河南高考英语写作分类训练:邀请信
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这是一份河南高考英语写作分类训练:邀请信,共20页。试卷主要包含了假定你是李华,在伦敦做交换生,对演讲效果的期望;,商谈具体事宜等内容,欢迎下载使用。
邀请信
1.假定你是李华,在伦敦做交换生。你校学生会主席Linda想让你做一次关于中国传统文化的演讲。请你给她写封邮件,内容包括:
1.接受邀请;
2.对演讲效果的期望;
3.商谈具体事宜。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
Dear Linda,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
2.假定你是李华,你们班的外教Mr. Smith任教结束且将于下周六回国,你们班将为他举办一场欢送会。请你给他写封邮件邀请他参加,内容包括:
1.欢送会的时间和地点;
2.欢送会的主要内容。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:欢送会farewell party
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3.假定你是李华,想邀请你的交换生朋友Linda参加学校举办的中国民族舞培训班,请你给她写封邮件,内容包括:
1.写信目的;
2.活动介绍;
3.期待回复。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已经给出,但不计入总词数;
3.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Linda,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
4.假如你是李华,河南省博物院将举办“明清主题书画展”。请你给你的英国交换生朋友Alice写一封邮件,邀请她参加,内容包括:
1. 展览的时间和地点
2. 展览主题和目的
3. 期待回复
参考词汇:书画展:painting and calligraphy exhibition
注意:1.词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头和结尾已经给出,但是不计入总词数;
Dear Alice,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
5.假如你是李华,你校即将迎来建校120周年的庆祝活动。请给你校爱好摄影的外教Jonny发一封电子邮件,邀请他和你一起拍摄一个短片,为校庆献礼。内容包括:
1. 拍摄短片的目的;2. 短片的内容;3. 拍摄的时间和地点。
参考词汇:拍摄shoot
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 信的开头和结束语已为你写好。
Dear Jonny,
Our school will have the 120th anniversary celebration of its founding.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours truly,
Li Hua
6.假定你是高中生李华,洛阳将迎来河洛旅游节(Loyang Heluo Culture tourism Festival)。你的英国朋友Peter对此非常感兴趣。请你给他发封电子邮件,邀请他来参加旅游节活动,并告诉他旅游节的时间、地点、活动等相关信息。具体安排如下:
1. 时间:11月12日至19日;
2. 地点:洛阳会展中心广场(Luoyang Convention and Exhibition Center);
1. 活动:文艺展演(Cultural Performances)、彩虹跑(Rainbow Run)、美食节(Food Festival)等。
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7.假定你是李华,你校将于11月1日在学校会议厅举行家长会。请给所有学生家长写一封公开信,邀请其参加。内容包括:
1.时间和地点;
2.内容和目的;
3.希望参加。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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8.假定你是李华,为全面迎接开学你市将邀请钟南山院士参加有关“抗疫”知识的在线讲座。请写信通知目前在某酒店隔离的你校英国留学生Johnny参加,内容包括:
1.写信目的;2.主讲人简介;3.时间和方式:下周三上午9点到11点,钉钉(Ding Talk)在线。
参考词汇:COVID-19新型冠状病毒;anti-epidemic防疫
注意:1.词数100左右;2.开头和结尾已为你写好。
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9.你所在的学生会打算成立“英语电影爱好者联盟(English Movie Lovers Union)”。请你代表学生会给外教Allen写封邮件,内容包括:
1. 成立联盟的原因;
2. 开展活动的时间、地点和内容;
3. 邀请他加入并指导。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头和结束语已为你写好。
Dear Allen,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
The Students’ Union
10.假定你是李华,你们学校邀请你的叔叔,一位海外归来研究5G技术的博士给你们做了励志报告,听完后你感触很深。请给他写一封祝贺信告诉他你的感想。内容要点:
1. 祝贺他学成归来
2. 你的感受和打算
Dear Uncle,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
1.Dear Linda,
I am honored for being invited to give a speech on Chinese traditional culture and I am delighted to accept your invitation.
It makes me happy to hear that there will be more than 500 participants to the meeting.I hope I will be able to promote the communication between our two countries by introducing Chinese traditional culture and helping English students understand it.
I need to know what specific information they want to know and I need some time to get prepared.So we'd better have a discussion about it when it is convenient for you.
Looking forward to your early reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给学生会主席Linda写一封邮件,内容是就你校学生会主席Linda想让你做一次关于中国传统文化的演讲做出答复。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要应为一般现在时。
结构:总分法
总分法是指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1.接受邀请;
2.对演讲效果的期望;
3.商谈具体事宜。
第二步:列提纲(重点词组)
give a speech;be delighted to do sth.;more than;be able to;want to do;had better do;have a discussion about;look forward to
第三步:连词成句
1.I am honored for being invited to give a speech on Chinese traditional culture and I am delighted to accept your invitation.
2.It makes me happy to hear that there will be more than 500 participants to the meeting.
3.I hope I will be able to promote the communication between our two countries by introducing Chinese traditional culture and helping English students understand it.
4.I need to know what specific information they want to know and I need some time to get prepared.
5.We'd better have a discussion about it when it is convenient for you.
6.Looking forward to your early reply!
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态的问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
表因果关系: So
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
第五步:润色修改
【点睛】[高分句型1]
It makes me happy to hear that there will be more than 500 participants to the meeting.(that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2]
I need to know what specific information they want to know and I need some time to get prepared.(what引导宾语从句,they want to know为省略了that的定语从句)
2.Dear Mr. Smith,
Having learned that you will go back to your country next Saturday, our class is going to hold a farewell party for you. Therefore, I, on behalf of the class, am writing to invite you to attend the party.
The party, which will be held in our class, will start at 4:00 pm next Wednesday. To express our thanks for your excellent teaching and great consideration, we students have prepared some programs for you, such as singing, dancing and poetry recitation. Besides, some of us will give you some special gifts.
We are sure that this wonderful time will leave in our memory forever. We're looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给外教Mr. Smith写封邮件,邀请他参加你们班为他举办的欢送会。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1.欢送会的时间和地点;
2.欢送会的主要内容。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
a farewell party; on behalf of; invite sb. to do sth.; attend; express one’s thanks; excellent; consideration; prepare; such as; special; memory; look forward to
第三步:连词成句
1. Having learned that you will go back to your country next Saturday, our class is going to hold a farewell party for you.
2. Therefore, I, on behalf of the class, am writing to invite you to attend the party.
3. The party, which will be held in our class, will start at 4:00 pm next Wednesday.
4. To express our thanks for your excellent teaching and great consideration, we students have prepared some programs for you, such as singing, dancing and poetry recitation.
5. Besides, some of us will give you some special gifts.
6. We are sure that this wonderful time will leave in our memory forever.
7. We're looking forward to your coming.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表并列补充关系:Besides
2.表因果关系:Therefore
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] Having learned that you will go back to your country next Saturday, our class is going to hold a farewell party for you. (运用了that引导宾语从句和现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] The party, which will be held in our class, will start at 4:00 pm next Wednesday. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
3.Dear Linda,
How is everything going? I'm writing to sincerely invite you to participate in the training course of Chinese folk dance organized by our school. The details are as follows.
With the intention of adding fun to our school life, as well as arousing our interest in folk culture, this training course is offered as a perfect opportunity to experience the beauty of dance in person. By attending the course once a week, you will be able to not only shape your body, but also have a better understanding of Chinese culture. What’s more, there will be various kinds of activities to enjoy, such as appreciating dance masters’ performances, attending lectures themed folk dance, to name a few. I guarantee that once you come, you will never regret.
Your early reply will be highly appreciated.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给交换生朋友Linda写封邮件,邀请她参加学校举办的中国民族舞培训班。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1. 说明写信目的;
2. 进行活动介绍;
3. 表达回复期待。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
invite you to participate in; Chinese folk dance organized by our school; as follows; with the intention of; as well as; arouse our interest; as a perfect opportunity; in person; be able to; shape your body; various kinds of; appreciate dance masters’ performances; to name a few
第三步:连词成句
1.I'm writing to sincerely invite you to participate in the training course of Chinese folk dance organized by our school.
2.With the intention of adding fun to our school life, as well as arousing our interest in folk culture, this training course is offered as a perfect opportunity to experience the beauty of dance in person.
3.What’s more, there will be various kinds of activities to enjoy, such as appreciating dance masters’ performances, attending lectures themed folk dance, to name a few.
4.Your early reply will be highly appreciated.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
表并列补充关系:What’s more, as well as, not only…but (also)
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] With the intention of adding fun to our school life, as well as arousing our interest in folk culture, this training course is offered as a perfect opportunity to experience the beauty of dance in person.(含有with复合结构和被动语态及to do不定式作后置定语)
[高分句型2] I guarantee that once you come, you will never regret.(宾语从句中包含条件状语从句)
4.参考范文:
Dear Alice,
How is everything going with you? Knowing that you are keen on our traditional Chinese culture, I am writing to invite you to take part in/participate in a special painting and calligraphy exhibition of Qing and Ming Dynasties to be held in Henan Museum. Some relevant information is as follows.
As we know, Ming and Qing Dynasties are great periods when there were a great number of artists who produced numerous masterpieces on paintings and calligraphy. Targeted at arousing people’s interest in traditional Chinese culture and enriching our cultural life, Henan Museum has organized this meaningful activity. As scheduled, the exhibition will take place from Nov, 20th to Nov, 26th, lasting for one week. What deserves to be mentioned is that the museum will be open at 9:00 am and close at 6:00 pm. You have my guarantee that you will benefit a lot from this activity.
If you have any question about it, please don’t hesitate to contact me. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua.
【分析】本篇书面表达是应用文。要求考生以李华的名义邀请英国交换生朋友Alice参加河南博物院即将举办的“明清主题书画展”。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1. 展览的时间和地点
2. 展览主题和目的
3. 期待回复
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
be keen on; invite sb. to do sth.; take part in; as fellow; a number of; take place; benefit…from; hesitate to do sth; look forward to
第三步:连词成句
1.Knowing that you are keen on our traditional Chinese culture, I am writing to invite you to take part in/participate in a special painting and calligraphy exhibition of Qing and Ming Dynasties to be be held in Henan Museum.
2.Some relevant information is as follows.
3.As we know, Ming and Qing Dynasties are great periods when there were a great number of artists who produced numerous masterpieces on paintings and calligraphy.
4.Targeted at arousing people’s interest in traditional Chinese culture and enriching our cultural life, Henan Museum has organized this meaningful activity.
5.As scheduled, the exhibition will take place from Nov, 20th to Nov, 26th, lasting for one week.
6.What deserves to be mentioned is that the museum will be open at 9:00 am and close at 6:00 pm.
7.You have my guarantee that you will benefit a lot from this activity.
8.If you have any question about it, please don’t hesitate to contact me.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)(推荐使用)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore,
3.表转折对比关系: but, Although+clause(从句)
4.表因果关系:Because, As, Therefore, As a result
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
【点睛】[高分句型1] Knowing that you are keen on our traditional Chinese culture, I am writing to invite you to take part in/participate in a special painting and calligraphy exhibition of Qing and Ming Dynasties to be held in Henan Museum.句中使用了现在分词作状语,that引导的宾语从句和不定式作后置定语。
[高分句型2] As we know, Ming and Qing Dynasties are great periods when there were a great number of artists who produced numerous masterpieces on paintings and calligraphy.本句使用as引导非限制定语从句;when引导限定性定语从句修饰名词periods;who引导限定性定语从句修饰名词artists。
[高分句型3]What deserves to be mentioned is that the museum will be open at 9:00 am and close at 6:00 pm.句中what引导主语从句,that引导表语从句。
5.One possible version:
Dear Jonny,
Our school will have the 120th anniversary celebration of its founding. Hearing the news, I am so excited that I can’t wait to invite you to shoot a video with me in celebration of this significant day.
In the video, we are expected to recall what we have experienced here and how we feel about our school. What’s more, some students will be invited to express their best wishes and blessing in both Chinese and English, wishing our school a brighter future. I plan to shoot the video from 8 am to 10 am next Friday at the cherry garden. If it is convenient for you, please arrive on time.
I would appreciate it if you could accept my invitation. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给爱好摄影的外教Jonny发一封电子邮件,邀请他和你一起拍摄一个短片,为120周年校庆献礼。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时和一般过去时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1. 拍摄短片的目的;
2. 短片的内容;
3. 拍摄的时间和地点。
第二步:列提纲(重点词组)
invite you to shoot a video; celebration; in the video; recall; best wishes and blessing; next Friday at the cherry garden; arrive; appreciate
第三步:连词成句
1. Hearing the news, I am so excited that I can’t wait to invite you to shoot a video with me in celebration of this significant day.
2. In the video, we are expected to recall what we have experienced here and how we feel about our school.
3. What’s more, some students will be invited to express their best wishes and blessing in both Chinese and English, wishing our school a brighter future.
4. I plan to shoot the video from 8 am to 10 am next Friday at the cherry garden.
5. If it is convenient for you, please arrive on time.
6. I would appreciate it if you could accept my invitation. Looking forward to your early reply.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
表并列补充关系:What’s more
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] Hearing the news, I am so excited that I can’t wait to invite you to shoot a video with me in celebration of this significant day.(运用了现在分词做状语及so…that句型)
[高分句型2] In the video, we are expected to recall what we have experienced here and how we feel about our school.(运用了what及how引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型3] I would appreciate it if you could accept my invitation.(运用了固定句型)
6.Dear Peter,
It seems ages since we last met and ever since I have been wondering when we can get together again. Now, here comes an opportunity. Our city is going to hold the annual Loyang Heluo Culture Tourism Festival. Considering that you show enormous interest in it, I sincerely invite you to participate in it.
As scheduled, it will start on November 12th and last for 3 days. It is on the square beside Luoyang Convention and Exhibition Center that the activity will take place. During the festival, a wide range of activities are included, such as Cultural Performances, Rainbow Run, Food Festival and so on. It can be said with certainty that all these activities will be beyond your imagination and leave an everlasting impression on you. Besides, by attending these activities, you can have a better understanding of our city and Chinese culture. So I strongly hope that you can come and join us.
Words fail to express my desperate anticipation of your coming and I bet we will definitely have a wonderful time. Waiting for your good news.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封邮件,邀请朋友来参加文化旅游节及介绍相关情况。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构:总分总
要求:1.发出邀请,请他来参加旅游节活动。
2. 告诉他旅游节的时间、地点、活动等相关信息。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
It seems ages since …, comes an opportunity,hold the annual Loyang Heluo Culture Tourism Festival,show enormous interest in,participate in ,As scheduled,It is …that…,on the square,Luoyang Convention and Exhibition Center,a wide range of activities ,It can be said with certainty that,beyond your imagination ,leave an everlasting impression on you,have a better understanding of,strongly hope that,Words fail to express my desperate anticipation of 。
第三步:连词成句
1.It seems ages since we last met .
2.Ever since I have been wondering when we can get together again.
3.Now, here comes an opportunity.
4.Our city is going to hold the annual Loyang Heluo Culture Tourism Festival.
5.You show enormous interest in it.
6 I sincerely invite you to participate in it.
7.As scheduled, it will start on November 12th and last for 3 days.
8.It is on the square beside Luoyang Convention and Exhibition Center that the activity will take place.
9.A wide range of activities are included, such as Cultural Performances, Rainbow Run, Food Festival and so on.
10.It can be said with certainty that all these activities will be beyond your imagination and leave an everlasting impression on you.
11.Besides, by attending these activities, you can have a better understanding of our city and Chinese culture.
12.I strongly hope that you can come and join us.
13.Words fail to express my desperate anticipation of your coming.
14. I bet we will definitely have a wonderful time.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
该范文中明显的衔接词只有besides、so 两个词。但全文条理清晰、语篇连贯、段落间过渡自然。
第五步:润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句,如:…ever since I have been wondering when we can get together again.这句话运用了when引导的宾语从句。使用了一些固定词组,如show enormous interest in 、participate in 、beyond your imagination、 leave an everlasting impression on 、have a better understanding of 等。全文中使用地道英语表达,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,巧妙使用高级词汇enormous、participate in、 definitely等,为文章增色添彩。
7.One possible version:
Dear Parents,
On behalf of the Guangming International School, I am informing you of the coming parent-teacher meeting, which will be held on 1st November in our school meeting hall. Please accept our sincere invitation.
The purpose of the meeting is to strengthen the ties between parents and teachers, let parents know better about the students’academic situation and introduce our school’s teaching methods. The teachers will discuss with you about your child's performance at school. Your child needs an extra push from parents at home.
We hope that we have given you adequate time to organize your schedule for this meeting and that we can get a positive response from you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给所有学生家长写一封公开信,邀请其参加学校家长会。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:写作内容需包括:1.时间和地点;2.内容和目的;3.希望参加。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
On behalf of; inform of; discuss with; get a positive response from sb.
第三步:连词成句
1.On behalf of the Guangming International School, I am informing you of the coming parent-teacher meeting, which will be held on 1st November in our school meeting hall.
2.Please accept our sincere invitation.
3.The purpose of the meeting is to strengthen the ties between parents and teachers, let parents know better about the students’academic situation and introduce our school’s teaching methods.
4.The teachers will discuss with you about your child's performance at school.
5.Your child needs an extra push from parents at home.
6.We hope that we have given you adequate time to organize your schedule for this meeting and that we can get a positive response from you.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
第五步:润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句,如:On behalf of the Guangming International School, I am informing you of the coming parent-teacher meeting, which will be held on 1st November in our school meeting hall. 这句话运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句;文章也使用了一些固定词组,如inform of; discuss with; get a positive response from sb.等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
8.Dear Johnny,
How are you doing these days? In order to welcome the opening of the new semester, our city will invite academician Zhong Nanshan to give an online speech on anti-epidemic. So I’m writing to tell you something about it.
As is known to all, academician Zhong Nanshan led the Chinese people to achieve great success in the fight against COVID-19. In view of this, the school will organize students to learn the knowledge of anti-epidemic through Ding Talk from 9 am to 11 am next Wednesday.
I believe covid-19 will surely be over and we will have a brighter future.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生邀请目前在某酒店隔离的你校英国留学生Johnny参加为全面迎接开学而举行的钟南山院士有关“抗疫”知识的在线讲座,内容包括:1.写信目的;2.主讲人简介;3.时间和方式:下周三上午9点到11点,钉钉(Ding Talk)在线。
【详解】1.词汇积累
发表在线演讲:give an online speech→deliver an online speech
实现:achieve→realize
鉴于、考虑到:in view of→in consideration of
当然:surely→certainly
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:In order to welcome the opening of the new semester, our city will invite academician Zhong Nanshan to give an online speech on anti-epidemic.
拓展句:Our city will invite academician Zhong Nanshan to give an online speech on anti-epidemic, whose purpose is to welcome the opening of the new semester.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As is known to all, academician Zhong Nanshan led the Chinese people to achieve great success in the fight against COVID-19. (运用了As引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】I believe covid-19 will surely be over and we will have a brighter future. (运用了that(已省)引导宾语从句)
9.Dear Allen,
To help students learn about English culture and arouse their interest in English learning, the Students’ Union intends to set up English Movie Lovers Union.
We’ll gather in our school hall every Saturday, when various activities will be organized, such as watching English movies, writing movie reviews, etc.
On behalf of the Students’ Union, I’m honored to warmly invite you to join and guide us. I hold the strong belief that your participation will definitely inspire us all to know more about English culture and become more interested in learning and using English and thus work harder at English. We sincerely expect your coming at 6:00 pm this Saturday. Thank you.
The Students’ Union
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生代表学生会给外教Allen写封邮件,向他介绍“英语电影爱好者联盟(English Movie Lovers Union)”的基本情况并邀请他加入。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:写作内容应包括以下几点:1. 成立联盟的原因;2. 开展活动的时间、地点和内容;3. 邀请他加入并指导。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
learn about; set up; on behalf of; be honored to
第三步:连词成句
1.To help students learn about English culture and arouse their interest in English learning, the Students’ Union intends to set up English Movie Lovers Union.
2.We’ll gather in our school hall every Saturday, when various activities will be organized, such as watching English movies, writing movie reviews, etc.
3.On behalf of the Students’ Union, I’m honored to warmly invite you to join and guide us.
4.I hold the strong belief that your participation will definitely inspire us all to know more about English culture and become more interested in learning and using English and thus work harder at English.
5.We sincerely expect your coming at 6:00 pm this Saturday.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
第五步:润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多高级句型,如:We’ll gather in our school hall every Saturday, when various activities will be organized, such as watching English movies, writing movie reviews, etc.这句话运用了when引导的时间状语从句;本文也使用了一些固定词组,如set up; on behalf of; be honored to等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
10.Dear Uncle,
Inspired by your instructive speech, I am writing to offer my sincerest congratulations on your returning from abroad and working for our country.
Firstly I just want you to know how lucky I am to share your pride in that you are recognized as an outstanding doctor doing research on the technology of 5G, which is at the forefront of the modern science. Besides, what moves me most is that you decided to give up living abroad and chose to serve our motherland. Your devotion to science and love for China has set a good example to me. I’ve made up my mind to study hard and become a greatman just like you to make great contributions to ourcountry.
I wish you great success in your newcareer. Looking forward to hearing good news from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。
【详解】第一步:明确要求。本篇书面表达要求假定你是李华,你们学校邀请你的叔叔,一位海外归来研究5G技术的博士给你们做了励志报告,听完后你感触很深。请给他写一封祝贺信告诉他你的感想。内容要点:1. 祝贺他学成归来;2. 你的感受和打算。
第二步:列关键词。如:be recognized as,do research on,at the forefront of,decide to,give up,set a good example to,make up my mind to,make great contributions to等。
第三步:连词成句。根据列出的关键词造句,注意主谓一致,时态语态等语法。
第四步:连句成文。注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,如:Firstly 、Besides等。书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】此范文表达流畅,语言优美,内容全面,符合题目要求。其中值得学习的句型有:非谓语动词作状语:Inspired by your instructive speech, I am writing to offer my sincerest congratulations on your returning from abroad and working for our country.非限定性定语从句:Firstly I just want you to know how lucky I am to share your pride in that you are recognized as an outstanding doctor doing research on the technology of 5G, which is at the forefront of the modern science.名词性从句:Besides, what moves me most is that you decided to give up living abroad and chose to serve our motherland.
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