黑龙江高考英语写作分类训练：建议信

这是一份黑龙江高考英语写作分类训练：建议信，共17页。试卷主要包含了假如你是高二学生李华，希望和祝愿，假定你是李华，假如你是李夏等内容，欢迎下载使用。
建议信1．假如你是李华，暑假期间准备和父母一起去云南旅游，你想选择自助游，而你父母想随团出行。得知你的英国笔友Michael去年到过云南，请你根据以下内容给他写一封邮件：1. 描述分歧和各自的理由；2. 询问他的建议。注意：1. 词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：自助游：independent travel 随团游 package tourDear Michael,How is everything going? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua2．假如你是高二学生李华。你的好友小明来信说因为疫情学校再次延迟开学，他很烦恼，听说你校请南开大学心理学教授袁辛做了如何应对疫情带来的学习方式变化的讲座，询问你有什么感受和建议。请给对方写一封回信，内容包括：1．你的感受；2．你的建议；3．希望和祝愿。注意：1. 词数100左右(开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数)；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：疫情pandemicDear Xiao Ming,I'm more than delighted to hear from you. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua3．假如你是李华,你的笔友Jane最近总是感觉身体不适,因此写信向你询问如何保持身体健康,请你根据以下要点提示用英文给他回信。要点提示：1 对Jane表示关切；2 提出合理建议；3 期望Jane的不适状况早日好转。字数：100词左右（可适当增加细节）。Dear Jane,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerelyLi Hua4．假设你是高中生李华，有感于校园中存在的随意涂写(to scribble) 和乱丢垃圾(to litter) 的行为，请用英语给校英语报编辑写一封信。信中应包括以下内容：1. 说明写信目的；2. 对这些行为进行批评；3. 提出建议。注意：开头已给出，不计入总词数。（本次考试开头和信首及落款将不在答题纸上体现）Dear Editor,I am Li Hua, a student from Class 1, Senior 3.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours faithfully,Li Hua5．假设你是李华,你马上要面临大学专业的选择以及对未来的职业规划，对此你相当困惑。听说你的美国笔友Tom从小就学习了职业规划，请你给他写信，向他寻求一些建议。内容包括以下要点：1.    职业规划的意义何在；2.    询问如何进行职业规划。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头和结尾已经给出(不计入总词数)。Dear Tom,I know that you have learned about career planning from an early age.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely,Li Hua6．假定你是李华。你校外籍教师Peter计划在暑假期间回国,他想送给母亲可以代表中国文化的礼物。请你给他写一封邮件,向他推荐礼物。内容包括:1.推荐礼物:旗袍、中国结等;2.推荐原因:3.表达祝福。注意:1.词数100左右。2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。参考词汇:旗袍Qipao;中国结Chinese knotDear Peter，_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua7．假如你是李华，学校最近要组织一次英语演讲比赛，主题为“垃圾分类益处多”。请你根据此话题写一篇演讲稿。要点如下:1.你的观点；2.你的建议。参考词汇:垃圾分类garbage classification注意:1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8．假如你是李夏。你看到美国留学生Sharon 在网上发贴，希望有人能帮助她提高普通话(Mandarin)水平，她可以教英语作为回报。请根据以下提示用英语给她写一封电子邮件。1. 表达给她提供帮助的意愿；   2. 说明你能胜任辅导的理由；3. 给出讲好普通话的两点建议； 4. 提出你学习英语的具体需求。注意：1. 词数120左右，开头语已为你写好；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；Hi，Sharon，____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours faithfullyLi Xia9．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Andrew不久前去美国留学，他给你写信说很不适应那里的生活。请你根据以下提示用英语给他写一封回信，鼓励他勇敢面对。1. 尊重当地的风俗习惯；    2. 与美国学生多交流；3. 积极参加户外活动；      4. 注意与人交往时的礼仪。注意：1.可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2.词数在100-120之间，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。3.参考词汇:custom风俗习惯    manners礼仪Dear Andrew,How nice to hear from you again!_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely,Li Hua10．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Tim想在寒假时到中国旅游，发邮件向你征求旅游建议。请你回复邮件，内容包括：1. 推荐一个旅游城市；2. 给出推荐理由。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Tim,____________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely,Li Hua      1．Dear Michael,How is everything going? I’m writing to ask for your advice about our travel arrangements.With the summer holiday drawing near, my family is planning to travel to Yunnan. However, we have a disagreement about the way to travel. On the one hand, I’m in favor of independent travel because it’s convenient to book train tickets and accommodations on the smart phone. On the other hand, my parents insist that package tour is easier and safer. I have no idea which is better. Hearing that you visited Yunnan last year, I do believe you can offer me some suggestions. I hope to hear from you soon.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假如你是李华，暑假期间准备和父母一起去云南旅游，你想选择自助游，而你父母想随团出行。得知你的英国笔友Michael去年到过云南，请你根据以下内容给他写一封邮件：1. 描述分歧和各自的理由；2. 询问他的建议。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：ask for (请求)；arrangements (安排)；plan to do sth.(计划做某事)；have a disagreement about(就……有分歧)等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如On the one hand, I’m in favor of independent travel because it’s convenient to book train tickets and accommodations on the smart phone.运用原因状语从句；Hearing that you visited Yunnan last year, I do believe you can offer me some suggestions.非谓语动词的运用。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。2．Dear Xiao Ming,I’m more than delighted to hear from you. Learning that you are annoyed at the delayed start date of school due to the pandemic, I’d like to share my feelings about Professor Yuan’s lecture and give you some advice.I have benefited a lot from the lecture. Firstly, we are supposed to follow the school schedule as before, which can help prevent laziness effectively. Then, taking daily exercise is essential to relax both our body and mind. The same is true for my ideas. Besides, make sure to keep up with your teachers. Tough as it is, I’m convinced that you can manage it and will be amazed by yourself.I sincerely hope you will find them beneficial. Wish you a successful adjustment to the current study life.Yours,Li Hua【分析】这是一篇提纲类作文。要求你给小明写一封信，向他介绍你对南开大学心理学教授袁辛做的如何应对疫情带来的学习方式变化的讲座的感受，并给他提出一些建议。【详解】文章应该分为四部分。首先，开门见山，直接点明你写这封信的目的。其次，要表达你对该讲座的感受，比如，你从讲座中学到的东西（诸如如何学习，如何调整心态等）。然后，要向小明提出一些建议，比如建议他多锻炼，积极调整心态等。最后，要表达自己的希望和祝愿，祝愿他能够早日克服困难，投入正常的学习生活中去。【点睛】所给范文条理清楚，内容明确，要点齐全。长短句交叉使用，Firstly，then，Besides的使用，使得文章衔接自然流畅。适当运用了一些较好的词汇和句式，为文章增色不少，例如：非谓语动词（Learning that you are annoyed at the delayed start date of school due to the pandemic）；定语从句（which can help prevent laziness effectively）；宾语从句（that you can manage it）。3．Dear Jane,I'm delighted to hear from you, but sorry to have learned you aren't feeling well these days. In your letter you asked me how to stay healthy. Here is my advice.Firstly, you’d better keep a balanced diet. It can be beneficial to avoid eating food high in fat or with too much sugar. Instead, have more fresh vegetables and fruits. Secondly, taking exercise every day helps a lot to build up a strong body. As is known, regular exercise, such as jogging, is an essential approach to keeping fit. Finally, I wonder if you always stay up late at night. If so, please get rid of this habit, for never will we be healthy without enough sleep.All these count a lot for keeping your body at a proper weight and staying healthy. I truly hope you will find my advice helpful and get well soon.Best wishes!                                                    Yours sincerelyLi Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，要求考生给笔友写信，就如何保持身体健康提出建议。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。结构：总分法   总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1. 寒暄关怀（caring about）      2. 提出建议（give advice）      1）饮食平衡（balanced diet）      2）锻炼身体（exercise）      3）作息规律（regular schedule）      4. 良好祝愿（best wishes）第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）feel well；keep a balanced diet；be good for；build up；a way to；work out；as soon as possible；get better第三步：连词成句1. Sorry to have known you are feeling bad.2. Let me share some advice about how to keep healthy.3. You need to keep a balanced diet.4. Exercise regularly is also very important.5. Don’t forget having a regular schedule, which means going to bed and get up early.6. Hope these can help you and wish you get better as soon as possible.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that… 4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，第五步：润色修改【点睛】范文语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，内容完整，要点全面，并适当增加了细节，使行文更加饱满充实。作者在范文中使用了一些高级句式，如：If so, please get rid of this habit, for never will we be healthy without enough sleep这句话运用了倒装；Finally, I wonder if you always stay up late at night这句话运用了if引导的宾语从句。也使用了一些词组，如be delighted to，as is known，get rid of等。4．Dear Editor,I’m Li Hua, a student from Class 1, Senior 3. I’m writing to tell you that it has been alarmingly shocking to see so much scribing and littering in our school, but ironically, seemingly everyone pretends to get used to the phenomenon. Without doubt it not only brings our school under a cloud, but also has a bad effect on students’ mind. I wonder if the school could place more dustbins around and set up specific rules against such behaviour. At the same time, students should be encouraged to develop good habits and better behave themselves. I believe that, with the joint efforts of both teachers and students, our school will become a more enjoyable place in the near future. Yours faithfully,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达是一封书信。假设你是高中生李华，有感于校园中存在的随意涂写和乱丢垃圾的行为，请用英语给校英语报编辑写一封信。【详解】这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，不能遗漏要点：1. 说明写信目的；2. 对这些行为进行批评；3. 提出建议。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。根据写作要点我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和短语及句子有：shocking to see so much scribing and littering，pretend to，get used to the phenomenon，without doubt， have a bad effect on，place more dustbins around，set up specific rules against such behavior，Students should be encouraged to develop good habits and better behave themselves.，with the joint efforts of both teachers and students，become a more enjoyable place. 可以使用的衔接词：1.表文章结构顺序：First of all，Firstly/First，Secondly/Second… And then，Finally，In the end，At last，Above all。2.表并列补充关系：What is more，Besides，Moreover，Furthermore，In addition，as well as，not only…but (also)。通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误。【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句： I’m writing to tell you that it has been alarmingly shocking to see so much scribing and littering in our school, but ironically, seemingly everyone pretends to get used to the phenomenon. 这句话运用了that引导的宾语从句；I wonder if the school could place more dustbins around and set up specific rules against such behaviour. 这句话运用了if引导的宾语从句。使用了一些固定词组，如：pretend to，get used to，without doubt，have a bad effect on，set up，develop good habits，with the joint efforts。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。5．Dear Tom,I know that you have learned about career planning from an early age. I am writing to you to ask whether you could do me a favor and tell me something about it.First and foremost, as things change so quickly in this information age and the future is unpredictable, I wonder what makes career planning so necessary. Besides, if I am to do career planning, I want to know how to do it effectively. Shall I give priority to my interests or the future job? Are there any books or websites you want to recommend? Apart form that, based on what you know about me, please give me some personal suggestions.I would appreciate it if you could kindly write to me and tell me something about the above aspects. I hope to hear from you soon.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【分析】这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生给朋友写信，向他寻求关于大学专业选择和未来职业规划的建议。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时结构：总分 要求：1. 表明写信目的2. 1）职业规划的意义何在；2）询问如何进行职业规划。3.希望收到回信  第二步：列提纲（重点词组）do sb a favor/ tell sb sth/ how to choose/ be based on/ offer sb sth/ hear from sb/plan to do sth/ make a plan/at an early age/ be familiar with/recommend sth to sb第三步：连词成句I am writing to you to ask whether you could do me a favor and tell me something about it.As things change so quickly in this information age and the future is unpredictable, I wonder what makes career planning so necessary. If I am to do career planning, I want to know how to do it effectively. Shall I give priority to my interests or the future job?Are there any books or websites you want to recommend? Based on what you know about me, please give me some personal suggestions.I would appreciate it if you could kindly write to me and tell me something about the above aspects. I hope to hear from you soon.第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so…状语从句连词：because/ if/ though/ although…定语从句连词：which/ that/ when/ where…第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些主从复合句和分析结构，First and foremost, as things change so quickly in this information age and the future is unpredictable, I wonder what makes career planning so necessary.句中as引导原因状语从句，what引导宾语从句。Apart form that, based on what you know about me, please give me some personal suggestions.句中what引导宾语从句，based on是过去分词作状语。6．Dear Peter,I’m glad to hear that you want to buy some gifts for your mother that represent Chinese culture. And I’m writing to give you some advice.Personally I think you should buy the following gifts: Qipao and Chinese knot. Qipao, a very beautiful traditional dress for Chinese woman can show the real beauty of a woman. I’m sure your mother will like it very much. What’s more, It’s also a good choice for you to buy the Chinese knot. It’s usually hung in the sitting room or cars, which represents good luck.Wish you a good vacation. Please give my best wishes to your family.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封电子邮件。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封电子邮件：假定你是李华。你校外籍教师Peter计划在暑假期间回国,他想送给母亲可以代表中国文化的礼物。请你给他写一封邮件,向他推荐礼物。内容包括:1.推荐礼物:旗袍、中国结等;2.推荐原因:3.表达祝福。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：want to buy some gifts（想买一些礼物）；writing to give you some advice（写信给你一些建议）；represents good luck（代表好运气）；等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。I’m glad to hear that you want to buy some gifts for your mother that represent Chinese culture.句中使用that引导的宾语从句；What’s more, It’s also a good choice for you to buy the Chinese knot.句中it是形式主语，动词不定式作真正的主语；It’s usually hung in the sitting room or cars, which represents good luck.句中which引导非限制性定语从句。7．Hello, everyone! I’m glad to have this chance to share some ideas about garbage classification with you.To my understanding, the earth is home to every individual, and it’s our duty to protect the environment voluntarily. By sorting the waste, we can not only reduce pollution but also conserve energy, which will pave the way for recycling of valuable recourses.For the sake of our environment and life, we are expected to learn to sort the rubbish and make it a habit. Every individual can make a difference and let’s bring a brighter future for the planet!Thank you!【分析】这是一篇应用文写作。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一篇演讲稿；假如你是李华，学校最近要组织一次英语演讲比赛，主题为“垃圾分类益处多”。请你根据此话题写一篇演讲稿。要点如下:1.你的观点；2.你的建议。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：garbage classification（垃圾分类成立），to my understanding scenic spots（根据我的理解），pave the way（为……做准备）；for the sake of（为了），make a difference（有影响）等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如By sorting the waste, we can not only reduce pollution but also conserve energy, which will pave the way for recycling of valuable recourses.运用了非限定性定语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。8．Hi，Sharon，This is Li Xia．I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin．I am more than willing to lend a helping hand to you．I am convinced I can perfectly live up to your expectation．I have such a good command of Mandarin that not only was I elected the broadcaster of the radio station of our schoo1，but also I won the second prize in the Mandarin Contest held in our city last year．When it comes to improving Mandarin，my advice is that you should listen to Mandarin every day and practice speaking it whenever possible．Just as the saying goes，practice makes perfect．By the way，I do hope you can help me improve my English writing ability，especially the proper use of vocabulary and some important grammar.Looking forward to your reply．Yours faithfullyLi Xia【分析】这是一篇应用文写作。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封电子邮件；假如你是李夏。你看到美国留学生Sharon 在网上发贴，希望有人能帮助她提高普通话(Mandarin)水平，她可以教英语作为回报。请根据以下提示用英语给她写一封电子邮件。1. 表达给她提供帮助的意愿；2. 说明你能胜任辅导的理由；3. 给出讲好普通话的两点建议； 4. 提出你学习英语的具体需求。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：learn from（了解到），Mandarin（普通话），be more than willing to（非常乐意）；be convinced（相信）；live up（不辜负）；have a good command of（精通……）等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如I have such a good command of Mandarin that not only was I elected the broadcaster of the radio station of our schoo1，but also I won the second prize in the Mandarin Contest held in our city last year．运用了not only…but also结构；When it comes to improving Mandarin，my advice is that you should listen to Mandarin every day and practice speaking it whenever possible．运用了表语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。9．Dear Andrew,How nice to hear from you again! I think it is natural for you not to get used to the life there. Here I have some suggestions for you.First of all, you should respect the local customs there and try to involve yourself in the natives' lives. Just as the saying goes, "When in Rome, do as the Romans do." Secondly, don't be afraid to communicate with American students and make friends with them. Friendship will bring you happiness. What's more, it's better for you to join in more outdoor activities with your friends, which may help you relax and have fun. Finally, mind your own manners and be modest when getting along with your friends.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【分析】这是一篇提纲类回信作文，属于建议信。除了首尾段功能句，主体部分包含题干中列出的四点内容，稍加发挥，字数就适当了。题目给出要点多，切忌发挥过多导致遗漏了题干中的要点。【详解】第一步：审题。确定时态和人称。题干要求你给英国笔友Andrew提一些如何适应美国生活的建议。所以时态以一般现在时为主。同时由于是提建议，为了表达委婉，需要使用一些情态动词。第二步：确定篇章结构。这篇回信可分两段。第一段表明自己对笔友现状的关心以及自己愿意提出一些建议。第二段主要介绍题干中列出的四点建议。第三步：确定关键词（组），提炼写作要点。如：get used to the life there（适应那边生活），respect the local customs（尊重当地习俗），involve yourself in the natives' lives（融入当地人的生活），join in more outdoor activities（多参加户外活动），mind your own manners（注意礼节），When in Rome, do as the Romans do.（入乡随俗）等。第四步：对写作要点遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第五步： 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。符合英语表达习惯，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。【点睛】范文内容完整，段落清晰，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。第一段第二句使用了it作形式主语，将不定式放在了句尾，使的作者的英语表达地道自然。第二段结构清晰，使用了“First of all”“Secondly”“What's more”将内容要点分成三层。并且段中的“should”“try to”“it's better for you to…”等词语使的整文语气随和委婉。第二段最后两句分别使用了定语从句与时间状语从句，第二段还使用了谚语。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。且全文语句间过渡自然，为文章增色添彩。10．Dear Tim,Knowing that you’ll visit China in the coming winter holiday, I’m writing to give you some suggestions on your trip. I recommend the capital city, Beijing, to you. It is an amazing city with a long history and a variety of places of interest. You may first go to Tiananmen Square, where many tourists admire the national flag being raised every early morning. The next place that you can’t miss is the Great Wall, which is one of the great wonders in the world. The Palace Museum and the Summer Palace are well worth visiting, too. Besides, the local snacks will surely be appealing to you. I hope you will find these suggestions helpful. Yours sincerely,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封关于介绍一个旅游城市的书信。【详解】根据提示可知，本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封关于介绍一个旅游城市的书信，时态应为一般现在时。关键要点如下：①寒假时到中国旅游；②推荐一个旅游城市；③推荐理由。第二步：根据关键要点，确定关键词，如：winter holiday（寒假），capital city（首都），places of interest（风景名胜），Tiananmen Square（天安门广场）等。第三步：根据提示及关键词进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题以及句子结构完整。第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，使之自然流畅，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面。【点睛】本篇范文结构清晰，内容完整，过渡衔接严谨自然，符合演讲稿的要求，其中不乏亮点句型。非限制性定语从句的使用You may first go to Tiananmen Square, where many tourists admire the national flag being raised every early morning.非谓语动词的使用Knowing that you’ll visit China in the coming winter holiday, I’m writing to give you some suggestions on your trip.