛，并适当加以评论。要点提示如下：
亲身经历
1. 我们玩得正开心，不文明的一幕发生了：一位女士满不在乎地将垃圾扔在地上；2. 我试图阻止，但她拒绝听我的；
3. 我将垃圾捡起来并放进垃圾桶；
我的观点
4. 人人都应该学习一些有关礼仪方面的知识；5. 良好的礼仪很重要。比如……（列举不同场合该有的文明行为）
6. 对我们来说，提升礼仪是必需的。
注意：1. 征文须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2. 第5点须用2—3句话展开合理想象，做适当发挥；
3. 词数80左右，短文标题和开头已在答题卷上给出，不计入总词数。
How to behave politely
Last week, all my family visited Huangshanhu Park.
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【参考范文】
One possible version：
How to behave politely
Last week, all my family visited Huangshanhu Park. We were enjoying ourselves when something impolite happened. A lady dropped some litter carelessly on the ground. I tried to stop her, but she refused to listen to me. I picked it up and put it into the bin/dustbin. I think everyone should learn something about manners. Good manners are important. When we are in the library, we should keep quiet. When we cross the road, we should obey traffic rules. (Before we get on a bus, we should queue for our turn.) It’s necessary for us to improve our manners.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：描述经历时，时态以“一般过去时”为主，描写自己的观点，时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意包含要点提示中的内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，描述亲身经历，一位女士随地扔垃圾这一事件引起作者的注意；
第二步，根据亲身经历表达自己的观点，呼吁人们要学习礼仪，并在生活中要讲礼仪。
[亮点词汇]
①enjoy oneself玩得开心
②try to do sth.尝试做某事
③pick up捡起
[高分句型]
①We were enjoying ourselves when something impolite happened.（when引导时间状语从句）
②It’s necessary for us to improve our manners.（动词不定式作主语）
书面表达真题专练20
20．（2021春·湖南郴州·八年级统考期末）你是李华，寒假即将来临，你在学校做了一个关于今年寒假计划的调查，调查结果如下图所示。请根据统计数据写一篇短文，呈现调查结果，并谈谈你自己对今年寒假的打算。

写作要求
1）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
2）短文需包含图示所有内容，并对自己的寒假计划进行适当发挥；
3）词数：80 词左右；短文开头已写出，不计入总词数。
I’m Li Hua. Yesterday, I did a survey in our school about how to spend this winter vacation. Here are the results.   __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【参考范文】
One possible version:
I’m Li Hua. Yesterday, I did a survey in my school about how to spend this winter vacation. Here are the results.
In our school, forty-five percent of students plan to study at home. Twenty-eight percent of students will spend their vacation travelling to different places. However, only fifteen percent of them are going to help their parents do housework and twelve percent of students choose to surf the Internet and play online games.
As for me, first, I am going to read some interesting books. Then I want to spend more time with my family. We can take a walk after dinner. Finally, I plan to take up a hobby like drawing or writing.
I believe I will have a great time in winter vacation.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，属于材料作文写作；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接短文开头，引出话题；
第二步，根据图表呈现数据说明学生们的寒假打算，可列举具体的事例；
第三步，介绍自己的寒假计划并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①spend one’s time doing sth花时间做某事
②take up a hobby培养一个爱好
[高分句型]
①However, only fifteen percent of them are going to help their parents do housework and twelve percent of students choose to surf the Internet and play online games.（and连接两个并列分句）
②I believe I will have a great time in winter vacation.（省略引导词that引导的宾语从句）
书面表达真题专练21

二、书信作文
21．（2022春·江苏镇江·八年级统考期末）八年级的学习生活即将结束，学校正在进行共青团员（Communist Youth League member）选拔，假如你是Li Hua，请你代表你们班推荐Xiao Ming作为共青团员候选人。根据以下信息，写一封推荐信给学校团支部。
姓名
Xiao Ming
良好品质
¿善良¿乐于助人，参加志愿者活动，……
¿慷慨大方
¿……
行为习惯
¿在公共场合举止文明，……
生活方式
¿垃圾分类，将旧衣服送给回收机构¿呼吁我们采取行动保护环境，……
要求：
1.所写内容必须包括表格中所有要点，可适当发挥；
2.文章不少于85个词，注意推荐信格式；
3.语意通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
4.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
Dear chairperson,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear chairperson,
I would like to recommend Xiao Ming as Communist Youth League candidate. He is the monitor in our class. He is very kind and always ready to help others. He always takes part in some volunteer activities, such as being a volunteer in protecting the environment, helping old people and so on. He is also generous to others. In public, he follows the rules, especially the traffic rules.
He loves our environment. Now the environmental problem is getting worse. So he usually sorts the garbage before throwing it away and gives old clothes to the recycling agency. He hopes that everyone takes action together to protect the environment.
I think Xiao Ming is a good candidate for Communist Youth League. I hope you agree with me.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封书信作文，为推荐信；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，可适当发挥，注意语句通顺，条理清楚。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，介绍想推荐谁为候选人；
第二步，从品质，行为习惯及生活方式等方面介绍想推荐的人；
第三步，书写结语，希望对方能够同意。
[亮点词汇]
①be ready to do sth准备好做某事
②take part in参加
③take action采取行动
④and so on等等
[高分句型]
①He hopes that everyone takes action together to protect the environment.（that引导宾语从句）
②So he usually sorts the garbage before throwing it away and gives old clothes to the recycling agency.（and连接的并列结构）
书面表达真题专练22
22．（2022秋·北京西城·八年级统考期末）请根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于40词的文段写作。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
假如你是初二学生李华，你的英国朋友Chris来信想要了解中国的春节文化习俗，请你根据下面的提示问题，给他回信。
提示词语：January or February, wear in red, do cleaning, break, good luck, important
提示问题：● When do you usually celebrate Spring Festival?
● What should and shouldn’t you do during Spring Festival and why?
● What do you think of Spring Festival customs?
Dear Chris,I’m glad to hear that you are interested in learning about Spring Festival customs. I’m writing to tell you about some of them.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【参考范文】Possible version:
Dear Chris,
I’m glad to hear that you are interested in learning about Spring Festival customs. I’m writing to tell you about some of them.
Spring Festival is one of the most important festivals for Chinese people, and it’s always in January or February.
There are plenty of customs we should follow during the Spring Festival. To begin with, we should put the Chinese character “Fu” upside down on doors, because that means we will be very happy in the coming year. Also, we must wear red clothes, which will bring us good luck. However, there are certain things we shouldn’t do. For example, we shouldn’t do any cleaning on the first day of Spring Festival, because we believe that we will sweep away good luck. What’s more, we should be very careful not to break anything, because breaking things may bring bad luck.
I think Spring Festival customs are very important and make Chinese New Year special and meaningful.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇书信作文，介绍中国的传统节日春节的情况；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，包括春节的一些习俗、春节的时间等。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总体指出要介绍一些春节方面的情况；
第二步，具体介绍春节的时间、习俗以及人们常做的一些活动；
第三步，最后总结对春节习俗的评价。
[亮点词汇]
① one of……之一
② sweep away清除
③ for example例如
[高分句型]
① we must wear red clothes, which will bring us good luck.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
② we shouldn’t do any cleaning on the first day of Spring Festival, because we believe that we will sweep away good luck.（because引导的原因状语从句）
书面表达真题专练23

23．（2022春·陕西咸阳·八年级统考期末）假如你是李华，你的美国好友Peter要来你的学校进行为期半年的学习。请根据下面的表格信息给他写一封信，向他简要介绍一下你学校的情况以及与美国学校在校规方面的异同。
School
big, new...
Teachers
strict, kind...
Rules
The same as Peter’s school’s:arrive at school on time
no food in class
③wear school uniforms
…
Different from Peter’s school’s:①class starts early at 7:00
②have lunch at home
…
要求：
1.参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.文中不得出现任何真实信息；
4.词数：不少于50词 (开头己给出，但不计入总词数) 。
Dear Peter,
How’s it going____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Peter,
How’s it going? Welcome to our school. Our school is big and new. And the teachers here are strict but kind.
There are many rules which are the same as your school’s. For example, we have to arrive at school on time. We can’t eat food in class. And we have to wear school uniforms every day. Though some students don’t like to wear school uniforms, I think it’s good because uniforms are symbols of schools. But some rules are different. We usually have lunch at home. It’s quite different from yours. Besides, class starts at 7:00. It’s a little early.
Look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，一封信；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍学校和老师的情况；
第二步，具体阐述自己学校的校规；
第三步，最后是表达自己的期望。
[亮点词汇]
① the same as与……相同
② on time准时
③ be different from与……不同
[高分句型]
① There are many rules which are the same as your school’s. （which引导的定语从句）
② Though some students don’t like to wear school uniforms, I think it’s good because uniforms are symbols of schools.（Though引导的让步状语从句）
书面表达真题专练24
24．（2018秋·全国·八年级统考期末）书面表达
75．假设你是No.2 Middle School的学生李华，下周一批英国中学生将来你们学校进行为期两周的学习和交流。请根据下列表格中的要点，写一封80词左右的自荐信,邀请其中一位学生来你家住。

注意：(1)短文内容可适当增加；
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
(3)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear friend,
I am Li Hua, a student from No.2 Middle School.
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear friend,
I am Li Hua, a student from No.2 Middle School. I’m writing to invite you to come and stay in my home during the next two weeks.
I like to make friends. This is the main reason I write this letter. I’m also good at sports and know something about English culture. Do you think we have a lot to talk about?
As for my family, you will like it the moment you come. My parents are not only kind and friendly, but also helpful. Believe it or not, they can also speak English!
Do you think I am your first choice now? Look forward to meeting you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】本文要求写一篇自荐信。本文给出了一些要点，并给出了作文的开头和结尾。本篇作文可以按照给出要点顺序来写，用正确的英语把要点表达出来， 并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
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三、便条
25．（2023春·全国·八年级期末）May的妈妈打算离家去北京三天，请根据下面的内容提示写一篇70词左右的英文留言条。（文章的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数）
提示：每天早点起床；自己做饭吃；饭后洗餐具；喂狗；打扫卫生；把书还给图书馆；不要玩水；记得做作业；别回家太晚了……
Dear May,
I’m leaving home for Beijing for three days. I need your help.
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If you finish these tasks, we can go to the movies.
Love,
Mom
【参考范文】
Dear May,
I’m leaving home for Beijing for three days. I need your help. I hope you can get up early every morning. Would you mind cooking by yourself? And please wash the dishes after meals. Could you please feed the dog? And please clean the house and keep it clean. Could you please return the books to the library? Don’t play with water. Remember to do your homework on time. Don’t go home too late.
If you finish these tasks, we can go to the movies.
Love,
Mom
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为留言条；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示中的关键信息，写留言条告知May需要做些什么。
[写作步骤]
第一步，告知May自己要去北京，需要她帮忙做些事；
第二步，介绍具体要做什么；
第三步，告知完成任务后可以去看电影。
[亮点词汇]
①mind doing sth. 介意做某事
②by oneself 独自
③remember to do sth. 记得去做某事
④on time 准时
[高分句型]
①I hope you can get up early every morning.（省略that的宾语从句）
②Remember to do your homework on time.（祈使句的肯定形式）
③Don’t go home too late.（祈使句的否定形式）
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四、话题作文
26．（2022秋·山东济宁·八年级统考期末）每年的三月二十六日是全国中小学生安全教育日。寒假即将来临，为了进一步增强中小学生的安全意识，提高自我保护能力，某英文报将举行以消防安全为主题的征文活动。内容包括：你们学校多久举行一次消防演习（a fire drill），在演习中你们应该怎么做，以及你认为消防演习有什么好处。
提示词语: enhance safety awareness（增强安全意识）；instructions（吩咐，指导）；assigned routes（指定路线）；emergency events（突发事件）；self-protection（自我保护）
提示问题: How often do you have a fire drill in your school?
What should you do during the fire drill?
What do you think of the fire drill?
I’m glad to talk something about fire drills. Life is valuable. We should take it seriously._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
I’m glad to talk something about fire drills. Life is valuable. We should take it seriously. In order to further enhance the safety awareness of the students and improve their abilities of self-protection, our school has a fire drill once a term. Here are some tips during the fire drill.
When you hear the fire alarm, move quickly but don’t run. Cover your mouth with a cloth and leave your school things in the classroom. Follow your teacher’s instructions and go outside the classroom in an orderly way. Remember don’t take the lift. Don’t run. Walk along the stairs and follow the assigned routes to the playground. Stay in the area! Wait for your teacher to call your name and be sure that you’re safe. At last, don’t go back into the school buildings until your teacher tells you that it’s safe.
For the activity, I think it’s useful and important for us to experience such a drill. Because it not only tells us how to deal with the emergency events but also greatly improves our sense of safety and the ability of self-protection.
【解析】1. 题干解读：本文属于话题作文写作，写作时按说明文的格式来写。写作时承接短文开头，按照题目要点依次说明。
2. 写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称、第二人称和第三人称来写，说明学校组织消防学习活动时采用第一人称，在说明演习中如何做时采用第二人称，对演习进行评价时采用第一人称和第三人称来写；文章主要采用一般现在时。在描述演习时如何做的部分，可采用祈使句句式，按照步骤依次描述，注意保证条理清晰。
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27．（2021春·河南南阳·八年级统考期末）对于穿校服你们班的同学们都有什么看法，你又持什么意见？请以“Wearing school uniforms”为题，写一篇英语短文。
要求：1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
2. 词数80左右。
Wearing school uniforms
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【参考范文】
Wearing school uniforms
At our school, we have to wear uniforms every day. But we really don’t like to wear the school uniforms every school day.
All my classmates think the uniforms are ugly. We think young people should look smart and so we would like to wear our own clothes. Our teachers believe that if we do that, we would concentrate more on our clothes than our studies. We disagree. We should feel more comfortable and that is good for studying. If we can’t do that, we should be allowed to design our own uniforms. We also think everyone should be different from others. That would be a good way to keep both teachers and students happy.
In a word, we should be allowed to choose our own clothes.
【解析】1、题干解读：该题目属于话题作文写作，写作时应先介绍学生们对于穿校服的看法，然后介绍自己的意见，可适当发挥。
2、写作指导：本文应该以第一人称和第三人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时为主；介绍学生们对穿校服的看法时，应详细具体，语句通顺，逻辑性强，保证条理清晰。
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28．（2022春·河北保定·八年级统考期末）随着阳光体育运动在全国的开展，“每天锻炼一小时，健康工作五十年，幸福生活一辈子”的理念深入人心。校园里出现了可喜的变化：运动时间延长了，运动项目增加了，学生体质增强了，校园生活丰富了。请以“Sports in Our School”为题给校刊写一篇报道。
要求：
1. 80词左右，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
Sports in Our School
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【参考范文】
Sports in Our School
Sports in our school have changed a lot. Now we have more than three P.E. classes a week, and we spend at least one hour exercising every day.
Students are so excited at these changes. More and more students take an active part in the ball games, running and jumping on the playground.
Our school life is becoming more wonderful. Doing sports is a good way to relax and keep healthy. What’s more, a strong body can help us study better and live a happier life.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
② 时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③ 提示：写作要点已在题干中给出，考生应紧扣“学校运动的变化”为主题展开写作，适当增添细节，完善作文，注意正确拼写单词，避免出现语法错误，表达要流畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明报道的主题——学校运动的变化，并讲述所发生的变化有哪些；
第二步，讲述学生对于这些变化的感受及表现；
第三步，表达个人对运动的看法。
[亮点词汇]
① more than 多于，超出
② more and more 越多越多
③ take an active part in 积极参与
④ what’s more 此外
[高分句型]
① Now we have more than three P.E. classes a week, and we spend at least one hour exercising every day.（“spend time doing sth.”句型）
② Doing sports is a good way to relax and keep healthy.（动名词作主语）
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五、电子邮件
29．（2023秋·浙江金华·八年级校考期末）假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Lucy发来邮件向你征求学好中文的建议。请根据表格内容给她回复邮件。
My advice
Reasons
listen to Chinese songs
improve listening ...
read a Chinese book every month
build up vocabulary; learn about Chinese culture(文化) ...
……
……
注意：
(1)短文内容必须包括表格中的所有信息，可以适当发挥；
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名和校名等相关信息；
(3)词数：80~100；短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Lucy,
Glad to hear from you._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Hope you’ll have fun learning Chinese.
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Lucy,
Glad to hear from you. In your last letter, you asked me how to learn Chinese well. Here is my advice for you.
First, you can listen to Chinese songs so that you can improve your listening. Second, read a Chinese book every month. It can build up vocabulary and learn about Chinese culture. Third, you can listen Chinese songs and watch TV programs. You can learn more new words by them. Last but not least, to improve your speaking skills, you can communicate with local people.
Hope you’ll have fun learning Chinese.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出“向对方提出学好中文”的建议；
第二步，根据提示材料，提出自己的建议；
第三步，表达希望。
[亮点词汇]
①build up建立
②communicate with 与……沟通
③have fun doing sth 乐于做某事
[高分句型]
①Here is my advice for you.（倒装句）
②First, you can listen to Chinese songs so that you can improve your listening（so that引导目的状语从句）
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30．（2022秋·湖南长沙·八年级校联考期末）假如你是李华，打算期末考试结束后在家办个派对。请根据下面提示，给你的好朋友Jake写封邮件。
提示：
时间：2022年1月16日，星期天。
地点：李华家
人物：李华的同学和好朋友。
活动：李华妈妈将准备一些传统美食：鸡肉，鱼，豆腐等；还会教大家如何做香蕉奶昔。
其他：请Jake在下周四之前回复。
要求：
包含所有提示内容；
可适当增加细节使行文连贯；
不少于80词。
Dear Jake,
The final exam will be over soon. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
The final exam will be over soon. I’m going to have a party at my home. The time is 7 p.m. on Sunday, January 16, 2022. Can you come to my party?
The party will be a lot of fun. Some of my friends and classmates will come. They’re friendly and funny. My mother will prepare some traditional food: chicken, fish, tofu and so on. She will also teach you how to make banana milkshakes.
Please reply to this invitation by next Thursday.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③提示；写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏内容提示中要求描述的几个方面，包括家庭派对的时间、地点、人物、活动等，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“打算期末考试结束后在家办个派对”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“时间、地点、人物、活动”等几个方面重点介绍这次家庭聚会的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语并表达自己的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①have a party 举办晚会
②a lot of 许多的；诸多
③banana milkshakes 香蕉奶昔
④reply to 回复，回答
[高分句型]
①The party will be a lot of fun. (will be句型表将来)
②I’m going to have a party at my home. (现在进行时表将来)