江西高考英语写作分类训练：邀请信

这是一份江西高考英语写作分类训练：邀请信，共16页。
邀请信1．假定你叫李华，你校拟举行英文电影“配音大赛”。请你给外教史密斯写封信，邀请 他做大赛的评委。内容包括：1. 大赛的时间及地点；2. 大赛的目的（提高学习英语的积极性与口语能力等）；3. 邀请史密斯的原因。注意：1. 可适当添加内容；2. 词数：100左右。参考词汇:配音dubbing 模仿imitationDear Mr. Smith,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua2．你受学生会委托为校英语读书会写一则通知，邀请大家共读经典英语短篇小说The Necklace。内容包括：1. 读书会目的；2. 读书会时间、地点；3. 欢迎分享读后感想。注意：1.    词数100左右        2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：小说（novel）_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Mike想了解中国的春节，请你给他写封回信介绍这个节日。要点如下：1)春节的由来及寓意；2)春节的庆祝活动；3)邀请他到来中国欢度春节。注意：1)词数100左右；2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3)开头和结尾已为你写好。Dear Mike,In your last letter, you mentioned that you want to know something about the Spring Festival. I am writing to tell you about it.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours ,Li Hua4．假定你是李华，想邀请留学生朋友Daisy一起去观看汉服文化表演秀（Hanfu Culture Show）。请你用英语给她写一封邮件，内容包括：1. 活动时间、地点；2. 活动内容（汉服走秀、专家解说汉服式样以及文化内涵等）。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．假定你是李华，为庆祝中华人民共和国成立70周年，你校学生会决定在国庆节前夕举办“我爱祖国”全校师生合唱比赛。请写封邮件邀请外教Mary观看。内容包括：1. 合唱比赛时间、地点, 合唱比赛chorus competition；2. 比赛安排。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6．假设你是学生会主席李华，最近你们学校将要举行一场英语演讲比赛,请你给外籍教师Peter写一封信，邀请他担任大赛的评委(judge),内容包括：1. 发出邀请：2. 简单介绍比赛；3. 期待回复。注意:1.词数100左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Mr. Peter,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua7．假定你是李华，你和几个朋友打算去参观茶园，想邀请美国交流生Henry同往。请你给他写封邮件告知活动安排。内容包括:1. 时间和地点；2. 学习如何沏茶，品茶；3. 介绍中国茶文化的历史和发展。注意:1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Henry,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua8．假设你是高三学生李华，你的美国外教John对你们将在5月4日举行的成人仪式很感兴趣，请你用英语给他写一封邮件，邀请他参加此次活动。内容包括:1. 活动时间和地点；2. 活动内容；3. 活动意义。参考词汇：成人仪式 coming-of-age ceremony注意：1. 词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua9．假定你是李华，你校交换生Peter很喜欢中国菜，于是向你请教烹饪技巧。请你给他写一封电子邮件，要点如下：1.邀请来家品尝2.乐意传授技巧3.赠送烹饪书。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯参考词汇：烹饪书 recipe bookDear Peter,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua10．假如你是李华，你校将举办一次音乐周Music week活动，请你以学生会主席的身份邀请外教Mr. Smith参加音乐周的开幕式。内容包括1.时间和地点:本周六晚上六点半学校体育馆2. 活动内容:演唱流行歌曲和器乐演奏等注意:1.词数100左右 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇:开幕式:the opening ceremony体育馆:gymnasium器乐:musical instruments_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________              1．Dear Mr. Smith,I'm writing to invite you to be the judge of the coming English film dubbing competition in our school. To inspire us to learn English and improve our speaking ability, an English film dubbing competition is to be held at two o'clock this Friday afternoon in the school hall. Competitors will show their talents for imitation and the exact understanding of the characters in the film. You have been the judge of such competitions for several times and have much experience. So we would be honored to have you with us in the competition. Please drop me a line to let me know your decision. We are looking forward to your coming. Yours,Li Hua【分析】这是一篇应用文，按照要求写一封邀请信。【详解】第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。假定你叫李华，你校拟举行英文电影“配音大赛”。请你给外教史密斯写封信，邀请 他做大赛的评委。内容包括：1. 大赛的时间及地点；2. 大赛的目的（提高学习英语的积极性与口语能力等）；3. 邀请史密斯的原因。人称为第一、第二人称。时态以一般将来时为主。第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段，引入话题/写信目的。第二段，主要内容（文中所列的三大要点）。第三段，期望。第三步：确定关键词汇和短语:等。第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接；注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。【点睛】文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了一些亮点词（组）：coming即将到来的；inspire激励；imitation模仿；be honored to do很荣幸做某事；drop sb. a line给某人写信；look forward to期望等。以及一些较为高级的句式: To inspire us to learn English and improve our speaking ability, an English film dubbing competition is to be held at two o'clock this Friday afternoon in the school hall.使用了不定式做目的状语。 高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。2．NoticeIn order to develop students’ interest in English literature, a short novel, The Necklace, is going to be read together this Friday.The novel is not long but attractive, which can be finished just in 1 hour. Anyone who shows interest in the novel is welcome to the school’s lecture hall, located on the first floor of the teaching building, to enjoy it. The novel reading will begin this Friday afternoon, lasting 2 hours, from 4:00 to 6:00. In order to get the reading hand-outs, you’d better arrive a bit earlier. After reading the novel, you are expected to share your ideas with other readers.You can’t afford to miss the opportunity. Looking forward to your attendance.Student Union【分析】这是一篇应用文写作。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华，本学期在英语学习中遇到了一些困难。请你写信向你校外教老师Jim寻求帮助, 内容包括：1.本人简介；2.求助内容；3.约定时间和联系方式。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：in order to（为了）；literature（文学）；show interest in（对……有兴趣）；located on（位于）；be expected to（被期待做某事）等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时和一般将来时。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如The novel is not long but attractive, which can be finished just in 1 hour. 运用非限定性定语从句；Anyone who shows interest in the novel is welcome to the school’s lecture hall, located on the first floor of the teaching building, to enjoy it.非谓语动词的运用。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外, 文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。3．Dear Mike,In your last letter, you mentioned that you want to know something about the Spring Festival. I am writing to tell you about it. Spring Festival has a long history, which was originally celebrated to scare away a fierce beast “Nian”. Slightly different from that in the past, it is now given new meanings and regarded as a way for people to enjoy reunion with their families however far they live or work. On the New Year’s Eve, each family has its members gathered together. They tell each other their lives in the past year, exchange gifts and eat a lot of delicious meals in the warmth of the family. Children can get lucky money in red paper. People have a good time, holding opera performances, and other celebrations.I hope you will come here and experience this wonderful festival.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本文是一篇应用文，要求写一封邮信件，属于提纲类作文。【详解】考生在写作的前必须认真审题。假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Mike想了解中国的春节，请你给他写封回信介绍这个节日。写作时人称主要为第一和第二人称，时态主要为一般现在时。在写作中不要遗漏要点，根据要求和提示信息合理安排篇章中各个部分内容的比例，做到详略得当、条理清楚、文字简练。此外要准确使用语法结构和词汇，清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思。恰当选用衔接词使文章更流畅。写完后检查是否有拼写错误和标点错误等。【点睛】范文全文要点齐全，使用高级短语和词汇has a long history，originally，scare away，different from，be regarded as等，以及高级句型Spring Festival has a long history, which was originally celebrated to scare away a fierce beast “Nian”.（which引导定语从句）；Slightly different from that in the past, it is now given new meanings and regarded as a way for people to enjoy reunion with their families however far they live or work.（different from是形容词作伴随状语）；People have a good time, holding opera performances, and other celebrations.（使用了非谓语动词作状语）。4．Dear Daisy,I am writing to invite you to see the Hanfu Culture Show, as I know you are very interested in traditional Chinese culture.The show will be held on November 20th in the City Art Centre. First, there will be catwalk shows, at which models will show what Hanfu, the traditional clothing of China’s Han ethnic group, looks like. Apart from catwalk shows, the event will also invite experts to share different styles of Hanfu with us as well as the rich culture behind them. It is a good chance for us to learn about Hanfu.I really hope that you will come. Looking forward to your reply.【分析】这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生以李华的名义给朋友写信，邀请他参加汉服文化表演秀，并介绍相关情况。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般将来时结构：总分要求：1.    表明写信目的2.    活动时间、地点3.    活动内容（汉服走秀、专家解说汉服式样以及文化内涵等）第二步：列提纲（重点词组）be interested in/ invite sb to do sth/ have a better understanding of/ be glad to do sth/ surf the internet/ broaden one’s horizon/ visual feast/ have a good knowledge of/be dressed in/ make up/ have a history of第三步：连词成句1.    knowing that you are interested in traditional Chinese culture, I am delighted to invite you to enjoy a show called Hanfu Culture Show with me.2.    Now, I will tell you something about the show in detail.3.    The performance will be held at 9:00 a.m. next Saturday in the hall of our school, which will surely enrich our school life and promote traditional Chinese culture, 4.    It will be a great show played by senior two students dressed in Hanfu. 5.    Undoubtedly, it will be a visual feast.6. Apart from catwalk shows, the event will also invite experts to share different styles of Hanfu with us as well as the rich culture behind them, which will be a good chance for us to learn about Hanfu.7. Looking forward to your coming.第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so…状语从句连词：because/ if/ though/ although…定语从句连词：which/ that/ when/ where…第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些主从复合句，例如：I am writing to invite you to see the Hanfu Culture Show, as I know you are very interested in traditional Chinese culture.句中as引导原因状语从句；First, there will be catwalk shows, at which models will show what Hanfu, the traditional clothing of China’s Han ethnic group, looks like.句中which引导非限制性定语从句，what引导宾语从句。这些从句的使用为文章增色添彩。5．Dear Mary,How is everything going? I’m writing to tell you the news that a Chorus Competition will be held in our school. I’m more than glad to invite you to attend it.In order to celebrate the upcoming 70th anniversary of the founding of the People’s Republic of China, the Students’ Union has decided to hold a chorus competition, whose theme is “Love our Motherland”. As scheduled, the contest will take place on the afternoon of September 29th in the school hall, which will last 3 hours from 2:00 pm to 5:00 pm. Besides, students and teachers of each class will be required to wear school uniforms and sing varieties of wonderful songs together to show our deep love for the motherland. Then the class who sings best will be awarded with a big prize by the headmaster. It can be of great fun and meaningful, which will leave a deep impression on you.I would appreciate it if you accept my invitation. Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，邀请外教Mary观看学校举行的师生合唱比赛。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。结构：总分法   总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1. 合唱比赛时间、地点；2. 比赛安排。第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）Chorus Competition；invite sb to do; the 70th anniversary of; People’s Republic of China; the Students’ Union; “Love our Motherland”; take place; be required to do; school uniform ;be awarded with; be of great fun第三步：连词成句1. I’m writing to tell you the news that a Chorus Competition will be held in our school.2. I’m more than glad to invite you to attend it.3. In order to celebrate the upcoming 70th anniversary of the founding of the People’s Republic of China, the Students’ Union has decided to hold a chorus competition, whose theme is “Love our Motherland”.4. As scheduled, the contest will take place on the afternoon of September 29th in the school hall, which will last 3 hours from 2:00 pm to 5:00 pm.5 Students and teachers of each class will be required to wear school uniforms and sing varieties of wonderful songs together to show our deep love for the motherland. 6. The class who sings best will be awarded with a big prize by the headmaster.7. It can be of great fun and meaningful, which will leave a deep impression on you.8. I would appreciate it if you accept my invitation.  根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that… 4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，第五步：润色修改【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。此外，文章的亮点就是各种句型的使用：I’m writing to tell you the news that a Chorus Competition will be held in our school.使用了that引起的同位语从句； the Students’ Union has decided to hold a chorus competition, whose theme is “Love our Motherland”包含了whose引导的非限定性定语从句；Then the class who sings best will be awarded with a big prize by the headmaster.和 It can be of great fun and meaningful, which will leave a deep impression on you.都使用了定语从句。6．Dear Mr. Peter,I am Li Hua, Chair of the Student Union of Yucai Middle School, which is close to your University. I am writing to invite you to be a judge at our English speech contest to be held in our school on June first. It will start at 2:00 pm and keep for about three hours. Ten students will deliver their speeches on the given topic “Love”.Finally，one of them will be the winner to  take part in the speech contest in your university. I hope you will accept our invitation  if it is convenient for you. Please call me at 123456, if you have any questions.I am looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【分析】按照题目要求，李华需要给外籍教师Peter写一封信，邀请他来做评委。【详解】首先，注意信件的格式，要介绍清楚自己的身份和目的。第二，比赛通知中的内容能够较详细地用流畅清晰的语言的表达出来，不要一味地用简单的陈述句表现，要使用各种从句，祈使句，倒装句等丰富多样的句式，当然也要求简洁清晰的表达，不要拖泥带水。第三，作为邀请信要做到语气诚恳而礼貌，绝不可使用强硬或呆板的语气。【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用定语从句及同位语，如：“I am Li Hua, Chair of the Student Union of Yucai Middle School, which is close to your University.”这句话中，“Chair of the Student Union of Yucai Middle School”为同位语，“which is close to your University.”为非限制性定语从句修饰“Yucai Middle School”。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。7．Dear Henry,I’ve learned that you are interested in Chinese tea culture, and some of my friends plan to pay a visit to the tea garden near our school this Sunday. I wonder if you could join us.I think it will be an enjoyable experience for you to learn some history and development of Chinese tea culture there. And I bet you will be impressed by the traditional craftsmanship of making tea, which includes washing the tea pots, adding tea leaves, and pouring water into the cups. And then you could taste the tea made by yourself.I am looking forward to your reply. With best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【分析】本书面表达是一篇提纲类写作。要求以李华的名义用英语给英国朋友Tom写一封信。【详解】这是一篇书信类作文。写作提要为假定你是李华，你和几个朋友打算去参观茶园，想邀请美国交流生Henry同往。请你给他写封邮件告知活动安排。内容包括：1. 时间和地点；2. 学习如何沏茶，品茶；3. 介绍中国茶文化的历史和发展。我们所要做的就是用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。本作文中给出的要点比较简略，故需要自由发挥的地方较多。需要注意不要偏离文章中心。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合整个文章,不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。【点睛】本文内容齐全，结构严谨，层次分明，布局合理，语言精练，同时运用高级句子。定语从句的使用：And I bet you will be impressed by the traditional craftsmanship of making tea, which includes washing the tea pots, adding tea leaves, and pouring water into the cups.8．Dear John,Having heard that you are fascinated with the coming-of-age ceremony to be held in our school on May 4th. I am writing to sincerely invite you to attend it.The ceremony will be held at 8 o'clock in the morning in the school playground, lasting for the entire morning. Senior Three students attending this ceremony are supposed to dress formally and take an oath, declaring that we are adults who would be responsible for our own behavior.The significance of this ceremony is to make us realize that we are not children any more and we should be more mature and responsible for what we do.Looking forward to your early reply. Best wishes.Yours,Li Hua【分析】这是一篇应用文。要求写一封邀请信。【详解】根据提示信息，假设你是高三学生李华，你的美国外教John对你们将在5月4日举行的成人仪式很感兴趣，要求你用英语给他写一封邮件，邀请他参加此次活动。   1.首先注意时态以将来时为主，其次人称使用第三人称。2.根据文章的写作要求，可以分为三大段;第一段介绍活动时间和地点；第二段介绍一下活动内容；第三段谈谈活动的意义。3. 注意使用高级词汇和句式，为文章增添色彩；注意使用连接词、衔接词，使文章自然、流畅。【点睛】本文内容完整，语言表述流畅。文章使用了几个高级句型。1. The ceremony will be held at 8 o'clock in the morning in the school playground, lasting for the entire morning.  本句使用了将来时的被动语态，且使用了现在分词作状语。用一句话表达出了时间，地点。2. Senior Three students attending this ceremony are supposed to dress formally and take an oath, declaring that we are adults who would be responsible for our own behavior. 本句含有that引导的宾语从句和who引导的定语从句。3. The significance of this ceremony is to make us realize that we are not children any more and we should be more mature and responsible for what we do. 本句中含有that引导的宾语从句，两个and连接的并列句，此外what引导的是宾语从句。9．Dear Peter,Learning that you not only enjoy Chinese dishes but try cooking them, I’m more than glad to invite you to my home and to have a taste of the dishes cooked on my own.Let's first decide on the date. What about next Saturday? Is it convenient for you to come at 10 am? Then we will have almost two hours to prepare the meal and I will have enough time to show you how to cook it. By the way, there are many recipe books in my home because of my mum's love for cooking. You can choose whichever you're interested in.Hope you can enjoy the time in my home. Look forward to your coming.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【分析】本文属于应用文，要求写一封书信。【详解】这是一篇应用文,话题锁定为中国元素之中国菜肴。应交换生 Peter想学做中国菜的请求,你邀请他来自己家中品尝中国菜并教他烹饪技巧。写作时应注意:  1.人称上,以第二人称和第一人称为主进行写作;  2. 时态上,以一般将来时为主,一般现在时为辅;   3. 结构上,运用"三段式"结构：首段点明邀请来家品尝, 次段具体说明时间、乐意传授技巧及赠送烹饪书,注意合理地增加细节,末段再次表达邀请和真诚祝愿。【点睛】本文思路清晰,语言连贯,在语言的表达上选词新颖,同时运用了较好的结构和句式。1.开篇吸引人:现在分词短语(Learning that...cooking them),固定搭配(have a taste of cooked on my own)的使用, 2.两个问句( What about next Saturday?和Is it convenient for you to come at10am?)使得邀请更委婉。3."疑问词+不定式"结构( how to cook it), whichever引导的宾语从句( whichever you're interested in)和祝愿句Hope you can enjoy the time in my home)使得本文的语言地道出彩。10．Dear Mr. Smith,I’m Li Hua, chairman of the Students’ Union, writing to invite you to attend the opening ceremony of “Music week” in our school.As scheduled, the ceremony is to be held in the school gymnasium at 6:30 this Saturday evening, during which some students will show their hidden music talents. It will start with the School Anthem (校歌)，followed by various performances/activities ranging from singing pop songs to playing musical instruments. Believe it or not, even some school bands will play and sing their original songs, which can surely be the highlight of the ceremony. I bet this great feast will never fail to impress you with the charm of music. I do hope you could come and have fun with us.Please reply at your earliest convenience.Yours sincerelyLi Hua【分析】考查应用文中的书信写作。【详解】题目要求假如你是李华，你校将举办一次音乐周Music week活动，请你以学生会主席的身份邀请外教Mr. Smith参加音乐周的开幕式。内容包括：1.时间和地点:本周六晚上六点半学校体育馆；2. 活动内容：演唱流行歌曲和器乐演奏等。分析可知，应该以第一人称为主，一般现在时和一般将来时进行写作。要点已经给出，要求考生根据提纲自己发挥拓展，考生要先想好写哪几点，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。【点睛】这篇邮件写作短文的关键在于要点的拓展，同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。As scheduled, the ceremony is to be held in the school gymnasium at 6:30 this Saturday evening, during which some students will show their hidden music talents.定语从句的运用；Believe it or not, even some school bands will play and sing their original songs, which can surely be the highlight of the ceremony.定语从句的运用。