浙江高考英语写作分类训练：建议信

这是一份浙江高考英语写作分类训练：建议信，共21页。试卷主要包含了假定你是李华等内容，欢迎下载使用。
建议信
1．假定你是李华，正在伦敦某学校做交换生。你校要成立一个有关中国文化的俱乐部，请你给负责人Smith写一封信，推荐一个你希望建立的俱乐部。内容包括：
1. 写信目的；
2. 你的建议；
3. 推荐理由。
注意：
1. 词数80词左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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2．假如你是李华，下面是你的英国笔友Alex给你发来的封件。
Dear Li Hua,
I'm afraid I've got a big problem recently. My mother talks too much to me. She always tells me, “Be careful while crossing the street.” “Put on more clothes.” “Did you do a good job at school?” and so on. I'm annoyed. What's worse, I have trouble getting along with my mother because of a generation gap. She is very eager to pass on her values and interests to me. I really can't stand it.
What shall I do? I need your help.
Yours,
Alex
请根据邮件的内容给Alex写封回信，与他交流看法。内容包括：
1. 表示理解并给予安慰；
2. 提出建议及理由。
注意：
1. 字数80左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入词数；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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3．假设你是李华，你的朋友小明写信告诉你他学英语有困难，尤其是英语口语能力不够。请你给他写一封回信，就如何提高英语口语能力给他一些建议。你的文章须包括以下1、2条建议，并再提一条建议。词数： 80左右。
1. 课堂上，积极发言（回答问题，发表观点等）；
2. 课外，尽可能地用英语交流；
3. 另外，……
注意：1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2.开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
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4．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Lynn来信说她即将上大学，而她的妈妈担心她的生活自理能力。她不知该如何消除妈妈的顾虑，请你给Lynn回一封信，容包括：
1. 表示理解；
2. 提出建议并说明理由。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Lynn,
I’m sorry to learn about your problem.
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Yours,
Li Hua
5．假设你应邀参加学校组织的“英语学习师生座谈会”，请你根据下表所提示的信息，用英语写一篇发言稿，简单介绍自己的英语学习情况，并对学校今后的英语教学提出建议。
英语学习情况
1.英语学习的目的
2.英语学习的方法
3.课外自学的途径
……
对学校英语教学的建议
……（请根据自己的经历与感想，提出一至两点建议）
注意：1.对所给要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译；
2.词数80左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。
3.参考词汇： interpreter口译工作者
Dear teachers and schoolmates，
It’s a great pleasure for me to be here today and share my experience of learning English with you.
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Thank you for listening.
6．假定你是李华。你的英国笔友杰克刚刚升入高中，但他一时无法适应新的校园生活，写信向你征求建议。请你就此问题给他回一封信，字数60-100词，主要内容包括：
1.不必过分焦虑
2.制定合理的学习计划
3.多参加集体活动，结交新朋友
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7．假如你是李华，你的美国好友Tom所在学校组织学生来中国旅游，有两条路线可以选择：“长江之旅”和“泰山之行”Tom来信希望你能够给他一些建议。请给他回信。内容包括：
1.你建议线路
2.你的理由
3.你的祝愿
注意：1.100词左右  2.可适当增加情节，以使行文连贯。
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8．假设你是李华你所在的国际高中学校举办有关“健康睡眠，高效学习”的活动。请你写一封倡议书，倡议大家健康作息，杜绝熬夜。内容包括：
1.现象及原因；
2.规律作息、保证充足睡眠的重要性；
3.提出相应健康作息的建议。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear fellow students,
Recently, there is a common phenomenon that
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9．假如你是李华，你最近收到德国笔友Mike的来信，得知他正在学习中文。Mike在信中说，他学习这门全新的语言才一个月的时间，他在学习中遇到了很多困难（尤其是发音，写作），所以他请你回信，在如何改进发音，提写作能力面给他提出几条建议。字数：80词左右，开头结尾已给出。
10．时下共享单车（bike sharing）在中国各大城市蓬勃发展，成为社会热潮。请你就这一话题写一篇短文，向China Daily投稿。内容包括：
1.共享单车带来的好处；2.共享单车存在的问题；3.对解决问题的建议。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连责。
With the development of technology, bike sharing is becoming more and more popular in big cities in China...
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1．Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m Li Hua, an exchange student of our school. Knowing you’re planning to start some school clubs about Chinese culture, I’m writing to make a suggestion.
My suggestion is that a Chinese calligraphy club should be established. For one reason, Chinese calligraphy is a form of art with a long history, standing for the civilization of ancient China. For another, the club may attract a great number of students from different countries, as there is no language barrier to appreciate art.
I would be grateful for your taking my advice into consideration. Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给学校俱乐部负责人Smith写一封信，推荐一个自己希望建立的中国文化俱乐部。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 写信目的；
2. 你的建议；
3. 推荐理由。
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
plan to do; a great number of; be grateful for; look forward to
第三步：连词成句
1. Knowing you’re planning to start some school clubs about Chinese culture, I’m writing to make a suggestion.
2. For another, the club may attract a great number of students from different countries, as there is no language barrier to appreciate art.
3. I would be grateful for your taking my advice into consideration.
4. Looking forward to hearing from you.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（供参考）
1. 表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, At last
2. 表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3. 表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, On the one hand…, On the other hand…, while others…, as for, so…that…
4. 表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] My suggestion is that a Chinese calligraphy club should be established.（运用了被动语态）
[高分句型2] For another, the club may attract a great number of students from different countries, as there is no language barrier to appreciate art.（运用了as引导的状语从句）
2．Dear Alex,
I’m sorry to hear that you are having a bad time at the moment. I can understand how you feel. As a teenager, I met the same problem as you. But now I can get along better with my mother. Here are some ideas for you.
Even though a generation gap does exist between you and your mother, you still can do something to build a good relationship with her. Firstly, you should calm down and show respect for her no matter what she says. In most cases, what she says does make sense. Secondly, try to have a face-to-face talk and sincere communication with her, which can get a better understanding of each other. Last but not least, listen attentively to each other’s inner voice, and even take effective measures to narrow the generation gap.
I hope what I say here will be helpful to you.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生根据邮件的内容给Alex写封回信，与他交流看法。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时,少量过去时和将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 表示理解并给予安慰；
2. 提出建议及理由。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
get along better with；build a good relationship with；calm down；show respect for；no matter what；make sense；have a face-to-face talk；get a better understanding of each other；be helpful to
第三步：连词成句
1.But now I can get along better with my mother.
2.Here are some ideas for you.
3.Even though a generation gap does exist between you and your mother, you still can do something to build a good relationship with her.
4.Firstly, you should calm down and show respect for her no matter what she says.
5.In most cases, what she says does make sense.
6.Secondly, try to have a face-to-face talk and sincere communication with her, which can get a better understanding of each other.
7.I hope what I say here will be helpful to you.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：Firstly, Secondly, Last but not least
2.表转折对比关系：but, Even though
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1]：Firstly, you should calm down and show respect for her no matter what she said.这句话运用了no matter what引导的让步状语从句。
[高分句型2]：In most cases, what she says does make sense.这句话运用了what引导的主语从句。
[高分句型3]：Secondly, try to have a face-to-face talk and sincere communication with her, which can get a better understanding of each other.这句话运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
3．Dear Xiao Ming,
I learned from your letter that you have difficult with your spoken English. Here are some tips for you.
Firstly, you should be active in class activities like questions and answers as well as discussion. Remember it doesn’t matter if you make mistakes when answering questions and expressing yourselves. Secondly, practice your spoken English with your teacher and classmates as much as possible. Practice makes perfect. Besides, reading English articles can also help. By reading, you can build your English vocabulary, which is good for your spoken English.
I hope you will find these ideas helpful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给你的朋友小明写一封回信，就如何提高英语口语能力给他一些建议。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时,少量一般过去时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 课堂上，积极发言（回答问题，发表观点等）；
2. 课外，尽可能地用英语交流；
3. 另外，……
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
learn from; have difficult with; as well as; make mistakes; as much as possible; be good for
第三步：连词成句
1. I learned from your letter that you have difficult with your spoken English.
2. Firstly, you should be active in class activities like questions and answers as well as discussion.
3. Remember it doesn’t matter if you make mistakes when answering questions and expressing yourselves.
4. Secondly, practice your spoken English with your teacher and classmates as much as possible.
5. By reading, you can build your English vocabulary, which is good for your spoken English.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序： Firstly, Secondly
2.表并列补充关系：Besides, As well as
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] I learned from your letter that you have difficult with your spoken English.这句话运用了宾语从句。
[高分句型2] Besides, reading English articles can also help. 这句话运用了动名词作主语。
[高分句型3] By reading, you can build your English vocabulary, which is good for your spoken English. 这句话运用了关系代词which引导的定语从句。
4．Dear Lynn,
I’m sorry to learn about your problem. It’s normal for your mother to worry about your new college life. Here are some suggestions.
First, why not talk more with your mom? Heart-to-heart talks can help you understand each other better. Second, you’d better learn to take care of yourself in daily life, which will definitely help prove to your mom that you are already grown-up. It would also ease her anxiety if you could share with her the housework, such as cleaning, washing and cooking.
I hope my proposals will be of some help to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给Lynn回一封信，提出一些可以打消她妈妈担心她生活自理能力的建议。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 表示理解；
2. 提出建议并说明理由。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
normal; worry about; suggestion; why not do sth.; each other; take care of; daily life; prove to; anxiety; share with; such as; proposal; be of some help to
第三步：连词成句
1. I’m sorry to learn about your problem.
2. It’s normal for your mother to worry about your new college life.
3. Here are some suggestions.
4. First, why not talk more with your mom?
5. Heart-to-heart talks can help you understand each other better.
6. Second, you’d better learn to take care of yourself in daily life, which will definitely help prove to your mom that you are already grown-up.
7. It would also ease her anxiety if you could share with her the housework, such as cleaning, washing and cooking.
8. I hope my proposals will be of some help to you.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First, Second
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including（供参考）
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that… （供参考）

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result （供参考）

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] It’s normal for your mother to worry about your new college life. (运用了“it be adj. for sb. to do sth.”句型)
[高分句型2] Second, you’d better learn to take care of yourself in daily life, which will definitely help prove to your mom that you are already grown-up. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
5．Dear teachers and schoolmates,
It's a great pleasure for me to be here today and share my experience of learning English with you. I'm interested in English and hope to be an interpreter in the future. Naturally, it's very important for me to learn English well. As everybody knows, vocabulary is an important part of language. Usually I remember twenty new words a day and put them into use whenever possible. After class, I often listen to English programs. Besides, I've learnt a lot about other countries' culture on the Internet.
Now, I'd like to make some suggestions. Firstly, we should be given more chances to practice using what we've learned. Secondly, I suggest we have more English activities, such as English contests and festivals.
Thank you for listening.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生用英语写一篇发言稿，简单介绍自己的英语学习情况，并对学校今后的英语教学提出建议。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
英语学习情况；
学习目的
学习方法
课外自学途径
2. 对学校英语教学的建议。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
hope to be an interpreter; remember twenty new words a day; put them into use whenever possible; listen to English programs; learn a lot about other countries' culture; make some suggestions; more chances to practice; more English activities
第三步：连词成句
1. I'm interested in English and hope to be an interpreter in the future.
2. Naturally, it's very important for me to learn English well.
3. As everybody knows, vocabulary is an important part of language.
4. Usually I remember twenty new words a day and put them into use whenever possible.
5. After class, I often listen to English programs.
6. Besides, I've learnt a lot about other countries' culture on the Internet.
7. Now, I'd like to make some suggestions.
8. Firstly, we should be given more chances to practice using what we've learned.
9. Secondly, I suggest we have more English activities, such as English contests and festivals.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：Firstly, Secondly
2.表并列补充关系：Besides
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
【点睛】[高分句型1] As everybody knows, vocabulary is an important part of language.(as引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Firstly, we should be given more chances to practice using what we've learned.（动名词作宾语及what引导名词性从句）
[高分句型3] Secondly, I suggest we have more English activities, such as English contests and festivals.（虚拟语气的运用）
6．Dear Ben,
I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in at your new school. Don’t worry too much about it. Here are my suggestions.
First, try to make a proper plan of your study. Faced with some problems, you might consult your teachers and classmates, who can usually offer you help. Second, it might be a good idea for you to take part in more activities, which usually involve teamwork and interactions with other students. Therefore, you can make more friends.
I sincerely hope my advice will be of help to you. Looking forward to your reply!
Yours
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求给英国笔友杰克回信，关于如何适应新的校园生活给出一些建议。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：一般现在时
结构：总分法
第一部分是文章的开头段，说明写邮件的原因；第二部分是支持段，关于如何适应新的校园生活提出你的建议；第三部分是结尾段，希望建议对Jack有帮助。
要求：
1. 说明写信的原因：得知Jack一时无法适应新的校园生活，告诉他不必过分焦虑
2. 关于如何适应新的校园生活提出你的建议
①制定合理的学习计划，有问题向老师和同学请教
②多参加集体活动，结交新朋友
3. 希望建议对Jack 有帮助
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
have trouble (in) doing…；fit in；worry about；make a proper plan；be faced with；consult sb.；offer sb. help；take part in；involve teamwork；interaction with sb.；make friends；be of help to sb.
第三步：连词成句
(1) I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in at your new school.
(2) Don’t worry too much about it.
(3) Here are my suggestions.
(4) Try to make a proper plan of your study.
(5) Faced with some problems, you might consult your teachers and classmates.
(6) They can usually offer you help.
(7) It might be a good idea for you to take part in more activities.
(8) The activities usually involve teamwork and interactions with other students.
(9) You can make more friends.
(10) I sincerely hope my advice will be of help to you.
(11) Looking forward to your reply!
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇
1.表文章结构顺序：first …second
2.表因果关系：therefore
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1]
Faced with some problems, you might consult your teachers and classmates.（形容词词作状语）
[高分句型2]
You may as well take part in more activities so that you can make more friends. （so that引导的目的状语从句）
7．Dear Tom,
I'm delighted to learn that you have dreamed about visiting China ever since graduation and that you have made up your mind to come to China. Excited about your coming, I can hardly wait to give you some advice.
In my view, I prefer the tour along the Yangtze to the trip to Mountain Tai. It is through the trip to the Yangtze that you will have a good knowledge of the history of China and its people. Besides, not only are the views along the river very attractive,but also the air is fresh to breathe. Therefore, I insist the trip along the Yan-gtze is a better choice.
I hope my advice is of help to you and you will have a wonderful time in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给Tom写一封建议信，帮助Tom在“长江之旅”和“泰山之行”中做一个选择并说明理由。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和现在完成时，少量使用一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.建议线路
2.建议的理由
3.对Tom的祝愿
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
dream about; ever since; make up one's mind; excited about; in one's view; prefer…to…; have a good knowledge of; not only…but also; of help; have a wonderful time
第三步：连词成句
1.I'm delighted to learn that you have dreamed about visiting China ever since graduation and that you have made up your mind to come to China.
2. Excited about your coming, I can hardly wait to give you some advice.
3. In my view, I prefer the tour along the Yangtze to the trip to Mountain
4.It is through the trip to the Yangtze that you will have a good knowledge of the history of China and its people.
5. not only are the views along the river very attractive, but also the air is fresh to breathe
6. I hope my advice is of help to you and you will have a wonderful time in China.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表并列补充关系： Besides, not only…but also,
2.表因果关系： Therefore
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1]
I'm delighted to learn that you have dreamed about visiting China ever since graduation and that you have made up your mind to come to China. 使用了两个并列的宾语从句
[高分句型2]
Excited about your coming, I can hardly wait to give you some advice.使用了过去分词作状语和动名词作宾语
[高分句型3]
It is through the trip to the Yangtze that you will have a good knowledge of the history of China and its people. 使用了强调句型
[高分句型4]
not only are the views along the river very attractive, but also the air is fresh to breathe 使用了倒装句
8．Dear fellow students,
Recently, there is a common phenomenon that most of the high school students can't get enough sleep, because they stay up late for various reasons, such as heavy homework or being addicted to digital devices.
It's of key importance for us students to sleep regularly and get enough sleep, which helps us concentrate in class and live happily and healthily. If you stay up late frequently, you will fail to focus on class. What s worse, too much time spent on digital devices really does great harm to your health.
In order to gain enough sleep and healthy life, all of you are highly recommended to plan your time properly for homework, take physical exercise regularly, and keep away from digital devices before sleep. Only by doing this will you enjoy a healthy and happy life.
Yours
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封倡议书，倡议大家健康作息，杜绝熬夜。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.现象及原因；
2.规律作息、保证充足睡眠的重要性；
3.提出相应健康作息的建议。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
a common phenomenon; stay up late; be addicted to; be of key importance for; live happily and healthily; focus on; do great harm to; plan time properly; keep away from
第三步：连词成句
1.Recently, there is a common phenomenon that most of the high school students can't get enough sleep, because they stay up late for various reasons, such as heavy homework or being addicted to digital devices.
2.It's of key importance for us students to sleep regularly and get enough sleep, which helps us concentrate in class and live happily and healthily.
3.If you stay up late frequently, you will fail to focus on class.
4.What s worse, too much time spent on digital devices really does great harm to your health.
5.In order to gain enough sleep and healthy life, all of you are highly recommended to plan your time properly for homework, take physical exercise regularly, and keep away from digital devices before sleep.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）（供参考）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1]It's of key importance for us students to sleep regularly and get enough sleep, which helps us concentrate in class and live happily and healthily.（关系代词which引导的非限定性定语从句）
[高分句型2]If you stay up late frequently, you will fail to focus on class.（if引导的条件状语从句）
[高分句型3]Only by doing this will you enjoy a healthy and happy life. （Only引导的部分倒装）
9．Dear Mike，
Hi！I’m Li Hua. After reading your letter, I feel happy to hear that you are learning Chinese. However, you said that you have trouble in the process of learning, especially the pronunciation and writing. Here are some suggestions that may be useful for you.
First, you try your best to read some reading and remember as many Chinese words as possible, which is beneficial to your writing. Second, you can watch TV and listen to the radio to practice your pronunciation. In addition, it’s a good way to talk with Chinese people online.
If you have any questions, please ask me. I hope you can take my suggestions into consideration!
Best wishes
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给Mike写封回信，在如何改进发音，提写作能力面给他提出几条建议。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和少量一般过去时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
have trouble in doing something; be useful for; try your best to do something; as many Chinese words as possible; is beneficial to; take my suggestions into consideration
第三步：连词成句
1. You said that you have trouble in the process of learning, especially the pronunciation and writing.
2. Here are some suggestions that may be useful for you.
3. You try your best to read some reading and remember as many Chinese words as possible, which is beneficial to your writing.
4. I hope you can take my suggestions into consideration
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：Firstly/First, Secondly/Second…
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, In addition
3.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus,  
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] However, you said that you have trouble in the process of learning, especially the pronunciation and writing.该句是复合句，said后跟宾语从句。
[高分句型2] Here are some suggestions that may be useful for you.该句是复合句。that引导限制性定语从句修饰先行词suggestions。
[高分句型3] First, you try your best to read some reading and remember as many Chinese words as possible, which is beneficial to your writing.该句中which引导非限制性定语从句，指代前文一句话。使用高分词组try one’s best以及as many words as possible。
10．With the development of technology, bike sharing is becoming more and more popular in big cities in China. On the one hand, bike sharing eases city traffic and reduces air pollution. On the other hand, it also creates problems.
For example, many bike users leave bikes in the middle of the street or on the sidewalk, which blocks cars and people in already crowded cities. What's more, many people deliberately break the bike by throwing it to the river or destroying the bike code on it.
In my opinion, the government should make strict regulations to manage the bike sharing industry. And those who deliberately damage bikes should be fined severely. Only in this way can the bike sharing industry develop properly.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生就共享单车（bike sharing）在中国各大城市蓬勃发展，成为社会热潮这一话题写一篇短文。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.共享单车带来的好处；
2.共享单车存在的问题；
3.对解决问题的建议。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
On the one hand …On the other hand … ; in the middle of; in one’s opinion; in this way
第三步：连词成句
1. On the one hand, bike sharing eases city traffic and reduces air pollution. On the other hand, it also creates problems.
2. For example, many bike users leave bikes in the middle of the street or on the sidewalk, which blocks cars and people in already crowded cities.
3. In my opinion, the government should make strict regulations to manage the bike sharing industry.
4. Only in this way can the bike sharing industry develop properly.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表并列补充关系：What is more
2.表转折对比关系： On the one hand…,On the other hand…
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] For example, many bike users leave bikes in the middle of the street or on the sidewalk, which blocks cars and people in already crowded cities.（运用了关系代词which引导的非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2] And those who deliberately damage bikes should be fined severely. （运用了关系代词who引导的定语从句）
[高分句型3] Only in this way can the bike sharing industry develop properly. （运用了部分倒装结构）