专题07：2023年成都中考作文预测押题-2023年中考英语作文考前强化特训（成都专用）

专题07：2023年成都中考作文预测押题（成都专用）

一、材料作文

1．假如你是李欣，你校正在开展“用英语讲述你最喜欢的中国（电影、歌曲、发明……等）”为主题的视频展评活动，请根据以下提示撰写视频文稿。

1. 介绍你最喜欢的……的种类、名称等基本信息；

2. 说明你喜欢……的原因及你在欣赏（使用等）时的感受；

3. 对你视频观众提出倡导及建议。

注意：

1. 文稿须全面反映提示信息；

2. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；

3. 词数80～100，开头已给出，且不计入总词数。

Hello, everyone. I’m Li Xin.

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【答案】

例文：

Hello, everyone. I’m Li Xin. My favourite song is Look up at the stars which is sung by Zhang Jie, one of the most popular singers in China. It’s a pop song that is full of positive energy.

I like this song best for two reasons. First, the song sounds very lively that it can make me happy. Second, the lyrics of the song are inspiring. It’s possible for everyone to meet difficulty in life. Whenever that happens, I will listen to that song. It cheers me up and encourages me to move on. Finally, I hope you will enjoy this video and give more valuable comments on it.

That’s all. Thanks for watching.

【详解】[总体分析]

① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；

② 时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；

③ 提示：写作提示题目已经给出，要围绕写作提示进行写作，并可以适当发挥。

[写作步骤]

第一步，承接文章开头，并开篇点题，指出自己最喜欢的中国电影、歌曲、发明等的基本信息；

第二步，说明喜欢它的原因及自己的感受；

第三步，最后进行总结，并对视频观众提出建议和倡导。

[亮点词汇]

①be full of充满

②cheer sb. up使某人振作起来

③encourage sb. to do sth.鼓励某人做某事

④move on继续前进

[高分句型]

①It’s a pop song that is full of positive energy.（that引导的定语从句）

②Whenever that happens, I will listen to that song.（whenever引导的时间状语从句）

2．对职业教育的重视，人们对学生中考后是否应该选择职业高中（vocational school）的讨论越来越多。请根据下图加以分析并谈谈你的选择和理由（至少1点）。题目自拟。

要求：

1.须包含图中所有信息；

2.不得出现真实校名等信息；

3.词数：100左右。

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【答案】例文

Where should students go after finishing middle school?

These days, the government is paying a lot of attention to developing vocational education. It has caused more discussions. According to the government, half of the middle school students will go to normal high school while the other half will go to vocational school.

I think both schools have their own advantages and disadvantages. If students go to normal high school. they may still face much pressure of getting into a good university. But they may make more money later. For the other students, they can start learning a skill and working early. But it may be harder for them to get a higher education later.

I want to get into a normal high school because that can give me more time to think about my future.

【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。根据图中信息，介绍下学生在中考后是否应该选择职业高中，给出自己的选择和理由。

2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时；人称采用第三人称为主。写作时图中的信息全部要涵盖在内，不要遗留，重点是介绍下自己的选择并给出合理的解释，同时需要注意文章的通畅性，确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。

3．在英语课堂上，英语老师要求学生分组讨论 “Should Teenagers Go out with Friends on Weekends?”，请按下面的讨论记录。

注意:

1. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；

2. 要求包括所有提示要点，可适当发挥；

3. 词数：100词左右。

Should Teenagers Go out with Friends on Weekends?

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【答案】例文

Should Teenagers Go out with Friends on Weekends?

Recently our classmates had a discussion about whether teenagers should go out with friends on weekends.

Some students support this view. Because they may go out and relax with friends. They can also exercise together and participate in volunteer activities. Some students do not support this view. Because they have learning tasks and have to finish their homework on time. If they have time, they also want to do some housework and accompany their parents.

In my opinion, we teenagers should be allowed to go out with friends for fun on weekends, we can also take some exercise together to keep fit.

【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。围绕“青少年周末应该和朋友出去吗”写一篇短文。

2.写作指导：本文采用一边现在是，人称以第三人称和第一人称为主。分为三段式：第一段引出主题；第二段根据提示材料介绍学生们的不同观点；最后一段介绍自己的观点。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。

4．假如下面是你们班教室里的照片墙上关于中考前学习和生活的点点滴滴，以及考前老师的温馨提示，这些使得你在考前胸有成竹。请你以“Preparations for High School Entrance Exam”（备战中考）为题，写一篇80—100词的短文。

1.请阐述图中信息，并适当发挥；

2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；

3.字迹工整，结构完整，语言流畅，表达正确。

Preparations for High School Entrance Exam

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【答案】例文

Preparations for High School Entrance Exam

High School Entrance Exam is arriving. I still remember the days when our teachers and students worked together to prepare for it.

In order to get a good grade, we all listened to the teachers carefully in class and took notes at the same time. After class, we finished doing our homework on time. If we had some difficult problems, our teachers would explain to us patiently. All the teachers encouraged us to keep on studying and not to give up. Besides, to study well, health comes first. Our teachers told us to eat healthy food, such as eggs, meat, vegetables and so on. We also did exercise every day and had enough sleep. The teachers told us not to feel stressed and learn to relax. We must be careful in the exam and try our best to avoid making mistakes. What’s more, we must be on time.

We all felt tired and nervous, but what a full and happy time!

【详解】1.题干解读：本文以“Preparations for High School Entrance Exam”为题介绍备战中考的经历，表格中给出了细节要点，写作时不要遗漏，也可适当增加细节，使文章更加顺畅。

2.写作指导：本文以一般过去时和第一人称为主。第一段进行总述；第二段主要从学习、生活和注意点三个方面讲述是如何备战中考的；第三段表达自己的感想。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚。无单词拼写和语法错误。

二、讲稿

5．为进一步丰富学生的周末生活，我校开设了各种各样的俱乐部。假设你是我校学生会的主席，请根据海报写一篇演讲稿，向七年级同学介绍本期学校俱乐部的活动和目的，以及分享你参加俱乐部的经历和感受，并呼吁大家加入。

要求：

1.文章应包含图表中的全部信息

2.请勿出现真实的学校名和人名

3.字数110词左右

提示词：学生会students union

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【答案】例文

Hello, everyone! To enrich our after-school activities, our school organizes different club for us. Now I will introduce some clubs suitable for students of Grade 7..

Art club and Sports club are on Saturday. Art club is from 8:00 a.m. You can play the violin and draw pictures here. It’s good to relax yourselves as well as enjoy the beauty of arts. If you want to play ball games, such as basketball, football and volleyball, you can choose Sports club which opens from 2:00 p.m. to 4:00 p.m. Here you can not only make your body stronger, but also make some friends that have the same hobby with you. On Sunday, there is Museum club from 8:00 a.m. to 10:00 a.m. You can visit Chengdu Museum and Jinsha Site Museum with us. It helps you understand the local history better.

After-school activities make our life colorful. So I hope all of you join us and have a wonderful experience. Thank you for listening.

【详解】题干解读：该题目属于看图写作类作文，要求写成演讲稿形式，写作时认真观察图片里的信息，不要遗漏。适当表达自己的观点和感受。

写作指导：根据题干要求，第一段表明目的，引出主题；第二段主要根据图片内容介绍俱乐部的信息及意义；第三段发出呼吁并结尾。写作时注意句型的灵活使用，可适当运用定语从句介绍俱乐部的信息，避免过多简单句的罗列。

6．最近你看了一则央视公益广告（public service ad）Family且深有感触。你准备在英语课上做值日生报告时与全班分享，请事先拟好你的发言稿。

要求：1.请先在答题卡上填写所缺单词；

2.描述四幅图片表达的内容；

3.联系生活，谈谈父母在你获得成功、面对挫折时的做法并谈谈你会如何感恩父母；

注意：1.开头已给出不计入总词数；

2.文中不能出现真实校名和姓名；

3.词数：100词左右。

When I was ______...

When I ______up…

Hello, class! Recently a public service ad called Family has impressed me a lot.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】例文

Hello, class! Recently a public service ad called Family has impressed me a lot.

In the ad, the father supports the whole family while the mother protects the child in the early days. When the child grows up, he or she can do something to keep the parents away from wind and rain. The love between parents and children makes up a family.

The ad reminds me of my family. When I succeed, they are proud of me. And when I’m in trouble, they’re always there with me to face it and find the ways out.

Now what I can do in return for their love is to make progress in my study. Only in this way can I live up to their good wishes.

【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇讲稿。要求根据提示内容，描述四幅图片表达的内容、谈谈父母在你获得成功、面对挫折时的做法并谈谈你会如何感恩父母。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。

2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来介绍，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为四段，第一段引出话题；第二段描述四幅图片表达的内容；第三段介绍父母在你获得成功、面对挫折时的做法；第四段谈谈自己会如何感恩父母。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。

7．为进一步丰富学生的周末生活，你校开设了各种各样的俱乐部。请根据海报写一篇演讲稿，向七年级同学介绍本期学校俱乐部的活动和目的，以及分享你参加俱乐部的经历和感受，并呼吁大家加入。

要求：

1. 文章应包含图表中的全部信息；

2. 请勿出现真实的学校名和人名；

3. 字数100词左右。

Hello, everyone! To enrich our after-school activities, our school organizes different club for us. Now I will introduce some clubs suitable for students of Grade 7. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】例文：

Hello, everyone! To enrich our after-school activities, our school organizes different club for us. Now I will introduce some clubs suitable for students of Grade 7.

Art club and Sports club are on Saturday. Art club is from 8:00 a. m. to 10:00 a. m. You can play the violin and draw pictures here. It’s good to relax yourselves as well as enjoy the beauty of arts. If you want to play ball games, such as basketball, football and volleyball, you can choose Sports club which opens from 2:00 p. m. to 4:00 p. m. Here you can not only make your body stronger, but also make some friends that have the same hobby with you. On Sunday, there is Museum club from 8:00 a. m. to 10:00 a. m. You can visit Chengdu Museum and Jinsha Site Museum with us. It helps you understand the local history better.

After-school activities make our life colorful. I myself has joined the Museum Club. There are all kinds of activities, which broaden my horizon. So I hope all of you join us and have a wonderful experience. Thank you for listening.

【详解】[总体分析]

① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿；

② 时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；

③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意不要遗漏“呼吁大家加入”这点信息，可适当添加细节，突出写作重点。

[写作步骤]

第一步，根据提示，介绍本期学校俱乐部的活动时间、活动内容和意义；

第二步，分享自己的经历和感受，并呼吁大家加入。

[亮点词汇]

①from…to…从……到……

②as well as也，和

③such as例如

④make some friends交一些朋友

[高分句型]

①If you want to play ball games, such as basketball, football and volleyball, you can choose Sports club which opens from 2:00 p. m. to 4:00 p. m.（if引导的条件状语从句；which引导的定语从句）

②Here you can not only make your body stronger, but also make some friends that have the same hobby with you.（not only…but also连接的并列成分；that引导的定语从句）

三、看图作文

8．假设你是英语报的小记者，上周调查了学校2000名学生参加传统文化学习的意向。请根据调查结果，写一篇短文，包括调查的目的，用百分比（如：34%，26%）简要说明图表Topics to Study内容，以及自己的选择和想法。                     

要求：1. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名； 2. 词数：100词左右。

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【答案】范文：

Recently, a survey was done among two thousand students on a school in order to know their intention to participate in the study of traditional culture. Here is what we have learned from the chart. 34% of the students would like to learn Beijing Opera and 26% of the students want to learn Chinese painting. 21% of the students are interested in table manners. And the rest of the students show great interest in other traditional culture.

As far as I am concerned, I think it is good for us to learn traditional culture. By doing it, we not only gain abilities but also happiness. As for me, I prefer to learn how to play the zither. I think playing the zither can make me feel relaxed.

【详解】题干解读：题目要求用英文简要说明图表内容；要求包括调查目的、自己的看法和选择。

写作指导：此作文时态以一般现在时为主，采用第一人称和第三人称口吻来书写。此作文可分两段，第一段阐述调查结果和目的；第二段阐述自己的选择和想法。

9．某英语网站正在开展关于中国谚语故事的征文比赛。诗人李白的故事告诉我们：只要功夫深，铁杵磨成针。请以“You’re sure to succeed if you work hard”为题，简介该故事，谈谈你的理解及个人感悟，并分享体现该谚语的个人经历。参加此次比赛。要求：写作内容需包含两幅图中的简洁信息。

注意：1.文中不能出现真实校名和姓名；2.词数：100左右。

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【答案】例文：

You’re sure to succeed if you work hard

One day, Li Bai saw an old woman grinding an iron rod into a needle. He was surprised and asked, “When can such a thick iron rod be ground into a needle?” The old woman said, “An iron bar can be ground into a needle as long as you work hard.”

This is a famous story. It tells us that you are sure to succeed if you work hard. Once my English was not good. I read English every day, and slowly my English improved. It’s true that there are many difficulties in our lives. When we are faced with difficulties, we should try our best to solve them instead of giving up. If we work hard as much as we can, I believe we will succeed in the end.

【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求根据图片内容，以“You’re sure to succeed if you work hard”为题简单介绍“铁杵磨成针”的故事，谈谈自己的感想并分享相关经历。

2.写作指导：写作时要先根据图片内容介绍故事，然后谈自己的理解及感悟，并分享自己的经历来说明“只要功夫深，铁杵磨成针”这一深刻道理。写作时要结合一般过去时和一般现在时，用第三人称、第一人称为主来行文。做到无单词拼写和语法错误。

10．在人生的十字路口，我们都可能收到别人的建议，如何对待？即将毕业的你同样会收到各种建议，如关于：择校、交友、学习、特长发展、生涯规划等等。请根据下面两幅图，结合自己的实际，陈述某方面可能得到的建议，作出抉择并阐明原因。

要求：

1、根据小马的决定及第二幅图示，分别阐释其寓意或哲理；

2、陈述得到的建议至少两条；

3、词数：110左右。文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Word Bank: squirrel 松鼠  pony 小马

We are what we choose

A pony was trying to cross a river when a squirrel saw him and shouted, “ The water is so deep. Don’t get into the river. It’s dangerous. “__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________All in all, choosing helps us make it possible to find the value of our life and be the best of whatever we are.

【答案】例文

We are what we choose

A pony was trying to cross a river when a squirrel saw him and shouted. “The water is so deep. Don’t get into the river. It's dangerous.”

But the pony did not stop. Instead he decided to keep on going. Similarly, we also need to realize who we truly are according to what conditions we have. But how? A choice can help when we receive others’ different but kind suggestions. And then we can become what we choose to be.

I have been studying in my school for 9 years, so my dad says it is better for me to stay here for another 3 years, but my mom disagrees. She advises me to challenge myself by joining a new school. After thinking twice, I choose to stay, because I am thankful to my teachers or classmates and feel really proud of being a senior high here.

All in all, choosing helps us make it possible to find the value of our life and be the best of whatever we are.

【详解】题干解读：这篇作文要求学生观察题目中给出的两张图片，先讲述一下小马过河的故事，然后根据小马的决定以及第二幅图示，阐释其寓意或哲理。然后结合自己的现实生活，讲述自己在生活中得到的建议。

写作指导：写作时，应先将写作内容分清层次和段落，讲述小马过河的故事时，应用一般过去时态；讲述寓意、哲理以及自己生活中得到的建议时，用一般现在时。注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，使用恰当的句型和词汇，穿插并列句或复合句。同时注意上下文意的连贯，使表达流畅。