专题04：话题作文-2023年中考英语作文考前强化特训（四川成都）

专题04：话题作文-2023年中考英语作文考前强化特训（四川成都）

学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号

一、话题作文

1．有些同学不能妥善安排好时间以至于影响了学习。“Don’t put off today until tomorrow.”是美国科学家本杰明·富兰克林（Benjamin Franklin）关于“时间”的一句名言。请以他的这句名言为题用英语写一篇约110词的短文。

内容要求：

1）你对这句名言的理解；

2）用一个具体事例加以说明；

3）对如何管理好时间提出一点建议。

注意：

1）文章的标题已给出，不计入词数；

2）字迹端正，书写规范，卷面整洁，表达清楚；

3）不要出现含有考生个人信息的人名、校名、地名等，否则按作弊行为认定。

Don’t put off today until tomorrow

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2．文化名城成都，将举行第31届大运会（Universiade）。为让更多国际友人了解成都文化，你校英文网站以“Cultural Symbols of Chengdu”为话题，面向全校师生征稿。请从下图中选择三种成都文化元素，做简要介绍，并说明推荐理由，写一篇推文投稿。

要求：1. 每种文化元素需包含两点推荐理由；

2. 文中不能出现真实校名和姓名；

3. 字数100词左右。

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3．Due to the popularity of smart phones, it’s more and more convenient to use phones to do many things. With the help of free WIFI, people are used to using smart phones to chat, looking up the information they need or going shopping. But there are also some disadvantages or risks of doing so. Please write an article to talk about your opinion of using smart phones with free WIFI and your own experience should be included.

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4．当今社会，很多家庭对孩子过分溺爱，导致当他们面对问题时不知该怎么办。因此对孩子们来说，学会自立相当重要。请以“Learn to Be Independent”为题写一篇80词左右的短文，首先指出这种不良的社会现象，然后给出你的观点和建议。

参考词汇：make decisions; depend on; look after; on the one hand...on the other hand...

注意：

1. 请先在答题卡上填写表中空格；

2. 须全面反映图表信息，但不能完全照抄；

3. 文中不能出现真实的学校和姓名；

4. 词数：100 左右。

Learn to Be Independent

Nowadays, many children are treated as “little emperors” at home._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

5．我们都知道美国登山运动员Aron Ralston自断手臂，继续攀登的故事，他的故事令人感动，激励人心，在我们身边，一定也有那么一些人和事，他们或许平凡，或许渺小，但却总能鼓舞我们，催人奋进。

请以“The Person Encouraging Me”为题，写一篇100词左右的短文。

要求：

1.任选一项品质特征，并用具体事例加以阐述。

2.文中不能出现真实的姓名、校名和地名。

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6．根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段。所给提示词语仅供选用。

无奋斗，不青春！某英文网站正在开展以 “越努力越幸福（The Harder I Work, the Happier I Will Be）” 为主题的征文活动。请你用英文写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你在初中生活中的一个小目标是什么，你是如何努力去实现的，以及你从中学到了什么。

提示词语：set a goal, strive for （奋斗）, make a plan, patience, proud

提示问题：

●What did you do to strive for your goal?

●What have you learned from your experience?

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7．当前，网络上出现了不少帮助中小学生解答作业的App软件和网站，如作业帮( Zyban)、答案网( Answer)等，并且这些软件和网站受到了不少学生的喜爱，因为他们将作业拍照后上传( upload)到网上后，就会得到答案。为此我们学校举行了一场辩论赛。请根据以下要点，以“Think before We search Online”为题，写一篇英语短文，谈谈自己的看法。

注意事项:

1.短文应包含要求的所有信息。

2.短文应结构完整，语句通顺，句式多样。

3.短文中不得出现个人和学校的真实信息。

4.词数:100左右。

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8．We are often inspired by some famous people around the world in human history. Take Madame Curie, Leonardo da Vinci and Carlinhos Brown for example, their achievements（成就）have had a great influence. Please choose one of the three famous people to write an article. Your article should include the following points:

1.    A simple introduction of the person;

2.    The reason why you like the person;

3.    What you have learnt from the person;

4.    A proper title;

5.    At least 100 words.

9．Have you got anything that is branded on your memory, making you feel happy, satisfied, proud or just feel sad, terrible, and regretful? Maybe you did it, experienced it, read it, saw it or only heard of it.

Please write a composition with the title “The ________ thing that I have ever ________” to share your story. The following information should be included:

1. How did you get the story?

2. When and where did it happen?

3. What happened exactly?

4. Why is it branded on your memory? Please list at least two reasons.

10． Writing.

You are a middle school student. Every day, you meet some problems. What are the common problems you usually meet? Write an article to talk about it.

1. What are the common problems that middle school students meet?

2. What is your biggest problem?

3. What’s your solution to your problem?

4. What’s your suggestion to those students who can’t face problems?

5. Ending.

6. 80-120 words.

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参考答案：

1．例文：

Don’t put off today until tomorrow

This well-known saying from American famous scientist Benjamin Franklin tells us how to use and manage time well. Some students can’t make good use of their time and this has a bad influence on their study.

One weekend, I forgot to finish my homework because I only thought of relaxing myself. On Saturday I played computer games and on Sunday I played football with my friends. But soon I found I had no time at all to do my homework. The next Monday, the teacher asked me to do more homework to punish me.

To manage our time well, we should make a good plan and follow it strictly.

【详解】[总体分析]

① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为命题作文；

② 时态：时态为“一般现在时+一般过去时”，视情况而定；

③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要求内容，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。

[写作步骤]

第一步，介绍对名言的理解；用一般现在时态；

第二步，具体阐述写作内容。结合名言，用一个具体事例加以说明，注意时态为一般过去时；

第三步，书写结语。谈谈自己对如何管理好时间提出的建议。

[亮点词汇]

① how to do sth.如何去做某事

② make good use of好好利用

③ ask sb. to do sth.要求某人做某事

[高分句型]

① I forgot to finish my homework because I only thought of relaxing myself.（because引导的原因状语从句）

② I found I had no time at all to do my homework.（省略that的宾语从句）

2． 例文

                                                                    Cultural Symbols of Chengdu

     I’m Li Hua. I’m from Class 1, Grade 9. I believe that Jingju is a cultural symbol of Chengdu. The performers are in beautiful clothes and with colorful faces. Jingju is a traditional art form loved by people of all ages. Besides, as a national treasure, it plays an important role in Chinese culture. That’s why I think Jingju can be a cultural symbol of Chengdu. Chengdu is famous for its delicious food. Chengdu cuisine is one of the representatives of Chinese cuisine. It is not only delicious, but also integrated into the local culture. Drinking tea is very popular in Chengdu. You can taste tea in teahouses everywhere. In addition, you can also enjoy tea art performances, which are just as enjoyable as drinking tea.

     I hope my ideas can be taken. Thanks!

【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。以“Cultural Symbols of Chengdu”为话题，根据所给图片，介绍下其中三种成都文化元素，并说明理由。

2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时；人称采用第三人称为主。写作时首先要从图片中观察成都文化元素，并展开介绍，围绕主题可适当发挥，行文确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。

3．例文：

Due to the popularity of smart phones, it’s more and more convenient to use phones to do many things. However, everything has two sides.

On one hand, with the help of free WIFI, we are used to using smart phones to chat, looking up the information we need or going shopping. Smart phones are used to store more personal information, too. Even we can use them to put  some money into your account instead of going to the bank. It’s more popular to use smart phones to listen to songs and watch TV plays.

On the other hand, smart phones expose some disadvantages and risks to us. It’s bad for our study, work and bodies if we watch mobile phones too long. I also think we had better not use smart phones in public. It’s impolite to play with the smart phone in public. Once I had a party with my friends. I was watching a play on my mobile phone when my friend talked to me. I didn’t hear him. I didn’t know it until a friend next to me told me about it. I felt very embarrassed. What’s more, sometimes it’s dangerous to use smart phones, too. Some strangers always cheat others with smart phones. So don’t lend money to strangers on the Internet.

In a word, we should use smart phones properly.

【详解】

[总体分析]

① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为话题作文；

② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；

③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“英文信息提示”中关于“your opinion of using smart phones with free WIFI and your own experience”的要点及图画中的提示词，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。

[写作步骤]

第一步，表明写作意图。借用“Due to the popularity of smart phones, it’s more and more convenient to use phones to do many things.”来引出重点介绍的内容；

第二步，具体描述写作内容。从“使用智能手机的优势：聊天、查信息、购物、存钱、听歌、看电视；使用智能手机的弊端：不利于学生的学习和身体、公共场合最好不使用手机及我在公共场合使用手机的尴尬的例子、使用手机的危险等”几个方面重点介绍我对免费WIFI下使用智能手机的观点及自己使用智能手机尴尬的经历；

第三步，书写结语。表达“我们应正确使用智能手机”的愿望。

[亮点词汇]

① due to 由于

② more and more convenient 越来越方便

③ on one hand, on the other hand 一方面，另一方面

④ with the help of 在……的帮助下

⑤ be used to doing 习惯于做某事

⑥ had better not do sth 最好不要做某事

⑦ What’s more 而且

⑧ in a word 总之

[高分句型]

① It’s more and more convenient to use phones to do many things. （it’s + 形容词 + to do sth. 形式主语句型）

② Smart phones are used to store more personal information, too. （“be + 过去分词” 含被动语态的句子）

③ I didn’t know it until a friend next to me told me about it.（not ... until句型）

4．例文

Learn to Be Independent

Nowadays, many children are treated as “little emperors” at home. Parents show so much love to their children that when they face problems, they don’t know what to do. So it’s important for children to learn to be independent.

In my opinion, parents should trust their children and never do everything for them. It’s necessary to give children proper advice and more chances to make their own decisions.

As for children, they shouldn’t depend on their parents too much. On the one hand, they should learn to do chores. It helps to improve their ability to look after themselves. On the other hand, they ought to face difficulties bravely and try to solve them by themselves.

In a word, the earlier children learn to be independent, the better it is for their future.

【详解】1.题干解读：本文要求以“Learn to Be Independent”为题，针对现在父母过度溺爱自己的孩子的社会现象，发表自己的观点，并提出一些建设性的意见。

2.写作指导：本文以第三人称和一般现在时为主来展开。第一段描述社会现会象，第二段针对这种社会现象发表自己的观点及建议，第三段进行总结。写作过程中可使用参考词汇，增加文章亮点。

5．例文：

The Person Encouraging Me

My friend Dave encourages me a lot in many ways. Now let me tell you something about him.

Dave comes from America. He lives with his parents in China. Now he is in the same school as me. He has a round face and wears a pair of glasses. He is helpful and warm-hearted. He is willing to help people in trouble. He often helps his classmates with the homework. He goes to the old people’s home and help do the housework there on weekends. He also visits the children’s hospital to cheer the sick kids up. He reads stories and sings songs for them.

He is creative and organized. For example, he can create a TV programme and organize the class activities. He likes to discuss with classmates and come up with new ideas.

Dave encourages me a lot. He shows me how to be kind and helpful.

【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。在写作时应根据题目要求讲述对自己有鼓励作用的人的基本情况，介绍他的品质特征，讲述他的优秀事迹以及对自己的影响。

2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时为主，人称以第三人称为主，讲述对自己有鼓励作用的人的优秀事迹以及对自己的影响，要叙述完整，条理清晰。

6．例文

It’s well-known that there’s no shortcut to success but hard work. One of my experiences helps me realize the truth again.

As I entered Grade 9, I found I had difficulty in speaking English freely. Therefore, I set a goal to improve my oral English by taking the following measures.

First, I kept on listening to tapes and reading aloud to improve my pronunciation. Second, I tried to read English books where I could learn many native expressions. Although it was quite challenging, I managed to develop it into a habit. Thanks to my great effort, I am comfortable speaking English now.

I have learned the great value of hard work through this process. I not only feel a sense of achievement but also find the pleasure in hard work as it helps me discover my potential. I believe the more hard-working I am, the much happier I will be.

【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，写出自己在初中生活中的一个小目标是什么，是如何努力去实现的，以及从中学到了什么，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。

2. 写作指导：写作时要紧扣主题，本文应该用第一人称来叙述；时态采用一般过去时和现在时相结合；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。

7．Think Before We Search Online

We have a heated discussion about a new use of the Internet-helping us with our homework. Different students hold different views on this.

Some students think we can get help from these Apps if we don't know how to do our homework. We can also learn from others and improve ourselves. Besides, we can save more time to review our lessons. While others think it is not good for us to improve our abilities. Moreover, we may be used to depending on others and be lazier than before.

In my opinion, we students should try our best to finish our homework by ourselves. If necessary, we can turn to the Internet for help.

【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇给材料作文，要求根据提示内容和要点以“Think before We search Online”为题，写一篇英语短文。首先要认真审题，根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。

2.例文点评：本文时态为一般现在时，人称主要为第一人称，辅以第三人称。文章紧扣题目要点，内容完整，表述准确，语言的表述符合语法的结构，造句符合英语的表达习惯。

3.高分亮点：

短语：learn from，be good for，be used to，in my opinion，try one’s best to do sth，turn to。

句型：While others think it is not good for us to improve our abilities.而另一些人认为提高我们的能力是不好的。others think后接宾语从句。it is+形容词+for sb.to do sth.是固定句型，意为“做某事对某人来说是……”，这里的it是形式主语，真正的主语是后面的动词不定式。

      In my opinion,we students should try our best to finish our homework by ourselves. 在我看来，我们学生应该尽力自己完成作业。try one’s best to do sth尽力做某事，by oneself独自地、单独地。

8．The man  I respect most

I have a respect Chinese,his name is Chairman Mao. He is our Chinese first president,He is vrey excellent. He has many famous theories. When he was young, he has a dream that about saving China's people. Let hunders of farmers can live a good life, and beat  Japan. It is quite successful. Nowadays, he became many people's hero.  He is the man I respect best.We all respect him very much. He is remembered as a great leader. We should learn his spirit from him.

【详解】1.    题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。在写作时应注意要包括提示的三个内容：第一部分伟人的简单介绍，第二部分你喜欢的原因。第三部分学习的东西。

2.    例文点评：例文采用一段式；用第三人称叙述内容；时态采用一般过去时，叙述完整，条例清晰。

3.    高分亮点；短语：be very execellent ；has a dream ；a good life；beat with；be remembered。

9．请参考范文：

The happy thing that I have ever experienced

This is a story of my own experience, from this thing, I really felt my father's love for me, warm and deep love.

I was born in a poor family,My parents live a simple life.When I was 8 years old, I was in Grade 3 of primary school. I liked  watching others play the piano. In fact, I liked the beautiful picture of playing the piano.

Suddenly one day, my father  took me to a nice place.Later, I learned that it was a piano training center, learning piano was very expensive, but my father  helped me find a piano teacher.So I learned the piano from my teacher there.

Three months later, I played the piano to my father,  but I did not play well. The teacher told my father that maybe I  had no gift for it.He advised my father to give up.But my father said that if I would like to play the piano, he didn't give up. I  was moved by my father's encourgement.

【详解】本文是关于自己经历或看到的故事为话题的材料作文，要求根据内容要点来写作。学生首先要认真阅读材料中给出的短语及相关信息,认真审题,确定文章的中心。在写作的文章具有一定的连贯性,还应注意使用一些连接词,使文章的表达更有逻辑性和条理性。写作时还要注意:1.书写规范；2.可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯；3.写完后要认真检查是否有漏写要点,有无拼写错误等。高分句型：This is a story of my own experience, from this thing, I really felt my father's love for me, warm and deep love.这是一个关于我自己经历的故事，从这件事上，我真的感受到了爸爸对我的爱，温暖而深沉的爱。Suddenly one day, my father said to take me to a nice place.突然有一天，爸爸说带我去一个好地方。But my father said as long as I am happy on the line, it doesn't matter.但是我爸爸说只要我高兴就行，没关系。

【点睛】注意写作过程中，将要点展开并表达清楚，注意使用英语的经典句型,避免出现汉语表达。

10．If you are a middle school student, you will spend over eight hours a day in the school. But do you know how to make your school life better(更好)? Here are some ideas for you. Maybe it is helpful.

    First of all, you should know what the most important thing is in school. Of course, it is your study. You should listen carefully (认真地) to teachers in class. You can also go to the library, if there is one in your school. It's a quiet place to study and you can read different kinds of books there.

    Joining a school club can also make you relaxed. There you can know more about what you like and meet many friends. They may have the same hobby(爱好) as you. Do you have any good friends around you? You can share good and happy things with them. That's great. Don't forget to help your classmates and your teachers. When they say “Thank you!” with a smile, you will find that is the best moment(时刻) in your school life.

【详解】本文是一篇话题作文。You are a middle school student. Every day, you meet some problems. What are the common problems you usually meet? Write an article to talk about it.    文章时态用一般现在时，人称主要为第一人称和第三人称。本文所给材料比较详细，考生要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并可适当发挥。在写作时，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。

【点睛】首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。