江苏高考英语写作分类训练:建议信
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建议信1.假定你是李华,你的美国笔友Linda因为肥胖问题(obesity)而遭到同学的嘲笑,为此她感到非常苦恼,写信向你求助。请你给她写一封回信,内容包括:1. 给予安慰;2. 提供建议。注意:1. 词数80左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的对应位置作答。Dear Linda, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours, Li Hua2.目前世界上许多珍稀动物濒临灭绝,假如你是Li Hua,请你给校英文报写一封倡议信,呼吁大家保护动物,爱护环境。内容包括:1)写信目的;2)分析原因;3)提出措施。注意:1. 80词左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总数。Dear schoolmates,Nowadays, an increasing number of animals are close to extinction.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua3.假设你是第一中学的学生李华,你的加拿大笔友Daniel来信向你求助。他最近和妈妈闹矛盾,因为妈妈不让他过多上网。他对此很不理解。请你给他写一封回信,要点如下:1.建议他向妈妈道歉; 2.说明过多上网的危害; 3.列举一些健康的休闲方式。注意:1.词数不少于80;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Dear Daniel,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours, Li Hua4.假定你是李华,你班交换生Eric想要强身健体,发来邮件请你推荐锻炼方法。请你给他写一封电子邮件。内容包括:1.你的推荐—太极拳(Tai Chi);2.推荐的理由。注意:1. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;2. 词数80左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Eric,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours, Li Hua5.假如你是李华,你的朋友Chris最近和同桌产生了矛盾,感到很苦恼,写信求助于你,请你给他写一封回信,内容包括:1.安慰;2.建议;3.祝愿。注意:1.写作词数应为100左右;2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。Dear Chris,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua6.假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Chris来信说,近来他沉迷于网游,导致成绩急剧下滑,希望能得到你的帮助。请你给他写封回信,内容包括:1.表示理解;2.给予建议。注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。Dear Chris,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely,Li Hua7.假如你是高二学生李华,你校学生会近期要为即将参加高考的高三学子举行加油仪式(a pep rally),现征集活动创意。请你给学生会写一封信表达对于活动的建议,内容包括:1.写信目的;2.活动建议;3.期待和祝福。注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。To whom it may concern,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua8.假定你是李华。你的新西兰朋友David将要参加他的学校举办的中国诗歌朗诵比赛(the Chinese Poetry Recitation Competition),特发邮件向你咨询一些备赛方面的建议。请你回复邮件,内容包括:1.表示支持;2.提出相关建议;3.表达希望和祝愿。注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9.假如你是李华,你的好友Sammy来信抱怨疫情居家学习期间,父母干涉过多导致矛盾增加。请你给他回信,内容包括:1.表示理解;2.提出建议;3.表达祝愿。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.书信格式已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Sammy,I’ m sorry to hear about that. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua10.假定你是某英文报社的编辑Peter,读者李华写信向你求助,表示尽管高一上学期已接近尾声,他发现自己仍然难以适应高中生活。请给他写封回信,内容包括:1.表示理解;2.给出建议。注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dear Li Hua,Sorry to hear that you still have some difficulty adapting to your school life.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I sincerely hope that my advice is helpful.Yours,Peter 1.One possible version:Dear Linda,I’m sorry to hear that you’re upset at being laughed at by your classmates because of your obesity. But I think it unnecessary for you to care about that.In my opinion, you are great as you are. After all, it is what you are rather than how you look that counts. On the other hand, I have some advice for you if you want to lose some weight. Firstly, change your eating habits and keep a balanced diet, which will help prevent diseases. Secondly, take exercise regularly, which is a good way for you to get rid of your obesity. Thirdly, make sure you get enough sleep.If you follow my advice, you are sure to look nice and feel good. I hope you can get out of trouble soon.Yours,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求考生给因为肥胖问题受到同学嘲笑的笔友Linda写一封信,需对她的苦恼进行安慰,并为她提供建议。【详解】1. 词汇积累烦恼的:upset→distressed, unsettled因为:because of→due to, owing to, on account of没必要的:unnecessary→inessential, needless, dispensable在我看来:in my opinion→from my perspective, as far as I am concerned, from my point of view2. 句式拓展简单句变复合句原句:But I think it unnecessary for you to care about that.拓展句:But I think (that) it is unnecessary for you to care about that.【点睛】【高分句型1】After all, it is what you are rather than how you look that counts.(运用了what引导名词性从句作is的表语,how引导名词性从句作rather than的宾语,it is… that…的强调句型)【高分句型2】I have some advice for you if you want to lose some weight.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句)【高分句型3】Firstly, change your eating habits and keep a balanced diet, which will help prevent diseases.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)2.Dear schoolmates,Nowadays, an increasing number of animals are close to extinction. Now I am writing to appeal to everyone to make their own contribution to the protection of animals.The key reason for animal extinction is that we humans hunt too much and destroy animal habitats. Then there is the damage caused by warming. In order to save the world’s animals, we should do our part to publicize not to destroy the habitat of animals, not to indiscriminately kill rare animals.Here, I sincerely advocate that we all love animals and protect the environment.Yours,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给校英文报写一封倡议信,呼吁大家保护动物,爱护环境。【详解】1.词汇积累呼吁:appeal to→call on破坏:damage→destruction真诚地:sincerely→sincerely喜爱:love→be fond of2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句:Now I am writing to appeal to everyone to make their own contribution to the protection of animals.拓展句:Now I am writing to appeal to everyone so that they can make their own contribution to the protection of animals.【点睛】【高分句型1】The key reason for animal extinction is that we humans hunt too much and destroy animal habitats. (运用了that引导的表语从句)【高分句型2】In order to save the world’s animals, we should do our part to publicize not to destroy the habitat of animals, not to indiscriminately kill rare animals. (运用了非谓语动词不定式作目的状语)3.Dear Daniel,I’m very sorry to hear that a conflict occurred between you and your mother because of your Internet addiction.In my opinion, you should apologize to your mother. Although the Internet plays an important role in modern life, we can’t ignore its harm. Many students spend much time on the Internet, which may result in poor health and affect their study. Worse still, students may also have less communication with the real world.You’d better take some exercise to keep fit or do some reading for fun. Only in this way can you live and study happily and healthily.Yours Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给加拿大笔友Daniel写封回信,就笔友的困惑给出一些意见和建议。【详解】词汇积累因为:because of →due to扮演重要角色:play an important role →play a crucial part忽略:ignore →neglect保持健康:keep fit →keep healthy2.句式拓展句式转换原句:I’m very sorry to hear that a conflict occurred between you and your mother because of your Internet addiction.拓展句:I’m very sorry to hear that a conflict occurred between you and your mother because you are addicted to the Internet.【点睛】[高分句型1] Many students spend much time on the Internet, which may result in poor health and affect their study. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2] Only in this way can you live and study happily and healthily. (运用了部分倒装结构)4.Dear Eric,I’m more than glad to know that you are interested in building up your body. Here, I strongly recommend Tai Chi to you.Tai Chi is an ancient Chinese martial art. It is famous for its well-balanced movements. In addition, what is widely acknowledged is that it functions as an effective health exercise. What’s more, not only can it make people physically healthy, but also it provides the mental relaxation, which is very necessary in our modern stressful lives. You will find yourself fitter and more energetic after learning it.Yours, Li Hua【导语】本文是应用文。要求考生给想要强身健体的交换生Eric介绍太极拳。【详解】1.词汇积累非常:more than→very高兴的:glad→happy建议:recommend→suggest著名的:famous→noted2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句:Tai Chi is an ancient Chinese martial art. It is famous for its well-balanced movements.拓展句:Tai Chi is an ancient Chinese martial art, which is famous for its well-balanced movements.【点睛】【高分句型1】In addition, what is widely acknowledged is that it functions as an effective health exercise.(由what引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句)【高分句型2】What’s more, not only can it make people physically healthy, but also it provides the mental relaxation, which is very necessary in our modern stressful lives.(由which引导的非限制性定语从句)5.Dear Chris,I’m more than sorry to hear that you and your deskmate argued recently, which makes you unhappy. I’d like to share some of my opinions with you.As we know, it’s common for teenagers to have misunderstandings with our friends. You don’t need to worry about it for too long. When facing the unpleasant experience, firstly, we’d better have a face–to–face talk about the problem and figure out how to deal with it. Secondly, be generous. Make an apology if necessary. After all, friendship is maintained by one another.Hoping you two will get on well with each other and enjoy your school days. (106words)Yours, Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给朋友Chris就他最近与同桌产生了矛盾回信安慰,提出建议并祝愿。【详解】1.词汇积累不开心的:unhappy→sad误解:misunderstandings→misinterpretations担心:worry about→be concerned about 慷慨的:generous→ liberal2.句式拓展同义句替换原句:Make an apology if necessary同义句:Offer an apology in case it is necessary【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m more than sorry to hear that you and your deskmate argued recently, which makes you unhappy.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)【高分句型2】When facing the unpleasant experience, firstly, we’d better have a face–to–face talk about the problem and figure out how to deal with it.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句的省略)6.Dear Chris,I’m terribly sorry to learn that you’re suffering from the addiction to online games. Nevertheless, you’re not alone. Just take it easy and here comes my advice.Cultivating some other hobbies always comes first since the games have resulted in your failing to finish homework on time. Besides, make friends through face-to-face communication, which will help relax yourself. Moreover, read the books you like and share your ideas with your teachers and classmates.Hopefully, my advice will be of benefit to you. Best wishes! Yours sincerely, Li Hua Dear Chris,Knowing that you are too addicted to online games, I feel so sorry and I’m writing to give you a helping hand.I quite understand your depression, since online games are so popular among teenagers for their relaxation. However, there are other ways. First, you can exercise with your parents to relax yourself. Besides, you can play with your friends when at school. What’s more, developing other habits such as drawing to stay away from online games.I hope my advice will be of great help to you. Yours sincerely, Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Chris来信说,近来他沉迷于网游,导致成绩急剧下滑,希望能得到你的帮助。请你给他写封回信,内容包括:表示理解;给予建议。【详解】1.词汇积累建议:advice→suggestion导致:result in→lead to此外:Besides→In addition有益的:of benefit →beneficial2.句式拓展同义句转换原句:Cultivating some other hobbies always comes first since the games have resulted in your failing to finish homework on time.拓展句:That you should cultivate other hobbies always comes first because the games have resulted in your failing to finish homework on time.【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m terribly sorry to learn that you’re suffering from the addiction to online games. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)[高分句型2] Besides, make friends through face-to-face communication, which will help relax yourself.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)7.To whom it may concern,Delightedly informed that a pep rally for senior high school students is around the corner, I am writing to share my ideas. First of all, it is very meaningful to invite our headmaster to deliver an inspiring speech, which can definitely lift up students’ spirits. Besides, interactive activities such as signing up their names on a large board or taking a group photo can give them a sense of participation, strengthening their determination to face the coming challenge.I hope my suggestions can contribute to the successful launch of the rally.Yours,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是高二学生李华,你校学生会近期要为即将参加高考的高三学子举行加油仪式(a pep rally),现征集活动创意。请你给学生会写一封信表达对于活动的建议。【详解】1.词汇积累演讲:speech→lecture临近:be around the corner→approach高兴的:delighted→glad此外:besides→in addition2.句式拓展同义句转换原句:I hope my suggestions can contribute to the successful launch of the rally.拓展句:I would be honored if my suggestions can contribute to the successful launch of the rally.【点睛】[高分句型1] Delightedly informed that a pep rally for senior high school students is around the corner, I am writing to share my ideas. (运用了that引导宾语从句)[高分句型2] First of all, it is very meaningful to invite our headmaster to deliver an inspiring speech, which can definitely lift up students’ spirits. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)8.Dear David,I was glad to hear that you will participate in the Chinese Poetry Recitation Competition at your school. It’s a wonderful opportunity for you to showcase your talent and share your passion for Chinese culture. As for your preparation, I suggest that you first choose a piece of poetry that speaks to you. Pay attention to your pronunciation and intonation, and try to convey the emotions and ideas within the poem. Besides, I recommend that you research the background and meaning of the poem, which will enhance your understanding and interpretation of the work. I hope these tips will be helpful to you and I wish you the best of luck in the competition. Best regardsLi Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生新西兰朋友David写一封邮件,给他参加中国诗歌朗诵比赛一些备赛方面的建议。【详解】1.词汇积累高兴的:glad →happy参加:participate in →take part in比赛:competition →contest此外:besides →what’s more2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句:It’s a wonderful opportunity for you to showcase your talent and share your passion for Chinese culture.拓展句:It’s a wonderful opportunity where you can showcase your talent and share your passion for Chinese culture.【点睛】【高分句型1】Besides, I recommend that you research the background and meaning of the poem, which will enhance your understanding and interpretation of the work.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)【高分句型2】I hope these tips will be helpful to you and I wish you the best of luck in the competition.(运用了宾语从句)9.Dear Sammy,I’ m sorry to hear about that. But it’ s quite understandable that you are facing such a dilemma, which is a quite common phenomenon that troubles teenagers nowadays. Here are my suggestions.First and foremost, listen to what they have to say and never get offended. Be respectful and appreciative. It’ s also a good idea to talk with them openly, seeking to reach a mutual understanding. Remember that they are perhaps your best teachers. Therefore, when something unhappy happens, instead of getting annoyed, look at it from their point of view.I hope my suggestions can be of some help and may you have a better relationship! Yours,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给好友Sammy回一封信,对他抱怨疫情居家学习期间,父母干涉过多导致矛盾增加表示理解和给予建议。【详解】1.词汇积累可理解的:understandable →comprehensible建议:suggestion →advice首先:First and foremost →First of all观点:point of view →viewpoint2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句:Here are my suggestions.拓展句:Here are my suggestions, which are of great help to you.【点睛】[高分句型1] But it’ s quite understandable that you are facing such a dilemma, which is a quite common phenomenon that troubles teenagers nowadays. (运用了that引导主语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2] Therefore, when something unhappy happens, instead of getting annoyed, look at it from their point of view. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句)10.Dear Li Hua,Sorry to hear that you still have some difficulty adapting to your school life. In fact, young people your age may go through such pressure as you’ re feeling when attending senior high school. So, you are not alone. But don’t worry. Here’s some advice.First, try to understand and adopt the different ways of learning as a senior high school student. Then, make a weekly time schedule for your study and take one step at a time. Don’t push yourself too hard. Besides, it is equally important to get yourself involved in some extracurricular activities, which will not only relieve much pressure, but also help you make more friends.I sincerely hope that my advice is helpful.Yours,Peter【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。读者李华写信求助,表示尽管高一上学期已接近尾声,他发现自己仍然难以适应高中生活这一情况,要求考生以编辑的名义给他回信。【详解】1.词汇积累困难:difficulty→ trouble经历:go through →experience建议:advice→ suggestion此外:besides→ what’s more2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句:Then, make a weekly time schedule for your study and take one step at a time.拓展句:Then, make a weekly time schedule for your study so that you can take one step at a time.【点睛】【高分句型1】In fact, young people your age may go through such pressure as you’ re feeling when attending senior high school.(运用when引导的时间状语从句的省略用法)【高分句型2】Besides, it is equally important to get yourself involved in some extracurricular activities, which will not only relieve much pressure, but also help you make more friends.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
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