江西高考英语写作分类训练：建议信

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建议信1．假定你是李华。你校开设了英语选修课---英语电影赏析(English Film Appreciation)，现英语组针对这门选修课向同学们征集意见。请你根据以下内容用英语给你校英语教研组写一封信。内容主要包括：1. 说明你对该课的喜爱；2. 赞赏该课的优点；3. 对该课的内容或授课方式提出两点建议。注意：1. 词数 100 左右；2. 信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Sir or Madam,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Sincerely yours, Li Hua2．假定你将参加校学生会组织的中学生英语演讲比赛，请以“节约粮食，反对浪费”为主题写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：1.粮食的重要性； 2.如何节约食物； 3.发出呼吁。注意：1.词数 100 左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 3.格式已给出，不计字数。Dear ladies and gentlemen，______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thank you for your listening！3．假设你是晨光中学高一(20)班的班长李津，得知美国学生Chris 作为交换生，下学期将到你班学习。请你根据以下提示，给他写封邮件：1. 表示欢迎；2. 介绍本班情况；3. 希望Chris做哪些事情，以增进中美学生之间的了解和友谊。注意：1.请勿提及与考生相关的真实信息。2.可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。3.词数100左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：交换生  exchange student_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．2021年世界地球日主题为“修复我们的地球”。请以“Restore Our Earth”为题写一篇演讲稿。内容要点：(1) 说明“修复我们的地球”的重要性； (2) 对“修复我们的地球”提出行动建议。注意：(1)词数100左右；(2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Restore Our Earth______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．假如你是李华，你的朋友Daniel给你发邮件说他想在美国办个主题为“中国风”（Chinese-themed）摄影展。他想来你的家乡收集素材。请你给他回一封邮件，内容包括：1.介绍家乡特色；2.提出建议；3.安排接机。注意：1. 词数100左右2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6．江西电视台外语频道打算开办一档面向中学生观众的英语节目，新聘任了来自英国的Amy作为节目编辑助理。现在，Amy就节目内容向广大中学生征求意见。假如你是学生李华，请你给Amy写信谈谈你对该节目的设想。信的内容包括:1. 节目的名称和内容；2. 开办这档节目的理由和预期的效果。3. 注意:文章字数100左右。7．假如你是李华，今天(星期日，4月29日，晴)在学校英语角遇到一个外教，你和他进行了交流。请围绕这个事情写一篇日记。要点如下:1.想跟他谈话却由于口语水平有限不知所措；2.你向他介绍你的城市；3.他给你一些学习英语的建议。注意:1.词数100字左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使内容连贯；3.开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。April 29, Thursday Sunny___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8．假定你是李华，你的留学生朋友Jack想学南昌方言(dialect)。请你给他写一封电子邮件，提出你的建议，内容包括：1. 多和当地市民交流；2. 观看南昌方言电视节目；3. 买一本南昌方言的词典等。注意： 1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9．再过一段时间，天气会渐渐炎热起来，许多学生喜欢下河游泳。为预防游泳溺水事故的发生，你们班将举行以“珍爱生命，预防溺水”为主题的班会。请你用英语写一篇发言稿，谈谈你对安全游泳的建议。建议内容包括：不要到陌生的河流湖泊游泳；不允许擅自结伴游泳；不会游泳，不要下水救人……要求：1．语言通顺，意思连贯，符合逻辑。2．内容可适当发挥。3．文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。4．词数：100词左右。参考词汇：cherish（珍爱）10．假定你是李华，你的美国交流生朋友Lucy发邮件给你，希望你能帮助她使用筷子，因为她要参加学校为交流生举办的比赛活动。请你给她发送一封邮件，内容包括：1.表达理解和安慰；2.提出建议；3.表示祝福。注意：1.词数100右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________             1．One possible version:Dear Sir or Madam,I’m Li Hua, one of the students who attended the course English Film Appreciation last term. I like it very much mainly for the following two reasons. First, in the class, we are exposed to different kinds of English films, which helps us improve both our English listening and speaking skills. Apart from that, it is the amazing stories of the heroes that attract me most, because they show us that a person can work hard to make a difference. As a young student, I suggest that the teacher choose some more films that appeal to us teenagers, thus making the course more interesting. Besides, more activities should be included so that we can have more chances to practice our English. I’d appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into consideration. I hope that the course will gain wide popularity among the students in our school. Sincerely yours, Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于议论文，要求考生对学校新开设的英语选修课---英语电影赏析提出看法和建议。【详解】词汇积累感激：appreciate→thank提高：improve→enhance有影响:make a difference→have an impact on吸引：appeal to→attract句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Apart from that, it is the amazing stories of the heroes that attract me most, because they show us that a person can work hard to make a difference.拓展句：Apart from that, it is the amazing stories of the heroes, which show us that a person can work hard to make a difference that attract me most.【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m Li Hua, one of the students who attended the course English Film Appreciation last term. (运用了who引导的限制性定语从句)[高分句型2] First, in the class, we are exposed to different kinds of English films, which helps us improve both our English listening and speaking skills. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)2．Dear ladies and gentlemen,It’s my great honor to speak here. As we all know, food is of great importance for us. It provides our body with energy. Without food, we can’t survive on the earth. But in our daily life, too much food is wasted, which makes saving food more urgent (急迫的).Here are some suggestions on how to save food. First and foremost, we should always prepare/cook a proper amount of food and eat up everything on our plate. Besides, when dining out, we shouldn’t order too much food and we should take the leftovers (剩饭) home. Last but not least, we should help raise people's awareness of saving food, which is an effective way to stop wasting food.Because/Since saving food is so vitally important, I firmly believe that it is high time that we should try our best/spare no effort to save food and prevent wasting.Thank you for your listening.【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以“节约粮食，反对浪费”为主题写一篇演讲稿。【详解】1.词汇积累众所周知：as is known to all→as we all know重要的：important→of great importance建议：advice→suggestion吃完：finish→ eat up 2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：It provides our body with energy. Without food, we can’t survive on the earth.拓展句：Food provides our body with energy, without which we can’t survive on the earth.【点睛】[高分句型1] Last but not least, we should help raise people's awareness of saving food, which is an effective way to stop wasting food. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2] Because/Since saving food is so vitally important, I firmly believe that it is high time that we should try our best/spare no effort to save food and prevent wasting. (运用了Because/Since引导的原因状语从句、that引导的宾语从句以及it is high time that句型)3．Dear Chris,I’m Li Jin, monitor of Class Twenty-one, Senior One. I’m glad that you’ll come to our school as an exchange student and I’m honored to become a classmate of you.Welcome to our class, where there are 50 students, 30 of whom are boys. You don’t need to worry about the life here, because we are warm-heated and friendly, ready to give you a hand whenever you need help.At last, I personally give you a piece of advice that learning some basic Chinese should benefit you a lot as it will be easier for you to communicate with local people and to get on well with teachers and students. We are looking forward to seeing you!Yours，Li Jin【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给美国学生Chris写封邮件，对他表示欢迎、介绍本班情况以及希望Chris做哪些事情，以增进中美学生之间的了解和友谊。【详解】1.词汇积累建议：suggestion→advice帮助某人：do sb. a favor→give sb. a hand快乐的：happy→glad相处融洽：get along with→get on well with2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：I’m glad that you’ll come to our school as an exchange student and I’m honored to become a classmate of you.拓展句：Since you’ll come to our school as an exchange student, I’m honored to become a classmate of you.【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m glad that you’ll come to our school as an exchange student and I’m honored to become a classmate of you. (运用了that引导宾语从句)[高分句型2] Welcome to our class, where there are 50 students, 30 of whom are boys. (运用了where引导定语从句)4．Restore Our EarthWith an increasing number of disasters taking place and infectious diseases spreading around the globe, it is time to consider how to reduce them seriously. In my opinion, restoring our earth is a vital part of cutting down destructive disasters. But why and how to accomplish it?As we know, it is apparently human activities that destroy nature in a profound way causing disasters and diseases. Therefore, while tackling global crises requires the joint efforts, it is a bounden duty for everyone to take action to solve this problem. Personally, first, we should reduce using everyday items made of materials that may result in pollution, such as paper or plastic bags. Instead, we can use bags made of cloth repeatedly. Second, we should help cut down greenhouse gas emission by going to school or work by bike or public transportation instead of driving car all the time. Third, we can save energy or resources by turning off electric appliance like air conditioners or lights if not necessary no matter we are in public places or at home.Only by joint efforts of every single person can we contribute to restoring our earth. So, let’s move.【分析】本篇书面表达是演讲稿，2021年世界地球日主题为“修复我们的地球”,要求考生以“修复我们的地球”为主题写一篇演讲稿。【详解】1.词汇积累发生：take place →happen/occur完成，实现： accomplish →achieve/complete明显地：apparently →clearly/obviously处理：tackle →deal with/handle2.句式拓展原句：With an increasing number of disasters taking place and infectious diseases spreading around the globe, it is time to consider how to reduce them seriously. 拓展句：As an increasing number of disasters take place and infectious diseases spread around the globe, it is time to consider how to reduce them seriously. 【点睛】[高分句型1] As we know, it is apparently human activities that destroy nature in a profound way causing disasters and diseases.  (运用了强调句型)[高分句型2] Personally, first, we should reduce using everyday items made of materials that may result in pollution, such as paper or plastic bags. (运用了that引导的限制性定语从句)[高分句型3] Only by joint efforts of every single person can we contribute to restoring our earth. (运用了倒装句型)5．Dear Daniel,I am so glad to know that you will be coming to China soon. Regarding your Chinese-themed photography exhibition, you really don’t have to worry about collecting materials. I will plan it out for you.Above all, I will make a brief introduction on the characteristics of my hometown. Ganzhou, as a culturally advanced city, has a long history. Food and historical culture are the two main features. Besides, I hope to make some suggestions, which may be useful. I advise you to illustrate the theme from three aspects---ancient architecture, exotic food and traditional culture in Ganzhou. Thus you can not only satisfy your stomach but fulfill your shots’ needs.Let me know what you think as well. Also, don’t forget to send me the details of your flight so that I can pick you up at the airport on time. See you soon!【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国笔友Daniel写封电子邮件，介绍你家乡的情况和特殊景点，并给出相关建议。【详解】词汇积累展览：show→exhibition简短的：short→brief满足：satisfy→fulfill首先：first of all=above all句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Ganzhou, as a culturally advanced city, has a long history.拓展句：With a long history, Ganzhou is a culturally advanced city, which offers tourists from home and abroad many breathtaking scenes.【点睛】[高分句型1] Besides, I hope to make some suggestions, which may be useful. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2] Also, don’t forget to send me the details of your flight so that I can pick you up at the airport on time. (运用了so that引导的目的状语从句)6．Dear Amy,I know you’re going to set up an English program for middle school students. So I’m writing to suggest a program named “All-round Jiangxi”. This program will cover topics like the history, education, famous scenic spots, food and famous people of Jiangxi. It would be better to broadcast it on weekends so that we students can have the chance to watch it.Besides, you can also invite some middle school students to get involved in this program, which will surely arouse other students’ interest in it. Not only will the program help students improve their English, but also get them to know more about the culture of Jiangxi so as to introduce Jiangxi to foreign visitors. I am sure it will be well-received by middle school students. I hope you can take my suggestion into consideration.Sincerely yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给一档英语节目的编辑助理Amy写信谈谈对该节目的设想。【详解】1.词汇积累包括：cover→include机会：chance→opportunity以便：so as to→in order to建议：suggestion→advice2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：So I’m writing to suggest a program named “All-round Jiangxi”. This program will cover topics like the history, education, famous scenic spots, food and famous people of Jiangxi.拓展句：So I’m writing to suggest a program named “All-round Jiangxi” which will cover topics like the history, education, famous scenic spots, food and famous people of Jiangxi.【点睛】[高分句型1] It would be better to broadcast it on weekends so that we students can have the chance to watch it. (运用了so that引导的状语从句)[高分句型2] Besides, you can also invite some middle school students to get involved in this program, which will surely arouse other students’ interest in it.  (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)[高分句型3] Not only will the program help students improve their English, but also get them to know more about the culture of Jiangxi so as to introduce Jiangxi to foreign visitors.（使用了部分倒装句）7．April 29, Thursday SunnyThis morning when I was in the English Corner, I came across a foreign teacher. This was the first time that I had seen a foreigner. I wanted to talk with him, but I was so excited and nervous that I didn’t know what to do and how to start a conversation. Eager to practice my oral English, I encouraged myself to say hello to him. He was very friendly and we talked about 15 minutes. As a native, I introduced attractions and tasty food of this city to him. Finally, he gave me some advice on how to further improve my English. It was more than an experience!【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇日记，记录自己在英语角遇见外教的经历。【详解】词汇积累遇见：meet→come cross着急的：anxious→eager口语的：spoken→oral景点：sightseeing→attraction2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：This was the first time that I had seen a foreigner.拓展句：This was the first time that I had seen a foreigner, which was both encouraging and challenging.【点睛】[高分句型1] This morning when I was in the English Corner, I came across a foreign teacher.  (运用了when引导的时间状语从句)[高分句型2]  I wanted to talk with him, but I was so excited and nervous that I didn’t know what to do and how to start a conversation.(运用了so+形容词+that “如此...以至于...”引导结果状语从句)8．Dear Jack,Glad to know you feel like learning the Nancang dialect. I think it can help you fit better into the city. Now let me offer you some suggestions.It would be a good idea if you could communicate with the local citizens because it can improve your fluency. Watching the dialect programs on NCTV-3 can also contribute to better pronunciation and understanding. Besides, a dictionary on the Nancang dialect, which you can refer to whenever you want, can be of great help. The optional course of the Nancang dialect in our school is a good choice, too.I hope you'll find these suggestions useful.Best wishes,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给留学生朋友Jack写一封电子邮件，就学习南昌方言提出建议。【详解】1.    词汇积累高兴的：glad → happy想要：feel like → would like to建议：suggestion → advice此外：besides → moreover2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：I hope you'll find these suggestions useful.拓展句：I hope these suggestions which/that I give you is useful.【点睛】[高分句型1] Watching the dialect programs on NCTV-3 can also contribute to better pronunciation and understanding. (运用了动名词作主语)[高分句型2] Besides, a dictionary on the Nancang dialect, which you can refer to whenever you want, can be of great help. (运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句)9．May and Summer vacation are coming. Many students like going swimming in rivers and lakes. But how to swim safely? Here is my advice: Don’t swim in strange rivers and lakes. We shouldn’t go swimming alone. We can’t swim with other students without permission. We are not allowed to swim without a parent. If we can’t swim, we mustn’t get into the water to save a person. Sometimes it is dangerous for students to swim.We live only once, we must cherish life.【分析】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文，要求用英语写一篇发言稿，谈谈对安全游泳的建议。【详解】1.词汇积累喜欢：like→be fond of允许：allow→permit拯救：save→rescue珍惜：cherish→treasure2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Don’t swim in strange rivers and lakes.拓展句：Don’t swim in strange rivers and lakes, which is dangerous.【点睛】[高分句型1]If we can’t swim, we mustn’t get into the water to save a person.（if引导条件状语从句）[高分句型2]Sometimes it is dangerous for students to swim.（it为形式主语，动词不定式为真正的主语）10．Dear Lucy,   I’m more than happy to know that you will compete in a contest about the Chinese culture to be held by our school for you exchange students. Although it may be a little difficult for the beginners like you, I   believe you can perform well under my guidance.      To begin with, it is common that we hold the chopsticks in the right hand, which is more convenient to pick up the food. What’s more, you’d better pay attention to the coordination of your fingers while using chopsticks. Additionally,  as the old saying goes that practice makes perfect, I strongly suggest that you can practice using chopsticks as much as possible.I wish you a good result in the competition.                                                                                                                          Yours,                                                                                                                         Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给美国交换生朋友Lucy回复一封电子邮件，就如何使用筷子给出自己的建议，帮助Lucy参加比赛。【详解】1.词汇积累非常高兴：very happy→more than happy比赛：game→competition/contest在我的帮助下：with my help→under my guidance另外：besides→what’s more/additionally2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：To begin with, we commonly hold the chopsticks in the right hand. It is more convenient for us to pick up the food. 拓展句：To begin with, it is common that we hold the chopsticks in our right hand, which is more convenient to pick up the food.【点睛】[高分句型1] What’s more, you’d better pay attention to the coordination of your fingers while using chopsticks. (运用了using chopsticks 非谓语动词短语做时间状语)[高分句型2] Additionally,  as the old saying goes that practice makes perfect, I strongly suggest that you can practice using chopsticks as much as possible. (运用了as引导的定语从句)