14 旅游话题 中考英语满分作文赏析

14 旅游话题

NO.1

（2022·湖北武汉·中考真题）假如你是李欣，你与Bob叔叔及其家人约定了一起去北京旅行。请你给Bob叔叔写一封英文电子邮件，告知你的旅行安排。

内容要点如下：

1. 6月30日下午2:00机场见；

2. 酒店已预订好，直接前往；

3. 第二天观看升旗仪式；

4. 游长城，吃北京烤鸭；

5. 补充一两点与旅行有关的信息或想法。

注意：文中不得透露个人真实姓名和学校；词数60—80；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：book v. 预订     directly adv. 直接地     flag-raising ceremony 升旗仪式

【满分作文赏析】

Dear Uncle Bob,

I’m so glad to hear from you about visiting Beijing. Here’s the trip plan. We’ll meet at the airport at 2 p.m. on June 30th. We can go to the hotel directly to have a rest as I’ve already booked the rooms. The next day we’ll watch the flag-raising ceremony at Tian’anmen Square early in the morning. It must be amazing! What about the Great Wall? It’s worth visiting and you’ll be impressed. As for dinner, we’ll have the delicious food, Beijing duck. Honestly, I am getting excited about the trip.

Look forward to meeting all of you in Beijing.

Li Xin

【解析】

1.题干解读：题目要求根据内容要点及参考词汇给Bob叔叔回一封邮件，告知Bob叔叔自己对旅行的安排。

2.写作指导：邮件的开头和结尾已给出，写作时要补全正文内容，要以第一人称为主，时态多用一般将来时。邮件可分为两段式：第一段介绍具体的计划；第二段表达自己的期待。要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。

NO.2

（2022·浙江绍兴·中考真题）假设你是刘军，在上周末的乡村旅游中，你发现了一些游客的不文明行为。请根据下表信息给某英文报VOICE栏目的编辑写一封邮件，反映这些问题并提出建议。

注意：

（1）邮件内容必须包括上表所有信息，可适当增加细节；

（2）你的建议至少两条；

（3）词数：80—100；

（4）邮件开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：不文明行为uncivilized behavior；编辑editor

Dear editor,I was shocked to see some uncivilized behaviors when I took a trip to a village last weekend. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours sincerely,

Liu Jun

【满分作文赏析】

Dear editor,

I was shocked to see some uncivilized behaviors when I took a trip to a village last weekend. Some visitors threw rubbish everywhere and left plastic bags flying around. Some picked flowers without permission to take photos so that they could show off online. And some climbed trees for fun, which might result in serious accidents.

I think it wrong to enjoy oneself at the cost of others. Visitors are supposed to protect the environment, like putting rubbish into proper bins. And they should be careful not to cause trouble to the locals and keep away from danger. In this way, a greener, cleaner and more civilized new village will be there for us all to enjoy.

Yours sincerely

Liu Jun

【解析】

1.题干解读：本文主要以题干表格中的内容讲述一些游客的不文明行为并提出相关的建议，可适当增加细节。

2.写作指导：本文以一般过去时和一般现在时为主，人称以第三人称为主。第一段主要描述自己发现的游客的一些不文明行为；第二段提出自己的建议。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。

NO.3

（2022·内蒙古包头·中考真题）假定你是李华，下周你的英国朋友Alan要来北京游玩，并发来如下邮件。请给Alan回复一封邮件。

Make a list

（T-shirts, sunglasses…）

Place small bags inside big bags…

Places of interest

（the Palace Museum, the Great Wall…）

Postcards, books…

参考词汇：pack v. 打包               souvenir n. 纪念品

注意：1. 词数90左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。

Hi Alan,I’m so happy to get your email saying that you’re coming to visit us next week. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

I’m looking forward to meeting you!

Li Hua

【满分作文赏析】

Hi Alan,

I’m so happy to get your email saying that you’re coming to visit us next week. Since you are going on a long flight, I suggest you make a list of things you take. It is a bit hot in summer here. So you can take T-shirts and sunglasses with you. Do you hate that feeling when you can’t find what you’re looking for in your bag? Me too! Placing small bags inside big bags is the best solution.

I think it’s a good idea to go to some places of interest together, such as the Palace Museum and the Great Wall. You will learn a lot about Chinese culture and history. As for the souvenir, I like collecting postcards and books from different places. Do you have any postcards of Tower Bridge? That would suit me fine. Thanks!

I’m looking forward to meeting you!

Li Hua

【解析】

1.题干解读：该题目属于邮件写作。在写作时应紧接开头继续写作，根据题目要求讲述去北京游玩需要携带的东西，打包的方式，可以参观的地方以及建议带的纪念品。

2.写作指导：本文时态以一般将来时为主，人称以第一人称和第二人称为主，讲述旅行需要携带的东西，打包的建议，在北京可以参观的地方，从英国带到中国的纪念品，要叙述完整，条理清晰。