高考英语写作分类训练：图画作文

图画作文

1．遵守交规，人人有责。请就下图的行为和故事的结果用英语写一篇短文，向校内英文读物OURS投稿，倡导遵守交规。

要求：1. 词数120字左右；

2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校名称；

3. 短文首句已给出，不计入总字数。

参考要点：1. 短文需描述所给图片的信息；

2. 合理想象并补全第二幅图片的内容；

3. 谈谈你对此事的看法。

参考词汇：人行道 sidewalk    红绿灯 traffic lights

Last Saturday afternoon, when I was on my way to school, I saw a mother and her son preparing to go across the street.

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2．假设你是红星中学高一(1)班的学生李华，你的美国笔友Tom发来邮件，询问你进入高中以来的学习和生活情况以及今后的打算。请你根据以下四幅图的先后顺序, 给他回一封邮件。

注意：1. 词数不少于60；

2. 邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好。

Dear Tom,

I’m very glad to receive your e-mail, and I’d like to tell you something about my new life in my senior high school.

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Best wishes,

Yours,

Li Hua

3．假设你是红星中学学生李华，请根据以下四幅图，以“A Day with an Artist of Traditional Chinese Painting”为题，介绍上周在“国画之旅”活动中向国画艺术家学习国画的过程。

注意：词数100左右。

提示词：国画traditional Chinese painting；荷花lotus

4．Directions:Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

下图是国外中学的课堂一角，对照你中学上课的情况，作出比较并谈谈你的感受。你的作文包括：

1.描述图片里学生上课的场景；

2.比较你同时期上课情况；

3.简要谈谈你的感受。

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5．假设你是李华，你们全班同学在“五一节”放假期间开展了“体验一天低碳生活”的活动。请你根据以下三幅图片的先后顺序，介绍本次活动和你的感受，向学校“英语园地”投稿。

注意：1.词数不少于100，开头已给出，不计入总词数；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：一次性筷子disposable chopsticks

A Low-carbon Day

The students in our class took part in an activity called “Experience a low-carbon Day” during the Labor Day vacation.

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6．你学校的英文校报正在征稿，要求为以下插图配一篇短文。 请为校报撰稿，其内容应包括：

1.图片的内容；

2.图片表达的含义。

注意:1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

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7．你刚用Animator Pro动画制作软件制作了一套“狐假虎威”电脑动画。外教Mr. Smith见后很感兴趣，欲知其具体含义，现请你根据以下要点，用英语写出这个寓言故事，作为动画的配图说明。

1. 老虎抓到狐狸，欲行下口，狐狸急说它已被天帝赐封为“百兽之王”；

2. 老虎不信，狐狸支招，让老虎紧行其后，以观其他动物的反应；

3. 见狐狸后跟着老虎，其他动物速命已唯恐不及，哪还有不跑之理；

4. 老虎居然没意识到，动物怕的竟是自己，而非狐狸。

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8．假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为校刊《英语园地》写一篇题为“Our Voluntary Activity”的英文稿件。请根据以下四幅图的内容叙述在12月5日志愿者日当天，你们班到公交车站参加志愿者服务活动的过程。词数100左右。稿件的开头已给出。

提示词：桶bucket

Our Voluntary Activity

December 5 was memorable because it was Volunteer Day and we did some meaningful work.

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9．请根据漫画内容，结合漫画主题Climate is changing写一篇英语短文。内容包括：

1.漫画的主要内容。

2对漫画主题的思考。

注意：词数100左右。

参考词汇：polar bear, panda, penguin

10．假定你是李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记述你和外国朋友Jack的相识经历。

注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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1．          Last Saturday afternoon, when I was on my way to school, I saw a mother and her son preparing to go across the street. The mother was going to run the light when her son prevented her. The mother felt embarrased and stopped.

With more and more cars coming into our families, we are happy that it has greatly improved our life. But unluckily, it has also brought many problems, such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents. Traffic safety is everybody's business. We must obey the rules. For example, we must walk on walk side, when we cross zebra – crossing, stop and look right and left, then go across fast. Don’t play football on the road .We can tell our parents not to drink before they drive, not to run through red lights, not to talk and laugh while driving etc.

    We can say cars are coming into our life, but only when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybody's business can we be safe driving on roads and walking on sidewalks.

【分析】本篇书面表达属于议论文，要求考生就下图的行为和故事的结果用英语写一篇短文，向校内英文读物OURS投稿，倡导遵守交规。

【详解】1.词汇积累

准备：prepare→get ready

尴尬的：embarrased→awkward

不幸地：unluckily→unfortunately

遵守：obey→observe

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句： But unluckily, it has also brought many problems, such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents.

拓展句：But unluckily, it has also brought many problems, among which are heavy traffic and traffic accidents.

【点睛】[高分句型1] The mother was going to run the light when her son prevented her. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句)

[高分句型2] We can say cars are coming into our life, but only when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybody's business can we be safe driving on roads and walking on sidewalks.（运用了部分倒装句）

2．Possible version

Dear Tom,

I’m very glad to receive your e-mail, and I’d like to tell you something about my new life in my senior high school. As a senior high school student, I am now working very hard. In class, I listen to the teachers attentively and take notes carefully. After class, I take an active part in various sports to keep healthy, which, I believe, is very important for my study.

Both my teachers and parents give me a lot of support. With their help and encouragement, I have made great progress and been able to build up my confidence. I have decided to attend a medical university and become a doctor in the future. I am sure I can achieve this goal.

Best wishes,

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文，要求考生结合图画给美国笔友Tom写信，介绍进入高中以来的学习和生活情况以及今后的打算。

【详解】1.词汇积累

专心地：attentively→intently

参加：take part in=participate in

重要的：important→significant

建立：build up=set up

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Both my teachers and parents give me a lot of support.

拓展句：It is my teachers and parents who give me a lot of support.

【点睛】[高分句型1]

After class, I take an active part in various sports to keep healthy, which, I believe, is very important for my study.（which引导非限制性定语从句）

[高分句型2]

I am sure I can achieve this goal.（省略连接词that的宾语从句）

3．A Day with an Artist of Traditional Chinese Painting

Last Friday，our class invited a well-known artist to teach us how to draw a lotus in Chinese painting.

As soon as the artist came into the classroom，he was given a warm welcome, which made him so happy.All of us wore big smiles.First, he showed us some skills of drawing a lotus.We watched carefully around him.Then instructed by him, each of us made an attempt to do it by ourselves.Finally, because of my excellent performance, I was awarded Outstanding Young Artist.Looking at the award, I felt very excited.

Through this experience，we are all amazed at Chinese painting and proud of being Chinese.We hope we can have more activities of this kind in the future!

【分析】本篇书面表达是一则看图记叙文。要求以第一人称讲述自己与国画艺术家学习的一天。主体部分前两幅图讲述了“我”认真聆听技巧，后两幅因表现突出获得嘉奖。最后以作者的感悟和期待画上完美句点。

【详解】1.词汇积累

著名的：well-known →famous

技能：skill→ technique

一…就…：as soon as= the moment

试图做某事：make an attempt to do=try to do

2.句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：Finally, because of my excellent performance, I was awarded Outstanding Young Artist. Looking at the award, I felt very excited

拓展句：Finally, because of my excellent performance, I was awarded Outstanding Young Artist, which made me very excited.

【点睛】[高分句型1] As soon as the artist came into the classroom，he was given a warm welcome, which made him so happy. (运用了as soon as引导的时间状语从句)

[高分句型2] Then instructed by him, each of us made an attempt to do it by ourselves. (运用了非谓语动词短语做原因状语)

4．As is seen from the picture, I find students in foreign countries sitting around the desks , talking about the questions with the teacher, which makes atmosphere of the class lively and interesting .

     However，in china，few students answered questions positively unless our names are called by the teachers when I am at school. Besides，we will keep silent when questioned . It is only teachers who give us lessons and we only seem to be served as listeners.

    So I think the present condition in china is different from that in foreign countries .We should learn from foreign countries. Their learning way is beneficial to the development of students’ personality . In addition , it helps to train students ’creativity .

【分析】本篇书面表达属于图画式作文，下图是国外中学的课堂一角，对照你中学上课的情况，作出比较并谈谈你的感受。

【详解】1. 词汇积累

围坐在一起：sit together →sit around

保持沉默：say nothing→ keep silent

当作：act as→ serve as

有益处：be helpful to → be beneficial to

2.句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：We should learn from foreign countries. Their learning way is beneficial to the development of students’ personality

拓展句：We should learn from foreign countries, whose learning way is beneficial to the development of students’ personality.

【点睛】[高分句型1] As is seen from the picture, I find students in foreign countries sitting around the desks , (运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句)

[高分句型2] It is only teachers who give us lessons and we only seem to be served as listeners.(运用了强调句型)

5．One possible version:

A Low-carbon Day

The students in our class took part in an activity called “Experience a low-carbon Day” during the Labor Day vacation.

We chose several ways to experience a low-carbon life. In the morning, we went to the park by bus instead of going by car. When it was time for lunch, we refused to use the disposable chopsticks served in the restaurant. Instead, we each took with us a lunch box with a pair of chopsticks and a spoon in it. In the afternoon, we went shopping at a supermarket. To avoid the use of the plastic bags, we put what we bought into cloth bags.

The activity lasted only one day. But we have learned a lot from it. We realize that we should try our best to do something for the environment around us. In this way, we are convinced that we will live in a better world.

【分析】这是一篇书面表达类应用文。要求考生写一篇记录五一假期低碳生活的文章投稿。

【详解】1.词语积累

选择：select→choose

提供：offer→serve

尽力做某事：do one’s utmost to do→try one’s best to do

确信的：sure→convinced

2.句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：The activity lasted only one day. But we have learned a lot from it.

拓展句：Although the activity lasted only one day, we have learned a lot from it.

【点睛】[高分句式1] When it was time for lunch, we refused to use the disposable chopsticks served in the restaurant. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句；运用了过去分词短语做chopsticks的后置定语)

[高分句式2] We realize that we should try our best to do something for the environment around us. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)

6．one possible version:

As we can see in the picture, a boy is standing high on top of many books looking far into the distance.

Such a picture reminds me of a Chinese poem “to enjoy a grander sight, climb to a greater height”. Like the steps to the greater height, books can help broaden our horizons and improve our understanding of the world. The more books we read, the more knowledge we will gain, the more learned we will be, and the broader horizons we will have. So pick up books and read! A more exciting world is waiting for us to explore.

【分析】本篇书面表达属于图画作文，要求作者根据插图配一篇短文为校报撰稿。

【详解】1.词汇积累

提醒某人某事：warn sb. of sth. → remind sb. of sth.

获得：get→ gain

拿起：take up→ pick up

令人兴奋的：thrilling→ exciting

2.句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：Like the steps to the greater height, books can help broaden our horizons and improve our understanding of the world.

拓展句：Like the steps to the greater height, not only can books help broaden our horizons but also improve our understanding of the world.

【点睛】[高分句型1] As we can see in the picture, a boy is standing high on top of many books looking far into the distance.（运用了由as引导的定语从句）

[高分句型2] The more books we read, the more knowledge we will gain, the more learned we will be, and the broader horizons we will have.（运用了the+比较级…，the+比较级…句式）

7．One possible version:

One day, a hungry tiger came out in search of food. He happened to catch a fox. But the fox said he had just been appointed by God to be head of all animals.

“Who are you trying to fool?” said the tiger.

“Why not walk behind and see how frightened the other animals will be when they see me?” said the fox.

The tiger agreed. So he went along with the fox to find out whether it was true. All the animals really ran away the moment they saw the fox followed by a tiger indeed. How stupid the tiger was! He didn’t even realize that it was he himself that all the other animals were really afraid of.

【分析】本篇书面表达属于看图作文。要求考生用英语写出“狐假虎威”这个寓言故事，作为这个故事的电脑动画的配图说明，为外教Smith先生解惑。

【详解】1.词汇积累

寻找：in search of→look for

愚弄：fool→trick

害怕的：frightened→fearful

一……就……：the moment→as soon as

2.句式拓展

合并简单句：

原句：One day, a hungry tiger came out in search of food. He happened to catch a fox.

拓展句：One day, a hungry tiger came out in search of food，who happened to catch a fox.

【点睛】[高分句型1] Why not walk behind and see how frightened the other animals will be when they see me?（运用了when引导的时间状语从句和why not句型）

[高分句型2] He didn’t even realize that it was he himself that all the other animals were really afraid of.（运用了that引导的宾语从句和强调句型）

8．Our Volunteer Activity

December 5 was memorable because it was Volunteer Day and we did some meaningful work.

After class we went to a nearby bus station with some buckets and our volunteer logo. Upon arrival, we began to clean the buses immediately. Some were carrying water. Some were wiping the floor of the buses. Others were cleaning the windows. After that, we tried to lead passengers to queue for getting on buses. Some even helped the old onto the bus.

Before leaving, we took some photos to record our voluntary activity, holding a flag with the logo, which, I think, is the best explanation for our activity: try to give others a hand as much as possible.

【分析】本篇书面表达属于图画作文，要求根据图画内容为校刊《英语园地》写一篇题为“Our Voluntary Activity”的英文稿件，描述12月5日志愿者日当天，你们班到公交车站参加志愿者服务活动的过程。

【详解】1. 词汇积累

立刻：at once → immediately

扫地：saodi→ wipe the floor

照相：take pictures → take photos

帮助别人：help others →give others a hand

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Some even helped the old onto the bus.

拓展句：Some even helped the old who are getting on the bus.

【点睛】[高分句型1] After class we went to a nearby bus station with some buckets and our volunteer logo.(运用了with表伴随)

[高分句型2] Before leaving, we took some photos to record our voluntary activity, holding a flag with the logo, which, I think, is the best explanation for our activity: try to give others a hand as much as possible. (运用了现在分词作状语和which引导的非限制性定语从句)

9．Possible version (I)

As is shown in the picture, two polar bears are blackening their bodies to pretend to be pandas with many penguins standing by because the climate is changing severely. The cartoon shows that in order to survive, the Arctic animals have to turn themselves into pandas to cause concern.

In face of losing habitats, the polar animals have no alternative but to live with pandas. Not only do the polar animals deserve care as much as pandas do, humans are also expected to reflect on themselves. If humans paid more attention to protecting environment, the climate change would not become so rapid.

We should take effective measures to solve the problem caused by the changing climate. It is the awareness of cherishing animals and environment that matters. Take action immediately and we’ll make a difference.

Version（ II ）

Nowadays, human beings are faced with an embarrassing situation.

In the cartoon, we can see a polar bear is painting a small one as a giant panda. Little penguins are hungry too. The scene may seem unbelievable to us, but it may become a reality in the near future.

With the development of industry and agriculture, People are cutting down plenty of forests and more fossil fuels are burned. So the environment gets warmer and warmer and climate changes are caused in greenhouse gases. Animals have lost their homes. Therefore we should realize the importance of environmental protection, take action to protect the earth on which we are relying and live in harmony with our animal friends.

Version（ III ）

The picture shows us an inconvenient truth——climate is changing. Our earth is becoming hotter and hotter and as a result, the ice and glacier on which the polar bears live is too thin to bear their weight. There is no choice for polar bears but to move to Antarctic where they would seek to live with penguins. The mother bear paints her baby black and white just like endangered pandas to arouse people’s attention.

The cartoon may seem ridiculous to humans, for the stereotype that polar bear could not live with penguin in nature. But we cannot take it for granted that the globe is hotter than ever before. If our humans and governments do not take effective measures to curb global warming, the earth will be unsuitable for creatures to live on, including humans ourselves.

【分析】本篇书面表达是一篇议论文，要求考生结合漫画主题Climate is changing写一篇英语短文，说明漫画内容并发表对漫画的思考。

【详解】1.词汇积累

展示：show→present

巨大的：giant→huge

值得：deserve→be worth

解决：solve→work out

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：We should take effective measures to solve the problem caused by the changing climate.

拓展句：We should take effective measures to solve the problem that is caused by the changing climate.

【点睛】[高分句型1]

The cartoon shows that in order to survive, the Arctic animals have to turn themselves into pandas to cause concern.（that引导宾语从句）

[高分句型2]

Not only do the polar animals deserve care as much as pandas do, humans are also expected to reflect on themselves.（not only置于句首，使用部分倒装）

10．I will never forget how my friend Jack and I met.

One day in last summer holiday, my cousin and I were enjoying our sweet watermelon on the second floor. We ate and chatted without noticing a piece of watermelon peel slip onto the road below. A boy came and stepped right on it and fell. We didn’t even know it until we heard his cry. Having figured out what had happened, we rushed downstairs. I helped him up and was surprised to find that he was a boy with blue eyes and brown hair, a foreigner! He continued crying and it made us embarrassed. Suddenly, my cousin put a piece of watermelon in his hand and stopped the cry immediately. We looked at each other for a second and all burst out laughing. I invited him to go upstairs and he agreed happily.

From that day on, Jack and I became friends and we will never forget the day we met.

【分析】本篇书面表达属于记叙文，要求考生根据四图画内容记述和外国朋友Jack的相识经历。

【详解】词汇积累

注意到：see→notice

弄清楚：work out→figure out

立刻：at onece→immediately

突然 (哭、笑、唱) 起来：burst into→ burst out

2.句式拓展

原句：He continued crying and it made us embarrassed.

拓展句：He continued crying which made us embarrassed.

【点睛】[高分句型1] We didn’t even know it until we heard his cry. (until引导的时间状语从句)

[高分句型2] Having figured out what had happened, we rushed downstairs.  (现在分词短语作时间状语)