江西高考英语写作分类训练：开放性作文

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开放性作文1．今年五月十四日是母亲节，你为妈妈DIY了一份礼物。请写一篇文章记录此事，内容包括：1.DIY的物品；2.DIY的过程；3.你的感受。注意：1.词数80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Mother’s Day falls on May 14th this year. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．4月23日是世界读书日，你校将以“阅读经典，体味生活”为主题举行英语征文比赛。请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：1. 你读过的一本好书；2. 阅读对你生活的影响。注意：1. 写作词数应为100词左右；2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好。Reading Classics, Experiencing lifeEvery April 23rd is the World Book Day. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．假如你是红星中学李华， 校英语俱乐部正在组织英语征文比赛。在talent和struggle中，你认为哪一个决定成功，并结合个人经历写篇英语文章参赛，题目自拟，内容包括：1.你的选择；2.选择的原因；3.个人经历。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．为了给正在迎战高考的高三学子加油鼓劲，你校拟举行一场英语演讲比赛，请你结合自身或者身边人的经历，以“Positive Attitude Makes Perfect”为题写一篇演讲稿。要点如下：1. 高三学生学习现状；2. Positive attitude 的力量；3. 表达祝福。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 开头已为你写好，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Positive Attitude Makes PerfectDear teachers and students, I am so honored to have a chance to deliver a speech here, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．你校英文报新增了“榜样人物”专栏，正在面向全校学生征稿，请你以My Role Model为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1.人物的简介；2.对你的影响；注意：1.词数100左右2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯My Role Model_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6．高三学生毕业在即，你校英文报拟开设Passionate Seekers专栏，向全校高三学生征集稿件。请你回忆高中阶段的学习生活，以一次难忘的经历为题写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：1．事情的经过；2．你的感受或收获。注意：1．词数100左右；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。An Unforgettable Experience___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7．运用下列写作词汇,自己创设一个语境,形成一个小语段。(3~5句)fit,slim,diet,work out,athlete,failure,make it,determination,lose heart,give up,make sense,rather than,make a difference,positive,set an example________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8．你校最近举办了以“强国有我（We’ll Make China Strong）”为主题的升旗仪式及国旗下的演讲活动。请根据以下提示，写一篇英文作文，内容包括：1.时间地点；2.活动内容；3.你的感受。注意：1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：国歌 national anthem__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9．中华传统文化崇尚以和为贵，重视人际和善、邻里和谐、家庭和睦，这些理念深深影响着中国人的思想和行为，也影响着国家和社会治理方式。请以“Harmony is most precious”为题写一篇短文向学校英语报投稿。内容包括：1．解读“和”的内涵及其意义；2．中华传统文化中“和为贵”的事例；3．事例对你的启发。注意：1．词数100左右；2．短文的题目和开头已为你写好。Harmony is most preciousHarmony has many different meanings. Harmonious music makes a pleasant sound and harmonious flavors makes a delicious meal. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________10．为了呼吁学生崇尚科学精神，学习科学家的优秀品质，你们学校的校报“英语天地”栏目向学生征集英语征文——如果你想要当一名科学家，需要具备哪些品质?请你写一篇征文。注意：1. 词数80左右：2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯：3. 题目已给出，不计入总字数。What qualities should a scientist have?_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________           1．Mother’s Day falls on May 14th this year. I made a gift for my mother. As my mother likes reading, I made a bookshelf for her.Several days ago I bought the wood on the Internet. Then I made the bookshelf all by myself. At first, I read the instructions. Then, following the instructions, I pieced together different pieces of wood and nailed the wood. Eventually, the bookshelf was assembled. Afterwards I painted the bookshelf purple, which is my mother’s favorite color. Looking at the bookshelf, I was filled with happiness.When my mother received the gift, she hugged me, tears rolling down her face.【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇开放性作文。要求考生请写一篇文章记录自己为妈妈DIY一份礼物，内容包括：1.DIY的物品；2.DIY的过程；3.你的感受。【详解】1.词汇积累喜欢：like→be fond of购买：buy→purchase充满：be filled with→be full of拥抱：hug→embrace2.句式拓展合并句子原句：At first, I read the instructions. Then, following the instructions, I pieced together different pieces of wood and nailed the wood.拓展句：At first, I read the instructions, after which, following the instructions, I pieced together different pieces of wood and nailed the wood.【点睛】[高分句型1]Then, following the instructions, I pieced together different pieces of wood and nailed the wood.（运用了现在分词作状语）[高分句型2]Afterwards I painted the bookshelf purple, which is my mother’s favorite color.（运用了which引导非限制性定语从句）2．Reading Classics, Experiencing lifeEvery April 23rd is the World Book Day. It started in 1995. In order to encourage more people to read more books, all kinds of activities are held on April 23rd. I spend most of my free time reading famous books which affect me greatly. Of all the books, I like the Long March best. From the book I can know about our history better. Reading not only broadens my horizons, but also makes my life more colorful. With the company of books, I never feel lonely. I often share my happiness of reading books with my family and friends. I hope that you will enjoy reading as much as I do.【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生在世界读书日来临之际，以“阅读经典，体味生活”为主题写一篇短文投稿。【详解】1. 词汇积累开始：start→begin各种各样的：all kinds of→a variety of开阔视野：broaden my horizons→expand my horizons快乐：happiness→pleasure2. 句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Every April 23rd is the World Book Day. It started in 1995.拓展句：Every April 23rd is the World Book Day, which started in 1995.【点睛】【高分句型1】I spend most of my free time reading famous books which affect me greatly.（运用了which引导的限制性定语从句）【高分句型2】I hope that you will enjoy reading as much as I do.（运用了that引导的宾语从句和as…as…引导的比较状语从句）3．                           Which factor leads to success, talent or struggle ?       In my viewpoint, struggle leads to success. As the old saying goes, no pain, no gain. We will get nothing but only waste our life if we only daydream instead of struggling. Those who are lazy and sloppy to their work will never succeed.Last year, I was chosen to participate in the sports meeting. Because I’m not good at sport, I felt anxious. I didn’t want to live up to others’ expectations. Through struggling with exercise, I got the third place in race walking.We should be aware of that we should keep struggling. Only in this way, can we succeed!【导语】本文是开放作文。假如你是李华， 校英语俱乐部正在组织英语征文比赛。在talent和struggle中，你认为哪一个决定成功，并结合个人经历写篇英语文章参赛，内容包括：你的选择；选择的原因；个人经历。【详解】1.词汇积累在我看来：in my viewpoint→in my opinion导致：lead to→result in成功：succeed→be successful参加：participate in→take part in2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：In my viewpoint, struggle leads to success.拓展句：In my viewpoint, it is struggle that leads to success.【点睛】[高分句型1] Those who are lazy and sloppy to their work will never succeed.(运用了whose引导的限制性定语从句)[高分句型2] Because I’m not good at sport, I felt anxious.(运用了because引导的原因状语从句)4．范文：Positive Attitude Makes PerfectDear teachers and students, I am so honored to have a chance to deliver a speech here, where I want to share my journey of “Positive Attitude Makes Perfect”.Though knowing nothing is more important than diligence and persistence in Senior 3, I still feel frustrated when faced with seemingly endless obstacles in my study. Without a positive attitude, I would surrender to them at any time. What I bear in mind is to be positive about everything, which not only inspires me to brave difficulty in my way but also helps me make great progress. A positive attitude is a lighthouse guiding us to our destination and a warrior protecting us from failure, with which I firmly believe that we can have a bright future. May we succeed!【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生结合自身或者身边人的经历，以“Positive Attitude Makes Perfect”为题写一篇演讲稿参加学校的英语演讲比赛，内容包括高三学生现状和Positive attitude的力量并表达祝福。【详解】1.词汇积累机会：chance →opportunity屈服，让步：surrender →give in记住：bear in mind →keep in mind取得很大进步：make great progress →make great advances2.句式拓展宾语从句变同位语从句原句：A positive attitude is a lighthouse guiding us to our destination and a warrior protecting us from failure, with which I firmly believe that we can have a bright future.拓展句：A positive attitude is a lighthouse guiding us to our destination and a warrior protecting us from failure, with which I hold the firm belief that we can have a bright future.【点睛】【高分句型1】I am so honored to have a chance to deliver a speech here, where I want to share my journey of “Positive Attitude Makes Perfect”（运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句）【高分句型2】What I bear in mind is to be positive about everything, which not only inspires me to brave difficulty in my way but also helps me make great progress.（运用了what引导的主语从句以及which引导的非限制性定语从句和并列连词“not only…but also…”连接两个并列结构）5．参考范文Tu Youyou, the first female Chinese scientist to receive a Nobel Prize, is the role model in my heart.After graduating from university, she acquired a broad knowledge of both Chinese and Western medicine through constant learning. Determined to find a cure for malaria, she referred to numerous ancient books of traditional Chinese medicine. After working tirelessly and going through many failures, she eventually discovered artemisinin, the world’s most effective drug for fighting malaria, thus saving millions of lives all over the world.Tu Youyou’s life story tells me that under no circumstances shall we acknowledge defeat and that success will belong to those who insists on trying.【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。校英文报新增了“榜样人物”专栏，要求考生以My Role Model为题写一篇短文投稿。【详解】1.词汇积累获得，得到：acquire → obtain/gain持续不断的：constant → continuous 最终：eventually → ultimately/finally决不：under no circumstances → by no means2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Tu Youyou, the first female Chinese scientist to receive a Nobel Prize, is the role model in my heart.拓展句：Tu Youyou, who is the first female Chinese scientist to receive a Nobel Prize, is the role model in my heart.【点睛】[高分句型1] Determined to find a cure for malaria, she referred to numerous ancient books of traditional Chinese medicine. (运用了形容词作状语)[高分句型2] Tu Youyou’s life story tells me that under no circumstances shall we acknowledge defeat and that success will belong to those who insists on trying. (运用了that引导宾语从句)6．                                                                              An Unforgettable ExperienceWhen it comes to my experiences in high school, there is no doubt that a spring outing is the most rewarding one that I will never forget.It was a Tuesday afternoon in March with the sun shining brightly. At 3:00 p.m., all the students with our headteacher gathered at the school gate and then set off excitedly. On arriving at the park, we were impressed with red flowers, green trees and lovely butterflies, showing a full picture of spring. Then we began to climb the hill, singing and chatting heartily. It was half an hour later that we reached its top, where we had some photos taken, capturing the precious moment. At 5:30 p.m., we returned to school, sweaty and exhausted.Not only did the spring outing enrich our school life, but it also made us refreshed for the upcoming examination.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生回忆高中阶段的学习生活，以一次难忘的经历为题，给校英文的Passionate Seekers专栏投稿，内容包括事情的经过，以及自己的感受或收获。【详解】1.词汇积累出发：set off → set out到达：arrive at → reach激动地：excitedly → thrillingly筋疲力尽的：exhausted → tired out2.句式拓展同义句转换原句：On arriving at the park, we were impressed with red flowers, green trees and lovely butterflies, showing a full picture of spring.拓展句：Hardly had we arrived at the park when we were impressed with red flowers, green trees and lovely butterflies, showing a full picture of spring.【点睛】【高分句型1】It was half an hour later that we reached its top, where we had some photos taken, capturing the precious moment.（运用了强调句，where引导的非限制性定语从句，过去分词作宾补，现在分词作状语）【高分句型2】Not only did the spring outing enrich our school life, but it also made us refreshed for the upcoming examination.（运用了倒装句，过去分词作宾补）7．One possible version:Nancy used to be a little overweight, so she went on different diets to lose weight but ended in failure. She lost heart and wanted to give up. Later an athlete told her it made sense to work out regularly rather than diet. She followed his advice, which did make a difference and now she has become positive about herself as well as fit and slim. Nancy has set a good example for us and I believe we can also make it if we have enough determination.【导语】本文是一篇记叙文。要求考生运用给出的写作词汇，自己创设一个语境，形成一个小语段。【详解】1.词汇积累灰心丧气：lose heart →be discouraged放弃：give up →quit建议：advice →suggestion健康的：fit →healthy2.句式拓展并列句变复合句原句：Nancy used to be a little overweight, so she went on different diets to lose weight but ended in failure.拓展句：Because Nancy used to be a little overweight, she went on different diets to lose weight but ended in failure.【点睛】【高分句型1】She followed his advice, which did make a difference and now she has become positive about herself as well as fit and slim.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句以及and连接的并列句）【高分句型2】Nancy has set a good example for us and I believe we can also make it if we have enough determination.（运用了and连接并列句，省略that的宾语从句以及if引导的条件状语从句）8．The national flag - raising ceremony on the theme of “We’ll Make China Strong” took place in our school on Monday morning.The moment all the students and teachers gathered on the playground, the ceremony began. As the music played, some students dressed in uniform marched in with the flag. Then we all sang our national anthem as the flag rose slowly. After the flag was raised, one student delivered a speech titled “I will do my part to make China prosperous”. I was deeply impressed by the activity. As a Chinese, I take great pride in my motherland. Though she suffered a lot in the past, China has been developing rapidly in the last few decades. It is everyone’s responsibility to make China strong and prosperous.【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生就学校举办的“We’ll Make China Strong”主题升旗仪式及演讲活动写一篇作文，说明活动时间，地点，内容和自己的感受。【详解】1.词汇积累举办：take place→be held活动：activity→event为……骄傲：take pride in→be proud of快速地：rapidly→speedily2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：I was deeply impressed by the activity. As a Chinese, I take great pride in my motherland. 拓展句：I was deeply impressed by the activity because, as a Chinese, I take great pride in my motherland. 【点睛】【高分句型1】The moment all the students and teachers gathered on the playground, the ceremony began. （运用了the moment引导的时间状语从句）【高分句型2】Though she suffered a lot in the past, China has been developing rapidly in the last few decades.（运用了though引导的让步状语从句）9．参考范文Harmony is most preciousHarmony has many different meanings. Harmonious music makes a pleasant sound and harmonious flavors makes a delicious meal. Harmony is all about finding the right balance in different situations to obtain peace. Living in harmony, people can share various kinds of interests and accept different opinions without showing disagreements. During the Warring States period, Lin Xiangru was granted the title of Shangqing. Lian Po, an old general, thought he was just a weak scholar, so he wanted to do something to make him feel ashamed. When Lin Xiangru knew this, he focused on national affairs. Later, Lian Po learned that Lin Xiangru’s action was based on state affairs, so he made an apology. They became friends and worked together to serve the country.Harmony is an important part of the Chinese culture. Harmony makes a better world.【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放作文。要求考生向学校英语报投稿，介绍中华传统文化崇尚以和为贵，重视人际和善、邻里和谐、家庭和睦，这些理念深深影响着中国人的思想和行为，也影响着国家和社会治理方式。文章包括：解读“和”的内涵及其意义，中华传统文化中“和为贵”的事例以及事例对考生的启发。【详解】词汇积累实现和平：obtain peace → achieve peace和睦相处：live in harmony →live together in peace专注于：focus on→ concentrate on合作：worked together →cooperate2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Living in harmony, people can share various kinds of interests and accept different opinions without showing disagreements. 拓展句：When people live in harmony, people can share various kinds of interests and accept different opinions without showing disagreements.【点睛】【高分句型1】Harmony is all about finding the right balance in different situations to obtain peace.（运用了动名词短语作介词about宾语）【高分句型2】Living in harmony, people can share various kinds of interests and accept different opinions without showing disagreements. （运用了现在分词短语作时间状语）10．What qualities should a scientist have?As far as I am concerned, a scientist is supposed to have some scientific qualities as follows:Firstly, scientists should be interested in, and curious about certain things. They pay attention to various aspects of the research problem and keep exploring. In addition, scientists need to be imaginative and willing to experiment bravely with new ideas and methods. As we all know, scientists are often intelligent and able to form independent opinions and methods. Caution and persistence are also necessary for scientists to succeed. Becoming a scientist is not easy. Stick to the dream and it will become a reality sooner or later.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇征文，介绍一下想成为一名科学家需要具备的品质。【详解】1.词汇积累喜欢：be interested in →be crazy about →be fond of此外：in addition →besides →what’s more各种各样的：various →a variety of →all kinds of观点：opinion →view2.句式拓展定于从句变主语从句原句：As we all know, scientists are often intelligent and able to form independent opinions and methods.拓展句：It is known to us all that scientists are often intelligent and able to form independent opinions and methods.【点睛】[高分句型1]As we all know, scientists are often intelligent and able to form independent opinions and methods.（运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句）[高分句型2]Stick to the dream and it will become a reality sooner or later.（运用了“祈使句+ and +陈述句”结构）