河南高考英语写作分类训练：感谢信

这是一份河南高考英语写作分类训练：感谢信，共17页。试卷主要包含了假如你是李华，高一生活快要结束，假定你是高三学生李华等内容，欢迎下载使用。
感谢信/祝贺信1．假设你叫李华，现在是北京大学的一名新生。请根据以下提示，给你高中的英语老师王老师写一封感谢信，表达对他的爱戴和尊敬。内容包括：1.对王老师教学的评价；2.回顾在校时你的心情；3.对老师的理解和祝愿。注意：1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.书信的开头与结尾已为你写好，但不计入总词数。Dear Mr. Wang,I’m very excited to write to express my thanks to you._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua2．假如你是李华，高一生活快要结束。请你用英语给你的美籍教师Grace写一封信，内容如下：1. 感谢师恩；2. 你们之间最难忘的一件事；3. 希望下学期还当她的学生。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头语及结尾已为你写好，不计入词数。Dear Grace,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours Sincerely,Li Hua3．假如你是李华，刚从英国旅游回来，你非常感谢好友Rick的款待。得知他对中国即将到来的端午节（the Dragon Boat Festival）感兴趣，请给他写封信，内容包括：1. 感谢Rick的款待；2. 介绍端午节（节日目的，庆祝活动等）；3. 欢迎他来中国。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．假定你是李华，你的英国好友Tom在中央电视台主办的汉字拼写大赛中获一等奖。请你给他写一封信。内容包括:1. 表示祝贺;2. 请他介绍经验;3. 盼复。注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节，以适行文连贯。Dear Tom,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua5．假如你是李华，高二生活快要结束，高三生活即将开始。同学多年，友情弥足珍贵，请你给你最喜欢的同学或者老师写一封信，要点如下：1.写信目的2.你们之间难忘的事情3.再次表示感谢与表达良好的祝愿注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头语及结尾已为你写好， 不计入词数。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6．假定你是高三学生李华。你作为交换生要到英国学习，你的好友Peter要去机场接你，却因天降大雪，航班取消。请你给Peter写一封电子邮件，要点如下：1. 说明原因；2. 另约时间；3. 表达感谢。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7．假定你是李华，来自美国的交换生Bruce结束了在你们学校的学习生活，已经返回美国。作为班长，你想写信感谢她一个学期以来带给大家的美好回忆。内容要点如下：1. 怀念与她相处的快乐时光2. 感谢她对大家英语学习的帮助3. 感谢她为班级捐赠的精美英文书籍4. 欢迎她有机会再来中国注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总数；3. 书信应包括以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。Dear Bruce,How about your life back in America?     _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerelyLi Hua8．假设你叫李华，现是武汉大学的一名新生。请你根据以下提示，给你中学的英语老师李老师写一封感谢信，表达对他的爱戴和尊敬。词数100左右。提示：1．对英语李老师教学的评价。2．回顾在校时你的心情。3．对老师的理解和祝愿。信的开头已经写好，但不计入总词数。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9．假定你是李华，今年二月你随父母去伦敦旅游。现因当时找回丢失的钱包，用英语给Steveston London Secondary School 的校长写一封感谢信，感谢该校拾金不昧的学生Alvin Hill。注意：1．词数100左右2．可以适当增加细节，简述丢失和找回钱包的过程，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：大英博物馆the British Museum护照passportDear Sir/ Madam,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua10．假定你是李华，作为交换生在一所英国学校交流学习。现在你即将回国，要作为学生代表在欢送会上发言，请按下列要点写一篇发言稿：1.表示感谢； 2.学习的收获和感受； 3.表达祝愿。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________    1．Dear Mr, Wang,I’m very excited to write to express my thanks to you. Are you still so busy? How much I miss you! I am now a freshman of Peking University, which I have been dreaming about. Mr. Wang, I still remember the days when you taught me English. My English has been improved greatly because of your creative work.At one time, the pressure of examinations, too much homework and the high expectations made me depressed. I was tired of the warning that if I didn’t do my best，I wouldn’t have the chance to go to college. Without your encouragement, I wouldn’t have realized my dream. And now I really understand you. I wish more of your students could go to their ideal colleges.Looking forward to hearing from you soon.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达要求写一封感谢信。假设你叫李华，现在是北京大学的一名新生。请根据以下提示，给你高中的英语老师王老师写一封感谢信，表达对他的爱戴和尊敬。内容包括：1.对王老师教学的评价；2.回顾在校时你的心情；3.对老师的理解和祝愿。【解析】根据写作要求进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【详解】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如I am now a freshman of Peking University, which I have been dreaming about. 以及Mr. Wang, I still remember the days when you taught me English.；使用了一些固定词组，如was tired of， look forward to等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。【点睛】书面表达考查大家所熟悉的提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来，动笔前一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，更不能跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体，写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。稳重巧妙地使用一些固定句式和过渡词语，不仅增强能够增加表达效果，而且能够实现形式和内容的统一。2．Dear Grace,Time flies! I’m writing to express my sincere gratitude to you for the concern you have shown for me this year.Unforgettably, you managed to help me with my study and always inspired me from time to time. Once I was nervous about the English speaking competition. When I was at a loss and on the point of giving up, you encouraged me to face it bravely. Thanks to your help, I won the first prize. I’m more than grateful for what you have done for me, from which I have benefited a lot. I hope to continue to be your student again next year. Wish you happiness and good health.Yours Sincerely,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。【详解】根据提示信息，你是李华，高一生活快要结束，用英语给你的美籍教师Grace写一封信。1.文章应使用第一人陈，主要使用一般过去时；2.重要短语：write to sb给某人写信；continue to do sth 继续做某事。3.根据文章写作要求，文章正文可以分为三大段：第一段表达出你对老师一年来对你的教育的感谢之情；第二段以回忆的形式描述你们之间发生的一件难忘的事；第三段表达你的期望----下学期还想当他的学生。4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，为文章增添色彩。注意使用连接词、衔接词，使文章自然、流畅。亮点说明本文内容完整，层次分明，语言规范，词数适当。文章使用了几个高分句型1. When I was at a loss and on the point of giving up, you encouraged me to face it bravely.此处是由when引导的时间状语从句。  2. I’m more than grateful for what you have done for me, from which I have benefited a lot.①what引导的宾语从句。②which引导的非限制性定语从句，且使用了“介词+关系代词”。此外还准确的使用了一些经典短语：from time to time，be nervous about，on the point of，more than。这些句式和短语的恰当运用，不仅为文章增色，还展示了作者具有较高的语言运用能力和较高的写作水平3．Dear Rick,How is everything going? Having known that you are interested in the Dragon Boat Festival, I am writing to tell you something specific about the festival and sincerely invite you to join my family in celebrating the festival.As a traditional festival originating in China, the Dragon Boat festival falls on the fifth day of the fifth month of the Chinese lunar calendar and is observed in memory of Qu Yuan, a patriotic poet in ancient times. During the festival, many activities are conducted such as racing dragon boats, drinking realgar wine and eating zongzi which is sticky rice wrapped in bamboo leaves. Since you have a passion for the festival, why not come and get exposed to the celebrations in the flesh? The tasty zongzi will definitely make your mouth water! In return for your considerate care during my trip in Britain, I will serve as a guide.I will feel more than delighted if you pay a visit to China. Looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua【详解】本文书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封书信。第1步：根据提示可知，本篇是一封书信：假如你是李华，刚从英国旅游回来，你非常感谢好友Rick的款待。得知他对中国即将到来的端午节（the Dragon Boat Festival）感兴趣，请给他写封信，内容包括：感谢Rick的款待；介绍端午节（节日目的，庆祝活等）欢迎他来中国。第2步：根据写作要求确定关键词，如：the Dragon Boat Festival（龙舟比赛）；the fifth month of the Chinese lunar calendar（中国阴历五月）；in memory of Qu Yuan（纪念屈原）；drinking realgar wine and eating zongzi（喝雄黄酒和吃粽子）等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态语态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。4．Dear Tom, I felt extremely excited on hearing that you have won the first prize in the Chinese character spelling contest held by CCTV 1. Here I’m writing to offer my sincerest congratulations to you. As your best friend, I take pride in you! Your proficiency in Chinese character as well as your deep dive into Chinese culture has left me a lasting impression. Besides, you have been working so hard these days. It came as no surprise that you won the contest. I wonder how you are able to have a good command of a foreign language. I really wish to improve my English, so could you please share with me your own experience and unique ideas on language learning?I wish you greater success in Chinese learning. Looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua【详解】此文为提纲类作文，文章的第一段可以简单交代写信的目的（听说得了第一名，表示祝贺。）第二段请教经验（如何学好外语）最后一段盼望回复。文章主要采用一般过去时（讲说获奖消息时）与一般现在时（请教经验时），人称可主要采用第二人称。亮点：文章条理清晰，结构紧凑，要点齐全，其中高级词汇的使用为文章增色不少，如：proficiency，deep dive into（形象生动），It came as no surprise，have a good command of文章过渡自然，使用 besides，so 等巧妙连接。5．Dear Mrs Zhang,I’m writing to express my sincere gratitude to you. You are the very person who gave me a hand when necessary.With the Midterm Examination around the corner, I was nervous and in low spirits, being afraid of letting my parents down because of my average academic performance. When I was at a loss and on the point of giving up, as my headteacher, you asked me to go to your office.Instead of blaming me, you comforted me and discussed with me the reasons for my failing in the exam. More unforgettably, you managed to help me with my study and always inspired me from time to time. Gradually, I learned how to adjust to myself and stayed calm in the exam.Mrs Zhang, I’m more than grateful for what you have done for me, from which I’ve got to know it is never too late to get back when there is still hope. Wish you happiness and good health.Yours Sincerely,Li Hua【详解】试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，话题是给你最喜欢的同学或者老师写一封信，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达。但是你的观点要自己组织，写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如in low spirits，because of，on the point of，from time to time，adjust to；还运用句型：You are the very person who gave me a hand when necessary.这句运定语从句，With the Midterm Examination around the corner, I was nervous and in low spirits, being afraid of letting my parents down because of my average academic performance.这句话运用了非谓语动词；Mrs Zhang, I’m more than grateful for what you have done for me, from which I’ve got to know it is never too late to get back when there is still hope.这句话运用了名词性从句和定语从句等。并注意了句子的衔接如with，when，as等等。6．Dear Peter,I’m more than glad to see you in the flesh. I’m writing to tell you something unexpected happened.Firstly, I regret to tell you that I can’t arrive at the airport as planned because of the violent snow, which has been lasting for two days and nights. Therefore all the roads are blocked and the flight I would have taken is canceled. Fortunately, I have booked anther ticket for next Wednesday. I hope you can pick me up then. Lastly, please accept my sincere thanks for your kind help, without which, I can’t imagine what trouble I would have since I have never been there before.Wish to see you very soon.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【详解】试题分析：本篇书面表达要求写一封电子邮件。内容包括：假定你是高三学生李华。你作为交换生要到英国学习，你的好友Peter要去机场接你，却因天降大雪，航班取消。要点较多，在写作时注意不要遗漏要点，同时还需要对要点进行细节上的补充，以使文章内容丰富，上下衔接。其次，注意时态选择上要使用一般现在时。最后，文章要注意语言简练、用词准确。【亮点说明】本篇范文结构紧凑，要点全面。文中运用了大量的短语，比如more than；because of；pick up等。还运用了一些高级句法，如Firstly, I regret to tell you that I can’t arrive at the airport as planned because of the violent snow, which has been lasting for two days and nights.和Lastly, please accept my sincere thanks for your kind help, without which, I can’t imagine what trouble I would have since I have never been there before.这两句话运用了定语从句。最后，文章注意了语句的衔接，如Firstly；Therefore；Lastly等连接词起到很好的连接上下文的作用，使文章读起来自然流畅，朗朗上口。7．Dear Bruce,How about your life back in America? I am writing to express our thanks to you on behalf of the class.We enjoyed the great time when you stayed here with us.During the last term, you helped us a lot in our English so we have made great progress with our English study. What’s more, all our classmates are very thankful to you for donating so many wonderful English books, which are surely very helpful in our study. We miss you and wish you a pleasant life in the US.Thank you again for your kindness and we are looking forward to your visiting China again.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【详解】首先审题，这篇文章要求假定你是李华，来自美国的交换生Bruce结束了在你们学校的学习生活，已经返回美国。作为班长，你想写信感谢她一个学期以来带给大家的美好回忆。任务中给出的提示信息包含如下内容：1. 怀念与她相处的快乐时光2. 感谢她对大家英语学习的帮助3. 感谢她为班级捐赠的精美英文书籍4. 欢迎她有机会再来中国。抓住了这亮点，我们就抓住了文章的核心内容。其次选用正确的人称和时态，考虑用一般过去时，第一人称来写。然后写出单个句子，使用正确的连词，连句成段。具体来说，写这篇文章时，要注意:  提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的短语，为文章增色不少，如: on behalf of代表，make great progress取得很大的进步。还使用了定语从句We enjoyed the great time when you stayed here with us.和定语从句What’s more, all our classmates are very thankful to you for donating so many wonderful English books, which are surely very helpful in our study.等多种句式结构，增加了文章的可读性。8．Dear Mr Li,I’m very excited to write to express my thanks to you. I am now a freshman of Wuhan University, which I have been dreaming about. Mr Li, I still remember the days when you taught me English. My English has been improved greatly because of your creative work. However, at one time, the pressure of examinations, too much homework and the high expectations made me depressed. I was tired of the warning that if I didn’t do my best, I wouldn’t have the chance to go to college. Thanks for your encouragement; if not, I wouldn’t have realized my dream. And now I really understand you. I wish more and more of your students could go to their ideal colleges. Are you still so busy?How I miss you!Hoping to hear from you soon.Yours,Li Hua【详解】这是一篇书信类作文，假设你叫李华，现是武汉大学的一名新生。根据题目所给提示，给你中学的英语老师李老师写一封感谢信，表达对他的爱戴和尊敬，所以要用第一人称来写。需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数120左右，不要太多也不要太少。亮点句子：Mr Li, I still remember the days when you taught me English.when引导定语从句修饰先行词the days。Thanks for your encouragement; if not, I wouldn’t have realized my dream.if not 是省略形式的虚拟语气。9．Dear Sir / Madam, I’m Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I’m now writing to convey my sincere thanks to one of your students for his kindness. In February, I, together with my parents, spent a delightful holiday in London, where we paid a visit to many world famous tourist attractions including the London Eye, Westminster Abbey, the Tower of London and the British Museum. One day, it took us a whole day to tour the British Museum. So enjoyable a time did we have that it was not until we went back to the hotel where we stayed that we realized my father’s wallet was missing. We were more than worried because in addition to a large sum of money, the wallet also contained our passports and air tickets. We were at a loss as for what to do when the manager of the hotel came, followed by a boy, who picked up the wallet by chance. We were so relieved and grateful. Later, we learned from the manager that he is a student from your school, named Alvin Hill. Again, I would like to express my heartfelt gratitude to him and the school he attends. Yours,Li Hua【详解】首先审题，用英语给Steveston London Secondary School 的校长写一封感谢信，感谢该校拾金不昧的学生Alvin Hill。任务中给出的提示信息包含如下内容：简述丢失和找回钱包的过程。抓住了这亮点，我们就抓住了文章的核心内容。其次选用正确的人称和时态，考虑用一般过去时，第一人称来写。然后写出单个句子，使用正确的连词，连句成段。具体来说，写这篇文章时，要注意:  1、提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充；  2、为使文章层次清楚，可分三个自然段写：第一自然段说明自己写信的目的；第二自然段叙述事情的经过；第三自然段再次表达自己的感谢之情。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的短语，为文章增色不少，如: together with和，pick up捡起。还使用了定语从句In February, I, together with my parents, spent a delightful holiday in London, where we paid a visit to many world famous tourist attractions including the London Eye, Westminster Abbey, the Tower of London and the British Museum.和定语从句We were at a loss as for what to do when the manager of the hotel came, followed by a boy, who picked up the wallet by chance.等多种句式结构，增加了文章的可读性。10．Dear teachers and friends,I feel greatly honored to give a speech here on behalf of all the exchange students.Living and studying here makes us very fulfilled. During our stay, we have a better understanding of the British life, culture, society and so on, which have not only enriched our knowledge but also broadened our horizon. Apart from that, our abilities including listening, speaking and writing English have also got greatly improved. And it is all the English teachers and classmates here that we should owe many thanks to. Without their help, we couldn’t have achieved so much.True friendship never ends, so I hope we can keep in touch with each other even after we go back home. And I also sincerely hope that someday you can come to China for a visit.That’s all! Thank you!【详解】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求作为学生代表在欢送会上发言，写一篇发言稿。第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和现在完成时。结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1.表示感谢； 2.学习的收获和感受； 3.表达祝愿。第二步：列提纲（重点词组）strengthen English listening and speaking; be an expert in; with the help of; increase the awareness of; improve English; put forward; look forward tofeel greatly honored; give a speech; on behalf of; exchange students; fulfilled; have a better understanding of the British life, culture, society; enrich our knowledge; broaden our horizon; get greatly improved; friendship; keep in touch; go back home第三步：连词成句1. I feel greatly honored to give a speech here on behalf of all the exchange students.2. Living and studying here makes us very fulfilled. 3. During our stay, we have a better understanding of the British life, culture, society and so on, which have not only enriched our knowledge but also broadened our horizon. 4. Apart from that, our abilities including listening, speaking and writing English have also got greatly improved. 5. And it is all the English teachers and classmates here that we should owe many thanks to. 6. Without their help, we couldn’t have achieved so much.7. True friendship never ends, so I hope we can keep in touch with each other even after we go back home. 8. And I also sincerely hope that someday you can come to China for a visit.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last（供参考）2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,（供参考）3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…（供参考）4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result（供参考）连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。【点睛】[高分句型1] During our stay, we have a better understanding of the British life, culture, society and so on, which have not only enriched our knowledge but also broadened our horizon.（运用定语从句）[高分句型2] And I also sincerely hope that some day you can come to China for a visit.（运用宾语从句）[高分句型3] Living and studying here makes us very fulfilled.（非谓语动词做主语）