辽宁高考英语写作分类训练：申请信

这是一份辽宁高考英语写作分类训练：申请信，共18页。
申请信1．假定你是李华，近日你在网上得知某国外高中的国际英语夏令营已开始报名，你有意参加。请给该校写一封英文申请信，内容包括：1. 写信目的；2. 申请理由；3. 期待答复。注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Sir/Madam,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely,Li Hua2．假定你是李华，暑期在纽约学习，得知当地博物馆要举办中国瓷器(china)展。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括：1.写信意图；2.应征目的、优势。注意：1.词数 100 左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；Dear Sir,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely,Li Hua3．假定你是李华，你校国际部打算举办“教外国学生下中国象棋（Chinese chess）”的活动，现正在招募志愿者。你有意向成为志愿者，请你用英语写一封申请信，内容包括：1. 写信目的；2. 你的优势；3. 期待同意申请。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Sir/Madam,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Your,Li Hua4．假定你是李华，你校的微信公众号招募编辑（editor），你对此很感兴趣。请给校相关负责人Max写封邮件申请该职位。内容包括：1. 写邮件目的；2. 陈述个人优势；3. 表达期望。注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．假定你是李华，得知2020年第18届世界中学生运动会(World Middle School Games) 将在中国福建晋江举行，组委会正面向全国招募志愿者。请写一封申请信，内容包括:1. 申请理由； 2. 自身优势；  3. 表达期待。注意:1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯.Dear Sir/Madam,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Li Hua6．假设你是李华，2022年北京冬奥会正面向全国学生招募志愿者，你希望成为其中一员。请根据提示用英文给组委会写一封信：1.自我介绍；2.个人条件：英语好，善于交际等；3.希望获得批准。注意：1.词数:100词左右；2.书信格式及开头均已给出（不计入总词数）3. 可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Sir/Madam,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _Yours Sincerely,Li Hua7．假设你叫李明，已满18岁，正读高三，平时喜欢上网、听音乐和、打篮球，性格外向，乐于助人。暑假期间，你在报纸上看到一个超市招兼职销售员，请你写封信给人事部经理申请这份工作，一是为了锻炼自己，二是为了积累工作经验，为将来步入社会做准备。随信附上你的电话（66885592）以及电子邮箱(liming@sohu.com)注意：1.字迹工整，词数为120左右； 2.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数Dear Manager,I’m Li Ming, an 18-year-old student in Senior 3.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours trulyLi Ming8．假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括：1. 写信目的；2. 个人优势；3. 能做的事情。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 结束语已为你写好。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9．假定你是李华，你校英语角拟举行一次英文演讲比赛，需要两名主持人（host），你对此很感兴趣。请你用英语给外籍负责人布朗先生写一封自荐信，内容包括：1.个人基本情况；2.口语水平；3.相关经验。注意：1.词数120左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Mr. Brown,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua10．假定你是李华，今年六月份将从北京新华中学高三毕业，打算到美国哥伦比亚大学上学。现在请你根据下面表格的个人信息，用英语写一封信，申请留学。姓名：李华性别：女出生年月：1999年6月毕业学校：北京新华中学学业：各门功课优秀申请院校：美国哥伦比亚大学(the University of Columbia)申请专业：计算机科学兴趣爱好：网络和英语电子邮箱：lihua99@sina.com注意：1.信件必须包括以上内容，不能逐句翻译，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2.词数100左右，开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。Dear Sir or Madam,I’m writing in the hope that I can obtain a chance to further my study in Computer Science in your university.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely,Li Hua  1．Dear Sir / Madam,I’m Li Hua, a middle school student from China. Learning from the Internet that you are going to hold a summer camp, I’d like to take part in it. Since I was very young, I’ve been studying English very hard. However, I have little chance to communicate with students from all over the world in English. So I wish to get this chance to improve my English.  I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration and I hope to get an early reply.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封申请信，申请参加国际英语夏令营，表达写信目的，申请理由等。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时为主。结构：三段式结构。第一段表达写信目的；第二段讲述申请理由；第三段期待答复。要求：1.表达写信目的（take part in）      2.讲述申请理由：学习英语努力，希望获得交流机会（study hard; get this chance）      3.期待回复（appreciate; get an early reply）第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）be going to; take part in; have little chance to do; communicate with; improve my English; take sth into consideration 第三步：连词成句1. Learning from the Internet that you are going to hold a summer camp, I’d like to take part in it.2. However, I have little chance to communicate with students from all over the world in English.3. So I wish to get this chance to improve my English.4. I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration and I hope to get an early reply.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。第五步：润色修改【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。1.作者在范文中使用了高级句式和主从复合句，如：Learning from the Internet that you are going to hold a summer camp, I’d like to take part in it.( 从网上了解到你们要举办夏令营，我很想参加。)这句话运用了“learning from the Internet that you are going to hold a summer camp”现在分词作状语，且该结构中that引导宾语从句。Since I was very young, I’ve been studying English very hard.(从我很小的时候起，我就一直努力学习英语。)该句中since引导时间状语从句。I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration and I hope to get an early reply.(如果您能考虑我的申请，我将不胜感激，我希望能早日得到答复。)该句中it为形式宾语，if引导真正的宾语从句。2.使用了一些固定词组，如be going to; take part in; have little chance to do; communicate with; improve my English; take sth into consideration等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。2．Dear Sir,I am Li Hua, a Chinese student who is taking a summer course in New York now. I have learned from your advertisement that a Chinese china exhibition will be held in the local museum, so I am writing to apply for the position as a student volunteer.I can speak fluent English as well as standard Chinese. Besides, I once learned a lot about china in our school china club and have been crazy about collecting varieties of cups made of china. Young and energetic, I’m keen on communicating with foreign friends.I would be grateful if my application could meet with your approval. I’m looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华，暑期在纽约学习，得知当地博物馆要举办中国瓷器(china)展。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括：1.写信意图；2.应征目的、优势。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：china exhibition (瓷器展)；apply for (申请)；standard (标准的)；be crazy about(着迷)；varieties of (各种各样的)；energetic (精力充沛的)等。    第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用现在完成时、一般过去时、现在进行时和一般现在时。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如I am Li Hua, a Chinese student who is taking a summer course in New York now.运用了定语从句；I would be grateful if my application could meet with your approval.运用了条件状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。3．Dear Sir/ Madam,Learning from the school newspaper that the International Department will hold an activity titled “Teaching Foreign Students to Play Chinese Chess”, with great interest, I’m writing to apply to be a volunteer.Being an outgoing student, I’ve been looking forward to making friends with foreigners and enhancing my social skill. After a careful consideration, I think I’m qualified for the job. For one thing, I’ m good at spoken English, which plays an important role in teaching foreign students to play Chinese chess. For another, I have a good command of Chinese chess and I won the first place in the city chess contest.If you could take my application into account and give me a chance to have a try, I’d be appreciative.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封信给校国际部，申请成为“教外国学生下中国象棋（Chinese chess）”活动的志愿者。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时人称：第一人称为主结构：总分法     总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1. 写信目的；2. 你的优势；3. 期待同意申请。 第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）learn from；social skill；be qualified for；play an important role in doing sth.；have a good command of sth.；take sth. into account第三步：连词成句1. Learning from the school newspaper that the International Department will hold an activity titled “Teaching Foreign Students to Play Chinese Chess”,2. I’ve been looking forward to making friends with foreigners and enhancing my social skill.3. After a careful consideration, I think I’m qualified for the job.4. I’ m good at spoken English, which plays an important role in teaching foreign students to play Chinese chess.5. I have a good command of Chinese chess and I won the first place in the city chess contest.6. If you could take my application into account and give me a chance to have a try, I’d be appreciative.(根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。）第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Last but not least2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also), including, also3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause(从句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that… 4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result 5表换一种方式表达：In other words, that is to say,6.表进行举例说明：For example; For instance; such as + n/doing 7.表陈述事实：In fact, frankly speaking8.表选择：either…or…，or连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。第五步：润色修改【点睛】范文内容完整，结构严谨，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多的复合句，如I’ m good at spoken English, which plays an important role in teaching foreign students to play Chinese chess这句话中，用了which引导的非限制性定语从句，如在If you could take my application into account and give me a chance to have a try, I’d be appreciative这句话中，用了if引导的条件状语从句；使用了非常好的短语，如social skill，be qualified for，play an important role in doing sth.，have a good command of sth.，take sth. into account等，为文章增色不少；并注意了句子的衔接，如After，For one thing，For another。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。4．Dear Max,I’m Li Hua. Learning that a WeChat editor is wanted for our school, I’m writing to apply for it.I’m confident that I’m qualified. I am so keen on the events of our school that I will update the website regularly. Besides, I have such a good command of English that I have no difficulty in editing articles in English. Furthermore, I am skilled in computer, so if I get this position, I will make the website more attractive.If chosen, I’ll be devoted to the job. Looking forward to your early reply.Best wishes,Li Hua【分析】这是一篇应用文，要求写一封申请信。【详解】第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。你校的微信公众号招募编辑（editor），你对此很感兴趣。请给校相关负责人Max写封邮件申请该职位。要点包括：第一，1. 写邮件目的；2. 陈述个人优势；3. 表达期望。第二，人称为第一人称。第三，时态以一般现在时和一般将来时为主。第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段，写信目的。第二段，陈述个人优势。第三段，表达期望。第三步：确定关键词汇和短语: apply for，be confident，be qualified，be keen on， have a good command of，have no difficulty in， be skilled in， be devoted to等。第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接，注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。【点睛】文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了一些亮点短语： be confident，be qualified，be keen on， have a good command of， be skilled in， be devoted to等。以及一些较为高级的句式:Learning that a WeChat editor is wanted for our school, I’m writing to apply for it.使用了现在分词作状语；I am so keen on the events of our school that I will update the website regularly.为so…that…引导的结果状语从句；if I get this position, I will make the website more attractive. if引导的条件状语从句； If chosen, I’ll be devoted to the job. 中用到了省略句。高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。5．Dear Sir/Madam,Learning that you are recruiting volunteers for the 18th World Middle School Games in 2020, I am writing to apply for this position.As a super fan of sports, I am eager to expose myself to various sports-related activities. World Middle School Games is such a golden opportunity to meet the outstanding teenagers worldwide that I really don’t want to miss it. In addition, the voluntary service will offer me a precious chance to contribute to our society.I believe I am a qualified candidate. A good command of English ensures that I can communicate with the foreign athletes effectively. Moreover, with my love and knowledge for sports as well as Chinese history and culture, I can fulfill my role not only as a volunteer, but also as a cultural ambassador to spread the splendid Chinese culture.I would be grateful if you could offer me the opportunity. Thank you for your consideration.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封申请信。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一封申请信：假定你是李华，得知2020年第18届世界中学生运动会将在中国福建晋江举行，组委会正面向全国招募志愿者。请写一封申请信，内容包括:1. 申请理由； 2. 自身优势；  3. 表达期待。时态应为一般现在时。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； World Middle School Games（世界中学生运动会），position（职位），recruit（招募），various（多方面的），splendid（灿烂的）， outstanding（杰出的），worldwide（全世界的），voluntary service（志愿服务），cultural ambassador（文化使节）及qualified（合格的）等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。【点睛】范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有apply for（申请），be eager to do（渴望……），expose oneself to (暴露于、接触)，offer sb sth（为某人提供某物），contribute to（为……做贡献）以及a good command of（精通、熟练掌握），而且还使用了宾语从句“I believe I am a qualified candidate.”及“A good command of English ensures that I can communicate with the foreign athletes effectively.”，状语从句“I would be grateful if you could offer me the opportunity. ”，非谓语动词“Learning that you are recruiting volunteers for the 18th World Middle School Games in 2020, I am writing to apply for this position.”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。6．Dear Sir/Madam,My name is Li Hua. Knowing that you are recruiting volunteers for the 2022 Beijing Winter Olympics, I’m writing to apply for the opportunity.I believe that I am qualified for it in many aspects. Firstly, I am good at English and I can talk with foreign tourists in English freely. Besides, I am familiar with the local conditions, which makes it possible for me to show directions clearly. Last but not least, I get along with others easily and I'm ready to give help whenever necessary.Should you give me a chance of a personal interview, I would be most grateful. Please consider my application, and I' m looking forward to your early reply.Yours SincerelyLi Hua【分析】这是一封申请信。【详解】第一步：审题：本文是提纲类作文。假设你是李华，2022年北京冬奥会正面向全国学生招募志愿者，你希望成为其中一员。请根据提示用英文给组委会写一封信：1.自我介绍；2.个人条件：英语好，善于交际等；3.希望获得批准，语气要文明礼貌。时态是一般现在时，人称为第一人称。第二步：关键词（组）：recruite volunteers 招募志愿者；apply for申请；be qualified for有……的资格，可胜任……；in many aspects在许多方面；be familiar with熟悉；get along with与…相处等第三步：连词成句：1.Knowing that you are recruiting volunteers for the 2022 Beijing Winter Olympics, I’m writing to apply for the opportunity.2. Besides, I am familiar with the local conditions, which makes it possible for me to show directions clearly. 3. I get along with others easily and I'm ready to give help whenever necessary.等第四步；关联词（组）：Firstly, …        Besides,…         Last but not least,….另外，除了注意抓住提示的信息，注意进行适当发挥。表达中要注意句式结构的正确和变化多样，适当运用短语、并列句、复合句、介词短语和副词等，以使文章饱满。【点睛】本文要点齐全，过渡自然，最大亮点是句式多样，高分句型运用非常熟练，如：使用非谓语动词的句式Knowing that you are recruiting volunteers for the 2022 Beijing Winter Olympics, I’m writing to apply for the opportunity.；使用宾语从句I believe that I am qualified for it in many aspects.；使用非限制性定语从句及it作形式宾语句式I am familiar with the local conditions, which makes it possible for me to show directions clearly.；使用whenever让步状语从句I get along with others easily and I'm ready to give help whenever necessary.；使用虚拟语气Should you give me a chance of a personal interview, I would be most grateful.等，使文章大放光彩，显示了作者扎实的英语功底。7．Dear Manager,I’m Li Ming, an 18-year-old student in Senior 3. I like surfing the Internet, listening to music, swimming and playing basketball in my spare time. And I’ m outgoing and ready to help others.I’m extremely pleased to see your advertisement for the position of salesman in the newspaper, and I would like to apply for it during this summer vacation because I think it is very useful to me. On the one hand, I want to examine myself in the modern society and would like to train my ability. On the other hand, I can gain some working experience for my future job.I’ll be much grateful if you can offer me a precious opportunity to an interview and I’m sure I can do my best in the job. My telephone number is 66885592 and my email is liming@sohu.com.I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon. Best regards for your health and success.Yours trulyLi Ming【分析】第一，这是一篇应聘信，属于应用文范围。因为我们这个招聘信息是已知前提，所以审题的时候应该注意不要再叙述背景。第二，发邮件应聘，主要介绍自己，应聘的职位和自己能胜任此项工作的能力。第三，应聘信应该注明自己的联系方式。第四，书信类开头结尾给出，需要使用恰当的应聘信的问候语。【详解】第一段：介绍自己的爱好，特长，使用I like surfing the Internet, listening to music, swimming and playing basketball in my spare time，动名词并列结构运用恰如其分，第一印象深刻。第二段：简单明了介绍写信目的以及应聘此职位的意义。结构上运用On the one hand,…On the other hand…结构清晰，层次分明，吸引读者注意。第三段：语法结构上运用if从句和宾语从句，给文章增色；另外留下联系方式，符合应聘信要求，内容全面。第四段：书信类问候语使用得体，语句流程。本篇文章简洁，内容清晰完整，书信类写作要求规范，适当的运用从句，使文章更严谨，色彩更鲜明。8．Dear Sir or Madam,I’m writing to apply to be a volunteer for the Chinese Painting Exhibition which will be held in your art gallery. I think I am qualified for this job, because I have learned Chinese painting since childhood. Besides, I am fluent in both Chinese and English, which is beneficial for introducing Chinese paintings. If I am lucky enough to be chosen as a volunteer, I can show visitors around the gallery and get them to know more about Chinese painting.I would be very grateful if you could offer me the opportunity. I’m looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达要求写一封申请信，属于书信应用文。【详解】1.审题立意本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写申请信，人称使用第一人称和第二人称，时态用一般现在时。2.谋篇布局书信格式，称呼和落款文中已经给出。首段，写信的目的，中间段写个人优势和能做的事，最后一段总结。3. 关键词和句子根据写作要点及构思好的提纲我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和句子有：volunteer，a Chinese Painting Exhibition，advantages，I am good at…，I can help with.../I’ll devote myself to…。通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误，并增加一些细节和过渡性的词汇，如First of all，Besides，to begin with，moreover，as for me，Last but not least等，使全文衔接自然，语义流畅。【点睛】本文开门见山，表达了写信的目的；之后详细介绍了个人的优势和能做的事情，详略得当，内容完整，同时使用了高级词汇和高级句子。高级词汇：be qualified for，be fluent in，be beneficial for等；高级句式：because I have learned Chinese painting since childhood此处使用了原因状语从句。which is beneficial for introducing Chinese paintings.使用了非限制性定语从句。If I am lucky enough to be chosen as a volunteer, I can show visitors around the gallery and get them to know more about Chinese painting.使用了条件状语从句。9．Dear Mr. Brown,I’ve learnt that two hosts are needed for the coming English speech contest. I would like very much to be one of them.I’m Li Hua, a handsome boy of about 180cm in height. As a hard-working student, I have a good command of English, especially spoken English. I have won first prize in many English speech contests. What’ s more, I have been the host of English parties since I entered junior high school. It gave me much experience in hosting big events. So I believe I can do the job perfectly.I’ m looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生用英语写一封自荐信，自荐成为英文演讲比赛的主持人。【详解】1.词汇积累想要做某事：would like to do sth.→want to do sth.勤奋的：hard-working→diligent精通英语：have a good command of English→have a good knowledge of English此外：What’ s more→besides2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：I have won first prize in many English speech contests.拓展句：I have won first prize in many English speech contests since I learned English.【点睛】【高分句型1】I’ve learnt that two hosts are needed for the coming English speech contest.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）【高分句型2】What’ s more, I have been the host of English parties since I entered junior high school.（运用了since引导的时间状语从句）10．Dear Sir or Madam,I’m writing in the hope that I can obtain a chance to further my study in Computer Science in your university.First, please allow me to make a brief introduction of myself. I’m Li Hua, a girl born in June, 1999. I’m graduating from Beijing Xinhua High School this coming June with each course excellent. I have a keen interest in the computer and the Internet. Besides, I have a good command of English. I know that the University of Columbia ranks among the most famous universities in the USA, and that’s the very reason why I’m now applying for furthering my university study in your Computer Science department.I would appreciate it if you could take the trouble to provide me with some information and send me the necessary application materials. By the way, my email address is lihua99@sina.com.I’m looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给美国哥伦比亚大学写一封申请信，内容要点包括：姓名，性别，毕业学校，学业情况，申请院校和兴趣爱好等。【详解】1.词汇积累机会：chance→opportunity优秀的：excellent→outstanding著名的：famous→well-known精通：have a good command of = be skillful at2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：I’m Li Hua, a girl born in June, 1999. I’m graduating from Beijing Xinhua High School this coming June with each course excellent.拓展句：I’m Li Hua, a girl born in June, 1999，who is graduating from Beijing Xinhua High School this coming June with each course excellent.【点睛】[高分句型1] I know that the University of Columbia ranks among the most famous universities in the USA, and that’s the very reason why I’m now applying for furthering my university study in your Computer Science department. (运用了that引导的宾语从句以及why引导的定语从句)[高分句型2] I would appreciate it if you could take the trouble to provide me with some information and send me the necessary application materials.  (运用了it作形式宾语)