高考英语写作分类训练：邀请信

这是一份高考英语写作分类训练：邀请信，共17页。试卷主要包含了举办的时间和地点;，活动的内容，假设你是李华等内容，欢迎下载使用。
邀请信5．假如你是李明，端午节即将到来，请你写一封信邀请你的加拿大朋友Jack来中国过端午节。信的主要内容包括:1. 发出诚挚的邀请；2. 对端午节作简单介绍；3. 介绍你将带他做什么。注意:1. 词数100左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．假定你是学生会主席李华,你校将举办主题为“祖国颂”的庆祝建国70周年文艺演出,你将邀请你的英国朋友Joe观看这场演出。请你写封邮件向他介绍有关情况,内容包括：1．举办的时间和地点;2．活动的目的;3．活动的内容。注意：1．词数100左右;2．可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3．参考词汇：祖国颂Ode to Our Motherland;周年纪念日anniversary.Dear Joe,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua3．假如你是李华，你想邀请美国好友John观看京剧表演，但John不在家，请你给他写封邮件，内容包括：1. 你到John家的目的；2. 简要介绍京剧；3. 询问什么时候方便，再约时间。注意：1. 词数120左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。提示词汇：京剧     Beijing Opera_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．学校邀请了长江大学的李明博士做一个“如何做好职业生涯规划”的讲座，请你以学生会的名义写一份书面通知，2019年1月24日发出，内容如下:1.讲座时间: 1月27日(星期日)，上午8:30-11:302.讲座地点:校学术报告厅3.注意事项:……(至少两项)参考词汇:职业生涯规划career planning  学生会Students' Union注意: 1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。NOTICE_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．假定你是李华，上周应留学生朋友Leslie的邀请，你去听了一场钢琴音乐会，你打算教他认识中国汉字以示感谢。就此请你用英语给他写一封信件，内容包括：1.对受邀表示感谢；2.简要回忆音乐会及感受；3.提出教他汉字作为回报。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Leslie,How is everything getting along with you recently?___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely,Li Hua6．假定你是李华，你校书法社将于本周末举行社团活动。作为书法社社长，你想邀请外教Mr. Smith来参加活动。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括：1．时间和地点；2．内容——听讲座并参加中国书法体验活动。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：书法calligraphy_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7．假如你是李华，你班的美国交换生Tom 结束了在你校一年的学习，即将回国。你和同学打算于12月30日下午在班上为他开一个欢送会(farewell party), 特写信邀请他参加。要点包括:1.感谢Tom的帮助；2. 欢送会的时间和地点；注意:1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8．假设你是李华，适逢五四青年节，你校拟邀请附近某大学的外籍教授Smith先生来你校做一次相关主题的演讲。请参照以下相关信息给他写一封邮件。注意：1．词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Mr. Smith,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best,Li Hua9．假设你是李华。请写信向外教Mr. Brown介绍你校新建的阳光健身中心，并邀请他周末一起来锻炼健身。内容包括：1.开放时间；2. 健身项目；3. 服务设施；注意：1.词数100左右；开头已给，不计入总词数。2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：阳光健身中心Sunshine Health Center； 有氧运动 aerobic exercise;保龄球bowling； 专业的professional; 教练coachDear Mr. Brown,I’m Li Hua. I’m writing to tell you something about our newly-built Sunshine Health Center.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua10．假如你是李星，你的加拿大朋友Martin想来中国上大学，他想向你了解一些关于中国发展和机遇的信息。请你结合以下要点并结合自己的观点，给他回一封信。1.中国发展非常好……；2.举例说明，例如一带一路倡议和中国梦提出；中欧班列开行及其优势……3.邀请他来中国深造。注意：1.词数100左右，开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总数；2.可适当增加情节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：中欧班列：China-EU line trains; 一带一路倡议：One Belt One Road InitiativeDear Martin,Glad to hear from you._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes!Yours,Li Xing               1．Dear Jack,I would like to extend a heartfelt invitation to you. Since the Dragon Boat Festival is around the corner, I sincerely invite you to come to China.The Dragon Boat Festival is one of the three major festivals in China, along with the Spring Festival and the Mid­Autumn Festival. The Dragon Boat Festival，also called the Duanwu Festival, is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth lunar month according to the Chinese calendar. For thousands of years，the festival has been marked by eating zongzi and racing dragon boats.You have told me many times in your letters that you are fond of boating. Now I am sure that your dream will come true soon，because there will be many boat races in my hometown during the Dragon Boat Festival.I’m looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封邀请信。【详解】根据提示可知，本篇为书信，要求写一封邀请信，时态应为一般现在时。关键要点如下：①邀请Jack来中国过端午节；②端午节简单介绍；③计划；④请求回复。第二步：根据关键要点，确定关键词，如：the Dragon Boat Festival（端午节），the fifth lunar month（农历五月），racing dragon boats（赛龙舟），accept my invitation（接受邀请）等。第三步：根据提示及关键词进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题以及句子结构完整。第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，使之自然流畅，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面。【点睛】本篇范文结构清晰，内容完整，过渡衔接严谨自然，符合演讲稿的要求，其中不乏亮点句型。宾语从句的使用You have told me many times in your letters that you are fond of boating.along with的使用，The Dragon Boat Festival is one of the three major festivals in China, along with the Spring Festival and the Mid­Autumn Festival.2．Dear Joe,On behalf of our school Students' Union, I'm delighted to invite you to watch the performance themed "Ode to Our Motherland". Here is some detailed information.The performance will be held from 9 to 11 on September 28, 2019 in our school hall. It is intended to celebrate the 70th Anniversary of the founding of PRC, which will arouse students' patriotism and foster national pride. In praise of great achievements our country has made in recent decades, we have arranged different kinds of activities, such as poem recitals, dancing, singing and etc., creating a vigorous festival atmosphere. How eager we are for the early arrival of the day!Looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封电子邮件。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知确定要点，1.你校将举办主题为“祖国颂”的庆祝建国70周年文艺演出,你将邀请你的英国朋友Joe观看这场演出。2.举办的时间和地点；活动的目的；活动的内容。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：On behalf of our school Students' Union（代表学生会）；some detailed information（一些细节信息）；In praise of great achievements（称赞伟大的成就）等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。同时文中使用高级句子。The performance will be held from 9 to 11 on September 28, 2019 in our school hall.句中使用一般将来时态的被动语态；It is intended to celebrate the 70th Anniversary of the founding of PRC, which will arouse students' patriotism and foster national pride.句中which引导非限制性定语从句；In praise of great achievements our country has made in recent decades,句中过去分词做后置定语。3．Dear John,With the purpose of inviting you to see Beijing Opera with me this weekend, I came to your apartment this morning, only to find that you were out.Since you have shown a keen interest in Chinese culture since the first day to China, I do believe this is a good chance for you to gain insight into it. Regarded as one of the cultural treasures of China, Beijing Opera is more than just music and singing; it also combines drama, dancing, and martial arts, which makes it one of the most varied art forms in the world. The performers in fascinating costumes perform well-known stories in history to audience. I can tell you more about it when we meet.Please let me know when you will be available and I will buy the tickets in advance. I sincerely hope that you can accept my invitation and I’m sure you’ll enjoy it.Yours Sincerely,LiHua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封邀请信。【详解】根据提示可知，本篇为书信，要求写一封邀请信，时态应为一般现在时。关键要点如下：①邀请美国好友John观看京剧表演，但John不在家；②简要介绍京剧；③询问什么时候方便，再约时间。第二步：根据关键要点，确定关键词，如：Beijing Opera（京剧），cultural treasures of China（中国文化瑰宝），in advance（提前），accept my invitation（接受邀请）等。第三步：根据提示及关键词进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题以及句子结构完整。第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，使之自然流畅，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面。【点睛】本篇范文结构清晰，内容完整，过渡衔接严谨自然，符合演讲稿的要求，其中不乏亮点句型。With的复合结构以及不定式作结果状语的使用With the purpose of inviting you to see Beijing Opera with me this weekend, I came to your apartment this morning, only to find that you were out.非限制性定语从句的使用，it also combines drama, dancing, and martial arts, which makes it one of the most varied art forms in the world.4．NOTICEJanuary 24, 2019A lecture on how to do the career planning will be given by Professor Li Ming from Changjiang University. It will be held in our school lecture hall from 8:30 am to 11:30 am, on Sunday, January 27. All the senior students are expected to attend it, as the career planning makes a great difference to the life in the future. Don’t miss the chance!All the students are supposed to arrive at least 10 minutes before the lecture begins and be seated in order. Everyone should keep the hall quiet during the lecture. In addition, remember to bring your pens and notebooks.Students’ Union【分析】本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一份通知。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一份书面通知：学校邀请了长江大学的李明博士做一个“如何做好职业生涯规划”的讲座，请你以学生会的名义写一份书面通知，2019年1月24日发出，内容如下: 1.讲座时间: 1月27日(星期日)，上午8:30-11:30；2.讲座地点:校学术报告厅；3.注意事项:……(至少两项)。时态应为一般现在时。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：career planning（职业生涯规划），Students' Union（学生会），lecture hall（大讲堂），quiet（安静的），notebook（笔记本），attend（参加），expect（希望），future（未来），senior（高年级的）及hold（举行）等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。本文内容完整，层次分明，结构紧凑，表达准确。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。【点睛】范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有keep down（控制），give a lecture（做演讲），make a great difference (有重要意义)，in the future（将来），be supposed to（应该），be seated（就座），in order（按顺序）以及In addition（另外），而且还使用了非限定性定语从句“All the senior students are expected to attend it, as the career planning makes a great difference to the life in the future.”，宾语从句“A lecture on how to do the career planning will be given by Professor Li Ming from Changjiang University.”，非谓语动词“All the students are supposed to arrive at least 10 minutes before the lecture begins and be seated in order.”及“In addition, remember to bring your pens and notebooks.”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。5．Dear Leslie,How is everything getting along with you recently? I’m more than glad to have been invited to attend the piano concert with you. To be honest, not only am I impressed with the performances given by the skilled artists, but also with the wonderful comments made by you. Thank you again for your kindness.Are you interested in learning Chinese character? As a matter of fact, traditional Chinese cultures are more and more popular all over the world, especially the Chinese character, which is one of the oldest written words and sounds beautiful. If you are interested, keep me informed as soon as possible and I’ll spare no effort to help you learn Chinese characters in return.Looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【分析】这是一篇应用文，要求写一封信。【详解】根据提示，假定你是李华，上周应留学生朋友Leslie的邀请，你去听了一场钢琴音乐会，你打算教他认识中国汉字以示感谢。就此你用英语给他写一封信件。1.首先注意时态以一般现在时为主，其次人称使用第一人称。2.根据文章的写作要求，可以分为三大段;第一段表达你对受邀表示感谢；第二段简要回忆音乐会及感受；第三段提出教他汉字作为回报。3. 注意使用高级词汇和句式，为文章增添色彩；注意使用连接词、衔接词，使文章自然、流畅。【点睛】本文内容完整，语言表述流畅。文章使用了几个高分句型：1. not only am I impressed with the performances given by the skilled artists, but also with the wonderful comments made by you. 本句使用了并列连词not only…but also连接的并列句。2. the Chinese character, which is one of the oldest written words and sounds beautiful. 这是个由which引导的非限制性定语从句。 3. If you are interested, keep me informed as soon as possible. 此句是由if引导的条件状语从句。6．Dear Mr. Smith，I’m writing on behalf of our calligraphy club to invite you to come to the Student Activity Center for some activities with us from 2：00 p．m. to 5：00 p．m. this weekend.Being an important part of traditional Chinese culture, calligraphy serves the purpose of conveying thoughts and showing the beauty of lines.Not only is it a practical technique for writing Chinese characters, but it’s a unique art form to purify our souls as well. You will enjoy a lecture about the Chinese calligraphy and appreciate masterpieces of some celebrities. After that, you will be exposed to some hands­on activities.Hopefully, you will be able to feel the beauty and power of Chinese calligraphy. Looking forward to your reply!Yours，Li Hua【分析】这篇书面表达属于应用类作文，要求写封邮件。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华，你校书法社将于本周末举行社团活动。作为书法社社长，你想邀请外教Mr. Smith来参加活动。请给他写一封邮件。人称为第一人称，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：on behalf of代表，invite sb. to do sth.邀请某人做某事，activity活动，traditional传统的，not only…but不仅，而且，unique独特的，purify净化，masterpiece杰作，After that在那之后，be exposed to曝光。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如：I’m writing on behalf of our calligraphy club to invite you to come to the Student Activity Center for some activities with us from 2：00 p．m. to 5：00 p．m. this weekend.运用了不定式作目的状语等高级表达方式,倒装句Not only is it a practical technique for writing Chinese characters.本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。7．Dear Tom,     How time flies! It's one year since you came to study Chinese in our school. In the past year, you have helped us a lot, without which we couldn't have made great progress in English. During this year, we have learned lots of cultures about your country that cannot be found in the book.     Before you leave, many classmates and I intend to hold a farewell party for you, hoping that you can remember the wonderful time we spent together. By the way, the party will be held in our classroom on the afternoon of December 30.    May you have a pleasant journey home and welcome to China again.     We are looking forward to your coming.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封邀请信；假如你是李华，你班的美国交换生Tom 结束了在你校一年的学习，即将回国。你和同学打算于12月30日下午在班上为他开一个欢送会, 特写信邀请他参加。要点包括: 1.感谢Tom的帮助；2. 欢送会的时间和地点。时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如： farewell party（欢送会），culture（文化），pleasant（愉快的），wonderful（美好的），welcome to（欢迎），May（祝愿）及exchange student（交换生）等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。本文内容完整，思路清晰，结构严谨，表达准确。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。【点睛】范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有intend to（想要、打算），make progress（取得进步），By the way (顺便说一下)，welcome to（欢迎）以及look forward to（期望），高级句式有非限定性定语从句“In the past year, you have helped us a lot, without which we couldn't have made great progress in English.”，定语从句“During this year, we have learned lots of cultures about your country that cannot be found in the book.”，非谓语动词使用了“Before you leave, many classmates and I intend to hold a farewell party for you, hoping that you can remember the wonderful time we spent together.”。另外，还使用了“How time flies!”及“May you have a pleasant journey home and welcome to China again.”等句式。文章衔接流畅，结构清晰，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然。8．Dear Mr. Smith,I’m Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School, which is close to your university. I’m writing on behalf of our school to invite you to give a lecture on the topic “Achieving Happiness Through Hard Work”. The lecture is to be held in our school hall on May 4th as a special event to mark China’s Youth Day. It will start at 2:30 pm and last for about 2 hours, with an audience of about 500 students and teachers alike. We would feel deeply honored if you could accept our invitation and share your inspiring experiences as a distinguished professor.  I am looking forward to your reply.Best,Li Hua【分析】本文书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封电子邮件。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇是一篇电子邮件：假设你是李华，适逢五四青年节，你校拟邀请附近某大学的外籍教授Smith先生来你校做一次相关主题的演讲。请参照以下相关信息给他写一封邮件。英语讲座的主题：幸福与奋斗；时间：5月4日下午2:30—4:30；地点：学校大礼堂；听众：500名学生及老师。第2步：根据写作要求确定关键词，如：Xinhua Middle School（新华中学）；“Achieving Happiness Through Hard Work”（幸福与奋斗）；China’s Youth Day（中国五四青年节）；as a distinguished professor.（作为一名著名的教授）等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态语态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】本文是一篇电子邮件，内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。同时文中使用高级句子。I’m Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School, which is close to your university.句中使用which引导的非限制性定语从句；The lecture is to be held in our school hall on May 4th as a special event to mark China’s Youth Day.句中使用动词不定式一般式的被动式；We would feel deeply honored if you could accept our invitation and share your inspiring experiences as a distinguished professor.  句中使用if引导的条件状语从句。9．Dear Mr. Brown,I’m Li Hua. I’m writing to tell you something about our newly-built Sunshine Health Center. I sincerely invite you to join me in taking exercise this weekend.The center opens from 8:00 am to 9:00 pm and provides different physical exercises such as aerobic exercise, swimming and bowling. It’s equipped advanced and modern equipment, making it convenient and comfortable for sports fans. What I want to stress is that there are excellent coaches ready to help you, who can offer you professional guidance when you want to build up your body and keep fit.Welcome to join me and enjoy a good time in the center this weekend? I’d appreciate it if you reply to me at your earliest convenience to let me know whether you will come or not.YoursLi Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封书信，假设你是李华。请写信向外教Mr. Brown介绍你校新建的阳光健身中心，并邀请他周末一起来锻炼健身。内容包括：1.开放时间；2. 健身项目；3. 服务设施。时态应为一般现在时。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：invite sb. to do sth.邀请某人做某事，physical exercises体育运动，convenient 方便的， comfortable舒适的，professional专业的， guidance指导，build up增强，keep fit保持（身体）健康，appreciate感谢。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。亮点说明：作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如：What I want to stress is that there are excellent coaches ready to help you, who can offer you professional guidance when you want to build up your body and keep fit. 主语从句和定语从句的运用；I’d appreciate it if you reply to me at your earliest convenience to let me know whether you will come or not.宾语从句的运用。本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。10．Dear Martin,Glad to hear from you. As for the development and opportunities in China, I consider it is beyond words.These years did witness dramatic changes in China. One Belt and One Road Initiative and Chinese Dream are the hottest recently. Those are reflections of our advancing towards prosperity, harmony and democracy. The booming economy endows numerous job opportunities and free business circumstances. Furthermore, China-EU line trains, from China to some European countries through Mid-Asia countries, are much faster than ship and cheaper than flight.In brief, I call for your decision on your further education in China without hesitation. Come and witness Chinese progress in person. Waiting for you reply.Best wishesYours,Li Xing【分析】这是一篇提纲类作文，要求用英文写一封回信，回复加拿大朋友Martin想来中国上大学，询问关于中国发展和机遇的信息。内容包括：1.中国发展非常好……；2.举例说明，例如一带一路倡议和中国梦提出；中欧班列开行及其优势……；3.邀请他来中国深造。写作时注意条理清楚，态度诚恳，要点全面。准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。【详解】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如hear from；beyond words；call for；without hesitation；in person等；还运用句型These years did witness dramatic changes in China.这句话运用了倒装句等。并注意了句子的衔接如and，Furthermore，In brief等等。【点睛】书面表达考查大家所熟悉的提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本书面表达中给出的要点比较简单，故需要自己组织中国发展好的方面已经举例。考生写完之后要检查是否有语法错误，看能否运用所学的知识将简单句变为复杂句，当然，没有把握的句子不要写。