江西高考英语写作分类训练：建议信

这是一份江西高考英语写作分类训练：建议信，共18页。
建议信
1．假如你是李华，最近收到了你的美国朋友Taylor的来信。她在信中说，她刚进高中，不能适应新的环境，不知如何去结交新朋友，因而情绪低落。请你给她写一封回信，回信内容应包括如下要点：
1. 向Taylor表示问候和安慰；
2. 针对她的问题提出以下建议：
(1)同学遇到麻烦时，要去帮助他们；(2)放学后邀请同学一起参加活动；(3)其他建议
注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
Dear Taylor
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Yours truly
LI Hua
2．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他暑假将来北京参加“外国人唱中国歌大赛”，希望你为他推荐一首中文歌曲。请给他回邮件，内容包括：
1.推荐曲目；
2.推荐理由；
3.你的祝愿。
注意：1.词数不少于100；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours，
Li Hua
3．假如你是李华，你昨天收到好友Tom的来信，他说他上了高中以后感觉很郁闷，很孤独，学习压力大，作业完不成，上课听不懂等诸多学习和生活的问题，想辍学。请你帮帮他，给他提些建议。要点：
（1）和同学友好相处，多交友，多参加课外活动。
（2）找到适当的放松方式。
（3）努力学习，课前做好准备。
注意：（1）字数100左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）可紧扣主题适当发挥。辍学 drop out of school
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4．假定你是李华，你校英语角要举办主题为“中外体态语异同”的活动，你想邀请外教Lynn参加，请给她写一封电子邮件。内容包括：
1. 活动目的；
2. 活动介绍；
3. 征求其建议。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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5．假设你是李华，你的好友Jack 想要在学校组织一场音乐会，为无家可归的孩子筹款。他特意写来邮件向你咨询相关事宜。请你根据以下要点给他回一封邮件。
具体要点如下：
1.确定举办场地；
2.确定演出者及赞助商（sponsor）；
3. ……
注意：1.词数：100左右
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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6．假定你是李华，你校外教Smith非常喜欢中国绘画，请你根据以下信息，给他写封信，告诉他近期将要举办的一个画展，并建议他去参观。
1. 时间：2月1日到15日；
2. 地点；八大山人美术馆；
3. 地址；南昌市青云谱路269号；
4. 内容：八大山人100多幅绘画作品；
5. 画家简介：中国17世纪伟大艺术家，擅长绘画，书法，尤其在山水画方面卓有成就。其作品个性鲜明，并对后世画家有深远影响。
注意：1. 词数：100左右。
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3. 参考词汇：展览：exhibition；美术馆：gallery；山水画：landscape painting；书法：calligraphy
Dear Smith,
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Yours
Li Hua
7．假如你是某杂志健康栏目的主持人Mr Helper，人们经常写信询问健康之道，请你写一封回信，指出健康的重要性，并针对“如何保持健康”给出自己的建议。信的内容需包含以下信息：
1．健康的重要性；
2．给出保持健康的方法，如：科学饮食，多吃水果蔬菜，保持饮食平衡；避免高糖，高脂的食物；摒弃不良习惯；多锻炼等。
注意：词数100左右。
Dear readers,
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Yours sincerely,
Mr Helper
8．圣诞节即将来临，你的好友 Tom 正在为如何度过假期而苦恼。假如你是李华，请你给他写一封信， 谈谈你的看法。要点如下:
1. 你的建议：旅行等。
2. 你的理由。
注意:1. 词数 100 左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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9．假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Jack刚刚升入高中，但他一时无法适应新的校园生活，写信向你征求建议。请你就此问题给他回一封建议信，内容主要包括：
1.实际上很多新生对于高中生活感到困惑，因此不必过多担心；
2.建议：
（1）报名参加课外活动，这有助于结交更多的新朋友；
（2）制作好学习日程安排，要特别关注学习，因为作为一名青少年，学习好是我们的责任。
3.希望建议能适合你。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jack,
I am sorry to hear that you’re having trouble adjusting to your high school life.
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Yours,
Li Hua
10．假如你是李华，你的朋友Susan 即将上大学，但她的母亲却仍然把她当小孩子一样看待，这使她非常苦恼。请你给Susan 写一封建议信帮助她解决问题。
词数：1.120左右，2.可适当增加细节，以示行文连贯3.信中需包含以下要点：（1）.告诉她要理解母亲；（2）.给她提出解决问题的具体建议。
Dear Susan，
As a student of your age , I understand your situation. The problem you are facing ……
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1．Dear Taylor
I am really sorry to hear that you feel bad after entering high school. I’d like to give you some useful suggestions about it.
In fact, in your high school, your classmates are also new students and facing the same problem, so you don’t have to worry too much about it. There is also something that you can do to change this situation .Firstly, help your classmates when they are in trouble. Then they are in trouble. Then, try to invite some of your classmates to take part in some activities together after school, which will help you understand each other better. Finally, you should often communicate with your classmates about your life and study
Only in this way can you soon get used to your new school life and make many new friends there
Yours truly
LI Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给美国朋友Taylor写一封邮件，给他一些如何快速适应高中生活的建议。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。
结构：总分法
   总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1.感到遗憾
      2.给予相关建议
     1）乐于助人。（help your classmates when they are in trouble.）
2）尝试去社交。（try to invite some of your classmates to take part in some activities together）
3) 学会沟通。（communicate with your classmates about your life and study）   
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
in fact；are in trouble；take part in; communicate with; only in this way; get used to
第三步：连词成句
1. Help your classmates when they are in trouble.
2. Try to invite some of your classmates to take part in some activities together after school.
3. You should often communicate with your classmates about your life and study.
4. Only in this way can you soon get used to your new school life.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：Then, try to invite some of your classmates to take part in some activities together after school , which will help you understand each other better.本句使用了which引导的非限制定语从句。作者在范文中还使用了倒装语序，起到画龙点睛的效果。如：Only in this way can you soon get used to your new school life and make many new friends there.全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
2．Dear Jim,
How is it going? I'm so glad to hear you will come to Beijing and participate in the Chinese Singing Competition for Foreigners this summer vacation. For the song to choose, I highly recommend Moli Hua, Jasmine Flower, which is representative of Chinese-folk music.
My recommendation is based on the following reasons. First of all, it enjoys wide popularity, so there's no doubt it will attract the audience's attention once you start to sing. Moreover, this song has beautiful melody and simple lyrics, which are relatively easy for you to learn in a short time. At the same time, the soothing tunes will make your learning process pleasant and comfortable. I bet you are bound to stand out among all the competitors.
I sincerely hope my recommendation can be helpful and wish you a wonderful performance. When you come to Beijing, remember to let me know, since I'd like to be there to cheer for you.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文。文章要求写一封电子邮件，就你的英国朋友Jim暑假来北京参加“中国歌曲演唱大赛”的参赛歌曲给出建议。内容包括推荐的曲目、推荐该曲目的原因以及对他比赛成功的祝愿。
【详解】分析题目可知，文章要求写一封建议邮件，内容包括推荐的曲目以及为什么要推荐这首歌，这是一般事实，因此全文可使用一般现在时。本篇文章的要求较为简单明确，因此可发挥的空间较多，但关于推荐理由要详细描述。
文章可采用三段式的结构。第一段介绍了作者写邮件的目的，即欢迎朋友到北京来参加比赛，并推荐朋友在比赛中唱茉莉花。第二段为邮件的正文部分，详细介绍了推荐唱茉莉花的原因，其中包括这首歌传唱度非常高；歌曲的旋律和歌词非常优美；曲调非常舒缓学习起来非常的享受。第三段则表示了作者对朋友参加比赛的美好祝愿。
【点睛】整篇文章要点明确，分段合理，字数适当，句式结构丰富是一篇比较优秀的应试作文。文章使用了较多的非限制性定语从句“…I highly recommend Moli Hua, Jasmine Flower, which is representative of Chinese-folk music.”和“Moreover, this song has beautiful melody and simple lyrics, which are relatively easy for you to learn in a short time.”。在文章第二段使用了具有递进意味的“First of all,…Moreover,…和At the same time,”使得在阐述推荐曲目的原因时结构更加饱满。文章还使用了participate in（参加），highly recommend （强力推荐）， is representative of （是……的代表），is based on（基于……），there's no doubt（毫无疑问的是……），are bound to（一定会……）,sincerely hope（由衷地希望）等高频短语。
3．Dear Tom,
I am very sorry to hear that you are having trouble with your middle school life. However, the situation is very easy to change if you take my advice. Here are some tips to help you:
First of all, you should be friendly to anyone who you meet at the new school and try to make friends with them. And it is also a good idea to take part in after-school activities. That can make you happy. Secondly, Why not choose some proper ways to relax. In my opinion, taking exercise, watching TV or playing computer games is a good way to relax yourself. Thirdly, I agree that you should study hard and have a good preparation for every class so that you can understand the teacher.
I hope that you will find these tips useful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一封回信：假如你是李华，你昨天收到好友Tom的来信，他说他上了高中以后感觉很郁闷，很孤独，学习压力大，作业完不成，上课听不懂等诸多学习和生活的问题，想辍学。请你帮帮他，给他提些建议。要点：（1）和同学友好相处，多交友，多参加课外活动。（2）找到适当的放松方式。（3）努力学习，课前做好准备。时态应为一般现在时。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； trouble（麻烦），after-school activities（课外活动），friendly（友好的），advice（建议）， preparation（准备），useful（有用的）及relax（放松）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。
【点睛】范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有have trouble with（在……方面有麻烦），be friendly to sb（对某人友好），drop out of school（辍学），make friends with sb(与某人交朋友)，in one 's opinion（依某人的观点），take part in（参加）以及take exercise（做运动、锻炼），而且还使用了条件状语从句“However, the situation is very easy to change if you take my advice.”，宾语从句“I am very sorry to hear that you are having trouble with your middle school life.”及“I hope that you will find these tips useful.”，目的状语从句“Thirdly, I agree that you should study hard and have a good preparation for every class so that you can understand the teacher.”，形式主语“And it is also a good idea to take part in after-school activities.”，非谓语动词“In my opinion, taking exercise, watching TV or playing computer games is a good way to relax yourself.”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。
4．Dear Lynn,
In order to improve our ability of communication and better understand foreign cultures, we’ll hold an event at the English Corner at five next Friday afternoon, in which we’ll talk about the similarities and differences between Chinese and foreign body languages. Every one present should make a short speech, talking about body languages, as well as answering questions asked by others, As is known to all, we use not only words but also rich body languages to express us, as the body language plays an important role in communicating. So I’ll appreciate it if you join us and give us some good advice on the event.
Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华，你校英语角要举办主题为“中外体态语异同”的活动，你想邀请外教Lynn参加，请给她写一封电子邮件。内容包括：1. 活动目的；2. 活动介绍；3. 征求其建议。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：in order to(为了)；hold an event(举办活动)；similarities (相似性)；as is known to all (众所周知)；play an important role in(发挥重要作用)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时和一般将来时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如In order to improve our ability of communication and better understand foreign cultures, we’ll hold an event at the English Corner at five next Friday afternoon, in which we’ll talk about the similarities and differences between Chinese and foreign body languages.运用了非限定性定语从句；以及Every one present should make a short speech, talking about body languages, as well as answering questions asked by others.非谓语动词的运用。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外, 文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
5．Dear Jack,
I’m honored to be asked to give you some advice. As you know, our class organized a show last month, from which I learned a lot.
First, you need to find an ideal place to hold the concert. The school hall is a good choice. Second, you’d better find some performers and sponsors. You can select some of your classmates who are good at singing performers. As for sponsors, you can invite parents to join you. I believe that they are willing to help those homeless children. At last, I wish you good luck and every success for the concert.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇提纲作文。题干中给出了两个写作要点，但是还有一个要点需要同学们根据自己的生活学习经验自主发挥。
【详解】第一步：审题：确定时态和人称。这封信主要是要求你作为李华向好友Jack就学校组织一场音乐会的一些细节提出建议，所以时态应以一般现在时为主，人称为第一人称和第二人称。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
be honored to do…（很荣幸做……）；learn a lot from…（从……学到很多）；find an ideal place to…（找一个理想的地方去做……）；be good at doing sth.（擅长于做某事）；invite… to join…（邀请某人加入……）；be willing to do sth.（很乐意做某事）；wish you good luck（祝你好运）等。
第三步：遣词造句：同学们在写作时不能逐句翻译，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯，同时要点表述要完整，文章要通顺，准确使用时态和语态。
第四步：连句成文：写作时要适当使用连词、过渡词和插入语，使文章浑然一体。同时恰当而合理地使用一些高级词汇和句型，如定语从句等，以提高文章档次。
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多句式，如：from which 引导的非限制性定语从句As you know, our class organized a show last month, from which I learned a lot. that引导的宾语从句 I believe that they are willing to help those homeless children. 此外本文还使用了一些高级词汇，如am honored to do…；learned a lot from…；find an ideal place to…；be good at doing sth.；invite… to join…；be willing to do sth.；wish you good luck等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
6．Dear Smith,
I know you are keen on traditional Chinese painting, consequently I’m glad to inform you of the good news that an art exhibition will be held from February 1st to February 15th in Badashanren Gallery, where more than 100 paintings of Badashanren will be on show.
Located at 269 Qinyunpu Road, Badashanren Gallery is the perfect place to appreciate the works of Badashanren, a great artist of Nanchang in the 17th century. Not only did he make great achievements in painting, especially landscape painting, but his calligraphy was also well-known at his time. His works are full of his own personality and had deep and far-reaching influence on later painters including Qi Baishi. I promise you will fall in love with his works and achieve a lot once you pay a visit to the show.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇考查的是一篇介绍信。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知,本篇为一封信; 你校外教Smith非常喜欢中国绘画, 请你根据以下信息, 给他写封信,告诉他近期将要举办的一个画展, 并建议他去参观。要点：1. 时间:2月1日到15日;2. 地点:八大山人美术馆;3. 地址:南昌市青云谱路269号;4. 内容:八大山人100多幅绘画作品;5. 画家简介:中国17世纪伟大艺术家, 擅长绘画, 书法, 尤其在山水画方面卓有成就。其作品个性鲜明, 并对后世画家有深远影响。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组) , 如: inform you of通知某人; exhibition; 美术馆:gallery; 山水画:landscape painting;书法:calligraphy等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【高分句型】He developed a style that is unique to his personality and works. 他形成了自己独特的个性和作品的风格。that引导定语从句，be unique to所……独有的。
7．Dear readers,
It goes without saying that no pleasure can be tasted by man without health. Health is far more important than anything else. Good health enables us to enjoy our life and achieve what we hope for in our career.
How can we keep healthy? Here are some suggestions for you to follow.
To begin with, we should develop good habits. We should avoid food with lots of sugar and fat. What's more, we have to get rid of those habits that damage our health, such as drinking and smoking. Last but not least, we'd better exercise every day to make our bodies strong. Proper diet and enough exercise do good to our health.
If we follow the advice given above, we will lead a healthy life.
Yours sincerely,
Mr Helper
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封回信，指出健康的重要性，并针对“如何保持健康”给出自己的建议。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时
结构：总分总式
要求：1. 健康的重要性
2. 针对“如何保持健康”给出建议，即是给出保持健康的方法
3. 总结上述做法的好处
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）：
pleasure；health；enable sb. to do sth.；our career；keep healthy；develop good habits；lots of；have to； get rid of；damage one’s health；such as；every day；do good to one’s health；lead a healthy life等
第三步：连词成句：
1. It goes without saying that no pleasure can be tasted by man without health.
2. Health is far more important than anything else.
3. Good health enables us to enjoy our life and achieve what we hope for in our career.
4. We should avoid food with lots of sugar and fat.
5. We have to get rid of those habits that damage our health, such as drinking and smoking.
6. We'd better exercise every day to make our bodies strong.
7. Proper diet and enough exercise do good to our health.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）：
1.表文章结构顺序：To begin with, …. Last but not least….
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, and等
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多高分句型，如：It goes without saying that no pleasure can be tasted by man without health.使用了It作形式主语；Health is far more important than anything else.使用了形容词比较级；Good health enables us to enjoy our life and achieve what we hope for in our career.使用了and并列和what引导的宾语从句；We'd better exercise every day to make our bodies strong.使用了We’d better do…句型；If we follow the advice given above, we will lead a healthy life.使用了if引导的条件句等。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
8．Dear Tom,
Learning that you are worried about how to spend your holiday for the coming Christmas, I’m now writing to give you my advice.
If I were you, I would prefer to go travelling. Here are my reasons. First of all, travelling is a good way to relax yourself, which is beneficial both to your health and your study. Besides, you can meet and make friends with people of different colors and races. Last but not least, it can really broaden your horizons and enrich your knowledge. For example, you will have a better understanding of the history and cultures of the places you have visited.
In a word, it is well worth spending your holiday travelling because you can benefit a lot from it. Hope my suggestions will be helpful to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知, 本篇为一封电子邮件；圣诞节即将来临，你的好友 Tom 正在为如何度过假期而苦恼。假如你是李华,请你给他写一封信， 谈谈你的看法。要点如下:1. 你的建议:旅行等；2. 你的理由。
第2步：根据写作要求, 确定关键词（组）, 如：be worried about（担心）；would prefer to（宁愿）；beneficial（有益的）；make friends with（交朋友）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句, 注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要用一般现在时。
第4步：连句成文, 注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡, 书写一定要规范清晰, 保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整, 语言规范, 语篇连贯, 词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式, 如If I were you, I would prefer to go travelling.运用了虚拟语气；In a word, it is well worth spending your holiday travelling because you can benefit a lot from it.运用了原因状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式, 显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外, 文章思路清晰、层次分明, 上下句转换自然, 为文章增色添彩。
9．Dear Jack,
I am sorry to hear that you’re having trouble adjusting to your high school life. Actually, many freshmen are confused about high school life, so there is no need to worry about it too much. I’m writing to offer you some useful suggestions.
First，I suggest that you sign up for extra-curricular activities, which can help you make more new friends. In this way you won’t feel lonely and your school life will be come colorful and interesting. Second, you should make a good schedule and focus on improving your study. As a teenager, it is our responsibility to study well.
I hope my suggestions will be of great help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文, 写一封建议信，关于如何适应新的校园生活给笔友提出建议。。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文  建议信
时态：一般现在时和一般将来时
结构：分三部分，第一部分写信目的：提出建议；第二部分建议的具体内容；第三部分希望接受建议。
要点：
1.写信目的：很多新生对于高中生活感到困惑，因此不必过多担心，想关于他的问题提出建议。
2.建议内容：
（1）报名参加课外活动
（2）结交更多的新朋友；
（3）制作好学习日程安排
（4）要关注学习
3.希望建议有帮助，并能接受建议。
第二步：列提纲（重点词汇、短语  ）
have trouble (in) doing ….;   adjust to ； be confused about ;  worry about ;  offer some advice; recommend ; sign up for; make new friends; make a good schedule; focus on  ;
be helpful to  ; accept one’s suggestions
第三步：连词成句
（1）Many freshmen are confused about high school life.
（2）There is no need to worry about it too much.
（3）I’m writing to offer you some useful advice.
（4）I suggest that you sign up for extra-curricular activities .
（5）It can help you make more new friends.
（6）Your school life will become colorful and interesting.
（7）You should make a good schedule to improve your study.
（8）I hope my suggestions will be of great help to you.
根据提示和关键词进行遣词造句,适当地运用句型，注意时态和主谓一致问题。
第四步：连句成篇(衔接词、过渡词)
用so、therefore 连接（1）（2）句
Many freshmen are confused about high school life. Therefore，there is no need to worry about it too much.
用句型It is suggested that 改写（4）句
It is suggested that you sign up for extra-curricular activities .
用定语从句连接（4）（5）句
It is suggested that you sign up for extra-curricular activities，which can help you make more new friends.
用插入语most importantly过渡（7）句
Most importantly , you should make a good schedule to improve your study.
连句成文，运用恰当的衔接词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，适当运用复杂句式增加句子的可读性。
【点睛】建议信写作指导
一、审题
建议信是就某方面问题向对方提建议，属于应用文。
二、谋篇布局
建议信一般可分为三部分：
第一部分：引出话题，说明写信目的（就某一方面问题提建议）；
第二部分：提出具体的建议并说明理由；
第三部分：希望对对方有帮助，并希望对方采纳。
三、组织语言
1. 引出话题，说明写信目的。
I’m writing to give some advice / suggestions on ... 我写信是关于…提出建议。
Considering …. , I would like to offer several suggestions.
考虑到…， 我想提出几条建议。
I’m writing to ask you to consider the following needs of the disabled. 我写信是想让你考虑残疾人下面的需求。
The following are my suggestions.下面是我的建议。
2. 提出建议并说明理由。
It is important to get along well with your classmates. 和同学相处好很重要。
You are supposed to arrive at the meeting on time . 你应该按时到达会议。
You’d better arrive at the meeting on time.你最好按时到达会议。
It’s advised that you should bring some small gifts for the children.建议你带一些小礼物给孩子们。
3. 希望对方采纳
I hope you will find my advice / suggestions useful / helpful / practical.希望你觉得我的建议有用/有帮助/实用。
I hope you will consider my advice / suggestions.希望你能考虑我的建议。
10．Dear Susan，
As a student of your age. I understand your situation. The problem you are facing is common among our teenagers. However, it should be wise not to do anything that may hurt her feelings.
First, it’s advisable to talk more with your mom .It can help you understand each others better. They are also opportunities to let her know your ideas of and attitudes toward many things. Second, you should learn to do your own things well, proving to your mom that you are already a “grown-up”, It’s even better if you could share more of the housework, such as cleaning, washing and cooking and so all.
Hope my ideas will work.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知, 本篇为一封电子邮件；假如你是李华，你的朋友Susan 即将上大学，但她的母亲却仍然把她当小孩子一样看待，这使她非常苦恼。请你给Susan 写一封建议信帮助她解决问题。词数：1.120左右，2.可适当增加细节，以示行文连贯3.信中需包含以下要点：（1）.告诉她要理解母亲；（2）.给她提出解决问题的具体建议。
第2步：根据写作要求, 确定关键词（组）, 如：advisable（明智的）；talk with（交谈）；each other（互相）；attitude（看法）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句, 注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步：连句成文, 注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡, 书写一定要规范清晰, 保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整, 语言规范, 语篇连贯, 词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式, 如Second, you should learn to do your own things well, proving to your mom that you are already a “grown-up”.非谓语动词的运用；It’s even better if you could share more of the housework, such as cleaning, washing and cooking and so all.运用了条件状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式, 显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外, 文章思路清晰、层次分明, 上下句转换自然, 为文章增色添彩。