浙江高考英语写作分类训练：建议信

这是一份浙江高考英语写作分类训练：建议信，共21页。试卷主要包含了假设你是李华等内容，欢迎下载使用。
建议信
1．假定你是李华，你的爱尔兰朋友James不久前跟随父母来中国，就读于某国际学校。最近他因为难以适应学校生活而感到沮丧，写信向你求助。请你用英语给他写封邮件，给予回复。内容包括：
1.表示安慰；
2.提出建议；
3.表达祝愿。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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2．假如你是李华 ，你的美国朋友Jim今年冬天将会有一个较长的假期，关于假期计划向你寻求建议。请你给他写一封信，包含以下要点：
1.写信目的；2.提出建议并说明理由；3.表达祝福
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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3．假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Mike即将完成学业，不久前来信就是否到中国工作询问你的意见。请根据以下提示回一封电子邮件：
1.建议他可以来中国；
2.阐述你的理由（就业机会多；专业受欢迎；不同的文化体验等）；
3.承诺可提供帮助。
注意：
1.词数80字左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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4．假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Jim今年冬天将会有一个较长的假期，关于假期计划向你寻求建议。请你给他写一封信，包含以下要点：
1.写信目的；
2.提出建议并说明理由；
3.表达祝福。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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5．假设你是一所国际高中的高一学生李华，由于看到很多同学因为学习而忽略(ignore)了体育(physical)锻炼，你打算给学校校长Mr. Smith写一封信，号召同学们加强体育锻炼，注重身体健康。写作要点：1.写信的原因；2.运动对大家的好处；3.你的建议：学生应该重视锻炼；学校每天给出20分钟锻炼时间。
注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am Li Hua, a student in Grade One.
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6．假设你是李华。你班的英国交换生Jim对中华传统文化感兴趣，准备下学期选修一门相关课程，向你征询建议。请你给Jim写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.推荐一门选修课；
2.说明推荐的理由；
3.提出学习这门课程的建议。
注意：1、词数100左右；
2、可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
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7．假设你是李明，你发现部分同学每次遇到重要考试，都会出现焦虑症状。请你用英语写一封信，向某学生报英文编辑反映该问题并提出建议。信的内容包括下列要点：
1焦虑症状：睡眠不好,食欲不振2.睡前制定合适的复习计划3.考试期间正常休息4.睡前洗热水澡喝热牛奶有助睡眠。
注意：1字数80词左右
2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
3开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数
8．假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Jack来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文，请你就此问题给他回一封建议信，内容主要包括：
1.写信目的
2.提出建议
3.表达愿望.
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
Dear Jack,
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9．假定你是李华,得知你的英国好友James对中国的美食非常感兴趣。请根据以下要点,用英语给他写一封邮件。 内容包括:
1.介绍中国美食的特点；
2.推荐一种中国美食；
3.建议品尝。
注意:
1.词数80左右;               
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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10．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Mike给你写了一封电子邮件，说他现在汉语学得不够好，不知道如何提高。请你给他回复一封电子邮件，提一些关于如何学好汉语的建议。内容如下：
1.邮件已收到；
2.建议课内外多说、多看、多听汉语；
3.建议与同学之间进行汉字听写比赛等。











1． Dear James,
I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble adapting to your new school life in China, but this situation can be easily changed if you take my advice.
Firstly, you should work hard at Chinese,which can give you more opportunities to communicate with others. Secondly, why not make some friends? They can help you to know more about Chinese,and friendship can help you to forget your loneliness.Thirdly,it would be a good idea if you take an active part in all kinds of activities,which will help to make life more interesting.By doing this,you will be happier with your new life soon.
I hope you will find these ideas useful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。James不久前跟随父母来中国，就读于某国际学校。最近他因为难以适应学校生活而感到沮丧，要求考生给爱尔兰朋友James用英语写封邮件安慰他并提出相应的建议。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时为主，少量现在进行时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.表示安慰；
2.提出建议；
3.表达祝愿。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
hear that, have trouble doing sth., adapt to, take one's advice, work hard , communicate with, make friends, forget loneliness, take an active part in
第三步：连词成句
1.I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble adapting to your new school life in China, but this situation can be easily changed if you take my advice.
2.You should work hard at Chinese,which can give you more opportunities to communicate with others.
3.They can help you to know more about Chinese,and friendship can help you to forget your loneliness.
4.It would be a good idea if you take an active part in all kinds of activities,which will help to make life more interesting.
5.I hope you will find these ideas useful.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
表文章结构顺序： Firstly, Secondly, Thirdly
表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result （供参考）
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
【点睛】【高分句型1】
I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble adapting to your new school life in China, but this situation can be easily changed if you take my advice.（使用that引导的宾语从句和if引导的条件状语从句）
【高分句型2】
Secondly, making some friends will be surely benefit you and can help you to know more about Chinese.（使用动名词短语作主语）
【高分句型3】
Thirdly,it would be a good idea if you take an active part in all kinds of activities,which will help to make life more interesting.（使用which引导的非限制性定语从句）
2．Dear Jim,
   I’ve learned that you have a long vacation this winter, but you have no idea how to plan it. Here are some tips for you.
   First, it is a good idea to have a nice trip, which will help you to relax completely from the long period of pressure caused by study. Second, you are supposed to make full use of this holiday to learn some skills, such as swimming, cooking and so on. All these skills will benefit you a lot in your life. Finally, you were so busy with your study that you ignored your parents. Therefore, this is a good chance to keep them company.
   All above is my advice. I expect you will have a happy and meaningful vacation.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给美国朋友Jim写封信，就假期计划向他提出一些建议。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时，一般过去时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.写信目的；
2.提出建议并说明理由；
3.表达祝福。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
have no idea; tips; have a nice trip; period; be supposed to; make full use of; skills; such as; benefit; busy with; ignore; therefore; chance; keep sb. company; advice; meaningful
第三步：连词成句
1. I’ve learned that you have a long vacation this winter, but you have no idea how to plan it.
2. Here are some tips for you.
3. First, it is a good idea to have a nice trip, which will help you to relax completely from the long period of pressure caused by study.
4. Second, you are supposed to make full use of this holiday to learn some skills, such as swimming, cooking and so on.
5. All these skills will benefit you a lot in your life.
6. Finally, you were so busy with your study that you ignored your parents.
7. Therefore, this is a good chance to keep them company.
8. All above is my advice.
9. I expect you will have a happy and meaningful vacation.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First, Second, Finally
2.表转折对比关系：but
3.表因果关系：Therefore
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] First, it is a good idea to have a nice trip, which will help you to relax completely from the long period of pressure caused by study. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] This is a good chance to keep your parents company because you were so busy with your study that you ignored them. (运用了because引导原因状语从句)
3．Dear Mike,
I'm glad to learn that you are considering working in China after graduation. It's really a wise decision. First of all, China ’s economy has strong stability and the Chinese market will provide a large number of employment opportunities. Second, with the continuous development of e-commerce platform, your major e-commerce is very popular. In addition, you will experience the unique Chinese culture. In view of the above reasons, I welcome you to China and am willing to provide help at any time.
Looking forward to seeing you in China.                              
                                                                        Yours,
Lihua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给笔友Mike写封邮件，就毕业后来中国工作这一问题给出建议。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时,少量现在进行时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.建议他可以来中国；
2.阐述你的理由（就业机会多；专业受欢迎；不同的文化体验等）；
3.承诺可提供帮助。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
after graduation ；look forward to；a large number of employment opportunities；with the continuous development of；be willing to do；at any time；in view of
第三步：连词成句
1. I'm glad to learn that you are considering working in China after graduation.
2. First of all, China ’s economy has strong stability and the Chinese market will provide a large number of employment opportunities.
3. Second, with the continuous development of e-commerce platform, your major e-commerce is very popular.
4. In addition, you will experience the unique Chinese culture.
5. In view of the above reasons, I welcome you to China and am willing to provide help at any time.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Second，In addition
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also)（供参考）
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing（供参考）
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result （供参考）
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] I'm glad to learn that you are considering working in China after graduation.得知你正考虑毕业后来中国工作我很高兴。（运用that引导的宾语从句和动名词作宾语）
[高分句型2]I strongly recommend that you should come to China to find a job.（运用should do形式的虚拟语气）
4．Dear Jim,
   I’ve learned that you have a long vacation this winter, but you have no idea how to plan it. Here are some tips for you.
   First, it is a good idea to have a nice trip, which will help you to relax completely from the long period of pressure caused by study. Second, you are supposed to make full use of this holiday to learn some skills, such as swimming, cooking and so on. All these skills will benefit you a lot in your life. Finally, you were so busy with your study that you ignored your parents. Therefore, this is a good chance to keep them company.
   All above is my advice. I expect you will have a happy and meaningful vacation.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给美国朋友Jim写封信，就假期计划向他提出一些建议。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时，一般过去时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.写信目的；
2.提出建议并说明理由；
3.表达祝福。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
have no idea; tips; have a nice trip; period; be supposed to; make full use of; skills; such as; benefit; busy with; ignore; therefore; chance; keep sb. company; advice; meaningful
第三步：连词成句
1. I’ve learned that you have a long vacation this winter, but you have no idea how to plan it.
2. Here are some tips for you.
3. First, it is a good idea to have a nice trip, which will help you to relax completely from the long period of pressure caused by study.
4. Second, you are supposed to make full use of this holiday to learn some skills, such as swimming, cooking and so on.
5. All these skills will benefit you a lot in your life.
6. Finally, you were so busy with your study that you ignored your parents.
7. Therefore, this is a good chance to keep them company.
8. All above is my advice.
9. I expect you will have a happy and meaningful vacation.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First, Second, Finally
2.表转折对比关系：but
3.表因果关系：Therefore
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] First, it is a good idea to have a nice trip, which will help you to relax completely from the long period of pressure caused by study. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] This is a good chance to keep your parents company because you were so busy with your study that you ignored them. (运用了because引导原因状语从句)
5．Dear Mr. Smith,
I am Li Hua, a student in Grade One. Seeing many students ignore exercise because of their study, I have decided to write to you, hoping that our school can call on students to do more physical exercise.
As we know, good health is important to everyone. Apparently, good health comes from exercise. With enough exercise, not only can we stay health, but also feel energetic every day.
As far as I am concerned, we students should be educated to attach more importance to physical exercise. As high school students, we have to study hard and take many important exams, which may make us feel nervous. So it’s necessary to take exercise regularly to help release stress. Besides, we should be given more time. Sometimes we do want to take exercise, but our time is limited. Therefore, I strongly suggest that our school set aside 20 minutes every day for us to exercise.
Thank you for your reading. I’d appreciate it if you take my advice into consideration.
Yours,
Li Hua.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给校长Mr. Smith写一封信，号召同学们加强体育锻炼，注重身体健康。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.写信的原因；
2.运动对大家的好处；
3.你的建议：学生应该重视锻炼；学校每天给出20分钟锻炼时间。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
decide to do sth.; because of; feel nervous; take exercise; set aside; I’d appreciate it if; take…into consideration; call on sb. to do sth.
第三步：连词成句
1. Seeing many students ignore exercise because of their study, I have decided to write to you, hoping that our school can call on students to do more physical exercise.
2. As we know, good health is important to everyone.
3.Apparently, good health comes from exercise.
4.With enough exercise, not only can we stay health, but also feel energetic every day.
5.As far as I am concerned, we students should be educated to attach more importance to physical exercise.
6.As high school students, we have to study hard and take many important exams, which may make us feel nervous.
7.So it’s necessary to take exercise regularly to help release stress.
8.Besides, we should be given more time.
9.Sometimes we do want to take exercise, but our time is limited.
10. Therefore, I strongly suggest that our school set aside 20 minutes every day for us to exercise.
11.Thank you for your reading.
12.I’d appreciate it if you take my advice into consideration.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表并列补充关系：Besides
2.表因果关系： So, Therefore
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
【点睛】[高分句型1] Seeing many students ignore exercise because of their study, I have decided to write to you, hoping that our school can call on students to do more physical exercise.句中使用了现在分词作状语和that引导的宾语从句。
[高分句型2] As high school students, we have to study hard and take many important exams, which may make us feel nervous. 句中which引导非限制性定语从句。
[高分句型3]As we know, good health is of vital importance to everyone.正如我们所知，健康对每个人都很重要。句中使用了be of +n.结构来表达事物的特征。
6．Dear Jim,
     I am glad that you are interested in Chinese culture and eager to explore more. I think the Ancient Poetry is your best choice.
     By learning Chinese ancient poems, you can have an extensive knowledge of history and culture in ancient China. Also, you can feel the charm of language by reading poems, which helps to improve your Chinese. To follow the course well, you'd better read and recite as many poems as possible. Besides, it is a good idea to search for relate background knowledge so that you will fully understand the conception of poetry.
     What you do think of the course? I am sure you will have a lot of fun from it.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给交换生Jim写一封邮件，就下学期的选修课程向他提一些建议。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.推荐一门选修课；
2.说明推荐的理由；
3.提出学习这门课程的建议。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
be interested in; Ancient Poetry; have an extensive knowledge of; ancient China; the charm of; help to; improve; as many…as possible; search for; background knowledge; conception; think of; have a lot of fun
第三步：连词成句
1. I am glad that you are interested in Chinese culture and eager to explore more.
2. I think the Ancient Poetry is your best choice.
3. By learning Chinese ancient poems, you can have an extensive knowledge of history and culture in ancient China.
4. Also, you can feel the charm of language by reading poems, which helps to improve your Chinese.
5. To follow the course well, you'd better read and recite as many poems as possible.
6. Besides, it is a good idea to search for relate background knowledge so that you will fully understand the conception of poetry.
7. What you do think of the course?
8. I am sure you will have a lot of fun from it.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表并列补充关系：Besides
2.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but（供参考）
3.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore（供参考）
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] Also, you can feel the charm of language by reading poems, which helps to improve your Chinese. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]If you would like to follow the course well, you'd better read and recite as many poems as possible. (运用了if引导条件状语从句)
7．Dear Editor,
I am Li Ming of Senior Three. I am writing to tell you about some symptoms of anxiety among us students before exams.
Most of us feel nervous whenever we are taking an important exam. Some will feel dizzy, some will suffer from lack of sleep, and some will lose their appetite. In fact, all these symptoms have terrible effects on our exams.
First of all, in my opinion, exams are only a means of checking how we are getting along with our studies, so there is no need to worry too much about the results. You should just study hard every day and make careful plans for every exam. Besides, enough sleep can help make us energetic so we should not stay up too late. We can try a hot bath or a cup of hot milk before going to bed.
In a word, it is important for us to have a right attitude towards exams.
Your,
Li Ming
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生用英语写一封信，向某学生报英文编辑反映考试前出现的问题并提出建议。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般将来时和一般现在时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：信的内容需包括：
1焦虑症状：睡眠不好,食欲不振
2.睡前制定合适的复习计划
3.考试期间正常休息
4.睡前洗热水澡喝热牛奶有助睡眠。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
suffer from ； lack of ；in fact；have terrible effects on；get along；stay up；have a right attitude towards
第三步：连词成句
1.I am writing to tell you about some symptoms of anxiety among us students before exams.
2.Most of us feel nervous whenever we are taking an important exam.
3.Some will feel dizzy, some will suffer from lack of sleep, and some will lose their appetite.
4.In fact, all these symptoms have terrible effects on our exams
5.First of all, in my opinion, exams are only a means of checking how we are getting along without studies, so there is no need to worry too much about the results.
6.You should just study hard every day and make careful plans for every exam.
7.Besides, enough sleep can help make us energetic so we should not stay up too late.
8.We can try a hot bath or a cup of hot milk before going to bed.
9.In a word, it is important for us to have a right attitude towards exams.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
【点睛】[高分句型1] Most of us feel nervous whenever we are taking an important exam. （whenever引导时间状语从句）
[高分句型2]  We can try a hot bath or a cup of hot milk before going to bed，which is good for our health.（which引导非限制性定语从句）
8．Dear Jack,
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. I think I can give you some suggestions.
Firstly, why not take a Chinese course? In this way you’ll be able to learn a lot from the teachers and practice with your classmates. It will be helpful for you to watch TV and read books in Chinese, which may improve your listening and reading abilities. And it would be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs. By doing this, you will get to know and remember Chinese words more easily.
Try writing to me in Chinese next time. I hope you will find these ideas useful.
Best wishes，
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国笔友Jack写一封信，告诉他学中文的方法。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般将来时和一般现在时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.写信目的
2.提出建议
3.表达愿望.
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
in this way；be able to；why not；a good idea；ask for；practice with；get to know
第三步：连词成句
1. I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.
2. I think I can give you some suggestions.
3. Firstly, why not take a Chinese course?
4. In this way you’ll be able to learn a lot from the teachers and practice with your classmates.
5. It will be helpful for you to watch TV and read books in Chinese, which may improve your listening and reading abilities.
6. And it would be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs.
7. By doing this, you will get to know and remember Chinese words more easily.
8. Try writing to me in Chinese next time.
9.I hope you will find these ideas useful.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：Firstly
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including（供参考）
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that… （供参考）
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result （供参考）
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
【点睛】[高分句型1] It will be helpful for you to watch TV and read books in Chinese, which may improve your listening and reading abilities.（which引导非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2]Only In this way will you be able to learn a lot from the teachers and practice with your classmates.(Only加状语置于句首，用部分倒装)
9．One possible version:
Dear James,
Delighted to know you're interested in Chinese food，I’m writing to share more information with you.
Chinese food is rich in vegetables and grains, which is considered as the healthiest food in the world. Chinese food varies greatly from region to region because available ingredients are different. The most popular food is Jiaozi, also known as dumpling. It consists of fillings made of meat mixed with vegetables, and thinly rolled pieces of dough. The edges are sealed by pressing the edges together. It’s not only delicious and nutritious, but also a part of Chinese culture. I suggest you try it in a Chinese restaurant or you can lean to make it by yourself.
I’m sure you’ll fall in love with Chinese food.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求给朋友James写一封邮件，给他介绍中国美食。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示可知，本篇主要为一般现在时
结构：总分法
第一部分是文章的开头段，说明写邮件的原因；第二部分是支持段，说明中国美食的特点，并推荐一种中国美食；第三部分是结尾段，建议对方品尝中国美食，并希望对方喜欢。
要求：
1. 说明写信的原因：给James介绍中国美食
2. 说明中国美食的特点，并推荐一种中国美食
①中国美食的特点：健康、各地美食品种多样
②推荐一种中国美食：饺子
3. 建议对方品尝中国美食，并希望对方喜欢
要求：
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
delighted；be interested in；share sth. with；be rich in；be considered as；vary from …to；be known as；consist of；delicious and nutritious；Chinese culture；fall in love with
第三步：连词成句
1.I am delighted to know you're interested in Chinese food.
2.I’m writing to share more information with you.
3.Chinese food is rich in vegetables and grains.
4.It is considered as the healthiest food in the world.
5.Chinese food varies greatly from region to region.
6.Available ingredients are different.
7.The most popular food is Jiaozi, also known as dumpling.
8.It consists of fillings made of meat mixed with vegetables, and thinly rolled pieces of dough. (9)The edges are sealed by pressing the edges together.
9.It’s not only delicious and nutritious, but also a part of Chinese culture.
10.I suggest you try it in a Chinese restaurant or you can lean to make it by yourself.
11.I’m sure you’ll fall in love with Chinese food.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇
1.表并列关系： not only…but  also  
2.表因果关系：because
【点睛】[高分句型1]
Delighted to know you're interested in Chinese food，I’m writing to share more information with you.（形容词短语作状语）
[高分句型2]
Chinese food is rich in vegetables and grains, which is considered as the healthiest food in the world.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型3]
The most popular food is Jiaozi, also known as dumpling.（过去分词作后置定语）
10．Dear Mike,
l have received your letter and l have known that you feel at a loss, not knowing how to learn Chinese well. Needless to say, it is a difficult task for many people to learn a foreign language well. Here are some tips on how to learn Chinese well.
For a start, I suggest that you should spend more time practicing listening and speaking Chinese as often as possible. Then I think it is very useful to watch a couple of Chinese films or TV series every week to get your Chinese improved. Thirdly, l think you may try to sign up for some contests, for instance, the Chinese character dictation competition. The valuable experience is beneficial to you.
l am sure only if you practice a lot can you master it. Complete mastery demands continued learning. I wish you great success and rapid progress in learning Chinese.
Yours ,
Li Hua
【分析】本书面表达是一篇提纲类写作。要求以李华的名义给英国朋友Mike写一封电子邮件提一些学好汉语的建议。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.邮件已收到；
2.建议课内外多说、多看、多听汉语；
3.建议与同学之间进行汉字听写比赛等。
第二步:列提纲  
feel at a loss, needless to say, spend time doing sth., as … as possible, watch a couple of Chinese films or TV series, get your Chinese improved, sign up for, be beneficial to sb.
第三步：连词成句
1. l have received your letter and l have known that you feel at a loss, not knowing how to learn Chinese well.
2. Here are some tips on how to learn Chinese well.
3. For a start, I suggest that you should spend more time practicing listening and speaking Chinese as often as possible.
4. Then I think it is very useful to watch a couple of Chinese films or TV series every week to get your Chinese improved.
5. Thirdly, l think you may try to sign up for some contests, for instance, the Chinese character dictation competition.
6. Complete mastery demands continued learning.
7. I wish you great success and rapid progress in learning Chinese.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇
1.表文章结构顺序：For a start, Then, Thirdly,
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表因果关系：So, Thus, Therefore, As a result,
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] For a start, I suggest that you should spend more time practicing listening and speaking Chinese as often as possible. 首先，我建议你应该花更多的时间尽可能多地练习听和说汉语。使用了 “suggest + that + S. + （should） do sth”虚拟语气。
[高分句型2]I think watching several Chinese movies or TV series every week is very helpful to improve your Chinese. 我认为每周看几部中国电影或电视剧对提高你的中文很有帮助。使用了宾语从句和动名词短语作主语。