黑龙江高考英语写作分类训练：感谢信

这是一份黑龙江高考英语写作分类训练：感谢信，共20页。试卷主要包含了假定你是李华，是一名高三学生，再次表示感谢，假定你是李华等内容，欢迎下载使用。
感谢信/祝贺信
1．假定你是李华，你所在的山西国际学校要征集一封英文感谢信，以致意奋战在抗击新型冠状病毒肺炎第一线的医护人员，请你根据下列要点写一封信用于投稿。
1. 表达谢意；
2. 个人感受；
3. 表达信心。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。
参考词汇：流行病epidemic  疫情epidemic situation  新型冠状病毒novel coronavirus
Dear Medical workers,
I am Li Hua, a high middle school student in Shanxi.
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2．假定你是李华，是一名高三学生。上周五，你校举办了一场英语演讲比赛，你荣获了一等奖。请根据下面的写作提纲，给外教Susan Hill写一封感谢信。内容包括：
1．写信的目的；
2．她如何帮助了你；
3．再次表示感谢。
注意：1．词数：100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结束语已为你写好。
Dear Susan Hill,
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Yours,
Li Hua
3．假设你是李华，你的英国朋友 Peter 在中国象棋网络挑战赛(The Chinese Chess Network Challenge Competition) 中荣获一等奖。现在，请你给他写一封电子邮件，向他表示祝贺，要点如下：
1. 表示祝贺；
2. 赞扬对方的付出；
3. 向对方学习 。
注意：1.词数 100 左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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4．假设你是李华，请写封邮件给美国的笔友Jack，讲述学校于上周五上午在操场举办的每年一度的以“感恩、责任、成长、梦想”为主题的成人礼（coming-of-age ceremony）。邮件内容主要包括：
1. 成人礼概况；
2. 你的感受；
3. 询问美国的成人礼情况。
注意：1. 可以适当增加细节，使结构完整。 2. 词数100左右。
Dear Jack,
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Yours,
Lihua
5．假定你是李华，你们班来自英国的交换生David在你市举办的“外国人写汉字”的书法大赛 中获得了二等奖。请你给他写封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.表达祝贺；
2.肯定他的努力；
3.希望他明年也参加。
注意:1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:书法calligraphy
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6．假定你是李华。近期，你在上海参加了为期两周的以“培养国际视野的新一代”为主题的全国中学生夏令营活动。在培训期间，外教Smith先生就学习技巧和文化拓展等方面给予你很多帮助。回家后，你想给他写一封信，以表达感谢，内容包括：
1.表示感谢；
2.回顾你得到的帮助以及收获；
3.祝福和期待。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mr. Smith,
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Yours sincerely.
Li Hua
7．假定你是李华，上周日你不慎在操场丢失一个书包，里面有学生证、钱包等物品。你校外教 Mr. Smith 捡到后上交给学校。请你用英语给他写一封感谢信，内容包括：
1. 写信目的；
2. 描述事情经过；
3. 再次表达感谢。
注意：
1. 词数 80 左右
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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8．假定你是李华，你是你校英语报的学生编辑。你的美国笔友Anna最近获得了学校“最佳志愿者”奖，请写信给她，要点包括：
1. 表达祝贺；
2. 阐述你对此事的看法；
3. 请她介绍志愿活动的经历并提供图片。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Anna,
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Yours,
Li Hua
9．假如你是李华，你的美国网友Peter参加中国象棋网络挑战赛获得了一等奖。请根据以下提示写一封英文电子邮件向他表示祝贺。
1) 祝贺他获奖；
2) 肯定他付出的努力；
3) 询问何时方便，在网上切磋棋艺。
注意：1)词数100左右；
2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3)开头和结尾已为你写好。
参考词汇：the Chinese Chess Network Challenge
Dear Peter,
I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations
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Congratulations again.
Yours,
Li Hua
10．假定你是李华。David是你的美国笔友。他对中国鼓励使用环保购物袋很感兴趣，来信向你询问此事。请你给他写封回信，主要内容如下：
1. 感谢他的关注；2. 简要介绍相关情况；3. 谈谈你的感想。
参考词汇：环保购物袋 environment-friendly shopping bag
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear David,
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Yours,
Li Hua












1．Dear Medical workers,
I am Li Hua, a high middle school student in Shanxi. I’m writing to express sincere gratitude to you all for your devotion and sacrifice in this battle against the Novel Coronavirus.
In this epidemic, it is you who, despite the lack of equipment and the potential of infection, desperately rescue those infected but striving for life. It is also you who have shed new light on the virus with expertise to build up our confidence to defeat it. It is you who deserve all the admiration and love!
I can never express our thankfulness too much for your selfless contribution. It’s widely believed that with our joint efforts China will win the battle and make a quick recovery.
Good luck and stay well!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，你所在的山西国际学校要征集一封英文感谢信，以致意奋战在抗击新型冠状病毒肺炎第一线的医护人员，请你根据下列要点写一封信用于投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
表达：express→convey
不顾一切地：desperately→profoundly
拯救：rescue→save
增强：build up→enhance
2.句式拓展
同义句转化
原句：It’s widely believed that with our joint efforts China will win the battle and make a quick recovery.
拓展句：I firmly believed that with our joint efforts China will win the battle and make a quick recovery.
【点睛】[高分句型1] In this epidemic, it is you who, despite the lack of equipment and the potential of infection, desperately rescue those infected but striving for life. (运用了强调句)
[高分句型2] It’s widely believed that with our joint efforts China will win the battle and make a quick recovery. (运用了主语从句)
2．Dear Susan Hill,
I am Li Hua, a student of Senior 3. I am writing to express my gratitude for your kind help.
You don't know how excited I was to get the first prize in the English Speech Contest held in my school last Friday and I owe it to your kind help. I used to be too shy to speak aloud in public. Luckily, you asked me to practice several times in your office and corrected my pronunciation and intonation. In addition, you encouraged me to be confident and brave if I wanted to show my talent on the stage.I made great progress with your kind help, without which I couldn't have got the prize.
Thank you again for your kind help!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教Susan Hill写一封感谢信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
感激：gratitude →appreciation → thanks
帮助：help→ aid →assistance
此外：in addition →what’s more → besides
幸运地：luckily=fortunately
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Luckily, you asked me to practice several times in your office and corrected my pronunciation and intonation.
拓展句Luckily, you asked me to practice several times in your office,where you corrected my pronunciation and intonation.
【点睛】[高分句型1] In addition, you encouraged me to be confident and brave if I wanted to show my talent on the stage.（运用了if 引导的条件状语从句）
[高分句型2] I made great progress with your kind help, without which I couldn't have got the prize.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句和虚拟）
3．Dear Peter,
     It's wonderful that you have won first prize in the Chinese Chess Network Challenge Competition as a foreigner. I could hardly wait to express my sincere congratulations to you.
     In the past few years, you have spent your abundant time improving your skills. It is your devotion, diligence and determination that lead to your success . You set a good example for me and push me to move forward. As a chess lover, I want to invite you to teach me chess skills in order to renew my level.
     Please let me know when you are available. Best wishes to you.

                                                                      Yours
                                                                      Li Hua
【详解】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假设你是李华，你的英国朋友 Peter 在中国象棋网络挑战赛(The Chinese Chess Network Challenge Competition) 中荣获一等奖。现在，请你给他写一封电子邮件，向他表示祝贺。
【详解】1.词汇积累
急切做某事：be eager to do→ could hardly wait to do
祝贺：congratulate sb. on sth→ express one’s sincere congratulations to sb.
大量的时间：enough time→ abundant time
提升水平：improve my level →renew my level
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句: In the past few years, you have spent your abundant time improving your skills.
拓展句: In the past few years, you have spent your abundant time improving your skills, which is diligent.
【点睛】[高分句型1] It's wonderful that you have won first prize in the Chinese Chess Network Challenge Competition as a foreigner. (运用了that引导的主语从句)
[高分句型2] It is your devotion, diligence and determination that lead to your success .(运用了强调句型)
4．Dear Jack,
How is everything going? So excited am I to tell you about the annual Coming-of-age Ceremony held in our school last Friday morning.
It lasted for two hours from 9 to 11 o'clock in our school stadium. With the theme represented as “gratitude, responsibility, growth and dream”, it had invited both our parents and teachers, to whom we sincerely expressed our gratitude during the ceremony. Following that, we conveyed our determination to be a better self in the future, to fully shoulder our responsibility for both our family and society and to spare no effort to make our dreams come true. Every student was excited and emotional not only because of the adulthood itself, but because of what it gives to us — more independence, more courage, bigger dreams and fuller responsibility.
Do you have an annual coming-of-age ceremony or something similar? If so, could you tell me something about it? Thank you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给美国的笔友Jack写封邮件，介绍成人礼概况、你的感受以及询问美国的成人礼情况。
【详解】1.词汇积累
感谢：appreciation→gratitude
肩负：undertake→shoulder
感动的：moved→emotional
尽力做：try one’s best to= spare no effort to
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：So excited am I to tell you about the annual Coming-of-age Ceremony held in our school last Friday morning. It lasted for two hours from 9 to 11 o'clock in our school stadium.
拓展句：So excited am I to tell you about the annual Coming-of-age Ceremony held in our school last Friday morning, which lasted for two hours from 9 to 11 o'clock in our school stadium.
【点睛】[高分句型1] With the theme represented as “gratitude, responsibility, growth and dream”, it had invited both our parents and teachers, to whom we sincerely expressed our gratitude during the ceremony. (运用了“介词+关系代词”结构非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Every student was excited and emotional not only because of the adulthood itself, but because of what it gives to us — more independence, more courage, bigger dreams and fuller responsibility. (运用了what引导宾语从句)
5．One possible version:
Dear David,
I've learned with delight that you have won the second prize in the Chinese Calligraphy Competition held for foreigners in our city. I’m writing to extend my congratulations to you on your success.
For months, not only have you read many books about Chinese calligraphy, but you’ve kept practicing it every day. In addition, you have consulted experts in Chinese calligraphy and learned a lot from them. Now your efforts have paid off. I'm so proud of you!
Congratulations to your achievement again. I do hope that you'll participate in the competition next year and I'm certain that you'll achieve greater success.
Yours,
LiHua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给班级英国的交换生David写一封祝贺信，祝贺他在你市举办的“外国人写汉字”的书法大赛 中获得了二等奖。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和现在完成时。
结构：总分总法
要求：
1.表达祝贺；
2.肯定他的努力；
3.希望他明年也参加。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
with delight；extend one's congratulations to sb on sth;not only…but (also)…；pay off；be proud of；participate in；achieve greater success
第三步：连词成句
1. I’ve learned with delight that you have won the second prize in the Chinese Calligraphy Competition held for foreigners in our city.
2. I’m writing to extend my congratulations to you on your success.
3. For months, not only have you read many books about Chinese calligraphy, but you’ve kept practicing it every day.
4. In addition, you have consulted experts in Chinese calligraphy and learned a lot from them.
5. Now your efforts have paid off.
6. I'm so proud of you!
7. Congratulations to your achievement again.
8. I do hope that you'll participate in the competition next year and I'm certain that you'll achieve greater success.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second(供参考)
2.表并列补充关系：In addition; not only…but …
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but(供参考)
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] I've learned with delight that you have won the second prize in the Chinese Calligraphy Competition held for foreigners in our city.(that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] For months, not only have you read many books about Chinese calligraphy, but you’ve kept practicing it every day.(not only…but…引导并列句以及部分倒装)
6．参考例文：
Dear Mr. Smith,
I'm writing to express my sincere gratitude to you for your generous help during the two-week summer camp.
During the training courses, you were always willing to help me patiently and give me hints on English learning. It was you who encouraged me to be confident to express myself in English. My oral English has improved dramatically since. Also, I really admire your lectures about Western culture, from which I have benefited a lot and had a better understanding of different traditions.
My appreciation is beyond words. I will be more than pleased if I can show you around my hometown in return for your kindness. Looking forward to your coming.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外教Smith写封邮件，感谢他在夏令营培训期间就学习技巧和文化拓展等方面给予的帮助。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般过去时和现在完成时，少量一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.表示感谢；
2.回顾你得到的帮助以及收获；
3.祝福和期待。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
express sincere gratitude to; be willing to help; encourage sb to do; have a better understanding of; show sb around; in return; look forward to
第三步：连词成句
1. I'm writing to express my sincere gratitude to you for your generous help during the two-week summer camp.
2. During the training courses, you were always willing to help me patiently and give me hints on English learning.
3. Also, I really admire your lectures about Western culture, from which I have benefited a lot and had a better understanding of different traditions.
4. I will be more than pleased if I can show you around my hometown in return for your kindness.
5. Looking forward to your coming.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：Firstly, Secondly, In the end（供参考）
2.表并列补充关系：Also, and
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but（供参考）
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So（供参考）
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] It was you who encouraged me to be confident to express myself in English.（强调句）
[高分句型2] Also, I really admire your lectures about Western culture, from which I have benefited a lot and had a better understanding of different traditions.（from which引导的非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型3] I will be more than pleased if I can show you around my hometown in return for your kindness.（if引导的条件状语从句）
7．Dear Mr. Smith,
I'm Li Hua, a student from Class 1, Grade 2. I’m writing to thank you for returning my schoolbag.
Last Sunday, I left my schoolbag on the playground owing to my carelessness. I was worried because my student's ID card, wallet and some documents were all in it, which were very important to me. Just as I was at a loss. I was informed that my schoolbag was at the school's Lost and Found and it was you who had found my schoolbag. My excitement was truly beyond description at that moment!
Please accept my cordial thanks for your help.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外教Mr. Smith写封感谢信。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般过去时和一般现在时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 写信目的；
2. 描述事情经过；
3. 再次表达感谢。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
thank sb. for，leave sth. on the playground，owing to，worried，at a loss，inform that…，beyond description
第三步：连词成句
1. I’m writing Io thank you for returning my schoolbag.
2. Last Sunday, I left my schoolbag on the playground owing to my carelessness.
3. I was worried because my student's ID card, wallet and some documents were all in it, which were very important to me.
4. Just as I was at a loss.
5. I was informed that my schoolbag was at the school's Lost and Found and it was you who had found my schoolbag.
6. My excitement was truly beyond description at that moment!
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally（供参考）
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition （供参考）
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but （供参考）
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result（供参考）
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
【点睛】[高分句型1]
What  worried me most was that I left my schoolbag with my student's ID card, wallet and some documents in it.使用了what主语从句和that引导的表语从句。
[高分句型2]
Someone told me that you have found my schoolbag which was at the school's Lost and Found 使用了that引导的宾语从句和which引导的定语从句。
8．One possible version:
Dear Anna,
Learning you won your school’s “Most Outstanding Volunteer” award, I’d like to offer my sincere congratulations on your achievement.
As I know, you’ve been a volunteer for years. As you’re willing to use your spare time to help those in need, you really deserve the award. By the way, since I’m a part-time editor of my school’s English newspaper, I want to have more readers know your story. Would you like to share with me some of your volunteer experiences and some relevant photos?
Again, please accept my congratulations.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封信件；假定你是李华，你是你校英语报的学生编辑。你的美国笔友Anna最近获得了学校“最佳志愿者”奖，请写信给她，要点包括：1. 表达祝贺；2. 阐述你对此事的看法；3. 请她介绍志愿活动的经历并提供图片。人称使用第二人称。时态应为一般现在时。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：“Most Outstanding Volunteer” award (“最佳志愿者”奖)，congratulations (祝贺)，volunteer experiences (志愿活动的经历)，relevant photos (相关的照片)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如非谓语动词Learning you won your school’s “Most Outstanding Volunteer” award, I’d like to offer my sincere congratulations on your achievement.非限定性定语从句As I know, you’ve been a volunteer for years.原因状语从句As you’re willing to use your spare time to help those in need, you really deserve the award.祈使句Again, please accept my congratulations.另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
9．Dear Peter,
I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations to you on your winning the first prize in the Chinese Chess Network Challenge. As your friend, I just want you to know how glad I am at your success.
“Everything comes to him who waits.” For these years, you’ve shown great interest in Chinese chess and kept on practicing it every day. Not only have you read many books about Chinese chess strategy, but also you have competed in all kinds of Chinese chess contests. Finally, you succeeded in winning the online competition!
So I’m so happy that you become champion of this network challenge. At last, I hope to play Chinese chess with you so that we can make progress together. Please tell me when you have time.
Congratulations again.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封祝贺信。
【详解】第一步：
审题：祝贺信  祝贺Peter参加中国象棋网络挑战赛获得了一等奖
人称：第一、二人称
时态：一般现在时
结构：总分法，分三部分，第一部分祝贺Peter获奖，第二部分肯定Peter付出的努力，
第三部分想与他在网上切磋棋艺，询问何时方便，并再次表示祝贺。
要点：
1. 祝贺Peter获得中国象棋网络挑战赛一等奖
2．肯定Peter付出的努力
①每天坚持练习
②阅读有关象棋策略的书籍
③参加各种中国象棋比赛；
3．想与他在网上切磋棋艺，询问何时方便
4.再次表示祝贺
第二步：列提纲（重点词汇、短语）
congratulations to sb. on …；win the first prize；be glad at；show interest in；keep on doing…；chess strategy；compete in；contest；succeed in；win the competition； champion；play Chinese chess；make progress
第三步：连词成句
(1)I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations to you on your winning the first prize in the Chinese Chess Network Challenge.
(2) You’ve shown great interest in Chinese chess.
(3) You keep on practicing it every day.
(4) You have read many books about Chinese chess strategy.
(5) You have competed in all kinds of Chinese chess contests.
(6) You succeeded in winning the online competition!
(7) You become champion of this network challenge.
(8) I hope to play Chinese chess with you.
(9)We can make progress together.  
根据提示和关键词进行遣词造句,适当地运用句型，注意时态和主谓一致问题。
第四步：连句成篇(衔接词)
表示时间顺序： first of all; to begin/start with , in the beginning
firstly.... secondly .... lastly / finally/in the end
表示并列或补充关系： what is more; besides, moreover, apart from;
in addition, as well as；not only…but(also), meanwhile, in the meantime, some...some…others
表示转折对比关系：but, however, although, though, yet, while
on one hand…on the other hand ...,
表示因果关系：because, as, therefore, as a result, as a consequence , consequently, thus
连句成文，运用恰当的衔接词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，使句与句之间逻辑性更强、
段与段之间结构清晰。
【点睛】范文要点全面，结构清晰，层次分明，上下文连贯，在表达时用到了很多高级词汇，如 congratulations to sb. on …；win the first prize；be glad at；show interest in；keep on doing…；compete in；succeed in；win the competition；champion；play Chinese chess；make progress等；复杂句式的运用提升了文章层次，如not only…but also 的倒装句式的运用 Not only have you read many books about Chinese chess strategy, but also you have competed in all kinds of Chinese chess contests. ；so that引导的状语从句的运用I hope to play Chinese chess with you so that we can make progress together等。
10．Dear David,
In your letter you asked me about the use of environment-friendly shopping bags in China. It never occurred to me that you have known so much about China. Well, here is some information about it.
Plastic bags are of great convenience for us, but it may also cause what we call “white pollution”. Having the largest population in the world, China uses the most plastic bags in the world, which contributes to pollution. Faced with this problem, the government has decided to encourage people to use environment-friendly shopping bags, which can be treated when they are of no use, instead of plastic ones, hoping this can effectively reduce white pollution.
Actually, I approve of the use of such bags due to the fact that they can not only protect the environment but also save natural resources. After all, we should protect the earth so that we have a clean place to stay in.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇书信应用文。要求考生写一封回信，向美国笔友介绍环保购物袋在中国的使用情况。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
   总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1.感谢关注
      2.简单介绍相关情况
      1）原因（plastic bags; pollute）
      2）环保购物袋的好处（treat）
      3 感想（approve of; protect the earth）
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
it occurred to sb. that…; contribute to; be faced with; encourage sb. to do; instead of; approve of; not only…but also
第三步：连词成句
1. It never occurred to me that you have known so much about China.
2. Having the largest population in the world, China uses the most plastic bags in the world, which contributes to pollution.
3. Faced with this problem, the government has decided to encourage people to use environment-friendly shopping bags, which can be treated when they are of no use, instead of plastic ones, hoping this can effectively reduce white pollution.
4. Actually, I approve of the use of such bags due to the fact that they can not only protect the environment but also save natural resources.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1）表因果关系：because, as, for, so, thus, therefore, as a result
2）表目的关系：so that
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。
1.作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：
1）It never occurred to me that you have known so much about China.这句话用了it作形式主语的主语从句结构“it occurred to sb. that…”
2）Having the largest population in the world, China uses the most plastic bags in the world, which contributes to pollution.这句话中包含了一个非谓语结构作状语“Having the largest population in the world,”和一个非限制性定语从句“which contributes to pollution”。
3）Faced with this problem, the government has decided to encourage people to use environment-friendly shopping bags, which can be treated when they are of no use, instead of plastic ones, hoping this can effectively reduce white pollution.这句话既有“Faced with this problem”作过去分词结构作原因状语，也有“hoping this can effectively reduce white pollution”现在分词作目的状语，同时还包含非限制性定语从句“which can be treated when they are of no use”
2.使用了一些固定词组，如it occurred to sb. that…; contribute to; be faced with; encourage sb. to do; instead of; approve of; not only…but also等。
全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。