福建高考英语写作分类训练：建议信

这是一份福建高考英语写作分类训练：建议信，共20页。试卷主要包含了假定你是李华等内容，欢迎下载使用。
建议信
1．假定你是李华，你的美国朋友David即将来福州游玩，他写信向你了解他到福州后乘坐何种交通工具旅行比较适宜。请你给他写封回信，建议他乘坐地铁或公交，既环保便捷、又准点且价格便宜。
参考词汇：环保的environmentally friendly / eco-friendly；
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear David,
I’m so glad to hear that you will come to China for your holiday.
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2．假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Jack给你发邮件说，他最近上课经常走神，无法专心听讲，为此很苦恼。请你给他回一封邮件安慰他，并给他提建议。内容包括:
1. 得知Jack很烦恼。  2.安慰Jack。   3.你的建议。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右。开头已给出，不计入字数。
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jack,
I am glad to hear from you .
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Yours,
Li Hua
3．假设你是李华，你的朋友John沉迷于抖音 (TikTok) 而不能自拔，写信向你寻求帮助，请你给他回一封电子邮件。内容包括：
1. 表示理解和关心；
2. 沉迷抖音的影响；
3. 提出具体建议。
要求：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear John,
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
4．你受学生会委托为学校英语宣传栏写一则关于成立英语阅读俱乐部(English Book Club)的通知，内容包括:
1.简述阅读的重要性；
2.该俱乐部的成立目的及活动内容；
3.欢迎报名并提出建议。
注意:
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.通知的标题和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
NOTICE
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The Students’ Union
5．假定你是李华。你的英国笔友Tim是北京某中学新来的交换生，在生活学习中遇到一些困惑，感到焦虑，来信寻求你的帮助。请你根据以下要点给他写一封信。
1.安慰Tim；    
2.提出建议 (1)安排出游;(2)积极参加运动;(3)......
注意：1.不要逐字翻译,适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
2.词数100左右。
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6．假如你叫李华，你的美国朋友Jack将于2022年来中国张家口参加冬奥会，他来信向你咨询如何提高汉语水平。请你用英语给他写一封回信，内容包括：
1.表示欢迎；
2.提出建议。
注意：1.词数100左右（开头已经给出，但不计入总词数）
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Jack,
Glad to know that you will come to China for the 2022 Winter Olympic Games.
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Yours,
Li Hua
7．根据提示，写一篇不少于120词的建议信。假如你是某报编辑，昨天收到位学生的来信。请根据来信的内容和要点提示用英语写一封回信。
Dear editor,
I am a hard-working girl and want to be the top student in my class. But in exams, I always make many careless mistakes. I really worry about it. What should I do to improve my performance in exams?
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Best regards!
Yours sincerely,
Li Fang
要点提示：
1. 收到来信，获悉信中所提到的情况
2. 不要压太大
3. 如有问题请教老师和同学
4. 考试时给理分配( distribute)时间，并尽量抽几分钟检查
5. 其他建议……
注意：1. 陈述所给的要点时可适度发挥，但不要简单翻译
2. 词数120字以上。信件格式已经写好，不计入总词数
8．假设你是李华你的英国朋友Peter来信说想要组织一些活动来庆祝两周后学校的百年校庆日，请你用英语给他回一封信，提出一些建议。
写作要点：
1. 表达对对方校庆日的祝福；
2. 建议穿统一校服唱校歌；
3. 提出至少两条其他活动建议。
注意：
1.词数不少于100；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总次数；
3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear peter,
I have learned that the centennial anniversary of the founding of your school is approaching.
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Yours,
Li Hua
9．假如你是李华，你在负责本校英语报刊 Heart-to-Heart 栏目，一位同学给该栏目留言，希望得到你的帮助。请用英语给她写一封建议信。
After I got into senior high school, I joined many clubs, including the volunteer club, dancing club and sports club. I really enjoy these extra curricular activities, but I find it hard to keep up with other students in my study. Should I give up the clubs? What else can I do to improve my study? (A confused girl, Grade 1)
注意：
1.词数 120 左右；
2.答题卡上注意书信格式。
参考词汇: balance 平衡
Dear confused friend,
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Yours,
Li Hua
10．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信就下周三要参加孔子学院(the Confucius Institute)的面试征询你的意见。请你写封回信，内容包括：
1. 写信目的；
2. 提出建议；(至少2条）  
3. 表示祝愿。
注意: 1.词数80左右;     
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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1．Dear David,
I’m so glad to hear that you will come to China for your holiday.
When you arrive in Fuzhou, you'd better take the subway, which has been well developed and become popular in Fuzhou nowadays. It has lots of different lines, so it is convenient for you to travel wherever you want to. The subway is spacious, comfortable and environmentally friendly. They are seldom delayed and guarantee the safety of travelers. It's easy to get tickets through many channels, such as by telephone, through the Internet, or on the self-service ticket machine. Besides, prices of tickets are cheap and reasonable. It offers good services to passengers and I am sure you will enjoy a good journey.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给David写封回信，建议他乘坐地铁或公交，既环保便捷、又准点且价格便宜。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 建议一种交通方式；
2.说出这种交通方式的优点;
3.表达自己的祝愿。
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
arrive in；become popular；such as；enjoy a good journey
第三步：连词成句（包含关键句，至少3句）
1.When you arrive in Fuzhou, you'd better take the subway, which has been well developed and become popular in Fuzhou nowadays.
2.It has lots of different lines, so it is convenient for you to travel wherever you want to.
3.The subway is spacious, comfortable and environmentally friendly.
4.They are seldom delayed and guarantee the safety of travelers.
5.It's easy to get tickets through many channels, such as by telephone, through the Internet, or on the self-service ticket machine.
6.Besides, prices of tickets are cheap and reasonable.
7.It offers good services to passengers and I am sure you will enjoy a good journey.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] When you arrive in Fuzhou, you'd better take the subway, which has been well developed and become popular in Fuzhou nowadays. (when引导时间状语从句，which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] It's easy to get tickets through many channels, such as by telephone, through the Internet, or on the self-service ticket machine. （it作形式主语，动词不定式作真正的主语）
2．Dear Jack,
I am glad to hear from you .You wrote that you feel anxious because you are unable to concentrate in class. I understand quite well what you are going through. Don’t worry too much. There is always a way out.
Firstly, you are highly advised to take notes while listening. Only in this way can you focus your attention on what the teacher is saying. Secondly, it is wise to preview before class. Being well prepared will increase your confidence and interest, which contributes to improving your concentration.
Hopefully, you may find my advice helpful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给最近上课经常走神、无法专心听讲，为此很苦恼的美国笔友Jack回一封邮件安慰他，并给他提建议。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。
结构：总分法
   总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1. 得知Jack很烦恼。（know Jack is upset）
      2. 安慰Jack。（comfort Jack）
      3. 你的建议。（Your suggestions）
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
be unable to; go through ; be highly advised to ; focus…on ; contribute to ; find…helpful
第三步：连词成句
1. You wrote that you feel anxious because you are unable to concentrate in class.
2. I understand quite well what you are going through.
3. Don’t worry too much.
4. There is always a way out.
5. Firstly, you are highly advised to take notes while listening.
6. Only in this way can you focus your attention on what the teacher is saying.
7. Secondly, it is wise to preview before class.
8. Being well prepared will increase your confidence and interest, which contributes to improving your concentration.
9. Hopefully, you may find my advice helpful.
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
表文章结构顺序：Firstly, Secondly…
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】[高分句型1]
You wrote that you feel anxious because you are unable to concentrate in class.
你在信中说你感到焦虑是因为你在课堂上无法集中注意力。运用了that引导的宾语从句和because引导的原因状语从句。
[高分句型2]
Only in this way can you focus your attention on what the teacher is saying.
只有这样你才能把注意力集中在老师说的话上。运用了倒装句和what引导的宾语从句。
[高分句型3]
Being well prepared will increase your confidence and interest, which contributes to improving your concentration.
做好充分的准备会增加你的信心和兴趣，这有助于提高你的注意力。 运用了动名词作主语和which引导的非限制性定语从句。
3．Dear John,
I am sorry to hear that you are suffering from TikTok addiction. Actually, it is commonly seen that more and more teenagers get crazy about TikTok and spend a lot of time watching and sharing videos online, which makes them unable to focus on study. Therefore, immediate measures should be taken to stop it. You should start some other hobbies, such as reading, listening to music or playing chess. Besides, you had better make more friends through face to face communication.
I sincerely hope that these ideas can help you with the problem.（94words）
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给朋友John回一封电子邮件，帮助他走出沉迷抖音。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。
结构：总分总法
要点：
1. 表示理解和关心；
2. 沉迷抖音的影响；
3. 提出具体建议。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
suffer from；TikTok；get crazy about；spend a lot of time in；focus on；listen to music；play chess；make friends；face to face
第三步：连词成句
1. I am sorry to hear that you are suffering from TikTok addiction.
2. Actually, it is commonly seen that more and more teenagers get crazy about TikTok and spend a lot of time watching and sharing videos online, which makes them unable to focus on study.
3. Therefore, immediate measures should be taken to stop it.
4. You should start some other hobbies, such as reading, listening to music or playing chess.
5. Besides, you had better make more friends through face to face communication.
6. I sincerely hope that these ideas can help you with the problem.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表并列补充关系：Besides；and；
2.表因果关系：Therefore
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] I am sorry to hear that you are suffering from TikTok addiction.使用了that引导的宾语从句。
[高分句型2] Actually, it is commonly seen that more and more teenagers get crazy about TikTok and spend a lot of time watching and sharing videos online, which makes them unable to focus on study.使用了it作形式主语和which引导的非限制性定语从句。
[高分句型3] I sincerely hope that these ideas can help you with the problem.使用了that引导的宾语从句。
4．                                                                                                          NOTICE
Reading is very important in today’s world, as you can gain vast knowledge through varieties of reading materials to meet various challenges in life. To encourage the students to become great English readers, the Student Union will set up an English book club where you can spend time reading together, share good books and attend lectures on reading.
Those who are interested in the book club please sign up in the Student Union office by October 20, and any creative suggestions are welcome.
The Students’ Union
【分析】这是一篇提纲类作文。要求考生用英语写一则关于成立英语阅读俱乐部的英语通知。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：提纲类作文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
要求：
1.简述阅读的重要性；
2.该俱乐部的成立目的及活动内容；
3.欢迎报名并提出建议。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
varieties of；set up；be interested in；sign up
第三步：连词成句
1.Reading is very important in today’s world, as you can gain vast knowledge through varieties of reading materials to meet various challenges in life.
2.To encourage the students to become great English readers, the Student Union will set up an English book club where you can spend time reading together, share good books and attend lectures on reading.
3.Those who are interested in the book club please sign up in the Student Union office by October 20, and any creative suggestions are welcome.
第四步：连句成篇
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】[高分句型1] To encourage the students to become great English readers, the Student Union will set up an English book club where you can spend time reading together, share good books and attend lectures on reading. 动词不定式作目的状语，where引导定语从句
[高分句型2] Those who are interested in the book club please sign up in the Student Union office by October 20, and any creative suggestions are welcome. who引导定语从句
5．A possible version：
Dear Tim,
In your last letter, you said that you have met some difficulties and felt anxious. I am writing to comfort you and offer you some advice.
It is natural for one to feel uncomfortable in a different country. Therefore, you can arrange for an outing to relax yourself while admiring wonderful views along the way and experiencing some Chinese culture. Besides, since working out proves effective when one feels down，why not have a go? You need to be positive about yourself and your body. It is also suggested that you should make friends at your school to keep yourself from loneliness.
Cheer up. Things will work out for the best. I wish you would soon get it over and enjoy your study and life in Beijing.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国笔友Tim写一封建议信，帮助他解决在生活学习中遇到的困惑，减少焦虑。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般过去时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.安慰Tim；    
2.提出建议 (1)安排出游;(2)积极参加运动;(3)......
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
meet some difficulties; feel anxious; arrange for an outing; work out; be positive about; get over; keep yourself from loneliness；cheer up
第三步：连词成句
1. In your last letter, you said that you have met some difficulties and felt anxious.
2. Therefore, you can arrange for an outing to relax yourself while admiring wonderful views along the way and experiencing some Chinese culture.
3. Besides, since working out proves effective when one feels down，why not have a go?
4. You need to be positive about yourself and your body.
5. It is also suggested that you should make friends at your school to keep yourself from loneliness.
6. Cheer up. Things will work out for the best.
7. I wish you would soon get it over and enjoy your study and life in Beijing.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表并列补充关系： besides，also
3.表因果关系： therefore，since
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] In your last letter, you said that you have met some difficulties and felt anxious.（that引导宾语从句）
[高分句型2] Therefore, you can arrange for an outing to relax yourself while admiring wonderful views along the way and experiencing some Chinese culture.（现在分词作状语）
[高分句型3] It is also suggested that you should make friends at your school to keep yourself from loneliness.（it作形式主语）
6．Dear Jack,
Glad to know that you will come to China for the 2022 Winter Olympic Games. I’m more than delighted. As for how to improve your Chinese, I’d like to give you some suggestions.
To begin with, make more Chinese friends in your daily life, with whom you can practice your spoken Chinese. What’s more, listening to Chinese songs and watching Chinese movies are also good ways, which can help you broaden your horizons and gain a better understanding of Chinese. Last but not least, we can keep in touch with each other by writing letters in Chinese, mainly benefiting your writing skill. Keeping a diary is also a great choice.
I hope you will find these suggestions beneficial and make great progress in Chinese.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给美国朋友Jack写封回信，并在信中给他一些提高汉语水平的建议，他在为2022年来中国张家口参加冬奥会做准备。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时,少量一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.表示欢迎；
2.提出建议。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
the 2022 Winter Olympic Games; be delighted; improve Chinese; give suggestions; make friends; in one’s daily life; broaden one’s horizons; keep in touch with; keep a diary; make great progress
第三步：连词成句
1. Glad to know that you will come to China for the 2022 Winter Olympic Games.
2. I’m more than delighted.
3. As for how to improve your Chinese, I’d like to give you some suggestions.
4. To begin with, make more Chinese friends in your daily life, with whom you can practice your spoken Chinese.
5. Listening to Chinese songs and watching Chinese movies are also good ways, which can help you broaden your horizons and gain a better understanding of Chinese.
6. We can keep in touch with each other by writing letters in Chinese, mainly benefiting your writing skill.
7. Keeping a diary is also a great choice.
8. I hope you will find these suggestions beneficial and make great progress in Chinese.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：To begin with, Last but not least
2.表并列补充关系：What is more
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
【点睛】[高分句型1]
What’s more, listening to Chinese songs and watching Chinese movies are also good ways, which can help you broaden your horizons and gain a better understanding of Chinese. (由关系代词 which引导的非限制性定语从句修饰先行词ways)
[高分句型2]
To begin with, make more Chinese friends in your daily life, with whom you can practice your spoken Chinese.(由关系代词 whom引导的非限制性定语从句修饰先行词friends)
7．Dear Li Fang,
I read your letter yesterday. It's good that you have a high aim for yourself and you know what has prevented you from achieving high scores in exams. But you should remember that even the very best student can make mistakes sometimes. So don't put too much pressure on yourself.
As far as I am concerned, learning from your mistakes in past exams is a quick way to stop making the same mistakes next time. To begin with, if there are questions that can't be solved by yourself, you should turn to your teachers or classmates for help. What's more, during the exams you'd better make a good plan to distribute your time according to the questions. Besides, try to leave a few minutes at the end to check your answers.
Enjoy the challenge that each new exam brings to you. I believe a good learning habit will finally help you gain success.
Best wishes
Yours sincerely,
Editor
【分析】这是一篇应用文写作，要求写一封建议信，以报社编辑的身份给处于苦恼之中的学生回信支招。
【详解】本文的写作内容属于“建议信”的范畴，是高考写作练习常涉及的类型，平时的短语与句型积累是完成本题的关键。写作时注意以下两点：
第一点：审好题目。题目要求的写作重点在于提建议，故要点一应略写，要点二到五应适当拓展详写，注意文章内容的详略把握。同时注意题目中的要求“陈述所给的要点时可适度发挥，但不要简单翻译”，注意语言的灵活运用。文章应使用第一人称与第二人称相结合、一般现在时进行写作。
第二点：适当拓展。对于内容的适当拓展可以丰富文章，如对于要点二“不要压力大”，可适当拓展为先对她进行肯定和鼓励，再说明任何人，哪怕是最优秀的学生也会犯错，因此不必压力太大，等等。只有内容细节丰富了，才有可能获得高分。同时，要注意文章衔接词或过渡句的使用，做到衔接自然、结构清晰、行文流畅。
【点睛】
范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了许多高级表达，如：have a high aim for yourself, prevent you from achieving high scores in exams, put too much pressure on yourself, as far as I am concerned, to begin with, turn to your teachers or classmates for help, what's more, you'd better make a good plan to distribute your time。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
8．Dear peter,
I have learned that the centennial anniversary of the founding of your school is approaching. I would like to congratulate you on celebrating the anniversary and here are a few suggestions about the activities celebrating the centennial anniversary.
First of all, students can wear uniforms to sing the school anthem together. Besides, I think some statues of educators and great scientists should be placed in your school garden to honour those who devote all their lives to the cause of education and the development of our society. In addition, you can set a special area for students to exhibit their works of art, which will surely encourage them who are enthusiastic about art to fully realize their potentials.
I hope my advice will be useful to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封信，给朋友提供一些关于组织校庆活动的建议。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法   
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1. 表达对对方校庆日的祝福；
2. 建议穿统一校服唱校歌；
3. 提出至少两条其他活动建议。
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
centennial anniversary; approach; honour; devote to; exhibit works; be enthusiastic about; fully realize
第三步：连词成句
1. I have learned that the centennial anniversary of the founding of your school is approaching.
2. I would like to congratulate you on celebrating the anniversary and here are a few suggestions about the activities celebrating the centennial anniversary.
3. First of all, students can wear uniforms to sing the school anthem together.
4. Besides, I think some statues of educators and great scientists should be placed in your school garden to honour those who devote all their lives to the cause of education and the development of our society.
5.In addition, you can set a special area for students to exhibit their works of art, which will surely encourage them who are enthusiastic about art to fully realize their potentials.
6. I hope my advice will be useful to you.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：You can set a special area for students to exhibit their works of art, which will surely encourage them who are enthusiastic about art to fully realize their potentials.这句话运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句和who引导的定语从句。同时，作者还使用了一些固定词组，如devote            to; be enthusiastic about等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
9．Dear Confused Girl,
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on your current situation. I quite understand that you are anxious to improve your study and enjoy the colorful extra activities at the same time.
Here are two suggestions for your problem. First, I recommend that you choose your favorite club and give up the other two. Spending too much time on extracurricular activities is bad and makes it difficult to focus on your study. Second, you should get used to balancing your study and extra activities. I am sure that you will keep up with your classmates after properly scheduling your school life.
I hope my advice would be helpful to you. Wish you success in your future study!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假如你是李华，你在负责本校英语报刊 Heart-to-Heart 栏目，一位同学给该栏目留言，希望得到你的帮助。请用英语给她写一封建议信。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：ask for advice (征求建议)；current situation(现状)；be anxious to(渴望)；improve(提高)；extracurricular activities (课外活动)；at the same time(同时)；recommend(建议)；give up(放弃)；spend too much time on(花太多时间……)；focus on(集中于)；keep up with(赶上)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如I quite understand that you are anxious to improve your study and enjoy the colorful extra activities at the same time.运用宾语从句； Spending too much time on extracurricular activities is bad and makes it difficult to focus on your study. 非谓语动词的运用。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
10．One possible version:
Dear Peter,
Glad to receive your letter asking me for some advice on the interview for the Confucius Institute scheduled for this coming Wednesday. I’m writing to remind you of what to prepare for.
It would be wise of you to read some books about Confucius, which helps to better understand traditional Chinese cultures. It would also be beneficial to learn a few Chinese greetings. Additionally, wearing Han-style clothing will make you stand out among the candidates and impress the interviewers greatly.
I do hope my proposal could be practical. Wish you good luck!
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封回信，给予下周三参加面试的英国朋友Peter一些。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：建议信
时态：根据提示，时态应以一般现在时为主兼用一般将来时。
结构：总分法
   总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1.表达目的
      2.提出建议
      1）了解孔子。（Understanding Confucius）
      2）汉语交流。（Chinese communication）
      3) 汉式服装。（Han-style clothing）
      3. 表达祝愿。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组和句式）
some advice on the interview; remind you of what to prepare for; read some books about Confucius; understand traditional Chinese cultures; learn a few Chinese greetings; wearing Han-style clothing; Wish you good luck!
第三步：连词成句
1. I am glad to tell you some advice on the interview for the Confucius Institute scheduled for this coming Wednesday.
2. I’m writing to remind you of what to prepare for.
3. It would be wise of you to read some books about Confucius
4. You’d better learn a few Chinese greetings.
5. It’s good for you to wear Han-style clothing
6. I hope my proposal could be practical.
7. Wish you good luck!
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡。
第五步：润色修改
最后，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较为高级语言，如：词汇traditional; beneficial; stand out; impress; proposal; practical等等。句子I’m writing to remind you of what to prepare for（疑问词+动词不定式）；It would be wise of you to read some books about Confucius, which helps to better understand traditional Chinese cultures.（非限制性定语从句）等等。全文中没有中式英语的句式，也没有滥用一些作文套句，英语运用能力较高。文章思路清晰、简明扼要、层次分明。