初中英语中考作文写作指导（记叙文体裁解读+人物描写点拨）

中考英语作文写作指导一、记叙文体裁解读记叙文是以记人叙事为主要内容的文章，通常包括六个要索：时间、地点、人物、事件、原因及结果，写作时各要素要交代清楚，但并不要求全部具备。写记叙类文章时除了六个要素外，还要注意以下几点:1、记叙方式通常有顺叙、倒叙和插叙三种。顺叙是英语记叙文最常用的一 种记叙方式，即按照事件发展的时间先后顺序来叙述。2、人称一般用第一人称和第三人称进行写作。第一人称是从“参与者”亲眼所见、亲耳所闻的经历开始叙述;第三人称是以“观察者”的身份进行记叙，通过作者与读者之外的第三者，直接把故事呈现在读者面前。3、时态记叙文用于记叙过去发生的事件或经历，因此常用一般过去时， 还可根据上下文辅以其他时态。二、人物描写点拨人物描写类的作文，大多围绕亲情、友情、师生情、榜样力量、人物奋斗等话题展开，或叙事抒怀，或表明个人对人物所持的情感。此类文章以记叙文居多，也可夹叙夹议。在中学生英语课程标准中，初中阶段的内容与要求中所提到的话题，比如famous people(名人)、interests and hobbies (兴趣和爱好)等，会涉及到人物描写。人物描写的文章，对人物各方面的描写是必不可少的：外貌描写、语言描写、神态描写、动作描写、心理描写等等，根据文章的需要，确定写哪些，哪些详写，哪些略写。写人离不开写事，因为人物的特点总是在具体的事例中表现出来的。文章时态要根据事情发生的频率而定:经常性的行为多用一般现在时，一次性的行为多用一般过去时，当然，其他时态也可能会涉及。在写人的时候，我们可以通过以下三部分来写作:1、简单介绍人物的概况般包括姓名 、性别、年龄、职业、家庭背景等。写作时使用的语青必须符合英语表达习惯如姓名的书写、年龄的表达、人称或称呼的法取等。2、从多方面对人物进行刻面为了使人物的形象丰满起来，给读者留下深刻印象，我们可以对人物的外貌、神态、动作等进行描写，并选取简短的事例来说明其品质和个性。在具体写作时，要正确把握现在时、过去时和将来时的用法。3、对人物进行评价在文章结尾处要介绍你对人物的评价或谈论你的个人感受，无论是喜欢还是讨厌，是称赞还是批评，都要明确地表达出来。1.模板①Do you know _______ (引出人物)?She / He is _______ (人物身份)②She / He is tall and  _______ (身材)She / He always wears _______ (表情) and gives us the impression that  _______ (每人的印象)She / He is good at  _______（特长）She / He always helps me out whenever I _______.Once _______ (引出事列) To my surprise, _______ (她／他的做法).③She / He is _______ and I hope _______ (表达愿望).【注意】①引出人物② 详细介绍人物③ 做出评价，表达感想2.必备词汇与套用句型
beautiful 漂亮的                   pretty 漂亮的handsome 帅气的                  strong 强壮的round face 圆脸                    broad face 宽脸straight hair 直发                  curly hair 卷发short/long hair 短/长发             long nose 高鼻梁ordinary-looking 长相普通的        wear glasses 戴眼镜graduate from...  毕业于...        get a ... degree 得到...学位get further education 深造          study abroad 出国留学humorous 幽默的                clever/smart 聪明的patient 耐心的                   hard-working 努力的friendly 友好的                  warm-hearted 热心的be fond of... 喜...               enjoy doing sth. 喜欢做菜事be crazy about... 对...着迷       be interested in... 对....感兴趣       be in the lead 处于领先地位knowledgeable 知识渊博的         famous 著名的well-known 知名的               be remembered as... 被后人誉为... be regarded as... 被当...be respected by... 受...尊微          devote one's lifetime to... 倾注毕生精力live in... 居住在...               be born in... 出生...live a happy busy life 过着幸福/忙碌的生活
3.闪亮篇首句(1) Wang Nan, a world champion in ping-pong, is ... tall with the weight of...王楠，乒乓球世界冠军，高... 体重...(2) My mother is a rural woman, who...我的母亲是一个农村妇女，她...(3) ... is young beautiful lady....是位年轻漂亮的女士。(4) If you ask me who ... I will tell you it is ... at once.如果你问谁是...，我会马上告诉...(5) ... was from a worker / teacher's family....生于一个工人/教师家庭。(6) He / She was born on ... (time) in ... (place).他/她出生在 ... (时间) ... (地点)。4.出彩篇中句(1) Her eyes are very big / bright.她的眼睛很大/很明亮。(2) He often wears casual clothes like jeans and T-shirts.他经常穿着像牛仔和T恤之类的便装。(3) He had very little school education, but he knows that...他没怎么上过学，但是他知道...(4) His / Her family was so poor / rich that...他/她的家庭是如此的贫穷/富裕以至于....(5) He worked hard every day to make money to keep our family.他每天都努力工作赚钱来供养我们的家庭。(6) I was about to...when...我正要...突然...(7) He / She worked hard so as to improve...他/她为了提高...工作很努力。(8) His/Her father was so strict with him/her that...他/她的父亲对他/她是如此的严厉以至...5.精彩篇尾句(1)  He deserves / is worthy of our respect.他值得我们尊重。(2) Without her help, I will never... 如果没有她的帮助，我永远都无法...(3) I will respect and love ... forever. 我将会永远尊敬和爱戴...(4) She is honest and always ready to help others.她为人诚实，并且乐于助人。(5) She has set an example for...她给....树立了榜样。(6) Now I understand my father's love for me. I will never forget my father.现在我明白了父亲对我的爱。我永远不会忘记我的父亲。6.模板练习请以“He/She Has Changed a Lot”为题，从外貌、性格、爱好或其他方面介绍一下你身边的一个人在这几年的变化。要求：1. 至少写出三个变化，可适当发挥；2. 80词左右。【满分作文】                                    He Has Changed a LotMy friend Jimmy has changed a lot in the last few years.Jimmy used to be fat and eat a lot of unhealthy food. Three years ago, his doctor told him that he should do more exercise and eat healthily. So he took doctor’s advice and did more exercise to lose weight. Now he is thinner and healthier.Jimmy used to hate the school life. One year ago, he and his parents had a long talk. That’s when he decided to change. Now he studies harder than he used to. He knows that his parents love him and they are proud of him.Jimmy used to be shy. His face would turn red when he talked to people. Now he is more outgoing and can give speeches in public. That makes him more popular.People sure change! I’m glad to see my friend’s great change.