专题05：材料作文-2023年中考英语作文考前强化特训（四川成都）

专题05：材料作文-2023年中考英语作文考前强化特训（四川成都）

学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号

一、材料作文

1．在今年世界地球日(4月22日)的学校活动中，合唱团演唱了一首节奏舒缓、饱含深情的英文歌曲。请根据下列提示写一篇乐评，向更多人推荐这首歌。

要求：

1.文中不能出现真实的姓名和校名；

2.乐评须包含以上所给信息；

3.写出推荐理由并适当阐述，至少三条；

3.注意文章逻辑，语句通顺，有恰当的过渡和衔接；

4.词数：110 词左右。

提示词汇：世界地球日 World Earth Day       合唱团 School Chorus      推荐[v.] recommend

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2．许多初中生害怕错过社交媒体上发生的事情，每天都会忍不住浏览社交媒体，这种现象叫做FOMO (Fear of Missing Out错失恐惧症)。请你根据此现象，以“How to Deal With FOMO”为题写一篇报道。

提示词：

社交媒体 social media

要求：

1. 文章必须包括以上所有内容并撰写合理的结尾。语句通顺，层次清晰，意思连贯；

2. 不能出现自己的真实姓名和学校等相关信息；

3. 100词左右。

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3．假如你是李欣，你校正在开展“用英语讲述你最喜欢的中国（电影、歌曲、发明……等）”为主题的视频展评活动，请根据以下提示撰写视频文稿。

1. 介绍你最喜欢的……的种类、名称等基本信息；

2. 说明你喜欢……的原因及你在欣赏（使用等）时的感受；

3. 对你视频观众提出倡导及建议。

注意：

1. 文稿须全面反映提示信息；

2. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；

3. 词数80～100，开头已给出，且不计入总词数。

Hello, everyone. I’m Li Xin.

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4．每年的6月6日是全国爱眼日，请你结合学校英语社的爱眼宣传海报，写一篇文章，结合学生近视现状，分析近视的原因，介绍良好习惯并推荐专家建议，号召同学们养成良好的用眼习惯，保护好视力。

注意：

1.你的文章应包含以上所有信息；

2.不能出现真实校名和姓名；

3.词数：100词左右，标题已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：myopia (n.) 近视：nearsighted (adj.) 近视的；regular (adj.) 定期的

For a More Beautiful World in Your Eyes

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5．现在有很多学校给班级提供了一块菜地，培养学生们吃苦耐劳的精神。请你结合下图，写一篇短文，并谈谈劳动带给家长和学生的变化。

参考词汇：劳动labor         校园农场school farm

要求：1. 短文应包含以上所有信息和图片中的相关要点；

2. 短文应格式正确，语句通顺，句式多样；

3. 词数100词左右。首句已给出，不计入总词数。

These days, many schools provide each class with a piece of field to plant vegetables to help more students get hard-working spirit. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

6．前几天你见到了小学时候的好朋友。三年未见，他的变化很大。假设外教要求你写一篇关于朋友的文章，请你以“My Friend Has Changed”为题，根据以下提示完成这篇文章。

要求：1、表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；

2、词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词）。

My Friend Has Changed

Last week, I met my best friend in primary school. He has changed a lot.

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7．假如你是林华，请根据以下表格中的信息以“My Changes in Learning English”写一篇英语短文，介绍一下你进初中两年多来在英语学习方面的变化及经验并简要地谈谈你对某两个学习方法的看法。

提示：l. 文章应包含表格中的所有信息；不得出现自己的真实姓名和学校；

2. 字数100词左右。

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8．根据国家最新调查数据，中国中小学生2020年总体近视率为52.7%。保护视力，刻不容缓。请根据下图，结合你的生活经验，写一篇短文。

The results of the survey on students’ myopla rate in China in 2020

要求：1.短文应包括以上所有信息；

2.文中不能出现真实学校和姓名；

3.词数：100词左右。开头已给出，不计入词数。

4.参考词汇：myopia rate近视率；视力sight；近视的short-sighted

According to a survey by the Chinese government in 2020, the myopia rate of Chinese students has been up to 52.7%.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

9．你校英文校刊就“美育进中考”这一新闻开辟专栏，展开讨论。请以“Should high school entrance examination include music and art?”为题写一篇短文，并向该栏目投稿。

要求：1.请先在答题卡上填写表中空格。

2.写作内容需要包含图中所含信息，要转述，不能完全照抄。

3.表达你的观点以及2点理由。（与图中理由需要不同）

注意：

1.文章不得出现真真实校名和姓名；

2.词数120左右。

参考词汇：all-round adj. 全面的

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10．在英语课堂上，英语老师要求学生分组讨论 “Should Teenagers Go out with Friends on Weekends?”，请按下面的讨论记录。

注意:

1. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；

2. 要求包括所有提示要点，可适当发挥；

3. 词数：100词左右。Should Teenagers Go out with Friends on Weekends?

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参考答案：

1．例文

On April 22, our School Chorus sang a song, Heal the World, to celebrate the World Earth Day. The song came out in 1991 and was sung by Michael Jackson. It encourages people to protect our world. I feel so moved that I want to write a music review to recommend it.

First, Michael sings the song with full love, which truly touches me. Besides, the lyrics are easy to understand, and each sentence makes us think a lot. Last, the song is worth spreading because it helps call on people to take action now.

I hope you’ll love the song and we can help make our world a better place.

【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求根据歌词内容和歌曲的信息写一篇乐评，从而推荐该歌曲。

2.写作指导：本文以第三人称书写，时态是一般现在时和一般过去时。第一段介绍作者创作歌曲的事，第二段介绍推荐原因，第三段总结。可以围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等；语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明、条理要清晰。

2．例文：

How to Deal With FOMO

Many junior high school students are afraid of missing out on what’s happening on social media and can’t help but browse social media every day.

The reason why so many teenagers are so fond of surfing the social media is that they are suffering from the stress from the study. Another reason is that they need to be cared for. Besides, they rely too much on social media.

How do the students deal with FOMO? First, we can join the clubs, such as football club and swimming club. Second, we should ask the teachers or classmates for help. Third, we can talk with family members when we are lonely. Fourth, do more outdoor exercise. Besides, reading more paper books is also a good idea.

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；

②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；

③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中已给出的要点，用“How to Deal With FOMO”为题，介绍“错失恐惧症”这一现象，出现的原因及自己的建议。

[写作步骤]

第一步，介绍错失恐惧症这一现象；

第二步，介绍出现这一现象的原因；

第三步，具体介绍应对错失恐惧症的建议。

[亮点词汇]

①junior high school 初中

②be afraid of 害怕

③be fond of 喜欢

④suffer from 承受

⑤deal with 应对，处理

[高分句型]

①The reason why so many teenagers are so fond of surfing the social media is that they are suffering from the stress from the study.（why引导定语从句；that引导表语从句）

②Third, we can talk with family members when we are lonely.（when引导时间状语从句）

3．

例文：

Hello, everyone. I’m Li Xin. My favourite song is Look up at the stars which is sung by Zhang Jie, one of the most popular singers in China. It’s a pop song that is full of positive energy.

I like this song best for two reasons. First, the song sounds very lively that it can make me happy. Second, the lyrics of the song are inspiring. It’s possible for everyone to meet difficulty in life. Whenever that happens, I will listen to that song. It cheers me up and encourages me to move on. Finally, I hope you will enjoy this video and give more valuable comments on it.

That’s all. Thanks for watching.

【详解】[总体分析]

① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；

② 时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；

③ 提示：写作提示题目已经给出，要围绕写作提示进行写作，并可以适当发挥。

[写作步骤]

第一步，承接文章开头，并开篇点题，指出自己最喜欢的中国电影、歌曲、发明等的基本信息；

第二步，说明喜欢它的原因及自己的感受；

第三步，最后进行总结，并对视频观众提出建议和倡导。

[亮点词汇]

①be full of充满

②cheer sb. up使某人振作起来

③encourage sb. to do sth.鼓励某人做某事

④move on继续前进

[高分句型]

①It’s a pop song that is full of positive energy.（that引导的定语从句）

②Whenever that happens, I will listen to that song.（whenever引导的时间状语从句）

4．参考范文

For a More Beautiful World in Your Eyes

June 6 is National Eye Care Day. A survey shows a bad situation: about 38% of fourth graders are nearsighted, about 68% for eighth graders and about 81% for those in high school.

Bad habits cause myopia. Using phones in bed hurts eyes. Lying on the sofa while reading is also harmful.

We should develop good habits for a change. Let’s do eye exercises often and have regular eyesight tests. We should follow the 20/20/20 rule: After 20 minutes of computer use, we should look at something green 20 feet away for 20 seconds.

It’s time to take action for a more beautiful world in our eyes. (词数108）

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；

②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；

③提示：根据海报中的“信息提示”分析当前的学生近视现状，及原因，并给出建议，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。

[写作步骤]

第一步，介绍调查的结果；

第二步，分析学生近视的原因；

第三步，就“保护视力”提出建议；

第四步，呼吁大家行动。

[亮点词汇]

①on the sofa在沙发上

②develop good habits养成好习惯

③do eye exercises 做眼保健操

④take action采取行动

[高分句型]

①Lying on the sofa while reading is also harmful.(动名词作主语)

②It’s time to take action for a more beautiful world in our eyes.(it固定句型；动词不定式作主语)

5．例文

     These days, many schools provide each class with a piece of field to plant vegetables to help more students get hard-working spirit.

     In the past, parents paid more attention to their children’s grades, but now they often encourage their children to do housework. As for the students, they used to study hard every day, and there was no time for them to develop their hobbies or relax. But now students have less homework, and they can take up their hobbies, exercise and so on in their spare time or weekends. Now students have an extra labor class. Through this, students can master many useful life skills. In addition, they can also experience the hard work of farmers. At home, helping parents do housework can reduce the burden of parents.

     In a word, labor is beneficial and honorable, and it is of great benefit to our growth.

【详解】[总体分析]

① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；

② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；

③ 提示：根据所给提示写一篇作文，介绍劳动带给家长和学生的变化。

[写作步骤]

第一步，介绍父母和学生以前以及现在的变化；

第二步，具体介绍通过劳动学生可以获得什么；

第三步，最后表达你的看法。

[亮点词汇]

①pay attention to注意

②encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事

③in addition此外

[高分句型]

①But now students have less homework, and they can take up their hobbies, exercise and so on in their spare time or weekends.（and连接两个并列结构）

②helping parents do housework can reduce the burden of parents.（动名词作主语）

6．One possible version:

My Friend Has Changed

Last week, I met my best friend in primary school. He has changed a lot.

At that time, he was short and he didn’t work hard at studies. He often went out to play games with other children. He used to be a naughty boy and like to make fun of others. Later he determined to change. Now, he is tall and spends most of his time reading books. As a result, he becomes a top student in his school. He likes playing basketball very much. He isn’t naughty anymore. He often helps his parents with the housework. This makes his parents very happy.

Seeing my friend’s changes, I felt proud and happy. I learn from him that once you make up your mind, you can achieve your goals.

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；

②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；

③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的我的感受，适当添加细节。

[写作步骤]

第一步，介绍朋友过去的情况；

第二步，介绍朋友现在的情况；

第三步，介绍自己的感受。

[亮点词汇]

①used to be曾经是

②make fun of取笑

③not...any more不再

[高分句型]

I learn from him that once you make up your mind, you can achieve your goals.（that引导的宾语从句）

7．例文：

My Changes in Learning English

We all know it is very important for us students to develop good study habits. I have been in junior high school for two years. I have changed a lot in learning English.

When I first was in the seventh grade, I didn’t listen to the teacher carefully and always did things that had nothing to do with the class. My English pronunciation was not correct and my classmates always laughed at me. So I was very afraid to speak English in public. I always studied alone, because I was afraid to ask my classmates questions. Now I have developed some good habits such as listening to English as much as possible, taking notes carefully in class, keeping English diaries and so on. I also make dialogues with my classmates in English. I often improve my English through group study.

In a word, developing good habits is very important to English learning.

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；

②时态：时态结合“一般现在时”、“一般过去时”和“现在完成时”；

③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意刚进七年级时的情况和现在的情况的对比，在包含所有要点的基础上适当增加细节。

[写作步骤]

第一步，引出主题“在英语学习上有很多变化”；

第二步，通过今昔对比来突出自己的变化；

第三步，收尾。

[亮点词汇]

①junior high school 初中

②laugh at 嘲笑

③be afraid to do sth. 害怕做某事

④in a word 总而言之

[高分句型]

①When I first was in the seventh grade, I didn’t listen to the teacher carefully and always did things that had nothing to do with the class.（when引导时间状语从句；and连接并列谓语结构；that引导定语从句）

②I always studied alone, because I was afraid to ask my classmates questions.（because引导原因状语从句）

8．例文

According to a survey by the Chinese government in 2020, the myopia rate of Chinese students has been up to 52.7%

Many factors lead to the myopia problem. With the popularity of digital products, an increasing number of students fix their eyes on the screen at least 4 hours every day. Moreover academic burden forces students to overuse their eyes which worsens the situation. We should take action to deal with the problem. First, the government should update the relevant rules to reduce school time ensuring the students to use eyes less. Second, we students should say no to too much use of electronic devices. Since eyes are the window of our soul, we should take measures to protect them.

【详解】1. 题干解读：本题是一篇材料作文，结合题干提示，介绍2020年中学生近视率的结果，分析导致近视的原因，以及给出相应保护视力的建议。

2. 写作指导：本文时态用一般现在时，人称用第一人称和第三人称。写作时，首先开篇点题说中国中小学生2020年总体近视率为52.7%；其次分析导致近视的因素，并提出相应的建议保护视力；最后呼吁大家行动起来保护好自己的视力。注意行文连贯、逻辑清晰、无拼写和语法使用错误。

9．1. for；2. against

范文：

Should high school entrance examination include music and art?

Recently we have discussed whether the high school entrance examination should include music and art. Students have different opinions about it. Some students think music and art should enter the high school entrance examination. They think students should have more chances to study music and art and it can improve students’ skills. So they will be happier and have a better life in the future. Others disagree. They think students have too many subjects to study for the exams. If music and art enter the high school entrance examination, students have to prepare for more subjects. As a result, they will be more tired and feel too much pressure. Their other subjects will be influenced.

In my opinion, music and art can enter the high school entrance examination. But only the students who are interested in music and art can have the exam rather than all of us. They can go into different senior schools to study music or art. In the future, they can major in music or art in a college.

【详解】1. 题干解读：本文是议论文写作，题目要求先补全图片中缺失的单词，然后以“Should high school entrance examination include music and art?”为题写一篇短文；要求包含图片信息并发表自己的看法。

2. 写作指导：此作文时态以一般现在时为主；采用第三人称和第一人称口吻；可采用2段落格式，第一段：描述学生们的不同观点以及理由；第二段：阐述自己的看法和理由。

10．例文

Should Teenagers Go out with Friends on Weekends?

Recently our classmates had a discussion about whether teenagers should go out with friends on weekends.

Some students support this view. Because they may go out and relax with friends. They can also exercise together and participate in volunteer activities. Some students do not support this view. Because they have learning tasks and have to finish their homework on time. If they have time, they also want to do some housework and accompany their parents.

In my opinion, we teenagers should be allowed to go out with friends for fun on weekends, we can also take some exercise together to keep fit.

【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。围绕“青少年周末应该和朋友出去吗”写一篇短文。

2.写作指导：本文采用一边现在是，人称以第三人称和第一人称为主。分为三段式：第一段引出主题；第二段根据提示材料介绍学生们的不同观点；最后一段介绍自己的观点。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。