高考英语写作分类训练：建议信

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建议信
1．据报道，在我国仍有很多山区的孩子因为家庭贫穷而上不起学，你们班就如何帮助这些孩子上学进行了讨论。假如你是李华，请你把你们的建议写成一封信寄给English Weekly，希望他们能够呼吁更多的人参与这项活动。
建议要点：
1. 收集旧课本和衣服；
2. 呼吁更多人帮助他们；
3. 你的建议：至少一条。
要求：1. 100词左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Editor,
I'm a senior high school student.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
We'll really appreciate it if you can, through the English Weekly, increase public awareness of improving the poor children's living conditions and call on more people to help them.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
2．假定你是李华，你的好友Jim在暑假期间痴迷于微信朋友圈，经常发照片分享生活中的所有细节，请根据以下要点提示，给Jim写一封信：
(1)对分享行为表示理解；
(2)阐述过度分享的危害；
(3)提出建议。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 参考词汇：微信朋友圈 WeChat circle；过度分享 oversharing
Dear Jim,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours truly,
Li Hua
3．假定你是李华，你的交换生朋友Eric因担心会耽误功课，想辞去校英语报编辑的工作。请你给他写封信建议他不要放弃这份工作。
内容包括: 1.说明写信目的;   
2.陈述理由;
3. 表达期望。
注意：1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
4．据报道，在我国，野生动物的数量在不断减少，其中一些甚至濒临灭绝。请就此用英文给相关部门写一封信，建议他们关注这一情况并提供帮助。内容应包括:
• 简述野生动物的现状
• 应采取的措施
• 表示感谢并期待回复
Dear Sir,
I’m writing to tell you about the serious situation of wild animals.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5．在节日期间的各种宴会上，人们经常忽视了平衡膳食和合理搭配饮食，往往会出现严重的食物浪费，这一问题已经到了刻不容缓的程度，请你撰文就此发表个人看法，内容包括：
1. 陈述节日浪费现象；
2. 阐明节日实际意义；
3. 提出节日饮食建议。
注意：1. 词数不少于100；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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6．假如你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国朋友Jim在做关于“中学生运动情况”的调查，想了解你的运动情况。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括：
1.你喜欢的一项运动；
2.这项运动给你带来的益处；
3.关于运动的建议。
注意:1.词数100左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数。
Dear Jim,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours
Li Hua
7．假如你过去的同学Li Lei前不久给你来信，告诉你他所面临的一个选择：是否继续在美国学习。请根据下表的要点，给他写一封回信。
选择
好处
弊端
留美学习
锻炼独立生活的能力，更好地了解美国的生活及文化
花费更多，思乡孤独，与人沟通困难
回国学习
花费更少，不会孤独
学习压力更大
你的建议及理由


要求：
(1)文章的开头和结尾已经给出；
(2)词数80左右。
Dear Li Lei，
I’m glad to hear from you last week.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
8．假设你是吴东 , 你在网上认识了一个美国朋友 Jack, 他来信向你诉说交朋友的烦恼 , 他要求你就 friendship 这个话题发表你的观点和看法并给他一些建议。于是你根据你所了解的情况 , 给他回了一封 e-mail 。
[ 写作内容 ]
1. 友谊是每个人生活中最重要的事情之一 , 没有朋友 , 人会孤独的。
2. 多与朋友交流 , 让朋友知道你想与他交朋友以及你对朋友和友谊的理解。
3. 真正的朋友应该同甘共苦。
4. 邀请朋友参加一些活动如游泳、球赛等 , 赢得真正的友谊。
Dear Jack，
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours truly，
Wu Dong
9．假如你是李华．你的英国朋友David将在今年三月到成都交流学习两周，向你询问生活和学习方面的注意事项．请根据以下要点写一封邮件，内容包括：
1．生活方面的建议；
2．学习方面的建议；
3．期盼他的到来。
注意事项：1．词数100左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear David，
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
10．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Mike给你写了一封电子邮件，说他现在汉语不够好，不知如何提高。请你给他回复一封电子邮件，给出一些学好汉语的建议。内容包括：
1. 邮件已经收到；
2. 建议课内外多说、多看、多听汉语；
3. 建议报名参加汉字听写比赛等。
注意：
1. 词数不少于100（邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总次数）；
2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
参考词汇：汉字听写比赛 Chinese character dictation competition
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1．one possible version:
Dear Editor,
I’m a senior high school student. It’s reported that in China many children in mountainous areas still can’t go to school because of poverty. Last week, our class held a discussion about how to help them to go to school and live a happy childhood. Here are our suggestions.
First, some old textbooks and clothes can be collected and sent to those children so that they can be reused. Second, it’s also very important to call on more people and social organizations to care for and help those poor children.
As far as I’m concerned, we should save some of our pocket money and give it to those needy children. Above all, we should give them respect, never looking down upon them because they are poor.
We’ll really appreciate it if you can, through the English Weekly, increase the public awareness of improving the poor children’s living conditions and call on more people to help them.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生把班级学生的讨论写成一封信寄给English Weekly，希望他们能够呼吁更多的人参与帮助贫困山区孩子上学的活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
由于：due to→ because of
收集：gather→ collect
号召：ask→ call on
看不起：despise→ look down upon
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Last week, our class held a discussion about how to help them to go to school and live a happy childhood.
拓展句： Last week, our class held a discussion, which was about how to help them to go to school and live a happy childhood.
【点睛】[高分句型1] It’s reported that in China many children in mountainous areas still can’t go to school because of poverty. （运用了由that引导的主语从句）
[高分句型2] First, some old textbooks and clothes can be collected and sent to those children so that they can be reused.（运用了由so that连接的目的状语从句）
[高分句型3] Above all, we should give them respect, never looking down upon them because they are poor.（运用了现在分词作状语和由because连接的原因状语从句）
2．Dear Jim,
I’m worried that you’ve been addicted to sharing all sorts of photos in WeChat circle recently. Undeniably, WeChat makes communication convenient and leisure time colorful. However, there exist some potential risks if we overshare. One severe problem is leaking privacy, which may cause economic losses. Besides, oversharing can make others uncomfortable, for they think you are showing off.
Thus, never should we post our personal information, nor should we rashly add strangers to the list of friends. It’s wiser to set aside some time to accompany parents or do something more meaningful.
Best wishes!
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给好友Jim写一封信，就Jim在暑假期间痴迷于微信朋友圈，经常发照片分享生活中所有细节的行为表示理解，同时阐述过度分享的危害以及提出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
照片：image→photo
造成：lead to→cause
严重的：serious→severe
各种各样的：a variety of= all sorts of
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Undeniably, WeChat makes communication convenient and leisure time colorful. However, there exist some potential risks if we overshare.
拓展句：Although WeChat makes communication convenient and leisure time colorful, there exist some potential risks if we overshare.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m worried that you’ve been addicted to sharing all sorts of photos in WeChat circle recently. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Thus, never should we post our personal information, nor should we rashly add strangers to the list of friends. (运用了部分倒装)
3．Dear Eric,
I'm sorry to hear that you want to quit your job as the editor of our school English newspaper.And I don't think it is necessary for you to do so.
In my opinion, being an editor is beneficial to your schoolwork. Firstly, you'll have more chances to gain learning materials that will be helpful to your schoolwork. Secondly, it can also help to improve your Chinese because you will have more chances to communicate in Chinese during your job. All in all, I believe that you'll benefit much from the editing as long as you keep a balance between your study and your job.
I hope you can consider my suggestion seriously.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给交换生朋友Eric写封信建议他不要放弃校英语报编辑的工作。
【详解】1.词汇积累
依我来看：in my opinion→as far as I am concerned
机会：chance→opportunity
是有帮助的：be helpful→be of help
总的来说：all in all→on the whole
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：In my opinion, being an editor is beneficial to your schoolwork.
拓展句：In my opinion，if you are an editor，your schoolwork will benefit from it。
【点睛】[高分句型1] Firstly, you'll have more chances to gain learning materials that will be helpful to your schoolwork. (运用了that引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] All in all, I believe that you'll benefit much from the editing as long as you keep a balance between your study and your job. (运用了that引导的宾语从句，as long as引导的状语从句)
4．Dear Sir,
I'm writing to tell you the serious situation of wild animals. It's reported that the number of wild animals is decreasing rapidly because of humans activities, some of which even endangered, so much attention should be paid to protecting wild animals.
First of all, measures should be taken to protect wild animals. No buying, no killing, those who do harm to wild animals should be punished. What’s more, don't destroy the habitat of wild animals any more so that they can have a comfortable place to live in. Last but not least, we should educate everyone to live in harmony with animals. In a word, we human beings can't live alone on the earth. Protecting wild animals is protecting ourselves!
I would appreciate it very much if you would like to take my suggestions into consideration. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给野生动物保护相关部门写一封信,建议他们关注我国野生动物的数量在不断减少，其中一些甚至濒临灭绝这一情况并提供帮助。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
简述野生动物的现状。
应采取的措施。
表示感谢并期待回复。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
writing to tell, It's reported that, decreasing rapidly, endangered, pay attention to, take measures,  destroy the habitat of wild animals, appreciate it very much if you would like to
第三步：连词成句
I'm writing to tell you the serious situation of wild animals.
It's reported that the number of wild animals is decreasing rapidly because of humans activities, some of which even endangered, so much attention should be paid to protecting wild animals.
Measures should be taken to protect wild animals.
Those who do harm to wild animals should be punished.
Don't destroy the habitat of wild animals any more so that they can have a comfortable place to live in.
we should educate everyone to live in harmony with animals.
I would appreciate it very much if you would like to take my suggestions into consideration,
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end(供参考)
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition (供参考)
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but (供参考)
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result (供参考)
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
【点睛】[高分句型1] It's reported that the number of wild animals is decreasing rapidly because of humans activities, some of which even endangered, so much attention should be paid to protecting wild animals.（主语从句It's reported that…句型，some of which引导非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2] No buying, no killing, those who do harm to wild animals should be punished.（who引导的定语从句）
[高分句型3] Last but not least, we should educate everyone to live in harmony with animals.（高级词汇live in harmony with ）
[高分句型4]I would appreciate it very much if you would like to take my suggestions into consideration.( I would appreciate it very much if…句型，高级词汇take…into consideration )
5．During festivals, people often neglect to eat a balanced diet and a reasonable combination of food, which often leads to serious food waste.
In order to show off, a lot of food at the party was not eaten, but was thrown away. It is because we want to celebrate the festival that we hold a banquet，so we should be around the festival to do something in line with the festival's meaningful things; As far as I am concerned, the festival banquet should follow the characteristics of the festival, where there are the reasonable matching of food, avoiding extravagance and waste, so as to make the festival full of cheerful atmosphere.
In a word, food must not be wasted on the festival banquet, and it should be done in a colorful and meaningful way.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，在节日期间的各种宴会上，人们经常忽视了平衡膳食和合理搭配饮食，往往会出现严重的食物浪费，这一问题已经到了刻不容缓的程度，要求撰文就此发表个人看法。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般过去时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
内容包括：
1. 陈述节日浪费现象；
2. 阐明节日实际意义；
3. 提出节日饮食建议。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
eat a balanced diet；show off；in line with；As far as I am concerned；full of cheerful atmosphere；In a word
第三步：连词成句（包含关键句，至少3句）
1. During festivals, people often neglect to eat a balanced diet and a reasonable combination of food, which often leads to serious food waste.
2. In order to show off and their own face, a lot of food at the party was not eaten, but was thrown away.
3. It is to celebrate the festival that we hold a banquet，so we should be around the festival to do something in line with the festival's meaningful things
4. As far as I am concerned, the festival banquet should follow the characteristics of the festival, where there are the reasonable matching of food, and avoiding extravagance and waste, so as to make the festival full of cheerful atmosphere.
5. In a word, food must not be wasted on the festival banquet, and it should be done in a colorful and meaningful way.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）【只写范文中出现的衔接词，如果没有，提供相关的衔接词，写上（供参考）】
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
【点睛】[高分句型1] During festivals, people often neglect to eat a balanced diet and a reasonable combination of food, which often leads to serious food waste.句中which引导非限制性定语从句。
[高分句型2] It is because we want to celebrate the festival that we hold a banquet，so we should be around the festival to do something in line with the festival's meaningful things句中使用强调句型。
[高分句型3] As far as I am concerned, the festival banquet should follow the characteristics of the festival, where there are the reasonable matching of food, avoiding extravagance and waste, so as to make the festival full of cheerful atmosphere.句中where引导非限制性定语从句，且动词不定式作目的状语。
6．Dear Jim,
How is everything going? Knowing you are conducting a survey of the sports that high school students do, I’m writing to tell you about what I do.
Actually, playing basketball is my favorite. I usually play basketball with my friends after school and take part in competitions.
I have benefited much from playing basketball. It helps me keep fit and provides me with a way to refresh myself during the stressful school days. In addition, I learn to be more courageous and persistent when facing challenges. It also teaches me closer cooperation is the key to success and brings me many friends with the same interest.
Therefore, I suggest everyone do physical exercise regularly and we’d better choose one that suits us and we really enjoy.
This is my experience and understanding of sports. What about yours? So looking forward to your sharing.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国朋友Jim写封邮件，向他介绍你的运动情况。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时，少量现在完成时。
结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 介绍你喜欢的一项运动；
2. 介绍这项运动给你带来的益处；
3. 提出关于运动的建议。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
play basketball; take part in competitions; benefit much from playing basketball; keep fit; refresh myself during the stressful school days; more courageous and persistent; the key to success; many friends with the same interest; do physical exercise            regularly
第三步：连词成句
1.Knowing you are conducting a survey of the sports that high school students do, I’m writing to tell you about what I do.
2.Actually, playing basketball is my favorite.
3.I usually play basketball with my friends after school and take part in competitions.
4.I have benefited much from playing basketball.
5.It helps me keep fit and provides me with a way to refresh myself during the stressful school days.
6.In addition, I learn to be more courageous and persistent when facing challenges.
7.It also teaches me closer cooperation is the key to success and brings me many friends with the same interest.
8.Therefore, I suggest everyone do physical exercise regularly and we’d better choose one that suits us and we really enjoy.
9.This is my experience and understanding of sports.
10.So looking forward to your sharing.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表并列补充关系：In addition
2.表因果关系：Therefore
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1]Knowing you are conducting a survey of the sports that high school students do, I’m writing to tell you about what I do.（现在分词作状语）
[高分句型2]Therefore, I suggest everyone do physical exercise regularly and we’d better choose one that suits us and we really enjoy.（suggest后的宾语从句用了虚拟语气）
7．Dear Li Lei
I’m glad to hear from you last week. Therefore, I’m writing to express my opinions about your situation in the US.
If you choose to stay in America, you will be more independent and better learn about American life and culture. However, you will have to spend more, get homesick and much lonelier in America since it’s difficult for you to communicate with others. You will spend less and won’t feel lonely since you have more friends and relatives back at home. There is no doubt that you will face more stress in your study in your home school. If I were you, I would keep studying in the States because you will soon adapt yourself to all those difficulties in America.
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。文章要求考生给过去的同学Li Lei就是否继续在美国学习这个选择写回信。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
      总分法是指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.表示问候，引出话题；
2.分析留美学习和回国学习的利弊；
3.表示期待回信。
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
be glad to do sth.；hear from；express one’s opinion；choose to do；learn about；communicate with；there is no doubt that；adapt oneself to；look forward to
第三步：连词成句
1.I’m glad to hear from you last week.
2.I’m writing to express my opinions about your situation in the US.
3.If you choose to stay in America, you will be more independent and better learn about American life and culture.
4.You will have to spend more, get homesick and much lonelier in America since it’s difficult for you to communicate with others.
5.You will spend less and won’t feel lonely since you have more friends and relatives back at home.
6.There is no doubt that you will face more stress in your study in your home school.
7.If I were you, I would keep studying in the States because you will soon adapt yourself to all those difficulties in America.
8.I’m looking forward to your early reply.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态的问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表转折对比关系：However
2.表因果关系：Therefore
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】[高分句型1]
You will have to spend more, get homesick and much lonelier in America since it’s difficult for you to communicate with others. （since引导原因状语从句，it为形式主语，动词不定式为真正的主语）
[高分句型2]
There is no doubt that you will face more stress in your study in your home school. （that引导同位语从句）
[高分句型3]
If I were you, I would keep studying in the States because you will soon adapt yourself to all those difficulties in America.（使用了虚拟语气，表示与现在事实相反，because引导原因状语从句）
8．Dear Jack,
I'm glad to have received your e-mail but I am sorry you are having some trouble in making friends.
In my opinion, friendship is one of the most important things in everyone's life because without friends we will suffer loneliness. If you would like to take my advice, you'll win real friendship. First, why not communicate with your friend when possible and tell him/her what you think about friends and friendship and let him/her know that you want to make friends with him/her.  Secondly, you should learn to share your happiness and sorrow with your friends. Thirdly, it would be a good idea if you like to invite him/her to join in some activities such as swimming and ball games, which can make you learn to appreciate your friends and cherish your friendship.
I hope you will find these opinions and ideas useful.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给你在网上认识的一个美国朋友Jack回一封e-mail，以friendship这个话题发表你的观点和看法并给他一些建议。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 友谊是每个人生活中最重要的事情之一,没有朋友,人会孤独的。
2. 多与朋友交流,让朋友知道你想与他交朋友以及你对朋友和友谊的理解。
3. 真正的朋友应该同甘共苦。
4. 邀请朋友参加一些活动如游泳、球赛等,赢得真正的友谊。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
have some trouble in；take one’s advice；communicate with；think about；make friends with；invite sb to；join in；cherish your friendship
第三步：连词成句
1.I'm glad to have received your e-mail but I am sorry you are having some trouble in making friends.
2.If you would like to take my advice, you'll win real friendship.
3.First, why not communicate with your friend when possible and tell him/her what you think about friends and friendship and let him/her know that you want to make friends with him/her.
4.Thirdly, it would be a good idea if you like to invite him/her to join in some activities such as swimming and ball games, which can make you learn to appreciate your friends and cherish your friendship.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First, Secondly, Thirdly
2.表转折对比关系：but
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1]：If you would like to take my advice, you'll win real friendship. 这句话运用了if引导的条件状语从句。
[高分句型2]：First, why not communicate with your friend when possible and tell him/her what you think about friends and friendship and let him/her know that you want to make friends with him/her.这句话运用了what和that引导的宾语从句。
[高分句型3]：Thirdly, it would be a good idea if you like to invite him/her to join in some activities such as swimming and ball games, which can make you learn to appreciate your friends and cherish your friendship.这句话运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
9．Dear David，
From your last letter，I know you will come to Chengdu this March．You want to know something about the life and study here．
It is said that Chengdu is a city which if you come, you can't leave. Chengdu also has a comfortable weather for people who live here．Even though in the winter it is still warmer than any other cities in China．Besides，as Chengdu people are fond of eating，they have created many delicious food．
As for study，it is important for us to make a good schedule．First we should have good sleeping，good having and good playing in our daily life．Because it is the most important basis of our learning．Second we have to study hard to gain good grades．We should focus on the knowledge that teachers explain and doing better homework．
Hopefully， you will come to Chengdu as soon as possible．
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国朋友David写封邮件，就在成都生活和学习需注意的事项给出建议。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
先总体概括成都的情况，再分别从生活和学习两方面给出建议。
要求：内容包括：
1．生活方面的建议；
2．学习方面的建议；
3．期盼他的到来。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
a comfortable weather, be fond of, as for, make a good schedule, focus on, as soon as possible,gain good grades
第三步：连词成句
1.It is said that Chengdu is a city which if you come, you can't leave.
2. Chengdu also has a comfortable weather for people who live here．
3. Besides，as Chengdu people are fond of eating，they have created many delicious food．
4. As for study，it is important for us to make a good schedule．
5. we should have good sleeping，good having and good playing in our daily life．
6. We should focus on the knowledge that teachers explain and doing better homework．
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序： First, Second.
2.表并列补充关系： Besides, also.
3.表转折对比关系：Even though
4..表因果关系：because.as
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，兼顾全文句式的多样性。
【点睛】[高分句型1] It is said that Chengdu is a city which if you come, you can't leave.（该句中it作形式主语，真正的主语是that从句，which引导定语从句，修饰先行词a city。）
[高分句型2] Besides，as Chengdu people are fond of eating，they have created many delicious food．（该句中as引导原因状语从句。既交代了成都人民的喜好，又解释了成都出现很多美食的根本原因。）
10．Dear Mike,
I have received your letter and I have known that you feel at a loss, not knowing how to learn Chinese well. Needless to say, it is a difficult task for many people to learn a foreign language well. Here are some tips on how to learn Chinese well.
For a start, I suggest that you should spend more time practicing listening and speaking Chinese as often as possible. Then I think it is very useful to watch a couple of Chinese films or TV series every week to get your Chinese improved. Thirdly, I think you may try to sign up for some contests, for instance, the Chinese character dictation competition. The valuable experience is beneficial to you.
I am sure only if you practise a lot can you master it. Complete mastery demands continued learning. I wish you great success and rapid progress in learning Chinese.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本书面表达是一篇提纲类写作。要求以李华的名义给英国朋友 Mike写一封电子邮件，给出一些学好汉语的建议。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 邮件已经收到；
2. 建议课内外多说、多看、多听汉语；
3. 建议报名参加汉字听写比赛等。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
receive; tips; as often as possible; sign up for; beneficial; complete
第三步：连词成句
1. I have received your letter and I have known that you feel at a loss, not knowing how to learn Chinese well.
2. Here are some tips on how to learn Chinese well.
3. For a start, I suggest that you should spend more time practicing listening and speaking Chinese as often as possible.
4. Thirdly, I think you may try to sign up for some contests, for instance, the Chinese character dictation competition.
5. The valuable experience is beneficial to you.
6. Complete mastery demands continued learning.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：for a start; then; thirdly
2.表并列补充关系：and
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] I have received your letter and I have known that you feel at a loss, not knowing how to learn Chinese well. (运用了现在分词作状语以及宾语从句)
[高分句型2] I am sure only if you practise a lot can you master it. (运用了only+状语位于句首的部分倒装结构)