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热点时文10 打造明厨亮灶 保证学生舌尖安全【热点材料】明厨亮灶，是指餐饮服务提供者采用透明玻璃、视频等方式，向社会公众展示餐饮服务相关过程的一种形式。使餐饮企业顾客可以直观地看到后厨员工的操作是否规范，卫生是否合格，是否有一些不应该出现的物品。明厨亮灶是对餐饮企业员工的一种监督。据市场监管总局消息，近日，市场监管总局办公厅联合教育部办公厅、国家卫生健康委办公厅、公安部办公厅印发《关于做好2022年秋季学校食品安全工作的通知》(以下简称《通知》)，部署各地有关部门全面做好秋季学校食品安全各项工作，全力守住校园食品安全底线，全心守护师生“舌尖上的安全”。《通知》要求，要进一步健全管理机制，压紧压实学校食堂、校外供餐单位主体责任和属地管理责任，完善末端发力、终端见效的制度机制，形成一级抓一级、层层抓落实的良好局面。督促学校加强对食堂及承包者或委托经营者的日常管理，严格落实食品安全校长(园长)负责制和学校相关负责人陪餐制度。《通知》强调，要进一步突出工作重点，强化风险隐患排查。对学校食堂、校外供餐单位和学校周边食品经营者开展全覆盖监督检查，加强对中小城市和县、乡学校的食品监督抽检。督促校外供餐单位和学校食堂严格落实餐饮服务活动中食品采购、贮存、加工、供应、配送和餐(饮)具、食品容器及工具清洗、消毒等各环节有关场所、设施、设备、人员要求，健全学校食品安全风险防控体系，重点强化复用餐(饮)具监管。指导校外供餐单位和学校食堂对采购的食品和食用农产品严格落实进货查验要求，加强进口冷链食品等重点食品原料管理，推动采购的食品源头可追溯。【典型范文】小卖部（Snack Shop）曾出现在中小学校园中，但现在已逐渐消失了。考虑到食品安全和校园秩序，一些人认为校园中不该设有小卖部；但也有人十分喜爱小卖部的便捷和在小卖部的欢乐时光。请你以Should We Have Snack Shops at the School？为题，写一篇80词左右的短文，谈谈你对这个问题的看法。内容要点： 1. 陈述你的观点。2.说明至少两点理由。注意：短文中不得出现与考生本人相关的校名和姓名等真实信息。Should We Have Snack Shops at the School？___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Should We Have Snack Shops at the School?In my opinion,I think there should be snack shops at the school. My reasons are as follows.First，it’s very convenient for students and teachers. If they need something urgent,they can buy them in snack shops. Second,it can give students some relaxation. After a long period of intense study,it is a good way to take away the burden from their brains.All in all,having snack shops at the school has various advantages . And it will help us make a more wonderful school.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“Should We Have Snack Shops at the School？”为题，谈一谈自己对小卖部曾出现在中小学校园中这一现象的看法；注意要紧扣主题，连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性。同时文句要通顺，内容要完整，可适当发挥。2. 写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称来展开写作，时态主要用一般现在时。写作时要认真审题，根据提示的内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作；可以围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等；语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明、条理要清晰。【拓展训练】A疫情期间，为避免交叉感染，并让学生吃到更加营养、安全的食品，学校出台配餐制，由老师陪同学生一起在教室用餐。请你根据以下要点，给校报英语专栏写一篇短文，谈谈自己的看法。要点： 1. 食堂环境干净卫生，学生们吃得健康、安全；2. 饭菜种类多样，学生们有很多选择，营养也更全面；3. 省去了在家和学校之间往返所花的时间；4. 家长们更加放心，也更轻松；5. 你的观点；注意: 1. 词数80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；2. 短文必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥；参考词汇：regulation 规定；cafeteria 食堂；nutritious 有营养的In order to improve nutrition and food safety in schools, we were asked to eat dinner in the classroom with our teachers._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】In order to improve nutrition and food safety in schools, we were asked to eat dinner in the classroom with our teachers.Thanks to the regulation, something great has taken place in our school. First, the cafeteria is clean and workers are working hard to provide us with different kinds of nutritious food. Also, if there is any problem about food safety or others, our school leaders are able to know and solve it in time. Because of the regulation, we eat healthier and safer than before. What’s more, it saves the time spent commuting between home and school. At the same time, our parents needn’t worry about our diet anymore and they feel more relaxed.We teenagers are the future of our country and need to grow healthy, so I think the new regulation really benefits us and is necessary. I hope it will be carried on forever.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以学校配餐制为主题，结合提示内容进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍学校配餐制的好处和带来的便利；第三段表明自己的观点。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。 B2022年3月15日，央视“315”晚会曝光康师傅、统一等企业老坛酸菜供应商存在卫生不达标、生产无保障等诸多食品安全问题，引来舆论哗然，食品卫生安全再次成为人们关注的焦点。作为一名中学生消费者，该如何维护自己的权益，吃到放心的食品？请参考下面提供的要点，写一篇80词左右的短文，并谈谈自己的看法。注意：1. 词数：80词左右，第一段已给出，不计入总词数；2. 应覆盖所有要点，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；3. 参考词汇：overdue过期的；go bad变质；Consumer Association消费者协会Since China’s 315 Evening Gala pointed to the hygiene (卫生) problems in making pickled cabbage (酸菜) at the Hunan Chaqi Vegetable Co Ltd, the safety of food has become a hot topic again. What shall we do to fight for our rights and interests?   _______________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Since China’s 315 Evening Gala pointed to the hygiene problems in making pickled cabbageat the Hunan Chaqi Vegetable Co Ltd, the safety of food has become a hot topic again. What shall we do to fight for our rights and interests?First, before buying food, we need to check the date and see whether it is overdue. Then we should study carefully what we buy and decide if it is fresh or it goes bad. After we pay for the food, we should get the bill and take good care of it. Last but not least, if we find there’s a problem with the food, call 12315 or go to local Consumer Association for help.Food safety is of great importance in our daily life. In my opinion, the government should take action to punish the producers and companies that went against consumers’ rights. On the other hand, we should learn to be wise consumers.【详解】题干解读：本篇书面表达是一篇提纲类话题作文。结合思维导图提示，谈谈自己对如何维护自己的权益，吃到放心的食品的看法。话题贴近学生生活，使学生易于发挥。写作指导：时态用一般现在时，人称用第一人称和第三人称。写作时首先承接开头，然后具体介绍该如何维护自己的权益，如识别食品是否新鲜或变质，购物以后索取并保管好发票，以及发现问题食品以后，拨打12315或向当地消费者协会寻求帮助；最后进行总结。注意句子结构要准确，要点要齐全，内容要合理，篇章结构要连贯，还应满足词数要求。 C健康的生活习惯一直是人们关注的话题，针对班上同学的饮食习惯老师准备开展有关健康饮食的重要性的主题班会课。请以Good Living Habits为主题，写一篇发言稿，谈谈如何做到健康饮食以及健康的生活习惯的重要性。提示:1、拥有健康的生活习惯对我们很重要;2、现在很多学生经常熬夜，吃很多垃圾食品;3、我们应该早睡早起、多运动；4、我们应该多吃健康食物；5、如果你想拥有健康的身体，你就必须有健康的生活方式。要求:1.要点齐全，并补充适当的细节；2.语言通顺,表达清楚，书写规范；3.词数：80词左右，可适当发挥。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Good Living HabitsHello, everyone, let’s talk about living habits. It is important for us to have good living habits. Nowadays, many students often stay up late, they hardly do sports and they often eat a lot of junk food. I think we should go to bed early and get up early, we should eat more healthy food and exercise more. If you want to be healthy, you must have healthy life styles. Without good living habits, there is no healthy body and mind.【详解】1.题干解读：本篇属于材料作文，谈论健康生活习惯的重要性以及如何做到健康饮食。开篇点题，说明好的生活习惯很重要；然后谈论许多学生的坏习惯以及为了养成好习惯我们应该怎么做；最后点题，要有一个好的生活习惯，没有好的生活习惯就不会有健康的身体和头脑。2.写作指导：全文主体时态为一般现在时，针对所给要点具体阐述，切记不要遗漏要点，可以适当增加情节使行文连贯。写作时尽量多使用所学过的单词、短语以及句型使文章出彩，如let's do, nowasays, do sports, more, without, there be以及it is adj. for sb. to do sth.等。D为了让学生吃到更加营养、安全的食品，政府出台了陪餐制，要求从 4 月 1 日起，学校领导陪同学生用餐。请你根据以下要点，给校报英语专栏写一篇短文，谈谈自己的看法。1. 学生吃得健康、安全；2. 及时发现就餐问题；3. 食堂提供食品多样；4. 父母更加放心。注意:1.词数 80 词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 参考词汇:规定 regulation (n.)；食堂 cafeteria (n.)；营养的 nutritious (adj.)A new food safety regulation was put into use on April 1 to improve nutrition and food safety in schools. It asks the school managers to eat with students in their cafeterias._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】A new food safety regulation was put into use on April 1 to improve nutrition and food safety in schools. It asks the school managers to eat with students in their cafeterias.Thanks to the regulation, something great has taken place in our school. First, we  eat healthier and safer than before. Second, if there is any problem about food safety or other, our school leaders are able to know and solve it quickly. Also, the cafeteria workers are trying to provide different kinds of food for us. In other words, our parents needn’t worry about our diet any more.We teenagers are still young and need to grow healthy, so I think the new regulation is really good and necessary. I hope it will be carried on forever.【详解】本文属于材料作文，就政府出台的“陪餐制度”谈谈你的看法。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如thanks to, take place, be able to, provide sth for sb, in other words, worry about, not...at all, carry on, first, second以及also，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。【点睛】写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。 E假如你是李华，与美国笔友Mike正在对肯德基（KFC）食品展开讨论。根据你所了解的情况，请你给他写一封邮件，谈谈你们班级同学对肯德基（KFC）食品的不同看法，并发表自己的观点。要求：1. 必须包含表格内所有信息；  2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息； 3. 词数：100词左右。 优点 (advantages)缺点 (disadvantages)同学们的看法1. 美味   2. 时尚   3. 体验西餐1. 太贵   2. 不安全   3. 垃圾食品 你的观点…… Dear Mike,Is everything going well? Glad to have a discussion about the advantages and disadvantages of KFC with you. We did a survey about it. Here are the results. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Mike,Is everything going well? Glad to have a discussion about the advantages and disadvantages of KFC with you. We did a survey about it. Here are the results.On the one hand, we think KFC has its advantages. It’s delicious and eating in KFC is a kind of fashion. It’s also a good way to experience Western food. On the other hand, KFC also has its disadvantages. Most food in KFC is junk food, which is bad for our health. Besides, the food may not be safe because it’s not fresh. What’s more, the food in KFC is usually very expensive.Though KFC is delicious, I prefer traditional Chinese food which is more delicious. To keep healthy, we should eat less junk food. It’s a good idea to have more healthy food like vegetables and fruit. Just as the saying goes, an apple a day keeps the doctor away.Yours,Li Hua【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一封电子邮件。围绕“肯德基食品”发表不同的看法。  写作指导：本文采用一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称为主。分为三段式：第一段开头已给出，用于引出主题；第二段介绍学生们对这种食品的不同看法；最后一段发表自己的看法。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。 F近年来，宁波的食品安全问题层出不穷，先是宁波奶大肠菌群超标，合格率低;再是新美心蛋糕致百人中毒。而这两种食品是许多中学生的每日必需品。中学生正处于生长发育的关键时期，食品安全极为重要。请根据下图提示谈谈中学生如何健康饮食并给出理由。注意：80词左右。开头、结尾已为你写好，不计人词数。文中应包含所有要点，并适当发挥。Nowadays, there is so much illegal (非法的，违规的 )food. Many people are sick because of eating it. More and more people pay attention to the food safety. As young students, we also face the problem. We need to eat well to make sure we can grow up healthily                                                            ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________      If we try our best to do these, I think all of us will look after our health well.【答案】First, we should eat more vegetables and fruit. They are healthy food and they are good for us. Second, we should eat less junk food, like drinks, ice cream and so on.Third, we should eat high quality food. We can buy these kinds of foods from supermarket.Fourth, we should never eat illegal food.。It is bad for our health.Maybe it can cause many problems.Fifth, we should eat dinner at home as much as possible. We can cook food by ourselves so that we can avoid unhealthy food.Anyway , we should be careful when we eat outside.【详解】试题分析：这是一篇图表作文。通过图示我们可以了解到作文的要点。我们只要围绕所给要点，适当发挥既可。【亮点说明】这篇组文能表达清所有要点，并在要点的基础上进行发挥。对个别要点能详细的阐述理由。短文用了一些短语和句式如：They are healthy food and they are good for us. It is bad for our health.及Anyway , we should be careful when we eat outside等。考点：图表作文。