江西高考英语写作分类训练：邀请信

这是一份江西高考英语写作分类训练：邀请信，共15页。
邀请信1．假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter对你的家乡特别感兴趣。现在请你给他写一封邮件向他介绍你的家乡。内容要点：1. 近几年发生的变化；2. 介绍家乡的旅游胜地；3. 邀请他暑假来游玩。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Peter,I’m very glad to have received your email. Now I’d like to tell you something about my hometown._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua2．假定你是李华，本周末你和几个同学打算骑车去某处游玩，想邀请你们学校的英国交换生Leslie一起参加。请用英语写一封邮件。内容包括：1. 出游的时间、地点等；2. 注意事项；3. 询问是否参加。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Alice对中国茶文化很感兴趣。2018年8月8日将有一个茶艺活动在南昌举行，请你根据以下内容，给她写一份邀请信。1.地点：雨阁茶楼（Yuge Tea House）2.参加人员：来自世界各地100多名中学生3.活动内容：听中国茶介绍，观赏各种茶具和茶艺表演，品茶等。参考词汇：茶艺表演tea ceremony 茶具tea sets______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．假如你是永嘉中学学生李华，获得全国口语大赛一等奖，某英语报社邀请你用英语写一篇稿件，介绍一下你在英语口语学习方面的成功经验。内容包括：1. 自信勇敢，抓住机会说英语，不怕出错；2. 多参加用英语交流的活动，如英语角；3. 多看英语节目（如CCTV9），模仿发音等；注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。I’m Li Hua from Yongjia Middle School. Now I’d like to share my experience in learning oral English.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．假定你是李华，你所在的运动俱乐部将面向外国朋友开设太极(Tai Chi)课，请写一封邮件，邀请你校的英国交换生Peter参加，要点如下：1. 上课时间和地点；2. 报名的截止时间。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6．假定你是李华，想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸（paper-cutting）艺术展。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：1.展览时间、地点；2.展览内容。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7．你校将于4月26日“世界知识产权日”（The World Intellectual Property Day）举办一次以“科技让校园生活更美好”（Science Makes Life Better on Campus）为主题的创意作品展。假定你是李华，请你代表学校学生会写封邮件，邀请美国交换生Henry参与展评活动。内容包括：1. 目的：尊重知识、崇尚科学；2. 展评时间，地点、内容；3. 报名方式及截止日期。注意：1. 词数100左右，内容包括主要要点；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Henry,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hu8．假定你是一名高中毕业生王志，你校将为高一新生举办主题为“What to learn in senior high school?”的英语沙龙活动，特邀请你结合自身经历谈谈自己的体会。请根据以下提示准备一份英语发言稿。1. 学会学习：方法，习惯等；2. 学会做人：真诚，友善；3. 学会……注意：1. 词数120左右；2. 发言稿开头和结尾已给出，不须抄在答题卡上，不计入总词数。Good afternoon, everyone! I feel honored to stand here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school.9．假定你是李华，现在你们学校打算请外教露西来担任你校寒假英语冬令营的口语老师。请你给露西写封邮件，内容包括：1.时间：2017年1月10号到1月25号2.授课内容：上午口语课，下午室外活动，如参观博物馆，游览公园等注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.参考词汇：英语冬令营  an English Winter Camp4.开头已为你写好Dear Lucy,How are you?__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________10．假定你是一名高中毕业生王志，你校将为高一新生举办主题为“What to learn in senior high school?”的英语沙龙活动，特邀请你结合自身经历谈谈自己的体会。请根据以下提示准备一份英语发言稿。1.学会学习：方法，习惯等；2.学会做人：真诚，友善；3.学会……注意：1.词数120左右；2.发言稿开头和结尾已给出，不须抄在答题卡上，不计入总词数。Good afternoon, everyone! I feel honored to stand here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thanks for your listening!     1．Dear Peter,I’m very glad to have received your email. Now I’d like to tell you something about my hometown.My hometown, Linyi City, is a very beautiful place with a long history. It lies in the southeast of Shandong Province. Great changes have taken place here in recent years. Many new factories, houses, roads and bridges have been built, which shows that my hometown is developing rapidly. Besides, there are many famous places of interest, such as Mengshan Forest Park, and the home of Wang Xizhi, which attract many tourists from all over the world. I do hope you can come here for your summer vacation.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter对你的家乡特别感兴趣。现在请你给他写一封邮件向他介绍你的家乡。【详解】1.词汇积累吸引：attract→appeal告知：tell→inform高兴的：glad→pleased此外：besides→in addition2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：My hometown, Linyi City, is a very beautiful place with a long history. It lies in the southeast of Shandong Province.拓展句：My hometown, Linyi City, is a very beautiful place with a long history, which lies in the southeast of Shandong Province.【点睛】[高分句型1] Many new factories, houses, roads and bridges have been built, which shows that my hometown is developing rapidly. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2] I do hope you can come here for your summer vacation. (运用了强调句)2．Dear Leslie，How are you getting along recently? I am writing to invite you to join in a bicycle trip this Sunday morning.The destination is the West Mountain, located west of the city. At 7:30 a. m. on September 17, we’ll gather at the Great Square and set off at 7:40 a.m. Remember to pack up your food and something necessary. You’d better bring your own camera so that you can take some good photos.In the evening, we will put up tents at the foot of the mountain and cook over a camp fire. I’m sure we will have a good time.If you want to join us, please let me know as soon as possible.Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本文书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封电子邮件。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇是一篇电子邮件：假定你是李华，本周末你和几个同学打算骑车去某处游玩，想邀请你们学校的英国交换生Leslie一起参加。请用英语写一封邮件。内容包括：出游的时间、地点等；注意事项；询问是否参加。第2步：根据写作要求确定关键词，如：join in a bicycle trip（参加一个自行车旅行）；the West Mountain（西山）；gather at the Great Square（聚在大广场）；take some good photos（拍一些好照片）等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态语态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】本文是一篇电子邮件，内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。同时文中使用高级句子。The destination is the West Mountain, located west of the city.此处是过去分词做后置定语；Remember to pack up your food and something necessary.使用祈使句；You’d better bring your own camera so that you can take some good photos.句中so that引导目的状语从句；If you want to join us, please let me know as soon as possible.句中使用if引导的条件句。3．Dear Alice,How is everything with you? I am writing to tell you that there will be a tea ceremony to be held at Yuge Tea House in NanChang on August 8th ,2018. We will be delighted to have you there with us as you are a devoted fan about Chinese tea culture.As scheduled, we, together with over 100 middle school students from all over the world, can have a general idea about Chinese tea. Besides, there will be a feast for our eyes which consists of wide ranges of tea sets as well as tea art performances. What’s the most attractive part is that we will be given a precious chance to have a taste of tea.I promise you will get the hang of Chinese tea culture if you can participate in it. Looking forward to your coming.Yours faithfully,Li Hua【分析】这是一篇提纲类作文，要求用英文给美国笔友Alice写一份邀请信，关于2018年8月8日在南昌举行将有一个茶艺活动。内容包括：1.地点：雨阁茶楼（Yuge Tea House）；2.参加人员：来自世界各地100多名中学生；3.活动内容：听中国茶介绍，观赏各种茶具和茶艺表演，品茶等。写作时注意条理清楚，态度诚恳，要点全面。准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。【详解】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如be delighted to；all over the world；consists of；as well as；participate in；look forward to等；还运用句型Besides, there will be a feast for our eyes which consists of wide ranges of tea sets as well as tea art performances.这句话运用了定语从句；What’s the most attractive part is that we will be given a precious chance to have a taste of tea.这句话运用了名称性从句等。并注意了句子的衔接如Besides，if，and等等。4．I’m Li Hua from Yongjia Middle School. Now I’d like to share my experience in learning oral English. Firstly, I’m always confident and brave. I seize every opportunity to speak English, not afraid of making mistakes which may embarrass me a lot. I also find it of great benefit to take part in English activities, such as English corners, where I can also make many friends. By talking with them, my oral English has improved greatly. Finally, some English programs like CCTV 9 contribute to the progress in my speaking ability. In this way I learn the standard pronunciation and intonation by imitating over and over again.As the saying goes, practice makes perfect. Our hard work will finally be rewarded.【分析】这是一篇提纲类作文。【详解】文章要求写一篇稿件，介绍在英语口语方面的成功经验。要点都已经给出，写作中不要遗漏要点。提纲类作文关键在于要点要全面包括，不能有遗漏和省略。但是要点只是提纲，考生要在此基础上增加细节，不要逐字逐句翻译，同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。审题时，考生注意描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。写作时，考生可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。【点睛】范文要点全面，连贯流畅。写作时使用了Firstly、also、Finally等连接词使段落更具有层次感。而且还用到了定语从句which may embarrass me a lot和where I can also make many friends，和As the saying goes等多种句式结构，以及短语seize every opportunity、of great benefit、contribute to和over and over again，谚语practice makes perfect.也有效地提升了文章的档次，增强了文章的色彩。5．Dear Peter,How’s everything going? I’m Li Hua. I’m writing to invite you to attend a Tai Chi class held by our sports club. Tai Chi, originating in China, enjoys great popularity. Anyone, regardless of age or level of fitness, can practice and benefit from Tai Chi. Practicing Tai Chi regularly, you will feel mentally and physically relaxed with the harmonious movements. I’m sure that you will develop a great interest in this gentle exercise. The class starts between 5:00 and 6:00 p.m. every Monday in our school gym next month. The closing date for entries is next Tuesday. Please let me know if you want to sign your name.Looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua【详解】本篇书面表达属于应用文。根据提示要求给英国交换生Peter写一封邮件。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确两个要点：首先，上课时间和地点；其次，报名的截止时间。2、写作时根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态和语态，就本文而言应该用一般现在时和将来时的结合。3、注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。4、词数不少于100，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，要点全面，运用了一般现在时和将来时，多处使用高级词汇，如benefit from, regardless of等，而且多处使用非谓语动词作状语，比如Tai Chi, originated in China, enjoys great popularity；Practicing Tai Chi regularly, you will feel mentally and physically relaxed with the harmonious movements等。 6．Dear Henry，I'm very delighted to write a letter to tell you something about Chinese paper-cutting exhibition，which will start on June 20 in our school lecture hall and last for a week．As is well-known to us all，Chinese paper-cutting is famous all over the world and I'm sure you will be interested in it，so I plan to invite you to pay a close visit．The exhibition is a collection of works created by some famous paper-cutting artists in China．During the activity，I will show you around our school and this is a good chance for you to enjoy yourself and learn more about Chinese traditional culture．Would you please have a look at the exhibition with me？I'd appreciate it if you could accept my invitation．I'm looking forward to receiving your reply as soon as possible．Yours，Li Hua【分析】这是一篇提纲类作文。【详解】首先审题，这篇文章要求假定你是李华，想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸（paper-cutting）艺术展。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：1.展览时间、地点；2.展览内容。其次选用正确的人称和时态，用一般将来时、第一人称来写。然后写出单个句子，使用正确的连词，连句成段。具体来说，写这篇文章时，要注意文中给出的细节都要包括，不要遗漏。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。【点睛】本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的复合句。例如：使用了定语从句I'm very delighted to write a letter to tell you something about Chinese paper-cutting exhibition，which will start on June 20 in our school lecture hall and last for a week．和宾语从句As is well-known to us all，Chinese paper-cutting is famous all over the world and I'm sure you will be interested in it，so I plan to invite you to pay a close visit．7．Dear Henry,I’m delighted to tell you that our school is going to hold an exhibition that focuses on the theme “Science Makes Life Better on Campus”, so I am writing to invite you to join in it.The exhibition will take place in our school art gallery on April 26th, the World Intellectual Property Day, aimed to encourage students to respect knowledge and advocate science. Everyone present will feel amazed to see lots of fantastic creative works from us students. I feel that you would have something unique to display in this exhibition. If you want to have a go, you are required to register online at Science@hotmail by April 1st.Looking forward to your early reply.Yours，Li Hua【分析】本文是一篇电子邮件。【详解】你校将于4月26日“世界知识产权日”（The World Intellectual Property Day）举办一次以“科技让校园生活更美好”（Science Makes Life Better on Campus）为主题的创意作品展。请你代表学校学生会写封邮件，邀请美国交换生Henry参与展评活动。内容包括：目的：尊重知识、崇尚科学；展评时间，地点、内容；报名方式及截止日期。认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，根据列出的要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用，。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【点睛】本文是一篇电子邮件，格式正确，内容齐全，重点突出，能较好地表达出文章主题。同时句中使用高级句子。I’m delighted to tell you that our school is going to hold an exhibition that focuses on the---.句中使用宾语从句；aimed to encourage students to respect knowledge and advocate science.过去分词做伴随状态；If you want to have a go, you are required to register online at Science@hotmail by April 1st.句中if引导的条件状语从句恰到好处。8．Good afternoon, everyone! I feel honored to stand here to share with my opinions on what to learn in senior high school.In the coming three years, our school life will be challenging. First, we should learn to learn efficiently. Personally, I used to try effective method to achieve my academic goals. Developing a good habit is also of importance. It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons, get actively involved in class, and review what had been taught after class.In addition, we should learn how to get along well with others. In school, I respected teachers and was friendly with classmates. It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere.Finally, we should take part in sports and outdoors activities frequently. They were really helpful to build up my body and enrich my school life.No pains no gains. I am sure that with great efforts, you will enjoy a colorful and fruitful life here.Thanks for your listening!【详解】这是一篇与学校生活有关的提纲类作文。任务中给出的提示信息包含如下内容，即在高中时候应该学会什么，结合自身经历谈谈自己的体会。抓住了这亮点，我们就抓住了文章的核心内容。考虑用一般现在时，第一人称来写。具体来说，写这篇文章时，要注意：1、提示中的内容没有全部列出，需要适当补充；2、为使文章层次清楚，可将first, second, third等放在要描述的内容前；3、为了增强文章的说服力，可以引用习语。这篇文章与考生自身经历紧密联系，可结合自己的经历充分发挥。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的短语，为文章增色不少，如: of importance重要的，In addition此外。还使用了宾语从句It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons, get actively involved in class, and review what had been taught after class.和宾语从句I am sure that with great efforts, you will enjoy a colorful and fruitful life here.等多种句式结构，增加了文章的可读性。9．Dear Lucy，How are you? My name is Li Hua, whom you taught oral English when I was in Senior 1. Now our school asks me to invite you to come to our school to be an oral English teacher for the English Winter Camp during the winter vacation. Here are some details about the activity.The camp will start from January 10 to 25,2017. You can come a few days before January 10. In the morning you will give three oral English classes so you are expected to get ready for different topics to communicate with the students. In the afternoon there are mainly outdoor activities such as having some picnics and visiting parks and museums, etc. You can also take the chance to travel more in China.I hope you will accept the invitation and have a happy winter holiday.Yours sincerely，Li Hua【详解】试题分析：本次作文要求你给外教露西写一封邮件，邀请她来担任你校寒假英语冬令营的口语老师。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要富有变化。要注意书写，认真查验是否有漏写情况等。写作亮点：本篇条理清楚，要点全面，结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅，也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如：文章运用了定语从句whom you taught oral English和are expected to和take the chance等词汇。10．Good afternoon, everyone! I feel honored to stand here to share with my opinions on what to learn in senior high school.In the coming three years, our school life will be challenging. First, we should learn to learn efficiently. Personally, I used to try effective method to achieve my academic goals. Developing a good habit is also of importance. It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons, get actively involved in class, and review what had been taught after class.In addition, we should learn how to get along well with others. In school, I respected teachers and was friendly with classmates. It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere.Finally, we should take part in sports and outdoors activities frequently. They were really helpful to build up my body and enrich my school life.No pains no gains. I am sure that with great efforts, you will enjoy a colorful and fruitful life here.Thanks for your listening!【详解】试题分析：本文是一篇发言稿，是提纲式作文。要求根据以下提示准备一份英语发言稿。1.学会学习：方法，习惯等；2.学会做人：真诚，友善；3.学会……。。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用，主次分明，详略得当，语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【亮点说明】本文是一篇发言稿，格式正确，要点齐全，结构严谨，布局合理，同时句中使用高级句子。Developing a good habit is also of importance.动名词短语做主语；It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons, get actively involved in class, and review what had been taught after class.it是形式主语，that从句是真正的主语，句中并使用what引导的宾语从句；It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere.强调句型的运用堪称经典；另外，First, Personally, In addition, Finally, No pains no gains.的运用为文章增色添彩。